English 242B: Brendas Portfolio Feedback

Your Feedback to Portfolio Partners Due Date: Wednesday, 02/18

Portfolio Midterm Grade: Monday, 02/23
Portfolio Items: Read through each one of portfolio tabs to determine if each category is
completed in full.

1.
2.
3.
4.

Revise and edit the activities and assignments listed to

earn a grade for your portfolio. Make sure to place
each assignment in the correct portfolio tab.

Excellent

TAB: Personal Dictionary Terms

Reading Journal 1: (2 terms)
Reading Journal 2: (activism + agency)
Reading Journal 4: (3 terms: Blanco, Valencia,
McCurdy)
Reading Journal 6: (2 terms: Heilbroner)

TAB: About
1. Your Thoughtful Selfie:
Sentence clarity
Text cohesion
Visual
Complete response to Selfie questions
TAB: Student Voices Symposium
1. Brainstorming: Response to 7 questions
2. Your symposium contribution (paragraph)
1.
2.
3.
4.

TAB: Reflections
Portfolio Audience Reflection (paragraph)
Symposium Audience Reflection (paragraph)
Essay 1 Reflection (completed in class)
Portfolio Rubrics for your group members: upload as
a document or cut and past directly onto the reflection
page.

TAB: Home
1. Portfolio Purpose: What do you hope to demonstrate
about yourself as a writer? What are goals do you
have for yourself as a writer? As a critical thinker?
(One paragraph- posted by 2/16)
2. Published Pieces:
a. Publish Essay 1: you may also include any

Proficient

Needs
Work

visualizations that you think are relevant to this essay.

Portfolio Presentation/Organization:
Strengths

One strong line that really stood

out to me was If only more people
had the motivation he had for
change, maybe some things would
be different. This is where you are
talking about Martin Luther King
Jr.s film.
Images are impressive
Selfie is intriguing
Reflection about Essay 1

Portfolio Presentation/Organization:
Needs Work

There was nothing provided for the

Home tab.
The context of the tabs were out of
order. I had to hunt for them.
You are missing the Audience
Reflection and the contribution that
you will provide in the symposium.
There were different fonts and
colored text on the Symposium
page.