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FEEDBACK ON FINAL DESIGN

I like the colour scheme throughout


The Bella BB logo looks very similar to the 21pilots logo
It looks amazing!! Alexandra Dust, 16 years old
1) I am in love with the background on contents
2) the cover looks actually insane.
3) I love your colour scheme
4) this might sound stupid and tiny but I dont know about the
Bellas "nose" shot on the contents page
6) I love Bella's pose on the cover and how she faces the title
Naomi Torrisi, 16 years old
I like the cover page because it reminds me of a combination of
an old and modern style. Its like the 80s mixed with a
contemporary twist. I think the layout is really good on the
double page spread. The choice of font is also visually
appealing. The atmosphere seems to be moody, I like it. I also
think there is a good balance of colour all around. Angela
Martin, 40 years old
I like the way you altered the font/designs to fit the words!
The colour scheme is really enticing, I cant stop looking at it
The pictures are really interesting; the way you have
manipulated and cropped them. Gillian Moody, 38 years old
The model looks like someone I would look up to (If I were a
teenager) (comment made by a 22 year old).
I like the composition of it all
It's very vibrant and really catches the eye
There's a lot going on in the content page though the two
'contents' is really distracting. Jaya Sethi, 17 years old
OVERALL I BELIEVE MY FEEDBACK WAS MOSTLY POSITIVE AND
IM PLEASED I ACCOPLISHED THE LIKINGS OF MY DEMOGRAPHIC
(OF WHOM ANSWERED)

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