This document is a script for a 30-minute production titled "TOL!" by scriptwriter Carlo Jake Martin. It follows the stories of three subjects: KC, who finds a sense of hope and new life in prison; Mang Rico, a scavenger in Quezon City who overcomes disabilities; and Lolo Ricardo, a deaf and mute elderly man who lives with his cousin. The script includes interviews with the subjects and narration by Mark Alilin to share their challenges and resilience in facing difficulties in life.
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A 3 -Column Script for Documentary, written by Carlo Jake Martin.
This document is a script for a 30-minute production titled "TOL!" by scriptwriter Carlo Jake Martin. It follows the stories of three subjects: KC, who finds a sense of hope and new life in prison; Mang Rico, a scavenger in Quezon City who overcomes disabilities; and Lolo Ricardo, a deaf and mute elderly man who lives with his cousin. The script includes interviews with the subjects and narration by Mark Alilin to share their challenges and resilience in facing difficulties in life.
This document is a script for a 30-minute production titled "TOL!" by scriptwriter Carlo Jake Martin. It follows the stories of three subjects: KC, who finds a sense of hope and new life in prison; Mang Rico, a scavenger in Quezon City who overcomes disabilities; and Lolo Ricardo, a deaf and mute elderly man who lives with his cousin. The script includes interviews with the subjects and narration by Mark Alilin to share their challenges and resilience in facing difficulties in life.
PRODUCTION: RED SHIFT PRODUCTIONS TOTAL RUNNING TIME: 00:30:00 NARRATION VISUAL SOUND FADE IN: OBB (60 SECS.) DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (60 SECS.) FADE OUT MSC EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT PLACES. SFX: SWISH SOUNDS MARK: HABANG MAY BUHAY AY MAY PAG-ASA. IYAN NA NGA ANG ISA SA MGA PINAKAGAGAS NA LINYA NA PAULIT-ULIT NATING NARIRINIG. EXT: DAY. MS. RULE OF THIRDS SHOWING MARK AL!IN NATSOT EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT PLACES. SFX: SWISH SOUNDS MARK: NGUNIT SA KABILA BA NITO"Y NANINIWALA TAYONG MAY PAG-ASA NGA BA ANG BUHAY# EXT: DAY. MS. RULE OF THIRDS SHOWING MARK AL!IN NATSOT EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT PLACES. SFX: SWISH SOUNDS MARK: SAMAHAN NIYO PO AKO AT ATING TUKLASIN NA ABOT KAMAY NATIN ANG TAGUMPAY SA BUHAY KUNG TAYO AY MAY PAG- ASA EXT: DAY. MS. RULE OF THIRDS SHOWING MARK AL!IN NATSOT MARK: AKO PO SI MARK AL!IN MALLARI EXT: DAY. MS. RULE OF THIRDS SHOWING MARK AL!IN MARK: AT PAKINGGAN NATIN ANG KWENTO NI TOL$ EXT: DAY. CU. RULE OF THIRDS SHOWING MARK AL!IN FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC MARK: HINDI LAHAT NG NASA KULUNGAN AY NAPATUNAYANG MAY SALA. IYAN ANG KALAGAYAN NG EXT: MS. RULE OF THIRDS SHOWING MARK AL!IN WHILE GI!ING HIS SPIELS p. 1 of p. 10 p. 1 of p. __ KARAMIHAN SA ATING MGA KABABAYAN NA NAKAPIIT SA KULUNGAN. KAYA TUTUKAN NATIN ANG KWENTO NI TOL. FADE IN: GFX: %TOL BAKIT KA NAGBATO#&. DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC MARK: ANG KULUNGAN. MARAHIL ITO ANG ISA SA MGA LUGAR NA AYAW PASUKIN NINUMAN DAHIL SA HINDI NA MABABAGONG IMAHE NITO. ANG TAPUNAN NG MGA KRIMINAL. FADE IN: EXT: DAY. ES. THE SURROUNDINGS OF THE CITY JAIL FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC MARK: SUBALIT PARA KAY KC HINDI TUNAY NA PANGALAN ANG KULUNGAN NA ANG KANYANG ITINUTURING NA PANGALAWANG TAHANAN. INT: DAY. EXU. E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES LIPS AND HANDS OF KC. INTERVIE FIRST SU!"ECT INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND KC TALKING WITH EACH OTHER. INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES OF KC WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND KC TALKING WITH EACH OTHER INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE HANDS OF KC WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND KC TALKING WITH EACH OTHER INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS p. $ of p. 10 p. % of p. 10 OF KC WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES OF KC WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND KC TALKING WITH EACH OTHER FADE OUT MSC MARK: SUSUNOD... ATING ALAMIN ANG PANGARAP AT MGA PAGBABAGONG GAGAWIN NI KC. FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC COMM GA& (60 SECS.) FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC MARK: SA MAGDADALAWANG TAONG NAKAKULONG NI KC MARAMING BAGAY ANG KANYANG NAPAGTANTO. FADE IN: DAY. ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT ANGLES OF KC FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS OF KC WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES OF KC WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND KC TALKING WITH EACH OTHER. INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE HANDS OF KC WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN p. ' of p. 10 p. 1 of p. __ AND KC TALKING WITH EACH OTHER. INT: DAY.EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES OF KC WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE HANDS OF KC WHILE TALKING. MARK: ANG PIITAN AY HINDI LAMANG SUMISIMBOLO SA PAGDURUSA AT PAGHIHIRAP NG BAWAT BILANGGO DAHIL ANG PIITAN AY ISANG LUGAR KUNG SAAN AY MAY BAGONG PAG-ASA PAGBABAGO AT BAGONG ISTORYA SA BAWAT TAONG NARIRITO. EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND KC SAYING GOODBYE TO EACH OTHER. FADE OUT MSC MARK: SUSUNOD... ATING TUKLASIN ANG KWENTO NG ISANG TOLPU. FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC COMM GA& (60 SECS.) FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC MARK: MARAMING TAO NGAYON ANG NAGHIHIRAP DAHIL SA WALA SILANG IKINABUBUHAY NGUNIT MAY MGA TAO NAMANG SA KABILA NG KAKULANGAN AY PATULOY PA RIN HINAHARAP ANG HAMON NG BUHAY. ATING TUKLASIN ANG SENARYO NG BUHAY NG ISANG TOLPU. EXT: DAY. MS. RULE OF THIRDS SHOWING MARK AL!IN WHILE GI!ING HIS SPIELS FADE IN: GFX: %ISUMBONG MO KAY FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC TOLPU&. DISSOLVE (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC MARK: SA PROJECT ) *UE+ON CITY KO NAKILALA SI MANG RICO SUMBUNGAN NG BAYAN LALO NA KUNG BARADONG CR ANG USAPAN. EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT AREAS OF PROJECT ) FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC MARK: NGUNIT KILALA RIN SI MANG RICO DAHIL SA KANYANG NATATANGING KATANGIAN ANG PAGIGING ISANG TOLPU O PUTOL. EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT ANGLES OF RICO INTERVIE SECOND SU!"ECT INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND RICO TALKING WITH EACH OTHER. INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES OF RICO WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND RICO TALKING WITH EACH OTHER INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE HANDS OF RICO WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND RICO TALKING WITH EACH OTHER INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS OF RICO WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES OF RICO WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND RICO TALKING WITH p. ( of p. 10 p. ) of p. 10 p. 1 of p. __ EACH OTHER FADE OT MSC MARK: SUSUNOD... ATING TUKLASIN ANG PANGARAW-ARAW NA BUHAY NI MANG RICO. FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC COMM GA& (60 SECS.) FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC MARK: SINUNDAN NAMIN SI MANG RICO UPANG TUKLASIN ANG KANYANG PANGARAW-ARAW NA BUHAY. SINUBUKAN KONG ALAMIN ANG PAKIRAMDAM HABANG GINAGAWA ANG KANYANG TRABAHO KAYA NAGLAKAS LOOB AKO NA HAMUNIN ANG AKING SARILI. FADE IN: DAY. ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT ANGLES OF RICO FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC INT: DAY. $S. IMMERSION SHOWING MARK AL!IN IS DOING THE JOB OF MANG RICO. INT: DAY. MS. MARK AL!IN IS GI!ING HIS TESTIMONIAL ABOUT HIS IMMERSION. INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE HANDS OF RICO WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND RICO TALKING WITH EACH OTHER INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS OF RICO WHILE TALKING. INT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE p. * of p. 10 E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES OF RICO WHILE TALKING. MARK: SI MANG RICO AY ISANG MAGANDANG EHEMPLO NG ISANG TAONG SA KABILA NG KAPANSANAN AY HINAHARAP AT PATULOY NA NILALABANAN ANG HAMON NG BUHAY. PATUNAY LAMANG NITO NA KAHIT SINO KA PA KAYA MONG MAGPRUSIGE UPANG MAGKAROON NG MAAYOS NA BUHAY. EXT: DAY.ES. SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND RICO SAYING GOODBYE TO EACH OTHER. FADE OUT MSC MARK: SUSUNOD... SUBUKAN NATING PAKINGGAN ANG TOL-AK NG BIBIG. FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC COMM GA& (60 SECS.) FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC MARK: ANG MGA TAO NGA NAMAN LALO NA TAYONG MGA PILIPINO ANG HILIG HILIG NATING DUMAING. NGUNIT PAANO KUNG MAY MGA TAO PALANG MAS KAPOS PA SA ATIN MAGREREKLAMO PA BA TAYO# ATING TUNGHAYAN ANG KWENTO NG %TOL-AK NG BIBIG DI KO MARINIG& EXT: DAY. MS. RULE OF THIRDS SHOWING MARK AL!IN WHILE GI!ING HIS SPIELS FADE IN: GFX: %TOL-AK NG BIBIG DI KO MARINIG&. DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC MARK: TUMULAK ANG AMING GRUPO SA BRGY. SAN GARBRIEL SA STA. MARIA BULACAN UPANG BISITAHIN SI LOLO RICARDO 6, TAONG GULANG ISANG PIPI AT FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC p. + of p. 10 p. 1 of p. __ BINGI. MARK: KASALUKUYAN SIYANG NANINIRAHAN KAY MANG MARCIANO ANG KANYANG PINSAN NA NAG- IISANG KUMUPKOP SA KANYA SA LOOB NG -- TAON. INTERVIE T,IRD SU!"ECT EXT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND MARCIANO TALKING WITH EACH OTHER. FADE IN MSC (INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC) EXT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES OF RICARDO WHILE TALKING. EXT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND MARCIANO TALKING WITH EACH OTHER EXT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE HANDS OF RICARDO WHILE TALKING. EXT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND MARCIANO TALKING WITH EACH OTHER EXT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS OF RICARDO WHILE TALKING. EXT: DAY. EXU. INTERVIE E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES OF RICARDO WHILE TALKING. EXT: DAY. REV#$ S. INTERVIE SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND MARCIANO TALKING WITH EACH OTHER FADE OUT MSC MARK: SUSUNOD... MAKILAKAD NG TATLONG FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD& FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC p. - of p. 10 KILOMETRO KASAMA SI MANG RICARDO. DISSOLVE (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC COMM GA& (60 SECS.) FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF %TOL$& DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (' SECS.) FADE OUT MSC MARK: NAGMISTULANG PANATA NA NI MANG RICARDO NA MAGSIMBA TUWING LINGGO KAYA NAISIPAN NG AMING GRUPO NA SUNDAN ANG KANYANG PAGSISIMBA. FADE IN: DAY. ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT ANGLES OF RICARDO EXT: DAY. ES. IMMERSION SHOWING RICARDO"S WAY ON CHURCH FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC EXT: DAY. ES. IMMERSION RICARDO IS ENTERING THE CHURCH. INT: DAY. ES. RICARDO IS ATTENDING THE MASS INT: DAY.ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT ANGLES OF CHURCH EXT: DAY. LS. SHOWING THE E(IT OF RICARDO FROM THE CHURCH. EXT: DAY. RICO IS WALKING 3KMS. FROM THE CHURCH GOING TO HOME. EXT: DAY. BACK TO MANG MARCIANO. !ALUES FORMATION LINES. MARK: SI MANG RICARDO ANG SUMASALAMIN SA TUNAY NA KAKULANGAN SA BUHAY. KUNG ATING NANAMNAMIN ANG KANYANG PAMUMUHAY TAYONG MGA MAY NORMAL NA BUHAY AY TIYAK NA EXT. DAY. SHOWING MARK AL!IN AND RICARDO SAYING GOODBYE TO EACH OTHER. p. 10 of p. 10 p. 1 of p. __ MAG-IISIP NG MAKAILANG BESES BAGO TAYO MAGREKLAMO. MARK: ANG KWENTO NILA KC MANG RICO AT LOLO RICARDO. KWENTONG MODELO NG TUNAY NA DAGOK NG BUHAY. KWENTONG TUNAY NA KAPUPULUTAN NG ARAL. KWENTONG PUNONG PUNO NG PAG-ASA SA BUHAY. AKO PO SI MARK AL!IN MALLARI MGA TOL$ MAY PAG-ASA PA. VIDEO FX: S&LIT SCREEN PICTURES OF KC MANG RICO AT LOLO RICARDO. FADE OUT MSC FADE IN: CBB (60 SECS.) DISSOLVE FADE IN MSC: INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC (60 SECS.) FADE OUT MSC REFERENCE: .//p0:##111.2o3/345.6o7#18/6.9:;D()<KL33I=0