Peer Review by Laura Crossley

Introductory paragraph
You do a good job of explaining the theme. The message is clear when you say
technical communication is needed to bridge the gap between scientists and other
specialists to make use of their research. The next to the last sentence reads a little
awkward. I think there should be a word after new.
Supporting Paragraphs
The second paragraph concerning the Ted Talk expands on the introduction very
well. The paragraph about the proposal seems long. It could perhaps be reworked
into two paragraphs. Also the phrase, uninformed it maybe, should read
uninformed as it may be in that context. My favorite paragraph is the last one. You
bring everything together well and I love the equation.
1. Introduction
2. Expanding on introduction
3. Small paragraph about reflection
4. Proposal
5. Writing instructions
6. Seeking employment
7. Closing reflection
Jacob, I think you did a great job with the reflection. The organization and content is
good. I would revise some of the sentence structure but otherwise everything looks
great.