STEP #3: Body Paragraph #2

TOPIC SENTENCE 2 The young woman desire is blocked by stereotypes of what it takes to live in a patriarchal society. EV 1 (Sentence starter with context for quote) [Evidence #1] shows/reveals/suggests [argument from topic sentence] The narrators writes that the girl father might forbid her if he were home and her mother cannot deny her shows that her desire is blocked by the stereotypes of the patriarchy society. W1 Sentence #1: because [explain how the evidence proves the topic sentence]. Sentence #2: Continue to explain how your evidence (paraphrase or requote a small piece) proves your t.s. and make sure to restate a key word from your topic sentence. Because although her father isnt there and her mother lets her do whatever she wants she still have to follows rules to fit into the society of male dominance. Considering that her father might forbid her she thinks that she is able to do whatever she wants but she cant because of the stereotypes of what it takes to be a girl in a male dominant society.

EV 2 Furthermore/in addition/also/moreover, (Sentence starter with context for quote) [Evidence #2] shows/reveals/suggests [argument from topic sentence] The fact that the man offered to carry her baskethe told her his riffle would protect them reveals that her desire is being blocked by the stereotypes of the patriarchy society. W2 Sentence #1: because [explain how E2 develops the topic sentence further than E1]. Sentence #2: Continue to explain how E2 (paraphrase or requote a small piece) proves your t.s. and make sure to restate a key word from your topic sentence.

Because the girl is allowing the men to say that she is being protected by what he has which makes it seem like she has to depend on the men because of the rules in the society she lives in. Considering that the men told the girl that his riffle would protect them she has to follow what he says because of the stereotypes of the patriarchy society.

Conclude and transition to next paragraph: Review evidence, connect to claim, and preview next paragraph. In conclusion the man carrying the girl basket and if the girl father was there he might forbid her and her mother cannot deny her shows that her desire will be blocked by the stereotypes of what it takes to live in that society.