Personal Essay Reflections

My goal for my personal essay was to work on consistently using 3rd person. I feel that I have
met my goal with this piece and strengthened my knowledge on how to write in one point of
view. Based on my reflections, my next writing goal is to use commas flawlessly. I have noticed
that I keep creating comma splices or miss commas altogether. Overall, I learned that structure
isnt necessary for making a great essay. It is better to have good content and take a risk going
outside the boundaries of essay structures rather than a bland, factual essay.