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Prelim Research

Summary seems to match what postings initial section wants. Posting is


looking for passion, ambition and outside the box thinking. Resume shows that he
fits that.
Name and Contact Information
Phone number, email address, and physical address included.
Objective
Tailored the summary and highlights to match job and emphasized skills that
he brought to the table. Doesnt have what you want out of the job.
Education
Has college, major, and date of graduation. May want to bring it to the top of
resume instead of at the bottom. Explanation of 49th Security division is necessary.
GPA is also a possible addition.
Work Experience
Has a trail of employment leading back to 2012. Slight typo in Childrens
Counselor section. Expanding on experience drawn from last 3 employers to show
more relevant experience if possible.
No activities/interests section
No references
Prose and Visual design
Resume is clean and clear both visually and in prose. No irrelevant
information sticks out. Beef up highlighting skills that look good for the application if
possible.

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