Professional Documents
Culture Documents
help supervisors and managers write safe and helpful performance reviews.
Your Task. Analyze the problematic e-mail. List at least five weaknesses. Pay special
attention to its tone. Your instructor may ask you to revise the e-mail so that it reflects some
of the writing techniques you learned in this chapter. How can you make this e-mail more
courteous, positive, concise, precise, and audience centered? Your instructor may ask you to
revise this message as a collaboration project using Google Docs or Word’s Track Changes
and Comment features.
All,
Although it pains me to do this, I must warn you all that recently one of our
employees filed a lawsuit against the company because of comments a supervisor
made during a performance evaluation. This did not have to happen. Look, people,
you must be smarter!
Because none of you are dense, here are suggestions you must share with all
supervisors and managers regarding companywide evaluations:
It goes without saying that you cannot accurately evaluate an employee’s
performance unless you have a system to measure that performance. That’s
why the obvious very first step is developing performance standards and goals
for each employee. To be effective, these standards and goals must be shared
with the employee. However, don’t do it orally. Do it in writing.
I hope that you are doing well. Regrettably, I must inform you of a recent
occurrence that has compelled me to address a crucial matter regarding our
performance evaluation procedures. I bring to your attention with a sorrowful
heart that one of our employees has initiated legal action against the company in
response to comments made by a supervisor during a performance review. This
regrettable situation could have been avoided, and it is imperative that we take
preventative measures in the future to prevent similar occurrences. In the future,
let us all aspire for a more prudent approach.
I encourage each of you to consider the following suggestions and ensure that
the employees are communicated to all supervisors and administrators within the
organization, as they pertain to our organization-wide evaluation procedure:
Let us proceed with caution and dedication to these guidelines. By doing so, we
can ensure a more streamlined, secure evaluation procedure that upholds our
values and fosters a harmonious workplace.
Best regards,
Dear Everyone,
It is with regret that I must bring this matter to your attention, but I must inform
you of a recent development. One of our employees has filed a lawsuit against the
company in response to comments made by a supervisor during a performance
review. This circumstance could have been completely avoided. It is imperative that
we act with increased caution.
Given my confidence in your abilities and comprehension, I would like to make the
following suggestions regarding companywide evaluations that should be shared
with all supervisory and managerial levels:
Sincere regards,