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After a full day of work, we tend to restfully spend most of our time watching
television because during primetime those dramas and comedy sitcoms are funny and
hilarious, and they make us feel more relaxed. However, during these few years many
reality shows are being broadcast as during primetime they have become more
popular among the TV viewing audience. Reality shows are starting to gradually take
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Most of the audience enjoy watching reality shows because they believe what
they see is the truth about the world in these shows. For example, in “The Survivor”,
contestants have to compete and survive in order to win one million dollars on an
unknown island. It makes the show more interesting since the people in the show are
not acting. The audience get to see ultimately how those contestants use their talents
to win the game. It is just reflecting our lives in which we have to compete for what
we want. In other words, it is closer to reality. Due to its popularity, different kinds of
reality shows who enjoy watching TV like “The Apprentice”, “The American Idol”,
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English for Academic Studies (Workshop) Session 7: Misplaced Modifiers
Semester 1, 2009/10 ©PolyU HKCC
Misplaced Modifiers - A modifier which is placed in a wrong position can distort the
meaning and thus confuse readers. You may avoid misplaced modifier problems by
putting modifiers as close as possible to the words being modified:
¾ Place modifiers such as even, only, merely, almost, nearly, just immediately
before the words they modify.
Example:
Misplaced Modifier: The presenter speaks too soft; the audiences sitting in the
front can only hear him. [Only intends to modify the audiences. Nevertheless,
because of its position, it appears to modify hear in this sentence.]
Revision: The presenter speaks too soft; only the audiences sitting in the front can
hear him.
¾ Place clause modifiers beginning with who, which or that immediately after
the words they modify.
Example:
Misplaced Modifier: The student received full marks in the test who is always
punctual to the class. [who is always punctual to the class intends to modify the
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student. Nevertheless, because of its position, it appears to modify the test in this
sentence.]
Revision: The student who is always punctual to the class received full marks in
the test.
¾ Avoid inserting a modifier between “to” and the verb that follows [spilt
infinitives].
Example:
Misplaced Modifier: As tropical cyclone signal #8 has just been hoisted, the
lecturer asks the students to quickly but calmly leave.
Revision: As tropical cyclone signal #8 has just been hoisted, the lecturer asks the
students to leave quickly but calmly.
Exercise C1: Identify and underline the modifiers in the following sentences.
Then, circle the word(s) being modified.
2. If you lack passion for your work, you will not succeed.
3. Falling in love with your work can make a person perform better.
4. Michael Jordan, a famous American basketball player who played 1072 games
and ended his career with 32,292 points, said in his retirement, “What is love?
Exercise C2: Make sentences using the modifiers given. Then, circle the word(s)
being modified.
1. silently ___________________________________________________________
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Exercise C3: Identify and underline the misplaced modifiers in the following
paragraphs. Then, revise these sentences to eliminate errors of misplaced
modifiers in the space between the lines by putting “^” in the correct position.
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Other than the fact that reality shows are more interesting, another reason why
comedy sitcoms are fading out is that their plots are not attractive. Being broadcast
during primetime, there are a lot of similarities among different shows. For instance,
“The Seinfield” and “Friends” are both talking between friends about the
relationships, and the endings of sitcoms are too predictable. Audience can tell
probably what will happen at the end. Hence, they lose interest in these sitcoms. On
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the other hand, this is not so with reality shows; audience has no idea who is going to
at the end win. Due to curiosity, the audience needs to watch the finale to find out the
result. Till the end of the show, this is also one effective strategy which can keep the
audience.
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All those different kinds of reality shows can entertain us. However,
broadcasting too many different kinds of reality shows about our daily life may make
us feel insecure and worried. Perhaps one day there would be a camera and our daily
life hidden in our homes would be broadcast. However, before that happens, let us