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mnh c th phn tch c thu o tng vn ng php v t vng, gip cho hc vin
c th hiu bn cht ca vn , t ngm chc hn v p dng chun hn. Bn s tm
thy nhng cch hc ting Anh mi, t tn cng sc nhng li c bit hiu qu nh
Hng dn cch t sa bi vit, s dng ting Vit v mu cu t trong Task 1 hay bi th
dc 3 bc rn luyn kh nng brainstorming.

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Contents
Nhng chin lc chung
iu quan trng nht | Hai quy trnh n tp gip chinh phc c bn k nng IELTS 6
IELTS Writing: To-do list | Nhng vic cn lm hng ngy chinh phc k nng Vit 8
Ti sao k thi IELTS li c coi trng trn ton cu? 10
Bi thi IELTS Writing c chm nh th no 11
IELTS Writing: Th no l "tch" ngay t vch xut pht! - 3 mc tiu quan trng cn t
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IELTS Vocabulary: T vng - Bi ht v quyn hc dt | Phng php np t vng hiu
qu nht 14
Simplicity is beauty | Cch la chn t vng hc thuc 15
c li bi - hai bc nh bng bi essay | Hng dn cch sa bi vit 16
Bao nhiu paragraph l ? 18

Task 1
Checklist cho Task 1 20
Ting Vit v Mu cu t 22
Hng dn vit M bi Task 1 25
Li ph bin: Nhm ln Chm & Phy khi vit s liu 27
Li ph bin: V sau , [After that,...] 28
Bi, ng s! | Mt vi mo nh vi dng bi diagram 29
Qu nhiu s liu: X l th no y? | Dng bi bng biu (Table) 31

Task 2
1 2 3 ht th, ht th, ht th - bi th dc 3 bc cn tp HNG NGY | Ba bc
brainstorming tt hn 33
Hiu hay l...cht 35
Bi hc ct tit g | Cch dt im mt trong 3 cu 36
Pht trin bng cu hi Ti sao 39
Hng dn c phc v cho Vit 42
Ba mu cu phc d dng ti a im Grammar 44
Li ph bin: V dqu c th 45
Li ph bin: Cu ri rc 48
Li ph bin: Ch quan quy chp | Overgeneralisation 50
Li ph bin: Du cu 52

Tuyn tp T vng theo ch


T vng: ch Kinh doanh 54
T vng: ch S n lc v Thnh tu 55
T vng: ch Thnh ph ca bn 56
T vng: ch Ngi thn trong gia nh 57
T vng: ch S thch c nhn (phim nh) 58
T vng: ch S nghip thnh cng 59
T vng: ch Cun sch bn c 60
T vng: ch Bi hc cuc sng 61
T vng: ch Chnh ph v Qun tr cng 62

Tuyn tp Bi mu theo ch
Bi mu: ch Qung co trc tuyn 64
Bi mu: ch Chnh ph min ph gio dc ph thng 67
Bi mu: ch Gio dc gii tnh 69

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Bi mu: ch Di di doanh nghip ra khi thnh ph 71


Bi mu: ch Quc gia ngho 72
Bi mu: ch Vertical or Horizontal City 74
Bi mu: ch Ngn ng quc t 75
Bi mu: ch Xu hng Sng n thn 77
Bi mu: ch Ngi ni ting (CELEBRITIES) 79
Bi mu: ch Ngi gi 81
Bi mu: ch Ti phm v thnh nin 82

Bonus: nhng chin lc m rng


Bonus: B kp 9 im Listening 84
Bonus: Listening V kh ti mt 85
Bonus: Bn tiu ch cho im IELTS Speaking (Must read) 86
Bonus: Luyn IELTS Listening & Speaking qua phim 88
Bonus: B kp s dng ti liu gii ting Anh 89
Bonus: Du hc hay Khng Du hc 90

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Nhng chin
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iu quan trng nht


Hai quy trnh n tp gip chinh phc c bn k nng IELTS

Thi gian l th dng nh mi th sinh thi IELTS u thiu. Nhng chnh thi gian li l
yu t quyt nh bn gii hay bn lng nhng, bn im cao hay bn im thp, bn hc
thc hay hc go. V vy, ng vi hc bt c ci g nu bn thc s khng dnh c
thi gian cho n. IELTS cng ging nh tnh yu vy, nu khng dnh thi gian cho ngi
mnh yu, ng trch ai ht khi ngi b mnh ra i.

Vi IELTS, yu t thi gian c th hin qua hai quy trnh - nhanh v chm.

Quy trnh Nhanh


Nhanh l khi th sinh n luyn theo ng iu kin thi c, vic ny s gip th sinh rn
luyn tc , quen vi p lc phng thi v bit trnh thc t ca mnh. Vi k nng Vit
v Ni, quy trnh Nhanh ny cng gip th sinh to ra mt sn phm hon thin (bi essay
hay bn ghi m bi ni), thay v va vit va sa, va ni va dn vt bn thn. Va vit
va sa hay va ni va vt v l mt thi quen c hi, rt kh sa khi thnh tt.

Quy trnh Chm


Cn Chm l khi th sinh dnh thi gian khng gii hn thc s hiu v ngm; quy
trnh ny din ra sau quy trnh Nhanh. y l lc th sinh tm cu tr li cho nhng cu hi
cha c tr li quy trnh Nhanh. Thay v gi p n xem ngay cu tr li, th sinh
s t mnh tm bng c cu tr li trc. V d, thay v vi vng ng sch v li trong
khi bi lun cn y tng dang d hay thiu thuyt phc, th sinh s ngm ngi, c
thm ti liu, hi b m bn b tng thc s thuyt phc v dng c.

Hy nh, chnh quy trnh Chm s gip bn hiu c bn cht vn v thc s cm


c ting Anh. Vi quy trnh ny, khng ai bt bn phi i nhanh c, iu quan trng l
hiu v mi th hin ln sng r nh mt tri. C th khi kt thc quy trnh Chm, vn
cn c th bn khng hiu hoc cm thy cha sng t, nhng quan trng l bn thc s
bit mnh khng hiu ch no, v bn c th nhanh chng ch ra n hi thy, hi bn.

iu ny l rt quan trng v mt trong nhng l do khin th sinh chm tin b l h


thng khng bit mnh phi hi ci g, mi th c ln ln vo nhau thnh mt m bng
bong.

Vi IELTS, hy ng dng quy trnh Chm nh sau:


Writing: sau quy trnh Nhanh, hy dnh thi gian hon thin tng dang d hoc tm
mi nu trong bi thiu v mng. V hy dnh thi gian sp xp li tng; mt sai
lm ln ca th sinh l coi nh vic sp xp li tng bi v, nhiu khi, ch mt ng tc
chuyn v tr cc , b tr li du cu m tng s tr nn mch lc v thng minh hn
nhiu.

Speaking: hy dnh thi gian nghe li bn ghi m bi Speaking ca mnh; khi nghe li,
thay v x v bn thn rng sao ging tm th hay sao m nhiu th, hy nghe li vi
tm l bnh thn, ghi li nhng th nn sa, s dng bi hc Perfect Answer ca IELTS
Kungfu tm ra cch din t tt nht, Ty nht cho mt vi mnh din t cha ra
trong bi ni.

Reading & Listening: nu bn n theo kiu lm bi - check p n - ng sch li, bn

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s kh tin b hai k nng ny. V th, hy thay i mt cht v s dng quy trnh sau:

Bc 1: Lm bi theo Quy trnh Nhanh


Bc 2: Cha vi s dng t in, t tm p n cho nhng cu hi cha lm
c ca Quy trnh Nhanh
Bc 3: S dng t in tr gip hon thnh nhng cu vn cha lm c
Bc 4: Check p n

Cui cng, hy nh rng thi gian, hay ng hn l cch s dng thi gian l yu t
then cht quyt nh s thnh cng ca bn. Mc ch cui cng ca vic ny l hiu,
cm nhn v thc s chm vo ting Anh.

Hy cho ting Anh thi gian v ting Anh s cho bn c mt th gii bao la rng m.

Lu quan trng: bn cn nh hiu hon ton khng ng ngha vi nh - bn hiu


ton b bi c khng c ngha l bn cn nh mi th trong bi c. n gin l v
hiu v nh l hai vic hon ton khc nhau - bn c th hiu 10, 100 hoc 1000 nhng
nh th ch cn 1 m thi. V vy, hy ghi nh iu cui cng nhng rt quan trng ca bi
hc ny:

Mi ngy tri qua, hy ch cn ghi nh mt v ch mt phrase l c; vi phrase ny,


phi bo m bit 3 iu sau: bit c ng, bit vit ng v bit ng dng ng.

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IELTS Writing: To-do list


Nhng vic cn lm hng ngy chinh phc k nng Vit

1. Hy c hng ngy di bi c mi ngy c th khc nhau nhng hy t ra


mc tiu phi hiu 100% t nht hai paragraphs mt ngy. Hiu 100% c ngha l
thng sut v ngha, hiu c v tr v chc nng ca tng b phn trong cu,
c cm xc khi c v khng c bt c mt s m h no vi hai on .

2. Hy cai Facebook ch vo nu mun cp nht v bi hc IELTS mi.

3. Mi ngy tri qua phi vit c t nht mt cu hon chnh v mt ngy ca mnh
la chn mt iu g ngha, c bit hoc th v vit. Hy th lng tinh
thn, qun mi th i v gi cho mnh s thoi mi cao nht khi vit. Vic ny
luyn tinh thn khe mnh, thoi mi, phc v cho brainstorming.

4. Khi vit xong cu ny, dng Cambridge Dictionaries online, Ozdic.com,


Thesaurus.com v Google.co.uk kim tra tht nghim khc, sa li cho n khi
ng th thi. Thesaurus l cng c rt hu hiu trang b cho bn nhng t
ng ngha v trnh lp t; tuy nhin, hy check li cch dng tht cn thn trc
khi dng t tm thy trong Thesaurus.

5. Bt c ch no khng bit liu Ty c ni nh vy khng? Hy copy mt t hp


khong 3 t v paste vo Google.co.uk, rt c th bn s khm ph ra nhiu cch
din t authentic v th v hn.

6. Hy t ra cho mnh lch luyn tp trong iu kin thi c: vit bi c bm gi, khng
t in, vit bng bt ch ( quen tay v d ty xa sa)

7. ng qu tham khi hc t vng mt ngy hc mt t cng c min l phi


tht chc chn l bit dng t . Bit dng y bao gm: bit vit (spelling
ng), bit c (pronunciation ng), bit kt hp t (collocation ng), bit ngha
(sentence-building ng).

8. Khi c li cu ca mnh, bn vn c th tip tc th gin bng cch sa nhng li


silly nh li chnh t, li chm cu. Ngoi ra, vic sp xp li v tr ca t ng cng
s khin bn thch th hn khi thy cu mnh vit din t mun ni mt cch
thng minh hn.

9. u xuiui lt: Hy nh nhng quy tc sau cho vic vit m bi

10. Quy tc [1:1 v 2:2] Task 1 m bi 1 cu, task 2 m bi 2 cu

11. M bi ca task 1: vit li cu The figure/chart/table describes.bng ngn ng


ca mnh

12. M bi ca task 2 gm 2 cu: cu mt chp li bng ngn ng ca mnh, cu


hai tr li cu hi trong .

13. Hy nh mi vic phi c gii quyt xong ht trong m bi

14. Lun nh: mi b phn cu thnh mt cu u c chc nng r rng, bao gm

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chc nng v ng php v ng ngha. Hy rn thi quen c li bi ca mnh v


gch b tt c nhng g khng lin quan v khng r rng v v tr v chc nng.

15. Hy nh: vit ch chim 20% s thnh cng, 80% cn li quyt nh s tin b khi
hc k nng vit l c sch bo (c ting Anh ca ngi khc vit) v c li bi
vit ca chnh mnh (c ting Anh ca mnh vit).

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Ti sao k thi IELTS li c coi trng trn ton cu?


Ai tng tri qua vic hc ting Anh trong nh trng Vit Nam th chc s hiu vic
c 8 hoc thm ch 9 phy mn ting Anh khng c ngha bn c th s dng c
ting Anh.

S dng hiu n gin v trn tri l: hiu iu Ty ni, ni iu Ty hiu, c hiu


iu Ty vit v vit ra iu c th khin Ty rng rng xc ng khi c.

Nn cng chng c g kh hiu khi c bn mun chi ng ln mt cu WTF v bao nhiu


nm khn kh go ng php trong trng, m rt cuc li khng th lm c nhng
iu n gin ni trn.

Ni dng di cht ch ng vin nhng ai ang tot m hi trong cc l IELTS rng nu


thc s hc nghim tc cc k nng IELTS v t c con s im nht nh (khong t
6.5 tr ln) th bn nht nh s khng ri vo thm cnh hoang mang v chi i nh
trn.

Format bi thi IELTS gip ngi lm thoi mi bin tu ni dung, trnh vic hc go,
hc theo mu c sn mt cch my mc. IELTS kim tra kh nng ngn ng ca ngi
hc mt cch ton din v thc cht nht.

Nghe: bn bi nghe t d n kh thng bt buc ngi hc phi luyn nghe mi ngy


t nht 2 n 3 ting. Liu lng nh vy s bo m bn s nghe v hiu c Ty ni
g trong nhiu tnh hung ngoi i thc.

c: ba bi lun dy c ch v v vn cc ti bo m nu bn lm ngon lnh th


s c c sch bo v ti liu tham kho khi hc ln cao.

Vit: format thi Vit IELTS tuy gin d nhng li cc k thng minh khi biu task 1 c
th nht bt c t bo no cn task 2 c th hi v bt c vn i sng x hi no.
Vit c trn tru s bo m vic ngi hc lm c cc vic sau: tn tnh, thuyt
phc, da dm, g gm v ci ln quavn bn.

Ni: thi ni cng c cu trc rt thng minh i t Task 1 d, Task 2 d va, Task 3
kh v chuyn su. X l c trn tru 3 tasks s gip ngi hc lm c tt c nhng
iu k trn trong k nng Vit.

Th nh, bn hy tp trung n luyn v u t cho IELTS, chc chn cng sc, tin bc
ca bn b ra s worth every penny (tm dch l ng ng tin bt go).

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Bi thi IELTS Writing c chm nh th no


Bi thi k nng Vit IELTS c chm theo bn tiu ch bao gm:

Tr li cu hi bi (Task Response)
S mch lc v gn kt (Cohesion and Coherence)
Vn t vng (Lexical Resource)
S phong ph v chnh xc v cu trc ng php (Grammar range and Accuracy)

Vi mi task, gim kho s quyt nh band im cho tng tiu ch, sau cng li v
chia 4 tnh ra im trung bnh tng task. Lu rng, im cho tng tiu ch lun l
im chn; v d, bn c th t band im 7 hoc 8 cho mt tiu ch, ch khng c band
im 7.5 cho mt tiu ch; band im l (7.5 hay 8.5) xut hin khi ly tng im chia cho
bn ra s im trung bnh.

Tm quan trng ca Task 2 c th hin qua t trng im s v thi gian lm bi gp


i Task 1. Hy xem v d sau:

Task 1: 6.5
Task 2: 7
Overall: [6.5 + (7x2)]/3 = 6.833333 7.0

Cc th sinh thi IELTS cn download cho mnh Public band descriptors (bng din gii tiu
ch cho im IELTS Writing dnh cho cng chng) hiu r cch cho im tng tiu ch.
Bn c th download theo link di y.

Task 1
https://takeielts.britishcouncil.org/sites/default/files/IELTS_task_1_Writing_band_descriptor
s.pdf

Task 2
https://takeielts.britishcouncil.org/sites/default/files/IELTS_task_2_Writing_band_descriptor
s.pdf

Di y l bn dch tiu ch t band im 7 tng tiu ch ca IELTS Writing.

Task Response (Tr li cu hi bi) | Band 7


Gii quyt tt c yu cu trong
Trnh by quan im r rng ca ngi vit xuyn sut c bi
Trnh by, m rng v b tr nhng chnh, nhng c xu hng khi qut ha qu
mc hoc cc b tr thiu s tp trung, sc bn

Cohesion and Coherence (S mch lc v gn kt) | Band 7


Sp xp thng tin v tng logic, c s pht trin r rng xuyn sut c bi
S dng cc cng c to s kt ni ph hp v phong ph mc d c th vn gp
tnh trng dng qu nhiu hoc qu t
Mi on vn ni v mt ch r rng

Lexical Resource (Vn t vng) | Band 7


S dng t vng phong ph t c s linh hot v chnh xc khi dng

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S dng nhng t vng t ph bin mt cch kh chnh xc v lin kt t


(collocation) v phong cch
C th c i ch b sai v cch la chn t, sai chnh t v/hoc to t

Grammatical range and accuracy (S phong ph v chnh xc v cu trc ng php)


| Band 7
Phong ph cc cu phc
S lng cu hon ton khng c li (error free) nhiu
Kim sot tt v ng php s dng mc d vn i ch c li

Bonus
Di y l hai mo nh tng im C&C, bn hy nh s mch lc ca bi vit n t
nhng iu rt n gin di y.

Paragraphing (chia on): Hy chia on tht mch lc, mi on phi ni v mt ni


dung ln v ni dung ln phi c th hin r rng bng cu ch (topic sentence).
V d, khi cu ch l There are learning about the past has many benefits., ngi c
s hiu l c on ny s ni v nhng li ch ca vic hc lch s.

Signposting (t bin ch dn): bin ch dn c th l cu ch hoc mt cm din t


signpost nh In terms of the benefits of history education,., As regards the pros of
teaching children about the old days,., Regarding the economic growth during this
period,.. Nhng tm bin ch dn ny s gip cho ngi c nm bt c nhanh
chng chung ca c cu hay on, khin h ny sinh cm tnh v ho phng hn khi
cho im.

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IELTS Writing: Th no l "tch" ngay t vch xut pht!


3 mc tiu quan trng cn t khi Vit

c v cha bi vit ca hc vin IELTS ti mi thm tha mt iu: bn khng th i


ng ng c nu ngay t u bn i sai. Quan trng hn, bn khng th ng
khi khng bit rng mnh ang sai. Vy, c th, ci sai y l ci g? Vng, ci sai y y .

Nu bn coi IELTS Writing l ni trin khai vn t vng (yu t) ca mnh th bn sai


ngay t bc u tin ri.

V sao vy? Rt n gin thi, v ci hay ca thi Vit IELTS, c bit l Task 2, l n hi
nhng vn rt thc t v l nhng cu hi cn ngi vit suy ngh mt cch nghim
tc tr li mt cch thuyt phc nht.

Tc l 100% s tp trung ca b no l phi dnh cho vic t duy ni dung. Quan trng
hn, di p lc phng thi, thng thng, b no s hot ng hiu qu nht khi tp
trung vo "mt v ch mt" vic thi.

V th, chng ta cn dnh 100% nng lng v s tp trung ca mnh vo nhng vic sau:
tm , th thch v trnh by (brainstorming critical thinking through challenging the
ideas presenting). Nhng, thc t l 90% chng ta u bt b no ra lm qu nhiu
vic trong lc ny; no l nh bi mu, nh template (r rng bi ny thy mnh cho
template ri c m, sao khng nh t g th ny huhu), nh t vng, nh ng php.

Vy, tnh trng mt in hay in tm thi mi xy ra, dn n hu qu, bi vit d tr


thnh mt m ly ch ngha vi ngi c, sa vo , ch c cht ch kh c th sng
ni. Mun sng , li thot duy nht l .... git n (n l b th sinh, ch nhn ca bi
snh ly ch ngha ny).

Vy nn, hc Vit IELTS ng, bn cn t ra v chinh phc 3 mc tiu v cng quan


trng sau y:

Chnh li cch np t vng v ng php hng ngy: nhng ci g t vo u l


nhng th "dng c." Dng c c ngha nh sau: chnh xc cch dng, din t
chnh xc mnh mun ni, v lu gi bn cht trong u. Hai bi tip sau y s hng
dn bn np t vng mt cch hiu qu nht.

Th lng u c bng cch chm ch lm bi trong iu kin thi c

Sp xp tng thnh ngn ng vit da vo nhng mu cu cc k n gin m


hiu qu

Vic thay i ny c mt thi gian khng? C. Nhng thay i th c tt khng? Cc tt, v


n s khng ch tt vi IELTS Writing m cn gip ch mnh rt nhiu v sau khi bn rn
luyn c thi quen critical thinking v t duy sc so. Khi h, a no m lm
bm vn hoa c vi ng.

Vy, cc ch thy ri y, H Ni khng vi c u cu cc k ng vi IELTS


Writing!

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IELTS Vocabulary: T vng - Bi ht v quyn hc dt


Phng php np t vng hiu qu nht

Lm sao np t vng hiu qu nht l mt trn tr ca tt c cc hc vin IELTS,


di y l mt s b kp ca ring IELTS Kungfu.

1. m thanh l th u tin nn hc i vi mt t vng, xp theo th t u tin sau:


cch pht m - cch vit - cch dng.

2. Pht m ting Anh v ting Vit cc k khc nhau; v th, nht nh phi b cng luyn
tp, ni ng ting Anh - ch khng phi ni ting Anh...Vit.

3. Nu c lu gi li trong u, m thanh ca t vng cng s ging nh mt bi ht


mnh yu thch. Giai iu ca n s ng li, t nhin v bn vng m khng cn phi "c
gng nh ra."

V th, hc t vng m khng khi u t m thanh, th CM m SPEAKING ra hn c


nh. [CM l vit tt ca ng C M]

4. V m thanh c lu li trong u bn vng nh vy, nht thit phi np vo u mnh


m thanh chun, gm nhng th sau y: trng m - m cui - m thnh phn ng iu
cu.

5. CM mnh nh c nhng th trn nu khng dnh thi gian speak them out. m
thanh ch c th lu gi li c trong u khi ngi hc bt c n ra mt cch t
nhin nht, v th, hy c to. V hy luyn tp nhiu ln.

6. Thi xa khng c t in "bit ni," ch bit da vo thy c, khi , hc dt (pht m)


cng l mt ci quyn, quyn ci rng c dy sai th bit sao?. Thi nay, t in "bit
ni" ngp trn trn mng, hc dt (pht m) gi l mt s s nhc ln.

Vi Cambridge Dictionaries online, hc gii v pht m ng gi l cng l vn NHN


QUYN. ng ai tc i ca mnh quyn hc gii, ci quyn v cng c bn y. y,
t in bit ni y, http://dictionary.cambridge.org/ - cm ln, s dng v hc gii i. Ht
li khuyn!

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Simplicity is beauty
Cch la chn t vng hc thuc

Trong IELTS Writing, cch din t gin d v r rng c vai tr quan trng bc nht. V
sao? Rt n gin thi, v nu gim kho c m khng hiu bn mun ni iu g th h
s c quyn cho bn im 3.

y l band im ghi rt r trong band descriptor dnh cho nhng bi vit thc s
khin ngi c m m trong ma trn ch ngha.

Vy li khuyn l g? Hy s dng v ch s dng nhng cng c t vng v ng php


bn thn mnh hiu v nm chc 100%. nm chc 100%, li khuyn tip theo l:
"ng hc nhng t c spelling (nh vn) qu phc tp, hy hc nhng cm t v cch
din t bng ting Anh nhng li gn gi vi vn phong ting Vit m thi."

Farming is always a chancy business.


ng dng: ch cn thay ch farming l chng ta c mt cu mi vi vn cnh
mi; v d, thay farming bng writing.

There are dips and bumps on the road.


ng dng: There are always dips and bumps on the road to success.

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c li bi - hai bc nh bng bi essay


Hng dn cch sa bi vit

Vit xong, bn c c li bi khng?

y l mt thi quen bt buc cn phi rn luyn, nu bn mun nng cao im Vit trong
k thi IELTS. Xa hn na, y s l mt thi quen v cng hu ch bn nn rn luyn v
mang theo trong sut cuc i.

Tuy nhin, t c v t sa bi ca mnh l mt cng vic kh khn lc ban u; c hai


bc sau y bn hy lm theo nh:

1. Sa nhng li n gin: bao gm spelling, chm cu [v d: however ng gia cu


th nht nh phi c chm phy lin trc], spelling tn ngi/a im, vit hoa, cch
dng gia cc paragraph, chia ng t, ng php

2. c li v tr li trung thc cu hi: bi vit ca bn c din t c CHNH XC


100% bn khng? Hy qun ht s ho nhong bng by ca ngn t i, hy qun ht
s iu v cu trc cu i.

c li on mnh vit v tr li trung thc:


Liu ngi c c b mt tp trung v cu qu di khng?
C ch no mch vn ang tri chy t ngt b mc li khng?
C ch no tha thi khng?
Nu mnh ang miu t biu th liu ngi c hay chnh mnh c hnh dung
c mnh ang miu t ci g khng?

Sau hy sa li lm sao on vit ca mnh sng t nh mt tri ngi c

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khng cn phi hi thm g na, h cng khng b vng mc ch no na.

Hy coi examiner l khch hng v i tc VIP ca mnh v ghi nh nhng nguyn tc


sau:
VIP khng c nhiu thi gian c.

VIP cng s chng bao gi b cng ra ngi ngh xem n ca cha ni ny l g


u.

Nhng...

....VIP s BT LI cc k kht khe.

V vy, hy nh nguyn tc: chnh xc, d hiu v i thng vo vn nh.

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Bao nhiu paragraph l ?

Vic bit c s lng chun paragraph trong mt bi essay IELTS l rt quan trng
bi vit khng b qu cng knh (t paragraph qu) hoc qu vn (nhiu paragraph qu).

y l kinh nghim ring ca ti trong vic ny:

Task 1: tiu chun l 3 paragraphs trong c m bi, thn bi 1 trnh by key


trend 1, thn bi 2 trnh by key trend 2. Vi Task 1, bn khng cn vit conclusion
vic ny cng c khng nh trong sch ca Tips for IELTS ca Sam Carter;
t trc ti gi mnh cng cha bao gi vit kt lun cho task 1 c, bao gm c ln
thi t im ti a cho k nng Writing.

Task 2: tiu chun l 4 paragraphs trong c m bi, thn bi 1, thn bi 2, kt


lun. Lu 2 on thn bi cn phi trnh by 2 mch hon ton khc nhau.

Tuy nhin, cng khng nn qu my mc v chuyn paragraphing, hy nh nguyn tc:


mi paragraph phi c t nht 2-3 ideas, mi idea trnh by khng di qu 3 cu.

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Task 1

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Checklist cho Task 1


[Ngun: Tips for IELTS ca Sam Carter]

1. Lm Task 1 trc bn s c c li th tm l khi hon thnh mt task v bc vo


task 2 kh hn.

Mt c im v quy trnh vit l vic a bn thn vo gung vit. V vy, vi di


ngn hn, task 1 s d a bn vo gung hn. Sau khi hon thnh Task 1, bn s bc
vo Task 2 minh mn v hiu qu hn.

2. Hy s dng 20 pht vit Task 1.


Mt li thng gp l cc th sinh dnh nhiu thi gian hn cho Task 2 v ch dnh 15
pht hoc t hn Vit Task 1. Hy coi trng Task 1 mc d ng l Task 2 chim 2/3 s
im c bi.

3. Hy c hng dn v biu . S dng thng tin trong cu gii thiu trong gip
bn hiu biu .

4. Hy s dng qu thi gian eo hp ca Task 1 nh sau:


2-3 pht phn tch v lp dn
14-15 pht vit
2-3 pht kim tra li bi (ng mong c im cao nu bn b qua step ny)

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5. Hy kim tra s liu bo m mnh khng b nhm ln

6. Hy t kim tra xem bn s cn vit bao nhiu dng 150 t. V d, nu bn vit


10 t mt dng th bn s cn khong 15 dng. (Chnh v th, ti sao trong lp hc ca
mnh, ti lun yu cu hc vin vit tay v vit bng bt ch 2B d ty xa)

7. Khng vit di hn 180 t cho Task 1

8. Hy lc ra v ch tp trung vo nhng im ni bt t biu , minh ha bng s liu t


biu . Hy trnh vic qu tp trung vo cc chi tit.

9. Nu bn c nhiu biu , nhiu ng biu (trong line graph) hay c nhiu loi
biu trong cng mt - hy tm cch kt ni thng tin gia chng vi nhau (nu c
th).

10. Hy bo m bn vit thnh on vn v b cc cc on vn mch lc bng cch


xung dng mi khi ht on.

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Ting Vit v Mu cu t
Hai b kp vng cho Task 1

Mt trong nhng li rt to ca th sinh khi vit Task 1 l qu sa vo cc thut ng


miu t biu m cc thy np cho; kt qu l, h to nn ma trn t vng. V
gi l ma trn ri th n chnh ngi vit nhiu khi cng kh m thot ra, v rt cuc
l t h khng bit l mnh ang vit ci g na.

V th, hy nh nguyn tc vng sau vi Task 1: NG. . R RNG.

n gin th ny: biu c sn trc mt ri, ngi ta cn g phi c bi ca mnh nu


bi vit ca mnh ri rm t v v ch c g th v c. V ngay t nhng ngy u tp tnh
hc IELTS, ti khng h gp kh khn g vi Task 1 trong khi ti bit rng c rt nhiu
bn cc k e ngi khi phi lm mt vic tng chng nh khng th, l phn tch biu
...bng ting Anh.

Vy, b kp l g? Rt n gin, hai iu sau gip ti vt qua Task 1 mt cch d dng:

1. Ti lun c v phn tch biu bng ting Vit


Khi c biu bng ting Vit, ti hon ton khng gp kh khn g trong vic ch ra
nhng c im ni bt t biu , nhm chng li mt cch logic v r rng. T , ti
nhanh chng hon thnh vic lp dn , vic ti quan trng hnh thnh trong u mt
con ng, c theo m i thi.

Vi Task 1, d bi trng c nguy him ti u, ti cng c th chc chn mt iu: bn


c th x l c nu bn hiu v tm qun ting Anh i c biu bng ting
Vit.

2. Ti quy ht cc din t v nhng mu cu chun


Mt s cch din t s liu ph bin trong ting Vit li khng c dng trong ting Anh.
V vy, thay v phi gng mnh din nm t ting Vit, ti quy ht v mt s t nhng mu
cu chun hc thuc trong ting Anh nh there was an increase in the percentage
of..., hay ...per cent of abc did something.

V nh vy, ngay trong qu trnh n luyn, ti mi i mi li nhng mu cu ny ri;


n khi i thi, ch vic em ra s dng nhng v kh sc bn khng cn suy ngh
nhiu. iu quan trng l, vi Task 1, s mu cu din t t l, xu hng tng gim l
khng nhiu v rt d ng dng.

d hiu, chng ta s ng dng hai li khuyn trn vo sau. y l trong cun


Collins IELTS Writing nhng ti vit li gn gi hn vi cch t duy v din t ca
ngi Vit. Hy c bi dch ting Vit bo m hiu thng sut.

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Lp dn bi bng ting Vit


Tng quan: 3 lines u gim qua thi gian

Chi tit:
line t l sinh: gim cho n nm 1945 th tng mt cht ri li gim mnh | khong
nm 1965 th tng nh ri li gim tip
line t l t: gim mnh trong khong thi gian 1940-1955 | t 1955 th i ngang
cho n nm 2010 th on the rise
line t l tng dn s: gim nh trong khong 5 nm u trc khi tng mnh v
t nh nm 1955; t 1955 th gim mnh cho n khi chm y vo gia nhng
nm 2000

Dn bi trn cng h l v b cc vi vic chia thn bi ra lm 3 phn tng ng vi 3


lines; tuy nhin, bn cn lu , khng nht thit 3 phn ny phi nm trong 3 paragraphs
ring bit. Thay vo , chng ta c th ghp t l sinh v t l t vo trong mt paragraph
cn t l tng dn s chung vo mt paragraph. Vic ny trnh bi b vn v qu nhiu
paragraph.

V d v cch vit M bi v mt on Thn bi


(Pha di l bn dch bn hiu thng sut ni dung)

The line graph presents the birth, death and the population growth rates of Scotland from
1940 with projections towards 2020. The most prominent feature was that the country's
population was on the steady decline since 1955 and stopped growing altogether by
around the mid-2000s.

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The birth rate of Scotland dropped from 2.5 per cent in 1940 and never returned to that
mark ever since. Except for two brief periods of very modest recovery (1945-1950, 1965-
1968), the country's birth rate plunged to roughly one per cent in 1960. Since the 70s, the
birth rate of Scotland was on a continuing downward trend to well below one per cent
around the 2010s. The trend is forecast to remain unchanged towards 2020.

Bn dch

Biu th hin t l sinh, t l t v t l tng trng dn s ca Scotland t nm 1940


vi nhng d bo n nm 2020 [with projections towards 2020]. im d nhn thy nht
l dn s ca Scotland gim u [on the steady decline] t nm 1955 v ngng hn tng
trng [stopped growing altogether] vo khong gia nhng nm 2000.

T l sinh ca Scotland gim xung t mc 2.5% nm 1940 v t tr i khng cn


phc hi li c mc ny [never returned to that mark]. Ngoi tr hai giai on ngn t l
sinh c tng nh [except two brief periods of very modest recovery] (1945-1950, 1965-
1968), t l sinh ca nc ny gim mnh xung khong mt phn trm vo nm 1960.
T thp k 70, t l sinh ca Scotland lin tc gim xung [on a continuing downward
trend] di mt phn trm vo khong nhng nm 2010. Xu hng ny c d bo
khng thay i cho n nm 2020.

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Hng dn vit M bi Task 1

Th sinh hy ghi nh nhng iu sau khi vit m bi cho IELTS Writing Task 1

M bi Task 1 ch cn 1 cu
Khng cn thay th tn gi ca biu
Th sinh cn thay & thm: thay t ng ngha v thm cm t v hi
Th sinh c th thm chi tit nu nh phn gii thiu biu trong m bi s lc
qu
Nh b ch "below" trong

Lu : iu then cht l hiu biu , khi , th sinh s d tm thm chi tit vit m bi
hn. Ngoi ra, mt mo na l chp li ton b vo bi, ri ty xa mt vi ch, thay
mt vi ch l xong ( phi suy ngh).

d hiu chng ta s xem mt s v d sau, hy ch , bi l phn in m.

The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
The charts provide information on the proportion of males and females in employment
in six broad categories, divided into manual and non-manual occupations.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school
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competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011.


The chart shows the percentages of boys and girls who were successful in their high
school competency exams in the period from 2010 to 2011, by subject.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four
different attractions in Brighton.
The line graph shows the ratio of tourists to England who visited four different Brighton
attractions between 1980 and 2010.

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Li ph bin: Nhm ln Chm & Phy khi vit s liu


Nhm ln chm v phy khi vit s liu l mt li khng h nh, nhng khi chm bi,
ti thy c rt nhiu bn phm phi li ny. ng ngc nhin l k c nhng bn rt kh
cng mc.

V vy, chng ta cng n li iu sau nh: Trong ting Anh, k hiu chm v phy khi vit
s liu c dng hon ton ngc li vi ting Vit; hy xem v d di y:

Vietnamese: 56,39% n vt qua k thi Khoa hc My tnh. [du phy]


English: 56.39 per cent of girls passed the Computer Science exams. [du chm; c l
fifty six POINT three nine | Lu thm: sau du chm, chng ta c ring l TNG ch
s]

Vietnamese: 1.000 hc vin n vt qua k thi Khoa hc My tnh. [du chm]


English: 1,000 girls passed the Computer Science exams. [du phy ngn cch n
v hng ngn]

Vy nh, ng qun chm v phy cho chnh xc khi vit s liu nh.

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Li ph bin: V sau , [After that,...]


Cm t ni ny c nhiu th sinh a chung trong IELTS Writing. Bn thn n th chng
c g sai, nhng dng n th chng c g hay.

K c khi dng ng th n cng c rt t gi tr tng im Coherence v Cohesion


(C&C), v sao vy? V cch dng nh vy qu n gin, khng nh gi c kh nng
s dng cu phc (complex sentence) ca th sinh.

Quan trng hn, do th sinh hiu lm rng c cho nhng cm nh vy vo bi l n ngon


im C&C. V vy, nhiu khi th sinh c nht vo m khng c rng, cu ca mnh
mt i tnh gn kt ni ti ca cu. Hm nay chm bi, ti rt ra c mt v d
nh th:

Cu ca hc vin: "People harvest its ripe red pods, after that white cocoa beans inside
the pods are fermented." [to harvest: thu hoch | ripe (a): chn | cocoa pod (a): qu cacao |
to ferment: ln men]

Phn tch: Trong cu trn, thot nhn, chng ta s tng after that mang chc nng
kt ni khi that m ch c v u tin; nhng phn tch k th chnh cm ny li lm cho
cu mt lin kt. Nguyn nhn l v khi t after that ti , ngi vit chia tch cu
thnh 2 v c lp, khng c lin h tht s cht ch vi nhau v ng php cng nh
ngha. Tc l, ngi vit thay du phy bng du chm cng chng sao v bn thn 2 v
hon chnh v mt ng php.

Cch sa: After people harvest the red ripe pods from cacao trees, white cocoa beans
are extracted from the pods and fermented.

Phn tch cu sa: cch t after v trc khin s rng buc gia 2 v cu tr
nn cht ch hn; lc ny, v trc l mnh ph, v sau l mnh chnh, c lin h
vi nhau v mt thi gian sau khi chuyn ny xy ra th chuyn khc s... y l mt
cu phc (complex sentence) th sinh n im Grammar mt cch ng hong.

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Bi, ng s!
Mt vi mo nh vi dng bi diagram

Rt nhiu th sinh s dng bi diagram v v mt hnh th, dng ny thng trng


phc tp v nguy him hn hn cc dng bi khc. Tuy nhin, bi hc ny s gip th sinh
s hn khi gp diagram.

Trc tin, bn hy s dng bi, hnh nh ca chnh diagram v nhng t vng c sn


trong diagram hiu . Khi hiu bn cht ri, bn hy lp dn bi bng ting Vit,
hy nh rng vic lp dn bi bng ting Vit cng l mt liu php tm l bn bnh
tnh hn khi thy rng thc ra l cng chng c g kh c.

Khi bt tay vo vit, hy nh, s dng ng t chnh xc l mt yu cu quan trng bc


nht vi diagram. Thay v ri lon v s hi, bn hy x l ng t chnh xc theo hai
hng:

1. S dng nhng ng t c sn trong diagram: mt s diagram, c bit l nhng


phc tp thng c sn nhiu ng t trong hnh v, hy tm chng.

2. Nu trong diagram khng c ng t, hy xoay s vi vn t vng ca mnh. Hy


nh, lun c nhng phng n thay th tt m khng cn t ra nguy him. V d, di
y l mt s phng n thay th trong mt bi miu t v m hnh sn xut in t nng
lng sng:

sn xut ra in
phng n cao cp: generate electricity
phng n thay th: produce electricity

khi sng rt i
phng n cao cp: when waves recede/retreat
phng n thay th: when waves go out

mt chic my c lp t trn g
phng n cao cp: the structure is mounted on a cliff
phng n thay th: the machine is built on a cliff

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Ngoi ra, bn hy ghi nh cch s dng nhng mu cu sau n im Cohesion &


Coherence khi vit bi diagram hoc process.

...where/when abc is.... hoc This is where/when abc is....


S dng to lin kt trong quy trnh, din t ngha y chnh l ni m.... hay ni
m, khi m

Next, these unprocessed bricks are kept in a drying oven from 24 to 48 hours to dry out
before being transferred to kilns for the heat processing stage. This is where bricks are
baked at moderate and high temperatures, varying from 200 to 1,300 Celsius degree.

Next, SVO./ then/...before.../....after.....


Next, these unprocessed bricks are to be kept in a drying oven from 24 to 48 hours to dry
out before being transferred to kilns for the heat processing stage.

Hai cch din t vi follow nh sau.


1. In the heat processing phase, bricks are baked at moderate and high temperatures,
varying from 200 to 1,300 degree. This is followed by a cooling period....

2. In the heat processing phase, bricks are baked at moderate and high temperatures,
varying from 200 to 1,300 degree. Following is the cooling period....

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Qu nhiu s liu: X l th no y?
Dng bi bng biu (Table)

Mt bui ti, ti tnh c nhn c email t mt hc vin sp i thi, em chia s s s hi


khi i mt vi dng bi bng biu s liu v thng em khng bit bt u t u, c
qu nhiu s liu.

Li khuyn ca ti dnh cho nhng hc vin c chung tm s ny l hy bnh tnh, lun


c li thot m. V li thot nh sau: Vi dng bi bng biu hay bt c dng biu
no, ng i vo tiu tit m hy tm nhng ci 'nht' nh cao nht, thp nht, chnh lch
nht.

trnh gio iu, chng ta hy xem xt bi di y. Ti xin php c trch trn


vn email tr li bn hc vin ni trn:

ny hay qu, khng hiu em gi email lc no, gi thy mi thy.


Thng th vit thnh bi th thy s iu chnh cn nhiu; tuy nhin, di y l
brainstorming v sp xp nh.

Paragraph 1: tp trung vo hai ci nht


xem tivi l ph bin nht vi bt c la tui no - mc d s lng la chn nhiu nht
l teens v trn 70
xem phim rp l t c la chn nht - t ngi la chn hn hu ht cc hng mc
khc. Tuy nhin, tui 60 v 70 th xem phim hn c group exercise

Paragraph 2: im qua mt s hnh thc gii tr cn li


hnh thc giao lu nhm di 4 ngi: ph bin hn trong nhm tui 30-50, varying
trong khong 250-300
hnh thc giao lu nhm trn 4 ngi: ch ph bin vi nhm teens v 20 tui
th dc n: khng c s chnh lch nhiu gia cc nhm tui
group exercise: cng ln tui th cng t la chn loi hnh ny hn

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Task 2

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1 2 3 ht th, ht th, ht th - bi th dc 3 bc cn tp
HNG NGY
Ba bc brainstorming tt hn

Step 1: idea capturing


Step 2: free writing
Step 3: proof checking

Step 1: lu gi khonh khc v tng. Mi tng le ln trong u, mi mt khonh


khc bt ci khanh khch v mt iu g hay ho y l nhng khonh khc sn sinh
adrenalin, khin bn cm thy hung phn v trn y nng lng. Vy nnng n
tri i mt.

Hy luyn cho mnh thi quen mang theo mnh mt cun s nh v chic bt bn ngi,
sang hn th mang theo Galaxy Note, iPhone. C lc no le sng tng, bn hy
tm ly n ngay, ng thot. Mt t, hai t l c, min l bn c lu li tng
ca mnh. Hy nh, note li nhanh thi, ng mt qu nhiu thi gian vo vic ghi
chp ny.

ng ngh l ch c bn nh vn m IC mi lc no cng k k cun s chic bt nh. Bt


m: y l b kp t va c chia s bi t ph Richard Branson y.

Step 2: bi tp th lng dnh cho tm hn [lu : vi u c, cng mun n lm vic hiu


qu, cng cn cho n th gin v thnh thi. Rn g th c, ch vit m rn t,
ch ngha th bn c yn tm lkhng ra u.] iu ny c bit ng trong phng thi:
p lc thi gian, tham vng im s, lo lng trm b n nich mt con mui bay qua
cng c th khin bn sp v cng thng.

th lng u c, khng ch c h ho: bnh tnh no, ht th su no! m c. Phi


luyn tp hng ngy, tm tr mi yn lng nh...mt h trn nh ni c. V bi tp free
writing s gip bn vic ny.

Hy lm nh sau: la chn mt cu hi task 2 bt k - brainstorm tht nhanh vit ra giy


cng tht nhanh mt paragraph trong vng 5 pht.

Qun ng php i, qun t mi i, ch no tc , dng t n gin cng c, ng


ngh cng c, min l ni c cn ni. Hy nh, vic ct yu vi bi thc hnh free
writing l:

1. Phi c mt ci g c vit ra
2. u c th lng th thi, khng vng bn t vng, ng php.

Step 3: khu then cht bn tin b vt bc. Nu nh step 1 v step 2 luyn cho bn
tm l thi c v kh nng brainstorming th step 3 s l ni rt kinh nghim v np cho
mnh t vng v ng php mt cch vng chc nht.

Bn cn nh mt iu: t 6.5 tr ln, nht nh bn s phi T PHT HIN nhng li


sai trong bi ca mnh c v bit s dng cng c tr gip tm ra nhng cch din
t hay nht, thng minh nht v au nht (authentic English).

Bt m: t khi bt u hc ting Anh cho n khi t 9 im Vit IELTS, ti ch c cha


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bi lun ng 3 ln, v cha bi mt gio vin ngi Vit (ngi l c Nguyt, i hc


Ngoi ng H Ni, ngi ti rt bit n.). Vy nn, hy t tin vo bn thn mnh v nh:
cng c vng hin ang by sn trc mt.

Cambridge dictionary online: t in thn k bao gm cc v d c th, c th m


lm theo

Ozdic: gip bn gii quyt phn kh nht trong ting Anh Vit collocation [lin kt
t vng]

Thesaurus: tra t ng ngha, nghch ngha

Google translate: lc b qu th cho cm ting Vit vo anh Gc dch h.


Nhng nh phi kim tra tht k li cu dch bng nhng cng c online ni trn.

V hy dnh thi gian cho khu proof checking ny v n s tn rt nhiu thi gian ca
bn. Tuy nhin, y s l lc bn thc s hiu v ngm ting Anh.

Sau cng, hy la chn v np cho mnh mt cm din t hay hc c t qu trnh


kim tra v cha li.

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Hiu hay l...cht


Mo x l bt c Task 2 no

Trc khi au kh v tm , trc khi sung sng v tm ra , trc khi vt v v tm t,


trc khi cc "khoi" v vit c cu hay, th bn phi...HIU . Tc l vic hiu
phi din ra trc mi th khc.

Mt tip rt d lm v cc b ch l: hc thuc b . Nghe th n gin n...pht bc,


nhng chnh thi quen ny l cha kha thnh cng y. Hy in ra cho mnh b Writing
cp nht, ri sau , c thy u chia s mi th b sung vo.

Lc no cng mang theo b k k bn mnh v bo m bn lm c tt c nhng


yu cu sau:

1. Tt c cc u phi c c v hiu [ch ch tt c]

2. Tt c nhng t no mi, khng bit th sng cht g cng phi hc thuc. V d


juvenile delinquency (vn ti phm v thnh nin) l cm t rt ph bin trong Task 2;
nu khng bit, hi c sng c khng.

3. Tt c nhng g khng hiu, hoc l m hiu th phi hi thy cho bng hiu th thi.
Thy y bao gm: t in, page Ti c 9 im Vit IELTS, thy abc ngoi kia.

4. C rnh li ngm ngi v cch tr li mt no . ng cng thng, yu cu ca


bi tp ny l luyn s th thi u c thi.

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Bi hc ct tit g | Cch dt im mt trong 3 cu


Examiner l g th sinh l ngi ct tit. Vic ca th sinh l lm sao ha kip ch g
cho nhanh v gn; vic cn tuyt i trnh l nhay i, nhay li con dao, g n khng cht,
m n in ln, nhy ra m vo mt y.

Ni dng di cht c kt ra mt bi hc: Khi vit, th sinh cn din t xong mt


trong nhiu nht l 3 cu. Vic ny s khin cho th sinh trnh vic vit di, vit dai...vit
di. Hn na, vic ny cng yu cu th sinh phi tm nhiu hn, m nhiu hn th th
sinh s d nng im Task Response (Tr li cu hi ca ) - mt trong bn tiu ch
chm bi IELTS Writing.

d hiu, chng ta li phn tch cch trin khai ca mt hc vin trong v d sau y.

bi: In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of
health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems
and what measures could be taken to solve them?

V d v vic vit lan man (Ct mi m g khng cht)


First of all, one of the reasons to discuss is the development of fast food or convenient
food. It can easily be seen that there are many fast food stores on the high streets in
Western countries. People usually choose to go to these stores instead of cooking a
healthy meal at home. The reason for it is that fast food might be cheaper than a healthy
meal with vegetables and it is also really convenient for working people who are really
busy. However, fast food has a negative effect on peoples health because it increases
the .in your body and makes them become fatter and fatter. For example, the number of
people in Western countries is higher than in Eastern and Asian countries because Asians
usually have more vegetables in their meal and there are just a few fast food stores, such
as KFC and McDonald, in these countries.

Moreover, exercising might also be a reason that lead to the increase in the average
weight of people. Exercising plays a really important role in level of health and fitness
because it makes people become more active, healthier and keeps them fit. Nowadays
everything has been becoming more developed, which means people have more activities
to do. This might lead to the fact that they do not have time or they prefer to do another
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activity instead of exercising. (229 words)

Nhn xt v on vit trn: Th sinh dng 2 paragraphs v dng ti 11 cu v 229 t cn


ngi c th cm thy ri lon, khng bit th sinh ang nh x l phn no ca .

Cch sa ct tit g mt nht xong lun, i bn cng h x: sa, chng ta cn


xem li nm chc hi g. Sau khi c li v on vit ni trn, chng ta kt
lun rng , ha ra l bn y ang ni v cc nguyn nhn ca vic tng cn v gim st
sc khe.

V di y l phng n sa, rt gn t 229 words xung cn 57 words. Hy rng,


trong on sa di y, ti s dng k thut nhc li key words trong to ra
focus, khin cho ngi c khng b mt tp trung (hy ch nhng ch in nghing).

Convenience food has been considered one of the most important causes for the
increasingly popular overweight issue, for its high levels of calorie and cholesterols. What
exacerbates the situation is the decreasing popularity of physical activities, which is
especially true to the white-collar workers who spend most of their time sitting in the office
instead of exercising. (57 words)

Nu cn thi gian, bn cng c th tham kho cch din t thng, gn, sc qua mt s
bi cha di y.

Hai cu rt xung mt cu
Bn gc: Firstly, as the cities develop, the road for getting a job is likely to become tougher
and severer, the employment market become more and more competitive. Newly
graduates do not have experience that meets the demand of employers.

Bn sa: Firstly, as the labour market gets more competitive than ever, many fresh
graduates fail to meet employers expectations and end up without a job.

Nm cu rt thnh hai cu
Bn gc: First of all, it is not easy for young people to find jobs. The growth of major city
brings more job opportunities to habitants and attracts well-training people. This makes
labor market becomes more competitive and thus young people find it difficult to have a
job due to lack of experience. Newly graduates do not have experience that meets the
demand of employers. Some graduates holding bachelor degrees have to find blue-collar
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jobs so as to earn their livings.

Bn sa: While the growth of cities brings about a world of employment opportunities, the
ever tougher competition leaves many young people without jobs. This means many have
to accept handy or poorly paid jobs; in many cases, what they are offered to do totally fail
to match their qualifications and academic achievements.

Tm dng thnh ba dng


Bn gc: Secondly, the society's morality in the fast growing cities is corrupting which is
having bad effect on the young generation. In those cities, where there is huge demand of
foods, in order to earn more money, some people use the decayed raw materials like died
pork to make foods or use the forbidden chemical substances to make vegetables and
fruits, like durians to grow bigger, ripen faster, look and smell better. As a result, the young
living there will withdraw a lesson that to achieve our target, any price can be paid, without
a certain care about others' safety or interest, which can lead to a very bad and dangerous
effect on their characteristic building.

Bn sa: The decreased social morality in fast growing cities has direct negative effects on
young people. For example, unethical ways of doing business can be copied by young
people who are desperate to find shortcuts to success.

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Pht trin bng cu hi Ti sao

Mt cch pht trin lp lun sc so hn v thm chi tit cho on vit ca mnh l t
cu hi ti sao v tr li cu hi thu o. Chng ta s i thng vo phn phn tch
mt on vit sau ca hc vin IELTS Kungfu.

Task 2: A new generation of entrepreneurs believe that privately funded space tourism will
be the next exciting development in space exploration. How true do you think this is? How
would space tourism affect space exploration as we know it today?

on vit ca hc vin
Space tourism nowadays are becoming a reality. As it is developing to be a greatly
beneficial service, entrepreneurs are tend to invest more to expand and improve it. There
are many rich people in the world who are willing to pay a huge amount of money to travel
through space. Since there are great demand, space tourism will be invested and
developed quickly.

Nhn xt: ngoi nhng li t vng v ng php, v mt din t , hc vin khng i su


c vo chi tit gii thch 2 cu hi ti sao:

ti sao space tourism li tr thnh market demand


ti sao cc nh u t sn sng tin vo lnh vc ny

n tng chung ca ngi c l cc lp lun c chng ln nhau, khng thc s r nt;


on vit li di y minh ha cch chia tch v thm details lp lun no ra lp
lun , sc so v r rng hn.

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on gc: Space tourism nowadays are becoming a reality. As it is developing to be a


greatly beneficial service, entrepreneurs are tend to invest more to expand and improve it.
There are many rich people in the world who are willing to pay a huge amount of money to
travel through space. Since there are great demand, space tourism will be invested and
developed quickly.

Phn tch li: Space tourism nowadays are becoming a reality. As it is developing to be a
greatly beneficial service, entrepreneurs are tend [to be v verb thng ch i cng
nhau theo dng thc be + V-ing hoc be + past participle] to invest more to expand and
improve it. There are many [<- hc vin khng nh chc nch bng to be chia hin ti
thng; nhng khng th mc nh nh vy, khng phi ngi giu no cng sn lng b
tin ra cho vic du lch khng gian] rich people in the world who are willing to pay a huge
amount of money to travel through space. Since there are great demand[s], space
tourismwill be invested [li khng nh chc nch] and developed quickly.

on sa: Space tourism has become a reality for the following reasons. Firstly, as this
type of tourism can give people many unique experiences such as seeing the earth from
space or floating in zero gravity, it has always attracted people who have an adventurous
spirit, especially those who can afford such a trip. In this case, space tourism is simply a
response to the market demand. Secondly, as commercial space tourism is a totally new
concept, it has huge potential and few competitors. This makes space tourism attractive to
investors who are willing to pour money in to explore the business potential.

Phn tch cu sa: cc cu hi ti sao pha trn c gii p thu o trong ni dung
sa.

space tourism tr thnh market demand v n mang li unique experiences vi


nhng v d minh ha c th
nh u t sn sng b tin vo v huge potential and few competitors

T vng hu ch

a unique experience: mt tri nghim c o, khng ai c

see the earth from space: quan st tri t t khng gian

to float in zero gravity: l lng trong trng thi khng trng lng

to have an adventurous spirit: a mo him

to afford something: c kh nng chi tr ci g

a response to market demand: li hi p nhu cu th trng (Vit ha hn mt


cht l p ng nhu cu th trng)

a new concept: mt khi nim mi

make sth attractive to sb: lm cho ci g tr nn hp dn vi ai, ng php s dng


make + sb/sth + adjective

to be willing to do sth: sn lng lm g


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to pour money in/into sth: tin vo u

business potential: tim nng kinh doanh (Vit ha hn mt cht l tim nng sinh
li)

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Hng dn c phc v cho Vit


Cu hi trn l mt cu hi cc k ph bin. Theo Ti c 9 im Vit IELTS, y l mt
cu hi c hi, cng hi cng i su hn vong ct. Cu hi ng khng phi l ti
sao m l lm th no.

Cu tr li tng khng th c hn: hy c vc ng. Vy c th no lng?


Ngn gn nh sau, khi c ng, bn s hiu, thch, mun s dng v ngm hn sau khi
s dng.

HIU l iu kin bt buc. Tuyt i khng c t la di bn thn rng hnh


nhhi hiu. Hy s dng tt c tr gip c th (t in, hi ngi thn, Google); hi
ht m vn khng hiu thvt n i, tm ci khc c.

THCH l bi test v t duy phn bin (critical thinking). V vic ny cng rt t nhin;
c th m bo rng ngoi bn ra, khng ai c th bt bn thch c mt bi bo, nu
nh bi bo khng hay.

T ch THCH, bn s NH hiu qu hn rt nhiu, nh nhng cch din t hay, nhng


lp lun sc so, khng vn c ch no ca ngi vit.

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Cui cng l ng dng. Hy nht ra khong 03 cch din t khng qu l v t vng,


v khng cao sang v ng php th t cu, ni nhng g bn thn mun ni. Khi
bn dng ting Anh ni v i sng ca chnh mnh, v nhng g bn thn mnh yu
hay ght th ting Anh s thc s i vo i sng ca bn ri, ch khng phi ch nm
trong sch v na.

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Ba mu cu phc d dng ti a im Grammar


Di y l ba mu cu ti lun dng ht cng sut trong cc bi lun Task 2.

Cu iu kin vi if

If a young person is promoted to an important position in the government just because


he or she is an offspring of someone important, it is obviously an abuse of power, which is
not good by any means.

Nu mt ngi tr c tn ln mt v tr cao trong chnh ph ch bi v ngi l con


chu ca mt ai quan trng, th r rng l s lm quyn - vi bt c l do g th iu
ny cng tht khng tt.

SVO (Clause A), which + clause B.


SVO y l mt cm ch v hay mt mnh , "which" c dng thay th cho c v
trc, c th tm dch l "iu ny, vic ny."

The most valuable assets of the young are their creativity and energy, which helps
rejuvenate the government.

Ti sn qu gi nht ca ngi tr tui l sc sng to v nng lng, iu s gip chn


hng bt c chnh ph no.

when or as or because
The ability to update new technology developments is an unchallenged advantage of
young people when technology and innovation have become key growth drivers in todays
world.

Kh nng update nhng tin b cng ngh mi l mt th mnh r rng ca ngi tr khi
cng ngh v sng to tr thnh nhng ng lc chnh thc y s pht trin trong th
gii ngy nay.

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Li ph bin: V dqu c th
Trong qu trnh chm bi vit ca hc vin, ti thy rt nhiu bn mc li khi nu v d
trong lp lun. Nhng bn ny i qu su vo chi tit cn s chnh xc tuyt i nh ngy
thng, h tn, s kin lch s, nh mt s v d sau y (bn di l bnh lun vui ca
IELTS Kungfu).

David Cameron thnh Th tng chng my chc sau khi lm vic trong Chnh ph.
Ai ni vy?

Joseph Kabila, Marcus Stephen, Mikheil Saakashvili, and Faure Gnassingbe


OMG, who the f*ck are they? Who cares?

In 2013 Austria republic appointed Mr Sebastian Kurz to foreign minister at the age 27.
i, xin nhn ca ti h mt ly ?

Trn y l ba trong v s nhng v d qu c th, c hi nhiu hn c li khi th sinh lm


bi thi vit IELTS. Hy nh, thi Vit IELTS mun kim tra kh nng t duy v tranh lun
ca th sinh; quan trng hn, IELTS khng phi l k thi kin thc.

Thay v a ra nhng thng tin cn s chnh xc tuyt i nh h tn, ngy thng, s


kin lch s, hc vin cn lm sao v d l mt phn ca lp lun, pht trin lp lun
ca mnh ln mt tm cao mi. d hnh dung, chng ta s xem cch s dng v d
pht trin lp lun qua nhng phn tch di y.

For example, in Vietnam, who would say that they do not know Dang Le Nguyen Vu, the
founder of Trung Nguyen Caf. Vu was born in a poor family and started his business
purely out of passion.

Phn tch: th sinh ang s dng v d ny pht trin lp lun sinh ra ngho kh
khng phi l s phn; v vy, thay v nu ra ci tn ng L Nguyn V m nhng ngi
nc ngoi (trong c ngi chm bi) hu nh khng bit, th sinh ch cn ni chung l
cc doanh nhn khi nghip t hai bn tay trng hay nhng doanh nhn c xut thn
ngho kh l c.
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Cch sa: For example, success stories from poor entrepreneurs who built their fortune
out of nothing has proved that lacking support is not necessarily an obstacle to personal
development.

T vng:
success story: cu chuyn thnh cng

entrepreneur: doanh nhn

build a fortune: xy dng c nghip

out of nothing: c cm t "build a fortune out of nothing" mang ngha xy dng c


nghip t hai bn tay trng

to prove: chng minh rng

lacking support: vic thiu thn s h tr

not necessarily: khng nht thit

an obstacle: mt tr ngi

Obviously, this would generate a less competitive workforce, especially as opposed to


foreign skilled workers. Ethiopian workers, for example, are struggling to find themselves
decent jobs due to substandard academic backgrounds.

Phn tch: th sinh mun dng v d pht trin lp lun rng gio dc yu km
khin lc lng lao ng mt i tnh cnh tranh; tuy nhin, thay v a ra v d v t
nc Ethiopia xa l, th sinh ch cn ni khi qut v nhng quc gia ngho hay nhng
nc thuc th gii th ba l c gi hiu. Khi h hiu v thy gn gi, h s d cm
bi vit hn.

Cch sa: This would generate a less competitive workforce in comparison with skilled
workers from other countries. Workers from third-world countries are struggling to find
decent jobs due to substandard academic backgrounds.

T vng:
to generate sth: to ra ci g

a less competitive workforce: mt lc lng lao ng c tnh cnh tranh thp hn

in comparison with sth: so snh vi ci g

a third-world country: t nc th gii th ba

to struggle to do sth: vt v, vt ln lm g
find oneself sth: tm kim ci g cho bn thn

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a decent job: mt cng vic ng hong

substandard (adj): di mc tiu chun

an academic background: mt nn tng hc vn

Have you ever heard that according to the latest statistics from the UN Population Fund,
Vietnam is one of five countries with the highest abortion rates in the world and ranks first
in Southeast Asia.

Phn tch: khi chm bi, khng ai li i tra Google xem d liu ny ca th sinh c chnh
xc hay khng v vic ny mt thi gian v khng cn thit. n gin l bi, d d liu c
chnh xc 100% m n khng phc v cho lp lun th n cng khng c gi tr g trong
bi v cng khng gip th sinh n im.

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Li ph bin: Cu ri rc
Hy ghp chng li tng im Ng php

Chng ta s tm hiu v li ny qua v d c th ca hc vin ti IELTS Kungfu.

Some people believe increasing business and cultural contacts between countries are a
positive development while others argue that it is a threat to identity of a nation? Discuss
both view and give your opinion?

Increased globalization would lead to an integration of economy among countries. People,


companies and organizations in different countries can live and work together. We can
exchange goods, money and ideas faster and cheaper than ever before. This integration
creates more job opportunities, which rescue people from unemployment and
impoverishment.

Nhn xt: 3 cu trn c lin quan n nhau, vit ri rc th ny l hon ton mt im


Cohesion and Coherence (S Mch lc v Gn kt). Di y s l cch t cc vo
cu phc (complex sentence) v to ra mi lin h logic v ngha cng nh rng buc
v ng php.

Cch sa: The increased globalisation helps fuel international trade as companies from
different countries can now cooperate in business or production. This enables a better flow
of goods and services between countries and creates more jobs, which helps tackle the
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unemployment issue and reduce poverty.

Bn dch: Xu hng ton cu ha su rng gip thc y thng mi ton cu khi cc


cng ty t nhiu quc gia khc nhau gi c th hp tc kinh doanh v sn xut. iu ny
gip to ra dng chy mnh m hn ca hng ha v dch v gia cc quc gia v to ra
nhiu cng n vic lm hn, gip gim ngho v gii quyt vn tht nghip.

Di y l nhng cng c to ra s rng buc v ng php cng nh logic ngha trong


cu sa bn trn:

as (c th thay bng "because/when/since"): to ra cu phc vi mi quan h


nguyn nhn - kt qu

this: dng bt u mt cu mi c ni dung lin quan n cu trc . Trong


trng hp ny, "this" c th hiu l "vic ny/iu ny"

which,: khi "which" ng sau du phy, n cng c th c hiu l "iu ny, vic
ny" nh "this" ni trn. phn bit cch dng gia this v which, hy nh
rng "this" thng c dng lm ch ng cho cu mi cn "which" thng ng
gia cu v c vai tr kt ni gia cc v trong mt cu.

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Li ph bin: Ch quan quy chp


Overgeneralisation

Pht biu khng suy ngh, quy chp nh ng ri l mt li ph bin ca th sinh thi trong
bi thi Vit. Li ny s nh hng n im s ca th sinh cho tiu ch Task Response.
Di y l mt s v d minh ha cho li ny v cc mo phng trnh.

The most significant disadvantage is that it can weaken national culture and traditions.
Undoubtedly, new lifestyles from foreign countries are easily adopted.

Tc nhn gy li: undoubtedly [khng cn nghi ng g na] | "are easily adopted"


[nhng phong cch sng mi c tip thu mt cch d dng]

Cch sa: New trends from overseas can be adopted by young people, which may
cause a loss of traditional values. [Nhng xu hng mi t nc ngoi c th c tip
thu bi gii tr, iu ny c th s lm mt i nhng gi tr truyn thng.]

Cng c phng nga li ch quan: can + verb, may + verb

This policy can prevent the adolescent crimes because almost all young offenders are
illiterate people. ["this policy" y ni n chnh sch a tr em v v thnh nin n
trng]

Tc nhn gy li: almost all young offenders are illiterate people [hu ht tt c mi
ngi tr vi phm php lut u "tht hc." Da vo u em ni hu ht tt c cc v
phm ti u l do ngi t hc gy ra? K c y em c ch "hu ht" th lp lun
ny cng khng thuyt phc, xc phm n nhng ngi thit thi, khng c i hc.]

Cch sa: As children are given an opportunity to go to school, they would learn how
to behave and how not to break laws, which results in a possible decrease in crime rates
among young people.

T vng & Ng php: to behave: c x ngoan ngon | to break laws: vi phm php
lut | crime rates: t l phm ti | which" + ng t chia ngi th 3 s t which y
thay cho ton b v trc, n mang ngha iu ny v c coi nh 1 danh t s t.
Lu , khi dng "which" vi ngha "iu ny" th lun phi c DU PHY trc n.

Cng c phng nga li ch quan: a possible decrease (mt s st gim c th xy


ra, ch khng phi ng nhin s xy ra) | would + verb to ra sc thi gim nh.

Moreover, products which are sold online are less reliable, and purchasers are often
disappointed when they receive things as they are worse than expected.

Tc nhn gy li: "are less reliable" "are worse than..." - ng t "to be" c s dng
thi hin ti n gin to ra sc thi "khng nh chc nch;" khin cho ngi c s
hiu rng c hng ha trn mng l ng nhin khng tin cy v t hn k vng.

Cch sa: One increasingly popular concern about online shopping is that the quality
of delivered products may fail to meet customers expectations. In the worst case, the
delivery is even in the state of disrepair, which disappoints the customer.
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T vng & Ng php: an increasingly popular concern: mt lo ngi ngy mt ph bin


hn [cch to t hp t: danh t ng vai tr trung tm, tnh t ng lin trc b
ngha cho n. tng sc thi ca tnh t, ta dng trng t vi v tr lin trc tnh t.] |
delivered products: nhng sn phm c chuyn pht n nh | to fail to meet
expectations: tht bi trong vic p ng k vng | customers: khch hng | in the worst
case: trong trng hp xu nht | the delivery = the delivered product | even (adv): thm
ch | in the state of disrepair: trong tnh trng h hng khng phc hi c | which +
ng t chia ngi th 3 s t which y thay cho ton b v trc, n mang ngha
iu ny v c coi nh 1 danh t s t. Lu , khi dng "which" vi ngha "iu ny"
th lun phi c DU PHY trc n. | to disappoint sb: lm ai tht vng

Cng c phng nga li ch quan: may + verb, "in the worst case"

High technology can be used to track criminals; therefore, those who intend to commit a
crime will give up that intention.

Tc nhn gy li: "will give up that intention" - ngi c s hiu ngha cu ny l "khi
cng ngh cao c s dng truy tm ti phm th nhng ai c phm ti s
nghim nhin t b nh ."

Cch sa: Today high technology can be used as an effective way to track down
criminals, which may help prevent people from breaking laws or committing crimes.

T vng & Ng php: high technology (hi-tech): cng ngh cao | to track down sb/sth:
truy tm, tm kim | prevent sb from doing sth: ngn ai lm g | to break laws: vi phm php
lut | to commit crimes: phm ti

Cng c phng nga li ch quan: bng cch thm ch may, bn s trnh c


vic quy chp ch quan khi vit nhng th ny]

Tng kt bi hc
Nhng cch dng t vng c th gy nguy him: will + do, to be
Nhng cch trnh li ch quan quy chp: may, can + verb, possible (adj), possibly (adv)

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Li ph bin: Du cu
Trong formal writing ting Anh, vic s dng ng du cu v cch thc lit k rt quan
trng. Theo , cu di y mc li nghim trng v du cu cng nh lit k.

A nation with low education may lead to some social issues such as: poverty,
discrimination, robbery

Phn tch li:


Danh t ng lin sau such as v KHNG CN du hai chm [:]
Ting Anh KHNG DNG ba chm [] kt thc chui lit k

Thay vo , bn hy nh nhng cch sau lit k trong ting Anh.

A, B, C and D [and ng gia 2 danh t cui cng]: A nation with low education may
lead to some social issues such as poverty, discrimination and robbery.

A, B, C or D [or ng gia 2 danh t cui cng]: A nation with low education may lead
to some social issues such as poverty, discrimination or robbery.

A, B, C, among/amongst others: A nation with low education may lead to some social
issues such as poverty, discrimination, robbery, among others.

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Tuyn tp
T vng theo
ch

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T vng: ch Kinh doanh


Its true that every great entrepreneur is first and foremost a designer. The greatest thing
(Steve) Jobs designed was his business. Apple imagined and executed definite multi-year
plans to create new products and distribute them effectively. Ever since he started Apple in
1976, Jobs saw that you can change the world through careful planning, not by listening to
focus group feedback or copying others successes.
(Zero to One by Peter Thiel)

Bn dch: Trn ht tt c, mi mt doanh nhn trc tin l mt thit k. Thit k v i


nht ca Steve Jobs chnh l doanh nghip ca ng y. Apple tng tng v thc
hin nhng k hoch chc chn, r rng v di hi ko di nhiu nm sng to ra
nhng sn phm mi v phn phi nhng sn phm mt cch hiu qu. K t khi
sng lp Apple vo nm 1976, Jobs thy rng bn c th thay i th gii thng qua
vic lp k hoch tht cn thn, ch khng phi bng vic ngi nghe nhng phn hi t
focus group [nhm nh khch hng c la chn phng vn ly kin v sn phm hay
dch v] hay sao chp t thnh cng ca ngi khc.

first and foremost: trn ht, trn tt c | cm ny c s dng nh mt trng t


to execute a plan: thc hin mt k hoch

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T vng: ch S n lc v Thnh tu
"Not only do we overestimate our ability to achieve change, we underestimate the effort it
requires and the toll it will take. When we think about the executive position we plan to
land, we don't foresee the unrelenting stress. We imagine cuddling a cooing baby, but
don't factor in the sleepless nights. Or we daydream about our documentary being
acclaimed at Sundance without considering the toil of producing it. We all dream of victory
celebrations. Few of us fantasize about practicing."
(Reinvent Yourself Psychology Today Magazine)

Chng ta khng ch o tng v kh nng thay i ca bn thn m cn khng nh gi ng mc


nhng n lc cn c thay i cng nh nhng h qu i km khi thay i. Khi chng ta ngh v
chic gh gim c trong tm ngm, chng ta li khng nhn thy trc nhng cng thng v mt mi
khng bao gi bung tha nhng ngi v tr ny. Chng ta ngh n vic cng nng a tr ng
yu nhng chng ta li qun mt nhng m di mt ng chm sc chng. Hoc chng ta m
tng v b phim ti liu ca mnh c ngi ca Lin hoan phim Sundance m khng ngh ngi n
nhng kh nhc c th lm ra n. Ai cng m n nhng ba tic mng thng li, nhng th hi
my ai thc s ngh n vic chm ch luyn tp c c chin thng .

T vng
to overestimate sb/sth: nh gi ai/ci g qu cao
to underestimate sb/sth: nh gi ai/ci g qu thp
the executive position: v tr qun l, gim c
to plan to do sth: c k hoch lm g
to land a job/a position: t c, c c mt cng vic/v tr
to foresee sth: nhn thy trc ci g
the unrelenting stress: stress, cng thng khng bao gi bung tha
imagine sth/doing sth: tng tng n ci g/ vic g
to cuddle sb: cng nng, b bng
to coo: (tr con) bi b tp ni
a cooing baby: a tr bi b tp ni
to factor sth in: tnh n ci g khi lp k hoch
to daydream about sth: m tng n ci g
a documentary: phim ti liu
to be acclaimed for sth/v-ing: c ngi khen v ci g
the toil of doing sth: s cc nhc, vt v khi lm g
a victory celebration: cuc n mng chin thng
few + noun: t
to fantasize about sth: ngh n ci g (hoa m)

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T vng: ch Thnh ph ca bn
Your favourite city to visit (IELTS Speaking Part 2)

Singapore is renowned for its futuristic architecture with a lot of towers and sky-scrapers.
It is also considered the greenest country in the Asia. You know, I was stunned when I
stepped into the Changi airport. It's like they've grown a forest in there! What's more? I
was fascinated by the visit to the Garden by the Bay. What impressed me was the fact that
they bring trees, plants from all far-away corners of the world and put them all in one place.
I was totally amazed.

T vng
be renowned for sth = be famous for sth
the futuristic architecture: kin trc tng lai
a sky-scraper: ta nh chc tri
be stunned = be amazed = be fascinated: b ngc nhin, chong ngp
to step into somewhere: bc chn vo u
Whats more? y l discourse marker bo hiu ngi ni s b sung mt iu g

What impressed me was.: iu gy n tng mnh vi ti l


far-away corners of the world: nhng ngc ngch xa xi trn th gii

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T vng: ch Ngi thn trong gia nh


Your beloved family member (IELTS Speaking Part 2)

Ill talk about my mother. She runs a small family business/shop, to be specific, she owns
a bia hoi shop - selling Vietnamese-style draught beer. She has a warm heart, friendly,
kind to people but I think she has some charisma. She may be a type of soft-spoken
woman but she knows how to negotiate, how to win people's hearts and she know how to
deal with things.

Ti s ni v m ti. M ti l b ch ca mt ca hng nh, c th l mt qun bia hi,


mt loi bia ti ca Vit Nam. M ti l mt ngi rt d gn v tt bng nhng ti ngh
m ti cng c ci uy ring ca mnh. C th b thuc kiu ph n ni nng nh nh
nhng m bit cch ni chuyn, bit tin bit li, bit thu phc lng ngi v bit x l mi
vic.

T vng
run a family business: lm ch doanh nghip gia nh
to be specific: cm t ni, dng c trong c Ni v Vit, vi ngha c th l
draught beer: bia ti
have charisma: c uy
soft-spoken (adj): ni nng nh nh
negotiate: thng thuyt
win heart: thu phc lng ngi
deal with things: gii quyt mi vic

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T vng: ch S thch c nhn (phim nh)


Your favourite movie (IELTS Speaking Part 2)

Let me tell you about a film I watched recently, Matchpoint by Woody Allen, starring Scarlett
Johansson. The beginning is not very interesting/appealing; in fact, the first ten minutes was boring, but
after that, the film waslikemagic, it held me spellbound to the very end.

About the film, it's a complicated relationship between a man and two of his lovers. One he got married
with and became his wife. And another who was desperately in love with him but the affair was totally a
secret.

But there were twists which made the film unpredictable and made me love it. That was when the man
killed his secret lover, he was so consumed by the wealth of his wife's family. But after many twists and
turns, he went through all safe and sound, even when his crime was nearly discovered, he made a
unthinkable escape.

The film maker did a brilliant job in conveying a message of life and luck. Sometimes things happen,
and we need to accept it. It's just a matter of luck orbad luck. Like a line I learned from the film:
moments in a match when the ball hits the top of the net, and for a split second, it can either go forward
or fall back. With a little luck, it goes forward, and you win. Or maybe it doesn't, and you lose.

T vng
Let me tell you about: Hy ti k anh nghe cu chuyn v - y l cch ni rt ph
bin bt u mt ch ni chuyn trong ting Anh
interesting/appealing: hay, th v, hp dn
in fact,/ actually: thc t l - y l cch a thm thng tin c th mt cch t
nhin khi ni
to hold sb spellbound: ht hn ai, khin ai nh b m hoc
to the very end: n tn pht cui cng
a complicated relationship: mt mi quan h phc tp
to have an affair: ngoi tnh
twists: din bin bt ng
to make the film unpredictable: khin b phim khng th on trc c
to make me love it: khin ti yu n
twists and turns: nhng din bin bt ng
to go through all safe and sound: vt qua tt c bnh an v s
to do a brilliant job: lm mt vic g xut sc
to convey a message of life and luck: truyn thng ip v cuc sng v s may mn
Sometimes things happen we need to accept it: i khi c chuyn n chuyn kia xy ra,
chng ta cn phi hc cch chp nhn.
It's just a matter of luck orbad luck. Ch l vn may hay khng may m thi.
a line: mt dng, mt on thoi trong phim
to hit the top of the net: chm vo nh ca tm li (trong qun vt)
for a split second: cha y mt giy (y l cch ni ch vic g xy ra qu nhanh)
to go forward or fall back: ri v pha trc hay ri li pha sau

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T vng: ch S nghip thnh cng


Could you name some of the things that define a successful career? (IELTS Speaking Part
3)

"For me, three important things to define a successful career are: a. inspiration from your
job, b. a good salary, c. appreciation from both bosses and line managees. Money is
important because it defines who you are and how further you can go in your career. How
much you make is important but don't let it consume you."

things/elements to define a successful career: nhng th gip nh ngha (th no) l


mt s nghip thnh cng
a,b,c: y l cch lit k c th dng khi ni vi tc dng to ra th t v s mch lc
colleagues, co-workers: y l nhng t khc nhau u c th dng ch ng
nghip
how much a person makes: lm ra bao nhiu tin
do not let it consume you: ng tin lm m mt bn

Cu hi trn page: Hnh nh ad vit ln line managers thnh line managees phi khng?
M line managers ngha g g ?

IELTS Kungfu tr li: , line managee l nhn vin em , line manager l sp - y, sp


th c dng l bosses ri. Thc ra t line managees cng khng c chnh thng
lm trong t in, nhng cc bc Ty (ngi Anh) trong c quan anh dng sut ngy nn
anh b nhim.

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T vng: ch Cun sch bn c


One book you have read (a bad one)

Sau y l cc cch din t hay m n gin ni v mt cun sch d, rt hu ch


nu c dp gp cu hi lin quan trong bi thi IELTS Speaking.

This book is so badly written that it's actually funny! (cu trc so adj that c s dng
din t ngha qun mc m. cun sch d n mc n tr nn nc ci)

Oh my, what a blow to feminism this garbage of a book is! (c th thay feminism bng
t khc ni v ni dung ca cun sch; v d: patriotism/literature | a blow to sb/sth: mt
c m vo mt ai, vo ci g)

I was bored to death. (Ti chn mun cht)

After reading that thing that calls itself a book, I felt compelled to write about my utter
disappointment. (feel + adj/past participle | ti cm thy cn phi vit v ni tht vng
cc ca mnh feel compelled to do sth: thy rt cn phi lm g)

It was a relief to go back to some proper literature, feeling saddened, cheapened,


almost used, by having read it. (feel saddened, cheapened, almost used: cm thy bun
b, b coi r v gn nh b li dng)

If I ever meet this author then I would like my 2.99 back.

And I hope that she will NEVER pick up another pen and put it to paper.

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T vng: ch Bi hc cuc sng


The most important life lesson Ive have learnt is
value today for what you have and for the opportunities it brings. Now is more precious
than you know and the future is less certain than you imagine.

My biggest regret is
that I was a little too focused and serious when I was a university student. If I had my
time again I would work a touch less, play a touch more, and been more educated as a
result.

Bn dch
Bi hc cuc sng quan trng nht ti hc c l....
.....hy trn trng ngy hm nay v nhng g bn c v nhng c hi n mang n. Hin
ti qu gi hn bn ngh rt nhiu cn tng lai th t chc chn hn rt nhiu nhng g
bn tng tng.

iu ti hi tic nht l....


....ti qu mi m v "nghim trng" khi cn l sinh vin i hc. Nu c lm li, ti
s lm t i mt cht, chi nhiu hn mt cht v chung cuc l s gii hn c rt nhiu
cht.

Lu : cm "work a touch less, play a touch more" ph hp vi Speaking hn l Writing


nh.

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T vng: ch Chnh ph v Qun tr cng


y l nhng t vng c th dng x l Task 2 di y.

Economic progress is one way to measure a country's success. What other factors do you
think should be concerned when measure the success of a country? In these factors,
which one is the most important?

government
chnh ph, tuyt i khng c thiu ch n

corporate governance
cng tc iu hnh doanh nghip

governance
nu khng c g pha trc th governance thng c hiu l qun l nh nc

a corrupt official
mt quan chc tham nhng, tha ha [corrupt y l tnh t]

a corrupt system
mt h thng tham nhng

corruption
tnh trng tham nhng

a corruption-free system
h thng khng c tham nhng

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Tuyn tp
Bi mu theo
ch

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Bi mu: ch Qung co trc tuyn

bi: Today many people using the Internet can see advertisements that reflect their
personal interests. Do the advantages of these personalised advertising outweigh the
disadvantages?

Phn tch : cu hi c t ra l "liu nhng thun li c ln hn nhng bt li" th


th sinh cn tr li ng v r cu hi ny ngay t m bi.

Hy lu rng, nu bn nhn thy ny m li my mc tr li l "I think the trend has


both pros and cons" th... hng vic y nh. n gin l bi yu cu so snh mt li
v hi ch khng ch l phn tch c hai.

Chng ta hy xem cch on vit di y x l m bi v mt on thn bi.

Internet users can now see online advertisements which match their personal interests in
different ways. I believe the benefits of this trend are outstripped by its potential harms.

..

However, these advantages are eclipsed by foreseeable disadvantages. Firstly, there is a


very thin dividing line between targeted advertising and spamming. For instance, in
Vietnam today, if a person searches online for a specific apartment to buy, chances are
pop-up advertisements will appear in bulk to advertise other apartments which he or she
does not even want. In this case, users time is wasted and so is advertisers money. More
importantly, online consumers run the risk of damaging their health when buying and using
unreliable health-related products (e.g. diet pills or weight loss drugs) that they find online
via targeted advertising. Finally, children may be exposed to online advertisements which
match their personal interests rather than their age. For example, online games packed
with violence or sexual content can find their way to childrens computer screens only
because games were listed among their interests.

Hy ch nhng t ni to s ngn cch v bo hiu mt mi trong thn bi. y,


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bi vit ni rng bt li nhiu hn, v vy, on vit v bt li c b cc lm thn bi 2


to th n by. C th hn, thn bi 1 s ni v nhng kha cnh c li, sau ,
thn bi 2 s trnh by nhng kha cnh bt li v tn nhng kha cnh ny ln.

Bn dch
Ngi s dng Internet ngy nay c th nhn thy nhng qung co trc tuyn nh trng
s thch v nhng mi quan tm c nhn ca mnh theo nhiu cch khc nhau. Ti tin
rng nhng thun li m xu hng ny mang khng l g so vi nhng bt li c th c.

Mc d vy, nhng thun li (ni trong Thn bi 1) b lu m trc nhng bt cp c th


thy trc. Trc tin, ch c mt ranh gii rt mng manh gia qung co mc tiu v
"di bom" ngi s dng. V d, Vit Nam ngy nay, nu mt ngi tm kim trn mng
mt cn h mua, rt c th sau nhng qung co pop-up s xut hin hng lot
qung co cho nhng cn h khc m ngi thm ch khng c nhu cu. Trong trng
hp ny, thi gian ca ngi dng b lng ph ( xem nhng qung co v b) v tt
nhin, c tin bc ca doanh nghip chi cho qung co cng b lng ph. Quan trng hn,
ngi tiu dng trc tuyn c nguy c tn hi sc khe ca mnh khi mua v s dng
nhng mt hng dnh cho sc khe tri ni trn mng m h thy c thng qua loi
hnh qung co mc tiu ny. (v d: vin ung dnh cho ngi n king hay thuc gim
bo). Cui cng, tr em c th tr thnh khn gi bt c d ca nhng qung co trc
tuyn ph hp vi s thch hn l la tui ca chng. V d, game online trn ngp cnh
nng hay ni dung bo lc c th tm ng n vi mn hnh con tr ch bi mt l do:
a tr khai u trn mng rng, games (ni chung) l mt trong nhng s thch v
mi quan tm ca chng.

T vng
Internet users: ngi s dng internet
online advertisements: qung co trc tuyn
to match their personal interests: ph hp, nh trng s thch v mi quan tm ca c
nhn
the benefits of this trend are outstripped by its potential harms = these advantages are
eclipsed by foreseeable disadvantages: li bt cp hi | sth outstrip/eclipse sth: ci g ln
t ci g | sth be outstripped/eclipsed by sth: ci g b ln t bi ci g
there is a very thin dividing line between targeted advertising and spamming: c mt
ranh gii mong manh gia qung co mc tiu v "di bom" ngi s dng
a specific apartment to buy: mt cn h c th mua
chances are that... = it is likely that...: c nhiu kh nng l (ng t mnh sau
dng thi tng lai)
pop-up advertisements: qung co pop-up
to appear: xut hin
in bulk: vi s lng ln
...and so is advertisers money: v c tin ca doanh nghip b tin qung co cng
vy (cu trc o ng)
More importantly, : t ni, h l rng "sau y ti s ni iu cn quan trng hn"
online consumers: khch hng online
to run the risk of damaging their health: c nguy c lm hi sc khe ca h
unreliable health-related products: nhng sn phm lin quan n sc khe khng
ng tin cy
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diet pills: thuc vin dnh cho ngi n king


weight loss drugs: thuc gim cn
via sth: thng qua ci g, vic g
targeted advertising: qung co mc tiu
to be exposed to sth: b phi ra, tip xc vi ci g
to match their personal interests rather than their age: ph hp vi s thch c nhn
hn l la tui
online games packed with violence or sexual content = online games which are packed
with...: nhng tr chi online y ry bo lc v cnh nng
to find their way to childrens computer screens: tm ng n vi mn hnh vi tnh
ca con tr
games were listed among their interests: game c lit k l mt trong nhng s
thch ca chng

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Bi mu: ch Chnh ph min ph gio dc ph thng

Task 2: Childrens education is expensive. In some countries, the government pay some of
or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Body 2
Despite above considerations, I am convinced that supporting families in paying for their
children' education offers more good than bad. Firstly, this will promote the education-for-
all agenda and improve equality among school children. To explain, since many families
cannot afford to pay for their children's schooling, their children may not be able to go to
school without government's financial support. This leads to an inequality in access to
basic education that children have to experience from an early age. Furthermore,
governments' subsidies for children's education herald their far-sighted vision when they
invest in future generations. Since many talents can come from a poor background,
missing the opportunity to get them to school equals a missed opportunity to nurture a
talent who can make a great contribution to the country later on.

Bn dch
Mc d c nhng cn nhc nh trn, ti vn tin rng vic h tr cho cc gia nh chi tr
chi ph gio dc dnh cho tr em mang li nhiu li ch hn. Trc tin, vic lm ny s
gip thc y chng trnh "gio dc cho mi ngi" v tng cng bnh ng gia cc
i tng hc sinh. gii thch r hn, do nhiu gia nh khng c ti chnh cho
con n trng, con ci h c th s khng c i hc m thiu i s h tr ti chnh
ca chnh ph. iu ny dn n s bt bnh ng trong tip cn vi gio dc c bn m
nhng a tr phi nm tri ngay t khi cn nh. Hn na, cc ngun h tr ca chnh
ph cho gio dc tr em cho thy tm nhn xa ca h bi lm nh vy, chnh ph u
t vo cc th h tng lai. Do nhiu ti nng c th xut thn t nhng gia cnh ngho
kh, vic mt i c hi a nhng ti nng (trin vng) n trng ng ngha vi mt
c hi b b l nui dng mt ti nng m c th cng hin cho t nc v sau.

T vng
to offer more good than bad: mang li nhiu li ch hn
the education-for-all agenda : chng trnh gio dc dnh cho tt c mi ngi
to afford to pay: iu kin chi tr cho ci g
an inequality in access to basic education: s bt cng trong tip cn gio dc c bn
to experience sth from an early age: tri nghim iu g t lc cn nh

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to herald ones far-sighted vision: h l mt tm nhn rng ln ca ai


to invest in future generations: u t cho cc th h tng lai
a poor background: mt hon cnh/gia cnh/xut thn ngho kh
to get sb to school: a ai n trng
to equal sth: tng ng vi, ng ngha vi
a missed opportunity: mt c hi b b l
to nurture a talent: nui dng mt ti nng
later on (trng ng): sau ny, v sau

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Bi mu: ch Gio dc gii tnh

Task 2: Some people think that sex education should be taught to primary school children
while others believe it is not advisable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Phn tch : c hai yu cu trong bao gm phn tch c hai lung kin v nu
kin ca bn. Theo , mt hng gii quyt l vit hai on thn bi, mi on tho lun
mt lung kin, kin ca ngi vit s c lng vo kt lun.

Di y l on vit mu body 2 ca bi essay ny.


However, others also have reasons to believe that sex education should be included in the
primary school programme/curriculum. From an educators perspective, sex education is
no different from other academic subjects as it also provides the learner with necessary
knowledge. Since a child is taught to understand the bodies of many other species, he or
she should be given an equal chance to know their own bodies better. Furthermore, as
child molestation/sexual abuse becomes increasingly popular, it would be best if children
are taught to protect themselves. Taking this into account, self-defense against sexual
assault can be an element of sex education if it is integrated into the primary school
curriculum.

Bn dch
Mc d vy, nhiu ngi khc c l do tin rng cn c gio dc gii tnh trong chng trnh ging
dy bc tiu hc. T gc nhn gio dc, gio dc gii tnh khng c g khc bit so vi cc mn hc
khc trong nh trng khi n cung cp cho ngi hc kin thc cn thit. a tr c dy hiu v
c th ca rt nhiu loi khc, v vy chng cng cn c c hi bnh ng hiu chnh c th ca
mnh hn. Hn na, khi nn lm dng tnh dc tr em tr nn ngy mt ph bin, s l tt nht nu
tr em c dy bo v chnh mnh. Cn nhc v iu ny, ni dung ging dy v phng v bn
thn chng li tn cng tnh dc c th l mt yu t ca gio dc gii tnh nu mn hc ny c tch
hp trong chng trnh tiu hc.

T vng
to be included in sth | include sth in sth/doing sth

[+ -ing verb] Your responsibilities will include making appointments on my behalf. (Trch nhim ca
em bao gm thay mt anh ln lch hn.)

Do you consider including him in the guest list? (My c tnh cho n vo danh sch khch mi)

school programme/curriculum/syllabus: chng trnh, gio trnh hc trong trng

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From an educators perspective, | From a demographic/business/consumer perspective,


Cm trn c s dng vi ngha T gc ngi lm gio dc/dn s/kinh doanh/ngi tiu dng
m ni,. Cm ny thng ng u cu, ngn cch vi mnh pha sau bng du phy. C th thay
vo trc perspective kh linh hot, tuy nhin, hy check Google xem t nh thay c ph hp hay
khng.

be no different from: thay v dng not, ngi ta dng no khi mun gia tng hm nhn mnh

the learner = the student

since = because

a species | species (plural): y l danh t c bit, dng thc s t v s nhiu ging ht nhau

be given an equal chance/opportunity: c trao cho mt c hi bnh ng

to know something better: hiu vn g tt hn

child molestation/sexual abuse/ sexual harassment: lm dng tnh dc tr em

to be increasingly popular: tr nn ngy cng ni ting, ph bin hn

Taking this into account, | Considering this, : cm ny c dng tng kt li nhng g ni vi


ngha V nhng iu va trnh by, Xem xt kha cnh , cho nn

self-defense against sexual assault: t phng v chng li tn cng tnh dc

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Bi mu: ch Di di doanh nghip ra khi thnh ph


13.06.2015: With many problems of transport and accommodation in cities, some
governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas.Do you think the
advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

17.04.2014: In many countries, the government is encouraging industries and


businesses to move out of large cities into regional areas. Do you think the advantages of
the development outweigh the disadvantages? (17 August 2014)

Vit mu mt on thn bi
Enabled by highways/superhighways and public transport, employees of companies and
industries can avoid jams commuting to work while more green space can be created in
cities. More importantly, ports and main arteries which are often located nearer to the
outskirts of cities; therefore, the relocation helps boost business productivity because of
the eased process of supply and delivery. Last but not least, regional areas offer a
significantly larger space for building clusters and hubs. For example, in India, giant IT
service companies cluster in Bangalore outskirts to create their own Silicon Valley, more
spacious, better-linked for business.

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Bi mu: ch Quc gia ngho

bi: Some people think that being born to a poor country is a bad luck while others
believe that it only helps fuel ones aspirations to succeed. Discuss both views and give
your opinion.

Trong bi mu ch Gio dc gii tnh, chng ta xem xt mt cch trin khai bi


vit cho dng discuss both views and give your opinion; theo , th sinh c th dnh
mi on thn bi cho mt lung kin, cn kin c nhn nu trong kt lun. Bi ny s
trnh by mt hng khc gii quyt dng discuss both views and give your opinion.

Theo hng gii quyt ny, kin ca ngi vit trng vi mt trong hai lung kin c
sn trong . Theo , n s c trnh by ngay trong mt on thn bi; hy lu rng,
on thn bi ny c trng lng hn v c s ng ca ngi vit, v th, hy t n
sau lung kin th nht to th n by.

However, I believe that poverty only makes people stronger. To begin with, poor people are
often left with no choice but to fight, be it a fight for hope or, simply, food. While unfortunate
people in rich countries can live on social security benefits, citizens of poorer countries
often have to work harder to survive. Furthermore, endless struggles can teach people
survival lessons that they normally do not find anywhere else. Japan offers an excellent
example of how poverty and sufferings were turned into dreams and aspirations when the
Japanese magically transformed their country into a superpower after the Second World
War. Last but not least, living in a poorer country, people are constantly required to change
and adapt as change and adaptability are exactly what it needs to get them out of poverty.
In contrast, living in a well developed society, people may feel complacent and less
motivated to strive for success.

Bn dch
Mc d vy, ti tin rng ngho i ch khin cho ngi ta thm mnh m m thi. Trc
tin, ngi ngho thng chng c la chn no khc ngoi vic phi u tranh vn
ln, c th l cuc tranh u gi nim hy vng v cng c th l cuc tranh u
n thun v ming cm manh o. Trong khi ngi dn km may mn nhng nc giu
c th sng da vo phc li x hi th cng dn t cc quc gia ngho thng phi n
lc hn tn ti. Hn na, nhng cuc u tranh khng dt c th dy cho ngi ta
nhng bi hc sinh tn - nhng bi hc h s khng th tm kim c bt c ni u.
Nht Bn mang li mt v d tuyt vi v cch i ngho v c cc c bin thnh
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m c v kht vng nh th no, khi ngi dn Nht Bn bin i thn k t nc


ca mnh thnh mt quc gia siu cng sau i chin Th gii th Hai. Cui cng, sng
trong mt nc ngho, con ngi ta thng xuyn phi thay i v thch nghi, bi v s
thay i v kh nng thch nghi chnh l iu cn thit a h ra khi ci ngho.
Ngc li, sng trong mt x hi pht trin ton din, ngi ta c th cm thy bng
lng v t c ng lc vn n thnh cng hn.

T vng
to make sb stronger: khin ai tr nn mnh m hn.
to begin with, : dng cm t ny khi mun bt u u tin, ng qun ch with
to leave sb with hardly any choice but to do sth | to leave sb no choice but to do sth | to
be left with no choice but to do sth: ai khng c la chn no khc ngoi
be it a fight for hope or, simply, food = whether it is a fght for hope or food: cu trc be
+it + sth rt hay khi din t d n c l A hay hoc
to live on social security benefits: sng nh phc li x hi
endless struggles: nhng cuc tranh u khng ngng ngh/bt tn
survival lessons: nhng bi hc sng st/tn ti
to offer an excellent example: mang li mt v d tuyt vi
sufferings: nhng kh au
to turn sth into dreams and aspirations: bin ci g thnh kh au v m c
the Japanese magically transformed their country into a superpower: ngi Nht Bn
bin i t nc mnh mt cch thn k thnh mt quc gia siu cng
constantly (adv): lin tc
to require sb to do sth | sb be required to do sth: yu cu ai lm g
to adapt to | adaptability: thch nghi | s thch nghi
what it needs to get them out of poverty: y it khng m ch ai/ci g, n n thun ch
l ch ng gi | to get sth out of sth: cu ai khi ci g
a well developed society: mt x hi pht trin y
feel/be complacent: cm gic t mn
less motivated to strive for success: [cm thy] t c ng lc vn ln thnh cng

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Bi mu: ch Vertical or Horizontal City


Some people think that it is best to live in a vertical city (mean that people work and live in
high buildings) while others think a horizontal city is better. Discuss both view and give
your opinion.

A sample answer (275 words)


While many believe in vertical cities as the best choice for urban living, others think that a
city which is horizontally developed is much better. Although I agree with the latter position,
this essay will analyse both views.

There are reasons why many opt for vertical cities. To begin with, they feel a sense of
community when sharing a space with others. Further, many people now prefer living in a
home where everything is laid out on a single floor plan as they see managing an
apartment is less stressful than a house. Finally, many countries simply do not have space
to build horizontal cities. Singapore is a prime example; in this city state, people see high-
rises as an optimal option that marries the needs of both residence and green spaces.

However, I am convinced that horizontal city is better for a number of reasons. Firstly, this
way of urbanisation is more sustainable as it frees people from the stress of living in a
concrete jungle (i.e. a vertical city). Secondly, developing a horizontal city helps minimise
the level of destruction when a city is hit by manmade or natural disasters such as
September 11 attacks or earthquakes. Thirdly, if megacity and skyscrapers become
nothing but an obsession, it is certainly not a good trend. Environmentally speaking, this
trend poses an immense pressure on the world's increasingly scarce resources when
resources are consumed in massive amounts to power these glass walled buildings, let
alone the greenhouse gas emissions during the building process.

In conclusion, though developing vertical cities is an inevitable trend, I would campaign for
horizontal cities as a sustainable future for urban development.

T vng
opt for: la chn
feel a sense of community: cm gic c b con chm xm
a floor plan: mt bng hoc bn v mt bng
a city state: mt nc nhng nh nh mt thnh ph
a concrete jungle: mt rng b tng
manmade disaster: thm ha do con ngi gy ra
skyscrapers/high-rises: nh chc tri, nh cao tng
environmentally speaking: v phng din mi trng (m ni)
an obsession: s m nh ( y c th dch l cn cung)
to power sb: tip nng lng, cung cp nng lng ( vn hnh)
let alone sth: l cha k n/cha tnh n ci g
campaign for sth: vn ng, ng h cho ci g
glass-walled buildings: nhng cng trnh ph ngoi bng tng knh

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Bi mu: ch Ngn ng quc t


bi: Few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of
others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Phn tch : Vi nhng hi liu y l iu tch cc hay tiu cc, ngi vit hon
ton c th la chn vit 100% tch cc hoc 100% tiu cc.

Tuy nhin, li khuyn l hy vit c mt tt v mt xu v nh vy s pht trin c bi


di hn. Hy nh, vi ny, khng cn ni tt nhiu hn, hay xu nhiu hn.
Pha di cng l bn dch gip bn hiu thng sut.

A sample answer (252 words)


A small number of languages have gained massive/widespread popularity in the world,
namely Chinese, English and Spanish while many others are dying. I believe this trend has
both negative and positive impacts.

Regarding positive effects, as fewer languages are spoken in more countries, international
communication is eased, which helps boost multilateral trade and cultural exchange. Time
for translation and interpretation activities is reduced and misinterpretations can be
avoided. Furthermore, by acquiring languages which are commonly used in business,
science and technology, researchers, academics and entrepreneurs from less developed
countries can accelerate the process of learning from more developed countries. For
example, Singapore and India achieved such incredible growth partly by making English
their official language.

Despite the benefits, this trend has potential drawbacks. It took a country thousands of
years to develop its own language, hence it is sad to see this integral part of a civilisation
disappear. If a Vietnamese person in the future has to resort to translation to understand
literary classics written in their own language, it would be a worst/pessimistic scenario as
they fail their own mother tongue. More importantly, cultural diversity will be lost altogether
with the disappearance of minority languages. Folk songs, for instance, can hardly survive
if future generations are no longer able to read the lyrics and understand their meanings.

In conclusion, though I believe the trend is inevitable in the era of globalisation, every
country needs to have measures in place to protect their cultural identity of which
language is an integral part.

Bn dch
Mt s t cc ngn ng c c s ph bin rng khp [have gained
massive/widespread popularity] trn ton th gii, v d ting Trung, ting Anh v Ty Ban
Nha trong khi nhiu ngn ng ang mt i [while many others are dying]. Ti tin rng xu
hng ny c c nh hng tiu cc v tch cc.

V cc nh hng tch cc, khi mt s t ngn ng c dng nhiu quc gia hn [as
fewer languages are spoken in more countries], qu trnh giao tip quc t tr nn d
dng hn, iu ny gip pht trin thng mi v trao i vn ha a phng
[international communication is eased, which helps boost multilateral trade and cultural
exchange]. Thi gian phin dch c gim i v vic dch sai c th c phng trnh.
Quan trng hn, thng qua vic tip thu cc ngn ng c s dng ph bin trong kinh
doanh, khoa hc v cng ngh [by acquiring languages which are commonly used in

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business, science and technology], cc nh nghin cu, hc gi v doanh nhn t cc


quc gia c trnh pht trin km hn c th tng tc [to accelerate] qu trnh hc tp t
cc quc gia pht trin hn. V d, Singapore v n t c bc pht trin kh
tin [achieved such incredible growth] mt phn nh vic bin ting Anh tr thnh ngn
ng chnh thc ca h [partly by making English their official language].

Mc d c nhng li ch k trn, xu hng ny cng c nhng bt cp tim tng. Mt


quc gia phi mt hng ngn nm pht trin ngn ng ca mnh [It took a country
thousands of years to develop its own language], v vy tht bun khi thy ngn ng - mt
phn khng th tch ri ca bt c nn vn minh no [this integral part of a civilisation]
b mt i. Nu mt ngi Vit Nam trong tng lai li phi nh cy n phin dch [to
resort to translation] mi c th hiu c nhng ng vn kinh in c vit bng chnh
ngn ng ca h th s l mt vin cnh ng bun [it would be a worst/pessimistic
scenario] v chnh ngi Vit u hng ting Vit [as they fail their own mother
tongue]. Quan trng hn, s a dng vn ha s mt i cng vi s bin mt ca cc
ngn ng thiu s [minority languages]. V d, dn ca s kh c th tn ti nu cc th h
tng lai khng th [no longer] c li v hiu ht ngha.

Kt lun, mc d ti tin rng xu hng trn l tt yu trong thi i ton cu ha ngy nay
[the trend is inevitable in the era of globalisation], mi quc gia cn phi c bin php sn
sng [have measures in place] bo v bn sc vn ha ca mnh, m trong ngn
ng l mt phn khng th tch ri [to protect their cultural identity of which language is
an integral part].

Lu : Bn tuyt i khng hc ting Anh bng cch dch t Vit sang Anh - trong bn
dch trn, vic chuyn ng cng c linh hot ha cho va tai ngi c. Nu mun
s dng mt t/cm t, hy dng t in Anh Anh v bt chc cc v d trong .

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Bi mu: ch Xu hng Sng n thn

bi: In recent years, more and more people tend to live individually. What are the
causes of this trend? Does this have a positive or negative effect on society?

A sample answer (291 words)


Many people now choose to live individually, which I believe has only negative impacts on
the society. This essay will present some causes for this phenomenon before analysing the
negative influences.

First, as some traditional values of family and marriage have been lost, many do not see
the point of sharing lives. For example, family gatherings can be a burden rather than a
cherished present that life brings about. Second, many blame the hectic modern life. The
truth is that people today are just too busy to settle down with a family and all sorts of
responsibilities. Last but not least, thanks to the sharing frenzy on social networking sites,
many successful and seemingly happy individuals became much-trumpeted role models of
this lifestyle. As stories of their wonderful life go viral, many simply consider living a single
life a very fashionable choice.

I do not believe this trend is doing any good for the society as it pulls people away from
one another, weakening them psychologically long before they are aware of it. Now that
the concept of having a family fades away, people are more vulnerable than ever as they
have no home to return in times of sickness or hardships. If a person decides to become a
single parent, it is even worse as their child grows up without care and attention from both
parents. Finally, from a demographic perspective, the trend takes a toll on the development
of a countrys population as it slows down the process of producing new generations to
replace the dying or ageing generations.

Although individuals have every right to decide how they want to live their lives, I still
believe in family as a place to form the wholesomeness of a human being.

Bn dch
Hin nay nhiu ngi la chn sng n thn; ti tin rng iu ny ch c tc ng tiu
cc i vi x hi. Bi vit ny s trnh by mt s nguyn nhn cho hin tng ny [this
phenomenon] trc khi phn tch nhng nh hng tiu cc [analyse negative
impacts/influences].

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Trc tin, khi nhiu gi tr truyn thng ca gia nh v hn nhn b mt i [traditional


values of family and marriage have been lost], nhiu ngi khng thy c l do cn
phi chia s cuc sng [do not see the point of sharing lives]. V d, vi nhiu ngi,
nhng cuc t hp gia nh [family gatherings] gi c th l gnh nng hn l mt mn
qu cuc sng ban tng m chng ta cn bit n [a burden rather than a cherished
present that life brings about]. Th hai, nhiu ngi ti cuc sng hin i hi h bn
rn [many blame the hectic modern life]. S thc l ngy nay mi ngi qu bn rn
c th n nh vi chuyn gia nh v loi trch nhim [too busy to settle down with a
family and all sorts of responsibilities]. Cui cng, nh tro lu chia s trn mng x hi
[thanks to the sharing frenzy on social networking sites], nhiu c nhn thnh cng v c
v nh hnh phc [seemingly happy individuals] tr thnh nhng tm gng c ca
tng [much-trumpeted role models] v li sng ny. Khi cu chuyn v cuc sng tuyt vi
ca h lan truyn trn mng [go viral], nhiu ngi ch n gin coi vic sng cuc sng
n thn l mt la chn rt thi thng [consider sth + sth].

Ti khng tin xu hng ny mang li iu g tt p cho x hi [do any good for the
society] khi n ko con ngi ra xa nhau [pull people away from one another], khin h tr
nn yu t hn v tm l [weakening them psychogically] m trc khi h c th nhn ra
iu [long before they are aware of it]. Khi m nim phi c mt gia nh lu m dn,
con ngi s tr nn d tn thng [vulnerable] hn bao gi ht khi h khng c mt mi
m quay v mi khi m au hay hon nn [in times of sickness and hardships]. Nu
mt ngi quyt nh tr thnh b/m n thn [a single parent] th vic cn nguy hi
hn v a tr ln ln s thiu s chm sc v quan tm ca c hai b m. Cui cng, v
phng din dn s m ni [from a demographic perspective], xu hng ny nh hng
xu [take a toll on] n s pht trin ca dn s khi n khin quy trnh sn sinh ra th h
tip ni thay th cho nhng th h ang gi v cht i tr nn chm hn.

Mc d mi c nhn c ton quyn quyt nh [have every right/ all rights to do sth] cch
h mun sng, ti vn tin vo gia nh nh l ni hnh thnh nn s ton vn ca mi
con ngi [the wholesomeness of a human being].

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Bi mu: ch Ngi ni ting (CELEBRITIES)

bi: Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect
on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Phn tch : vi bi ny, ti chn cch vit va ng va khng ng ; tc l ti


tin rng media coverage of celebrities va c nhng mt li ch nht nh li va c
nhng mt bt li. Theo , mt on thn bi s ni v li ch v mt on s ni v bt
li.

Vit mu hai on thn bi

To begin with, almost everyone is attracted to famous people in different ways; within a
family a father may adore Lionel Messi while his daughter is crazy about Lady Gaga, never
wanting to miss any news about the Fame Monster. To some extent, it is acceptable to
glue to the TV box sometimes, watching the star world, if doing so helps one handle the
stress of school work. Further, many celebrities can be a source of inspiration for the
children as they exemplify remarkable efforts in life and work. Finally, celebrities have
seemingly become a popular topic in childrens conversations; failing to get updated can
mean failing to mix with other guys.

But the advantages as presented above sound trivial, compared with the disadvantages.
Everyone is given an equal share of time to spend per day; if a child spends more
watching news about celebrities, he or she will inevitably/unavoidably spend less doing
exercises and reading books. More importantly, celebrities-related news is often packed
with drugs, sex, other bad habits, which hardly/barely does any good for the children. Last
but not least, as they watch stars squander money in what seems to be an easy life, the
immature souls can be lured to risk everything to do the same. The Idols series provides a
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very interesting example of how young people with zero singing talent are manipulated in
such a puppet show. In this case, reputation, or to be accurate, bad reputation will haunt
them, possibly for the rest of their lives.

Bn dch
u tin, hu nh ai cng b thu ht [be attracted to] bi nhng ngi ni ting theo
nhng cch khc nhau; v d, trong mt gia nh, b c th hm m [adore] Lionel Messi
trong khi con gi li pht in [be crazy about] v Lady Gaga v khng mun b l [miss]
bt c mt thng tin no v the Fame Monster. mt phm vi no , vic dn mt vo
tivi [glue to] v xem th gii cc ngi sao l vic c th chp nhn c nu nh vic
gip bn tr vt qua sc p bi v [handle the stress of school work]. Hn na, nhiu
ngi sao c th l mt ngun cm hng [a source of inspiration] vi tr em v h l tm
gng [exemplify] v nhng n lc ln trong cuc sng v s nghip. Cui cng, cc ngi
sao dng nh tr thnh mt ch ni chuyn a thch ca bn nh; nu khng cp
nht, chng c th s khng ha nhp [mix with] c vi nhng bn b xung quanh.

Nhng nhng mt li va trnh by trn tr nn chng l g c [be/sound trivial] nu


t bn cnh nhng mt bt li. Ai cng ch c ngn y thi gian s dng mi ngy [be
given an equal share of time]; nu a tr dng nhiu thi gian hn xem tin tc v cc
ngi sao, ng nhin, chng s c t thi gian hn tp th dc v c sch. Quan
trng hn, cc tin tc lin quan n ngi sao [celebrities-related news] thng c y ni
dung [be packed with] v ma ty, tnh dc, v nhng thi quen xu khc nhng th
khng c g tt p vi bn tr. Cui cng, nu chng nhn nhng ngi sao vung tin
[squander money] trong mt cuc sng tng nh l d dng y [what seems to be an
easy life], nhng tm hn non nt [immature souls] ny c th b hp dn m mo him
mi th bt chc. Series chng trnh Thn tng m nhc l mt v d sinh ng
cho vic nhng ngi tr hon ton khng c ti nng b s dng/git dy nh nhng ch
ri trong v kch [be manipulated in a puppet show]. Trong trng hp ny, danh ting,
hay ng hn l, tai ting s m nh tr nh [haunt sb] cho n cui cuc i.

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Bi mu: ch Ngi gi
bi: Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that
people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives.

In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

Vit mu mt on Thn bi: on ny ni v nhng li ch ca vic ngi gi sng vui


sng khe.

As the elderly manage to live healthy lives, they will not become a burden on the social
welfare system. Firstly, it releases the pressure which would otherwise be put on a nations
health care system. More importantly, senior citizens are regarded as the living legacy of
wisdom and experience; therefore, the longer and healthier they live, the more they can
pass on to younger generations. In the medical profession, for example, a seasoned
surgical doctor would have a world of knowledge to share with younger colleagues though
he or she may not physically conduct operations after a certain age. Last but not least,
longer and healthier lives of the old people are the most powerful evidence of healthy
lifestyle, which helps inspire young people to do the same. To be more specific, in a family
of heavy drinker and chain smoker, their offspring could find it hard not to drink and smoke
as they may feel it natural to copy those bad habits. The opposite holds true to families of
which older generations set a better example.

Bn dch
Nu ngi gi [the elderly] tip tc sng khe mnh, h s khng tr thnh gnh nng i
vi h thng phc li x hi [a burden on the social welfare system]. Trc tin, vic ny
gip gii phng p lc m nh ra s c t ln h thng chm sc y t ca mt quc
gia [the pressure which would otherwise be put on]. Quan trng hn, ngi gi [senior
citizens] vn c coi l ngun di sn sng [living legacy] v s khn ngoan [wisdom] v
kinh nghim; v th, cng sng lu v khe mnh th h cng c th truyn li nhiu hn
cho cc th h sau [pass on to]. V d, trong ngnh y, mt bc s phu thut lu nm
[seasoned (a): lu nm, giu kinh nghim] s c c mt tri kin thc chia s vi
nhng ng nghip tr hn mc d bn thn h, sau mt tui nht nh, c th khng
cn thc hin cc ca m na [conduct operations]. Cui cng, i sng di hn v khe
mnh hn ca ngi gi l bng chng mnh m nht v li sng lnh mnh [healthy
lifestyles], t truyn cm hng ngi tr hc lm theo. C th, trong mt gia nh c
ngi nghin ru [heavy drinker] hay thuc l [chain smoker], bn tr con c th cm
thy kh khn trnh hc theo [find it hard not to do sth], v chng c th thy tht bnh
thng khi bt chc nhng thi quen xu ny [feel it natural to do sth]. iu ngc li s
ng [the opposite holds true] vi nhng gia nh m trong th h trc l nhng tm
gng tt th h sau noi theo [set a good/great/better/best example].

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Bi mu: ch Ti phm v thnh nin

bi: In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes.
Why is this happening? How should they be punished?

A sample intro + body 1


Juvenile delinquency has increased in many parts of the world. This essay will analyse
several causes for this and present some ways to deal with young offenders.

One of the most important reasons for the phenomenon is that children and teenagers are
now exposed to more bad contents than ever; sex and violence are excessive on
television, video games, films, online and print media. School shootings in the United
States, for example, have been blamed on the lax regulations on possession of personal
weapons. Another reason can be the lack of parental care, which results in a child feeling
lonely, upset and tempted to do something that can win his or her parents attention; in
many cases, doing something bad was sadly a choice. Last but not least, the
surrounding environment plays a very important role in honing a childs behaviour.
Therefore, growing up in a crime-ridden community, a child would find it natural to acquire
bad behaviours they have seen every day.

Bn dch
Ti phm v thnh nin [juvenile delinquency; ngi phm ti v thnh nin juvenile
delinquent] v ang gia tng nhiu ni trn th gii. Bi lun ny s phn tch mt s
nguyn nhn cho hin tng ny v trnh by mt vi cch x l nhng ngi vi phm
tr tui [young offenders].

Mt trong nhng l do quan trng nht cho hin tng ni trn l vic tr em v thanh
thiu nin ngy nay tip xc [be exposed to] vi nhiu ni dung xu hn bao gi ht;
tnh dc v bo lc trn lan [excessive (adj)] trn tivi, tr chi in t, phim nh, trn
mng v trn n phm bo ch. Mt v d tiu biu l nhng v x sng trong trng hc
[school shootings] ti M c li cho s lng lo [lax regulations on] v quy nh
s hu v kh c nhn ti y. Mt l do khc l s thiu thn s quan tm ca b m, kt
qu l a tr cm thy c n, bun chn v cm thy mun lm mt ci g ly li
s ch ca b m [win their parents attention]. V trong nhiu trng hp mt ci g
rt c th l mt vic xu, vi phm php lut. Cui cng, mi trng xung quanh ng
vai tr rt quan trng trong vic hnh thnh thi ca a tr. V th, nu ln ln trong
mt cng ng y ry ti phm [crime-ridden community], a tr c th cm thy rt t
nhin khi tip thu nhng hnh vi xu [acquire bad behaviours] m chng nhn thy hng
ngy.

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Bonus: B kp 9 im Listening
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chnh v lo qu, m th sinh s lc ra ngoi dng chy ca m thanh, v s dn n tnh
trng v hng lot khi bi thi c chy bng bng khng thng tic."

Kt lun l, ai khi bt u nghe ting Anh cng s cht vt (nhng chu nh c hc


ting Anh bi bn t b s khng gp vn ny) - nhng khi vt qua c th ai
cng s c th chia s nhng b kp ring ca mnh. Bn c b kp no hay, hy chia s
qua mc comments hoc inbox trn trang Facebook Ti c 9 im Vit IELTS nh.

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Bonus: Bn tiu ch cho im IELTS Speaking


(Must read)
Mt trong nhng c im u vit nht ca IELTS l s minh bch v thng tin, n nh
v format, linh hot trong cch ra v cng khai v tiu ch cho im. c bit, trong hai
k nng Vit v Ni, vic cng khai cc tiu ch cho im gip cho mi th sinh IELTS c
th t lm gim kho phn thi ca chnh mnh bng cch s dng Public band
descriptors.

Theo ti, vic nghin ngm v hc thuc Public band descriptors ca thang im mnh
m c l vic u tin cn phi lm. Nhng hu ht nhng th sinh ti gp u
cha coi trng vic ny ng mc.

V vy, li khuyn l hy in Public band descriptors ra, mang theo mnh nh mt l ba h


mnh - mi th mnh ni, mi iu mnh vit u i chiu vo xem con ng ca
mnh cn bao xa. Di y l IELTS Speaking Public band descriptors.

http://www.ukeducation.jp/documents/IELTS_Speaking_Band_Descriptors.pdf

Di y l bn dch Band Descriptors tng tiu ch cho band im 8, band im k vng


ca hu ht cc bn khi thi IELTS.

Fluency & Coherence (Tri chy v Mch lc) | Band 8


Ni tri chy vi ch mt i ch ni lp hoc sa iu mun ni; nu c ngn ng th
cng thng lin quan ti ni dung mun ni, rt him khi ngc ng v phi tm t

Tr li cu hi ca mch lc v hp l

Gii thch thm: tr li thng vo cu hi, cc tr li u lin quan, khng b tha no,
v d hp l

Lexical Resource (Vn t vng) | Band 8


S dng vn t vng phong ph mt cch linh hot v sn sng chuyn ti ngha
chnh xc

S dng nhng t vng t ph bin hn v mang tnh cht thnh ng mt cch kho lo,

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c i ch dng khng chnh xc

T vn thm: vic s dng t vng t ph bin hn s c th tin b nhanh thng qua


vic nghe v c hng ngy. Hy lu : d t vng t ph bin hn th cng phi tun theo
quy tc CHC CHN 100% v ng php, pht m v cch dng. V trong qu trnh t
hc, hy np cho mnh nhng t vng t ph bin nhng th v v gn gi vi ngi Vit,
hay v chm chm hc t qu l. n gin l hc t qu l thng s kh nh v d qun.

S dng paraphrase hiu qu | Gii thch thm: Paraphrase n gin l din t mt


bng nhiu cch - n s gip mnh khng b lp li khi ni.

Grammatical range and accuracy (S phong ph v chnh xc v cu trc ng php)


| Band 8
S dng phong ph cc cu trc ng php mt cch linh hot | T vn thm: mt s cu
trc cu s rt hu ch vi ngi hc Vit Nam v s gip to ra nhng cu phc nhng
khng qu phc tp - hy hc v s dng thun thc. V d cc mu cu sau: SVO,
which...; SVO while SVO (din t s tng phn)]

Cc cu s dng hu nh khng c li vi ch i ch khng ph hp hoc nhng li


khng nghim trng

Pronunciation (Pht m) | Band 8


S dng phong ph v thun thc cc c im pht m trong ting Anh [trng m, m
cui, ng m trong cu, ngt ngh]

Vic pht m ng din ra n nh v bn vng, ch i ch khng chnh xc

Pht m gip ngi c hiu ni dung d dng, ting m hu nh khng nh hng


ti s r rng ca cu tr li.

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Bonus: Luyn IELTS Listening & Speaking qua phim


Bi vit di y c hai ngi sao. Ngi sao s 1 hng dn cch luyn kh nng Ni qua
vic trau di vn t vng bng cch xem phim c ph ; cn ngi sao s 2 hng dn
cch luyn kh nng Nghe bng vic xem phim khng ph .

Xem phim (c ph ): mc ch ca hot ng ny l bn thng thc b phim hay,


cm nhn ting Anh mt cch t nhin nht vhc Speaking.

Khi xem xong phim, ghi li mt vi cm din t hay, m li on xem ngi ta ni ng


iu th no m bt chc theo. Tuy nhin, hy nh mc ch l xem phim n trc,
hc ni n sau. ng c va xem va ghi chp l hng ht xi ch y nh.

Xem phim (khng ph ): mc ch l luyn tai v hiu mt chn l quan trng


nghe gii. Chn l l g?

Nghe c v hi khc thng, nhng chn l c gi gn trong cu sau: Nu mun


nghe tt, bn cn phi lm sao khi bn khng nghe c m vn hiumi gi l ti.

Th l th no? n gin l c phim chy, khng nghe c cngc cho n chy


dn dn, bn s hnh thnh mt phn x vng: l phn x chai tai khi i tai bn quen
vi cc chui m thanh ting Anh. Phn x ny gip xa tan cm gic hi hp, cn tr ln
nht trong vic master k nng Nghe trong ting Anh.

Rt nhiu hc vin chia s cm xc chung rng, hi u hc nghe, a no chng hi


hp mi khi on bng c khi ng. Thn hn nt thn tnh, cng hi hp, cng cht.
Ci hay ca phim l xem hnh cng on c ni dung; v vy, hy t tin mkhi
khng nghe c nh, v cng l chuyn rt bnh thng thi.

Di y l mt s b phim hay v c ni dung v ting Anh m ti tm thi ghi nh c:


The talented Mr.Ripley, Little Miss Sunshine, Good Fellas, The GodFather, Horrible
Bosses, Four weddings and a Funeral, Burnt.

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Bonus: B kp s dng ti liu gii ting Anh


Nhiu ti liu cha hn gii, t ti liu cha hn thit thi.

Ti c quan im kh cng nhc v vn hc v thc hnh ting Anh: trong thi i


bng n thng tin hin nay, sch truyn ting Anh, bo ch ting Anh, cc knh ting Anh
trn YouTube, m nhc, phim nh l t sch khng l v cuc sng.

Nu bn c sut ngy download ebooks v my m khng gi ra thc hnh, hay nu


bn hc IELTS m xem YouTube khng ni, khng bit cch search nhc mi nghe,
khng c ng lc xem phim ting Anh (v khng hiu) th vic hc ting Anh s rt chn
khi khng c s dng trong i sng ca bn.

V th t nh n gi, ti lun i trung thnh mt hng i khng tn km, kh nhn nh


v li v cng hiu qu nh sau:

"Sch v khng cn nhiu nhng dng th phi dng cho nt, bt n phi phc v mnh.
V vi mi ngun ti liu, ti li xc nh mt mc tiu r rng trong vic s dng n."

Sau y l mt s v d v phng php hc ny.

B sch Cambridge IELTS series: mc ch l rn luyn tinh thn vng vng, lm bi


trong iu kin i thi v t mnh hiu c cc loi by trong bi Listening & Reading.

B sch First Certificate ca Cambridge: mc ch l luyn phn vit li cu, hc


nhng cu trc kh, ng dng khi i lm Writing.

Sch gio khoa trn lp: vi nhng sch hc trong gio trnh, ti lun xc nh phi
thuc nh cho ri, v n l ci c bn nht, ng php c bn nht, nn tng chc chn
nht. Text books m cha lm rt ro th ng c down nhng ci khc v lm g, rc nh.

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Bonus: Du hc hay Khng Du hc


Trn trang Facebook Ti c 9 im Vit IELTS, ti nhn c rt nhiu th t cc bn
c mc tiu hc ting Anh du hc. Trong , nhiu bn tm s v IELTS v v du hc
nh mt cnh ca cu ri, gii thot cc bn khi nhng b tc trong cng vic, hc tp
hay cuc sng hin ti.

L ngi tng c thi gian du hc, tng c nhng tm s cng gn ging nh vy,
ti mun chia s nhng kinh nghim ca mnh. Nhng kinh nghim ny s gip cc bn
c thi ng trc khi ln ng du hc, c c khong thi gian tuyt vi nht
v trnh nhng o tng c hi.

1. Trong thi bui "x hi ha" du hc hin nay, du hc hon ton khng ha hn s mang
li cho bn c hi cng vic hay mc lng cao hn. Trn thc t, c nhiu tm gng
thnh cng ti Vit Nam m khng h c c hi c ra nc ngoi hc tp; ngc li,
rt nhiu bn tr du hc v khng th ti ha nhp vo mi trng lm vic trong nc.
T hn l h tr nn chn nn, mt phng hng v b lc lng trong nhp sng hi h
bnh thng.

2. X hi mnh c ci g, x hi Ty c ci . Ci hng v n cng hng v hn; nhng ci


t hi n cng c th cn t hi hn. V th, nu xc nh du hc trnh "rc" th ti e rng
bn sai ngay t bc ban u ri.

3. Hc bng v nhng ngi trao hc bng lun tm kim nhng ngi bn lnh v cng
trn nhit huyt. Nhng ngi m...nu b tc...h s "tm bng c" cch vt qua
n.

Chng ai li trao cho bn mt c hi qu gi, mt ng tin, v bn cn "o tu khi cuc


sng thc ti c." V...bit u, sang tri Ty sung sng, s c mt ngy p tri, bn
li...chn, v li...mun b i th sao.

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4. IELTS ch l mt con s - khng hn, khng km. Nhiu ngi ch va im IELTS


np h s, nhng vn c trao hc bng. Ci quan trng l h c thnh tch n
tng, h c nhng cu chuyn k v nhng k hoch r rng thc hin. M
nhng th p cho vo h s xin hc bng y, tuyt nhin khng th c nu bn ch
"tu luyn IELTS," ch "chm ch n sch" m thi.

5. Nhng thnh tch v cu chuyn n tng phi n t vic bn thc s tham gia vo
cng vic v dn thn vo cuc sng. Khi , bn s ln ln t nhng va vp, s nui
dng c nim t ho t nhng thnh cng v, quan trng hn, bn s thc s cng
hin cho s pht trin ca cng ng. V nhng tri nghim v vn sng l ti sn qu
gi hc bng t tm n bn.

6. Sng u cng l Sng - v th, ng tr hon vic "sng" cho ti ngy sang "bn,"
nh. C tr ngi , fight it (vt qua n). Kh khn , fight it. n gin vy thi, th nh,
hy nh, hy du hc thc s l mt tri nghim tuyt vi ca bn, thay v ch l mt
cnh ca thot him.

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