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Audience:
4th Grade
Visual: Visual learners will benefit from the example paragraphs as well as all of the writing
done on the board. They will also benefit from the venn diagram to help them organize their
thoughts.
Auditory: Auditory learners will benefit from me, the teacher, reading the example paragraphs
aloud. They will also benefit from reading their own paragraphs aloud to their classmates.
Finally, they will also benefit from group discussion and the things on the board written aloud.
Kinesthetic: Kinesthetic learners will benefit from getting up and writing on the venn diagram on
the board. They will also benefit from getting out of their seats and working in partners to
Differentiation:
I plan to let the students pick their own groups so they can organize themselves by shared
interests or ability when improving their papers. I also plan to assess the students learnings by
using formative assessments to keep up with how they are doing. Finally, I plan to vary the ways
I teach the students information (personal work, group work, class discussion, lecture, etc.) so I
can fit the variety of learning styles that are within my classroom.
Overhead
Class laptops
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.1
Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.1.D
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.5
With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by
planning, revising, and editing. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of
3-5.RI.1. identify search strategies for locating information with support from teachers or library
media specialists.
3-5.RI.2. use digital tools to find, organize, analyze, synthesize, and evaluate information.
Objectives:
I can think of something I am passionate about and try to persuade others to agree or comply.
Introduction:
Okay class! Today we are going to talk about opinion, or persuasive writing. To start us out and
get our brains working, we are going to do a quick write. Make a list of things you feel strongly
about. It can be things you like, hate, annoy you, youre passionate about, or anything else you
can think of that really gets you going. Put at least five things and explain what it is about them
that makes you feel so strong about it. The students will then do the quick write.
1. Okay class! Today we are going to talk about opinion, or persuasive writing. To start us
out and get our brains working, we are going to do a quick write. Make a list of things you feel
strongly about. It can be things you like, hate, annoy you, youre passionate about, or anything
else you can think of that really gets you going. Put at least five things and explain what it is
about them that makes you feel so strong about it. When you are finished, think about which you
would like to write about. The students will then do the quick write.
(10 minutes)
2. Okay, now lets go around the room and everybody can share their list. You can share
everything you have, or just the things you feel comfortable sharing. I will go around the room
(10 minutes)
3. Okay, that quickwrite was the beginning of the prewrite step of the writing process.
Please listen closely to the lesson today, tomorrow. The day after tomorrow we will review what
we have learned and then take a test. I will write out on the board the steps of the writing
process. I will then write Prewrite, Writing, Revision, Editing, and Publishing on the board.
Next, I will explain each step. Prewriting is where you plan what you will write about. Writing
is where you actually write about what you planned. Revising is where you reread what you
wrote and you can add, remove, move, or substitute parts of your paper. Editing is where you fix
grammar issues and spelling issues. Publishing is where you make your final copy. I will then
write next to each step a few keywords about what you do during that step.
(10 minutes)
4. Today we are going to work on writing a mini opinion/ persuasive piece and using the
writing process with it. Persuasive or opinion pieces are when you are trying to convince an
audience to agree with your opinion. For example, you could write a paper about why ballet is
the best sport. Another example would be why your parents should raise your allowance. It is
important to know who your audience will be. Who are you trying to persuade? If you were
writing about why your parents should raise your allowance, your audience would probably be
your parents. If you are writing about why ballet is the best sport, your audience may be a person
(2 minutes)
5. I would like to show you all an example of a persuasive or opinion piece. I will then
bring up on the overhead an example of a persuasive or opinion piece. Next, I will read it aloud
(5 minutes)
6. Now it is your turn. Pick a topic from your quick write and write a persuasive/opinion
paragraph. I would like it to be four to seven sentences. Skip every other line so you can make
changes later. You should start out with a topic sentence that explains what your opinion is. You
should then go on to support it. Then do a sentence to conclude your idea. After you are done,
give it a title. Make sure to write your name and date in the right hand corner of the paper. I will
give you all twenty minutes to write. Please do your best and come to me with any questions. Try
to keep it quiet to respect those who are writing around you. The students will then work on
their pieces. As the teacher, I will go around and see what each child is writing to make sure they
(25 minutes)
7. Okay everybody, you have just completed the writing step of the writing process. We
are going to now move on to the revising stage where you will reread what you wrote and add,
remove, move, or substitute parts of your paragraph. I would like you to do this in partners. Read
your paragraphs to one another then work together to make these improvements. Feel free to
cross out, erase, and write in the margins to make these corrections. You can pick your own
partners and you can sit anywhere in the room but I dont want the noise level too loud. I will
give you all twenty minutes to do this. The students will then find their partners and a place in
(25 minutes)
8. Okay everybody please return to your seats. We are now going to edit our persuasive/
opinion pieces. You may grab a laptop to search the spelling of any words you are unsure if you
spelt wrong. You may also look up any grammatical rules that you may have done incorrectly.
Feel free to ask those around you for help, and I will come around and help you all as well. Lets
see how much we can get done in fifteen minutes. The students will then grab laptops and work
on editing their papers with the help of technology and those around them.
(20 minutes)
9. You have all done a great job working on these, and I have heard some very great
papers. Please turn in your papers to the bin on my desk and as long as you have something to
turn in and I can see you have made changes, you will get full credit. I hope you all have learned
the aspects of a persuasive/opinion paper and how to use the writing process. Since you all have
worked so hard, you may take a ten minute break. Talk to one another, get a drink, or use the
(10 minutes)
Closure:
You have all done a great job working on these, and I have heard some very great papers.
Please turn in your papers to the bin on my desk and as long as you have something to turn in
and I can see you have made changes, you will get full credit. I hope you all have learned the
aspects of a persuasive/opinion paper and how to use the writing process. Since you all have
worked so hard, you may take a ten minute break. Talk to one another, get a drink, or use the
Formative Assessment:
The students will turn in what they have worked on during the lesson. As long as they have a
paragraph written and have shown work of improvement, they will get full credit. I will add
Materials:
Overhead
Class laptops
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.3
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique,
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.5
With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by
planning, revising, and editing. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of
3-5.RI.1. identify search strategies for locating information with support from teachers or library
media specialists.
3-5.RI.2. use digital tools to find, organize, analyze, synthesize, and evaluate information.
Objectives:
Introduction:
Hello everybody! Yesterday we talked about opinion or persuasive writing. Today we are going
to talk about narrative writing. Similar to yesterday, we are going to start out with a quick write
to get your brains going and ready for what we will do next. I want you to make a list of the five
best days of your life. Then, do a quick summary or explanation of what made those days so
great. When you are finished, think about which you would like to write about.
are going to talk about narrative writing. Similar to yesterday, we are going to start out with a
quick write to get your brains going and ready for what we will do next. I want you to make a list
of the five best days of your life. Then, do a quick summary or explanation of what made those
days so great. When you are finished, think about which you would like to write about. The
(10 minutes)
2. Okay, now lets go around the room and everybody can share what they wrote. You can
share everything you have, or just the things you feel comfortable sharing. I will go around the
(10 minutes)
3. Okay, that quickwrite was the beginning of the prewrite step of the writing process.
Dont forget, tomorrow we are going to have a test over what we learned yesterday and today.
We still have the steps of the writing process written on the board. Lets review it now. The order
goes: Prewrite, Writing, Revision, Editing, and Publishing on the board. Prewriting is where you
plan what you will write about. Writing is where you actually write about what you planned.
Revising is where you reread what you wrote and you can add, remove, move, or substitute parts
of your paper. Editing is where you fix grammar issues and spelling issues. Publishing is where
(10 minutes)
4. Today we are going to work on writing a mini narrative piece and using the writing
process with it. Narrative pieces have a clear sequence of events that happened over time. It can
be over a period of a day, or a period of a couple years. There can be a narrator and characters,
but often the narrator is the main character. Narrative pieces tell a story and include a plot,
setting, characters, conflict, and resolution. For example, you could write a paper about why your
eighth birthday was the best birthday you ever had. You would start out probably when you
woke up and the sequence of events of your whole day. Another example would be about the
time you got stuck on the zip line at the zoo. What happened first, second, third, and last? There
are different types of narratives but today we are going to be writing personal narratives which is
a true story told in first person. First person means using words such as I, me, us, we. It will be a
(4 minutes)
5. I would like to show you all an example of a narrative piece. I will then bring up on the
overhead an example of a persuasive or opinion piece. Next, I will read it aloud to the class. (see
attachment)
(5 minutes)
6. Now it is your turn. Just like yesterday, pick a topic from your quick write and write a
narrative paragraph. I would like it to be four to seven sentences. Skip every other line so you
can make changes later. You should start out with a time frame and talk about what happened in
order. Since you are only writing a paragraph, it may be easier to write within a smaller time
frame, like one day. Then do a sentence to conclude your story. After you are done, give it a title.
Make sure to write your name and date in the right hand corner of the paper. I will give you all
twenty minutes to write. Please do your best and come to me with any questions. Try to keep it
quiet to respect those who are writing around you. The students will then work on their pieces.
As the teacher, I will go around and see what each child is writing to make sure they are on the
(25 minutes)
7. Okay everybody, you have just completed the writing step of the writing process. We
are going to now move on to the revising stage where you will reread what you wrote and add,
remove, move, or substitute parts of your paragraph. I would like you to do this in partners like
you did yesterday. Pick a different partner than you had yesterday so you can get a new type of
feedback. Read your paragraphs to one another then work together to make these improvements.
Feel free to cross out, erase, and write in the margins to make these corrections. You can pick
your own partners again and you can sit anywhere in the room but dont let it get too loud in here
so those around you can concentrate. I will give you all twenty minutes to do this. The students
will then find their partners and a place in the room and work on revising their paragraphs.
(25 minutes)
8. Alright class please return to your seats. We are now going to edit our narrative pieces.
You may grab a laptop to search the spelling of any words you are unsure if you spelt wrong.
You may also look up any grammatical rules that you may have done incorrectly. Keep in mind
the fixes you made yesterday so you dont have to look up the same things twice if possible. You
can ask those around you for help, and I will come around and help you all as well. Lets try to
get this done in fifteen minutes. The students will then grab laptops and work on editing their
(20 minutes)
9. You have all done a great job working on these papers the last two days, and I have
heard some very great papers. Please turn in your papers to the bin on my desk and as long as
you have something to turn in and I can see you have made changes, you will get full credit. I
hope you all have learned the aspects of a narrative paper and how to use the writing process.
Lets take a ten minute break like we did yesterday because you all worked so hard. Talk to one
another, get a drink, or use the bathroom if you need to, then we will move on to something
else.
(10 minutes)
Closure:
You have all done a great job working on these papers the last two days, and I have heard some
very great papers. Please turn in your papers to the bin on my desk and as long as you have
something to turn in and I can see you have made changes, you will get full credit. I hope you all
have learned the aspects of a narrative paper and how to use the writing process. Lets take a ten
minute break like we did yesterday because you all worked so hard. Talk to one another, get a
drink, or use the bathroom if you need to, then we will move on to something else.
Formative Assessment:
The students will turn in what they have worked on during the lesson. As long as they have a
paragraph written and have shown work of improvement, they will get full credit. I will add
Materials:
Class laptops
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.7
Conduct short research projects that build knowledge through investigation of different aspects
of a topic.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.8
Recall relevant information from experiences or gather relevant information from print and
digital sources; take notes and categorize information, and provide a list of sources.
3-5.RI.1. identify search strategies for locating information with support from teachers or library
media specialists.
3-5.RI.2. use digital tools to find, organize, analyze, synthesize, and evaluate information.
Objectives:
Introduction:
Hi class. Two days ago we talked about opinion or persuasive writing and yesterday we talked
about narrative writing. We are going to do a quick write again today. Write a few sentences
about what you remember about opinion/persuasive writing. Then, write a few sentences about
1. Hi class. Two days ago we talked about opinion or persuasive writing and yesterday we
talked about narrative writing. We are going to do a quick write again today. Write a few
sentences about what you remember about opinion/persuasive writing. Then, write a few
(10 minutes)
2. Now I would like everybody to grab a laptop and login to their school account. The
students will then grab laptops and logon. While the students are doing this, I will pass out a
3. I want you all to work individually to fill out these worksheets I just passed out. On the
left side write, opinion/persuasive writing and on the right side write, narrative writing. Use
the internet to find at least three things that making a piece of writing an opinion/persuasive
writing. Then do the same for narrative writing. Finally, try to find three things that they have in
common. I will give you all fifteen minutes to do this. While the students are doing this, I will
draw a large venn diagram on the whiteboard and label it the same as their worksheets are.
4. Okay, finish up your last sentence. I would like to make a venn diagram of what you all
have found up on the board. Who would like to come write on thing that makes
opinion/persuasive writing unique? The students will raise their hands and I will pick one
student. Now, who would like to come write one thing that makes narrative writing unique?
The students will again raise their hands and I will pick another student to come up and write on
the board. Who would like to come write on the board something they have that is similar?
The students will raise their hands and I will pick a third student to come up and write on the
board. I will continue this process until the venn diagram is complete or until I have no more
volunteers.
(10 minutes)
5. Please write your name on your venn diagram. As long as you have at least three things
written in each section, you will get full credit for working on it. Please come up and turn it in in
(3 minutes)
6. I would like you all to review what we have written on the board, and think about what
we worked on the last two days. I will give you all five minutes. Then, I will erase it and you will
all take your test. Make sure to not only look over the venn diagram we made, but also review
(5 minutes)
7. After the five minutes is up, I will erase what is on the board and pass out the test. Dont
forget to write your name. No talking until everybody has finished their test. When you are
finished, please turn in your test on my desk and you may read quietly until everybody is done.
Closure:
After all the students are done with the test I will ask them for their thoughts. What did you all
think about using the writing process? What did you like and not like about it? I will allow
students to respond. Raise your hand if you enjoyed opinion/persuasive writing more. Let
students raise their hand. Raise your hand if you enjoyed narrative writing more.
Formative Assessment:
The students will turn in their venn diagram. As long as they have three things listed under each
section, they will get full credit. I will add comments/corrections for anything that is wrong or
good.
Name:
Date:
2. What is the first step in the writing process called? How did we do this
first step? (4 points)
Answer Key:
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2. Prewrite. We did this by doing quick writes, sharing out, then picking our favorite idea
from our quick write.
3. Answers will vary. Possibilities may entail: Helpful to fix spelling errors or grammatical
errors. Helpful to find unknown information.
4. Answers will vary. Possibilities may entail: Couldnt find the information we needed.
Issues logging in. The internet can be unsafe for reasons such as predators. I prefer to use
other sources to find information, such as books.
5. Answers will vary. Possibilities may entail: Better time management. Better use of
resources. Picking a topic that is more interesting to the writer.
6. Answers will vary. Possibilities may entail: Tells a story. Has a clear sequence of events.
Includes plot, setting, characters, conflict, and a resolution. Introduction, body,
conclusion.
7. Answers will vary. Possibilities may entail: Introduction, body, conclusion. Tries to
persuade a person of your own opinion. The author has a specific audience in mind.
8. Answers will vary. The student should talk about something that was included in our
lessons and backs it up with explanations and examples.
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