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Writers Guide - Stein

Preliminary Research
Great Job
Address
Good, may want to include job title if available

Introduction
Good content. You sound excited about Urban Planning.

Qualifications
2nd paragraph highlights qualifications. Good

Closing
Leaves a positive impression

Prose
1st paragraph -Geography major and with ( do not need and).
3rd paragraph - say as such I am in second and third sentence, may want to revise.

Appearance
Good overall appearance, perhaps line-up sincerely, Jacob Stein with body of the letter.
Ethics
It is good that you mention the qualifications you do not yet have and how you plan on acquiring
those skills.

Overall

Effective and enthusiastic

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