Ricardo Dangond

ENC 1101
Professor Pierson
Paper 2 Reflection

Most of the changes done to the paper where editing changes, such as commas or one-

word changes. However, there were a couple places where sentences where revised. For

example, I changed the introduction to a quote by Mike Rose to make more sense in the

context of my paper. Another is when I revise my revision process section to be more personal

and less instructive. These things thought me that revision can be done multiple times, and that

even small changes make a big difference.