Aiden Timmings

LO5 Feedback. 10/2/17

Current Grade for LO5: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
This is
may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
bordering improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
on a Merit
work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.
Grade.
However,
this cannot Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
be given Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
as, you clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
need to
explain how you have used the client feedback to make changed to the
advertisement to meet this criteria and make the ending clearer. To improve to a
Distinction grade you will need re-film some of your shots and make it a lot
clearer about the dangers of energy drinks. Possibly add more shots of the main
character relying on them over a longer period.

The resubmission deadline is: 31/03/2017