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SCRIPTWRITER: CARLO JAKE MARTIN


PRODUCTION: RED SHIFT PRODUCTIONS
TOTAL RUNNING TIME: 00:30:00
NARRATION VISUAL SOUND
FADE IN: OBB (60 SECS.)
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(60 SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
EXT: DAY.
ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT
PLACES.
SFX: SWISH SOUNDS
MARK: HABANG MAY
BUHAY AY MAY PAG-ASA.
IYAN NA NGA ANG ISA SA
MGA PINAKAGAGAS NA
LINYA NA PAULIT-ULIT
NATING NARIRINIG.
EXT: DAY.
MS. RULE OF THIRDS
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
NATSOT
EXT: DAY.
ES. SHOWING DIFFERENT
PLACES.
SFX: SWISH SOUNDS
MARK: NGUNIT SA KABILA
BA NITO"Y NANINIWALA
TAYONG MAY PAG-ASA NGA
BA ANG BUHAY#
EXT: DAY.
MS. RULE OF THIRDS
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
NATSOT
EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING
DIFFERENT PLACES.
SFX: SWISH SOUNDS
MARK: SAMAHAN NIYO PO
AKO AT ATING TUKLASIN
NA ABOT KAMAY NATIN
ANG TAGUMPAY SA BUHAY
KUNG TAYO AY MAY PAG-
ASA
EXT: DAY.
MS. RULE OF THIRDS
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
NATSOT
MARK: AKO PO SI MARK
AL!IN MALLARI
EXT: DAY.
MS. RULE OF THIRDS
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
MARK: AT PAKINGGAN
NATIN ANG KWENTO NI
TOL$
EXT: DAY.
CU. RULE OF THIRDS
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: HINDI LAHAT NG
NASA KULUNGAN AY
NAPATUNAYANG MAY SALA.
IYAN ANG KALAGAYAN NG
EXT: MS. RULE OF
THIRDS SHOWING MARK
AL!IN WHILE GI!ING HIS
SPIELS
p. 1 of p. 10
p. 1 of p. __
KARAMIHAN SA ATING MGA
KABABAYAN NA NAKAPIIT
SA KULUNGAN. KAYA
TUTUKAN NATIN ANG
KWENTO NI TOL.
FADE IN: GFX: %TOL
BAKIT KA NAGBATO#&.
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: ANG KULUNGAN.
MARAHIL ITO ANG ISA SA
MGA LUGAR NA AYAW
PASUKIN NINUMAN DAHIL
SA HINDI NA
MABABAGONG IMAHE
NITO. ANG TAPUNAN NG
MGA KRIMINAL.
FADE IN: EXT: DAY. ES.
THE SURROUNDINGS OF
THE CITY JAIL
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
MARK: SUBALIT PARA KAY
KC HINDI TUNAY NA
PANGALAN ANG
KULUNGAN NA ANG
KANYANG ITINUTURING NA
PANGALAWANG TAHANAN.
INT: DAY. EXU.
E(TREMITIES OF THE
EYES LIPS AND HANDS OF
KC.
INTERVIE
FIRST SU!"ECT
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND KC TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER.
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES
OF KC WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND KC TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE
HANDS OF KC WHILE
TALKING.
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND KC TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS
p. $ of p. 10 p. % of p. 10
OF KC WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES
OF KC WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND KC TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER FADE OUT MSC
MARK: SUSUNOD... ATING
ALAMIN ANG PANGARAP AT
MGA PAGBABAGONG
GAGAWIN NI KC.
FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
COMM GA& (60 SECS.)
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: SA
MAGDADALAWANG TAONG
NAKAKULONG NI KC
MARAMING BAGAY ANG
KANYANG NAPAGTANTO.
FADE IN: DAY. ES.
SHOWING DIFFERENT
ANGLES OF KC
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS
OF KC WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES
OF KC WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND KC TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER.
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE
HANDS OF KC WHILE
TALKING.
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
p. ' of p. 10
p. 1 of p. __
AND KC TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER.
INT: DAY.EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES
OF KC WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE
HANDS OF KC WHILE
TALKING.
MARK: ANG PIITAN AY
HINDI LAMANG
SUMISIMBOLO SA
PAGDURUSA AT
PAGHIHIRAP NG BAWAT
BILANGGO DAHIL ANG
PIITAN AY ISANG LUGAR
KUNG SAAN AY MAY
BAGONG PAG-ASA
PAGBABAGO AT BAGONG
ISTORYA SA BAWAT TAONG
NARIRITO.
EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING
MARK AL!IN AND KC
SAYING GOODBYE TO EACH
OTHER.
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: SUSUNOD... ATING
TUKLASIN ANG KWENTO
NG ISANG TOLPU.
FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
COMM GA& (60 SECS.)
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: MARAMING TAO
NGAYON ANG NAGHIHIRAP
DAHIL SA WALA SILANG
IKINABUBUHAY NGUNIT
MAY MGA TAO NAMANG SA
KABILA NG KAKULANGAN
AY PATULOY PA RIN
HINAHARAP ANG HAMON
NG BUHAY. ATING
TUKLASIN ANG SENARYO
NG BUHAY NG ISANG
TOLPU.
EXT: DAY. MS. RULE OF
THIRDS SHOWING MARK
AL!IN WHILE GI!ING HIS
SPIELS
FADE IN: GFX:
%ISUMBONG MO KAY
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
TOLPU&.
DISSOLVE
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: SA PROJECT )
*UE+ON CITY KO
NAKILALA SI MANG RICO
SUMBUNGAN NG BAYAN
LALO NA KUNG BARADONG
CR ANG USAPAN.
EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING
DIFFERENT AREAS OF
PROJECT )
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
MARK: NGUNIT KILALA
RIN SI MANG RICO DAHIL
SA KANYANG
NATATANGING KATANGIAN
ANG PAGIGING ISANG
TOLPU O PUTOL.
EXT: DAY. ES. SHOWING
DIFFERENT ANGLES OF
RICO
INTERVIE
SECOND SU!"ECT
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND RICO TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER.
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES
OF RICO WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND RICO TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE
HANDS OF RICO WHILE
TALKING.
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND RICO TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS
OF RICO WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES
OF RICO WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND RICO TALKING WITH
p. ( of p. 10 p. ) of p. 10
p. 1 of p. __
EACH OTHER FADE OT MSC
MARK: SUSUNOD... ATING
TUKLASIN ANG
PANGARAW-ARAW NA
BUHAY NI MANG RICO.
FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
COMM GA& (60 SECS.)
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: SINUNDAN NAMIN
SI MANG RICO UPANG
TUKLASIN ANG KANYANG
PANGARAW-ARAW NA
BUHAY. SINUBUKAN KONG
ALAMIN ANG PAKIRAMDAM
HABANG GINAGAWA ANG
KANYANG TRABAHO KAYA
NAGLAKAS LOOB AKO NA
HAMUNIN ANG AKING
SARILI.
FADE IN: DAY. ES.
SHOWING DIFFERENT
ANGLES OF RICO
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
INT: DAY. $S.
IMMERSION
SHOWING MARK AL!IN IS
DOING THE JOB OF MANG
RICO.
INT: DAY. MS. MARK
AL!IN IS GI!ING HIS
TESTIMONIAL ABOUT HIS
IMMERSION.
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE
HANDS OF RICO WHILE
TALKING.
INT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND RICO TALKING WITH
EACH OTHER
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS
OF RICO WHILE TALKING.
INT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
p. * of p. 10
E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES
OF RICO WHILE TALKING.
MARK: SI MANG RICO AY
ISANG MAGANDANG
EHEMPLO NG ISANG
TAONG SA KABILA NG
KAPANSANAN AY
HINAHARAP AT PATULOY
NA NILALABANAN ANG
HAMON NG BUHAY.
PATUNAY LAMANG NITO NA
KAHIT SINO KA PA KAYA
MONG MAGPRUSIGE
UPANG MAGKAROON NG
MAAYOS NA BUHAY.
EXT: DAY.ES. SHOWING
MARK AL!IN AND RICO
SAYING GOODBYE TO EACH
OTHER.
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: SUSUNOD...
SUBUKAN NATING
PAKINGGAN ANG TOL-AK
NG BIBIG.
FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
COMM GA& (60 SECS.)
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: ANG MGA TAO NGA
NAMAN LALO NA TAYONG
MGA PILIPINO ANG HILIG
HILIG NATING DUMAING.
NGUNIT PAANO KUNG MAY
MGA TAO PALANG MAS
KAPOS PA SA ATIN
MAGREREKLAMO PA BA
TAYO# ATING TUNGHAYAN
ANG KWENTO NG %TOL-AK
NG BIBIG DI KO MARINIG&
EXT: DAY. MS. RULE OF
THIRDS SHOWING MARK
AL!IN WHILE GI!ING HIS
SPIELS
FADE IN: GFX: %TOL-AK
NG BIBIG DI KO
MARINIG&.
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: TUMULAK ANG
AMING GRUPO SA BRGY.
SAN GARBRIEL SA STA.
MARIA BULACAN UPANG
BISITAHIN SI LOLO
RICARDO 6, TAONG
GULANG ISANG PIPI AT
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
p. + of p. 10
p. 1 of p. __
BINGI.
MARK: KASALUKUYAN
SIYANG NANINIRAHAN KAY
MANG MARCIANO ANG
KANYANG PINSAN NA NAG-
IISANG KUMUPKOP SA
KANYA SA LOOB NG --
TAON.
INTERVIE
T,IRD SU!"ECT
EXT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND MARCIANO TALKING
WITH EACH OTHER.
FADE IN MSC
(INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC)
EXT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES
OF RICARDO WHILE
TALKING.
EXT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND MARCIANO TALKING
WITH EACH OTHER
EXT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE
HANDS OF RICARDO WHILE
TALKING.
EXT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND MARCIANO TALKING
WITH EACH OTHER
EXT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE LIPS
OF RICARDO WHILE
TALKING.
EXT: DAY. EXU.
INTERVIE
E(TREMITIES OF THE EYES
OF RICARDO WHILE
TALKING.
EXT: DAY. REV#$ S.
INTERVIE
SHOWING MARK AL!IN
AND MARCIANO TALKING
WITH EACH OTHER FADE OUT MSC
MARK: SUSUNOD...
MAKILAKAD NG TATLONG
FADE IN: GFX:%SUSUNOD& FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
p. - of p. 10
KILOMETRO KASAMA SI
MANG RICARDO. DISSOLVE
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
COMM GA& (60 SECS.)
FADE IN: GFX: LOGO OF
%TOL$&
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(' SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
MARK: NAGMISTULANG
PANATA NA NI MANG
RICARDO NA MAGSIMBA
TUWING LINGGO KAYA
NAISIPAN NG AMING
GRUPO NA SUNDAN ANG
KANYANG PAGSISIMBA.
FADE IN: DAY. ES.
SHOWING DIFFERENT
ANGLES OF RICARDO
EXT: DAY. ES.
IMMERSION
SHOWING RICARDO"S WAY
ON CHURCH
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
EXT: DAY. ES.
IMMERSION
RICARDO IS ENTERING
THE CHURCH.
INT: DAY. ES.
RICARDO IS ATTENDING
THE MASS
INT: DAY.ES.
SHOWING DIFFERENT
ANGLES OF CHURCH
EXT: DAY. LS.
SHOWING THE E(IT OF
RICARDO FROM THE
CHURCH.
EXT: DAY. RICO IS
WALKING 3KMS. FROM THE
CHURCH GOING TO HOME.
EXT: DAY. BACK TO MANG
MARCIANO. !ALUES
FORMATION LINES.
MARK: SI MANG RICARDO
ANG SUMASALAMIN SA
TUNAY NA KAKULANGAN
SA BUHAY. KUNG ATING
NANAMNAMIN ANG
KANYANG PAMUMUHAY
TAYONG MGA MAY NORMAL
NA BUHAY AY TIYAK NA
EXT. DAY. SHOWING
MARK AL!IN AND RICARDO
SAYING GOODBYE TO EACH
OTHER.
p. 10 of p. 10
p. 1 of p. __
MAG-IISIP NG MAKAILANG
BESES BAGO TAYO
MAGREKLAMO.
MARK: ANG KWENTO NILA
KC MANG RICO AT LOLO
RICARDO. KWENTONG
MODELO NG TUNAY NA
DAGOK NG BUHAY.
KWENTONG TUNAY NA
KAPUPULUTAN NG ARAL.
KWENTONG PUNONG PUNO
NG PAG-ASA SA BUHAY.
AKO PO SI MARK AL!IN
MALLARI MGA TOL$ MAY
PAG-ASA PA.
VIDEO FX: S&LIT
SCREEN PICTURES OF KC
MANG RICO AT LOLO
RICARDO.
FADE OUT MSC
FADE IN: CBB (60 SECS.)
DISSOLVE
FADE IN MSC:
INSTRUMENTAL MUSIC
(60 SECS.)
FADE OUT MSC
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