Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to a prison would

commit crimes when set free, what do you think of this case? What can be done to
solve this problem?
Although the chances of freed criminals breaking the law again are greater than
those of someone who has never done so, countermeasures can be taken to prevent
them from being further corrupted, as well as to help them change their immoral
old spots.
Firstly, there is every necessity to enhance the quality of education in prisons. In a
sense, the prison can be regarded as the place for a persons rebirth if he or she is
determined to erase previous shames and turn over a new leaf. The government
ought to grant them better opportunities to attend useful classes during their
imprisonment. Thus, the possibility of their ill-intentioned conducts can be lowered.
Teachers can also take advantage of the harmonious class atmosphere to deliver
positive concepts and ideas so as to help them reestablish their vision of life.
Normally, prisoners may show a rebellious mood towards anyone who deprives
them of freedom. As a result, educators face greater challenges under such
circumstances and need to adopt smarter teaching techniques and make
comprehensive preparations beforehand.
To bring the crime rate down, the whole society must also actively participate in the
campaign. The effort of each individual is counted. As for those who once broke the
law but have been set free, they should be accepted as equals. Otherwise, they
may feel self-abased because others look down upon them. Then the possibility of
them committing crimes again will become higher. In order to avoid this, the
masses should support them whenever necessary. Absolute is just like a ray of
sunshine brightening the darkest parts of anyones heart, and a reformed person is
no different.
In conclusion, the repeated offenses of prisoners reveal many serious social
problems that require more public concern. Therefore, it is the combined efforts of
both the government and individuals to help those who have been released from
prison.

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