Dane Nielsen, Emily Howell and Brandon-Lee Robinson

LO5 Feedback. 10/2/17

Current Grade for LO5: Merit

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
You have
may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
elements improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
of
work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.
Distinction
in this
Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
advertisement. However, you need to show you have used the client feedback to
make changed to the advertisement to meet this criteria, discuss exactly what
you are going to do as a result of this feedback and how the advert will develop.
I would also advise that you take my feedback on board and re-film some of the
advert (the last shot as it is out of focus). Finally, improve the last screen,
perhaps have the logo fade in over footage at the end, so it isnt as abrupt.
Some good work here, you have just missed a few details for that higher grade.

The resubmission deadline is: 31/03/2017