What is a poem

A poem is a piece of writing that is written in verse form.

It uses imaginative language to express feelings and ideas.
It usually incorporates a literal and figurative meaning and
some writing techniques, which known as literary devices
such as metaphor, personification, simile, imagery and so on.

Elements of a Poem

BACKGROUND
Poets background
Subject matter
For whom the poem is written

SETTING PERSONA
Time The speaker in the poem
Place
BACKGROUND
Poets background


Subject matter
For whom the poem is written MORAL VALUES
THEME(s) What we can learn
Main idea(s) from the poem
BACKGROUND
Poets background
Subject matter

STRUCTURE & STYLE

Place For whom the poem is written

TONE & MOOD

The personas voice or attitude Arrangements of lines
The overall feeling of the poem Choice of words
Literary devices

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 SAD I AMS
BY TREVOR MILLUM

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 Warm-Up Questions

Sad I Ams

1. Look at the emoticon. What is the expression?

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2. When do you show this expression?
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3. Have you ever felt sad before?
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4. When do you feel sad?
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5. How do you feel when you are being neglected?
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6. Do you still keep your old and unwanted belongings? Why?
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7. What would you do with your unwanted things?
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8. Look around. Is there any rubbish around you? Why do you have to throw the
rubbish?
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9. Imagine that you are a correction tape, what will happen to you in the end? Why do
you think so?
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10. What do you think about the title of the poem?
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SAD I AMS

By Trevor Millum

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About The Author

TREVOR MILLUM
Trevor Millum was born in the United Kingdom. He is a writer of poems, plays and stories for all
ages, from children to adult. He is currently self-employed and has written widely on poetry,
creativity and the use of information and communications technology in English. His poetry
collections include A Stegosaurus is for Lifeand other animal poems and Exploding Heads Comic
Strip Poems. He is an ex-English teacher and was a Director of the National Association for the
Teaching of English. He has his own website called The Mouse and The Muse.

Summary Of The Poem

The persona in the poem conveys his feeling of sadness and of being neglected. To express these
feelings, he compares himself with several things found in the home. Some of the things are a metal
ring from a drink can and food scrapings from an unwashed porridge pan which are usually discarded.

Broken parts of discarded last years Action Man are usually thrown out too. Only envelopes with
gums are useful. Sticky tapes, a stapleless stapler, a broken bulldog clip, and liquid paper are popular
items in our stationery aids. However, they are only useful if they are serviceable.

The same goes with parts of a car. The battery must be well-charged and the starter motor workable
for the car to work well. A lifeless spark plug , a chocked carburettor and a dull chromium trim all add
up to an unattractive car. The persona feels like an unkempt garden, an untouched library book, and
an unfed stray on the street or an unneeded piece of good advice.

Elements of The Poem

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PERSONA

1. The gender of the persona is not mentioned. However, based on comparison made, it
can be assumed that the persona is an elderly person.

TONE & MOOD

1. The tone of this poem is gloomy and depressing.

2. The poem evokes a feeling of sympathy and sad especially within a family.

POINT OF VIEW

1. First person point of view as the persona talks about himself as feeling sad when he
compares himself with the things surrounding him.

SETTING

1. Time Frame :No specific time frame is mentioned. The persona is simply relating his or
her thoughts.
2. Place : No specific place is mentioned.

THEMES
1. Rejection
The persona compares himself with unwanted things and this suggests that he has
faced rejection and feels unwanted in some ways.

2. Negligence of ones possessions

The discarded items appear to have been thoughtlessly thrown away and forgotten
which represent the personas feelings.

3. Feeling of uselessness
The items are considered unwanted because they appear to have run out of use and
this is similar to the personas situation where he feels that people no longer need
him. He feels unloved by family and friends.

4.Negativism about life

The persona starts to look at his life through a negative window because he feels unwanted.

MORAL VALUES

1. We should be positive about our status in life.

2. We should learn to recognise and value our abilities and possessions.

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3. We should have faith in our family.
4. We should have confidence in ourselves.
5. We must be grateful for what we have rather than yearn for something different.

LITERARY DEVICES

1. Metaphor
A metaphor is a comparison between two unlike things without using the word like
or as to make the comparison.
The entire poem consists of metaphors where the persona likens himself/herself to
many unwanted things such as the ring from the empty can and a toothless
stapler .

2. Imagery
The poem describes the unwanted items vividly that one is able to imagine them.
Eg : the scrapings from an unwanted porridge pan , the severed arm of last
years Action Man

3. Repetition
Repetition of a sound, syllable, word, phrase, line or stanza is a basic unifying device
in all poetry.
The word I am is repeated at the beginning of every stanza to emphasize the
feelings of the poet who is trying to say he is as hopeless as all the things listed.
The word no one is repeated in lines 5,7 and 9 in stanza four.

4. Personification
Personification is when you give human characteristics to objects that are not human
and usually the objects are not alive.
Eg: the carburetor choked itself by bits of dirt, the toothless stapler

5. Assonance
Assonance is the repetition of vowel sounds in the words that are close to each
other.
Eg: unwashed porridge pan, an empty Cola can

6. Alliteration
Alliteration occurs when a series of words repeat the same consonants or sounds.
Eg: that mars instead of mends,the gum is gone

7. Symbol
scrapings from an unwashed porridge pan is symbolic of something left behind
andutterly useless.
theSellotape where you cant find the end is symbolic of the feelings of frustration.

STANZA MEANING

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Paraphrase of the Poem
STANZA 1

The persona is the ring from an empty

drink can, leftovers from an uncleaned
porridge pan and the broken arm of last
years action toy.

STANZA 2

The persona goes on to say that he or

she is like an assortment of unwanted
stationery items such as an envelope
that cannot be sealed as the gum is
gone, the roll of Sellotape which cannot
be peeled off, an empty stapler without
staples and a clip that has no spring,
liquid paper that is dry and a letter that
has not been sent.

STANZA 3

In this stanza, the persona likens

himself or herself to various parts of a
car. The persona is a battery that cannot
charge, a starter motor that does not
work, a bald tyre, a sparking plug with
no life, a dirty carburetor and not a too
shiny chromium trim.

STANZA 4

In the final stanza, the persona equates

himself/ herself to an overgrown garden,
a book from the library that no one picks
out, a hungry stray and an unheeded
piece of good advice.

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Literal Meaning
In the poem, there are things that we do not want to keep or use any longer. The persona says he is
comparable to disposable household things and food. The metal ring from an empty drink can, the
broken part of an old toy or food scrapings from a pot which are disposed daily. Some things have no
value if they are not workable or in their original state. An envelope with no gum isnot sealable.
Sellotape that cannot be peeled off, a stapler without a staples, a bulldog clip without a spring or a
dried-up liquid paper is of no use. The persona feels neglectedlike the stamped address reply, that the
writer forgot to send out. When things are not maintained and taken care of, they become
unworkable. The persona feels that way like a flat battery. A starter that cannot ignite, a bald tyre, a
non-working spark plug, a dirt-choked carburettor and a dull-looking chromium trim. A car with
these parts is of no use to the owner and the persona feels the same way. The persona feels like a
neglected garden, a library book that is not read, a stray that is not fed or an advice that is totally
ignored. Basically, he feels rejected, useless, not cared for and has no place within the family and
society. The persona could be an orphan in an orphanage.

Figurative Meaning
In life, some things become insignificant because they are trivial or lacking in importance. They may
also become insignificant if they have no power, position or value. We can see them as things that are
not worthy to be mentioned. Some of these may just be things that are small in size or not distinctive
in character. Within a family, at work place, and even in a society, a person may feel unwanted and
unneeded in different ways. One feels that one is disposable if one feels like an unloved member of a
family or an unproductive worker in a workplace or an orphan in orphanage. There is no self-worth
as one can be got rid of whenever the opportunity arises. A person who is not contributing to the
growth of a family or society may feel unwanted. One may even be ignored or side-lined even if one
is willing to try again. A family can grow well and prosper only if every member plays his or her
part. Each and every member must be nurtured and encouraged or inspired to make this contribution.
So, one should not be complacent and let things slide if one does not want to be overlooked and left to
ones devices. This is the time when one should wake up and work or one will definitely be
neglected.

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Practice 1
Match the pictures withthe lines from the poem.

1. a.

the severed arm of last

years Action Man

2. b.

the envelope on which

gum is gone

3. c.

the ring from an

empty Cola can

4. d.

springless bulldog clip

5. e.

the scrapings from an

unwashed porridge pan

6. f.

the sellotape where you

cant find the end

7. g.

the toothless stapler

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8. h.

the stamped addressed

reply that you forgot
to send

9. i.

the battery in which

no charge is left

10. j.

the sparking plug

which shows no
signand spark

11. k.

the dried-up liquid

paper

12. l.

the tyre on which the

tread is worn

13. m.

the starter motor which

remains inert

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14.n.

a garden overgrown
with weeds

15. o.

a library book that no

one ever reads

16. p.

the carburettor
choked by bits of dirt

17. q.

a piece of good advice

which no one seems to
need

18. r.

the chromium trim from

which the shine has
gone

19. s.

a stray which no one

thinks to feed

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 Practice 2
Write True or False for the following statements.

1. Most drink cans are attached with a ring for opening them.

2. We remove the scrapings from the pan before washing it.

3. The arm from a toy had fallen off.

4. It is more convenient to use envelopes that have

no gum.

5. A bulldog clip that has no spring can be used.

6. A car cannot be started without a starter motor.

7. Liquid paper is used to underline important facts.

8. Strays depend on food scraps given out by kind

people.

9. A library book that is not read dis uninteresting.

10. Good advice are normally ignored.

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Practice 3
Find words in the poem that have the meanings below.

1. blocked

2. leftovers

3. guidance

4. filth

5. damages

6. vacant

7. response

8. sparkle

9. fixes

10. old

11. disappeared

12. being cut off

13. to give food

14. unable to move

15. an animal that has

no owner

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 Practice 4
Based on the poem, match the words in column A to the rhyming words in Column B.
Then read the words aloud.

Column a Column b

1. arm a. feed

2. clip b. gone

3. dirt c. farm

4. Man d. reads

5. need e. shirt

6. worn f. lump

7. weeds g. pan

8. spark h. twice

9. gum i. trip

10. advice j. shark

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Practice 5

Complete the circle map with unwanted things mentioned in the poem. I-think

Unwanted
Things

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Practice 6
Complete the crossword puzzle below.

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 Practice 7
Match the adjectives with nouns in the poem. The lists of words are given in the table below.

i-think

Nouns : liquid paper, cola can, action man, stapler, scrapings,

Adjectives : unwashed, empty, toothless, severed, dried-up

Adjectives

Nouns

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Practice 8
Read the text below. The first line is correct. For the remaining lines, there is ONE
error in each line. The errors have been underlined for you. Write ONE WORD to
correct the error in the space provided. An example has been given. The correct word
must not change the meaning of the sentence.

The persona in the poem tell of his feelings of sadness and being e.g. tells

neglected. To express these feelings, he compares (1)himselves to several a) ________

things found in the home. The metal ring from a drink (2) cans and food b) ________

scrapings from (3) a unwashed porridge pan are usually discarded. Broken c) ________

parts (4) in discarded last years Action Man are usually thrown out too. d) ________

Only (5)envelope with gum are useful. Sticky tapes, a staplelessstapler, a e) ________

broken bulldog clip and liquid paper (6)were popular items in our collection f) _________

of(7)stationary aids. However, they are useful if they are serviceable. The g) ________

same (8) go for parts of a car. The battery must be well charged and the h) ________

starter motor workable for the car to (9)works well. A lifeless sparking plug, i) ________

(10)an choked carburetor and a dull chromium trim all add to make the car j) ________

unattractive. The persona feels like an unkempt garden, an untouched

library book and an unfed stray on the street or an unneeded piece of good

advice.

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Practice 9
Fill in the blanks with the words found in the poem. Refer to the pictures given.

The persona in the poem tells off his feeling of sadness and be neglected. To express these

feelings, he compares himself with several things that found in the home. The (1)__________

from a drink can and food (2)____________ from an unwashed porridge pan are

usually discarded. (3)__________ parts of discarded last years Action Man are usually

thrown out too. Only(4)_____________ with gums are useful. Sticky tapes, a stapleless

stapler, a broken(5)_____________ clip, and liquid paper are popular items in our stationery

aids. However, they are useful if they are serviceable.

The same goes with parts of a car. The battery must be well-charged and the(6)_________

workable for the car to work well. A lifeless sparkling plug , a hocked carburettor and a

dull chromium trim all add to make the car unattractive. The persona feels like an unkempt garden, an

untouched library ( 7 )___________ and an unfed ( 8 )_____________ on

the street or unneeded piece of good advice.

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Practice 10
Match the following phrases to the correct literary devices. Write the answers in the space
provided.

the Sellotape where you cant find the end

the toothless stapler

the gum is gone

the springless bulldog

that mars instead of mends

scrapings from an unwashed porridge pan

1.
Alliteration
2.

1.
Personafication
2.

1.
Symbol
2.

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Practice 11
Get into groups of four. Give three ways we can show our appreciation to the elderly. Share
with the class.
i-think

How to Show Appreciation to the Elderly

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Practice 12
Have you ever felt unwanted? In about 50 words, write about a situation when you feltunwanted.
Describe what happened and how you felt at that time.

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Test yourself.

1. Who is the poet?

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2. How many stanzas are there in the poem?
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3. Do you think the title is suitable to the poem? Why?
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4. What is the main idea of the poem?
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5. Give one moral value that you have learntfrom the poem.
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6. Do you like the poem? Why?
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7. Describe the poem in one word.
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8. How is the poem related to your own life?
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9. What can you do with your unwanted things?
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10. If you see a stray animal, what would you do?
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11. Why do you think no one has ever read books from the library?
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12. How do you reuse tyres?
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 PT3 PRACTICES

I am
the ring
from an empty Cola can
the scrapings
from an unwashed porridge pan
the severed arm
from the last years Action Man

Practice 1
Read stanza 1 of the poem carefully. Then answer the following questions.

a. In stanza 1, what does the pesona compare himself with?

___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________( 1 mark)

b. Where do we find the things mentioned in this stanza?

___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________(1 mark)

c. Why do you think the porridge pan is dirty?

__________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________( 1 mark)

d. What could have caused the arm of Action Man to be severed? Give two possible reasons.

_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________ (2 marks)

Practice 2

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Read stanza 2 of the poem carefully. Then answer the following questions.

I am
the envelope
on which the gum is gone the sellotape
where you cant find the end
the toothless stapler, springless bulldog clip
the dried-up liquid paper
the mars instead of mends
the stamped addressed reply
that you forgot
to send

a. In stanza 2, why cant the envelope be sealed?

___________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________( 1 mark)

b. State the literary device used for the phrase the gum is gone.
____________________________________________________________( 1 mark)

c. How would people feel if they could not find the end of Sellotape?
_________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________ (1 mark)

d. What is the main characteristic of the things mentioned in the poem that makes the
persona relate to it? Why would he feel this way?

i. The main characteristic:

_____________________________________________________(1 mark)
ii. Reason:
_____________________________________________________(1 mark)

Practice 3

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Read stanza 3 of the poem carefully. Then answer the following questions.

I am
the battery in which no charge is left
the starter motor which remains inert
the tyre on which the tread is worn
the sparking plug which shows no sign of spark
the carburettor choked by bits of dirt
the chromium trim from which the shine has gone

a.In stanza 3, what happened to the carburettor?

____________________________________________________________( 1 mark)

b. How do we describe the battery that has no charge left?

_____________________________________________________________ ( 1mark)

c. Why is the tyre discarded?

_____________________________________________________________(1 mark)

d. What should we do to the things that we do not want anymore? Give two possible
suggestions.

Suggestion 1: ________________________________________________( 1 mark)

Suggestion 2: ________________________________________________( 1 mark)

Practice 4

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Read stanza 4 of the poem carefully. Then answer the following questions.

I am
a garden
overgrown with weeds
a library
that no one ever reads
a stray
which no one thinks to feed
the piece of advice which no one seems to need

a. In which age group do you think the persona is in?

___________________________________________________________( 1 mark)

b. If you see a stray animal, what would you do?

___________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________( 1 mark)

c. What does the phrase the piece of good advice which no one seems to need
mean?
___________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________(1 mark)

d. List down two moral values that you have learned from the poem.
Moral value 1: ____________________________________________________________(1
mark)
Moral value 2: ____________________________________________________________(1
mark)

Practice 5
Read the poem carefully. Then answer the following questions.

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a.Who most probably owned the Action Man?

_____________________________________________________________(1 mark)

b. In stanza 2, what category of things is mentioned by the persona?

_____________________________________________________________(1 mark)

c. What does the persona mean when he said that he is like the garden with overgrown
weeds?
__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________( 1 mark

d. Who do you think the persona is? Give a reason for your answer.

__________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________(2 marks)

Practice 6

Read the poem carefully. Then answer the following questions.

a. In stanza 1, which word tells us that the arm of the Action Man is broken?

______________________________________________________________(1 mark)

b. Give the meaning of the word inert?

______________________________________________________________(1 mark)

c. Why do you think no one wants to take the advice?

_____________________________________________________________(1 mark) d.

What evidence would you give to say that the pesona could be an orphan?

__________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________( 2 marks)

Practice 7

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Read the poem carefully. Then answer the following questions.
a. What do people do with used things around the house that they do not need any
longer ?
_______________________________________________________________(1 mark)

b. In stanza 2, what has happened to the stamped addressed reply?

_______________________________________________________________(1 mark)

c. Why do you think no one has ever read the library book?

_______________________________________________________________(1 mark)

d. Explain the line that mars instead of mends. How do we prevent liquid paper from
drying-up?

______________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________(2 marks)

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 ENRICHMENT ACTIVITIES

ACTIVITY 1

Create A Poem
1. Divide students into 4 groups.
2. Each group is given an item such as a pencil, a hand phone, a television etc.
3. Each group has to compose a one-stanza poem based on the item given.
4. Each group presents their poem.

Notes for teacher:

1. This activity can be done in pairs or in a group.

2. Teacher combines the stanzas and create a new poem
3. Teacher can ask students to write a poem similar to Happy I Ams

Example:

Imagine that you are an object. Write a happy poem about it. Use the example
below as a guide:

I am
Line 1: Who am I? the pencil
Line 2: How do I look? with red and blue stripes
Line 3: Who uses me? used among the students
Line 4: Why do they use me? to write in their books

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 ACTIVITY 2

Choral Speaking

1. Teacher forms students into four groups.

2. Each group is given one stanza of the poem Sad I Ams.
3. Each groups is required to perform a choral speaking.
4. Each group has to create interesting actions based onthe stanza be it the items
mentioned in the stanza, sound of the items or any creative actions.
5. Each group presents in the class.

Notes for teachers:

1. This activity can be done in groups or as a whole class activity.

2. Teacher can ask the students to combine their choral speaking groupsand present as
one.
3. Students are encouraged to add in any elements of choral speaking to make it
interesting such as repetition and sound effects.

ACTIVITY 3

Recycle And Reuse

1. Students are required to find one unwanted thing that they do not want to keep or to use any
more.
2. Ask the students to recycle or to reuse the item and present it in the class.

Notes for teachers:

1. This activity can be done individually, in pairs or in groups.

2. Students are encouragedto be creative or innovative.
3. Display those items in the class.

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 Answers

Practice 1

Prac
tice1.1 c 2. e 3. a 4. b 5. f

Practice
6. g 1 7. d 8. k 9. h 10. i

11. l 12. m 13. j 14. p 15. r

16. n 17. o 18. s 19. q

Practice 2

1. True 2. True 3. True 4. False 5. False

6. True 7. False 8. True 9. False 10. True

Practice 3

1. choked 6. empty 11. gone

2. scrapings 7. reply 12. severed

3. advice 8. shine 13. feed

4. dirt 9. mends 14. inert

5. mars 10. worn 15. stray

Practice 4

1. c 2. i 3. e 4. g 5. a

6. b 7. d 8. j 9. f 10. h

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Practice 5

1. the ring 2. the scrapings 3. the severed arm of last

years action Man

4. envelope 5. sellotape 6. stapler

7. bulldog clip 8. liquid paper 9. stamped address reply

10. battery 11. starter motor 12. tyre

13. sparking plug 14. carburettor 15. chromium trim

16. garden 17. stray 18. library books

19. advice

Practice 6

1. rejection 2. Trevor (space) Millum 3. need

4. reply 5. advice 6. feed

7. four 8. reuse 9. man

10. personafication 11. comparison 12. mars

13. gloomy

Practice 7

ADJECTIVES NOUNS

unwashed scrapings

empty Cola can

toothless stapler

severed Action Man

Dried up Liquid paper

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 Practice 8

1. himself 2. can 3. an

4. of 5. envelopes 6. are

7. stationery 8. goes 9. a

Practice 9

1. ring 2. scrapings 3. broken 4. envelopes

5. bulldog 6. car 7. book 8. stray

Practice 10

1. the gum is gone

Alliteration
2. that mars instead of mends

1. the toothless stapler

Personafication
2. the springless bulldog

1. the Sellotape where you cant find the end

Symbol
2. scrapings from an unwashed porridge pan

Practice 11

1. Pay a visit to the old folks home and spend time with them.

2. Celebrate International Day for Older Persons with them.

3. Do activities with senior member of your own family such as walking at the park
or reading to them.

4.Celebrate birthdays and anniversary with senior member of your own family such as your
grandparents. (accept any logical answers)

Practice 12

Accept any logical answers

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 PT3 PRACTICES

Practice 1

a. He compares himself with the ring of a drink can, scrapings from a porridge pan and the
broken part of a discarded toy.
b. These things can be found in the household.
c. It has not been washed and has leftovers in it.
d. The two reasons are it could have been pulled out by a child playing with it and the toy
could have been faulty.

Practice 2
Practice 10
a. The gum is gone.
b. Alliteration
c. They would feel frustrated
d. i. Main characteristic is that they are disposable and unwanted things.
ii. Perhaps the persona feels unwanted too.

Practice 3
Practice 10
a.It is filled with dirt.
b. The battery is flat
c. It is discarded because the tread has worn out
d. i. Recycle and reuse
ii. Give to the one in need (accept any possible answers)

Practice 4

a. Teenager/old people/elderly people

b. I will keep it as a pet/ I will take the stray to the animal shelter/I will feed the stray.
(accept any possible answer).
c.Advice that is useful but tends to be ignored by people.
d. Choose any two of these:

1. We should be positive about our status in life.

2. We should learn to recognize and value our abilities and possessions.
3. We should keep faith with our family.
4. We should have confidence in ourselves.
5. We must be grateful for what we have rather than yearning for something different.
6. We must show our appreciation to those who have helped us

Practice 5

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 a. A child
b. Stationery
c. He feels neglected.
d. I think the persona is an elderly person who feels unwanted. This is because the
persona associates himself with many old and unwanted things.

Practice 6
Practice 10
a. Severed
b. It means to be without motion or power/ not working
c. Perhaps because the persona is an elderly person and has old-fashioned opinion
about things.
d. The persona has made extreme comparisons which is not likely to happen within
a family. As an orphan it is possible for the persona to feel unwanted, unloved and
neglected.

Practice 7
Practice 10
a. They will keep/ throw/ recycle the things.
b. It has been forgotten
c. Perhaps the book is not interesting.
d. Liquid paper that is dry will dirty rather than erase the writing that is being
cleaned. The liquid paper pen should be capped at all times when not in use.

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