Use the following as a guide to improving your writing by elaborating.
Add Stronger Action verbs: Instead of: The couple moved across the dance floor. Try: The couple swept across the dance floor. Include Narrative Details: Instead of: She was a wicked old witch. Try: She was a wicked old witch who took delight in the terrified screams of children. Include Sensory Details: Instead of: The girl wore a red dress. Try: The girl wore a red dress that fit loosely around her and touched the floor as she walked. Use descriptive adjectives Instead of: She wore a gown and long gloves. Try: Her silky, long, jeweled gloves extended from the puffed sleeve of her sleek, elegant gown Use Dialogue: Instead of: Hagrid told us we should not be afraid of the Hippogriff. Try: Then Hagrid spoke, Do not be afraid of this creature; he is a friend to everyone. Give Examples: Instead of: Youll never have a second chance to make a first impression, but often first impressions can change. Try: Youll never have a second chance to make a first impression, but often first impressions can change. For instance, my mother initially thought my dad was an older version of Napoleon Dynamite, but after giving him a chance, she discovered he was the man of her dreams. Tell Anecdotes: Instead of: I trust new friends. Try: Some new friends are especially trustworthy, like Tammy, who came to our school just one month ago. Already, were just like inseparable sisters. Metaphors: The music was a river of joy flowing through the room. Personification: The trees moaned as the wind beat against them.