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Name: Ms.

Batts Letter to Janie Directions: Below is my failed attempt at a formal letter to Janie from Their Eyes Were Watching God, using the correct editing symbols, please help me fix the mistakes in my letter

Janie Girl! I heard about the problems you are having with yo g-ma. I feel lik that too sometimes I mean that was wrong what she did marrying you off like that. nd to an old man like that ? OMG, im so sorry girl. I mean clearly She dont kno what u want in life. If I were you I wouldda let my grandma know! what write does she have to do that. Even if she didnt listen you shoulda told her Janie! Ya shoulda told her how you felt or at the very least you should not have married that old man! I woulda ran away. Anything would have been better than livin on a farm. Like I know she probably loves you and stuff, so it would be hard I know but you can do, or at least you got to make her understand I mean wat other options do you have?? Also, im afraid to have to tell you this, but that jody was a bad move.. I meand I saw him coming from a mile away. Anyman that s just gone sneak up on you like that and steal you from yo husband even if he is a old fart aint no good for you Janie, im so sorry you had to go through that. Janie im sorry that things didnt turn out grate for you I hpe you get yo mess together with these men. Keep ya eyes on god girl! Xoxo ms. batts

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