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CRITICAL APPROACHES IN 3
WRITING A CRITIQUE
WHAT I NEED TO
KNOW
Learning Objectives: At the end of the lesson, the learners shall be able to
1. define critique;
2. identify the various approaches writing a critique;
3. criticize the texts using the different approaches of criticism; and
4. apply the appropriate critical approaches in writing your critique.
WHAT'S
NEW
ACTIVITY 1. SAY SOMETHING ACTIVITY
Directions: Take a look at this picture and give at least five (5) points that you see
in the picture. Write your answers in your notebook.
Process Questions: Write your answers in your notebook.
2. By looking at the picture, are you thinking about the beautiful nature?
4. Did it cross to your mind who is responsible of taking care of the nature?
5. What about the feeling of the lady jumping onto the water?
7. What about the reasons why God has created this nature for us?
8. Have you not wondered how God created the beautiful world?
WHAT IS
IT
What is critique?
Like an essay, a critique uses a formal, academic writing style and has a clear
structure, that is, an introduction, body and conclusion. However, the body of a critique
includes a summary of the work and a detailed evaluation. The purpose of an evaluation
is to gauge the usefulness or impact of a work in a particular field.
Why do we write critiques?
Read about the critical approaches. You can highlight some important ideas.
You can use these in expressing your views.
Now, you have learned the basic principles of writing criticisms. Let’s apply our skill by
doing these activities.
WHAT I CAN DO
ACTIVITY 4
Directions: Read the poem “Adam”, by Hugh Cook critically. Criticize it using formalistic and feministic
approaches. Write your answers on your notebook.
ADAM
by Hugh Cook
“Eden is boring. Nothing explodes.
There are no trains to fall off the tracks.
And Adam finds himself With something
missing.
Comic books? Broadband? Balsamic
vinegar?
Pachinko? Razor blades? Plasma TV?
He's aware of an itch And scratching
Has yet to be invented.
He eyes the fruit,
The One Forbidden Thing. "Not yet," says
the serpent, Who's seen the script.
But Adam is engineered for impatience:
Quests, missions, objectives,
Grails unholy or otherwise.
"Out!" says the angel. And Adam shrugs,
Loses the core,
Strides to the open gate. Something on two
legs Is running after him.”
OBJECTIVE/BALANCED REVIEW OR
CRITIQUE OF A WORK OF ART,
AN EVENT OR A PROGRAM
WHAT I NEED TO
KNOW
Learning Objectives: At the end of the lesson, the learners shall be able to:
1. define balanced/objective assessment or criticism of artwork;
2. identify the forms and structures of writing art criticism;
3. identify techniques in reviewing different art forms;
4. interpret the broader context and different types of art; and,
5. write a balanced/objective review or critique of pieces of work.
WHAT IS
IT
1. Description. Pure description of the object, piece of work, art, event, etc. It
answers the questions:
a. artwork - "What do you see?" (description constitutes form of art,
medium, size and scale, elements or general shapes, color, texture of
surface, and context of object).
b. piece of writing - "What do you see?" (form, structure, choice of words,
length, genre, etc)
2. Analysis. Determining what the features suggest and deciding why the artist
or writers used such features to convey specific ideas. It answers the
questions:
a. artwork - "Why did the artist create it and what does it mean?
b. piece of writing - "Why did the write create it and what does it
mean?
Remember: you shouldn’t make your interpretation too arbitrary! Provide evidence
and point out what exactly influenced your understanding of the artwork.
Here are the elements that you can include in your interpretation:
E.g., in this painting, the artist wanted to show us the king’s personality and
achievements.
The interpretation constitutes: (a) Main idea (overall meaning of the work), (b)
Interpretive Statement (Can I express what I think the artwork is about in one sentence),
and (c) Evidence (What evidence inside or outside the artwork supports my
interpretation?).
(a) Criteria (What criteria do I think are most appropriate for judging the
artwork or writing?),
(b) Evidence (What evidence inside or outside the artwork or piece of writing
relate to each criterion?)’ and
E.g., the artwork successfully conveys the atmosphere of a battle through its
composition and color scheme. Learning about its backstory helped me to appreciate
the painting even more.
• Describe the way the artist applies paint. Are there broad paint strokes,
small points of color, or just a smooth surface? What effect does it help
to achieve?
E.g., Van Gogh’s broad brush strokes help to create a sense of motion.
• Describe how the light is depicted. Where does the light come from? Is
there a strong value contrast? In what way does the shadow function?
What, in your opinion, does it evoke?
E.g., strong contrast makes the central figures stand out.
• Speak about the handling of space in the picture. Does it look flat or
three-dimensional? What kind of perspective is used? (e.g., one-point
perspective, or bird’s eye view?)
E.g., in this painting, Picasso uses multi-dimensional geometrical shapes
• Describe the composition of the sculpture. What does it look like when you
approach it? Did the sculptor provide any instructions on how to position it?
E.g., the statue is enormous and can be viewed from all sides.
• Did one architect complete the building, or were there any alterations?
Why were they made?
E.g., the spire was added to the cathedral much later. It became the
integral part of its image.
• What do the exterior and the interior look like? What effect do they
produce? Is there a contrast between them?
E.g., the building has a high ceiling painted like the sky. It also makes
the organ music sound louder.
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Describe:
The colors that the author uses can be considered to be quite different as each
color conveys a separate impression. The light purple that begins at the bottom top
of the woman’s eyes can convey sadness. The other half of the face is mainly covered
in green and yellow; these can be said to interpret other solid emotions that the painter
must have towards this woman as she was a vital character in Picasso’s life. The
painting is created with mainly lines which can mean that the woman had strong
physical features or that her different emotions were felt passionately as lines are
usually seen as strong technical elements. The only curves that are being used are
for her hair and eyes. The eyes look quite down or depressive. This is because the
woman is crying, which goes back to the main mood which is suffering.
Interpretation:
I believe that Picasso wanted the audience to feel pain and provide a statement
that explains how all women feel and the agony that they are consistently in. The
audience can see that the woman has peeled away her flesh by corrosive tears to
reveal her white bones. The handkerchief she tries to stuff in her mouth seems as a
shard of glass. This vivid image can convey pain and hurting. Picasso has expressed
the behavior of this woman several times and often describes the constant tears that
fall off her eyes. So, the feeling conveyed by the artwork is definitely suffering.
Picasso wanted us to feel her and understand the pain that she was going through. It
was not easy to be a woman during that time since females where often frowned
upon. Picasso demonstrates the appreciation that he has for her through this painting
as he wants the audience to understand her.
Judge:
Finally, the artist’s value may be to evoke pain, as mentioned previously. This
is due to the colors that Picasso used and the shapes that he draws; not only these
technical elements but also the images that the painter uses within the actual face of
the woman. The painting relates to the entire female community. This community can
understand the painting and know what Picasso was trying to portray. Every woman is
able understand and comprehend the message behind this painting as we all feel
the same way at one point in our lives. I believe that this is a strong value in the painting.
The weak value lies in the different colors that the painter chooses. I found it confusing
to interpret other areas of the face as the colors that were used didn’t seem to match
other locations of the face.
The painting depicts a supper of twelve disciples of Jesus Christ and Christ himself
before the prophet is betrayed (Essak, 2013). Jesus Christ gathers all together in order to
eat and drink at a table, which is not so big and where the food itself is plain. This humble
atmosphere allows the viewers to focus more on the disciples and Christ. In addition to
this, Christ tells the assembly that one person who is present in that supper will betray
him. The painting actually shows the first moment after this statement and the reactions
of the disciples to this speech (Saunders, 2011). Leonardo da Vinci artfully depicts shock,
surprise and other various human emotions in his painting. Although every person in the
painting possesses unique features, I believe ”The Last Supper’ can be divided into four
symmetrical groups full of life and motion (Essak, 2013).
The group from the left side of Christ reacts impulsively and is united by one and
the same will. One disciple has even stood up and another has his finger raised. The
group that is on right-hand side is characterized by greater reserve. There is a huge
distance between them and Jesus Christ. Judah who can be found among these disciples
holding a pouch, perhaps with silver.
His dark and harsh appearance contrasts magnificently with the innocent and light
figure of John. Some scientists claim that this is not actually John, but Mary Magdalene,
because his face is feminine and gentle (Welborn, 2013). In thinking critically, this version
is hardly believable, as Christ gathered twelve disciples, not eleven. Otherwise the
symbolism of ‘The Last Supper’ does not make any sense. Between Judah and John, the
head of Peter can be seen and moreover, he holds a knife in his arm as if he would like
to protect Jesus. From his right-hand side, another group of disciples is portrayed. They
are turned in profile and it looks like they are astonished by the news that was introduced.
From the opposite side, we may see Matthew who is asking the same question to the
other men trying to find the clear explanation of what is happening at that particular
moment.
Frankly speaking, while searching for a secret code of Leonardo da Vinci in his
painting ‘the Last Supper’, one may lose the real visible goal of the picture. It brilliantly
portrays the discrepancy between the conciliation of Christ with his future, his reserve,
calm and absolutely different emotional states and unique reactions of his disciples to the
piece of news that he will be betrayed. The painting has vague aspects about it and
perhaps hidden symbols, but this is not the reason why this painting attracts millions of
people and involves them into the researches and deep investigation of every centimeter
of this masterpiece.
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Based on the above discussions and examples, let us have some activities. The
activities you will do will help you go through the journey one step at a time so you have
to accomplish them with care. Have fun!
WHAT I CAN DO
ACTIVITY 4
ART CRITICISM
Name: Teacher:
Date : Title of Work:
1 2 3 4
Students will One quarter or less Half of all the Three quarters of All of the relative
examine artworks of all the relative relative elements all the relative elements present in
to form ideas and elements present in present in the work elements present in the work of art are
criteria by which to the work of art are of art are identified the work of art are identified listing
judge/assess identified listing listing factual identified listing factual adjectives;
through the first factual adjectives; adjectives; the tile, factual adjectives; the tile, date,
level of art criticism, the tile, date, date, medium and the tile, date, medium and artist
description in order medium and artist artist name are medium and artist name are identified
to inspire personal name are not identified name are identified accurately.
works and artistic identified accurately. accurately.
growth. accurately.
Students will One quarter of the Half of the relative Three quarters of All of the relative
examine artworks relative principles principles present the relative principles present
to form ideas and present in the work in the work of art principles present in the work of art
criteria by which to of art are identified; are identified; half in the work of art are identified; all
judge/assess One quarter of the of the relative are identified; three the relative
through the second relative principles principles are quarters of the principles are
level of art criticism, are discussed with discussed with relative principles discussed with
analyzation, in reference to the reference to the are discussed with reference to the
order to inspire corresponding corresponding reference to the corresponding
personal works and elements. elements. corresponding elements.
artistic growth. elements.
Students will Either the Either the The The
examine artworks meaning/message meaning/message meaning/message meaning/message
to form ideas and and mood of the and mood of the and mood of the and mood of the
criteria by which to work are all defined work are all defined work are all defined work are all defined
judge and assess using support and using support and using support and using support and
through the third details from one details from half details from three details from all
level of art criticism, quarter or less of relative aspects of quarters of the relative aspects of
interpretation in the relative aspects description and relative aspects of description and
order to inspire of description and analysis; the critic description and analysis; the critic
personal works and analysis; the critic has not categorized analysis; the critic has categorized the
artistic growth. has not categorized the artwork into an has categorized the artwork into an art
the artwork into an art style. artwork into an art style.
art style. style.
Student will The critic’s opinion The critic’s opinion The critic’s opinion The critic’s opinion
examine artworks of the work is of the work is of the work is of the work is
to form ideas and unclear and vague and stated clearly and stated clearly and
criteria by which to supported only one supported in only supported in three supported in all
judge/assess quarter or less of all half of the areas quarters of all areas with reason
through the fourth areas with reason with reason and areas with reason and rationale based
level of art criticism, and rationale based rationale based on and rationale based on previous
judgement in order on previous previous aspects of on previous aspects of the
to inspire personal aspects of the the critique. aspects of the critique.
works and artistic critique. critique.
growth
WHAT I HAVE
LEARNED
I have learned the following important points in this lesson:
LESSON 3
A concept paper aims to clarify a concept which can be about any topic from
any fields. It can also be a short summary that tells the reader what the project is,
why it is important, and how it will be carried out. Its aim is to capture the thoughts
and ideas while the research proposal captures the ideas in a structured manner for
approval to research. It is not easy to write a concept paper but with careful study
and research, you can create one.
There are many ways a writer can expound a concept. You can use definition,
explication, and clarification.
Definition identifies a term and sets it apart from all other terms that may be
related to it. Often, definitions begin by mentioning the general class to which a term
belongs. Then they provide specifics to distinguish the term from other members of
that class. You can use these techniques:
2. By synonym – using a word or phrase that shares a meaning with the term being
defined.
Example: Technology – Knowledge, Computers
4. By illustration
Example: Technology involves the use of machineries in every aspect of work.
5. By function
Example: Technology uses hi-tech machines to get the work done.
6. By analysis – breaking down wholes into parts, aspects to levels and a process
into steps)
Example: Technology is defined as the application of scientific knowledge for practical
purposes, especially in industry.
7. By likeness of similarity
Example: Technology is likened to modern living where robots exist.
8. By analogy or metaphor
Example: Technology is like a robot that make life easier.
WHAT'S
MORE
Directions: Define and explain each concept applying at least three (3)
techniques in definition. Write your answers in your notebook.
A. Humanities
B. Tech-Voc
C. Science
D. Accountancy
E. Engineering
WHAT I HAVE
LEARNED
A concept paper is a short summary that tells the reader what the
project is, why it is important, and how it will be carried out.
You can use definition, explication and clarification in making your
concept paper.
WHAT I CAN DO
Directions: Choose one of the concepts in Activity 3 that you want to work on
for a concept paper. Apply definition, explication and clarification in expounding
what the concept is all about. This is only a preparatory stage for the next lesson
where you will write a concept paper. Write your answers in your notebook.
LESSON 4
WHAT'S
NEW
ACTIVITY 1. NAME
THEM
How many concept papers have you read so far?
Directions: List them down and tell what they are about in one sentence. If you
have not read one at all, list down the reasons why you have not read any. Write
your answers in your notebook.
1.
2.
3.
4.
WHAT IS
IT
There are two kinds of concept paper namely implicit and explicit concept paper.
2. Explicit – “to fully and clearly express something, leaving nothing implied.”
Something is explicit when it is cleared stated and spelled out and there is
no room for confusion, as in the writing of a contract or statute.
Let us read another concept paper and answer the set of reflection questions that
follow it. It has something to do with what we eat.
Ketchup
(1) The sauce that is today called ketchup (or catsup) in Western cultures is a
tomato-based sauce that is quite distinct from the Eastern ancestors of this
product. A sauce called ke-tiap was in use in China at least as early as the
seventeenth century, but the Chinese version of the sauce was made of pickled
fish, shellfish, and spices. The popularity of this Chinese sauce spread to
Singapore and Malaysia, where it was called kechap. The Indonesian sauce ketjab
derives its name from the same source as the Malaysian sauce but is made from
very different ingredients. The Indonesian ketjab is made of cooking black soy
beans, fermenting them, placing them in a salt brine for at least a week, cooking
the resulting solution further, and sweetening it heavily; this process results in a
dark, thick, and sweet variation of soy sauce.
(2) Early in the eighteenth century, sailors from the British navy came across
this exotic sauce on voyages to Malaysia and Singapore and brought samples of
it back to England on return voyages, English chefs tried to recreate the sauce but
were unable to do so exactly because key ingredients were unknown or
unavailable in England; chefs ended up substituting ingredients such as
mushrooms and walnuts in an attempt to recreate the special tastes of the original
Asian sauce. Variations of this sauce become quite the rage in eighteenth-century
England, appearing in a number of recipe books and featured as an exotic addition
to menus from the period.
(3) The English version did not contain tomatoes, and it was not until the end
of the eighteenth century that tomatoes became a main ingredient, in the ketchup
of the newly created United States. It is quite notable that tomatoes were added to
the sauce in that tomatoes had previously been considered quire dangerous to
health. The tomato had been cultivated by the Aztecs, who had called it tomatl;
however, early botanists had recognized that the tomato was a member of the
Solanacaea family, which does include a number of poisonous plants. The leaves
of the tomato plant are poisonous, though of course the fruit is not.
(4) Thomas Jefferson, who cultivated the tomato in his gardens at Monticello
and served dishes containing tomatoes at lavish feasts, often receives credit for
changing the reputation of the tomato. Soon after Jefferson had introduced the
tomato to American society, recipes combining the newly fashionable tomato with
the equally fashionable and exotic sauce known as ketchap began to appear. By
the middle of the nineteenth century, both the tomato and tomato ketchup were
staples of the American kitchen.
(5) Tomato ketchup, popular though it was, was quite time-consuming to
prepare. In 1876, the first mass-produced tomato ketchup, a product of German-
American Henry Heinz, went on sale and achieved immediate success. From
tomato ketchup, Heinz branched out into a number of other products, including
various sauces, pickles, and relishes. By 1890, his company had expanded to
include sixty- five different products but was in need of a marketing slogan. Heinz
settled on the slogan “57 Varieties” because he liked the way that the digits 5 and
7 looked in print, in spite of the fact that this slogan understated the number of
products that he had at the time.
These two examples of concept papers are actually examples of explicit concept
papers since they both explained directly what each concept means. Most concept
papers for research are explicit so that they are more direct to the point. There are
more examples of concept papers in different areas. You will read more of them in
the activities.
WHAT'S MORE
ACTIVITY 2. STUDY THESE
Directions: Read the two samples of concept papers. Study how they expound the
concept and the content as well. Write your answer in your notebook.
MONDAY. In mythology, the moon was the wife of the sun, and so had to
have her day in the week, which in Old English was Mōnandæg, or “moon day,” a
translation of the Latin luane dies, “day of the moon.” In the superstitious England of
those times people believed that the phases of the moon affected crops and
disturbed the potency of medicine, and they were sure too that bacon killed on the
old of the moon would shrivel in the pan.
TUESDAY In Norse mythology, there was a god named Tyr. A wolf spirit
called Fenrir was troubling the world and Tyr volunteered to bind him. He used a
chain made of strange substances, the footsteps of a cat, the beards of women, the
roots of stones, and the breath of fishes. Tyr put his hand in Fenrir’s mouth and bound
him, but his hand, in the process, was bitten off. In Old English the god’s name Tyr
appears as Tiw. He was really a Germanic deity, one very much like Mars, the Roman
god of war, and his name gave us the Old English word Tiwesdæg, “the day of Tiw,”
our Tuesday, which is a rendering of the Latin dies martis, “day of Mars.”
THURSDAY Thor was the strongest and bravest of the Norse deities, and
corresponded in the heavenly hierarchy to the Roman god Jupiter, who also handled
the lightning bolts. Thor, you see, was the god of thunder which he made with a
chariot drawn by he-goats across the sky. Thor owned a massive hammer which the
giant Thrym once stole from him and refused to give up unless Freya, the goddess
of love, world marry him. Thor dressed up in her clothes, wheedled the hammer from
Thrym, and then slugged his host. It was the name of this same Thor that formed the
Old English word thūresdæg, or Thursday, :the day of Thor,” which equals the Roman
dies jovis, or “day of Jupiter.”
FRIDAY In Old English, Friday was frīgedæg, the day of the Norse goddess
Frigg, wife of Woden and the goddess of marriage. She was the Norse counterpart
of the Roman goddess Venus, and her day, Friday, was like the Latin dies Veneris,
or “day of Venus.” Wednesday and Thursday had been named for her husband
Woden and her son Thor, so Friday was assigned to her as appeasement. The
Norsemen regarded Friday as their lucky day, but not so the Christians since the
Crucifixion took place on Friday.
From: Page 332 Word Origins and their Romantic (cited in EAPP Learners’ Material)
(3) Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and quickly
enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic
and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second,
bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third,
phytoplanktons feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl
mercury. Fourth, fish then eat the mercurycontaminated phytoplankton; the larger the
fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system
becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat
fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury.
(4) Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased
anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river,
lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean
Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better
sewage treatment methods, the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s.
however, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major
increase in the years prior.
(5) If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide at a
coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the
conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulphatereducing bacteria.
While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has
greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb
safely. This methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans
and other land-based wildlife.
(6) Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas
or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. At the same time,
most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves
up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many
other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein
in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat, the
fillet.
(8) One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the
world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of
wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through
cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts and the ice ages. However, it is this
very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution
is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed
from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution
spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate the impact of such
pollution.
Complete the table with the needed information based on the two samples:
Write your answer in your notebook.
Ways the
Kinds of Concept
Concept Paper Content concept was
Paper
explained
Days of the Week
Mercury Pollution
WHAT I HAVE
LEARNED
WHAT I CAN DO
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Rubric:
Criteria 4 3 2 1
Content and Content is Content is Content is less Content is not
Organization comprehensive, comprehensive, comprehensive, comprehensive,
accurate, and ideas accurate, and ideas and ideas are and ideas are not
are stated clearly are stated clearly stated not very clear and not well
and are well and are well clearly and are well supported.
supported. There supported. supported.
are also specific
ideas added.
Organization and Concepts of the Concepts of the Some concepts of Concepts of the
Structure paragraphs are paragraphs are the paragraphs are paragraphs are not
clear and easy to clear and easy to not clear and easy clear and not easy
follow. There is follow. to follow. to follow.
evidence of
outlining.
References References are References are References are References are not
cited correctly and cited correctly. cited correctly but cited correctly.
show evidence of there are only a
research. few.
Mechanics Rules of grammar, Rules of grammar, Rules of grammar, Rules of grammar,
usage, and usage, and usage, and usage, and
punctuation are punctuation are punctuation are not punctuation are not
followed; spelling followed; spelling all followed; followed; spelling is
is correct. There is correct. spelling is correct. incorrect.
are no typo-
graphical errors.
POST
Let us check how well you have mastered the lessons in this module.
Directions: Choose the letter of the best answer. Write your answers in your
notebook.
15. Which sample concept paper discussed the history of Filipino language?
A. Boondocks
B. Ketchup
C. Days of the Week
D. Mercury Pollution