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Reflection/Activity 1
Module Title and Writing
Assignment:

Grade and Teacher


Comments

Strengths

Weaknesses

Personal Statement

78 Good Job

Strong metaphor
connection with intro
and concluding
paragraph.

The willing to expand


more on the personal
statement.

Good Food/Bad Food

74

Connection with
paragraphs

Dumped quotes and


more commentary

Racial Profiling

78 and You really put


much effort into your
work and I appreciate
that

Strong quotes

Commentary and
embedded quotes

Into the Wild

75

Great evidence prior to


the book

More length on
concluding paragraph

86 and overall you did


a good job

Opening statement and Need to focus more on


evidence
body paragraphs

Predict your grade on


the essay assignment

What do you think were What do you think were


your strengths and
your weaknesses and
why?
why?

75

Paragraph flow

First Semester

Module Title and Writing


Assignment:
Second Semester

Bullying Research Paper

Bring a Text to Class

Brave New World

Cited only sources


when needed

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