Hi AAAAAAA,

Let me give my views on your efforts.

The reason that why i want to do a research on road accident in Malaysia is to understand and
identify what is the root cause of accident in Malaysia.
Problem statement: There is a lack of evidence on what factors caused road accidents in
Malaysia.
As such, the objective of this study is to find out the factors that causes road accident.

From the research, we are to identify whether is the carelessness of the driver, the poor
condition of the road or due to the unclear sign board causing misdirection to the drivers that
lead to road accidents in Malaysia.
You should say, From literature reviews, there has been studies conducted by..., ...., .....
and ..... that shows road accidents are caused by....in Europe (example only). It is unsure
whether these factors also applies in Malaysia.

What i hope to discover is that whether is there any changes to improve the road
safety awareness for the driver and how to implement the road safety awareness program
effectively.
Besides, whether is there any possible for the automotive Malaysia to provide more safety
features to our current model such as autonomous emergency braking.
Or does the Road Transport Department JPJ need to review the current course of driving etc.
These three paragraphs are a totally different study from the first paragraph. You
better think carefully which you want to focus on - factors causing road accidents or
methods to reduce road accidents. No need to do both.

By implement the above safety features in our national vehicles, it may as well helping in
promoting Malaysia in term of our national cars and tourism. Promoting naztional car and
promoting tourism is two different topic. Stick to ONE topic only