Authors Name:______________________ Reviewers Name:_________________________Date:_________

Breaking Barriers: Personal Narrative Peer Edit

1) What is the authors main idea? What details support this main idea?

2) What values does the author include in their paper?

3) What is the authors hook? Is the hook successful at drawing the reader in? Why or why not?

4) Does the author use correct capitalization and punctuation? What errors does this author need to fix?

5) What are two suggestions or comments you have for the writer to help them improve their paper?