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    The document provides feedback on a film scene set in an area with graffiti. It notes the location was good and used a variety of camera shots like long shots, closeups, and panning to make the slow-paced, socially realistic scene interesting to watch. Minor suggestions included incorporating additional location shots and having the boy character move around more in some shots. The reviewer gave high marks overall.

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    The document provides feedback on a film scene set in an area with graffiti. It notes the location was good and used a variety of camera shots like long shots, closeups, and panning to make the slow-paced, socially realistic scene interesting to watch. Minor suggestions included incorporating additional location shots and having the boy character move around more in some shots. The reviewer gave high marks overall.

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    Cinematography: Editing Feedback 1

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    hannahpledgee
    The document provides feedback on a film scene set in an area with graffiti. It notes the location was good and used a variety of camera shots like long shots, closeups, and panning to make the slow-paced, socially realistic scene interesting to watch. Minor suggestions included incorporating additional location shots and having the boy character move around more in some shots. The reviewer gave high marks overall.

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    Area Mise-en-scene

    Strengths Good graffiti location.

    Targets Maybe additional location shots.

    Mark /5 3

    Range of shot types Camera angles/movements Pace

    Long shots and closeups used. A lot of panning etc. Made it more interesting to watch. Slow paced. Conventional to social realism. Really good. Nothing to fault.

    More long shots so it is more conventional. There are a lot of shots of the boy sitting. He could walk around or something. -

    5 5 5

    Editing effects/transitions

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