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    The document provides feedback on a story, praising the clear introduction of the main character and appropriate use of locations that fit well with the genre of solving enigma codes. It suggests showing more of the relationship between two characters, Leo and Steve, and notes the story is clearly in the social realism genre, effectively portraying an abused boy running away without knowing where to go.

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    The document provides feedback on a story, praising the clear introduction of the main character and appropriate use of locations that fit well with the genre of solving enigma codes. It suggests showing more of the relationship between two characters, Leo and Steve, and notes the story is clearly in the social realism genre, effectively portraying an abused boy running away without knowing where to go.

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    Introduction of Feedback 2

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    hannahpledgee
    The document provides feedback on a story, praising the clear introduction of the main character and appropriate use of locations that fit well with the genre of solving enigma codes. It suggests showing more of the relationship between two characters, Leo and Steve, and notes the story is clearly in the social realism genre, effectively portraying an abused boy running away without knowing where to go.

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    Area Characters & Relationships

    Strengths Main character shown clearly at the beginning.

    Targets Could show relation between Leo and Steve.

    Mark /5 4

    Locations Storyline

    Genre Enigma Codes

    Good locations used works well with the genre. Boy has run away, possibly abused by the man. He doesnt know where to go/ Clearly social realism. Why has he run away? Where is he going? Portrayed well.

    5 5

    5 5

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