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January 12 2016 Advanced Agenda On Organization Hook Intro and Conclusion 2
January 12 2016 Advanced Agenda On Organization Hook Intro and Conclusion 2
Example:
Lets say you had to write a story about a time
when you were really scared. This topic has great
potential. You need to jump all over the topic, by
creating a hook that not only gets the reader
excited, but lets them know a little about what your
essay will be about.
The Good:
I cant get her screams out of my head.
They pierced my ears from behind the bedroom
door. I pounded my fists to get to her. My heart
exploded behind my ribcage.
Help! she screeched.
I cant get to you! I yelled into the door.
Her sobs surrounded me, suffocated me. I
continued to kick and claw at the door. I just
couldnt get in.
It was the scariest day of my life
The Bad:
I remember this one time, it was a little while
ago.
I was in this house.
And it was so scary.
There was some person screaming behind a
door. I tried to get in but I couldnt.
It was scary. Really scary.
The Ugly:
OMG.
Being scared bites. Bad. So, so bad. It stinks.
Its worse than What Does the Fox Say!
I was scared once.
Id tell you about it, but it is too scary to
mention. I might pee. Whoa.
LOL.
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Leave it a mystery.
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Topics:
1) Worst day at school
2) Best day of my life
3) Scariest moment of my life
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You try it
Conclusions:
Try and mention something from your intro, in
your conclusion. What this does, is connect
your intro and conclusion together (like the
buns of a hamburger). This also holds
together all the meat and good stuff in the
body of your paper.
INTRO =
My dad once said, Carpe diem. I
always wondered what it meant, until one day I
found out while I was at school. Looking back,
Ill remember that day forever
BODY
BODY
BODY
CONCLUSION= Now that Im a grown man, my
dads words of Carpe diem ring in my ears
nearly every day. It was a great lesson for him
to teach me because it is a lesson that will be
with me always.
Organization:
Transitions:
Dialogue:
Dialogue helps move your essay along.
Remember you must indent every time a new
person starts speaking even if it is one word.