WRITING SKILLS DISCUSSION ESSAYS

COMMON MISTAKES

Identify the mistake and rewrite the sentence.

Type of Incorrect sentence Correct sentence

mistake
Phr. If teachers put more homework to students it will do that students
dont do their homework.
G If students dont want to study they wont study never.
Phr. Schools have change a lot since a few years ago.
V Strict rules may convert schools in prisons.
V It is true that actually it is very difficult to get a job.
G Punishments usually are impractical and useless.
V Not everyone wants a career.
G Some students want to work instead of study.
V Some students are problematic and .
Syntax If every time that a students breaks a rule were punished
G With more strict rules and punishments that now
G With punishments students will cant be interesting

Teachers put pressure on students

Students are forced to follow the rules
Harsher punishments may solve violence at schools
These measures may turn schools into prisons
Some schools apply strong punishments

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