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Attachanannotatedbibliography(AB)thatisdividedbetweenprimaryandsecondarysources.
SubmittwocopiesoftheSSandABatthecompetition.Pleasetype.
Studentname(s):JessicaTello
Title:HowdidConfuciusleadershipchangethechineseCivilService.?
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[Chicago/Illinois]History
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1.THESISSTATEMENT
Presenttheprojectsargumentorinterpretationintwosentences.Ifyouareusing
theNHDtheme,youmightwanttomakeitevidentinyourthesisstatement.
ThephilosopherConfuciusmadeahugeimpactonChina,withhisuniqueteachings,heinfluenced
manysubjectsincludinggovernmentissues.Ifitwasn'tforConfucius,peopleoflowerclasswouldn't
beabletoproofthattheyarecapableofbeingsuccessfulintheChineseCivilService,Confucius'
teachingshavebecomesoadmirablethattheybecameagreatpartofthetest,Chinesecivilservice
examination,peoplehavetotaketojointheCivilserviceorthegovernmentinChina.
2.SUMMARYOFPROJECT
Brieflyexplainyourprojectanditsconclusion.Include:Howandwhydidchange
happenandwhatwastheimpact?Whyisithistoricallysignificant?Whathistorical
meaningorimportancecanwelearnfromyourfindings?
MyprojectisonhowConfuciuschangedtheChinesecivilservice.Itmadeabigimpactbecauseinold
timesthecivilservicedidntallowjustanyoneinchinatotaketheexam.Confuciuschangedthis,he
madetheexaminationbetter,heletanyonetaketheexam.Tohim,youneededtoprovehowgood
youwere.Withoutthis,theChinesecivilserviceexaminationprobablywouldntlastedthislong.We
canlearnthatfromthisthatwithgreateffort,onecanreachwhatonewantsbecauseitdoesntmatter
whereonecamefrombutonedoestoprovetheyareworthyofit.
3.RequiredforprojectsusingtheNationalHistoryDaythemeonly.
ExplainhowthisprojectintegratestheNHDthemeLeadership&Legacyin
[Chicago/Illinois]Historyintoitsargument.
ThisprojectintegratestheLeadershipandlegacythemebecauseinhere,onereadsabouthowhis
leadershipgavehimalegacy.Hislegacymademanydifferentchangesinthechineseworld.Here
wetalkabouthowhislegacyhelpedtochangetheChinesecivilservice.
4.PROCESS
Whathistoricalquestiondidyoustartoffwithandhowdiditchangeonceyoubegan
doingyourresearch?
IiiiiIstartedwiththequestionHowdidConfuciuschangethecivilserviceways?butlaterchangedit
becauseitwastoobroad.Ichangeditbeforestartingresearchthough.EvenaftertheresearchIdidnt
changeit.
Whatkindsofsourcesdidyouuseasevidencetodevelopyourargument(forexample,
letters,photographs,governmentdocuments,interviews,etc.)
Thesourcesiusedthemostwerephotographsordrawingsfromthattime.
Selectonepieceofevidencethatyouusedandexplainhowitinfluencedyourargument.
jOnepieceofevidenceiusedwasapictureofthecellswherethecandidatewouldtaketheexam.
Thisonepicturehelpedmeprovehowserioustheexaminationwas.Thatcheatingwassimplynota
goodthingtodo,theymadeitimpossibletocheat.
Listlibraries(otherthanschool),museums,andotherinstitutionsthatyouvisitedtodo
yourresearch.
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