ROSTI HAYATI

The Relationship of Knowledge and Attitude of Pregnant Women toward Immunization

in the area of Health Center Perawang in 2015.
1. (F) This study aims to determine .......................
(T) This study was aimed to determine .............................
Reason: it should use past tense because its happen in the past
2. (F) type of research is quantitative analytic design with cross sectional approach, the
number of respondents was 95 people.
(T) The type of this research was quantitative analytic design with cross sectional
approach, the number of respondent was 95 people.
Reason: Use past tense to explain about the past, so that (is) became (was).
3. (F) The sampling technique performed by accidental sampling and data collection is done
by using a questionnaire.
(T) The sample was taken by using accidental sampling technique and the data collection
was done by using a questionnaire.
Reasons: it more appropiate if make it in passive sentences, so that it use past perfect
tense.
4. (F) The result of this study indicate that there is a relationship between knowledge of the
TT immunization is................................and there is relationship attitudes
towards.....................
(T) The result of this study indicated that there was a relationship of knowledge of the TT
imunization which p,Value=......... , and the value of OR............. and there was a
relationship of attitudes towards immunization TT which...........................
Reason: Because the diagram or presentation of the results are not revealed, so the
description of the result is in past form
5. (F) The conclussion of this study is a significant relationship between knowledge and
attitudes toward immunization TT.
(T) It can be concluded that there is a significant relationship between knowledge and
attitudes toward immunization TT.
Reason: the first sentence is not really clear, so the second sentence to make the sentence
more simple and clear.
6. (F) therefore, ............................................................................can increase their knowledge
and insight,especially about TT immunization.
(T) Therefore.............................................................so that it can increase their knowledge
and insight, especially abou TT immunization

Reason: refer to Indonesian version this sentence is combination of two sentences, so it

needs to use conjunction, in this case is so that. The use of it is to mention the noun of
the previous sentence (add information about........)
7. (F) and is expected to grasp and understand.............................
(T) and expected to .....................................
Reason: remove is because it doesnt need to write it, because it still in the same
sentences and the subject have mentioned in the previous sentences.