Topic: You Shouldnt Say I DO Without Living Together First

1. Introduction (paragraph 1)
A. Hook: In Korea, one of the most serious social issues is low marriage rate.
B. Connecting information: Statistics from OECD shows declining rates of
marriage is accompanied by increase in crude divorce rate.
2. Thesis statement: There are clear significant reasons as to why cohabitation
before marriage makes better married life.
3. Body
A. Paragraph 2 (first cause or effect) topic sentence: You can learn about each
other better by living together before marriage. Living together is the ultimate
test and is also known as a trial marriage. Realizing living together is not always
going to be fun makes you shape better marriage life. It is important to learn how
to balance partners priorities and values before putting marriage on the table.
Cohabitation prior to marriage helps couples form a strong bond by spending
their time talking more about their future and relationship.
B. Paragraph 3 (second cause or effect) topic sentence: Trial marriage help
you save money, time, and effort to officially get married. Delaying marriage may
cause breakups of couples. Cohabitation is a perfect idea for couples who like to
save more money by lowering their expenses split together in one household.
This means that if you do have plans to be together long term, living together will
only help you to accomplish your goals at a faster pace. When you have marriage
in mind, cohabiting is often the best financial decision you can make.
C. Paragraph 4 (third cause or effect) topic sentence: Moving in with the lover
is all about private life and freedom of the individual.
D. Paragraph 5 (Conclusion): As stated above paragraphs, it is better off living
together before marriage for the sake of couples happy marriage life goal.