M E M O RAN D U M

TO: Riley Mosby

Student Writer, Freshman Portfolio Writing

THROUGH: Shayla Atkins, M.A.

Lecturer, Department of English

FROM: Sydne Barard

Student Reviewer, Department of English

DATE: January 16, 2017

SUBJECT: First Essay Reviewers Comments

I write to address your essay Oedipus Essay that you submitted on January 14. There were
several areas that I noted while reading the essay that deserve varying levels of attention.

This was a great essay. Very well written and organized, the essay made valid points that were
easy to follow. I honestly have no further critique of the essay. You took care of any
organizational issues that there were and better explained vague plot lines for readers who may
not have read the book.

The paper is very structured, precise, and detailed. I do not know what else to tell you to improve
on. This would most definitely receive a 100% in my gradebook.