WORKSHOPPING GUIDE: FILM OUTLINES AND TREATMENTS

1: Ask yourself the following questions about the piece of work under consideration: a: Who are the main characters, and do they each have a distinct story? What links these stories? [Theme?] b: What is the essential problem the main character(s) face, and why can they not solve it? [This can be internal, external, or - preferably - both]. c: Are the sources of conflict clear and are __they used to their full dramatic potential? [Can you see ways to develop them further?] d: Are the characters' motivations clear at every stage of the story's development? e: What is/ are the ending(s)? Does the narrative start too early or too late? Should some of the story development be delayed? [Shape and rhythm]. f: Is the form, and type, of the narrative clear and how is this used, or changed, to enhance the narrative? [Genre]. g: What visual metaphors/sounds/settings are being used to enhance the theme and characterisation? Can you suggest others which are appropriate and original? h: What is original about it, and what is familiar? Does the balance work? 2: Make notes on any problems you have identified. 3: Think up possible solutions to the problems. 4: Identify possible sources of research for developing the story. 5: Identify the single thing you liked best abou___Gt this idea and state this first. _______________ When receiving comments: 1: Take notes. 2: Note down any new ideas that spring out of the comments. 3: Gather your thoughts at the end of the discussion. Feed them back into the group

REMEMBER: This is an exercise in developing your ability to analyse a range of work, and to take constructive criticism. - Be concise. - Be helpful. - Concentrate on solving problems.