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volume one:
Chapter Two:
“Starting Point”
*all characters of this story are original by jay choi, only characters of the original
heroes series belong to tim kring. Heroes story elements belong to tim kring and
writers *
Note: There have been some character name changes.
main Characters:
Vito Vincentino / “Nec” (“Nec” is the actual name for the alter ego V2)
Lynne Varrow
Ryan Visbeen
Jon Snack
“MHP”/Andy Reid (“MHP”=Mystery Hunter w/Piercings from Chapter 1)
Secondary Characters:
Amadeus
Todd Rowland
Julie Bentley
Minor Characters:
“Glace” Walker (After realizing “Floe” is indeed a girl's name, i changed it.)
Liza Dodson
Thug #1-2
Mugger #1-2
Announcer
Takashi “Oneshot” Nakashima
Competition Loser
Steen
Mark “Tree” Hook
Police Officer
New York
(Scene in New York, a civilian being chased, and falls)
Thug #1: We just want your cash and valuables!
Thug #2: Yeah, that's all we want! Just give it!
(The civilian trembles; a shadowy figure appears)
???: Now that's not a nice thing to do. You two should go to prison for that.
Thug #1: Hmm? Who are you? Ugh, never mind. Hey, let's just kill this goof and take his goods too.
(Thug #1 grabs a blue rock salt object and ignites his arm on fire, which ends up being a green colored
fire)
Thug #2: Yeah, he looks loaded, with that fancy logo on his shirt. Is that some sort of royal family
crest?
(??? appears from the shadows and is shown as a young man with piercings)
MHP: No, not a family crest.
Thug #1: So, you wanna give us your stuff? Or will we have to take it from you?
MHP: I was gonna ask you two the same. Well, something similar.
Thug #2: . . . Say what? You're gonna try and take our stolen goods?
MHP: No . . . I'm here for you two.
(Opening Credits)
Vito vincentino
Somewhere in america . . .
(See fields: nothing, then Vito teleports in. Camera viewing from a distance but clear enough to see
that Vito is walking and looking around. Then runs and teleports out)
Somewhere in Tokyo, Japan . . .
(Vito teleports in, looking around and smiles. Background: Loud, noisy, busy street. Daytime.
Camera blurs Vito out more to show visible background. Nec is shown in the background)
Nec: Having fun?
Vito: Oh hey! Didn't notice you were following!
Nec: I wasn't.
Vito: Isn't teleporting great?! I didn't know having powers is so awesome!
Nec: That's the thing kid, I don't have your nifty trick.
Vito: What are you talking about? You're the one who first used it, right? You took over, I woke up,
and bam! Freedom!
Nec: Whatever. No point in talking sense to you. A few hours ago, you were a hopeless, emotive loser
and now you've sprung up an entirely new personality thanks to your powers. Take a break from
popping in and out, and let's go check what that commotion is over there.
(Nec points to a large gathering in the street. People shouting and yelling. Vito notes a sign saying
“ForEigners wElcoMe” badly written)
(Camera shows close up of crowd yelling and pointing, a man yelling in Japanese holding papers in his
hands, and two men fighting. Vito pushes his way through the crowd and notices a man fly over him
and crash into boxes. Crowd goes wild, people distributing currency with one another. Camera zooms
through the crowd and shows a young man having his arm raised up by another man with a megaphone
shouting)
Announcer: (In Japanese) WINNER! Who will fight the Takashi Nakashima? Who will face into the
sight of the 'Oneshot?'
(Crowd grows more wild. Vito looks back to see the man who had flown into the crates and runs to
him)
Vito: Hey, buddy. You okay?
Competition Loser: (In Japanese) Mother?
Vito: Uh, I don't speak . . . whatever you guys speak.
Competition Loser: (Groans) Oh, gaijin. You should leave, the 'Oneshot' is very strong.
Vito: Gai-wha? Never mind. Is this some sort of competition?
Competition Loser: Yes, yes it is. For one to win the money prize, he must defeat the 'Oneshot.'
Vito: Put extra grub as the prize and it doesn't seem to different from prison.
Competition Loser: Excuse me?
Vito: Eh, nothing. What do you plan to do with the prize money? Drugs? Weapons? Girls?
Competition Loser: My mother, she is sick.
Vito: Oh . . . that was my second guess.
Competition Loser: Can gaijin not count? I believe that was the fourth.
Vito: . . . Yeah . . thanks.
(Camera blurs Vito and Competition Loser, to show Nec in the background)
Nec: This looks interesting. Vito! Enter this competition and let's win the prize money!
Vito: But it's in Japanese currency, I don't think we can use it back in America.
Nec: We'll buy something here!
Vito: We can't speak Japanese nor can we understand the currency. This man needs the money more
for his mother.
Nec: @$%! his mother!
Vito: Hey! (Looks at the Competition Loser, who seems unmoved) It's a good thing he didn't hear you.
Nec: He can't hear me. Remember?
Vito: Oh yeah . . haha. Well, we need to find someone to fight for him.
Nec: What's wrong with you?
Vito: I ain't fighting! (Turns to the Competition Loser) Sir, we will find someone to win the money for
you.
Competition Loser: Thank you kind sir, but who will fight for me? (In Japanese) And why does this
man refer to himself as 'we?' Does he read Spider Man comics? (In English) Excuse me sir, do you
read-
Announcer: (In Japanese) Who will win victory and receive the prize cash? Anyone? Don't be
cowards! (Camera shakes left and right at the crowd, then zooms in to Vito) (In English) You! Gaijin!
Come and fight, the 'Oneshot!'
Vito: Spider-Man? Not so much since I've been-
Announcer: (Shouting) Hey! Don't ignore me!
Oneshot: Don't worry yourself, old man. He looks weak, like all gaijin.
(Crowd laughs and points at Vito)
(Camera shows Vito's back, Vito turns around with a different face expression; Nec is in control)
Nec: WHO THE HELL ARE YA CALLIN' GAIJIN, TRASH!? Vito, I'm sorry but these guys are so
damn ugly that I just have to beat their asses!
Vito: (Standing where Nec was standing) Alright, Nec! You're gonna fight for the man and his mother
right?
(Nec walks up angrily towards the Announcer and Oneshot. Vito walks by him, giving him confidence
speeches and etc.)
Announcer: So the little American man steps up!
Nec: Little? Who's standing in the highchair?
Announcer: What!? Why you little-
Nec: Again with the little! You got self-esteem issues with your height or something?
(Announcer growls in terms not understood in any known language)
Oneshot: Like I said, old man, don't worry yourself. I will make short work of this.
(Nec remains silent)
Vito: Oh! Going all badass, tough guy mode! Nec is serious! I know you guys can't hear me now, but
he's going to go I-N-S-A-N-E insane, on your asses!
Nec: Alrighty, mister “Oneshot” (Nec's fingers imitate quotation marks), prepare to be destroyed! Vito!
Vito: Yes, Nec?
Nec: Good luck!
Vito: Huh?
Nec: Swap!
(Nec and Vito switch places, meaning Vito is now in control and Nec is now where Vito was standing)
Vito: What! Nec! What are you doing?!
Nec: Pay attention and do your best! I'll be watching way over there where I don't need to see your
blood spew!
Vito: Don't say that in such a sweet tone! Help me!
Nec: This was your idea, man!
Vito: No, this was your idea to-
Announcer: (In Japanese) Ladies and Gentlemen! We now have a challenger! The doomed gaijin!
(Crowd laughs and goes wild; Bets are being placed, people shouting insults to Vito)
Vito: Aheheh, I don't understand anything you people are saying, but I will accept it graciously. Erm,
domo arigato~
Oneshot: Alright, outsider. You know why they call me, the 'Oneshot?'
Vito: . . .
Oneshot: With one shot, I can do this.
(Oneshot points two fingers, with his thumb pointing upwards, at the ground next to Vito. Oneshot
arches his hand back and the ground cracks. Vito stares at the ground)
Vito: That's it?
(Ground bursts, rock fragments fly everywhere, and rock dust covers Vito)
Vito and Nec: HOLY SH-
(Crowd goes wild covering their voice.)
Lynne Varrow
Bentley Home
(Camera shows door from inside house. Doorbell rings, hand reaches at door, opens it, reveals Lynne)
Lynne: Hi Julie!
Julie: Hey Lynne! Let's head up to my room.
(Camera moves past door and wall and merges with wall from different scene to show that the camera
is now in a different room)
Julie: Parents are out right now.
Lynne: (Tosses bags onto bed) Oh okay. Work again?
Julie: Yeah, constructo-dad is out working on the metal bending and my mom is having a busy shift at
the restaurant.
Lynne: Haha, your dad has such a terrorist power!
Julie: I know! We always joke that if he ever went missing, he's in a plastic prison.
Lynne: Ahaha! That's funny!
(Fast forward scene of the two girls chatting and walking around the room. Gradually slows down to
where girls are lying down doing nothing)
Julie: . . . Lynne?
Lynne: Hmm?
Julie: . . . .
Lynne: Julie?
Julie: . . . what?
Lynne: What did you want?
Julie: . . . I dunno . . .
Lynne: . . . okay . .
Julie: . . . wanna go get ice cream?
Lynne: . . . m'kay.
(Scene shifts to the girls getting ice cream. They turn and Lynne points. Camera shifts to show Todd
waving at them)
Todd: Hey Lynne, hey Julie! Ice cream for me?
Lynne: Nope.
Todd: Aw, at least give me a bite.
Julie: Sure.
Todd: Thank you Julie. (Takes bite of ice cream) See. Lynne? You should be more like Julie here!
Having powers doesn't make you any more special than anyone.
Julie: Speak for yourself, Todd. (Chuckles) Who's the only one without powers here?
(Lynne also chuckles)
Todd: Wha-erm-well-you know what? The eclipse just awakens and empowers the ability within, so I
could manifest my powers even after the eclipse!
Lynne: Yeah, but I bet it will turn out something lame. Like power to control trash cans or something.
Julie: Hahaha, yeah or the ability to become exceptionally special in garbage disposing.
Todd: Oh whatever, those aren't even legitimate abilities! You guys are just making up crap!
(Camera switches scenes to show Liza Dodson, Glace Walker, and others watching the group)
Liza: What the hell are they laughing about?
Girl # 1: Who cares? They're losers.
Liza: Yeah, but you heard what happened. That bitch made me look stupid in front of everyone in
class. That freak Barrett smashed my face into the table! Teachers can't do that!
Glace: It was funny as hell though.
Liza: Shut up, Glace!
Guy # 1: So what do you want us to do?
Liza: Go teach them a lesson or something. But what's the perfect humiliation? It's the weekend.
Everyone is here because it's a hot day. We have to make this work!
Girl # 2: Hey, Liza! Your power is to break stuff apart right?
Liza: Disintegrate, yeah, what of it?
Girl # 2: If we really wanted to humiliate her, we could make her somehow publicly appear nude, if
you get what I'm saying.
Liza: Ah, I see where this is going. This is going to be good. Hey, boys, are you in?
Guy # 1 and # 2: Hell yeah!
Guy # 1: Nude girl in public, who wouldn't join!?
Guy # 2: She ain't half bad looking either! I'm really glad for my memorizing ability now, haha!
Liza: Alright, you two get the cameras out, and you two girls go and get people's attention.
(Guys and Girls leave)
Liza: Glace, wanna escort me to the victim?
Glace: Nope.
Liza: I don't think you heard me right, Glace, I said-
Glace: I heard you. (Glace, who is lying on a bench, tips his hood over and continues to nap)
Liza: Still amazes me how you can wear such clothing during such hot weather.
(Liza walks up to Glace, and puts her hand over Glace's hand)
Liza: Pleaaaaase? A cute girl is asking you to just walk with her~
Glace: I will break your arm.
Liza: Now that's no way to treat a woman.
Glace: Who are we talking about now?
(Liza's hand pulses quick light rings. Glace shouts and gets up)
Glace: What the hell!? Don't do that to me.
Liza: It's so cute when you think you're in control! Now come on! Let's go.
Glace: (sighs) Fine, whatever.
(Camera switches to Lynne and friends, who are talking and having fun. Liza and crowd step up)
Liza: Hey there, Lynette!
Lynne: Please tell me she's not talking to me.
Julie: Ugh, the thing is speaking.
Lynne: I'm just going to ignore her, nothing will make me look that direction.
Todd: Look, there's Glace.
Lynne: Really!? (Sees Glace and Liza) Crap. The bitch is there.
Julie: Woah, Lynne is getting hyped up haha. Ain't she Todd?
Todd: Haha, she's cute when she's angry.
Lynne: Shut up Todd, I don't enjoy your sarcasm.
Todd: I wasn't being-
Lynne: I said shut up.
(Todd and Julie exchange looks. Todd seems discouraged, Julie smirks)
Lynne: Okay, what is it this time Liza? (Turns around) And what's with the crowd of people?
Liza: Oh nothing, nothing. How are you doing? (Walks closer to Lynne, Camera behind Liza showing
hand's pulsing bright)
Lynne: Okay seriously, what do you want?
(Liza looks around, seeing the cameras and crowd ready)
Liza: Just wanted to show everyone something.
Lynne: Show them what?
Liza: This.
(Liza puts one hand on Lynne's shoulder and the other on her hip. Her clothes begin to disintegrate.
Crowd laughs and people start recording on their cameras. Julie runs out to cover Lynne. Todd stares
in astonishment, then goes out to help. Lynne begins to cry, shuts her eyes tight, and opens them to
discover she froze time. She leaves and runs)
Vito vincentino
(Vito is running around frantically as explosions occur behind him. The crowd laughs and Oneshot is
enjoying himself)
Announcer: Yes! As expected by the Oneshot! Now, finish him off!
Competition Loser: He's not going to make it . . . I'm sorry, mother.
(Vito sees Competition Loser, and then stops running. The crowd laughs at Vito and the Competition
Loser, as the Announcer takes the money used by the Competition Loser as a betting)
Oneshot: Hmm? The outsider decides to stop? Has he given up?
(Crowd laughs)
Vito: Enough of these silly games. Let's end this.
Oneshot: Oh! I admire your spirit, but that won't save you from being blown to bits.
Announcer: (In Japanese) Grab your umbrellas everyone, a new blood storm is approaching!
(Crowd all open up umbrellas that are all partially covered in blood)
Oneshot: Sayonara, gaijin!
(Oneshot pulls his hand up, points at Vito, and pulls his fingers up. An explosion occurs. The dust
clears up, and everyone notices that Vito is gone, but there is no blood)
Announcer: Wha-what? Nakashima, what are you doing? Where's the gore everyone paid for!?
Oneshot: I-I don't know.
(Crowd shouts in awe and points. Oneshot and Announcer turn around to see Vito)
Oneshot: !?
Vito: My turn.
Oneshot: (Points at Vito) I won't let you! (Oneshot fires)
(Vito puts his hands out and the blast impacts behind Vito)
Oneshot and Announcer: What!?
(Oneshot freaks out and fires a bunch of his 'shatter blasts' at Vito. Vito in return jumps and teleports
after each shot)
Oneshot: A teleporter, huh?! That won't save you from, Oneshot!
(Vito continually dodges each shot with a teleport and gradually gets closer to Oneshot. He grabs
Oneshot and teleports. Montage of Vito teleporting Oneshot around the world, and eventually back to
Japan where Vito repeatedly teleports Oneshot into the ground, thus visually looking like the street is
exploding one section at a time. Once reaching the initial battle grounds, Vito allows Oneshot to fly
into crates)
(The crowd is silent and the Announcer is shocked)
Announcer: Hey, hey, Nakashima, wake up. You're Oneshot, remember? You can't let this rookie beat
you, so get up! Hey! Takashi! Get up! This is not a joke!
Vito: Don't worry, he's not dead. Now, give me the prize money.
Announcer: Ah! Uh . . .
(Oneshot rises from the crates)
Oneshot: I'm not done with you, gaijin!
Vito: Stop this, I beat you.
Oneshot: I don't care, I am Oneshot! I'm number one! (He aims at Vito) This will surely blow you to
bits! You can't dodge this, or everyone behind you will die! Nor can you block it like you did at first!
I don't know how you did that, but it doesn't matter! I will kill you!
(Vito looks behind and sees Nec. Nec shrugs and walks away)
Vito: I'm asking you one last time, please stop.
Oneshot: Screw you!
(Oneshot fires his shot, and Vito puts both his hands straight out. An invisible force seems to push his
whole body back, but Vito manages to disperse the shot, causing ripples in the air)
Oneshot: . . . What did you do!? That should have killed you all!
Vito: I . . teleported it? I'm guessing.
Oneshot: Don't give me such bullcrap! I will – hey! What are you doing? Don't ignore me!
(Vito walks up to a rock from the remains of an explosion. He picks it up, lifts it high, and chucks it at
the ground. Before letting it go, it vanishes, and reappears above Oneshot's head, going at its same
momentum, knocking him out)
(Vito walks up to the Announcer, grabs the money and hands it to the Competition Loser. The crowd
goes wild cheering on Vito)
Competition Loser: Thank you, honorable stranger! I will never forget this!
Vito: Come on, Nec. Let's roll.
Nec: That's a real sweet technique you've just learned. Didn't think teleporters could do that. I would
have used that to teleport the guy's head deep into the Sahara or something.
Vito: You're messed up haha.
Nec: I try my best. Come on, jump us out here.
Vito: Okay.
(Vito grabs Nec, and vanishes. Vito and Nec arrive in an unknown place)
Vito: Nec . .
Nec: Vito . . . what were you thinking . .
Vito: I don't know . . .
Vito vincentino
San Quentin State Prison, California
Prison Cell
Nec: Zap us out here, fast!
Vito: Okay, okay . . . it's not working!
Nec: I will kill you! Make it work!
(Vito attempts to teleport again, but it fails. A weird sound and bright light emerges from Vito and it
vanishes at its peak)
Nec: What was that!?
Vito: I don't know! But I can't teleport anymore!
Nec: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!?!?!
Lynne Varrow
(Lynne is in new attire, crying in front of the Bentley home. Lynne gets a text saying: 'Todd n I will
leave U alone. Tell me when U R better. Parents gone all night. - Julie')
(Lynne shuts the phone and continues to cry. Someone approaches and lies down next to her)
Lynne: I don't care who you are, just leave me alone.
Glace: Can't sleep anywhere that Liza freak is.
(Lynne looks up and sees Glace. She clears herself up by wiping her face and attempts to look more
appropriate)
Lynne: Oh . . hey, Glace. What are you-
Glace: (still lying down) Just as I said, can't sleep anywhere that Liza is.
Lynne: . . .
Glace: I'm sorry.
Lynne: For what?
Glace: For letting that bitch do this to you.
Lynne: It's not your fault.
Glace: But I could have done something about it.
Lynne: . . . thanks.
Glace: I'm going to make it up to you.
Lynne: How so?
Glace: Just wait till tomorrow. You'll see.
(Camera moves to a new scene, which is the next day)
(Lynne is walking with Julie and Todd. People are all staring and laughing. They eventually run into
Liza)
Liza: Oh, poor Lynne! I heard what happened to you yesterday! I'm so sorry.
Julie: Cut the crap, Liza, and apologize to Lynne!
Liza: I already said I'm sorry, besides, I don't think apologizing will bring back her dignity. (Crowd
watching laughs)
Julie: Don't listen to them, Lynne.
Todd: Hey, stop being a total-
(Liza holds her hand out and it lights up)
Todd: real mean jerk, and just leave her alone.
Lynne: (Sarcastically) Thanks for the help, Todd.
Julie: He tried his best Lynne, he just wanted to help.
(Glace appears behind Lynne and puts his hands on her shoulders)
Lynne: Glace?
Glace: Like I said, I'm going to make it up for you.
Liza: Glace, honey, stop being by that filth, and come over here!
Glace: Yes, Liza.
(Glace walks towards Liza and hugs her. Then hugs her more passionately with one hand by her back
and the other by her butt)
Liza: Ooo~ Glace, I see you're into public display affection.
Todd: I don't see how that guy is helping.
Lynne: . . .
Glace: No, Liza. This is for Lynne.
Liza: What?
(Glace freezes Liza's clothes, causing her unable to move)
Liza: What is this!?
(Crowd laughs)
Lynne: Glace can . . freeze things?
(Liza generates her powers, causing the ice to shatter, but along with her frozen clothes. Liza doesn't
notice until people start pointing and pulling out cameras and phones)
Liza: Glace! Come back here! Be a gentlemen and cover me with your coat or something!
Glace: Oh Liza, it's so cute when you think you're in control.
(Glace walks to Lynne and signals to her and her friends to leave and they all leave together)
New York
(Thugs that fought the mysterious pierced hunter are tied up)
Thug # 1: What was that power!? I've never seen crazy things like that before!
Thug # 2: Who are you!?
Andy: Call me, Andy Reid. A member of the Army of Seven.
To Be Continued . . .