Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Preliminary Research
Great Job
Address
Good, may want to include job title if available
Introduction
Good content. You sound excited about Urban Planning.
Qualifications
2nd paragraph highlights qualifications. Good
Closing
Leaves a positive impression
Prose
1st paragraph -Geography major and with ( do not need and).
3rd paragraph - say as such I am in second and third sentence, may want to revise.
Appearance
Good overall appearance, perhaps line-up sincerely, Jacob Stein with body of the letter.
Ethics
It is good that you mention the qualifications you do not yet have and how you plan on acquiring
those skills.
Overall