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    The document provides feedback on a story. It gives strengths in introducing two related characters well. It suggests including more shots of grotty locations. And it understands the boy gets abused and has a bad relationship with his father, noting the genre of social realism and conventions used where the boy runs from someone.

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    The document provides feedback on a story. It gives strengths in introducing two related characters well. It suggests including more shots of grotty locations. And it understands the boy gets abused and has a bad relationship with his father, noting the genre of social realism and conventions used where the boy runs from someone.

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    Introduction of Feedback 1

    Uploaded by

    hannahpledgee
    The document provides feedback on a story. It gives strengths in introducing two related characters well. It suggests including more shots of grotty locations. And it understands the boy gets abused and has a bad relationship with his father, noting the genre of social realism and conventions used where the boy runs from someone.

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    Area Characters & Relationships

    Strengths Both characters are introduced well. Know they are related.

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    Mark /5 5

    Locations Storyline

    Grotty location conventional.

    More grotty location shots.

    3 5

    Genre Enigma Codes

    You understand that the boy gets abused. Bad relationship with his father. Social realism. Genre is easily seen through conventions. Who is the boy running from?

    5 5

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