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    The document discusses car ownership rates in three countries - Brazil, India, and Japan - from 1920 to 1980 based on a line graph. [1] Japan saw a dramatic rise in car ownership between 1930 and 1940 from 115 to 300, which was higher than the other two countries. [2] Car ownership in Japan fluctuated between 1940 and 1960 before gradually declining to 200 by 1970-1980. [3] In contrast, car ownership increased slightly in India over the same period and remained stable at 280 by the late years, while Brazil saw a steady rise in car ownership from 1950 to 1980 after a rapid decline between 1940 and 1950.

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    The document discusses car ownership rates in three countries - Brazil, India, and Japan - from 1920 to 1980 based on a line graph. [1] Japan saw a dramatic rise in car ownership between 1930 and 1940 from 115 to 300, which was higher than the other two countries. [2] Car ownership in Japan fluctuated between 1940 and 1960 before gradually declining to 200 by 1970-1980. [3] In contrast, car ownership increased slightly in India over the same period and remained stable at 280 by the late years, while Brazil saw a steady rise in car ownership from 1950 to 1980 after a rapid decline between 1940 and 1950.

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    Jangan Menggunakan Kata Yang Sama Dengan Di Topik

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    The document discusses car ownership rates in three countries - Brazil, India, and Japan - from 1920 to 1980 based on a line graph. [1] Japan saw a dramatic rise in car ownership between 1930 and 1940 from 115 to 300, which was higher than the other two countries. [2] Car ownership in Japan fluctuated between 1940 and 1960 before gradually declining to 200 by 1970-1980. [3] In contrast, car ownership increased slightly in India over the same period and remained stable at 280 by the late years, while Brazil saw a steady rise in car ownership from 1950 to 1980 after a rapid decline between 1940 and 1950.

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    The line graph gives information about a number of private car used in three different countries in 1920
    to 1980.

    Overall, third of these countries, experienced an upward trend in the beginning of the period, being
    difference at the end of the period, which is car ownership in Brazil showed a downward trend, instead
    of India and Japan had similar trend to remained stable throughout the period.

    Percentage of car ownership in Japan between 1930 to 1940 increased dramatically drew from around
    115 to 300, being higher than Brazil and India in the same period, whereas both of them were quiet
    stable at around 230 and then 240.

    A short of period of fluctuation in 1940 until 1960 in Japan, began fall gradually from around 300 to 250,
    then became constant at about 200 at the end of the year, in 1970 to 1980. Overtaken by India, which is
    increased slightly over the same period, then to remained stable at 280 through the last year. Contrast
    With Japan and India, in Brazil, percentage of car ownership showed a rose steadily throughout the
    period from 1950 to 1980, which is from 1940 to 1950 had been fall rapidly from around 230 to 100.

    Yang diperhatikan:

    1. jumlah kalimatnya
    jumlah kalimat yang terlalu banyak akan mengarah ke 2 hal: 1. mungkin wordsnya akan terlalu
    banyak, membuahkan lebih banyak kesalahan grammar, dan banyak narasi narasi yang
    sebenarnya tidak perlu atau bisa lebih concise; 2. mungkin wordsnya akan menjadi terlalu
    sedikit, menunjukkan kesempitan kosakata dan ketidakmampuan membuat kalimat kompleks
    yang berhasil, serta lemahnya penguasaan conjunction
    2. jumlah wordsnya
    Jumlah words masih berkaitan dengan jumlah kalimat tadi. Tapi kalau jumlah wordsnya kurang
    dari 150 untuk task 1 dan kurang dari 250 untuk task 2 maka saya perlu amati lagi .. ini
    kurangnya berapa words?
    JANGAN MENGGUNAKAN KATA YANG SAMA DENGAN DI TOPIK
    3. apakah paragraph yang digunakan sudah sesuai dengan purposenya masing masing .. atau
    masih terjadi blur paragraf ...

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