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VERDI

Messa da Requiem

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Marco Uvietta

Critical Commentary

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CRITICAL COMMENTARY
Giuseppe Verdi: Messa da requiem (BA )

“Cassetta colla partitura Messa”, without however explic-


EXAMINED SOURCES
itly mentioning the autograph.1
A autograph score, Milan, Museo teatrale alla Scala In December 1897, Verdi gave the score as a gift “A Teresa
I-Bc autograph score for bb. 28 – 55 of N. 1 Requiem Stolz / Interprete Prima / di questa composizione”, as can
e Kyrie, Museo internazionale e Biblioteca della be read on the first page of the manuscript. After Stolz’s
Musica, Bologna (Ms. UU.26) death (1902), the autograph went to her heirs, who presum-
1
I-Mb autograph manuscript for bb. 1–11 of N. 1 ably sold it to Banca Commerciale, since in the catalogue of
Requiem e Kyrie, Milan, Biblioteca Nazionale Museo teatrale alla Scala it appears as “Dono della Banca
Braidense, Collezione Manzoni (MANZ . V.S. Commerciale col concorso degli Amici del Museo Teatrale e
VII 6) del Museo”. According to Rosen, the donation to Museo tea-
I-Mb2 autograph manuscript for bb. 1–5 of N. 1 Requiem trale alla Scala must have occurred at some time between
e Kyrie, ibid. 1912 and 1926.2
I-Mr score, manuscript copy with Verdi’s corrections, The autograph score of Messa da requiem was described in
Milan, Archivio Storico Ricordi detail by David Rosen in his critical edition, to which read-
MI1874 printed libretto, Milan, Ricordi, May 1874 ers should refer for a more in-depth discussion.3 Here we
MpR autograph manuscript of Libera me, Domine from merely intend to provide readers with useful information
Messa per Rossini, S. Agata, Busseto, Villa Verdi to motivate the philological-musical choices of this edition,
pUS-Cso manuscript of winds and percussion parts, especially where they diverge from Rosen’s edition.
Chicago, Library of the Chicago Symphony Or- A does not show the usual structural corrections (dele-
chestra tion of whole pages or sections) that can be found in other
pRIcoro printed choral parts, Ricordi, Milan, 1874 Verdi autographs, except for two instances, where whole
pRIarchi printed strings parts, Ricordi, Milan, 1874 pages were removed (at the end of the Offertorio) or re-
rRIbozze printed proof of the first piano-vocal score (N. 6 placed (at the beginning of the Sanctus). The reading of A
Lux æterna), with Verdi’s corrections, New York, is therefore very clear, legible and detailed. This leads to
Pierpont Morgan Library the hypothesis that, when Verdi wrote A, he already had a
rRIms manuscript piano-vocal score, location currently well-developed continuity draft; this hypothesis is further
unknown supported by the reading of the second version of “Liber
rRI1874 printed piano-vocal score, Ricordi, Milan, 1874 scriptus” transmitted by rRIms (and maybe drawn from the
(pl. no. 44004) hypothetical continuity draft), which is different from that
rRI1875 printed piano-vocal score, Ricordi, Milan, 1875 of the other contemporary sources.4 This would also account
(pl. no. 44004) for the prevailing error type, i.e. mechanical copying over-
RI1875 score (first edition), lithographed manuscript copy sights. For N. 7 Verdi already had the manuscript of Libera
Ricordi, Milan, 1875 me, Domine from Messa per Rossini. A contains corrections
RI1913 printed score, Ricordi, Milan, 1913 (pl. no. 113956) in grey, blue and red pencil, few of which have been adopt-
RI1964 printed score, Ricordi, Milan, 1964 (P.R. 160) ed by I-Mr, and hence transmitted to the sources derived
from it. It is unlikely that the person responsible for these
corrections (some of which may be authograph) took the
liberty to make changes in A without Verdi’s authorization
(unless they were absolutely obvious, as happens in some
D
cases). This edition takes into account these corrections, but
A: autograph score, Milan, Museo teatrale alla Scala evaluates whether to adopt them on a case-by-case basis.
The autograph score, bound in two volumes, contains, be- At some unspecified moment, rubric folios (written on
sides the complete Messa da requiem (1874), a fascicle with the verso and blank on the recto) were added between one
the second version of the “Liber scriptus” (1875; see Ap- piece and the next, indicating at what point of the Ambro-
pendix). sian rite mass each piece should be performed. Given that
Unlike most works by Verdi, whose autograph scores
were retained by the publisher, Ricordi, the autograph of 1 Letter archived at Villa S. Agata di Busseto (cit. in Rosen, Crit-
ical Commentary, in Giuseppe Verdi, Messa da requiem, ed. David
Messa da requiem was returned to the composer after ex- Rosen, Chicago and London / Milan: The University of Chicago
tracting performance materials and preparing at least one Press / Ricordi, , pp.  –  ).
copy (I-Mr). The autograph was presumably returned after 2 Rosen, Critical Commentary, p. .
3 In particular, we suggest referring to Rosen for the codicolog-
the premiere performance, and before July 19th 1874, the
ical description and the structure of the manuscript (Rosen, Criti-
date on which Eugenio Tornaghi, an employee of Ricordi, cal Commentary, pp.  –  ).
wrote to Verdi asking him whether he had received the 4 See the description of rRIms, pp.  –  .

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only the premiere performance at San Marco required in- In 1886, Biblioteca di Brera named a room after Ales-
serting the pieces into a liturgical context, it is likely that sandro Manzoni, the “Sala manzoniana”. As a con-
the addition was made just days before the premiere. The tribution to celebrate the opening, Verdi donated an
practical function of these “director’s notes” can be inferred autograph excerpt of the first bars of N. 1 of Messa
from the fact that the first performance was conducted by da requiem.7 Since the first shipment did not reach its
Verdi himself, who was known to be rather unfamiliar with destination on time,8 Verdi sent another manuscript,
liturgical practices. If one desires to perform the Messa da so that they were soon both delivered. This explains
requiem in a liturgical context, then the rubric notes are the why Biblioteca Nazionale Braidense contains two au-
only authoritative source available, having been approved tograph manuscripts with the beginning of N. 1 (the
and “performed” by the author himself. The general struc- second of which, with barely five bars, testifies to
ture of the musical-liturgical “script”, from which we can Verdi’s lukewarm enthusiasm for the initiative):
also infer the structure of A, appears as described by the I-Mb1: autograph manuscript for bb. 1–11 of N. 1
diagram on p. 3. Requiem e Kyrie;
The second version of the “Liber scriptus” (1875), on I-Mb2: autograph manuscript for bb. 1–5 of N. 1
pp. 69 – 84 (a single fascicle of four nested bifolios), was in- Requiem e Kyrie.
serted and bound into A at a page break just after the be- In the Critical Commentary of this edition we only
ginning of the original version: p. 68 concludes with the refer to I-Mb1, as a confirmation for solutions adopted
first three bars of the original version (162a–164a), followed on the basis of musical logic.
by the complete 1875 version on pp. 69 – 84 (162–238), after
which the original version resumes on p. 85 and continues
to its conclusion on p. 96 (165a–215a). I-Mr: score, manuscript copy with Verdi’s corrections, Milan,
Archivio Storico Ricordi
Registered at the prefecture of the Milan province on August
Other autograph sources 14th 1874, the frontispiece of the manuscript bears Verdi’s
A series of autograph fragments drawn from Messa da re- authentication: “Copia conforme / all’originale / G. Verdi”.
quiem is extant. These fragments are conceived uniquely The copy was produced by six Ricordi copyists, presumably
as homages, and have no performance purposes. There is by the middle of July.9 However, there are good reasons to
no reason, therefore, why they should be regarded as more think that I-Mr was prepared in real time, as Verdi handed
authoritative than A, except for the rare instances in which in the various parts of A: in fact, the copy of the first two
they may help shed light on issues that remain unsolved pieces, submitted by Verdi on March 30, was handed out
even in the sources that were certainly (or probably) ap- to all six copyists. If the copying had not been so urgent,
proved by the author. Concerning this type of source, the maybe the distribution of materials would have been car-
Critical Commentary in this edition only mentions I-Bc e ried out on the complete work, starting from the last sub-
I-Mb1,2 (see below). On the other hand, we deemed it unnec- mission (mid-April; see Introduction, p. VIII), or at least after
essary to mention the fragments marked by Rosen with the April 9, when Verdi sent NN. 4, 5, 6, 7. However, the urgent
acronyms US-PHci (1877), Seligmann (1877), Kuhe (1875), need for a copy of the score can be unequivocally deduced
Menzel (1883).5 from the fact that N. 3, the last piece to be submitted, was
I-Bc: Museo internazionale e Biblioteca della Musica di Bo- copied by at least two different copyists. In little more than
logna (Ms. UU .26) a month, Ricordi had to extract the orchestral and cho-
Autograph manuscript for bb. 28–55 of N. 1 Requiem ral parts, as well as prepare the piano-vocal score, whose
e Kyrie, donated by Verdi to Biblioteca del Liceo Musi- printed version had to be ready by the day of the premiere.
cale di Bologna through the mediation of Arrigo Boito, Supposing that the composer knew his work well enough
and sent to “segretario” of the Liceo Federico Vellani to conduct it without studying it (or at least re-reading it),10
on May 26, 1891.6 This edition points out some diver-
gences between I-Bc and A, but never accepts the read-
ings of I-Bc, for the reasons explained above. 7 A request for the full score of Messa da requiem (“si chiede a
I-Mb1,2: Milano, Biblioteca Nazionale Braidense, Collezione Giuseppe Verdi l’autografo della Messa da requiem”) was predict-
ably turned down (see Catalogo della mostra manzoniana: Novembre
Manzoni (MANZ . V.S . VII 6)
– Dicembre , Milan, , p. XIX).
8 On October , Verdi wrote to Ricordi, asking him
whether he had received his “lettera Requiem” of Oct. , which
probably contained the cadeau (Carteggio Verdi-Ricordi  – ,
5 Rosen, Critical Commentary, pp.  – . The first two manu- edited by A. Pompilio and M. Ricordi, Istituto Nazionale di Studi
scripts contain respectively bars  – and  – of N. Of- Verdiani, Parma, , p. ).
fertorio (“Hostias”); the third and fourth contain bars –  of N. 9 Around the middle of July, Ricordi presumably sent the auto-
Agnus Dei. graph score back to Verdi. See description of A, pp. – and note .
6 The date and place can be inferred from the two postmarks on 10 During the premiere rehearsals Verdi coached the soloist sing-
the envelope attached to the manuscript. On the backside, the ers, but not the choir (see the Introduction to this edition, p. VIII);
postmark of Bologna’s post office gives us the date of delivery: the choir is assigned some of the most demanding passages for the
May , . conductor.

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[vol. I]
[pp. 1–32 (32 empty)] N. 1 Requiem [e Kyrie] [pp. 55–84 (84 empty)] N. 4 Sanctus

[pp. 33–34 (33 empty)] [rubric] [pp. 85–86 (85 empty)] [rubric]
N:o 2 / Dominus vobiscum – Oremus = No 5 / Dopo la Consacrazione – / Per
Lezione. / Epistola che si canta dal lato omnia sæcula sæculorum Amen / Pater
destro / appiè dell’altare: alle parole: / noster… / Poi altra orazione sul tono
Quoniam ipse Dominus in / jussu et in del Pater noster, / la quale quasi in fine
voce Arcangeli, et / in tuba Dei descen- ha le parole / præsta eum cum quo
det de Cœlo, et mor- / tui qui in Christo beatus / vivis et regnas Deus in unitate
sunt resurgen primi, / deinde nos qui spir. / sancti per omnia [secula] sec[u]
vivimus simul rapiemur / cum illis in lorum - amen - / quindi cenno di star
nubibus obviam Christo in / aera, et sic pronti / Pax et communicatio D[omi]ni
semper cum Domino erimus. / Itaque nostri / Jesu Christi sit semper vobis-
consolamini invicem in verbis / istis = cum = / Et cum spiritu tuo / subito
subito / Dies iræ Agnus Dei

[pp. 35–202 [pp. 87–106


(201–202 empty)]* N. 2 Dies iræ (105–106 empty)] N. 5 Agnus Dei

[vol. II] [pp. 107–108


[pp. 1–2 (1 empty)] [rubric] (107 empty)] [rubric]
N 3. / Finito il Dies iræ leggesi il Van- N 6. / La messa finisce poco dopo. /
gelo- / poi Dominus vobiscum e un Quando è finito l’Agnus / Dei cominci
Oremus / che comincia Adesto Domine o subito o appena / poco dopo (come
sup- / plicationibus nostris per anima vuole il Sig.r M.o) / Segue Lux æterna
/ famuli tui in cujus annua obitus / die
officium commemorationis im- / pendi- [pp. 109–132] N. 6 [Lux æterna]
mus:… ut signa ei secularis macu- / la
inhæsit… dono tuae pietatis indulgeas [pp. 133–134
et / abstergas= per dominum nostrum (133 empty)] [rubric]
Jesum / Christum filium tuum, qui te- No 7. / Quando, finita l’Orazione e /
cum vivit / et regnat in unitate spiritus cantato un ultimo Amen sa- / rà detto
sancti Deus / per omnia sæcula sæculo- a voce bassa senza can- / to Dominus
rum (pronti) / Amen Segue subito vobiscum etcc. e / Requiem etcc. et lux
perpetua / luceat ei, requiescat in pace
[pp. 3–52 (52 empty)] N. 3 Offertorio Amen / tutto sommessamente, e vedrà
il / celebrante accostarsi al lato / del
[pp. 53–54 (53 empty)] [rubric] Vangelo, intoni subito / Libera me //
N 4. / Prefazio
j
&b œ œ œ œ œ œ œ [pp. 135–218
Do - mi - nus vo - - bi - scum (217–218 empty)] N. 7 Libera me, Domine
Il prefazio finisce colle parole sotto
notate, ma / sarà bene avvisare di star
pronti a queste prime
j j j j
&b œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ
quem Che - ru - bim et Se - ra - fim so - cia ex - ul - ta -

j
&b œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ
- tio - ne con - ce - le - brant. Cum qui - bus et

j
&b œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ
no - stras vo - ces ut ad - mit - ti ju - be - as de - pre - ca -

j j
&b œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ œ
- mur sup - pli - ci con - fes - si - o - ne di - cen - tes

Segue subito**

* The page numbering also includes both versions of the “Liber scriptus”.
** See Plate 1, p. 274

Rubric pages inserted in the autograph score

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this could not, in any way, have been true for Franco Faccio, MI1874: printed libretto, Milan, Ricordi, 1874
who would later conduct the Messa da requiem on the 27th Printed for the premiere performance, it constitutes the
and 29th of May at Teatro alla Scala. Having one more score principal source for the verbal text: where Verdi wrote the
available, whatever its planned function or use, must have text erroneously or omitted punctuation marks, this edition
been a necessity, or at least a useful precaution. refers to the reading of MI1874. In some cases, however, it
The work of the six copyists was essentially “conserva- retains the punctuation of A when it shows relevant expres-
tive”, almost never critical, so that I-Mr only rarely offers sive qualities.
solutions for the inconsistencies and errors of A. On the
whole, I-Mr is the product of a group of craftsmen with lim-
ited musical knowledge. However, the importance of this pUS-Cso: manuscript winds and percussion parts, Chicago,
source has to do with the corrections added by Verdi, some Library of the Chicago Symphony Orchestra
of which are actually revisions. Theoretically, they may have These parts were prepared by the publisher, Ricordi, for
been inserted after the premiere, although a rather evident the New York performance (17 November 1874), and contain
series of mutual “contaminations” suggests that I-Mr, rRIms the first version of the “Liber scriptus”. Some inserts con-
and rRI1874 probably developed in parallel, as Verdi submit- taining the “Liber scriptus” of 1875 were added at a later
ted parts of his work.11 date. This part set was probably copied from another set,
Many corrections were written in purple ink, and some which had been extracted directly from A. Although there
of them were also reproduced in A, at a moment when Verdi is no reason why Verdi should have examined this orches-
had access to both manuscripts (see for example Critical tral material, the source provides useful information where
Commentary, N. 2, Note 127–129).12 In one significant case, Verdi may have omitted to indicate whether an instrumen-
Verdi made revisions in pencil and did not reproduce them tal part should be played “Solo”, “a 2”, “a 3”, or to define the
in A (see Critical Commentary, N. 3, Note 63–67). Other in- distribution of the three Trbn in a bichord. Furthermore, it
terventions in (red or grey) pencil do not seem Verdi’s, and is not infrequent to observe appropriate vertical extensions
generally correct major oversights – which is why they are of dynamic indications, articulation signs, and slurs that
usually not marked in this edition. The fact that Verdi au- show a not entirely mechanical extraction of parts.
thorized this manuscript copy is not a sufficient condition
to regard its accidental divergences from A as authoritative:
it is evident that the composer revised I-Mr in a very super- pRIcoro, pRIarchi: printed choral and strings parts, Milan,
ficial way, as he used to do whenever he reads the proofs of 1874
his own works (the same consideration applies to the proofs Ricordi printed the choral and strings parts between April
of the piano-vocal score of N. 6 Lux æterna,13 and to the and May 1874 (hence with the first version of the “Liber
printed strings and choral parts). Therefore, the edition of scriptus”), in time for the premiere performance. They were
the score only takes into account the readings that show almost certainly drawn from A, since they do not contain
interventions by the author or by authorized staff. errors that are present in I-Mr (other sources for the score
I-Mr turns out to be just as important in tracing the ori- were not available at the time). Ricordi sent the proofs of
gin of erroneous, or inaccurate, textual traditions. It was the choral parts to Verdi on April 11th. Considering that
mostly, although not exclusively, from this copy that Ricordi Verdi sent the “corrected” proofs back the next day,15 we
drew the first printed edition (RI1875, lithographed manu- can imagine that his check must have been rather hasty.
script copy), from which most of the orchestral parts in The same reasoning applies to the proofs of the strings
RI1913 were drawn and subjected to standardization, inte- parts, which Verdi received on April 14th and sent back on
gration and normalization (the vocal parts are derived from the 16th.16 Given the impossibility to know where and how
rRI1875). Therefore I-Mr allows us to document the genesis Verdi intervened on the proofs, this edition attributes very
of errors contained in RI1913 and RI1964, and hence to dem- limited importance and usefulness to pRI.
onstrate that some of the solutions adopted in these scores
(on which many historical recordings that are still com-
mercially available were based), are the result of inherited rRIbozze: printed proof of the piano-vocal score
misreadings rather than choices.14 (N. 6 Lux æterna), with Verdi’s corrections, New York,
Pierpont Morgan Library (Mary Flagler Cary Music Collection)
See description of rRI1874.

11 For a possible stemma of the sources see this edition, “The


textual tradition”, pp. – : .
12 See also the description of rRI1874, p. . 15 Verdi’s letter to Ricordi of April , (the manuscript is kept
13 See description of rRI bozze. at Archivio Storico Ricordi and can be accessed at the follow-
14 In other cases, the divergences of the textual tradition with ing website: Internet Culturale, http://www.internetculturale.it;
respect to A presumably depend on the relationship with rRIms hence-forth ASR , IC).
(see description of rRIms, pp.  –  : ). 16 Verdi’s letter to Ricordi of April , (ASR , IC).

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rRIms: manuscript piano-vocal score, location currently unknown A similar case, however, can also be observed in N. 3
This source appeared in the catalogue of music antiques Offertorio. On April 8, Verdi wrote to Ricordi: “Tomorrow
dealer La Scala autographs from 2011 to the beginning of 2012, I’ll send you the rest of the Mass, except for the Offerto-
when the editor of this edition purchased a photographic rio, in which I would like to make a small change at the
reproduction of it. The text on the cover reads as follows: beginning”. According to Rosen, “evidence from the auto-
“Messa da Requiem / Musicata dal Celeberrimo Maestro / graph manuscript of the Offertorio […] suggests that Verdi’s
Giuseppe Verdi / Per l’anniversario di Alessandro Manzo- changes affected not the beginning of the movement, as he
ni”, and below, in pencil, “proprietà Riservata” (left) and hinted to Ricordi on 8 April, but rather its conclusion”.19
“II VERSIONE / LIBER SCRIPTUS” (right). The manuscript In the autograph score, the last three sheets were removed
shows the features of a model for the typographic realiza- and replaced, but this does not necessarily mean that the
tion of the piano-vocal score: the notes and text are written change mentioned by Verdi was contained in those sheets.
in black ink, while all the expressive, dynamic, tempo, slurs Rather, it seems no accident that a paper patch was pasted
and articulation marks are written in purple ink. However, in rRIms at bb. 46–50 of the Offertorio: it cannot be ruled
rRIms was presumably conceived for performance, not spe- out that the “small change at the beginning” referred to by
cifically for preparing the printed piano-vocal score: the Verdi could have been made right there, in the first quarter
layout appears very different from that of the printed edi- of the piece (the change would have been made in the conti-
tion (rRIms is in horizontal format, rRI1874 and rRI1875 are in nuity draft, prior to the writing of A). However, rRIms does
vertical format). Furthermore, the performance indications not bear any trace of correction in its conclusion, although
were written by the same hand that wrote the notes on the it cannot be ruled out that the substitution of the last pages
pentagram; to this must be added the somewhat pragmatic, could have been caused by clerical copying errors, not by
concise writing, which makes intelligent use of abbrevia- a significant change in the music text. If this hypothesis
tions in the performance indications. By the same token, were validated, rRIms could be a very authoritative source
the piano-vocal scores printed by Ricordi in 1874 –’75 must for the whole music, not only for the second version of the
have referred to this manuscript, since they are largely con- “Liber scriptus”. Moreover, since the handwriting is uni-
sistent with it in almost every respect. rRIms contains the form throughout the manuscript, we should suppose that
second version of the “Liber scriptus” (1875, which may the whole piano-vocal score was prepared by someone close
have replaced the first one at a later time), whose reading to Verdi: it is likely that Franco Faccio (who took the role of
was probably derived from a continuity draft that preced- conductor of the Messa after the two “premieres” conducted
ed A: there are divergences with respect to A, which can by Verdi, and had met regularly with the composer in the
hardly be accounted for as copying mistakes or omissions, previous months) had an important role in the writing of
as attempts to resolve issues of inconsistency, or as derived this manuscript, at least in its revision.20 The exact corre-
from known secondary sources.17 It cannot, however, be ex- spondence between rRIms and the early printed piano-vocal
cluded that the whole manuscript was written in 1875, and scores leads to regard the latter, too, as more authoritative,
hence that the second version of the “Liber scriptus” is an even for the readings that diverge from the autograph (see
integral part of the original manuscript structure. Only by for example Critical Commentary, N. 2, Note 345 –346).
analyzing the paper item, which is currently missing, could On the other hand, we have as many clues to suppose
we provide an answer to this question. It is, however, im- that, apart from the second version of the “Liber scriptus”,
possible to find a plausible reason for preparing a full manu- rRIms was prepared after the first impression of rRI1874.21
script copy of rRI1875, also including a version of the “Liber For example, the passage of Trombe in lontananza in bars
scriptus” that is different from the printed edition as far as 127–128 of N. 2 (“Tuba mirum” episode) of rRIms already ap-
slurs and articulation are concerned. Moreover, if the per- pears in the definitive version, while the first impression of
son who wrote the manuscript had copied it from rRI1875, rRI1874 still gives the original reading (see Critical Commen-
he would not have forgotten the whole choral part in the tary, N. 2, Note 127–129, which provide a possible expla-
“Liber scriptus”, adding it in purple ink at a later time (and nation). A further clue can be inferred from a comparison
in “shorthand” form) in the same stave as Ms.18 It is signifi- between rRIms and rRIbozze (see the description of rRI1874),
cant that in A Verdi originally wrote the choral part in bars i.e. the proofs of the piano-vocal score of N. 6 Lux aeterna,
206, 208, 210 exactly like in 191, and then erased it. In rRIms, on which Verdi himself and a Ricordi editor made correc-
at bb. 206–212, a large paper patch covers a previous ver- tions. The three clearly visible revisions made by Verdi in
sion, which presumably contained the choral part erased
in A. Therefore, it can almost certainly be stated that the 19 Rosen, Introduction, p. XVIII.
reading of the “Liber scriptus” included in rRIms reflects 20 Verdi and Faccio presumably met several times in the months
prior to the premiere performance: apart from the rehearsal period
composition layers that pre-existed the definitive text of A. and his direct involvement in the preparation (as well as the pres-
tigious task of conducting the third and fourth performance), on
March Faccio already participated, as Verdi’s confidant and
advisor, in the visit to San Marco in Milan along with Tito Ricordi,
17 See for example Critical Commentary, N. , Notes – and to decide how to arrange the performers in space (see Rosen, Intro-
 – . duction, p. XXI).
18 See Critical Commentary, N. , Note . 21 See the description of rRI1874, p. .

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the piano part 22 are already included in rRIms (without any A, but as traces of a performance tradition approved by the
correction mark), and this inevitably leads to conclude that author.23
rRIms was written after these revisions (but again we ask
ourselves why, since there was already a printed text). De-
spite appearances, we can venture to guess that the cor- rRI1874: printed piano-vocal score, Ricordi, Milan, 1874
rections required by Verdi were the result of a comparison (pl. no. 44004)
with the piano score he relied upon (rRIms) instead of A As soon as Verdi submitted the score of the first pieces (NN.
– whereas in preparing rRI1874, Ricordi’s editorial staff may 1–2, 30 March 1874), Ricordi began to prepare the piano-
have thought it appropriate to adhere more faithfully (so vocal score (Michele Saladino), so as to make it available
it appears) to the orchestral texture (see for example Criti- on the day of the premiere performance (May 22, 1874), as
cal Commentary, N. 6, Note 16 –17, 22–23). In other words, requested by Verdi. Although rRI1874 was probably derived
in the three revisions Verdi made to the piano part, he from A, we should not underestimate the role rRIms might
may have simply restored the reading of rRIms, which had have played in the preparation of this printed reduction
been disregarded (although with the best intentions) by the (see description of rRIms). Between the last days of April
Ricordi staff. The thesis that the reference text for the crea- and the early days of May (taking no longer than 4 –5 days),
tion of rRI1874 was not A, is validated by the fact that almost Verdi corrected the proofs of rRI1874 – however, as a confir-
all the interventions of the anonymous editor that clearly mation of how superficially he carried out this task, in a
diverge from A are identical with the solutions adopted in letter dated June 2nd24 (hence after the printing of rRI1874)
rRIms (see for example Critical Commentary, N. 6, Notes 4 – 6 Verdi informed Ricordi about other serious mistakes found
and 41– 42). We can suppose that the only reason for such by the music director who was preparing the singers for
unmotivated divergence from A can be the recourse to a the Paris performances. Therefore, there are at least two
model text already approved by Verdi. The editor presum- impressions of rRI1874, given that in one of them the errors
ably performed what was known as conformity “check” on had been corrected. The copies that have been examined for
the first draft of the vocal and piano parts against its mod- this edition are archived at Biblioteca del Conservatorio di
el, rRIms, marking lacunae and divergences. Verdi in his musica “Giuseppe Verdi” in Milan, respectively under the
turn, after comparing the drafts to the model, authorized shelf marks M.S. 214/1 and B.25.h.167/3. The first of these
both the results of the editor’s check and the divergences copies is also the first one in chronological order, for it re-
with respect to A, thus generating a textual tradition that is flects the outdated version of the passage from Dies iræ
partly independent of the known sources of the score (the (“Tuba mirum”, b. 127 sgg.), which Verdi modified both in A
two textual traditions will again converge in RI1913, which and in I-Mr (see Critical Commentary, N. 2, Note 127–129).
derives its vocal parts from rRI1875). If this is true, then the The Pierpont Morgan Library in New York (Mary Fla-
same checking method was presumably adopted not only gler Cary Music Collection) contains the drafts of N. 6 Lux
for N. 6, but also for all other numbers. æterna (rRIbozze) corrected by Verdi and a Ricordi editor.
Therefore, the reading of rRI1874 (and that of rRI1875 in- Verdi’s corrections are limited to the piano part, and have
cluding the second version of the “Liber scriptus”) may be no bearing on the orchestral parts. As for the relationship
regarded as doubly authorized, first of all because the drafts between rRIbozze and rRIms, see the description of rRIms and
were corrected by Verdi, and secondly (and more impor- the Critical Commentary, N. 6, Notes 4 – 6 and 41– 42.
tantly) because it was derived from a model (rRIms) pro-
duced by a close, although undocumented, collaboration
with Verdi. These reflections lead us to pay closer attention rRI1875: printed piano-vocal score, Ricordi, Milan, 1875
to some readings from the printed editions which are fully (pl. no. 44004)
(rRI1875) or partly (RI1913) derived from rRIms, and even to This document contains the second version of the “Liber
elevate them to the status of alternative author’s versions scriptus” for mezzosoprano (1875) instead of the fugue for
when it seems plausible. However, because they are super- choir and orchestra (1874). Even though the second version
seded by the definitive version of A, the lessons of rRIms are is 26 bars longer than the first, the Ricordi editorial staff
almost never integrated in the music text of this edition, but managed to retain the same layout and page numbering as
are used to occasionally provide a glimpse of the composi- rRI1874, and therefore used the same printing plates for the
tion process. On the other hand, as was already pointed rest of the music.
out, there are valid reasons to think that rRIms was mainly
used for performance purposes. If so, we should hypothe-
size that this music text played some role in the preparation
of the singers and/or choir in view of the premiere perfor-
mance. If this were true, then some of the readings that go
back to rRIms should be interpreted not as deviations from
23 More information on rRIms will be available in an essay, on
22 In his edition, Rosen published a transcription of the original which the editor of this edition is currently working.
text of these passages (Rosen, Critical Commentary, pp. , , ). 24 Verdi’s letter to Ricordi of June (ASR, IC).

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RI1875: score (first edition), lithographed manuscript copy, RI1964: printed score, Ricordi, Milan, 1964 (P.R. 160)
Ricordi, Milan, 1875 This is the “new, revised and amended edition” of RI1913.
Lithographed manuscript copy, published in a limited num- The anonymous editor (maybe Fausto Broussard, chief
ber of copies, and only intended for rental. The copy de- editor at Ricordi since the early 1960s) compared and con-
scribed here was viewed at Archivio Storico Ricordi in Mi- trasted RI1913 with A, but not with I-Mr (the recognition
lan. of corrections by the author in this source, which we owe
The text on the cover reads as follows: “Messa da Re- to Rosen, is subsequent). Therefore RI1964 involuntarily re-
quiem / DI / G. Verdi / [ornament] / (PARTITURA) / [orna- stores some readings from A which had been superseded
ment] / Proprietà esclusiva del / R. STABILIMENTO RICOR- by the changes Verdi made in I-Mr. However, this edition
DI / MILANO / Napoli – ROMA – Firenze / LONDRA”. The has the merit of introducing many musically appreciable
frontispiece shows handwritten names of cities, in which corrections.
this score was used for performance, and the correspond-
ing dates for almost all of them. The first city on the list is
Munich, with the dates 1875–’76, which demonstrates that
this lithographed edition dates from 1875.25 METHODOLOGICAL APPROACH
RI1875 contains the second version of the “Liber scriptus”
T
and is a first, rough attempt at a critical interpretation of the
music text – we find instances of standardization, normali- The accuracy with which the autograph manuscript (A) was
zation and extension (both vertical and horizontal), which drafted explains why the textual tradition tends to conform
denote advanced musical knowledge. However, this musi- regarding the essential features of the work. There are no
cal and editorial accuracy is applied to the reading of I-Mr, structural variants, cuts, alternative parts for solo voice, or
from which RI1875 is essentially derived. But we must point double versions (the “Liber scriptus” of 1875 replaces that of
out that in many a case the solutions adopted are closer to 1874). The text was conceived so as to always remain identi-
A than to I-Mr: this seems plausible, since A was certainly cal to itself, instead of adapting to the needs of individual
in the hands of Ricordi at the beginning of January 1875. theaters, casts, and local practices. In the case of Verdi’s
Therefore, the publisher may have attempted a basic, albeit Messa da requiem, therefore, we can talk about an opus, i. e.
unsystematic, conformity check of RI1875 against A. a closed, definitive text. This is why divergences and in-
The usefulness of RI1875 for this edition can be evaluated consistencies among the main sources available mostly con-
on two levels: cern performance and expression indications, where they
1) it contains suggestions for performance and editorial so- are ambiguous or incomplete in A. The web of relationships
lutions, presumably in accordance with the practice of the among these sources develops primarily on three different
time. RI1875 is especially important for the second version levels:
of the “Liber scriptus”, since in this case we do not have a) erroneous or “creative” interpretations of the writing;
the (at times clumsy) mediation of I-Mr: in other words, b) parallel elaboration, and mutual contamination, of some
as far as the second version of the “Liber scriptus” is con- of the sources;
cerned, A is the direct antigraph of RI1875; c) the branching out into two different textual traditions.
2) it reconstructs the genesis of mistakes, which entered
some of the editions used until a few decades ago, in par-
ticular RI1913 and RI1964, which provided the basis for many a) Erroneous or “creative” interpretations of the writing
historical recordings that are still commercially available. Writing the manuscript for a music text involves a certain
degree of inaccuracy and ambiguity, which may reflect in
various ways on the derivative sources, determining read-
RI1913: printed score, Ricordi, Milan, 1913 (pl. no. 113956) ing errors and omissions, but also integrations and rectifi-
Ricordi released a smaller-format orchestral score, register- cations which, although musically plausible, may diverge
ing it for copyright in 1913. On the whole, the vocal parts significantly from the original reading. Today this pheno-
are drawn from rRI1875, and the orchestral parts from RI1875. menon is already familiar enough and does not require
Although RI1913 makes a remarkable (albeit often ineffec- further explanation in this context. Some peculiarities and
tive) effort to smooth out the inconsistencies of A, it is also ambiguities of writing in A will be discussed further on
responsible for a partly spurious (and partly “authentic”: (“Edition criteria”).
see description of rRIms, p. 5 – 6) textual tradition, on which,
more or less directly, almost all editions and recordings
were based at least until 1964. b) Parallel elaboration, and mutual contamination, of some of the
sources
25 According to Rosen, the edition was produced between Despite the many limitations posed by graphic visualiza-
and (see Rosen, Critical Commentary, p. ). Rosen must have
tion, the diagram published above attempts to outline a
worked on a different copy than the one examined by the editor
of this edition, otherwise he would certainly have noticed the possible stemma for the main sources available. It should
above-mentioned handwritten indications. be noted that between March 30th and early May 1874, the

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? Continuity draft
rRIms ? (NN. 1–6 + MpR)

A
pRI
Strings and
Choir
X

rRI1874 I-Mr pUS-Cso


Continuity
draft
Ls1875 A Ls1875 RI1875
(instrumental
parts)

rRIms Ls1875 rRI1875


(vocal parts) RI1913 RI1964
Stemma hypothesis for the main sources

Ricordi editorial staff was busy preparing all materials re- c) Branching out into two different textual traditions
quired for the performance. Meanwhile, a copy of the score The degree of accuracy shown by A in comparison with
was drafted (I-Mr), orchestral and choral parts were ex- the contemporary practice and the usual standards of Verdi
tracted, and a piano-vocal score was prepared (rRI1874). This himself, led to the hypothesis that A must have been pre-
inevitably entailed contamination (↔), which often leads ceded by a complete continuity draft,27 except for N. 7 Libera
to problems when trying to identify strictly derivative rela- me, Domine, which is a rewriting of the piece Verdi had
tions. In addition, by the middle of July (but probably even already composed for his Messa per Rossini in 1869 (MpR).
earlier 26), Verdi made corrections to I-Mr, some of which This edition suggests (with all due caution) that rRIms (man-
he reproduced in A, thus generating a further level of con- uscript piano-vocal score) was written on the basis of one
tamination (marked by the sign ↕ in the diagram). A par- such continuity draft by someone very close to Verdi.28 With-
ticular type of contamination concerns a set of printed out deliberately excluding that rRI1874 (first printed edition
sources, presumably drawn from A and “corrected” by Verdi of the piano-vocal score) may have been drawn from A,
himself, although not always in conformity with A: these as Rosen suggests,29 rRIms could have played an important
are the strings and choral parts (pRI), to which we must part in its preparation. The proofs of rRI1874 were corrected
add the first piano-vocal score (rRI1874), a particular case by Verdi himself, without however relying on A, which the
discussed in point c). Given that we cannot know where composer had handed in to Ricordi “by installments”, be-
exactly the composer intervened, it is also impossible to es- tween March 30th and April 15th, 1874. It is likely that the
tablish whether the divergences from A are the result of editorial staff at Ricordi did not perform any thorough com-
choices made by the author or by the Ricordi editorial staff. parison between rRI1874 and A after receiving Verdi’s correc-
The diagram postulates, as in Rosen, the existence of an tions: indeed, rRI1874 and A consistently show divergences
X source (manuscript parts), from which the set of winds that can hardly be accounted for as copying mistakes or
and percussion parts pUS-Cso (prepared for the New York omissions, as attempts to resolve issues of inconsistency, or
performance, 17 November 1874) would have been drawn.
Since the reading of these parts is, on the whole, closer to A 27 See also Rosen, Critical Commentary, p. .
than to I-Mr, it can be inferred that X was directly derived 28 See the description of rRIms, pp.  –  . It is likely that Franco
from A. Faccio (who took the role of conductor of the Messa after the two
“premieres” conducted by Verdi, and had met regularly with the
composer in the previous months) had an important role in the
writing of this manuscript.
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as derived from known secondary sources (see for instance ed according to the following two criteria: authoritativeness
Critical Notes, N. 2, Note 345–346). It is significant that the (degree of proximity to A, author’s approval) and function-
readings which diverge from A mostly adhere to rRIms. ality (usefulness for musicians in revealing what in this
There are valid reasons to suggest that Verdi first wrote edition differs from the traditional ones).
a continuity draft also for the second version of the “Liber As a manuscript copy that contains corrections and
scriptus” (Ls1875 in the diagram), and subsequently the amendments by Verdi, I-Mr is a very important source. In
final score. The reading of this provisional version would it, we can identify three main types of author interventions:
be most likely mirrored by rRIms (where the pages corre- obvious corrections, changes that were also entered into A,
sponding to Ls1874 were supposedly removed and replaced and changes that were not entered into A. For the edition of
with those of Ls1875).30 It is significant that the reading of the the music text, the first two types have limited usefulness,
“Liber scriptus” contained in rRIms diverges not only from and their value is mostly documentary, as we explained
A, but from all other known sources. In particular, rRI1875 in the Critical Notes. The few changes of the third type
draws the “Liber scriptus” directly from A, not from rRIms. are evaluated individually, but they are not always treated
In general, the vocal parts in rRI1875 are mostly integrated as definitive versions. The most interesting and significant
in RI1913 (Ricordi printed score) along with the instrumental of these instances is discussed in the Critical Notes, N. 3,
parts of RI1875 (lithographic print of a manuscript copy). A Note 63–67. Apart from Verdi’s corrections, I-Mr is of lit-
further stage of hybridization can be observed in RI1964, as a tle use, having been compiled by copyists who had limited
consequence of the comparison between RI1913 and A. musical knowledge: at best, I-Mr follows A mechanically,
In conclusion, the textual tradition that goes back to rRIms at worst it misunderstands it, or reproduces it in a lacunose
(→ rRI1874–75 → R I1913 vocal parts) should be regarded as way.
definitively surpassed, since rRIms would have been drawn The secondary sources almost never provide solutions
from a provisional draft of the composition. However, there for ambiguous, problematic readings in A: they mostly of-
are valid reasons to believe that rRIms was mainly used for fer suggestions, which sometimes turn out to be useful as
performance purposes (see description, p. 5). If we take this they reflect the practice of the time. In as many instances,
to be the case, then we should hypothesize that, in view of however, they document the transmission of misreadings
the premiere, this music text played some role in the prepa- down to 20th century editions that are still in use. There-
ration of singers and/or of the choir. If this were true, then fore, the music text of this edition very rarely integrates
some readings that go back to rRIms should be intended not readings from sources other than A. Rather, the sources
as deviances from A, but as traces of a performance tradi- that have been fully or partly derived from A are frequently
tion approved by the author. used in the Critical Notes to document the genesis of errors
contained in RI1913 (which is also a model for some foreign
editions) and RI1964, and hence demonstrate that some of
the solutions adopted in these scores (on which many his-
T torical recordings that are still commercially available were
Source functionality based), are the result of inherited misreadings rather than
The principal source for this edition of the Messa da requiem choices. In other cases, as far as the vocal parts are con-
is A, from which the music text is drawn. This edition con- cerned, the divergences of RI1913 and RI1964 from A would
siders MpR, the version of the Libera me, Domine for the result from a more or less contaminated reception of a dif-
Messa per Rossini to be conceptually different from N. 7 for ferent textual tradition that goes back to rRIms (→ rRI1874
the Messa da requiem. We have therefore chosen to use it as a and rRI1875), and was probably approved by the author (see
source only when, given substantially equivalent passages, “The textual tradition”, c). The critical notes concerning the
it proves helpful in those exceedingly rare instances where Ricordi editions still in use are marked with a distinctive
A lacks internal models for resolving issues of lacunae or sign (•), so that the reader can easily detect what is different
ambiguity. MpR will be often cited in the Critical Notes as in this new edition with respect to the previous ones (for
a contributive element to discussions regarding the various instance •55/3rd Vni I A: etc.).
solutions adopted by the secondary sources, or as a means RI1875 is a first rough attempt at a “critical” interpretation,
of reconstructing the genesis of an error (not infrequently, although applied to the reading of I-Mr (despite the fact
where A and MpR diverge, the inconsistencies of A are that, in quite a few cases, it adopts solutions that are closer
remnants from MpR). The autograph fragments I-Bc and to A than to I-Mr; see “Description of sources”, RI1875, p. 7);
I-Mb1,2 are musical cadeaux with no performance function, an exception is the “Liber scriptus” (second version), whose
and also did not play any role in preparing the music text. direct antigraph is A. Therefore, the solutions suggested by
For a critical discussion of problematic passages in A, we RI1875 (especially those concerning the “Liber scriptus”) are
have examined a set of available secondary sources, select- taken into account in the Critical Notes when discussing
problematic passages, especially since they have also been
accepted by RI1913 in many instances.
30 The fact that the manuscript cannot be located as of today,
prevents the possibility to directly check the structure of the fas- MI1874 constitutes the principal source for the verbal text:
cicles. where Verdi wrote the text erroneously or omitted punc-

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tuation marks, this edition draws on the reading of MI1874. Where rRI1875 is identical with rRI1874 (in general, over
In some cases, however, we chose to retain the punctuation the whole composition, except for the “Liber scriptus”) only
of A when it shows relevant expressive qualities. rRI1874 is mentioned. The same applies to RI1913 and RI1964,
rRIms had almost no influence on the definition of the which correspond to a great extent: RI1964 is only mentioned
vocal parts: there is no reason why the readings of rRIms when it diverges from RI1913.
should be preferred to those of A, although the former were
probably approved by the author. Despite this, the Critical
Notes also include readings from this source, especially if Edition criteria
they have entered the current vocal practice through rRI1875 Four decades of critical editions of Italian 19th century
and RI1913. works have brought into focus a series of issues arising
The proofs for rRI1874 were checked and corrected by Ver- from the writing of the main authors of that creative period,
di; unfortunately, the author’s interventions are only docu- and have produced strategies both for the editorial repro-
mented by the drafts of N. 6 Lux æterna (rRIbozze), which duction of manuscript writing, and the typographic mark-
contain Verdi’s correction marks along with those of a Ri- ing of the various levels of editor intervention. Today these
cordi editor. Judging from the quantity and type of inter- strategies are quite familiar to both musicologists and con-
ventions, the composer paid significant attention to rRI1874, ductors, so that it is unnecessary to discuss them in detail.
since it provided the main material for preparing the vocal Given this consolidated editorial tradition, a musician can
parts. As a consequence, this edition uses rRI1874 as a very differentiate between equally reliable critical editions by
authoritative source (also because of its relationship with looking not so much at matters of method, but at the level on
rRIms). Verdi’s corrections in rRIbozze are limited to the piano which the editor sets the threshold for visualizing his/her
part, and have no consequences on the orchestral parts – interventions typographically, i. e. the threshold under which
therefore they did not play any role in determining the the editor deems it unnecessary to make visible his/her in-
music text in this edition. In two instances, however, the terpretive contributions in the score. This edition aims at
editorial staff’s corrections led to hypothesize a relationship keeping the threshold as high as possible, while also re-
between rRIbozze and rRIms (see Critical Notes, N. 6, Notes specting the scientific standards required today of any edi-
4 – 6 and 41– 42). torial project of this type.
The pRI (choral and strings parts) were also corrected by Despite the accuracy of the autograph score, the manu-
Verdi, although hastily: many errors and substantial vertical script writing shows some degree of uncertainty in a series
inconsistencies can be spotted, resulting from a mechani- of aspects. Here we will only mention those that most fre-
cal and hardly reasoned extraction. Furthermore, given the quently lead to problems of interpretation (for all specific
impossibility to know exactly where and how Verdi inter- cases, readers should refer to the Critical Notes).
vened on the proofs, this edition attributes very limited – Imprecision in slurs. Slurs often interrupt due to a page
importance and usefulness to pRI. turn (or change of page), the running out of ink, or an
There is no reason why Verdi should have examined impulsiveness of the gesture.
pUS-Cso; however, this source provides useful informa- – Ambiguity between accents and dim. symbols. Generally speak-
tion where Verdi may have omitted to indicate whether an ing, in the 19th century the semantic difference between
instrumental part should be played “Solo”, “a 2”, “a 3”, or to an accent and a dim. symbol was not so clear-cut as to re-
define the distribution of the three Trbn in a bichord. Fur- quire assigning the accent to the category of articulation
thermore, although only in the case of instruments that are and the dim. symbol to that of dynamics. Both express a
identical or belong to the same family, it is not infrequent variation in intensity, more or less gradual, between the
to observe effective vertical extensions of dynamic indica- “forte” and “piano” dynamic ranges. Therefore, the ques-
tions, articulation signs, and slurs that show a not entirely tion whether a sign is to be regarded as a particularly short
mechanical extraction of parts. dim. symbol or a particularly long accent is a false prob-
In the Critical Notes we used, as a merely practical de- lem: as a rule, in case of simultaneous presence of am-
vice, the symbol → in formulas such as I-Mr → R I1875 biguous and diverging signs, the context itself suggests
→ RI1913 to mark local, but not necessarily global, deriva- whether to attribute an “intensive” or “extensive” value to
tive relationships: in other words, the suggested derivative them (see for example Critical Notes, N. 2, Note 206 –209).
relationship only applies to the specific passage at hand (in- – Interchangeability of carets, accents, staccati. In many pas-
deed, in many instances RI1913 does not follow RI1875, nor sages of A, carets and accents are used in an apparently
does RI1875 follow I-Mr) or to the vocal or instrumental part interchangeable way, a practice that is confirmed by some
concerned. In the formula rRIms → rRI1874 → R I1913 the re- of the contemporary sources: in particular, RI1875 tends to
lationship rRI1874 → R I1913 cannot but be restricted to the assimilate carets to accents in most cases. This provides a
vocal parts and the general indications. The relationship conceptual tool that can be used to perform integrations
rRIms → rRI1874 instead is only taken to be hypothetical, as and standardizations, which may become necessary as a
we have repeatedly pointed out. The derivative relationship consequence of the often lacunose or inconsistent nature
suggested can also be indirect, as long as its source is suf- of Verdi’s writing. Carets and accents are often replaced
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shows that Verdi may have frequently adopted a “short- ambiguity, the editor chooses solutions on a case-by-case
hand” writing for accents and carets, by using staccati basis, considering variables such as context and musical
(for a discussion of this passage see Critical Notes, N. 1, logic, with the aim of reaching a balance between the re-
Note 97–100). spect of Verdi’s writing peculiarities and their standardiza-
– Verbal expressive indications. Sometimes the way they are tion according to the current practice.
written makes them difficult to decipher, in particular the In this edition, the criterion of extension by vertical con-
most commonly used: “solo”, “dolc[issimo]” (also “dol[ce]” – formity of performance indications for families of instru-
or “dol[cissimo]”?), “espr[essivo]” (also “es” or “esp”) etc. ments, which many critical editions adopt as a standard
The secondary sources often omit or misunderstand these approach in case of lacunae and inconsistencies, is often
indications. abandoned in favour of extension by function, especially
– Vertical divergences in dynamic and articulation signs, in the case of the bass function or the melodic-thematic
slurs, expressive indications etc., often caused by haste function. This choice is motivated by the observation that
or by several subsequent stages in the writing of the the principle of non-extensibility (or of extensibility sub con-
score (skeleton score, filling in of orchestration). Vertical dicione) of performance indications to instruments of dif-
divergences in slurs and articulation in identical / simi- ferent families has much more to do with methodological
lar / homorhythmic parts are a constant problem when scruples than with evidence from the actual performance
trying to interpret Verdi’s writing. As far as dynamics is practice. In this edition the most frequent case of such tacit
concerned, a very frequent case is vertical divergence in extension by function, as opposed to the extension by fam-
the “forte” range ( f, ff, fff ), in the orchestral Tutti. The ily criterion, concerns the passages in which Fg, Trbn, Vc,
three signs can often be confused as a result of hasty Cb (or parts of them) progress in unison or in octaves.
writing. It is not always possible (or legitimate) to choose The extension by function criterion finds a specific field
according to which one occurs most frequently. of application in the counterpoint-imitative style sections
– Divergent slurs and articulation signs in theme recurrence in (N. 4 Sanctus, passages of N. 7 Libera me, Domine, “Liber
imitative sections. In vocal parts, Verdi mostly introduces scriptus” 1874), where almost all instrumental parts are the-
the model for articulation and slurs in the first statement matic and often performed simultaneously by instruments
of the Subject, reproducing it in a lacunose (but rarely belonging to different families. The exposition of fugues,
contradictory) way in the following statements. Some- and imitative writing in general, often shows divergences
times, however, he does not define the complete model; in articulation and slurs between different statements of the
in this case, our edition creates one by comparing and thematic parts. In the vocal parts, i. e. in the writing out of
mutually integrating the statements (see below). real parts, Verdi sometimes provides a clear, exhaustive ar-
– Page turns. They often lead to errors and omissions: some- ticulation model in the first exposition of Subject and Coun-
times, after a page turn, Verdi fails to continue a part, tersubject, which the edition tacitly extends to subsequent
or write signs of repetition or of union with another in- expositions. Other times, instead, no thematic part shows
strument (for instance, Fg “coi Bassi”), to extend slurs, a complete articulation. Where there are only lacunae, and
dim. or cresc. symbols, or the verbal text below the notes. not divergences between different statements, the complete
– Repetition of passages with diverging performance indications. model can be inferred by the mutual integration or concur-
Sometimes Verdi generates inconsistencies when he ap- rence of the orchestral parts that double them, where their
plies changes locally without reproducing them in the articulation turns out to be more detailed than that of the
other identical passages (see for instance Critical Notes, vocal parts. This edition adopts the same approach also for
N. 2, Note 558). instrumental parts, respecting possible deviations from the
– Reprises of previous sections. Although reprise repetitions vocal parts in articulation and slurs.
(“come prima”) are much less frequent than in theatri- As a rule, the editor only marks his interventions in the
cal works, in the Messa da requiem they create significant score when A does not offer a complete, exhaustive refer-
problems in at least one case: the repetition of the “Dies ence model for integration / standardization. The editor al-
iræ” episode (or part of it) in N. 2 and N. 7, where only ways signals any rectification (of notes and durations) or
the vocal parts and some of the instrumental parts (most- omission of isolated signs that lack any relevant musical
ly only Vc and Cb) are written out, while all the others meaning (except in the case of mere clerical errors). The
must be repeated identically to the first exposition. Many sign system is mostly traditional:
divergences can be spotted in the written-out parts. This – for signs of articulation, dynamics, verbal indications,
edition tacitly integrates and standardizes the instrumen- the edition uses square brackets, for instance [>] [ ] [  ]
tal parts of these repetitions through mutual comparison [ p] [cantabile] [rallentando] [arco]
(see Critical Notes, N. 2, Note 1– 61, 239 –253, 573 – 598 and – for slurs/ties and cresc. and dim. symbols it uses a broken
N. 7, Note 45 –105), and applies the same principle to the line: [   ; ]
vocal parts, although with specific reservations (see Crit- – for rectified notes and pauses it uses smaller print.
ical Notes, N. 2, Note 3 – 61). – for verbal text integrations it uses italics.
Since it is impossible to arrive at a definitive solution to this – in those passages where lacunae or inconsistencies in
type of issue, or to signal every single writing anomaly and the reading of A lead the editor to intervene more exten-

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sively and “creatively”, a footnote refers readers to the strictly useful for performance. For this purpose, the printed
relevant comment in the Critical Notes – otherwise the volume only contains the critical notes addressed to con-
score would be cluttered with a plethora of broken lines ductors (or to the curious, demanding musician). Here,
and brackets. readers can find the complete Critical Commentary. By us-
In general, the preferred choice is to keep typographic dif- ing the automatic research function it is possible to select
ferentiation to a minimum, so as to streamline the score vis- specific types of problems.
ually and provide conductors with the information that is translated by Elisabetta Zoni

CRITICAL NOTES

N. 1 Requiem [e Kyrie] On p. 17 (b. 78) GV changed to 24 staves, which he set out


S as follows:
[I]
[Violini]
A, vol. I, pp. 1–32 (32 empty) [II]
For the description of A see pp. 1–2. [Viole]
[2] Flauti
Ottavino
E [2] Oboè
On p. 1 GV set out his 20-stave paper as follows: [2] Clarin[etti] / in La
[I] [2] Corni / in Mi
Violini
[II] [2] Corni / in La
Viole [I–II]
Fagotti
2. Flauti [III–IV]
Ottavino Timpani
[2] Oboè [empty]
[2] Clarinetti / in Do [sic]31; at 76 in La [empty]
[2] Corni / in Fa [sic]31; at 76 in Mi Soprano
[2] Corni / in Do [sic]31; at 76 in La Mezzo / Soprano
2. Fagotti Tenore
2. Fagotti Basso
Timpani [Soprani]
[empty] [Contralti]
Coro
[empty] [Tenori]
Soprani [Bassi]
Contralti [Violoncelli]
Coro
Tenori [Contrabbassi]
Bassi
Violoncelli
Contra Bassi T
On p. 1 GV wrote “Requiem” in the top center margin, and
31 When GV began the composition of N. he had probably not “G. Verdi / 1874” in the top right corner. The title might re-
yet decided if he would call for Cl and Cor in the first bars and
fer to the entire Messa da requiem, but for the editions of the
therefore preventatively indicated transpositions for these instru-
ments that would be appropriate for A minor and F major (see also vocal score he explicitly requested that the title for the first
Note Cor). number be “Requiem e Kyrie”, which we adopt.

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C comparison with the previous series of two-
6 Vni, Vle A: no dynamic is present; we supply note slurs and the unison S Coro confirms at
pp in keeping with the indications for Vc at 1 least the need for a slur at 15);
and Cb at 8. In I-Mb1 GV wrote pp between – Vle: no slur at 16, but it is present, if very
Vni I and II, for Vle, and for Vc. lightly marked, at the corresponding 66;
8 Cb A: the fact that GV indicated “sottovoce” – Vc: the slurs at 16 and the corresponding 66
only for Cb reflects the particular attention are analogous. While it cannot be excluded that
he devoted to matters of orchestration. Unlike initially they were both intended to reach the
the other strings, Cb are playing here without  at 17 and 67 respectively (especially the one
a mute, which might otherwise seem an error at 16, which extends far beyond the bar line),
or perhaps a residual reflection of the skeleton this would only have made sense in an earlier
score were it not for the “levate i sordini” he version where the a at 17 and 67 was origi-
explicitly indicated at 76 for Vni, Vle, and Vc, nally c’ (still legible despite the cancellation),
but not for Cb. whereas the indirect resolution of the seventh
8–10, 58–60 Cb A: slur missing; in I-Mb1 (8–10) the slur (d’[Vc]→ c’[Vle]) suggests instead that the slur
is present for both Vc and Cb. should conclude on d'.
12–15 S Coro A: carets missing; we supply in con- On the whole, GV took more care in writing
formity with the corresponding 62– 65. They out 65–66 (including the “rinf.” indication he
are also absent in all of the examined sources. diligently supplied for Vni I, Vni II, and Vle;
12–15 Strings A: there is no doubt, given the plenti- see Note 16).
ful, consistent, and careful supply of indica- 16 Strings A: comparison between 16 and the cor-
tions both here and at the corresponding 62– 65, responding 66 (12–16 and 62–66 have the same
that GV wanted the second beat of every bar to music) reveals the following slight difference in
be accented. Where the divisi Vle part has an the dynamics and expressive indications:
occasional lacuna, the single caret was meant – at 16, cresc. symbol for all parts, “rinf.” for
to refer to both parts. Vni I, “cresc.” for Vc;
12–15 Vc A: slur over the  at 12, followed by a long – at 66, cresc. symbol for all parts, “rinf.” for
slur; we render a single continuous slur as at Vni I, Vni II, and Vle, no “cresc.” for Vc.
62– 65. GV had probably intended initially to Given the impossibility of determining the pre-
highlight each member of the progression in cise difference between “rinf.” and “cresc.” in a
12–14 by means of a series of shorter slurs (as passage where both appear concurrently with
in rRIms → rRI1874), but he immediately opted a cresc. symbol, we suppress the “cresc.” at 16
for the longer slur like the one for Vni I. I-Mr, (unconfirmed at 66) for Vc as superfluous, and
RI1875, and RI1913 resolved the situation by sup- preserve “rinf.” for its expressive emphasis.
plying both the long slur from 12 to 15 and the RI1913 extended the “cresc.” for Vc at 16 to 66
shorter one at 12. as well, and “rinf.” for all strings in both
15 –16 S Coro A: at 16, the first bar following a page bars.
turn (recto to verso), GV neglected to continue 17–18 Coro A: “sempre ppp” appears only above S
the slur from 15, but it concludes unequivocally (rRIms → rRI1874 = “Tutti sempre pp”). It is un-
on the  at the corresponding 65 – 66. likely that the adverb “sempre” was intended
15 –16 Strings A: because of a page turn (recto to to include the successive passage as well; in
verso) between these two bars, the slurs are not fact, at 23 –25 GV marked ppp for each of the
clearly drawn and some doubt remains regard- three vocal entries (I-Mr → R I1875 = pp; RI1913
ing GV’s definitive intentions; however, the = pp at 21 and ppp at 23 –25), thereby imply-
corresponding 65 – 66, which is not interrupted ing a probable variation in the dynamic level
by a page turn, provides a complete and coher- between the ppp at 17–18 and the one at 23. In
ent model for us to follow (see also Note 15 –16 the repetition of the passage at 67ff, GV wrote
Coro). Particular issues of ambiguity may be pp at 71 (see also Note 17–22, 67–72). Therefore
summarized as follows: “sempre” most probably refers to a continua-
– Vni I: the long slur extends abundantly over tion of the previous dynamic level, such that
the bar line at the end of 15 (the last bar on the ppp at 17 would be approximately equivalent
page), suggesting its continuation in the succes- to “il più piano possibile” at 10. Another pos-
sive bar (as at the corresponding 65), but a new sible interpretation is that, in passing from
slur begins at 16/1st and concludes at 18. We “Soli quattro Soprani” at 12–16 to “Tutti” at 17,
opt for the reading of 65–67; GV may simply have intended to confirm the
– Vni II: there is no slur at either 15 or 16, but previous dynamic level with “sempre ppp”,
the model at 65–66 is unequivocal (in addition, which is why it appears for S Coro alone.

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17–18 Vc A: slur missing; we (like I-Mr → R I1875 the other parts as well at the corresponding 74.
→ RI1913) supply from the corresponding 67–68. While this might seem sufficient reason to sup-
17–22, 67–72 A: divergent dynamics. Our solution is ply the missing accents at 24, the dynamic con-
derived from a reciprocal comparison of these texts are very different for these two otherwise
two identical passages, which reveals the fol- identical passages: cresc.-dim. at 23ff, versus a
lowing specific differences: continuous cresc. at 73ff. We consequently sup-
– 17, 67: at 17, ppp for Vni I, Vc, and Cb, but pp press the isolated accent at 24. RI1875 replaced it
for Vni II and Vle; at 67, ppp for Vni I, but pp with a caret and extended it to the other parts,
for the other strings. We (like RI1875 → R I1913) but I-Mr and RI1913 ignored it altogether. rRIms
opt for ppp, which is supported by Coro at (→ rRI1874) adopted the accent for both hands
both 17 and 67; as consistent with its interpretation of the
– 21, 71: at 21, pp for all strings but with an phrasing at 23 –27 (see the relative Note).
additional ppp above Vni I (perhaps residual 25 B Coro A: the slur extends beyond the end of
from an earlier partially completed version); at 25, the last bar on the page, but there is no con-
71, pp for strings and Coro. We (like RI1913) pre- tinuation and conclusion after the page turn
fer the homogeneous pp at 71 for 21 as well. (recto to verso); we (like RI1913) find it plausible
19–20 Strings A: the cresc. symbols above Vni I and that the word “eis” at 26/1st should in fact be
beneath Cb extend through both bars, probably rendered in the same fashion as it appears for
residual from an earlier partially completed ver- the other voices. rRIms (→ rRI1874), on the other
sion; in fact, those for the other strings in this hand, extended the slur to the second  at 26.
passage are confined to 20, and all strings at 26 T Coro A: dynamic missing; we supply in con-
the corresponding 70 have the shorter symbol. formity with the previous entries of the other
20 Vle A: the slur from 19 stops at the beginning parts.
of the bar; we complete the two-bar phrase as 28, 30, 32, 34 Coro I-Bc: mf rather than f.
it is in Vni I and II (but see Note 69–70). •28/3rd– 4th B Coro A: both accents are missing, but they
21–22, 71–72 Vc, Cb A: no slurs are present for either pas- may be logically integrated by analogy with
sage, but their integration (as in RI1875 → R I1913) the ones GV carefully marked for the other vo-
is suggested by the concomitant legato move- cal entries at 30 (T), 32 (C), and 34 (S). There is
ment of Vni and Vle. in fact no valid reason for their omission: each
23 –27 Strings A: divergent slurs. Vni I and Vc each subject head in this fugato section should have
have a single continuous slur for 23 –25, while the same character and the same articulation.
there is a break in the slurs for Vni II and Vle rRIms added the accents but they are not pre-
between 24 and 25 (Cb has no slur at 23 –24). sent in I-Mr, RI1875, and RI1913 (only later RI1964
I-Mr (→ R I1875) maintained this divergence, reinstated them).
but RI1913 normalized all parts to the longer 34–35/1st T Coro A: the accents and slur seem to con-
unbroken slur. Although within the limits of a tradict one another, but both are clearly and
reduction for piano, rRIms (→ rRI1874) confirms precisely marked. The only minor ambiguity
instead the solution found in this edition. At concerns the conclusion of the slur: 34 is the
the end of 25, the last bar before a page turn last bar before a page turn (recto to verso), and
(recto to verso), the slur for Vni I extends well GV marked the slur in a manner that suggests
into the margin, almost to the edge of the page, its continuation but there is no conclusion at
implying its continuation into the next bar 35. I-Mr and RI1875 and follow A; rRIms, rRI1874
(the positions of the slurs for Vni II and – less and RI1913 eliminated the slur and added an
decisively – for Vc would seem to support this accent for the first  (a).
hypothesis). Nevertheless, after the page turn 36 A: “dim.” only above S Coro, presumably
GV marked slurs only for Vni I and Vc, limited intended as a general indication; it cannot be
to the two  at 26 –27. I-Mr, RI1875, and RI1913 excluded, however, that GV was referring to S’s
consequently concluded the slurs at 25/4th. We held note alone. All of the examined sources,
prefer the solution found in rRIms (→ rRI1874), including I-Bc, follow A.
which gives greater preference to the positions 37 S, C, T Coro A: four dynamics for the three vo-
of the slurs at 25 and prolongs them to 27 (but cal parts: ppp above and immediately beneath
see also Note 24), although it is also perfectly the three staves, probably intended as a general
possible to close the slurs at 25 and follow indication, and pp regularly above the staves
them with the circumscribed slurs at 26 –27. for C and T. There is no valid reason for these
24 Vc A: accent over the second  , possibly residu- differentiated dynamics, although I-Bc chose
al from an earlier idea and unconfirmed in the to assign pp only to S and C. RI1875 (→ R I1913)
other string parts, but an accent is present for normalized to ppp.

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•37–39 S Coro A: GV marked one slur per bar with plausible solution. Nevertheless we believe his
no apparent concern for the natural apportion- original intention was to begin the slur from
ment of the motivic material and the text, both 3rd in correspondence with the tonic syllable
of which suggest instead moving each slur ([orati-]o-[nem]).
ahead by one beat. 47/1st– 49/1st S Coro I-Bc: slur, not present in A. GV
•37/4th T Coro A: the dot for the last  may seem to made extremely parsimonious use of slurs in
be in contradiction with the tie, but only if the second part of this a cappella section to
the articulation mark is read exclusively as highlight the more cantabile phrases (see also
a staccato. In point of fact, the dot embraced Note 41/4th– 42/2nd); here in fact there is a slur
other functions in nineteenth-century notation, for T, whose melodic line is so significant that
especially for the voice, where the desired ef- it becomes the sole focus of attention between
fect would be one that was extremely distinct 49/3rd and 50/1st. Consequently we do not find
and precise. We therefore preserve the dot on it opportune to adopt the slur from I-Bc, a
4th as musically pertinent. RI1875 did likewise source of later date that was written when the
but omitted the dot on 1st; RI1913 suppressed all composer’s original motivations were perhaps
four dots; I-Bc and rRIms (→ rRI1874) eliminated long forgotten.
both the dots and the slur. 50 C, B Coro A: divergent slurs: on 2nd–3rd for
39/3rd–4th C Coro A: there is a faint but unequivocal C, but for B on 2nd– 4th (extending slightly
slur for the two  , unconfirmed in S notwith- beyond the bar line), an unjustifiable difference
standing the same segment of text (“tibi”) and given the parallel movement between them
homorhythmic movement of that part. We (like and identical text; we find C’s slur to be the
all of the examined sources) choose to suppress more appropriate choice and extend it
it as superseded by the concomitant longer to B. rRIms and RI1875 ignored both slurs; rRI1874
slur. has only the longer slur for B, which RI1913 also
•40–41 Sources: of the three cresc. symbols in A, rRIms adopted and extended to C.
(→ rRI1874) confused the one GV marked at 40 50 – 55 S Coro A: ambiguously marked slurs: a first
between the staves for C and T, with “cresc.” slur begins at 50/2nd and ends with the  at
nested within it (the other symbols appear 52, while a second slur opens between the two
above and below the four voices), for a slur for  at 53 and continues through to the end of
T (39/4th–41/1st); I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) read the phrase (I-Mr and RI1875 follow A, but they
it instead as a tie between the  at 40 and the  begin the second slur exactly over the second
at 41/1st.  at 53). Setting aside the unlikely choice of
•41/3rd–44 S Coro A: there is a break in the slur at separating the two syllables of “ca-ro”, we may
42/2nd (corresponding to the two beamed take GV’s notational imprecision to mean that
sixteenth notes) and it stops just before the bar the second slur should begin on the first  at
line between 43 and 44; nonetheless GV’s inten- 53 (as in RI1913), such that the entire phrase is
tions are sufficiently clear. rRIms (→ rRI1874) sung legato. rRIms (→ rRI1874) overlooked the
and RI1913 ignored the slur altogether. first slur but anticipated the beginning of the
41/4th– 42/2nd A: it is plausible that, by indicating ff for second one at the first  of 53; in the reduction
S at 42/1st, GV wanted to underscore a natural serving as a reference guide for the piano there
dynamic emphasis on the melodic line in its is a single continuous slur from 50/2nd to 55.
moment of greatest exposure – coming into re- 50/1st T Coro A: p appears after the note (a), even
lief as it does with respect to the other parts by though there is sufficient space for GV to have
virtue of its facile vocal emission, melodic arc, written it before the note. His decision seems
register, and phrasing (only S has a slur); we deliberate and significant: in fact, the two 
therefore preserve the differentiated dynam- at 49 are still f (in keeping with the general
ics indicated in A and add an f for C. rRIms dynamic) and it would be unnatural for T to
(→ rRI1874) follows A; RI1875 (→ R I1913) normal- drop immediately to p with the a at 50/1st. We
izes all parts to ff, I-Bc to f. preserve the position of the dynamic as it is
45–46 A: cresc. symbol only above S Coro, intended in A.
as a general indication for all parts. 51 S, C, B Coro A: “omnes” rather than “omnis”.
47 T Coro A: the beginning of the slur falls 51/3rd–53/1st T, B Coro A: beneath the part for B there
between the two  on 3rd and 4th. rRIms are traces of a slur or perhaps prolongation
(→ rRI1874) and RI1875 (→ R I1913) found it more lines after the last syllable of text (unusual in
convincing musically to begin on 2nd, but A). Nevertheless, despite this uncertainty the
without any corroboration in A. In I-Bc GV slur for the concomitant T can be extended to
had the slur begin from the  at 48, an equally B for vertical conformity. Among the examined

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sources only RI1913 has the slur for both parts, changed from  to  (the form of the added
but concluding at 52/4th. flag is much rounder than usual); this would
56 –72 A: 56 –72 are a fully elaborated reprise of 6 –22; seem to indicate that GV wanted an identical
the indication “come prima” above Vni I at 56 repetition of 21–24 and 71–74 (since 74 is the
implies not only a return to the former tempo first bar following a page turn, he may simply
but also the authorization to adopt all of the have forgotten to go back and make the same
various expressive indications (slurs, articula- correction from  to  in the previous bars).
tion, dynamics) that are present in the earlier All of the examined sources follow A, includ-
presentation and to resolve any notational ing the original reading of 74/4th without
ambiguities or lacunae that arise by means of the prolongation dot and the second flag. We
comparison and eventual integration. In the believe the lack of rhythmic conformity with
Notes that follow we report only those cases 21–23 at 71–73 was the result of distraction or
that continue to resist a definitive interpreta- haste, since 56 –72 are essentially identical to
tion, comparison between 6–22 and 56–72 6 –22.
notwithstanding. 73 –76 Strings A: incongruent slurs. It is not possible
57, 59 Coro A: at 57 “pp sottovoce” for T and ppp for to use the analogous 23 –26 as a model because
B; at 59 only “sottovoce” for S and C. At the of the different expressive contexts: while this
corresponding 7 and 9 only “sottovoce”, which passage moves through a continuous cresc.,
is itself sufficient to establish a pp dynamic there is a cresc.-dim. at 23 –26. Another decisive
rapport with the strings. At 57 “pp sottovoce” difference is the presence of accents at 74/3rd
provides the most detail, where the dynamic is for four of the five string parts (Vc = Cb),
precautionary reminder of the previous level whereas only a trace of one, for Vc alone, is
that had been obtained and balances the voices present at 24 (see the relative Note). As a result,
with the strings. It also allows for a further the lacunae and inconsistencies in the phrasing
reduction to “il più piano possibile” even when for 73 –76 lend themselves to different interpre-
the four choral parts sing together (60–61 as at tations. Specifically:
10–11). 73 (last bar of a recto): the slurs for Vni II and
58 Vc A: p, which is in any case inconsistent with Cb (Vc = Cb) extend beyond the bar line as if to
the pp for Cb; at the corresponding 8 Vc were be continued in the following bar, while there
already pp from the opening bar. are no slurs for Vni I and Vle;
59–60 Vni I A: tie missing, probably forgotten over 74 (first bar of a verso): after the page turn
the change of page (verso to recto) between 59 there is a broadly marked slur well above Vni I
and 60; we supply from the corresponding (almost as if it were a general indication) that
9–10. seems to suggest continuation from 73. Mean-
60–61 Coro A: “il più piano possibile” missing; we while there are different contrasing slurs be-
(like RI1913) supply from the corresponding neath it for Vni I and II and Vle: those for Vni I
10–11. and Vle begin just after the first , but the slur
62–65 Vle A: for the carets in this part, see Note for Vni II begins on 3rd. There is no slur for Cb
12–15 Strings. (Vc = Cb). The only part with a minimum of
62–66 Strings A: for the slurs, see Notes 15–16 and 16. coherence, if nonetheless lacunose, would seem
67– 68 Coro A: ppp rather than “sempre ppp” as at the to be Vni II, which we use as the basis for the
corresponding 17–18 (see also Note 17–18); since phrasing we provide in this edition (none of
the meaning of “sempre” is ambiguous (and the examined sources offers this same solution;
of no interpretative impact) at 17–18, we find it in particular RI1913 has a single continuous slur
unnecessary to integrate the indication here. for all of the string parts at 73 –76).
69–70 Vni I and II, Vle A: a change of page between 73–77 Strings A: GV marked large cresc. symbols
69 and 70 (verso to recto) forced GV to mark the above Vni I and beneath Cb as general indica-
slurs with two separate pen strokes (the second tions, adding others for individual parts unsys-
half of Vni’s slur is missing at 70); we adjust in tematically but without obscuring the sense of
conformity with the corresponding 19–20 (but his intentions. At 73 he added “a poco” (for “a
see also Note 20, Vle). poco a poco”, possibly left incomplete because
71–72 Coro A: GV marked only one slur for these of an intervening page turn between 73 and
parts, above S. 74) inside the symbol beneath Cb. Originally
71–73 Coro A: at 71/4th, 72/2nd, and 73/4th (second the cresc. symbols above Vni I and beneath Cb
half of each beat),  rather than  (with the both extended to the end of 77. GV then inter-
relative prolongation dot missing from the rupted the parts for Vni I and II, Vle, and Vc
previous note). At 74/4th the note was later at 76/2nd, erasing the  and replacing it with

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 Â in order to give the players more time to articulation. While GV’s intentions are suffi-
remove their mutes (“levate i sordini”). As a ciently clear for the articulation despite certain
result he also erased the last part of the cresc. incongruencies (see Notes 83/1st and 84), solu-
symbol above Vni I corresponding to the indi- tions for the slurs leave some margin of doubt
cation “sempre cresc.”, which consequently has (which I-Mr → R I1875 → R I1913 did little to
no further reason to exist. We suppress “sem- resolve). The prevalent model of slur for those
pre cresc.” as a residual indication from the bars with the dactylic rhythmic pattern seems
skeleton score, but we cautiously preserve the to embrace all of the notes in each bar without
continuation of the cresc. for Cb after the other extending beyond the bar line (for example,
strings have stopped playing. 82–84), apart from occasional exceptions (80–81
75–78 B Coro A: no slur is present; we suggest by Vc and 88–89 Fg I); at 87–88, Fg I has a single
analogy with S, C, and T at 76–78 (but see also continuous slur for all of the notes in both
Note 78/1st). bars. Given that these minor notational incon-
76 Winds A: GV marked p only for Fl; given its sistencies are fairly commonly encountered in
confirmation for S, C, and T Coro, we extend this period, we render the slurs in accordance
vertically to the other winds. with the prevalent model.
76 Cor A: GV indicated the proper transpositions 78/1st A: in beginning a new fascicle of 24-stave
for both pairs of instruments only at 78, which paper (four more staves were now necessary
is the start of a new page (at 1 he had provi- for the entrance of the soloists) with this bar,
sionally called for transpositions in Fa and Do; GV forgot to resolve Fl, Ob, Cl, Cor, and Coro;
see the complete ensemble list at the beginning their notes were entered in pencil by a copyist
of this commentary), but they clearly should for Casa Ricordi. According to the correspond-
be in Mi and La beginning from 76 (where ence between GV and Ricordi, the integration
another hand added “In Mi” and “In la” in was requested – and presumably approved –
pencil). by the composer himself.32 Although there are
76–77 Cor A: there are no ties for Cor I–II but rather no conclusions for the slurs GV initiated at 76,
a single continuous slur over the stave that their general shape strongly suggests that they
extends into the right margin of the page (77 were intended to continue into 78. However,
is the last bar of a verso). In pUS-Cso there is the copyist did supply ties for Cor I–II at 78/1st,
a clearly marked tie between 77 and 78 for Cor even though they are not present at the end of
I, and a concomitant if less distinct one for Cor 77. We find them musically plausible and adopt
II. We preserve the slur from A but also adopt them, as did pUS-Cso (see Note 76 –77).
the ties from pUS-Cso, supported by their inte- •80 – 81, 84 – 85, 88 – 89 A: dynamic incongruencies,
gration into A (in another hand) at 78 (see Note presumably resulting from different phases of
78/1st). Cor III–IV have no slur either in A or in work on the score. GV systematically marked
pUS-Cso; even so, the slur above Cor I–II was cresc. symbols for each of these passages over
most probably intended for both pairs of homo- Vni I, beneath Vle, for Fg I–II and Vc, and be-
rhythmic instruments. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) neath Cb, all of them extending to the ends of
changed the slur in A into two ties for Cor I–II 81, 85, and 89 respectively. But he later added
between 76 and 77. conflicting dim. symbols on 3rd–4th in each of
•78 T soloist A: carets; we modify to match the these bars for Vni and Vle, probably while or-
accents for the entries of B soloist (82), S soloist chestrating the Ob, Cl, Fg III–IV and Cor parts
(86), and Ms (90). rRIms has neither the car- with their diminuendo. We prefer a system
ets at 78 or the accents at 82, and the copyist of “intersecting dynamics” analogous to the
confused the line GV marked to underscore solution found in RI1913, preserving the cresc.
“animando un poco” with a slur; these errors symbols for Fg I–II, Vc, and Cb as they appear
were transmitted to rRI1874 and to RI1913 (where in A (there is no reason to modify them) while
the slur extends to 79/4th). interrupting the cresc. for Vni and Vle on 3rd
•78 Fg I, Vni, Vle, Vc A: GV marked p only for at 81, 85, and 89 to allow sufficient space for
Vc; RI1913 = f for Fg I and Vc, corrected to p in their dim. through the remainder of the bar.
RI1964 (where it was extended vertically as in RI1964 instead preferred to extend the dim. on
this edition). 3rd– 4th to Vc and Cb as well (both RI1913 and
78 Vni, Vle, Vc A: GV added a superfluous “senza RI1964 report ambiguous readings for Fg I–II
sordini” instruction here (78 is the first bar of a that have little to do with the indications in A).
recto) after “levate i sordini” in the two previ-
ous bars; we suppress. 32 See the undated Verdi’s letter to Ricordi (post March ),
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•81 T soloist A: the cresc. symbol extends to the III–IV, although it is highly probable that GV
end of the bar, like the ones GV marked in wanted a uniform duration here (as at 82) for
the skeleton score for Vni, Vle, Fg I–II, Vc, and all participants in the cadential figure (see the
Cb (see Note 80 – 81, 84 – 85, 88 – 89). As he was other wind parts). At 90 GV wrote  for Cb and
completing the orchestration with the parts for for Fg II and IV, again anomalous with respect
Ob, Cl, Fg III–IV, and Cor, however, he fixed to the prevalent  in the two previous pas-
the apex of the cresc. on 3rd and wrote f above sages. We therefore modify Cb at 86, and Fg II,
the symbol at that point. We prefer the solution IV and Cb at 90, for vertical conformity and by
found in I-Mr and RI1913, where the cresc. sym- analogy with 82. RI1875 (→ R I1913) also normal-
bol stops just before the f. RI1964, on the other ized Cb at 86, but not Fg II, IV and Cb at 90;
hand, extended the original cresc. symbol in A RI1964 returned to the reading of A for both
to 82/1st. bars.
81– 82, 85 – 86, 89 – 90 Ob, Cl, Cor A: at 85 – 86 GV marked •88 S soloist A: the position of the f corresponds
slurs for Ob I, Cor I and III (and possibly Cl), closely to that of the prolongation dot, which,
and a tie for Cor IV, but so indistinctly that it in standard nineteenth-century notation, tends
is difficult to justify their adoption and con- to fall relatively close to where its duration
sequent extension to the analogous 81– 82 and begins in the bar rather than directly beside
89 – 90, where they are totally absent; not find- the note. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) omitted both
ing them musically indispensable, we suppress. the cresc. symbol and f; RI1964 limited the cresc.
I-Mr follows A; pUS-Cso largely absorbed the symbol to 87 and placed the f at the beginning
same incongruencies as well; RI1875 (→ R I1913) of 88; rRIms (→ rRI1874) displaced the cresc.,
vertically extended the slurs/ties at 85 – 86. such that it begins at 88 and extends to the
•82/1st Fg III–IV A: GV left the bar empty follow- eighth note at 89/3rd.
ing a page turn (recto to verso); the resolutions 89–90 Fg III–IV A: dim. symbol missing; we supply in
were added in another hand. While present in conformity with Ob, Cl, and Cor, as well as the
pUS-Cso, they were evidently integrated after analogous 81–82 and 85–86.
the preparation of I-Mr, which has nothing for 90, 91 Cb A: p at 90/1st, pp at 91/1st; we anticipate
this bar. The lacuna was transmitted to RI1875 the pp to 90 for conformity with the analogous
(→ R I1913). entry of Vc.
83/1st Vc A: anomalous staccato beneath the note; we 90/1st Fg A: pp missing; we supply in vertical con-
suppress. formity with Vc and Cb (but see also Note 90,
83/4th–84/1st Vc A: additional slur for these three notes; 91).
while it cannot be discounted as a senseless 92 Vni II A: staccato for the last eighth note, in-
musical gesture, we prefer to maintain the compatible with the tie; we suppress.
prevailing pattern of one slur per bar. 92–95 A: cresc. symbols at the top and bottom of the
84 Fg A: staccati on 2nd and 4th missing. system (above Vni I and beneath Cb) as general
85–86 Cor A: dim. symbols missing; we supply in indications. During preparation of the skeleton
vertical conformity with Ob, Cl, and Fg III–IV, score GV probably marked a shorter cresc.
as well as the analogous cadential figures for beneath Cb, for 94 alone; this would explain
Cor at 81–82 and 89–90. the concomitant “cresc.” above Ob and beneath
85, 89 Vni, Vle A: the absence of accents and f on 3rd Fg III–IV (probably intended for all of the wind
with respect to the analogous 81/3rd may be instruments) and above S soloist. In all likeli-
explained by the fact that 81 is the only time hood the crescendo from 92 was a later deci-
the voice and orchestra share a concurrent sion, which would also explain the pp for T
dynamic climax on 3rd; in addition, the phrase and B Coro and the p for C Coro at 94, too soft
for T soloist is decidedly more assertive in with respect to the continuing crescendo from
character than the successive ones for B and S. 92 that had already begun pp, but adequate for
We therefore maintain the reading of A. I-Mr a crescendo limited to 94. Obtaining the proper
did likewise, while RI1875 (→ R I1913) omitted the dynamic balance between the Coro and the
accents at 81. other parts therefore remains the responsibility
86 Fg I–II A: pp missing; we supply in vertical of the interpreter. rRIms (→ rRI1874) and RI1875
conformity with Vc (Fg I) and Cb (Fg II). (→ R I1913) eliminated the cresc. symbols at 94,
•86, 90 Fg II–IV, Cb A: at 82 (Cb) GV carefully wrote but they reappear in RI1964.
  as he did for the analogous Fg II (another 93/1st–3rd Cor II A: slur missing; we supply by analogy
hand added the eighth-note dyad for Fg III–IV; with the concomitant Cor III (and suggested by
see Note 82/1st). At 86, on the other hand, Cb Vni II playing at the upper octave).
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head for the e’’ at 95/1st; we add the second tie the same dyad for both pairs of Fg. All of the
and note head in agreement with RI1913. examined sources follow A.
95 B Coro, Fg, Cor, Cb A: GV marked f for Cb •97–100 Ob, Cl, Fg, Cor, Vc A: divergent articulation
following the crescendo from 92 to 94, but he in this passage: for Cor I at 98 and Ob at 99,
was probably referring to the earlier cresc. he staccati rather than the two carets and the ac-
had originally indicated for 94 alone (see Note cent (see in the volume Plate 2, p. 275 and here
92–95); B Coro and Fg, both of whom follow Edition criteria, “Interchangeability of carets,
the lower strings, also have f. The fact that accents, staccati”, pp. 10–11); no articulation is
Cor have f as well suggests that GV wrote present for Cl. The models GV marked for Fg
the Fg and Cor parts immediately after the and Cor III at 97 are both clear and convinc-
lower strings and simply left these dynam- ing, however, and may therefore be extended
ics uncorrected when he later completed the to Ob, Cl, and Cor I. On the other hand, we do
orchestration. There is no doubt, however, that not find it opportune to extend the carets and
he wanted the climax to be ff, as he carefully accent to Vc, which part has no articulation at
indicated for the other parts. either 97 or 99. RI1875 (→ R I1913) replaced the
95/2nd T soloist A: f, senseless after the general ff on carets with accents and extended in all cases,
1st; we suppress, as did all of the examined including Vc.
sources. 98–99 Cl A: slur missing; we supply by analogy with
95/3rd–96 S soloist A: there is a residual tie at the end the other woodwinds and in vertical conform-
of 95 (the last bar of a verso), referring to an ity with the unison Cor I.
earlier version of 96 that began with another 99–100 T soloist A: slur missing; we supply by analogy
b''. I-Mr and RI1875 preserved it. with Ms at 97–98.
96 Cb A: the note has a sign similar to a small 99–100 C Coro, Vc A: distracted by the page turn (recto
cross that can be interpreted as an isolated ac- to verso) between these two bars, GV forgot to
cent; we suppress. conclude the slurs at 100.
96 –103 A: lacunae and incongruencies in the dy- 100–101 S Coro A: slur missing; we supply by analogy
namic indications. At 97/1st GV marked pp with the previous entries of B, T, and C Coro.
for Vc and Cb, and ppp for B Coro. The pp 101, 102 A: “espressivo” (variously abbreviated) is pre-
for Vc and Cb is consistent with the pp at 96 sent only for Ott and Vni I at 101, and for Cl I
for Vni I, but their accompanying indication at 102; we extend to the other instruments that
“leggeris[simo]”, replicated at 97 for Vni II and share this same motivic entry in these bars.
Vle (“legger[issimo]”), and Fl (“legg[erissimo]”), None of the examined sources included it.
seems to suggest ppp instead. It is also some- 101–104 Ott, Fl, Ob I, Cl I, Fg I, Vni I, II A: missing and
what perplexing that GV would want a softer divergent slurs. The most coherent and com-
dynamic for the Coro than the orchestra. In the plete models of one slur per bar are present for
event this difference may have been the unin- Cl I and Vni II, both of which agree with the
tentional product of different phases of work unison T soloist. We also extend this phrasing
on the score, the two indications should be to the instrumental parts that double S soloist
normalized (RI1875 [→ R I1913] has pp for Coro). (whose slurs are consistently present – unlike
At 101 GV wrote pp for B and T Coro, Vni I, the instruments – and unequivocal), although
and Cb, but p for Fg and Cor; here, while the with some caution with regard to Vni I, given
dynamics are discordant, they seem intended that their “pp espressivo” could just as easily
to reflect an incremental rise in the general be executed alla corda rather than legato (and
level of sound with respect to 97 (were this not in fact there are no slurs for Vni I in RI1913).
the case, the pp for Vni I and Cb at 101 would The possibility that GV would simply have
be redundant). We therefore suggest a uniform forgotten to supply any phrasing for Vni I is
ppp at 97ff (extending the ppp for B Coro to T, not plausible in light of the care he devoted to
C, and S Coro), which we also anticipate to 96 the notation of this part, including the “divisi”
for Vni I; and pp for S and C Coro at 102 and instruction (with its dotted line diligently
103 respectively so that they are properly bal- extended to the end of the passage) and the
anced with T and B Coro. “pp espressivo”, not to mention the exhaustive
96/1st Fg I A: g ; however, after doubling T solo- presence of slurs and articulation in the follow-
ist and T Coro (along with Vle, Vc, etc.) at 95, ing bars (105 –107). The absence of slurs for Vni
there is no reason that Fg I should not resolve I is therefore a significant factor to consider in
in like manner to e’. Probably distracted by the choosing how to perform this passage.
change of page (verso to recto) between 95 and 102/1st–2nd Cl II, 104/3rd–4th Cor I A: staccati for the
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analogy with Ob II, where they are present at well above the stave at the top of the page, is
101 and 103. intended as a general indication, like the cresc.
103 T soloist A: the slur stops at the ; we adjust by symbol (see also Note 105–107). Cor and Fg
analogy with S soloist at 102. also have ff, while the other winds and Timp
103–105/1st Fg III–IV A: ties missing. have f. The two ff for the voices are again
105 –106 Vni II A, I-Mr: in A the slur that begins in general indications, one for the soloists (above
105 starts approximately mid-way between S soloist) and the other for Coro (above S Coro);
the two  and stops at 106/1st. The copyist there is an additional f above B soloist. These
of I-Mr started the slur slightly earlier but differences would appear to pertain to dif-
likewise ended it at 106/1st; a second slur from ferent compositional layers. GV probably first
105/3rd to 106/1st was later added in purple wrote the parts for Cb and B soloist (which
pencil, while yet another intervention in pencil explains the f for these two parts), then turned
prolonged the first slur to 106/4th. We base our to Ott, Fl, Ob, Cl, and Timp (all with an f) – in
slur for Vni II on this last suggestion in I-Mr, other words, those instrumental parts that
which concurs with the slur for the parallel Cb. “punctuate” the completion of the crescendo –
105 –107 A: there are general cresc. symbols above and while momentarily postponing Fg and eventu-
beneath the system, above the four soloists, ally Vc by association. Later, while completing
between the staves for Cor (perhaps intended the composition of the vocal parts and filling
for all of the wind parts above it, since at that in the remaining orchestration (but not neces-
point Cor do not play), and beneath Fg III–IV. sarily all at the same time), he may have opted
GV had originally planned a cresc. only for for ff without however adjusting the various
107, as testified by the shorter symbols that are f that were already in place. We normalize all
still visible beneath the longer ones (above Vni, parts to ff. I-Mr has ff for all of the instru-
beneath Cb, and above S soloist); this would ments, f for Coro (apart an ff for T Coro), and
explain the presence of the shorter symbols a barely visible ff for S soloist; from which the
(only at 107) beneath B soloist, Vle, and Vc. It readings of RI1913 (no dynamic for the soloists, f
cannot be excluded that the p at 107 for T solo- for Coro, and ff for the orchestra) and possibly
ist – rather weak in the context of a crescendo rRIms (→ rRI1874) were derived.
begun two bars earlier and uncomfortably •109–114 Fg I, Vc A: divergent slurs (causing incongru-
close to the climatic ff soon to follow – is encies in the derivative sources that were also
residual from the original shorter cresc.; but it transmitted to RI1913). At 109–110 the slur for
is equally possible that GV actually wanted an Fg I extends almost to 110/4th, while Vc has a
“imperceptible” entrance for T soloist. slur for each bar at 111–112. At 113–114 the slurs
106–107/1st Ob II, Cl II, Vle A: slurs only for Vle (both for both parts are broken by a change of page
of them carefully drawn) and Cl II (one faint (verso to recto) between the two bars, conclud-
slur at 106/4th–107/1st); given the clarity of GV’s ing on 4th at 114. We adopt and extend the
intentions, we (like RI1913) supply the missing models GV clearly marked at 109–110 (Vc) and
slurs for Cl II and Ob II. 111–112 (Fg I).
106/3rd S soloist A: the staccato, while musically plausi- 109–114 Vni, Vle A: a fair number of slurs are missing
ble, could be residual from an earlier cancelled but GV’s intentions are clear, confirmed also by
version; nevertheless its concomitant presence the analogous accompanimental pattern at 78ff.
for those instrumental parts that double S solo- 110, 112, 114 Vni, Vle A: the staccati on 3rd are missing
ist seems to confirm GV’s intentions notwith- at 110 for Vni, at 112 for Vni I and Vle, and at
standing any lingering doubt. 114 for all three parts. While this discontinu-
107 T soloist A: regarding the p for this part, see ity might argue for their suppression, we find
Note 105 –107. them musically plausible and therefore adopt
107/1st Strings A: unlike the other strings, Vle has a and extend them accordingly. They are not
staccato for the first note, which is beamed present in I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913).
together with the other three as it is for Vni I 110/4th A: f only for Fl and Ott. Notwithstanding its
and II. We prefer the more musically plausible exiguous presence, however, we find it an ex-
solution found in Vc and Cb, where the first tremely compelling contribution to the musical
note is separated from the others, and extend it sense of this passage and (like RI1913) extend it
to the upper strings. both vertically here and horizontally to the two
•107/4th–108/1st A: divergent dynamic indications. An analogous gestures at 112 and 114. As a means
f for Cb could be residual from the skeleton of supporting the cresc. for Vc, we also suggest
score, probably superseded by the ff for Vc. In anticipating the f for Vni and Vle to the  on
addition, the concomitant ff for Vni I, written 3rd.

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114 –115 A: divergent dynamics, probably arising from tions of the word “eleison”, each one beginning
decisions in the skeleton score that subsequent- on 2nd (with the exception of 115) and conclud-
ly changed during orchestration. As the struc- ing on 1st of the next bar. We also find this a
tural scaffolding for this passage, S soloist and valid consideration for extension to Cb, as well
Cb were probably written first, in which case as Fg I and all of those parts that double Ms
their ff (the only ones on the page) do not nec- and C Coro: Ob II (only the first note at 115 is
essarily signify that their parts should emerge different), Cl II, and Cor III–IV. This solution is
over an otherwise homogeneous context of f, present in none of the examined sources.
but represent rather a provisional idea that 116, 117 S Coro A: accents on 2nd missing; we supply
was later superseded when GV very diligently in vertical conformity with S soloist.
marked an f for Vni I and all of the other vocal 116/2nd Cor I–II (117 = 116) A: accent missing.
parts. The remaining instrumental parts have 117/4th Timp A: staccati missing.
no dynamic, but it should be remembered that 118 B soloist A: GV originally duplicated the same
Fl and Ott (and presumably the other winds) octave dyad he wrote for B Coro, then im-
were already f from 110 (see Note 110/4th). We mediately wiped away the upper note. I-Mr
prefer to bring S soloist and Cb into conformity (→ R I1875) and rRIms (rRI1874) have both; RI1913
with the general f, which additionally allows has the d’ as an “oppure”, which however
that the rise to ff at 118 have an appreciable makes no appreciable musical or practical sense.
impact. RI1913 maintained the ff for S soloist 118 Timp A: dim. symbol with no roll indication
and f for the other vocal parts while extending for the note; our solution is present in
the ff for Cb to the entire orchestra. pUS-Cso. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) follows A.
115 T soloist A: GV marked the f in alignment 119–121 Voices A: the slurs and staccati are clearly
with the c’  on 1st, probably led momentarily marked at 119–120 for S soloist and S and C
astray by the f for the other parts on 2nd. Find- Coro, allowing us to extend them without
ing no musical justification for this position, typographical distinction to Ms (where they
we move the f ahead to 4th for vertical con- are missing), and at 120–121 to T and B soloists
formity with T Coro. and T and B Coro (where only the staccati are
115 –116 Vni II, Vle, Vc (117 = 116) A: despite various present for B Coro at 120). With regard to the
missing and misplaced staccati (at 116/2nd dynamics, we adjust the pp for B soloist and T
Vni II have a slur for the first two notes and and B Coro at 120 to match the prevailing ppp
staccati for the last two, and on 3rd they have GV marked for the other vocal parts.
staccati for the last three notes), there is one 119/3rd–120/1st Ob, Cl A: slurs and staccati missing; we
clear model at 116/2nd for Vc that is sufficient supply in vertical conformity with Fl and Ott.
proof of GV’s intentions and can be extended 121 Fg A: staccati missing; we supply in vertical
throughout this passage. conformity with Cor.
115–117 Fl I, Ob I, Cl I A: at 115 there are no slurs; 122 T soloist A: pp missing.
at 116 and 117, Fl I = 8va above Vni I, Ob I = •122–123 Strings A: pp for Cb at 122 and p at the begin-
unison with Vni I, and Cl I = 115 for both bars. ning of 123, but there is an additional p above
While this situation does not automatically and partially descending into the stave at 122
authorize the extension of Vni I’s slurs to these that could refer to either Vc alone or both Vc
parts, we do suggest them cautiously, aware and Cb. We opt for the latter interpretation, al-
that their execution may not transfer effectively lowing p to take precedence over pp at 122, in
from the strings to the woodwinds. conformity with the p for Vni I (Vni II and Vle
•115–118 Fg (116, 117 = 115) A: 116 and 117, marked as the have no dynamic), and eliminate the superflu-
repetition of 115 for Fg I–II and Fg III–IV on ous p at 123. RI1913 has pp for Vc and Cb, p for
their respective staves, should have the same Vni, Vle, and the vocal parts. Like I-Mr, RI1913
slur, but at 115 it extends well over the bar line also ignored the “dolce” indication for Vni; it
for both in what seems to be a deliberate man- reappears in RI1964, but only for Vni I.
ner. This could mean that the slur was intend- 122–123/1st Vni II A: the slur stops at the end of 122; we
ed to cover the entire passage through to the extend its conclusion in vertical conformity
end of 118, although in that case it could just as with Vni I and Vle.
likely be a generic legato indication. However, 123/1st–2nd Fg I, Cor III–IV A: no articulation for Fg I,
the syllabic disposition of the text for B solo- staccati for Cor III–IV; we render accents in
ist and B Coro, which parts are doubled by Fg both cases by analogy with Cl and Cor I–II at
II, III, ad IV, suggests a solution that is in fact 124.
compatible with the configuration of this slur: 125 –127 Ott, Fl A: divergent slurs between these two
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has an initial slur covering the three eighth T soloist (like rRIms → rRI1874) in vertical con-
notes in 125, the last bar of a recto; after the formity with T Coro (curiously, in RI1913
page turn, another slur begins just before T soloist has a slur but not T Coro). The slur for
126/2nd and extends to the end of 127. The S soloist at 127/3rd–4th stops at the bar line; we
model for Fl seems a bit more specific, with a prefer the one GV marked for S Coro, which
slur that extends over three eighth notes in 126 extends well into 128 and therefore more close-
to the  in 127; but while musically plausible, ly conforms to the analogous motivic gestures
it lacks confirmation either for the previous of T soloist at 123–124 and Ms at 124–125.
or for the successive motif. The problem is by 128 Vc A: isolated cresc. symbol; we suppress. It is
no means resolved in pUS-Cso: none of the present in I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913).
three parts with slurs (Cl I lacks them alto- 128–130/1st Ob II, Cl II, Fg I, Vni, Vle, Vc A: a slightly
gether) has any example that reflects the model faded but still distinctly legible slur above Vni
GV marked for Fl in A, manifesting instead I extends from the second half of the beat at
a tendency for longer slurs. I-Mr partially 128/1st to 129/1st, partially contradicted by the
reproduced the reading of A, omitting the slurs for Ob II, Vle, and Vc, which stop instead
slur for Ott at 125 but preserving the longer before the bar line (there are none for Cl II, Fg
one at 126 –127, which reading was absorbed I, or Vni II). We consider the more plausible
into RI1875 and extended to Fl, Ob I, Cl I; RI1913 of the two solutions to be the one that follows
added the slur at 125. We opt for a generic the disposition of the melody and text for Ms,
legato, leaving any eventual apportionment of T soloist, and C and T Coro (“Chri-ste e-le-i-|-
its motivic components to the discretion of the son”), as at 129/2nd–130/1st where the slurs for
performer. Vni I, Vle, and Fg I correspond to the metric
125/1st–2nd Fg I, Cor III–IV A: accents missing; we sup- disposition of “e-le-i-|-son” (only the slur for Vc
ply in vertical conformity with Ob. begins at 129/1st).
•125/3rd–127 Ob II, Cl II, Fg I A: slurs missing; we 128/1st Fl, Cl, Cb A: amidst a general orchestral ff con-
supply in vertical conformity with Cor III. text there is an f for Cb, probably residual from
pUS-Cso added the slur for Fg I; RI1913 elimi- the skeleton score, and f for Fl and Cl, suggest-
nated the one for Cor III. ing that these parts may also have been among
126 –127 Strings A: while only the upper portion of the the first that GV notated.
cresc. symbol GV marked above Vni I is visible, 128/3rd– 4th Vni I and II A: each part has a carefully
perhaps for lack of ink, we find it pertinent in marked prolongation dot for the  followed
this context and extend it to the other strings by a  , which clearly indicates that GV did
(but not to the winds and Timp, whose pres- not want them to play divisi; otherwise there
ence is already sufficiently robust). Our deci- would have been no reason for the rest. With
sion is supported by the fact that at 127/3rd GV Vni uniti, the a’/e’’ dyad and most of what
marked staccati only for Vc (third and fourth follows can be executed on contiguous strings
sixteenth notes), and there are no staccati for (producing their own particular timbre when
any of the strings on 4th, suggesting an alla played together), but the final g’ is obviously
corda execution that would be functionally suit- impossible to play against an open e’’.
able for a crescendo to ff at 128 (this hypothesis 129 A: “morendo” for S soloist, B Coro, and Vni I.
is further sustained by the non-legato com- The fact that it appears above Vni I could point
portment of Cb at 126 and 127, as well as the to broader implications as a general orchestral
accents for Vni II at 127/1st and 3rd – see also indication, although in terms of execution the
Note 127). We therefore suppress the two stac- result, given the concomitant diminuendo for
cati for Vc at 127/3rd and preserve the reading the instruments in this bar, would be the same.
of A on 4th. However, “morendo” at the conclusion of a
127 Vni I, Vle A: accents on 1st and 3rd miss- long diminuendo begun at 128 suggests that
ing; we supply in vertical conformity with the sound of the held note should diminish
Vni II (see also Note 126 –127). I-Mr (→ R I1875 delicately into silence. We therefore interpret
→ RI1913) ignored them. “morendo” to be specifically intended for S
127–128/1st S and T soloists, S and T Coro A: minor soloist and B Coro and we extend it to in-
phrasing discrepancies and lacunae are clude B soloist. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) also
present. The slur for T Coro stops before the eliminated the indication for Vni I but without
bar line at the end of 127; we (like rRI1874 and extending it to B soloist.
RI1913) adjust to match the parallel Cor I–II, 129/1st–2nd Cor A: the dim. symbols are not present; we
where the slur unequivocally concludes at supply them for conformity with the general
128/1st. We also supply the missing slur for diminuendo in this bar.

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129/2nd–3rd Voices A: “p dim.” only for S Coro; while [2] Trombe / in Do; at 91 in Mi!; at 162 in Re; at 236 in Do;
isolated, it is nonetheless concordant with the at 624 in Mi!
general dim. and with the “morendo” for S and [2] Trombe / in Do; at 91 in Mi!; at 162 in Re; at 236 in Do;
B soloists and B Coro. We extend it accordingly at 624 in Mi!
to the other homorhythmic vocal parts. [2] Fagotti
130/1st Cl I A: GV forgot to provide the (sounding) [2] Fagotti
e’’ and relative tie following a change of page [3] Tromboni; otherwise Trbn I–II
(verso to recto); we integrate for vertical con- Oficleide; Trbn III and Of
formity with Ott, Fl, and Ob I. Timpani
136 A: pppp for S soloist and pp for T Coro; ppp for Grancassa (also “Cassa” and “Cassa sola”; see Note 46)
Cb, but no other orchestral dynamic indication [empty]
is present. [empty]; at 91 Trb I–II in Mi! “in lontananza”; 34 at 270
137/2nd Vc A: also marked “staccato”; we eliminate the “Sop[rano solo]”
superfluous instruction. [empty]; at 91 Trb III–IV in Mi! “in lontananza”; 34 at 162
138/1st Vle A: isolated staccato, absent for Vc; we sup- “Solo Mezzo Sop[rano]”
press. [empty]; at 270 “Ten[ore solo]”
139 A: p between Cb and Vc and pp for the upper [empty]; at 143 “[Basso] solo”
strings; there is no dynamic for the winds, but [Soprani]
GV did carefully mark pp for Timp. Having [Contralti]
Coro
originally written Timp by mistake on the [Tenori]
stave below the correct one, he erased it, but [Bassi]
the still-legible ppp for this earlier entry con- Violoncelli
firms pp as his later and definitive decision. Contrabbassi

T
N. 2 Dies iræ
On p. 35 GV wrote “Dies irae” in the top center margin, and
S “G. Verdi / 1874” in the top right corner.
A, vol. I, pp. (33 –34 rubric)33 35 –202 (201–202 empty)
The second version of the “Liber scriptus” (1875), on pp.
69 – 84 (a single fascicle of four nested bifolios), was inserted R M R
and bound into A at a page break just after the beginning 13 –20 Orch A: GV marked these bars as the reprise of
of the original version: p. 68 concludes with the first three 3 –10 by numbering them from 1 to 8 (13 –20 =
bars of the original version (162a–164a), followed by the 3 –10); he wrote out the parts for Coro, Vc, and
complete 1875 version on pp. 69 – 84 (162–238), after which Cb.
the original version resumes on p. 85 and continues to its 25 –28 Orch A: GV marked these bars as the ritornello
conclusion on p. 96 (165a–215a). We present the later, defini- of 21–24 with the instruction “Come le 4 ante-
tive version of the “Liber scriptus” in the main score of this cedenti”; he wrote out the parts for Coro, Vc,
edition and offer the first version as an Appendix. and Cb (also Vni I, II and Vle at 25).
239 –253 Orch A: GV marked these bars as the reprise
of 46 – 60 with the instruction “Dall’A al B”; he
E wrote out the parts for Coro, Vni I, Vc, and Cb.
[I] 573 –598 Orch A: GV marked this section as the reprise
Violini
[II] of 1–26 with the instruction “Come dal prin-
Viole cipio del Dies irae per 26 battute”; he provided
2. Flauti the resolution for B soloist at 573 and wrote out
Ottavino the parts for Coro and for Vc and Cb (only at
[2] Oboè 573 – 576 and 593 – 598).
[2] Clarinetti / in Si!
[2] Corni / in Mi!; at 162 in Re; at 236 in Mi!; at 378 in Fa;
at 457 in Mi!; at 503 in Mi; at 573 in Mi! C N
[2] Corni / in Do; at 91 in Mi!; at 162 in Re; at 236 in Do; at 1– 61 Orch A: as mentioned above, there are two
457 in Si!; at 503 in Mi; at 573 in Do; at 624 in Si! partial reprises of this passage (239 –253 =
46 – 60; 573 – 598 = 1–26), and it reappears in its

33 For a transcription of the rubric pages, see the diagram on p. 34 “Due Trombe in lontananza ed invisibili” / mi! Trombe “altre
(Rubric pages inserted in the autograph score). due Trombe in altra / parte in lontananza / ed invisibili” / mi!

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entirety in N. 7, Libera me, Domine (45 –105 = perhaps only as an expedient for representing
1– 61). For the partial reprises GV wrote out the general orchestral effect (particularly the
Coro, Vni I (only at 239 –253), and Vc and Cb string strappato) on the keyboard. While we
(with the exception of 577–592), otherwise find these accents musically plausible, it seems
supplying cross-referenced instructions for the preferable to forgo them in order to do full
material to be repeated in the remainder of the justice to the ones that occur on the weak beats
orchestra. With respect to this first, complete in subsequent bars (see also Note 3 – 4 Cor, Trb,
presentation of the “Dies iræ”, the elaborated Timp).
instrumental parts in the reprises occasionally 3 – 61 Coro A: this passage is reprised three times,
stray from their relative models. We find these either entirely or in part, but with variant texts:
differences relevant only when they assist – 239 –253 correspond to 46 – 60;
in filling lacunae or resolving ambiguities, – 575 – 598 correspond to 3 –26;
thereby allowing us to establish a unitary text – N. 7 (Libera me, Domine) 47–105 correspond
for 1– 61 that can also serve as a template for to 3 – 61.
the reprises (see also Notes 239 –253, 573 – 598 Comparison of these reprises with 3 – 61 re-
and N. 7, Note 45 –105). Specific internal prob- veals:
lems that surface within this first full orches- a) missing and divergent dynamics; for the
tral elaboration are reported in the individual most part we adopt the dynamics of 3 – 61,
Notes that follow. mindful of their balanced rapport with the
•1–2 Orch A: there are accents on 1st and 3rd for orchestra (apart occasional exceptions: see Note
Ott (with the exception of 1/3rd) and Trbn, 239 –253 Coro);
and perhaps one for Of at 2/1st (see Plate 3, b) missing and divergent slurs and articula-
p. 276). The fact that GV marked these few tion; when different texts are involved we do
bits of articulation here is puzzling; indeed, it not automatically intervene, but otherwise we
may well be that, after having added them for integrate slurs and articulation on the model of
Ott and Trbn (quite possibly the parts that he 3 – 61, reporting the more problematic passages
wrote first, Ott representing the upper limit of and their solutions case by case in the Notes.
the orchestral texture and Trbn the harmony), 3–4 B Coro A: all accents missing.
he discarded the idea, reserving their use in- 3–4 Cor, Trb, Timp A: scattered accents, from which
stead for the weak beats in the bars that follow we are able nonetheless to derive a composite
(see Cor at 3 – 4 and especially Gr C at 11–12, model. Cor I–II and Timp have only one accent,
where in fact there are no orchestral accents on at 4/4th; Cor III–IV have accents at 3/4th and
1st and 3rd [see Note 11–12]). At 573 – 574 (the 4/2nd and 4th; Trb I–II (Trb III–IV = Trb I–II)
beginning of the reprise of 1–26; see Note 1– 61) have accents only at 4/3rd–4th. We also sug-
and at 45 – 46 in N. 7 (the beginning of the full gest additional accents for these instruments
reprise of 1– 61; see Note 1– 61) neither Vc nor at 3/2nd, concomitant with the one GV marked
Cb has accents, although the relatively cursory for Vni I. The sketchy supply of accents in A
nature of these parts necessarily mitigates their spawned various incongruencies in the de-
influence regarding matters of articulation. rivative sources, but our model does appear
pUS-Cso ignored the accents for Ott but pre- sporadically in pUS-Cso (in particular for
served and extended those for Trbn I–III in all Trb I in the reprise in N. 7 [see Note 1–61], at
three instances; Of has them only at 573 (574 47–48) and in RI1875 (for Trb at 3–4 and 13–14;
= 573). While I-Mr (→ R I1875) has no accents at for Cor in the second partial reprise, at 575–576
either 1–2 or 573 – 574, the copyist responsible and 585–586), from which RI1913 derived and
for the first part of N. 7 marked them at 45/1st extended the same model we offer here.
(45/3rd– 4th = 45/1st–2nd; 46 = 45) for Ob, Cl, •3 – 4, 13 –14, 575 – 576 Cb A: we derive a composite model
Cor, Trb I–II, Fg, Trbn, and Of; RI1875 largely for the accents in these bars from their pres-
follows I-Mr, with additional accents for Vni ence at 3 – 4 (3/3rd and 4/1st) and at 575 – 576
(45/3rd is written out but there are no accents); (576/3rd– 4th); there are no accents at 13 –14,
neither do any appear at 55 – 56 (55/3rd– 4th = and at 585 – 586 (=13 –14) GV did not write out
55/1st–2nd; 56/3rd– 4th = 56/1st–2nd) (→ R I1913). the part for Cb (see Note 1– 61). In the full
Apparently the accents in RI1913 at 573 – 574 (not reprise of 1– 61 in N. 7 (45 –105; see Note 1– 61)
at 583 – 584) were derived from N. 7 in I-Mr there is only one accent, at 47/3rd. Given that
(from RI1875), where the copyist added them our model is supported by the more gener-
at the beginning of the full reprise. The only ous presence of concomitant accents for Coro,
source that systematically supplied accents in Trbn, and Of, we extend it to all corresponding
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only one accent for Cb, at 47/3rd in N. 7; RI1875 at 5/1st for Vle (the two sixteenth notes); and
(→ R I1913) omitted the accents altogether. at 6/1st–2nd for Vni II and Vle (6/3rd–4thff =
3–4/1st Fl A: the three slurs are missing; they were 6/1st–2nd). The elaborated Vc and Cb parts
already added in I-Mr. for the reprise of this passage in N. 7 Libera
3/1st–2nd Fg I–II (3/3rd–4th = 3/1st–2nd; Fg III–IV = Fg me (see Note 1–61) corroborate the obvious
I–II) A: a single beam for all eight notes; we need for extension and integration: slurs are
halve it, in vertical conformity with the other present at 49–50/2nd (corresponding to 5–6 in
woodwinds. N. 2) for Cb; at 50/1st–2nd for Vc; and at 59/1st
3/3rd Coro A: ff for T Coro, f for B Coro. (corresponding to 15) for Vc and Cb (the two
3/4th, 4/2nd (13–14, 575–576, 585–586 = 3–4) Vni I A: ac- sixteenth notes).
cents missing; we supply (as did RI1913) from 9–10 Strings A: lingering traces of an earlier version
the model GV marked at 3/2nd, and in vertical with staccati that was erased and rewritten
conformity with Cor. I-Mr follows A, but in cause some confusion at 10/3rd–4th (19–20 =
the reprise in N. 7 (see Note 1–61) the copyist 9–10 for all but Vc and Cb), where the staccati
added an accent at 48/2nd (corresponding to are almost certainly residual from the previous
4/2nd in N. 2) while omitting the accents for version. Although it would appear that GV had
Cor and Trb. RI1875 has accents in agreement thought to continue the phrasing from 1st–2nd
with this edition at 13–14 and 575–576, and in to 3rd in Vni I and II, Vle and Vc both have
N. 7 at 47–48. a slur (there is nothing for Cb). At 20/3rd–4th
4/1st Ott A: slur missing; it was already added in slurs are clearly marked for Vc and Cb: one for
I-Mr. each beat in Vc, and a single continuous slur
4/3rd–4th Ott, Fl, Ob, Cl A: “3” for the triplets of thirty- for both beats in Cb. This same divergence of
second notes missing; I-Mr, RI1875, and slurs for Vc and Cb occurs during the reprise
pUS-Cso follow A (including the various in N. 7 Libera me (see Note 1–61) at 54/3rd–
reprises; see Note 1–61); rRIms (→ rRI1874) 4th and 64/3rd–4th, but there is no reason to
carefully added the “3” and a slur for every believe that the differentiation was intentional.
appearance of this figure. Technically it cannot 9, 19, 581, 591 Coro A: at 9/1st GV carefully wrote   for
be excluded that GV meant to write  rather all voices, but  for the downbeats of 19, 581,
than , but in that case the execution of the and 591 (the winds and Cb also have   at 9
passage would become uselessly awkward at [19, 581, 591 = 9]). There is no reason to believe
such a quick tempo. these differences are intentional. Indeed, dur-
5 S and C Coro A: no dynamic indication; we ing the reprise in N. 7 Libera me (see Note
supply ff in conformity with the general dy- 3 – 61), the choral parts at 53 (corresponding to
namic level, and specifically the ff GV marked 9 in N. 2) and 63 (corresponding to 19) have  
for T Coro at 3/3rd (see the relative Note). In both times. I-Mr, rRIms (→ rRI1874), and RI1875
the reprises of this passage (see Note 1–61) as- follow A; curiously, RI1913 modified 581 to  
sorted choral parts are variously marked f or ff but did not intervene at 19 and 591.
as follows: 11–12 Orch A: notwithstanding the fact that 11–12 are
13, 15: f for T and B, ff for S and C; ostensibly the same as 1–2 with the addition of
575, 577: ff only for T; Gr C, GV wrote out all of the parts rather than
585, 587: f only for S; prescribe a reprise as he did for 13 –20 (= 3 –10).
N. 7 Libera me, 47, 49: f for T and S; Two reasons for this decision may be hypoth-
N. 7 Libera me, 57, 59: no dynamics. esized:
We normalize to ff throughout (as did RI1913). 1) he wanted the chords accented at 1–2, but
5–7/1st Ob II, Fg I (Fg III = Fg I), Cor II A: ambigu- not accented at 11–12;
ously marked slurs: for Cor II the slur begins 2) he wanted to avoid any possible misinterpre-
at 5/3rd and ends at 6/4th; a similar one for tation of the rhythmic rapport between Gr C
Ob II begins somewhat earlier; and a slur GV and the orchestra, and providing a full elabora-
marked for Fg I extends decidedly beyond the tion was the only guarantee that it would be
bar line at the end of 6, roughly to the d’ on properly understood.
the downbeat of 7. The other two unison parts, At first glance hypothesis 1) would seem to be
Cl II and Cor IV, have no slurs at all. We adjust the more plausible choice were it not for the
and extend in vertical conformity with the spare sampling of accents at 1–2, a situation he
model suggested by Fg I. would perhaps have rectified by going back
5–8 Orch A: GV marked very few slurs for the and marking them with greater precision if he
tremolo figures (15–18 = 5–8 for all but Vc, Cb): did indeed want to make a clear distinction
at 5/1st–2nd for Vni I (5/3rd–4thff = 5/1st–2nd); between 1–2 and 9 –10.

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11–12 Gr C A: fff or perhaps ffff; despite the extreme would be futile. Individual problems are ad-
precision of GV’s instructions for the execution dressed in the following Notes.
of this syncopated gesture (dynamic, accents, 21 (22 = 21) Timp A: no accents; we supply on 2nd and
“Le corde ben tese…”), the derivative sources 4th in vertical conformity with the orchestra
absorbed them with insufficient consistency: and Gr C respectively (there is a sign beneath
I-Mr: at 11–12 “Le corde ben tese...”, accents, no the  that could read as an accent, although it
dynamic; may be residual from a previous version that
at 583–584 (see Note 1–61) no “Le corde ben was cancelled and corrected).
tese…”, no accents, ff ; •21, 22, 25, 26 Vni, Vle, Vc A: the staccato on 1st is pre-
at 55–56 in N. 7 (see Note 1–61) “Le corde ben sent for Vc only, at 21, 22, and 25; in the subse-
tese…”, no accents, no dynamic. quent reprises (see Note 1– 61) Vc have staccati
RI1875: at 11–12 “Le corde ben tese…”, accents, f; for all corresponding bars in N. 2 (593, 594,
at 583–584 “Le corde ben tese…”, no accents, f; 597, and 598), but none in N. 7 Libera me (65,
at 55–56 in N. 7 “Le corde ben tese…”, no ac- 66, 69, 70). Given their musical plausibility and
cents, no dynamic. relatively persistent presence, we adopt them
RI1913 adopted “Le corde ben tese ecc.” accents, throughout and extend them vertically to Vni
and ff for all three passages. and Vle as well. RI1875 (→ R I1913) has no staccati
13–14 B Coro A: accents missing; we supply in verti- in these bars or the reprises.
cal conformity with T Coro. 22/1st Of, Vc, Cb A: accents, unconfirmed in analo-
13 –20 Orch A: GV marked these bars as the reprise gous passages or in either reprise (593ff and N.
of 3 –10 by numbering them from 1 to 8 (13 –20 7, 65ff [see Note 1– 61]), where the parts for Vc
= 3 –10); he wrote out the parts for Coro, Vc, and Cb are written out; we suppress.
and Cb. Vc and Cb lack accents at 13 –14 and 22/3rd Vc A: isolated accent, unconfirmed either verti-
slurs at 15 –18; we supply both. For the accents, cally or in analogous passages; we suppress.
see Note 3 – 4, 13 –14, 575 – 576. For the slurs, see 23/1st Fg, Cor, Trbn A: accent missing; we supply in
Note 5–8. vertical conformity with Of, Vni I and Cb.
15 –17, 577–579, 587–589 T II Coro A: the pattern of text 23/4th, 24/4th Coro A: accents missing for T and B at
underlay is uniformly different from the set- 23/4th (B has one at the analogous 27/4th) and
ting at 5 –7. In all three passages GV had origi- for C and B at 24/4th.
nally written a part for B II Coro that doubled 24 (28 = 24) Trbn A: isolated accent for the , uncon-
T II Coro at the lower octave with the same firmed either vertically or in analogous pas-
alignment of syllables, but he subsequently sages; we suppress.
eliminated it, leaving T II Coro to read as fol- •24/4th Cb A: isolated accent, unconfirmed either verti-
lows at 15 –17 and 587–589: cally or in analogous passages; we suppress.
 RI1875 (→ R I1913) also eliminated it, but RI1964
          not only adopted it but also extended it verti-
               cally to the other strings and to all analogous
passages.
At 577–579 he set “iræ, Dies iræ” in similar 25 –28 Coro A: missing accents; we supply in con-
fashion. However, for the reprise in N. 7 Libera formity with the analogous 21–24.
me (see Note 3 – 61), he adopted the syllabic pat- 25 –28 Orch A: marked as the ritornello of 21–24
tern of 5 –7 (N. 2) at 49 – 51 and 59 – 61; in fact, (“Come le 4 antecedenti”); GV wrote out the
at 59/4th he first wrote “[il]-la” as he had at 15 parts for Coro (with a different text), Vc, and
and 587 in N. 2, but he immediately cancelled Cb, plus Vni I, II, and Vle only at 25. Diver-
it and proceeded as at 49 – 51. These two ex- gences and lacunae in the elaborated instru-
amples in N. 7 therefore confirm the model of mental parts have been adjusted in this edition
5 –7 in N. 2 as the definitive reflection of GV’s to match 21–24 and reported in the following
intentions. I-Mr and RI1875 made no attempt to Notes.
adjust the incongruencies in A, transmitting 25/1st Vni I A: isolated accent, unconfirmed at 21 or
them to RI1913. 22; we suppress.
21–24 Orch A: there are various discrepancies in the 25/2nd Cb A: accent missing; we supply in conformity
articulation. Although GV’s general intentions with 21 and 22.
are sufficiently clear, editorial intervention 25/4th B Coro A: accent missing.
necessarily entails the omission of some occa- 26–27 Vc, Cb A: no articulation, and the slur for Vc is
sionally significant signs, and/or the extension missing; we supply in conformity with 22–23.
of others that occur only sporadically at best; 26/2nd Cb A: d’; we modify to a as in all analogous
any attempt to accept them all indiscriminately bars.

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27 T Coro A: accents missing; we supply by anal- 34/2nd–3rd Fg A: Fg I–II = staccati, and no articulation
ogy with 23. for Fg III–IV; we modify and integrate in verti-
28/4th C and B Coro A: accents missing. cal conformity with Trbn and Of.
30/1st T Coro A: accent only above T I; we suggest for 36 C Coro A: the slur for the first two notes was
T II as well, in vertical conformity with Cor IV. probably added as insurance against an other-
31, 33, 35 Vni, Vle A: accents missing at 31 and 33 for Vni wise erroneous pronunciation of “sae-clum” as
II and Vle, and at 35 for all three parts. “sae-cu-lum”. We preserve it without extend-
31–36 Orch A: there are various lacunae and incon- ing it to 32 and 34 (where the words “iræ” and
sistencies in the slurs and articulation GV “illa” are not susceptible to similar temptation).
marked for this six-bar sequence after the I-Mr and rRIms (→ rRI1874) suppressed it; RI1875
first fairly completely marked statement at did likewise at 36, but curiously added slurs at
31–32, but we have no reason to suspect that 32 and 34; RI1913 has one slur, at 34.
he intended to deviate from this model for the 37 Cb A: abbreviated as  with a staccato, topped
following two statements at 33 –34 and 35 –36 by a cut indicating repeated eighth notes; in
(with the exception of Timp; see Note 34/1st). the reprise in N. 7 Libera me (see Note 1– 61)
The principal differences are reported in the GV carefully marked eight staccati at the corre-
following Notes. sponding 81. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) elimi-
31–42 C Coro A: text missing. nated the staccati for the  in both bars.
•31/1st Cb A: isolated accent, unconfirmed at 33 or 38/2nd C and B Coro A: accents missing.
35, nor is it present in the reprise in N. 7 (see 38/2nd Orch A: assorted missing accents; GV’s inten-
Note 1–61) at 75, 77, or 79; we suppress. RI1875 tions are nonetheless clear. I-Mr (→ R I1875
adopted it for all three bars; RI1913 did likewise, → RI1913) integrated them for all but Timp.
extending it to the reprise in N. 7 as well. 38/4th Vc, Cb A: isolated accents, possibly residual
32 Fl A: slur missing. from the skeleton score.
32, 34, 36 Trbn: “a 3” confirmed by pUS-Cso. 39/1st Trb III A: a single beam for the three notes; we
32, 36 Vc, Cb A: accent on 2nd missing; we supply adjust to match the other Trb.
by analogy with 34 (Cb), where its presence is 39/3rd B Coro A: “marcate” is absent; we supply from
supported by concomitant syncopated accents the reprise of this passage in N. 7 Libera me
for Trb and the first of the sequence of accents (see Note 3 – 61) at 83.
for Fg, Trbn, and Of. 39/3rd–4th Strings (Vni II = Vni I; Vc = Cb) A: “pesante”
32/1st Trbn A: isolated accent, unconfirmed at the only above Vni I; we extend vertically to the
analogous 34 or 36; we suppress. other strings.
33, 35 Winds A: GV marked few accents on 3rd–4th 40/1st (41, 42 = 40) Ob I, Cor, Trb III–IV A: slurs missing.
(at 33 only between the staves for Fg, at 35 only 43 – 45 Fg III–IV A: empty bars following a page turn
for Trb and between Trbn and Of); we supply (previously Fg III–IV = Fg I–II), an obvious
in conformity with the model of 31 (see Note oversight; we remediate as in pUS-Cso. I-Mr
31–36). follows A, but RI1875 (→ R I1913) made the cor-
34, 36 T Coro A: slurs missing; we suggest by anal- rect adjustment.
ogy with 32. 45 Fl, Vni, Vle A: slurs absent; we supply for Fl
34, 36 Ott, Fl, Ob, Cl A: slurs missing; we supply and suggest for Vni and Vle, also by analogy
in conformity with the model of 32 (see Note with the slurs for the string parts at 238.
31–36). 45 – 46 Dynamics A: at 45 there is a cresc. symbol
34, 36 Trb A: staccati missing on 3rd–4th; we supply in the top margin of the page above Vni I, to
in conformity with the model of 32 (see Note be interpreted as a general indication, which
31–36). culminates at the beginning of 46 in fff, a
34/1st Trb I–II A: the  dyad is not beamed together decidedly suggestive dynamic positioned as it
with the two sixteenth notes (Trb III–IV = Trb is at the very apex of the “Dies iræ” before the
I–II after the ); we adjust to match 32 and 36. pianissimo coda leading to the “Tuba mirum”.
34/1st Timp A: the bar begins with a d eighth note Yet GV distinctly marked ff for the remainder
beamed to the following two sixteenth notes, of the orchestra and for Coro; what is more, in
rather than  as at the analogous 32 and 36. the reprise of this passage in N. 7 Libera me
While such variants are not at all uncommon he confirmed ff at 90 for B Coro, Vc, and Cb
in a sequence, especially for non-chromatic (the only elaborated instrumental parts; see
instruments, this one was probably an error: Note 1– 61). On the other hand, at 239 (which
in fact, at 55 in MpR (31– 61 are based on 52– 81 begins the reprise of 46 – 60) he marked fff for
from MpR), the bar begins with  All of the the voices, ff for Vni I and Cb, and f for Vc (see
examined sources follow A. Note 239). The sum of this evidence makes for

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lingering uncertainty whether GV intended fff should be different from the corresponding 49
as he wrote in MpR at 66, where it is clearly and 51. pUS-Cso faithfully (and fairly predict-
marked for both the orchestra and Coro, or ably) follows A; I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) cor-
whether the fff here is only residual from rected the part as we have done.
MpR, superseded instead by the general ff. 49/1st Vni I (Vni II = Vni I at the lower octave) A: d’’’;
I-Mr preserved the divergence of A at 46 (and all of the secondary sources correct the note.
at 90 in N. 7), but not at 239. RI1875 (→ R I1913) 50 Cb (51, 52 = 50) A: in the corresponding bars
normalized all three bars (46 and 239 in N. 2, of the reprises, at 243 and in N. 7 at 94, GV
90 in N. 7) to ff. marked an accent for the first eighth note, but
45/1st Cl A: isolated accent; we suppress. it is absent here. Even though he intended the
46 Gr C A: “Cassa”. There is no reason to think elaborated Vc and Cb parts in these reprises to
that GV specifically intended the inclusion of serve primarily as a guide, we consider the ac-
cymbals with the term “Gran Cassa” (1, 11), cent to be musically plausible and adopt it here
nor that “Cassa” (46, 645) or “Cassa sola” (140, as well. I-Mr follows A; RI1875 has accents at 46
683) meant anything other than Gr C without and 47 (48, 49 = 46, 47) and one at 96 in N. 7
cymbals. The contemporary secondary sources (sic); curiously, RI1913 eliminated all accents for
(I-Mr, RI1875) tend to reflect the use of “Cassa” Cb in this passage and the reprises but one, at
and “Gran cassa” as interchangeable terms. 242.
We maintain the standard abbreviation for the •51 C Coro, 57 T Coro A: faint evidence of possible slurs,
instrument as identification in the margin of the second of which is particularly doubtful;
the score, with GV’s more specific indications lacking confirmation in other similar parts, ei-
appearing where they occur in the music as ther here or in the reprises at 239ff and in N. 7
precautionary reminders (it is no coincidence at 90ff, we ignore them here. I-Mr did likewise
that many of them – see also N. 7 – are to be but then marked slurs instead at 47 and 49;
found precisely where Gr C has a particular RI1875 (→ R I1913) follows I-Mr, with an addition-
expressive function within the orchestral tex- al slur at 51. rRIms adopted the slurs at 51
ture). and 57, but the second one seems most likely to
46–53 S and T Coro A: partial and inconsistently have been an error caused by a page turn; in
marked slurs; GV seems to have been undecid- fact, rRI1874 accepted only the first one.
ed between a single slur for each half-phrase 51/1st–3rd Fg III A: isolated slur, unconfirmed for the
of two bars (T: 46–47 and 50–51; S: 48–49) or other parts either here or in the analogous
one slur per bar as suggested by his mark- passages; we suppress. pUS-Cso adopted it
ings for the winds (S: 50, 51; see Note 46–53 and provided one for Cl II as well, despite its
Winds). There are also slurs that disappear absence in A.
after the first three notes (S: 46; T: 48; S and T: 51/3rd–4th Trb IV A: two d’, residual from a previous
52–53 [this last instance probably due to a page cancelled version where Trb IV had d’ at 50–51.
turn]). From 54, where the thematic function The part is already correct in I-Mr and
passes to C and B, GV decided definitively for pUS-Cso.
the systematic application of the longer slur. 52 Cor III–IV A: those few slurs GV marked at
The reprises of this passage (see Note 3–61) at 46–53 for the wind parts (see the relative Note)
239ff and in N. 7 at 90ff largely confirm the pertain almost exclusively to the descending
two-bar slur, especially in N. 7, but there are one-bar melodic segments; given this single
also some of the same lacunae and inconsisten- example of an ascending concomitant segment
cies at 239ff. In MpR the slurs are prevalently with no precedent in the previous bars, we
one per each bar of the half phrase. (supported by I-Mr → R I1875 → R I1913) suggest
46–53 Winds A: missing slurs (none whatsoever at 52), but an additional derivative slur by virtue of its
there are complete models for Cor I at 46–47 association by inversion.
and for Fl I and Fg I at 48–49. For the most 54 Cor, Timp A: at 54 GV originally marked pp for
part GV wrote only the first of the two slurs Vni, Vle, and Cb, then erased the second “p”.
for each half-phrase of two bars (see also Note However, while he presumably intended p to
46–53 S and T Coro), plus just one example of a be the general dynamic indication (confirmed
slur for the ascending semitone on 1st–3rd that for C, T, and B Coro and for Vc), he left a seem-
occurs in the odd-numbered bars (for Fg III at ingly inappropriate pp for Cor and Timp. In
51; see the relative Note). fact, with a progressive diminuendo underway
47/3rd– 4th Trb II A:  g’; there is no reason to believe immediately thereafter (marked for C and B
that GV wanted to differentiate this part from Coro and Cb at 55, followed by “ancora dim.”
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at 59), the dynamic level for Cor and Timp at 74 – 88 Cl, Fg I–II, Timp A: various missing staccati.
54 should logically not be less than p. We con- For Cl they are present only at 87– 88 (with
sequently adjust for vertical conformity with perhaps a hint of one at 74/1st); for Fg I–II they
the other parts (but preserve the pp for Trb at appear fitfully but unequivocally up through
55 as correctly proportioned with respect to the 79, after which GV marked them systematically
ppp for Trbn at 59). (apart at 84/1st).
55 Fl A:  for the a’ in the embellishment, but  at For Timp there are staccati at 74 but none at
the analogous 47 and the corresponding bar in 75 –77 (78 – 81 = 77). They reappear at 82, where
MpR. full notation of the part resumes (83 – 85 = 82),
55–56 Ob, Cl A: GV did not specify whether one or then disappear at 86 (87– 88 = 86). Even so, the
both of each pair of instruments should play. clarity of GV’s intentions allows us to supply
In pUS-Cso only Ob I and Cl I play (also at them where missing throughout this passage.
54/1st); RI1875 has double stems for Ob and Cl at 78 Coro A: pp above S Coro at the beginning of
54/1st, single stems at 55. RI1913 = Ob I and Cl I the bar (the first of a recto); ppp in the left mar-
both at 54 and at 55. gin. We prefer ppp, which is more compatible
55, 57 Trb A: staccati on 2nd missing for Trb III–IV at with the “sottovoce” indication and commen-
55; no staccati are present for either pair at 57. surate with the orchestral dynamic (see Note 74).
•56 – 57 Fl A: empty bar; we integrate on the model of •91 Trb I–II in Orch Sources: I-Mr (→ R I1875) has
48 – 49 (Ott; Fl II = Ott) and the corresponding no entry dynamic (pUS-Cso correctly reports
passage in MpR. pUS-Cso and I-Mr (→ R I1875 mf); RI1913, compensating for the missing
→ RI1913) added rests for both bars. dynamic in its copy source, inserted p. RI1964
•58–61 T Coro rRIms, rRI1874: slurs as for C and B Coro, reinstated mf.
transmitted to RI1913. 91 Trb in lont. RI1913: “in lontananza ed indivisi-
•59 Fl A, I-Mr, RI1875, RI1913: closing embellishment bili [sic]”, which caused an understandable if
missing for the trill; we supply on the model of unfortunate mismanagement of GV’s original
51 (Ott; Fl II = Ott) and from the corresponding instruction in performance. RI1964 corrected the
passage in MpR (see also Note 55 and Note 59, error.
61). 91 Vc A: 91 is the first bar of a verso; after the
59, 61 Fl A:  on 3rd, residual from the reading in page turn GV wrote c with a tie from the
MpR, where in the passage corresponding to previous bar. He may possibly have changed
46 – 61 all resolutions of the trill are  (with the his mind in favor of the upper octave, which
exception of   in the bar corresponding to 53). would then apply retroactively to 89 – 90 as
60 Coro A: pp only for C Coro; we extend to T well, but it is far more likely that this pitch was
and B Coro here and also suggest pp for these an error of distraction. I-Mr simply eliminated
voices at the analogous 56. the tie between 90 and 91; RI1913 transposed the
74 Orch A: divergent dynamics, but GV seems note to C as in this edition.
to have applied them fairly coherently accord- 91– 93 Trb in Orch A: GV did not specify whether this
ing to the type of figure participating in the passage is for one or both Trb. Since he care-
orchestral texture of this passage: ppp for Cor fully supplied double stems for of each pair of
(acciaccaturas on the weak beats), Vni I (alter- Trb in lont. when they enter at 93, we find it
nating sixteenth notes on 1st), Vc (sixteenths on most likely that the single stems here for Trb in
3rd), Cb (thematic element), and Trbn (har- Orch signify Trb I. I-Mr follows A; in pUS-Cso
monic support). From this same figure/function only Trb I plays; RI1875 has “Sola”, while RI1913
rapport we can consequently extrapolate ppp has Trb I–II “Sole”.
for Ott, Fl, and Ob (like Cor), for Cl and Fg I–II •91–96 Trb in Orch A: no staccati for the sixteenth
(like Cb), and for Fg III–IV (like Trbn; in fact, at notes in these bars (they are present beginning
the identical 78 GV distinctly marked ppp for from 99; Trb in lont. have them throughout). In
Fg III–IV [see Note 74, 78]), while preserving pUS-Cso the situation varies: Trb in Orch I has
the differentiated pppp for Timp. staccati from 95 (but not at 103, 104, and 106);
74, 78 Fg III–IV A: pp at 74 and ppp at the identical Trb II beginning with the triplets at 107; Trb III
78; we anticipate ppp to 74, consistent with the only at 99–100; and Trb IV only at 107 (108 =
logic proposed in Note 74 above. 107). I-Mr has even fewer staccati than A; RI1875
74, 82 Cor A: “Solo” is not present at 74 but the notes supplied them uniformly as in this edition;
have single stems (normally GV’s indications in RI1913 has them only at 95–96, but RI1964 added
this regard are very precise). At 82, the entry them at 91–92 as well.
for Cor III is explicitly marked “Solo”. In 93 Trb in lont. III–IV A: “sta[ccate]” in addition to
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superfluous indication and supply p in con- staccati to the first notes for both pairs of Trb
formity with Trb in lont. I–II (93/4th). in Orch instead.
99 Trb III in Orch A: pp, though indistinctly writ- 111 A: the dynamics GV supplied refer to groups
ten. We prefer p as GV marked for Trb I–II in of instruments (“Tutta forza” seems to follow
Orch, which ensures that Trb in Orch and Trb the same criterion), sometimes ff but other
in lont. are properly balanced at the beginning times fff. While the fff he wrote for Timp and
of the cresc. at 103. I-Mr has no dynamic; for Trb in Orch would suggest normalizing the
pUS-Cso has p; RI1875 (→ R I1913) = f (sic), which other winds to this same dynamic level, es-
RI1964 corrected to p. pecially considering the accompanying “Tutta
104–110 Trb in Orch, Trb in lont. A: occasional missing forza” indications, at 117 (the first bar follow-
staccati, but GV’s intentions are clear. ing a change of page from a verso to a recto)
106 Trb in Orch III–IV I-Mr: the copyist marked he marked general ff indications in the left
106 = 105 with the symbol “ ”, which actu- margin (with only an anomalous fff for Timp,
ally follows A: GV had written out both bars notwithstanding the ff for Gr C [see Note 111,
but forgot to supply the  for Trb III in Orch at 117, 119, 125], and an f beneath Cb), repeat-
106. But while the (written) d’ at 106 was never ing “tutta forza” above the stave for Vni I. In
corrected in A, GV intervened directly in I-Mr, addition, the entry for S Coro at 119 is marked
erasing the repetition symbol and writing out ff, and at 125–126 (the repetition of 117–118)
the bar with the missing  for Trb III in pur- all instruments have ff. We therefore opt for a
ple ink. He also signaled this correction in an base dynamic of ff at 111, which we repeat at
undated letter to Ricordi regarding the proofs 117 and maintain at 125.
for rRI1874. The copyist for pUS-Cso included 111, 117, 119, 125 Timp A: fff at 111 and 117, f at 119.
the accidental, which suggests that this source While the fff at 117 is clearly at odds with the
postdates the corrections made to I-Mr and ff GV marked for Gr C and does not conform
was not extracted from A (see the description to the general orchestral ff (see Note 111), we
of pUS-Cso, p. 4). preserve this divergent dynamic for Timp as a
107/2nd Trb in lont. A: superfluous “staccate” over gesture of intentional emphasis.
the triplet; we suppress (see also Note 108/4th– On the other hand, the f he marked at 119 is
109). entirely another matter. Given that 119 is the
108/4th–109 Trb in Orch A: staccati missing for the tri- repetition of 111 with the addition of Trb in
plets, but GV wrote “staccate” for both pairs of lont., we find it unlikely that GV wanted a
Trb in Orch at 107/4th, and “sempre” for Trb I– drastic dynamic reduction for Timp while the
II at 108/4th and for Trb III–IV at the beginning brass continue to play ff (see Note 111); we
of 108. As a result, however, “staccate sempre” therefore suppress the f at 119 in favor of the
became embedded within another indication, previously established fff, and suggest fff at
“cresc. a poco a poco”, in the following man- 125 as well.
ner: “cresc. (beginning of 107) / staccate sempre 111–136 Timp A: GV systematically omitted ! for every
(107/4th–108) / a poco a poco (108)” (this is also e. I-Mr and RI1875 follow A; in pUS-Cso a ! for
the reading in pUS-Cso). Naturally, it is equal- the first e was inserted later. RI1913 has flats
ly possible that GV intended “sempre” to apply throughout. It cannot be categorically excluded
to the second instruction: “cresc. sempre a poco that GV, forced to adjust to the limitations of
a poco”. We opt for “cresc. a poco a poco” and the instrument, actually intended e, which
replace “staccate sempre” with the articulation would then effectively become a consonant
marks where missing (whichever interpretation pitch in the harmonic context of 136 –139; but
is chosen, the effect does not change). if compromise were indeed the issue, the far
110 Trb A: staccati missing for Trb III–IV in Orch more likely solution would be e! for 111–136,
and Trb III–IV in lont. We supply the ones which becomes dissonant only at 136, rather
for Trb III–IV in Orch in vertical conformity than a dissonant e for 111–135 (contextualizing
with Trb I–II in Orch, where they are clearly this passage in terms of what comes before
marked. With regard to Trb I–II in lont., GV and after does little to clarify GV’s intentions).
marked staccati for all 12 repeated notes, but Since modern Timp can shift from e! at 111–135
logically their articulation should match Trb to e at 136, we leave the choice of note to the
IV in Orch, who plays the same repeated note discretion of the performer.
at the lower octave. We therefore eliminate the •113, 121 A: at 113/1st accents for both pairs of Cor; at
first staccato for Trb I–II in lont. as was already 113/3rd accents for Cor III–IV and Trb I–II in
done in rRI1874 (the model    on 1st is also Orch. At the corresponding 121 there are no ac-
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completely forgotten them when he so care- 127–129 Trb in lont. A: originally:
fully and completely marked the articulation
he wanted in the very next bar. We believe that
 
              


the absence of accents at 121 was his defini-   

tive choice. I-Mr adopted the accents at 113



              
and extended them to both pairs of Cor and of           
Trb in Orch; RI1875 (→ R I1913) extended them to  
     
Trbn and Of as well. None of these sources has  
accents at 121.
113–116, 121–124 Brass A: missing but otherwise con-
cordant articulation, with the exception of the
 
 
    
 
  

accents at 113 (see Note 113, 121); given the This version was eventually cancelled and
homorhythmic context and the clarity of GV’s corrected by GV, though possibly in separate
intentions, we integrate where missing, further and not necessarily sequential phases. In fact,
supported by the reciprocal comparison of I-Mr was prepared with the definitive ver-
these two passages. sion of 128/2nd–129 but the original version of
114/4th Cor A: superfluous “staccate” between the two 127–128/1st, prompting GV’s direct intervention
staves for Cor; we suppress. to correct the first half of the passage (without
116/1st Trbn III–Of A: isolated accent, unconfirmed the staccati) in purple ink. This circumstance
for Trbn I–II and Trb III–IV in Orch, nor in the leads to the hypothesis that the definitive ver-
repetition of the passage at 124; we suppress. sion of 127–129 in A may have been obtained
117, 125 Ott, Fl, Ob, Cl A: at 117/1st (117/2nd–118/3rd = in a manner that was less linear than it might
117/1st) there are no slurs for the sextuplets; otherwise appear to be (see the description of
at 125/1st (125/2nd–126/3rd = 125/1st) they are I-Mr, pp. 2– 4). In his correction to I-Mr GV
present only for Ott and Ob. Although it would also added the accents for both pairs of Trb in
not be impossible for the notes to be played lont. at 128/1st, which we integrate as appropri-
articulated rather than slurred (in fact it would ate for the context.
be relatively easy for Fl and Ott, thanks to the 128 –129 Vc, Cb A: accents for both parts at 128, for
possibility of double tonguing, but consider- Cb only at 129. Given their absence for the
ably unnatural for Ob and Cl), we consider other strings here, and for all of the strings in
the two slurs at 125 (as well as the one for Ott the repetition (which is in many ways more
at 134/1st; see Note 130, 134) to be an accurate detailed) at 132–133, we suppress, considering
reflection of GV’s intentions. Already I-Mr them to be residual from the skeleton score.
(→ R I1875 → R I1913) and pUS-Cso (with oc- 128–131, 132–135 Orch A: assorted missing accents, but a
casional lacunae and divergences) added the reciprocal comparison of these two essentially
missing slurs. identical passages (apart an occasional detail
117/1st Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) A: isolated accent at 134/4th–135/1st) allows us to supply them
on the , unconfirmed for the strings, nor in where they are absent without encountering
the repetition of the passage at 125; we sup- any inconsistencies worthy of note.
press. 128/1st Trb in lont. A: missing accents (see Note
117/2nd–3rd Vni I A: superfluous “staccate”; we sup- 127–129).
press. 129/1st Trb I–II in Orch A: isolated accent, uncon-
118, 126 Orch A: assorted missing accents on 4th, but firmed for the other homorhythmic instru-
GV’s intentions are clear. ments; we suppress.
119–120 Trb in lont. A: at 119 Trb III–IV have no staccati 130–131/2nd, 134–135/2nd S and C Coro A: accents only
or accent, but it is clear that they should share for S Coro (one is missing at 135/2nd, which we
the same articulation as Trb I–II. At 120 the supply by analogy with S Coro at 131/2nd and
staccati for Trb I–II are missing (Trb III–IV = T Coro at 132/2nd), applicable to the unison
Trb I–II); we supply by analogy with 119. C Coro as well.
124 C and T Coro A: ff missing; we supply by anal- 130, 134 Fl, Ott, Ob, Cl A: no slurs on 1st at 130
ogy with the entries of B and S Coro at 117 and (130/2nd– 4th = 130/1st), and only one, for Ott,
119 respectively. at 134 (134/2nd– 4th = 134/1st ). We consider the
126/4th Coro A: accent only for S Coro. example at 134 (in addition to those at 125/1st;
see Note 117, 125) to be an accurate reflection
of GV’s intentions and integrate the remainder
where they are missing, supported by I-Mr
(→ R I1875 → R I1913) and pUS-Cso.

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130/1st Trb in lont. III–IV A: accent missing; we supply gous comportment of Coro and the unison Vle
by analogy with Trb I–II at 129/1st. (not to mention Timp and Gr C), we consider
•131, 135 Trb in lont. Sources: pUS-Cso follows A with the absence of ties to be intentional and extend
no staccati; I-Mr has staccati for Trb in lont. the accent for vertical conformity to Vle.
I–II at 131/1st–2nd; RI1875 (→ R I1913) supplied 139/1st Timp, Gr C, Trb in lont. A: “tronca” appears
them for all eighth notes at 131 and 135 (both between the staves for Timp and Gr C, prob-
pairs of instruments), plus an isolated accent ably for both parts, and above Trb in lont. I–II.
for the  at 135 (Trb in lont. I–II). We maintain There is no reason to presume that it was
the reading of A, but leave the performer free intended to apply to all instruments with a
to integrate the musically plausible staccati if similar notational configuration: just as GV
so desired. had attentively marked fermatas for every
•131/1st Cor I–II, Vni I A: isolated accents, unconfirmed part without exception on 3rd, he would have
here or in the analogous passage at 135/1st; been no less careful with this prescription. We
we suppress (as did RI1875). I-Mr extended the interpret the two indications as case specific:
accent for Cor I–II to Cor III–IV but there is no a) for Timp and Gr C, to damp the resonating
accent for Vni I; RI1913 supplied accents for Fg, drumhead in a decisive manner; b) for Trb in
Cor III–IV, Of, and strings, plus Ott, Fl, Ob, and lont, to “truncate” their sustained notes at the
Cl at 135. same precise moment the orchestra stops play-
132/4th–134/1st Trb in lont. A: no articulation; we supply ing (even today it remains somewhat problem-
from the identical 128/4th–130/1st (but see also atic to coordinate the sound of these offstage
Note 130/1st). instruments – generally positioned where they
136 Cor I–II (Cor III–IV = Cor I–II) A: GV’s deci- cannot see the conductor – with the rest of the
sion to omit the embellishment here, unlike ensemble, further complicated by an inevitable
the concomitant woodwinds and the analogous acoustical delay). Consequently we prefer to
128–129 and 131–132, was probably dictated by preserve this seemingly circumscribed applica-
specific instrumental constraints: the defective tion of the instruction.
chromatic disposition of the horn in that epoch 140 Strings A: GV’s differentiation between ppp
would have made written d!’’-e!’’ resolving to and pppp would appear to be intentional; we
so unreliable a note as f’’ a risky proposition, intervene only to suggest pppp for Vc in verti-
whereas at 128–129 and 131–132 the written c’’– cal conformity with Vle and Cb. All parts have
d’’ are natural harmonics and e!’’ is precise. In ppp in RI1913.
any case, nothing prevents the modern player 144 Vni I (Vni II = Vni I), Vle A: empty bar, clearly
from integrating the missing embellishment if an oversight that I-Mr had already corrected as
so desired. we suggest in this edition.
Both the accent and the slur are missing; we 146 B soloist Sources: the beginning of the slur on
supply by analogy with 132 (133 = 132) (but see 3rd, while clearly marked in A, nevertheless
also Note 128–131, 132–135). generated divergent readings in some of the
136 Timp A: no accidental is present; see Note secondary sources: in I-Mr it begins on 4th,
111–136. evidently for a more logical alignment with
136/2nd Ott, Ob, Cl A: accent missing; we supply in the syntactic articulation of the text; in RI1913
vertical conformity with Fl, and by analogy it begins on 1st, to repeat the situation at 148;
with 128, 129, 132, and 133. in RI1875 it also begins on 1st (and concludes at
138 Vni I A: accents missing; we supply in vertical 148/1st). We find the function of GV’s phrasing
conformity with Vni II and Vc. to be instead a means of deliberately avoiding
138/4th Vni, Vc I-Mr: slurs for the entire beamed group a caesura or breath between 3rd and 4th.
of notes; pUS-Cso and RI1875 (→ R I1913) ex- 146 Strings A: GV repeated ppp for Vni I (Vni II =
tended slurs to Ott, Fl, Ob, and Cl (where they Vni I); we suggest ppp for Vle, Vc, and Cb as
begin from the second note). These phrasing well, given that the strings now move together
indications have no model in A nor are they in unison fashion, unlike their previously dif-
necessary, since the legato is obvious and in- ferentiated comportment at 140–145.
evitable at this tempo. 149–151 B soloist A: the cresc. symbol originally
139/1st T Coro A: “[thro-]num” missing. concluded at the beginning of 150; GV then ex-
139/1st Cor I–II (Cor III–IV = Cor I–II), Vle A: there are tended it almost to the middle of 151. In rRIms
no ! for Cor, which implies that the absence of it ends roughly at 150/2nd (perhaps attempting
ties from 138 (unlike Fg, Trb in Orch, Trb in to follow the original reading in A); rRI1874 pro-
lont., Trbn, and Of) may have been an over- longed it to the middle of 150, an equally am-
sight; however, given the accent and the analo- biguous solution that was also adopted in RI1913.

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150 Cor A: GV wrote the instruction “frizzante” Ob I: slurs for both pairs of beamed eighth
(for cuivré) beneath Cor III–IV, but it obviously notes at 172;
refers to Cor I–II as well. Cl I: one slur at 172/2nd– 4th (concluding on the
•162–169 Ms Sources: the slurs and articulation in this second beamed eighth note);
passage were variously interpreted and mis- Vni I: one continuous slur for the entire phrase.
understood. RI1875 mostly follows A, simply – at 199 –203:
replacing all of the carets with accents and Ob I: one slur at 201/2nd– 4th (concluding on
omitting the slur at 164–165. RI1913 follows the second beamed eighth note);
RI1875, eliminating the slur for the first bars as Cl I: slur from 199 to 201/1st;
well. RI1964 recuperated the slur at 164–165 Vni I: slur from 199 to 201/1st; slurs for both
(but not the first one) and eliminated the two pairs of beamed eighth notes at 201; slur from
accents at 166, probably by analogy with 162 202/1st to the end of the phrase.
and therefore rendering the second phrase Given that both examples are plausible and
equal to the first. rRI1875 is closest to the read- that one does not automatically exclude the
ing of A, including the original carets, omitting other, we opt for their reciprocal integration
only the first slur. Finally, the interpretation (and / or normalisation).
of rRIms is both unique among the examined 173, 202 Vle A: in both bars GV marked f at 2nd rather
sources and particularly interesting: no carets than 1st, evidently distracted by the fact that
or accents for the ; carets for the two  at 162; Vni have f on 2nd. We anticipate the dynamic
an accent for the first  and a caret for the sec- to 1st, as in Vc and Fg. RI1913 did likewise.
ond one at 166; and no initial slur. This would 175 Vc A: slur from 2nd to the first note of the
seem to be the only sizable divergence between triplet on 4th; we modify in vertical conformity
rRI1875 and rRIms (but see also Note 177, 191, with Vni and Vle (see also Note 204).
213, 229, 231, 233); indeed, given the extreme 176–177 Vle, Vc, Cb A: slurs missing; we supply in
affinity between rRIms and rRI1874–75, one can vertical conformity with Vni I and II, and by
hardly imagine this difference to be casual in analogy with 205–206.
nature. It is likely that the reading of rRIms 177, 191, 213, 229, 231, 233 Coro rRIms: these choral inter-
was based on a first version of the Liber ventions, apparently not contemplated in an
scriptus 1875, partially different from the one earlier version of the Liber scriptus 1875 (see
documented in A (see the description of rRIms, also Note 162–169), were added in purple ink
pp. 5–6: 5). on the stave for Ms, notated as d’ with double
163 Cor A: GV did not specify, but the presence of stems and accompanied by the instruction
single stems suggests that the part is for Cor I “Tutto il Coro”.
alone. In pUS-Cso (the definitive Liber scriptus 180 –181 Trb, Trbn A: over a change of page (verso to rec-
insert) only Cor I plays, while Cor II has the to) between these two bars, GV lightly marked
Cor I part as cue notes. RI1913 = “Solo”. a tie for Trbn II–III in the right margin after 180,
163, 167 Vle, Vc A: at 163 GV superimposed a “6” for and an equally faint slur for Trb I–II in the left
the sextuplet with a triplet “3” in both parts, margin before 181; we agree with pUS-Cso (Li-
adding eighth-note stems for the first, third, ber scriptus 1875 insert), where there are slurs/
and fifth notes (possibly intended to avoid ties for every part. RI1875 (→ R I1913) omitted
the sextuplet’s articulation as 3 + 3). He wrote them, but they are present in rRIms and rRI1875.
the same superimposed numbers at 167 for 182–183 Brass A: missing slurs and incongruent articu-
Vc without marking the eighth-note stems for lation. There are two slurs, one above Cor I–II
either Vle or Vc, but his intentions nonethe- and the other above Trb I–II; we extend them
less seem sufficiently clear (indeed, this same to Cor III–IV and Trb III–IV, and suggest them
rhythmic notation appears again at 170/1st for for Trbn and Of. GV also marked accents at
the alternating figure in Vc (but see also Note 182/3rd– 4th for Cor and Trbn, and at 183 for
199/1st). Cor I–II, then wiped away the ones for Cor
167/4th–168/1st Cor A: GV neglected to notate the part, at 182; we suppress the remainder as residual
which was added in pencil in another hand. from an earlier version. RI1875 follows A, but
It is present in RI1875 (→ R I1913) and pUS-Cso. without the slur for Cor I–II; RI1913 and RI1964
170 –174, 199 –203 Ob I, Cl I, Vni I A: incongruent slurs. progressively extended the accents (RI1964 has
Since the two passages are identical for the them for all notes at 182/3rd– 4th and 183).
instruments (apart an occasional minor detail), 183 Strings A: pp for Vni I and II, p for Vle and Cb
there is no reason to suspect that GV wanted (Vc = Cb). The p GV marked for Vni I and II at
different phrasing. In particular: 186/3rd, with the orchestral crescendo already
– at 170 –174: in progress, suggests a uniform pp here.

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183, 187 Ms rRIms: ff missing for both bars, despite their this bar; we (unlike RI1913) prefer slurs in verti-
unequivocal presence in A (duly confirmed in cal conformity with Vni and Vle (see also Note
rRI1875). When considered in conjunction with 175).
the fact that there is no pp in the piano reduc- 205 Vc A: unlike the other strings, whose slur ends
tion at 183/3rd and 188/2nd, their absence may at 206/1st, Vc has a shorter slur stopping before
reflect an earlier version of the Liber scriptus the bar line. We (unlike RI1913) preserve this
1875 (see the description of rRIms, pp. 5–6: 5), indication, considering it functional to the new
one in which the orchestra continued to play ff figuration that begins at 206.
(or in any case some level of forte) rather than 206 –209 Orch A: dim. symbols at 208/3rd–209 (see the
pp. This would also explain why GV failed relative Note) above Vni I (quite large, pos-
to indicate any dynamic reduction (which is sibly a general indication) and for Vni II, Fl,
otherwise necessary) for Ms. Ob, Cl, Fg I, Cor I–II. Notwithstanding the one
187 Vc, Cb A: ff rather than f, probably residual for Fl, we suggest attributing them only to
from the skeleton score. RI1875 = ff for all but Fl, the instruments that sustain Ms (Ob, Cl, Fg I,
Vni and Vle → R I1913 = ff for all parts. Cor I–II, Vni II), and to adopt the same solu-
187/3rd Vni I (Vni II = Vni I), Cb A: isolated accent, tion at 206/3rd–207, for the following reasons.
probably residual from the skeleton score. At 208/3rd GV had originally marked slightly
188 Cb (Vc = Cb) A: ppp rather than pp, prob- elongated accents for Cl and for Fg I above
ably residual from the skeleton score. RI1875 the , which he then extended to become dim.
(→ R I1913) follows A. symbols (similar accents are also present at
188 –191/1st Strings A: divergent slurs, probably due to a 210/3rd for Ob and Cor I–II underneath the be-
change of page (verso to recto) between 189 and ginning of the cresc. symbols). The accents con-
190; in particular, at 188 –189 the slurs for Vle sequently represent an earlier discarded idea.
are clearly marked, while for Cb the second It is extremely likely that the ones at 206/3rd
slur begins where the first one ends, at 189/1st. for Ob, Cl, and Fg I–II, and a caret for Vni II,
194 –199/1st Ms, Strings A: there are slight variations were also an earlier idea (GV rarely went back
among the slurs for the strings at 195 –198, to a previous page to enter corrections) and
ascribable in all probability to involuntary dif- are therefore replaceable with dim. symbols
ferences in the pen strokes GV used to mark (for the differences between accents and dim.
them. We find the clearly marked models for symbols, see “Edition Criteria”, p. 10f.). None
Vni I and Vc to be sufficient proof of what he of the examined sources adopted this solution.
wanted and normalize accordingly. For Ms, on RI1875 reflects the same ambiguities as A at
the other hand, his intentions are more dif- 208/3rd–209; RI1913 attributed both “cresc.” and
ficult to distinguish because the various pen dim. symbols to all but Fg III–IV, Cor III–IV,
strokes are sometimes superimposed and other Timp, Vc, and Cb.
times adjacent to one another, although they 206–213 Timp A: at 206 GV wrote both p and pp; we
would seem to suggest a legato execution of choose p, as he indicated for Cor III–IV and for
the entire phrase. The last pen stroke partially Vni I on 3rd. From 206 to 213 the notes are c
overlaps with the cresc. symbol, such that rather than d, as if in “do-sol” notation; nev-
its exact conclusion is obscured; we suggest ertheless the G at 238ff. is written at sounding
extending it to 199/1st but leave the interpreter pitch.
free to choose where to take an eventual breath 206/3rd Vni II A: caret (originally also a caret for Vni I,
or define internal sub-phrases, obviously in over which GV marked an accent). For a gen-
conjunction with a logical articulation of the eral examination of the accents and dynamic
text (as in RI1913, which took its lead from symbols in this passage, see Note 206–209.
RI1875). 206/3rd Vni II, Vle A: p missing; we extend vertically
•199 Ms rRIms (→ rRI1875): mf rather than ff. RI1913, from Vni I.
which often looked to the example of rRI1875 for 206/3rd–4th, 208/3rd–4th Fg II A: slurs missing; we sup-
the vocal parts, also has mf. RI1875 interpreted ply in vertical conformity with Fl, Vni I, and
the ambiguously writen ff in A as f. Vle.
199/1st Vc A: here, unlike at the corresponding 170/1st, 207–208/2nd Vni I, Vle A: divergent slurs: for Vle, one
GV did not mark a triplet subdivision of the continuous slur from 207 to 208/2nd; for Vni I,
sextuplet (see also Note 163, 167). Though with slur missing at 208/1st–2nd. We adjust in verti-
some reservations, we opt to preserve this dif- cal conformity with the other unison parts,
ference. and by analogy with 209–210/2nd in the im-
202/1st Vni II A: d’; we modify to match 173/1st. mediate repetition of this passage.
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the dim. symbols (see Note 206 –209), GV wrote respect the tempo indication at 236, it could be
“cresc.” above Vni I (probably intended as a gradually increased up to 238). In rRIms, which
general indication), above Ob, between the presumably reflects an earlier version of the
two staves for Cor, and beneath Cb. It cannot Liber scriptus 1875 (see “The textual tradition”,
be excluded that these “cresc.” belong to an c, pp. 8–9), neither “Allegro di prima” nor
earlier phase of composition, and that once GV “stesso movimento tra le sei note e le otto note”
completed the orchestration he added the dim. is present (rRI1875 has instead “All.o Agitato”
symbols without cancelling the various “cresc.”. and “lo stesso movimento”). GV may therefore
Nonetheless, the passage is itself something have realized only later that there was a tempo
of a crescendo in progress (reflected in the difference involved (it should be remembered
gradually rising register for Ms and the “cresc. that approximately a year passed between the
sempre” at 210/3rd that culminates in ff at 212). composition of the Messa da requiem and the
The more likely hypothesis is therefore that Liber scriptus 1875). If he had wanted  (236) =
GV wanted to create a crescendo consisting of  (235) no indication would have been neces-
“successive waves” of sound, in which case the sary. We believe instead that he intended the
“cresc.” indication should be anticipated as we sixteenth notes to flow at an even pace

suggest in this edition so that the dim. sym-
   without a perceptible change be-
bols are not in contradiction with the overall
crescendo effect. tween 6 =  and 8 = , and consequently sug-
213 Coro A: no dynamic is present; we suggest ppp gest “stringendo” at 235, leaving the method
for balance with the orchestra in the following of its implementation to the discretion of the
bar (see Note 214). RI1875 (→ R I1913) = “estrema- conductor.
mente piano”, as at 177. 238 Fl, Ob, Cl, Fg III A: slurs missing; at the analo-
214 A: ppp for Trb, Trbn, Vni, and Cb; pp for Fl, gous 45 (see the relative Note) Ott and Ob have
Ms, Vni II, and Vle. We (like RI1875 → R I1913) slurs (Ott at 45 = Fl at 238).
prefer ppp for the orchestra – implied by the 238 Timp A: also a superfluous “cresc.”; we sup-
“ancora più ppp” at 219 – but preserve pp for press.
Ms. 239 Coro, Vni I, Vc, Cb A: Coro = fff; Vni I, Cb =
219 Cb (Vc = Cb) A: pp; we modify to ppp in verti- ff; Vc = f. At the analogous 46 the dynamic
cal conformity with the other strings. rapport between Vni I and Coro is reversed
226 A: fff for Ms, Vc, and Cb; ff and f for the other (Coro = ff; Vni I = fff; see Note 45 – 46) and the
instruments. We prefer ff for the orchestra remainder of the orchestra has ff. We prefer
but preserve fff for Ms. Also, Ob, Cl, and Cor to follow GV’s indications to the letter: that is,
III–IV have accents, unconfirmed for the other an identical reprise of 46 for the orchestra (see
parts (including the strings); we (like RI1875 Note 239 –253) along with his carefully marked
→ RI1913) suppress. fff for Coro.
226–228/1st Ms rRIms: accents for all seven notes, not 239 –253 Coro A: the slurs in this reprise of 46 – 60 (with
present in any other examined source but pos- the same text) are even more lacunose and re-
sibly reflecting an earlier version of the Liber flect the same general kinds of inconsistencies;
scriptus 1875 (see the description of rRIms, pp. we apply the model established at 46 – 60. With
5–6: 5). regard to dynamics, we preserve the entry fff
235 –236 A: GV’s instruction “stesso movimento tra GV carefully marked at 239 (see the relative
le sei note e le otto note” (the disposition of Note), but at 247–253 we apply the model estab-
which we reproduce as closely as possible in lished at 54 – 60.
the score) lends itself to various interpretations. 239 –253 Orch A: GV marked these bars as the reprise
If  at 236 =  at 235, the tempo would be too of 46 – 60 with the instruction “Dall’A al B”,
fast (  = MM 88, as opposed to the opening writing out the parts for Coro, Vni I, Vc, and
tempo of  = MM 80); in this case it would be Cb. There are various differences in these
necessary at 229 to resume the “a tempo” after elaborated parts with respect to 46 – 60, which
the “col canto” at a somewhat slower tempo seems to have been more carefully notated (the
(as suggested by Rosen, Critical Commentary, secondary sources are of little help in resolving
p. 60). If instead the instruction means that the doubtful situations: see Note 239 –253, 573 – 598).
pace of the sixteenth notes remains unchanged We consider the written out parts for Vni I,
between 235 and 236, the resulting tempo at Vc, and Cb to be performance guidelines and
236 is too slow (  = 75% of MM 88 = MM 66); markers for the copyists to use in reproducing
in this case it would be necessary to “strin- the score and extracting the parts; therefore we
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for this reprise at 239 –253 (problems that sur- nonetheless – however cautiously – suggest
face within the first full orchestral elaboration anticipating the figure to the end of 253. All
are addressed in Note 1– 61), making note of of the examined sources, including pUS-Cso,
only those differences that help to fill lacunae follow A.
or resolve ambiguities, thereby allowing us to 254 Trbn A: the dynamic indication is difficult to
establish a unitary text. They may be summa- decipher, perhaps “cresc.” or mf (as in pUs-Cso;
rized as follows: the other examined sources have nothing). The
– 239 Cb: accent missing; we supply from 46; first possibility is in direct contrast with the
– 243 Cb: accent; we adopt and extend it to 50 concomitant dim. symbol, while the second is
(see the relative Note); musically implausible in light of the ongoing
– 246–247 Cb: there is a tie and no cut above process of dissolution from 247: were Trbn to
the  at 246; we modify to match 53–54. enter mf, as would (by extension) Fg, Of, and
239 –253, 573 – 598 Orch I-Mr (→ R I1875): these two pas- Timp, the effect would be to obscure the sound
sages, reprises of 46 – 60 and 1–26 respectively of Coro; we therefore suggest p as the maxi-
in A, were written out but by different copy- mum level possible.
ists, resulting in a further layer of incongruen- 255/3rd–260 Vc A: from 255/3rd GV stopped adding
cies between the two readings in addition to staccati, probably assuming that their continua-
those already present in A (the same situation tion was automatically understood. There may
occurred for the reprise in N. 7, 45 –105 = N. 2, however be some legitimate doubt regarding
1– 61); RI1913 attempted to normalize them, but the two groups of repeated notes at 258/1st–2nd
not always successfully so. Principal divergenc- and 259/3rd–4th, given their dissimilarity with
es are addressed in the individual Notes below. the alternating pattern of the other figures.
253 –254 Fl A: GV wrote the two ornamental sixteenth While not entirely dismissing that concern, we
notes at the beginning of 254, which is the first supply the staccati as the more plausible solu-
bar to be fully elaborated after the reprise of tion in this passage.
46 – 60 (239 –253 = 46 – 60). Nothing would have 258 Of A: empty bar, quite possibly because B!1
prevented him from placing them at the end of is a semitone beyond the lower limit of the
253. Nevertheless, there are musical reasons for ophecleide’s range. All of the examined sources
considering this a generic notational decision follow A. We integrate the note, obviously with
undeserving of over-interpretation. Were the those modern instruments that normally play
embellishment to be executed at the beginning this part today in mind.
of 254, the result would be: 258–260 Vc A: inconsistent beaming: unlike 255–257,
– unpleasant parallel octaves with the bass; where the notes are beamed in groups of four
– an ambiguous harmonic interpretation of the sixteenths each (255/1st–2nd) or as pairs of
two notes: in the similar figures concluding all eighth notes with a cut through each stem
previous trills, the first note is a lower neigh- (255/3rd–257), at 258–260 GV opted for groups
bor and the second returns to the consonant of four eighth notes with cuts (at 259/3rd–4th
pitch, while in this case the c’ would become  with two cuts). This single beam is plausible
the consonant pitch and the d’ a rather equi- for the realization of the eight repeated notes at
vocal sort of escape tone. 258/1st–2nd and 259/3rd–4th but not for 258/
If GV had truly wanted the embellishment to 3rd–4th, 259/1st–2nd, and 260, where we revert
fall at the beginning of 254, it would perhaps to beaming in groups of four sixteenth notes.
have been preferable to resolve it to e’ rather 261 Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) A: slur missing; we
than g’, thereby making the d’ a passing tone supply in vertical conformity with Of.
rather than an unconvincing escape tone. What 270 Cl, 271 Fg A: no dynamic is present; we sug-
is more, the harmony on the downbeat of 254 gest pp, as GV later indicated for Vni II and
already contains an effective element of ambi- Vle at 272 (but see Note 272, 277).
guity: the appoggiatura c’ for C Coro and Vni 270–271 Cl A: slur missing; we suggest by analogy with
I (resolving to b!) against the c in the bass. A the identical 275–276.
simultaneous c’ for Fl, no matter how fleeting, 272 Vni I, 277 Vc A: ppp; we consider this indication
weakens this effect, whereas a clear g’ on the residual from an earlier incomplete version and
downbeat heightens the impact of the disso- modify to pp, as GV wrote for Vni II and Vle
nance as an intentional gesture leading toward at 272.
resolution. While allowing that, for the sake 277–282/4th Vc A: GV marked the slur with a series of
of argument, GV may have actually wanted occasionally overlapping pen strokes. While it
the previous embellishments also to resolve seems unlikely that he intended any separation
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have wanted to close a first slur on the d at 294 –295/1st Ms A: one continuous slur, and no staccati
279 and begin a second slur at 280, just as the at 294/2nd–3rd; we modify to match T soloist,
slur that begins at the analogous 291. At the whose part is marked in more detail. I-Mr and
end of 281, the last bar before a page turn (recto RI1913, on the other hand, modified T to match
to verso), the slur extends beyond the bar line Ms. rRIms follows A, but without the staccati
as if to continue uninterrupted, but at 282 the and the slur for T soloist at 294/2nd–3rd; rRI1874
slur resembles those for the other strings; here added the staccati but not the slur.
however, the way GV phrased the analogous 298/6th S soloist A: anomalous staccato above the a’,
292–293 serves as unequivocal proof of his unconfirmed at the analogous 299/3rd or 6th;
intentions. we suppress.
277, 285 Fg A: no carets are present for the e!’ on 6th; 301–302/3rd Voices A: at 301, the last bar before a change
we suggest their integration by analogy with of page (verso to recto), GV marked slurs for S
272/6th. and Ms that extend over the bar line, but their
281–282/3rd Ms A: at 281, the last bar before a page turn continuation and conclusion are missing at 302,
(recto to verso), the slur extends beyond the bar probably a simple oversight (analogous to the
line but its continuation and conclusion are situation at 281–282/3rd); we supply and extend
missing at 282, probably a simple oversight. An to T soloist, for whom no slur is present.
analogous situation occurs at 301–302/3rd (see 302/4th Voices A: pp for S, ppp for T; we opt for pp
the relative Note). (confirmed throughout this section) and extend
282/6th Strings A: GV carefully and unequivocally to Ms, who has no dynamic.
marked one caret, for Vle, which none of the 303–304/1st Fl A: slur missing; we supply in vertical
examined sources saw fit to include. Although conformity with Cl.
 
with some reservations, we preserve the 303–304/1st Vni I A:      
articulation and extend it to the other strings,
leaving its eventual omission to the discretion We consider this a plausible divergence with
of the performer. respect to the recurring model in Cl (see also
285, 288 Fg A:  missing for the c’ on 5th; we integrate 275, 283, 294): the shorter slur in this context is
by analogy with 272/5th. Among the exam- more idiomatic for stringed instruments.
ined sources, only pUS-Cso has the accidental 303/1st Vni I A: g’; it seems unlikely that GV wanted
(which was entered later into the part). an exposed open fourth for Vni I relative to the
288/4th Voices A: pp only for T soloist. Although it other strings and the voices, all of whom have
cannot be excluded that GV actually intended with a unison d’ or d. I-Mr, RI1875, and RI1913
to limit the increase in volume for T alone, follow A. The anomaly was instead recognized
we feel it is pertinent to S soloist and Ms as by rRIms (→ rRI1874), which added b! – d’ to the
well. All of the examined sources follow A in g’ on the downbeat to complete the right-hand
limiting the dynamic indication to T (I-Mr and chord. With the analogous 283 and 294 in
RI1875 have p). mind, we suggest the substitution of d’ for g’
289/1st–3rd Fg A: GV carefully marked this slur to but leave the final choice to the discretion of
include all six notes. We find it an accurate the performer.
reflection of his intentions: in fact, only those 304/4th, 305/1st Fl, Cl A: no carets are present; we sug-
figures in this section that begin with a leap gest by analogy with 308 and 309.
of at least a minor third have a staccato for the 308/4th, 309/1st T soloist A: carets missing; we supply by
first note and the slur starting from the second. analogy with 304 and 305.
290–291 Vni II A: slur missing; we supply by analogy 308/4th, 309/1st Fg A: no accents are present; we supply
with the concomitant slurs for Vni I and Vle. by analogy with 304 and 305.
291/4th–293/3rd Voices A: cresc. and dim. symbols 309/1st Fl A: caret missing.
appear only above the stave for S, but they 313 Vle A: one continuous slur for the six notes;
presumably apply to all of the voices. The we modify in vertical conformity with Vc and
culminating point of this messa di voce is not Cb.
at the beginning of 292 but further into the 314 T soloist A: accents missing; we supply in ver-
bar, nearly coincident with the dotted eighth tical conformity with S soloist.
note on 4th. While this disposition is musically 314 Vni II A: slur between 2nd and 3rd rather than
plausible, we prefer to modify it by analogy 1st and 2nd; we modify in vertical conformity
with the other two similar passages at 280–281 with Ms, which is confirmed in the second half
and 300–301. of the bar.
293/6th–294 Vni A: slurs missing; we supply in vertical 314/3rd Vle A: isolated f, unconfirmed for the other
conformity with Vle and Vc. parts; we suppress.

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•321 S soloist A: in addition to “attacca subito”, GV namic for Timp; all others, Coro included, have
wrote “portate” after the g’, which would make ff; we adopt the prevailing indication.
sense only if it were followed by another note 336 Trbn, 338 Fl A: isolated accents on 2nd (at the analo-
for S at the beginning of the “Rex tremendæ”; gous 340 there are no accents whatsoever); we
this may indeed have been his original plan, suppress.
in which case the slur (which is missing in 338 Timp A: f or possibly ff, evidently added as a
all the examined sources) would function precautionary measure after the mf and p for
in those same terms. I-Mr and RI1875 kept the solo voices in the previous bar. There is
“portate” (in I-Mr it appears above the note); no reason to believe that GV wanted a dif-
RI1913 suppressed it (but like rRIms [→ rRI1874], ferent dynamic for Timp from the rest of the
“attacca subito” was eliminated as well); RI1964 orchestra (in which case he would perhaps
has “portata” above the two (closely spaced) have marked f at 336). We (supported by RI1913)
notes in the bar, an equivocal interpretation anticipate ff to 336. pUS-Cso has f at 336; I-Mr
at best. We consider “portate” to be a super- and RI1875 omitted the dynamic altogether.
seded and inapplicable instruction (which the 339, 341 Cb (Fg, Vc = Cb) A: accents on 2nd missing; we
singer might otherwise be tempted to read as supply by analogy with 337.
a portamento for the descending octave leap) •342 A: f between Ott and Ob, and for Cor and T
and consequently suppress. The slur instead and B Coro; ff for Fl and Cl. We consider the
corresponds to GV’s explicit intention that the dynamic for T and B Coro, which reduces the
g’ be held through to the onset of the “Rex level established in the previous bars, to be the
tremendæ” without a caesura, as if the g’ at 321 more pertinent choice (ff would be redundant).
were ideally “tied” to the c’ for B Coro at 322. I-Mr omitted the f for T and B Coro and gave
322 Orch A: missing dynamics aside, the brass ff to all winds but Fg, Trbn, and Of. RI1875 =
generally have f, Fg ff, and the strings ff (ex- tutti f; RI1913 = tutti ff.
cept perhaps Vc, who seem to have f); at the 342–344 Fg, Cb (Vc = Cb) A: various missing accents;
identical 326 there is little that serves to clarify we supply by means of reciprocal integration
the situation (see Note 326). While we can- between the two parts.
not exclude the possibility that GV may have •345 –346 S soloist rRIms, rRI1874, RI1913: cresc. symbol at
wanted differentiated dynamics, we opt for a 345, dim. symbol at 346; I-Mr and RI1875 follow
uniform ff. A, with the dim. symbol extended through
322–323 B Coro A: no diminuendo is marked; we sup- both bars (also in RI1964). The messa di voce
ply the symbol from the identical 326 –327. in rRIms is curious, given GV’s unequivocal
322–323/1st Cb A: isolated slur, unconfirmed for the indication in A: excluding a personal initia-
other unison parts; we suppress. tive on the part of the copyist, we are inclined
The volata at 322/1st is anomalously notated to hypothesize its derivation from a source
as three thirty-second notes, rather than the that predates A (see “The textual tradition”, c,
sixteenth notes at the identical 326 and the pp. 8–9).
analogous 336. At 322 and 326 Cl have six- 347 Orch A: only two dynamics are present: the pp
teenth notes for the embellishment as well. We for Fg and ppp for Cb. GV had originally writ-
modify to match the prevalent notation for this ten ppp for Fg but he then cancelled the first
figure. “p”, leaving us to presume that the resulting
322, 326 Orch A: various missing accents on 1st, but difference with Cb is the fruit of choice rather
GV’s intentions are clear. than oversight. We therefore suggest extending
326 Orch A: fff for Vni I (Vni II = Vni I) and Vc, ff pp to the other winds, and ppp to the remain-
for Fg, Timp, and Cb; we uniformly extend ff, ing strings. I-Mr has p for both Fg and Cb;
as at the identical 322. RI1875 (→ R I1913) = tutti pp.
328 A: Vni I (Vni II = Vni I) and both pairs of Cor 348 S Coro, 350 S and B Coro A: ppp, but pppp is the
have ppp, all others pp. While we cannot ex- prevalent model (at 352 every part is carefully
clude the possibility that GV may have wanted marked pppp). rRIms (→ rRI1874) has “estrema-
pp here and ppp at the identical 324, we adjust mente ppp” at 348 (rather than “estremamente
328 to match. piano”) above C Coro and pp for S Coro (which
329 Vc A: empty bar; we supply from Cb here and rRI1874 extended to T and B Coro), and ppp at
by analogy with 325. 350 for S and T Coro (pppp at 352); RI1913 uni-
330/4th Vni II A: a second slur is visible, unconfirmed formly extended ppp at 348 and 350.
for Vni I or Vle, nor at the analogous 332 or 348/4th–353/1st Coro A: relatively few carets are present
334; we suppress. (at 348 and 349 for S; at 350 for S and T; at 352
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clear; we integrate the missing ones accord- motivic apportionment of the music and the
ingly. text for T I.
351/1st Coro A: for the integration of the carets see 366, 370 Tempo A: “rall. al 1° tempo” (367) and “in
Note 348/4th–353/1st. tempo” (370) are not present; we suggest their
353/2nd B soloist A: staccato missing for the first ; we integration from rRIms (→ rRI1874). While the
supply in conformity with T soloist at 352. second of these indications is a reasonably
353/3rd–354 S soloist A: the cresc.-dim. symbols would foregone conclusion, the first one bears par-
appear to be in vertical opposition to the con- ticular consideration as an interesting approach
tinuous cresc. GV marked elsewhere (winds, to the interpretation of this passage: in fact,
T soloist, Vni, Vle) – indeed, he had initially by introducing a return to the primo tempo
written the same cresc.-dim. symbols above at 367 following an extended “animando a
Vni I as well, then decisively marked a single poco a poco” section beginning from 356 (and
cresc. symbol over them. Yet while it cannot continuing through the “sempre animando”
be excluded that he forgot to correct S soloist, markers at 361 and 364), it is possible to reach
the dynamic surge and ebb for her part func- the important culminating point at 368, “allarg.
tions effectively in this imitative passage, first stentate”, in a less precipitate and consequently
highlighting her initial leap upward of a minor more effective manner.
sixth and then allowing the serried entries of 376 –378 A: the phrasing is both lacunose and imprecise,
T soloist and Ms to emerge as her motive de- due largely to space concerns – whether the
scends toward its conclusion. We therefore pre- horizontal breadth involved, requiring various
serve GV’s indications for S soloist and suggest pen strokes to cover, or the cramped conditions
the slur and cresc. for Ms, knowing in any case between the staves that sometimes forced the
that the cumulative effect is that of a continu- superimposition of slurs with cresc. symbols.
ous crescendo among the solo vocal parts. This situation caused various misinterpreta-
355/3rd–4th Fl, Cl, Fg I A: for Fl, the two octave dyads tions in the secondary sources resulting in
with accents also have anomalous staccati, a number of highly improbable sub-phrases
while Cl and Fg I have no slur. We normalize (see for example RI1913). Our solutions are the
by means of reciprocal comparison of the product of reciprocal comparison: notwith-
parts. standing the divergences, it seems likely that
356 Fg, Of A: anomalous f; we modify to match the GV intended those parts with thematic mate-
prevailing ff. rial (S and T soloist, Fl, Ob I, Cl I, Vni I) to be
360/1st–2nd Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) A: isolated dim. phrased similarly to the analogous (if rhythmi-
symbol, unconfirmed for either Of or Cb; we cally compressed) parts at 330ff. None of the
suppress. slurs continues to 379, the first bar following a
361/1st Of A: isolated accent, unconfirmed for either page turn (recto to verso), which may have been
Fg or Cb; we suppress. an oversight but would in any case be sup-
•362/1st Fg, Cb A: accents missing; we supply in verti- plemental with respect to the slurs at 330ff; we
cal conformity with Of and B Coro as a per- therefore opt for a single continuous slur that
tinent contribution to this point of maximum concludes at the end of 378. With regard to the
tension in the passage. None of the examined other non-thematic parts, we have used recip-
sources has the accent for B Coro. rocal comparison and integration to establish
364/2nd–365/1st Winds A: where the slurs are not en- two models of slurs and articulation, for: 1) Ob
tirely missing (there are none for Ott, Fl, Ob, II, Ms, S Coro, and Vni II (extended to Cl II and
and Cl) they are otherwise imprecisely marked, C Coro); and 2) Vle, Fg I and III, and Cor (but
sometimes seeming to end before the bar line not T Coro, the only vocal part that GV sup-
and other times extending beyond it. Never- plied with thorough and unequivocally marked
theless GV’s intentions are clear, allowing us slurs and articulation).
to supply them where relevant in a uniform 379/4th–381 Strings A: some accents, staccati, and slurs
manner. are missing, but GV’s intentions are clear; we
365/1st–2nd T I and B Coro A: on the whole GV was fair- supply through reciprocal comparison of the
ly careful in notating the vocal parts for this parts.
passage (364 –368), but here he forgot to supply 382/2nd Vc A: superfluous “dim.”; we suppress.
an accent on 1st for B Coro while marking one 383 Cor A: marked “Solo” but for no apparent rea-
for T I Coro on 2nd, where in fact there is no son; we suppress.
apparent reason that the sequence of accents 393 S soloist A: the slur extends beyond the bar
should continue. We suggest the former and line into the right margin of the page (393 is
suppress the latter, in keeping with the natural the last bar of a verso), suggesting its continua-

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tion to 394; we prefer a shorter slur by analogy 425, 427 Fl, Ob, Cl A: carets on 4th missing; we supply
with the ones GV marked for Ms at 383 and S as in the earlier analogous rhythmic figures.
at 391. 429 Cb A: redundant pp; we suppress.
397/3rd–4th S soloist A: a horizontal pen stroke above 429/3rd Vle, Vc A: isolated staccati for the , uncon-
the eighth notes, partially coincident with the firmed in the successive bars and probably
beginning of the cresc. symbol, would appear residual from an earlier version. In fact, GV
to be a slur; we suggest its integration by anal- had originally marked two shorter slurs for
ogy with the previous models. the beamed eighth notes in Vc before extend-
405 – 408/1st Orch A: a certain uniformity can be dis- ing them to the following  in each case; and
cerned among the slurs GV marked for Fg, Vle while he did not need to modify the slur for
(in multiple pen strokes), and Vc, all of them Vle (who, like Fg, moves in unison with Vc),
carrying the bass line, but the situation is dif- the staccato remained nonetheless. We sup-
ferent for those parts that double S soloist: Ob press both, in agreement with I-Mr (→ R I1875
is the only one with a single continuous slur → RI1913).
(in two pen strokes), while Fl and Vni I have •430–431, 432–433 S soloist, Ms A: slur only above S at
slurs at 406 alone. Since the latter correspond 430–431; we extend to Ms, whose homorhyth-
to the slur for S soloist, we may hypothesize mic motion suggests that the indication was
that the Fl and Vni I parts were already no- intended for both voices. At 432–433 there is
tated in the skeleton score, while the slur for part of a slur for S between the cresc. and dim.
Ob dates to the period of orchestration and symbols; given the identical music and syl-
consequently takes precedence over the shorter labic disposition of the text, we adopt the same
slurs. We therefore opt for the longer slur. With phrasing as 430–431 without typographical dis-
regard to Cl and Vni II, who both double Ms, tinction. All of the examined sources ignored
we are able to apply the model of GV’s clearly both slurs.
marked slurs for Vni II to Cl where they are 434 S soloist, Ms A: some smearing of the dim.
only partially present. There is also consider- symbols above S soloist and beneath Ms sug-
able imprecision in the way the various slurs gests that GV may have tried to eliminate them
conclude at the end of this passage: while the ink was still fresh (in the process
– for Vle and Vc at 408/1st, but for Fg the slur he also seems to have obliterated a slur over
stops at 407/2nd; the last three eighth notes for S soloist). Both
– for Ob the end of the single slur corresponds dim. symbols are present in rRIms (→ rRI1874
to the  at 407; → RI1913). We find them plausible, especially
– for Vni II the last slur is circumscribed to for S soloist whose tessitura suggests the natu-
407/3rd– 4th, but for Cl (like Ms) it extends to ral deployment of a diminuendo.
408. 437– 441 Vle A: at 437, the last bar before a page turn
We prefer a uniform conclusion for all slurs at (recto to verso), GV marked a slur that he
408/1st. neglected to conclude at the beginning of 438;
410–411 Fl, Vle A: there is one expansive cresc. symbol instead, he began another one toward the end
between the staves of these contiguous parts of 438 that ends on the g’’ at 441. We find it
(Fl is immediately below Vle), presumably more logical to conclude this second slur at 440
valid for both parts as at 414–415. (in vertical conformity with Cb), and we extend
The first tie (410–411) is missing for Vle, while it to Vni II. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) adopted
the second one (411) is missing for Fl; we sup- the first slur but ignored the second one.
ply to match 414–415. 438 – 440 Fg II and III–IV A: slurs missing; we supply in
411, 415 S soloist I-Mr: for the first two notes in each vertical conformity with Cb.
bar the copyist marked a tie and a slur respec- 439 Vni I A: “legate” over the  ; we anticipate to
tively which were subsequently erased, pos- the more plausible position at 438/4th.
sibly by GV; but while the tie at 411 was clearly 439/4th Fl I A: two eighth notes; we modify to match
erroneous, the slur at 415 remains pertinent the unison Vni I.
to the expressivity of the phrase and should 441/2nd–442/1st Ob A: simultaneous contrasting slurs,
therefore be preserved, as it is in A. one over all eight notes and another beneath
411/3rd Ms A: “ten.”; we prefer the fermata GV marked the first six; we adopt the 6 + 2 model in vertical
for S soloist. conformity with Vc.
416/4th Ms A: pp missing; we supply in vertical con- 442 Fg A: Ã : in all probability GV omitted the
formity with S soloist. conclusion from 441 because the two pitches
424 – 427 A: “animando sempre fino alla fine” is present involved were relatively difficult ones for the
only above S soloist. instrument of that epoch to reach. pUs-Cso

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follows A, but the notes are present in I-Mr 464/1st–2nd Vc, Cb A: staccati and slurs missing;
(→ R I1875 →  RI1913) (RI1964 scrupulously added we supply in vertical conformity with Vni
parentheses). We too suggest their integration, and Vle.
given that they are no problem for modern •466 Fl RI1875: the copyist distractedly left the bar
instruments to manage. empty; this oversight was transmitted to RI1913,
445 Vc A: anomalous staccati for the first two where it became a Ã
notes; we suppress. 466 – 468/1st Fl, Ob, Cl, Vni II A: Fl and Cl I have no slur;
452 Vle A: slur missing; we supply in vertical con- Ob has one only for the three notes at 466; Cl
formity with Vni. II and Vni II both have slurs beginning from
453–456 Vni II A: no slurs are present; we integrate by 467/1st. We integrate and adjust in vertical con-
analogy with the phrasing GV marked for Vni formity with the clear and musically convinc-
I and Vc. ing slurs GV marked for Vni I and Vle.
454/3rd A: ppp above Vni I, pp below; ppp for Vni II, 466/3rd– 468/3rd Orch A: while the majority of the cresc.
Vle, and T soloist; pppp for Vc, but pp at the symbols stop at the end of 467, the last bar
beginning of the following bar; we opt for a before a change of page (verso to recto), GV
uniform ppp here and eliminate the dynamic did continue the one for T soloist beyond the
indication for Vc at 455. middle of 468. That he wanted the same length
456 T soloist A: the breath mark seems to be in of crescendo for the instrumental parts is
contradiction with the slur, but GV’s intentions demonstrated by the cresc. symbol he marked
are actually reasonably clear: that is, to allow between Fl and Ob, as well as a cresc. symbol
the singer to take a breath without creating an between the staves for Cor (the conclusion at
audible caesura between 456 and 457. If singer 468 was originally a dim. symbol before he
and conductor are sufficiently attuned to one replaced it with the definitive version).
another, the string crescendo can be deployed 470 Ob, Fg III A: both parts also have an accent, su-
to cover T’s subtle interruption of sound in perseded by the dim. symbol (GV marked only
such a manner that he is able to give the the dim. for Fg III at 471– 476, proof that the
impression of a continuous legato. Naturally, it accent at 470 is residual from an earlier idea);
cannot be excluded that one of the two indica- we suppress.
tions was meant to supersede the other; this 471– 473 Ob A: at 471 Ob has the dim. symbol on 4th
was the interpretation of I-Mr, which has the but no caret, and only an accent on 4th at 472
slur but not the breath mark. rRIms (→ rRI1874 and 473; we modify in each case to match the
→ RI1913) omitted both. model at 470.
456 Vni I and II A: p (perhaps originally pp for Vni 472, 473 Fg I A: accent for the first eighth note; we
I, with one p subsequently cancelled); consid- replace with carets, as in the previous bars.
ering this an implausibly abrupt rise in the 474/1st–2nd Cl I A: slur missing.
dynamic level as the phrase draws toward its 475/1st Vni II A: the caret could possibly be residual
conclusion, we (like RI1913) suppress. from an earlier version in which the a!’ was
457/3rd–4th T soloist A: a pen stroke above the triplet not tied from 474/4th (there are hints of other
lends itself to various hypothetical interpreta- corrections at 474). Yet its presence in this posi-
tions, whether as an underline for “[dolce] con tion, while not entirely convincing, is support-
calma”, or the equivalent of a bracket for the ed by all of the examined sources. We suggest
triplet indication, or the intimation of a slur. its extension, with some reservations, to the
We suggest this last possibility by analogy unison Cl I.
with 461. 475/4th, 476/1st Vle, Fg I A: accent missing at 475/4th for
460/3rd–4th Fl A: a slur for each beamed figure; we Vle, and caret missing at 476/1st for Fg I; we
modify in vertical conformity with Ob and Cl. supply through reciprocal comparison of these
461/4th Fg A: GV originally marked an accent, then unison parts.
added two short supplementary pen strokes •476/1st Fl RI1913: b!’   tied to the previous ; the in-
which we interpret as his definitive intention tegration originated with I-Mr, where the note
to transform the accent into a cresc. symbol. the copyist added was c’’; another hand circled
The combined part for Fg I and II in it and wrote “si!” beside it.
pUS-Cso has both a cresc. symbol between the 477/4th Orch A: Cor III–IV is the only part with both
two staves and an accent beneath Fg II; I-Mr the accent and the dim. symbol; we extend
(→ R I1875 → R I1913) considered the accent to these indications to Cor I–II, and suggest their
have been cancelled and began the dim. sym- integration (one or both as appropriate) to
bol at 461/4th rather than 462; RI1964 reinstated the other parts for vertical conformity. I-Mr
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A; RI1964 reinstated them and extended them instances where some margin of doubt remains
where missing for all but Fl. regarding GV’s intentions may be summarized
479/4th Ob A: superfluous slur, probably intended as a as follows:
bracket for the triplet indication; we suppress. – 511 Vni I: slurs and beaming are 4 + 4; we
484/3rd–485 Orch A: p for Fl, Fg, and Cor; pp for Vni I. modify to 6 + 2 as at the analogous 514 and 517
We consider the pp for Vni I to be different by (see also Note 544 – 552).
design and consequently extend it to Vni II as – 512, 515, 518 Vc: at 512 and 515, slurs and
well, otherwise assigning p or suggesting it by beaming are 4 + 4; at 518/1st–2nd, slurs are
virtue of analogous function (Vle with Ob and 2 + 2 with a single beam, while 3rd– 4th have a
Cl, Vc with Fg) to the other parts. single slur with 2 + 2 beaming (at the analogous
487/2nd Vle A: superfluous staccati (the part is “pizz.” 545, 548, and 551 slurs and beaming are 4 + 4;
from 484) for the two eighth notes; we sup- see Note 544 – 552). We uniformly adopt 2 + 2 for
press. They are present in I-Mr (→ R I1875 the slurs and beaming in these cases.
→ RI1913). 516, 546, 549 Cb A: superfluous staccati (the part is
487/3rd–488/1st Cor III–IV A: slur missing; we supply in already marked “pizz.” for these bars); we sup-
vertical conformity with Fg and Vc. press. RI1875 (→ R I1913) preserved them, without
488 Strings A: only pp for Vni I and ppp for Vc; we however extending them to the analogous 513.
modify Vc to pp, which maintains the dynamic 518/4th Vc A: isolated accent on the first f, uncon-
equilibrium established in the previous bars firmed at the analogous 551. Given its doubt-
(see Note 483/3rd–485), and extend it to Vni II ful musical justification, we suppress but with
and Vle. some reservations, leaving its eventual execu-
•493, 494 Vc A: no dynamic indication at 493, pp at 494; tion to the discretion of the performer. It is not
we anticipate the pp to 493. RI1913 did the same present in I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913).
but also supplied ppp at 494 (like RI1875), ex- 521/3rd–523 Orch A: GV began some of the slurs he
tending it to the other parts that double Vc (Cl, marked for this passage at 522, the first bar fol-
Fg, and Vle). lowing a page turn (recto to verso); we modify
494–498/1st Cl, Fg, Vle, Vc A: GV seems to have marked by analogy with the corresponding passage at
the slurs at 494–495 for Cl, Fg, and Vle in two 554–556, where the slurs begin at 554/3rd.
contiguous strokes joined at 495/1st, or, in the 523 Vni I and II A: there is a slur for these two
case of Vc, in two separate strokes at 494/3rd– notes in both parts; but while the one for Vni
4th and 495/4th; we adopt the model of one I falls within the longer slur, for Vni II the
continuous slur, as exemplified by the ones longer slur stops at the end of 522, followed by
that he distinctly marked at 496–497 for Cl, Fg, the shorter slur at 523. We eliminate the shorter
and Vle. For Vc, on the other hand, the second slur for Vni I as superfluous and turn the two
slur extends to 498/1st; we prefer the prevailing consecutive slurs for Vni II into a single con-
solution and extend it for vertical conformity tinuous one, in vertical conformity with Vni I
to Vc. as well as the slurs GV marked for Cl, Fg, and
503 Cb A: isolated accent; considering it likely to Vc. The longer slur is also confirmed in the
be residual from the skeleton score, we sup- corresponding passage at 554/3rd–556.
press, though with some reservations. It is not 527/2nd–3rd Strings A: accents missing for Vc and Cb on
present in I-Mr (→ R I1875 →  RI1913), perhaps 2nd, and the dim. symbols are not present for
because in A it collides with the “Andante” Vni II and Vle; we integrate both indications by
tempo indication in the lower margin of the means of reciprocal comparison of the parts.
page. RI1875 (→ R I1913) has accents for Vni I and II
504/4th Vc A: B missing from the dyad, an oversight and Vle, dim. symbols for Vc and Cb.
already corrected in I-Mr on the model of 506. 529 Orch A: ff for Cor, Timp, and Vc, f for all other
•506/4th B soloist A: no accent is present; we suggest by parts; we modify ff to match the prevailing
analogy with 504. rRIms (→ rRI1874 → R I1913) dynamic. RI1875 (→ R I1913) = tutti ff.
omitted the accent at 504; it reappears in RI1964 529 Ob, Cl A: no slurs are present, and the accents
but was not extended to 506. are missing on 4th; we supply both in vertical
511–519/1st–2nd Strings A: missing slurs and incongruent conformity with Fl (Ott = Fl).
beaming (which can be largely deduced from 531/1st Cl A: GV marked the part to play in unison
the abbreviated figures for repeated notes). with Ob following a page turn (recto to verso),
The repetition of this passage at 544 – 552/1st– forgetting that a resolution was needed from
2nd is more complete and coherent (though 530; we (like RI1913) supply from the analogous
not entirely so: see Note 544 – 552), allowing 529.
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ment; we modify to sixteenths in conformity but RI1964 reversed the correction and returned
with Vni II and the analogous 529. to g.
531/4th Cb A: anomalous staccato in addition to the 556 Fg A: GV marked a second, superfluous slur
accent; we suppress. for the two notes in this bar; we suppress (see
533/3rd–4th Vle A: slur missing; we supply in vertical also Note 523).
conformity with Vni II, and by analogy with 556 Vle A: tie missing; we supply by analogy with
Fg I at 535. the corresponding 523.
535/4th Ob II, Cl, Fg I A: carets missing; for Cl I, we 558/1st Cb (Vc = Cb) A: e ; our adjustment to c (which
supply in vertical conformity with Fl and Ott; matches the corresponding 525) is supported
for Ob II and Cl II, by analogy with Vni II at by I-Mr, where the correction (in purple ink)
533; for Fg I, by analogy with Vle at 533. from e to c was probably made by GV. RI1875
•540/3rd Fg III–IV A: isolated accent (with no convinc- follows A; RI1913 has c as in this edition, but
ing musical justification), unconfirmed for Vc RI1964 reversed the correction and returned to e.
or Cb; we suppress. RI1913 did likewise, but it •559/3rd– 4th Vni I, Vle A: ; we consider this rhythmic
reappears in RI1964, where it was extended to notation to be an oversight in both parts and
Vc and Cb. correct to  by analogy with Vni I at 526, not
540/3rd–541 Ott A: isolated slur from e’’ to the  at 541; to mention the same melodic profile found at
we suppress. 560 (Cl I, Fg I, Fg III) and 561 (Ott, Fl, Ob I, Cl
541/1st Cor I–II A: isolated accent; we suppress. II, Fg I, Cor I). I-Mr and RI1875 follow A; RI1913
542/1st Strings A: f only for Vni I; we extend for verti- corrected Vni I (to match 526) but not Vle.
cal conformity to the other strings. 561 Ob I–II, Cl II A: slurs missing.
543/1st–2nd Vle A: all four notes are beamed together; 563 Vni II, Vle A: no slurs for either part, and the
we adjust for vertical conformity with Vc. staccati on 4th are missing. We supply the slur
544 – 552 Strings A: despite the presence of incongru- and staccati for Vle in vertical conformity with
ent slurs and beaming in this passage (largely Vc and Cb; however, for Vni II, whose series of
represented by abbreviated notation for the double stops are difficult to play legato, we sug-
repeated notes), we are able to identify GV’s gest instead a short slur with the staccati on 4th.
overall tendency to match both elements with 563/2nd, 564 Cl A: at 563/2nd staccati with the slur,
any given sequence of repeated notes, whether unconfirmed for Fl or Ob; we suppress. At 564,
in groups of two, four, or six notes each. Those the first bar following a change of page (verso
instances of divergence from this principle may to recto), GV forgot to provide the resolution
be summarized as follows: from 563; we integrate in vertical conformity
– 544 Vni I: slurs and beaming = 4 + 4; we with Fl and Ob.
modify to 6 + 2, as at the analogous 547 and 566, 568/1st–2nd Vni I A: at 566 the beaming is 2 + 6 (two
550; eighth notes +  with a cut through the stem);
– 545, 548, 551 Vc: slurs and beaming = 568/1st–2nd = 2 + 2 but with a single slur. We
4 + 4 (also at 512, 515, 518/1st–2nd; see Note adjust the first half of both bars to match the
511–519/1st–2nd). We modify to 2 + 2 + 2 + 2 as in beaming of Vle, with whom Vni I move in
Vni and Vle, which in all probability was GV’s parallel sixths.
later decision while writing out these parts; 567/3rd–568 Fl A: no articulation is present, and the slur
– 548/3rd–4th Vni II, Vle: , each with a cut stops at the end of 567; we adjust in vertical
through the stem and two staccati; we modify conformity with Cl and Fg I.
to the equivalent of the abbreviation at 515 (  568/3rd–4th Vle A: single beam for the four notes; we
with a cut and four staccati). beam as 2 + 2 in keeping with the principle
549 Fg A: empty bar; we (like RI1875 → R I1913) inte- established in Note 544–552.
grate based on the model of 516. 568/4th–569/1st Cor III–IV A: GV marked a tie at the end
549/1st–2nd B soloist A: the conclusion of the slur is of 568, the last bar before a page turn (recto to
missing following a page turn (recto to verso); verso), but there is a  on the downbeat of 569.
we (like rRIms → rRI1874 → R I1913) supply from Unlikely as it seems that he simply forgot to
the model of 516. provide a note for the tie after the page turn
553/3rd–554/2nd Cl, Fg, Vni II, Vle A: slurs missing; we (since there is a rest at that point rather than
supply by analogy with the corresponding pas- nothing at all), continuing the (sounding) b
sage at 520/3rd–521/2nd. at 569/1st would help reinforce the harmonic
554/3rd Vle A: g; we suggest replacing it with b as at dissonance, otherwise sustained solely by the
the corresponding 521/3rd in order to avoid relatively weak Vle in the A–G suspension,
doubling the third of the chord. I-Mr and to better effect. We therefore suggest integrat-
RI1875 follow A; RI1913 has b as in this edition, ing the tied b for Cor III–IV at 569/1st. I-Mr

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(→ R I1875 → R I1913) follows A; pUS-Cso re- 575/3rd–576/1st T and B Coro A: accents missing; we sup-
solved the situation by eliminating the tie. ply from the corresponding 3–4.
569/1st–2nd Cl A: a short pen stroke beneath the two  577–579, 587–589 T II Coro A: for the syllabic setting of
could be read as a slur, which would conform the text, see Note 15 –17, 577–579, 587–589.
to the one GV marked for B soloist; while 585–586 B Coro A: accents missing; we supply in verti-
remaining somewhat doubtful, we supply the cal conformity with T Coro, as at the corre-
slur and suggest its extension to Fl and Fg I. sponding 13–14.
569/3rd–570/2nd Orch A: incompletely marked articula- 593–598 Coro A: accents only at 595 for S and B Coro,
tion, but the strings provide a clear and com- and at 598/4th for B Coro; we supply from the
plete model that we suggest extending to the corresponding 21–26.
winds (at 570/1st–2nd the staccati and accent 599 Coro A: GV marked accents only for S and B
are sufficiently represented for their exten- Coro as he did at 595, omitting however the
sion to the woodwinds without typographical one for S Coro on 4th; we supply the missing
distinction). Also, Vle have an isolated slur in accents on 1st–3rd as at the analogous 27/1st–
addition to the staccati for the beamed eighth 3rd and 595/1st–3rd (those beats where the
notes at 569/3rd– 4th, which we suppress. notes are the same), and we suggest their logi-
571 Cb (Vc = Cb) A: staccati as well as the accents, cal integration for S, C, and T Coro on 4th (see
possibly residual from the skeleton score; we also Note 599 Orch).
suppress. 599 Orch A: various accents are missing. On 1st–
573 –598 Orch A: GV marked this section as the reprise 3rd the accents for Fg, Trbn, Vni, Vc, and Cb
of 1–26 with the instruction “Come dal prin- can be vertically extended to the instruments
cipio del Dies irae per 26 battute”; he provided of their respective families from 23 and 27
the resolution for B soloist at 573 and wrote out (595 = 23, → 599/1st–3rd = 27/1st–3rd). Some
the parts for Coro (all 27 bars) and for Vc and doubt remains, however, regarding 4th (un-
Cb (only at 573 – 576 and 593 – 598). We consider like 27/4th), where GV marked accents only
the written out parts for Vni I, Vc, and Cb, between Fg I–II and III–IV, between Trbn and
which present various differences with respect Of, and for Vc (also B Coro; see Note 599 Coro).
to 1–26, to be performance guidelines and There are no accents whatsoever for Ott, Fl,
markers for the copyists to use in reproducing Ob, and Cl on 3rd– 4th; we supply those on 3rd
the score and extracting the parts; therefore from the corresponding 23 and 27, and we sug-
we have chosen to render them identical to gest their logical integration where missing on
1–26 for this reprise (problems that surface 4th.
within the first full orchestral elaboration are 600, 601 (602 = 601) Winds A: various accents missing on
addressed in Note 1– 61), making note of only 4th, but GV’s intentions are clear; we supply
those differences that help to fill lacunae or without typographical distinction.
resolve ambiguities, thereby allowing us to 600, 601 Strings A: divergent beaming on 1st: at 600/1st
establish a unitary text. They may be summa- Vni I and II and Vle have ¢ ” ™ ; at 601/1st only
rized as follows: Vni II and Vle have this same beaming con-
– 575–576 Cb: accents only at 576/3rd–4th; for figuration. We adopt    as in Vc at 600–602
the integrated accents at 575/3rd and 576/1st see and Vni I at 601–602, in conformity with the
Note 3–4, 13–14, 575–576. At 575–576 there are similar figures at 21–22 and 25–26 (26 = 25;
staccati beneath all eighth notes but the first 593–594, 597–598 = 21–22, 25–26).
octave dyad (also present in N. 7, but only at 600/3rd Vni II A: isolated accent, unconfirmed either
57); given their absence at the corresponding 3 vertically here or in the two successive bars;
and 13, we suppress (see also Note 1–61). we suppress.
– 593 Vc: slur for the sixteenth notes missing. 601/1st Vni I A: isolated accent above the a’–c’’’ dyad,
– 595/1st–3rd Cb: accents missing. unconfirmed either vertically or at 602/1st; we
– 597, 598 Cb: accent on 2nd missing. suppress.
575 – 598 Coro A: GV marked very few accents and •601/4th (602 = 601) Fg I–II A: a–c’; we modify to c’–e!’ as
dynamics (the latter are represented by nothing at 600, where all other parts are identical to 601
more than two f, at 575 for T Coro and at 593 on 4th. I-Mr (→ R I1875) automatically resolved
for B Coro), but there is no reason to imagine the problem by indicating that 601 and 602 =
that this reprise with the same text should not 600 for the winds, Timp, Vc, and Cb, transmit-
be identical to 3 –26. We therefore integrate the ting this reading to RI1913. RI1964 instead adopt-
missing accents and dynamics from that origi- ed a–c’ at 601 and extended it to 602 as well.
nal model, reporting the lacunae in the follow- 601/4th (602 = 601) Timp A: accent missing; we supply
ing Notes. from the identical 600.

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•604 – 605 Orch A: Gr C has a dim. symbol beginning recto), forgetting to provide the resolution from
at 604 that extends to the whole note at 605, 611 as he had done for Vc and Cb; the notes
approximately mid-bar, where GV also wrote and rests were added in pencil, perhaps in
“dim.”. It makes little sense that Gr C should another hand. In I-Mr GV entered the octave
execute a diminuendo at 604 where the other dyad himself in purple ink.
instruments play ff for the entire bar. Another 614/3rd Vni I A: superfluous “dim.”; we suppress.
dim. symbol is present at 605 above Vni I, 620–622 Vc A: GV marked a slur from 620/2nd to 622,
perhaps as a general indication; we suggest its with no tie at 621–622; we modify in conform-
vertical extension and move the dim. symbl for ity with Vle, which also more closely reflects
Gr C from 604 to 605, eliminating the super- the phrasing for Vni I at 621.
fluous “dim”. I-Mr and RI1875 follow A; RI1913 624/4th Vni I A: isolated accent, clearly residual from
extended the dim. symbol for Vni I to the other an earlier idea (GV had originally marked an
strings and to Ott, Fl, Ob, and Cl, but left the accent at 625/2nd as well but then wiped it
dim. symbol for Gr C at 604. away); we suppress. It was already omitted in
604 – 606 Timp A: G; although it was not unusual at I-Mr.
the time to approximate the pitch notation 631 Fg A: the cresc. symbol stops at the end of
for Timp when a given harmonic context was 630 and the dim. begins at the start of 631; we
incompatible with the notes to which it was move the juncture between the two symbols
tuned, in this case there seems to have been no to match Cor III at 631 (for Cor IV see Note
such practical reason because at 607, following 631/3rd– 632/1st).
a page turn (recto to verso), GV wrote B (with •631/3rd– 632/1st Cor IV A: anomalous cresc. symbol,
the ! understood; see Note 607–701); we there- incompatible with the dim. symbol for Cor III
fore anticipate the B! to 604. All of the exam- (as well as the ones GV marked for Cor I, Fg
ined sources follow A (in pUS-Cso the part I, and Ms); we modify for vertical conformity
was changed from G to B!, but this was almost with Cor III. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) follows A
certainly a later correction). (RI1913 eliminated the dim. for Cor III).
•605 Cor I–II and III–IV RI1913:  Â rather than  634–639 Fl, Ob, Cl A: various accents are missing (Ob
(the error originated in RI1875:  for Cor I–II,  has carets at 634 and at 635/2nd), particularly
for Cor III–IV); RI1964 reinstated the , with the from 638, where however there is one very
curious addition of a dim. symbol between the carefully marked for Fl; given the clarity of
two staves for Cor but not for Fg. GV’s intentions, we supply them uniformly for
606 Cb A: superfluous “dim.”; we suppress. these parts without typographical distinction.
607–610/1st Cor III–IV A: slur missing; we supply in ver- 639 – 641/1st Winds A: while it seems GV wanted to mark
tical conformity with Cor I–II. cresc.-dim. symbols only for the winds and not
607–701 Timp A: GV systematically omitted the ! for the strings (even though the strings inevitably
each B. participate in the general crescendo), he sup-
608/4th Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) A: slur for the tri- plied them in a sketchy and incongruent man-
plet missing; we supply in vertical conformity ner. The cresc. symbol for Ob is confined to
with Cb (Vc = Cb). 640 after the f, and Cl does not have one at all.
609–612 Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) A: the dim. symbol We adjust both parts to match the model GV
at 609 is quite short, almost as if it were an ac- marked for Fl. Cor I and Fg have no symbols
cent; we modify to match the one GV marked whatsoever, while Cor III has only a cresc. that
for Cb (Vc = Cb). At 610/3rd–612 the two subse- extends to 641/1st and is consequently incom-
quent dim. symbols are missing; here too we patible with the dim. symbols for Fl, Ob, and
supply in vertical conformity with Cb. Cl. We find it plausible, if arguable, that GV
610 – 612 Ob, Cl, 612 S Coro, Vni I A: the slur for Ob at may have intended the cresc. only for those
611/1st–2nd is nearly illegible but nonetheless parts that double Ms (Fl, Ob, and Cl), who also
certain; we extend vertically to the unison Cl, has a cresc.; therefore, with some reservations,
and suggest for the analogous suspension fig- we have suppressed the cresc. for Cor III, leav-
ures on 1st–2nd at 610 and at 612. Similarly, we ing its eventual execution (and extension to Cor
suggest integrating the missing slurs for S Coro I and Fg) to the discretion of the performer.
and Vni I at 612. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) sim- 641/3rd Fl A: ppp; we prefer the pp GV marked (no
ply ignored all four slurs GV marked for these less than twice) for Ott and confirmed for Fg at
figures (Vni I at 610; Ob, S Coro, and Vni I 642/1st.
at 611). •641/4th–642/2nd S Coro A: GV marked staccati for the
612/1st Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) A: GV left the bar three dyads, subsequently erasing only the
empty following a change of page (verso to second one at 642/1st; we suppress the first

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of them as well but preserve the last one at GV wanted for the ending of the melody the
642/2nd (  dyad), which we consider musically same phrasing as for the two earlier enuncia-
plausible (see Ms). rRIms (→ rRI1874 → R I1913) tions at 625 – 627 and 633 – 635. An analogous
omitted all three staccati. situation occurs at 655 (see Note 654 – 655/2nd).
•644 – 645/1st A: few cresc. symbols are present: for the – 646–647 S and C Coro: at 647 there are two
instruments, above Fl and between Vni I and slur strokes for S Coro, one on 1st–2nd and
II; for the voices, above S soloist and above S another over the remaining two notes (no slur
Coro, probably also intended for Ms and C at 646); we modify in vertical conformity with
Coro. We find no reason to believe that any Ms and extend the missing slur to C Coro.
instrumental parts were meant to be excluded – 649/3rd, 650/3rd T and B soloists, T and B
(as in RI1913, where there is no cresc. for Fg or Coro: the only articulation for the g! at 649 is
Vc) and therefore uniformly supply the missing an accent for B Coro, while at 650 T and B Coro
symbols. have carets for the c!’ (no articulation is present
645 Fg I A: all four of the cresc. symbols that GV for T and B soloists); we adopt and extend the
began at 644 conclude exactly at 645/1st (see model of T and B Coro at 650 for all four parts
Note 644 – 645/1st), but there is one lone cresc. in both bars.
in the first half of 645 above Fg I (with no – 651/3rd–4th S and C Coro: carets missing; we
previous cresc. at 644). It seems unlikely that supply in vertical conformity with Ms.
GV wanted only Fg I to play in crescendo (with 645/3rd– 652 Orch A: missing and incongruent slurs and
three other Fg available to provide adequate articulation. Bass and accompanimental parts
support). We (like RI1913) omit the cresc. symbol aside, the orchestral texture consists of three
but nonetheless leave its eventual execution distinct components: 1) Ott, Fl, Cl, Vni I and II;
(and vertical extension) to the discretion of the 2) Ob, Trb; 3) Fg I and III, Cor III, Vc. We adopt
performer. I-Mr (→ R I1875) follows A. the clearest and most convincing slurs and
645/3rd, 646 Orch A: GV wrote exceedingly few dynamic articulation as models for each of these groups
indications at 645, and none at 646. Trbn, Timp, (rather than proceeding by instrumental fam-
and Gr C are carefully marked ppp, though ily), either extending them to the other unison
presumably for the particular effect their parts without typographical distinction, or in-
sound contributes to the orchestral timbre at tegrating and normalizing indications through
this level. The only other dynamic he marked, reciprocal comparison of the parts.
pp for Vle (which RI1913 chose to ignore), seems 646 Ms A: “cantabile” missing; in accordance with
instead the most appropriate choice for exten- the same principle established in Note 645/3rd–
sion to the other instruments, equidistant as 652 Voices, we supply in vertical conformity
it is between the p for the male voices and the with the unison S Coro (where the indication
ppp for Trbn, Timp, and Gr C. was presumably intended for C Coro as well).
645/3rd– 652 Voices A: incongruent and missing slurs 646 – 651 Ott, Fl, Cl, Vni I and II A: various accents are
and articulation. The texture created by these missing: for Ott, all but those at 650 – 651; for
eight vocal parts consists of three distinct Fl only one, at 651/3rd; for Cl at 651; for Vni I
components: 1) S soloist; 2) Ms, S and C Coro; only one, at 646/3rd (caret at 646/1st); for Vni II
3) T and B soloists, T and B Coro. We adopt at 646 (647ff = Vni I at the lower octave). Given
the clearest and most convincing slurs and that none of these parts has an accent for the
articulation as models for the second and third last eighth note at 651, we (like RI1913) do not
groups, either extending them to the other integrate it.
unison parts without typographical distinction, 646 – 652 Ob, Trb A: missing and divergent slurs and
or integrating and normalizing indications articulation, which can be resolved through
through reciprocal comparison of the parts. reciprocal comparison of the parts (see Note
Principal incongruencies may be summarized 645/3rd– 652 Orch) for all but the following:
as follows (for 652, see the relative individual – 646 – 647: at 647, the first bar following a page
Notes): turn (recto to verso), both slurs seem to begin
– 645/3rd– 647/2nd T and B soloists, T and B anew rather than serve as the continuation and
Coro: at 647, the first bar following a page conclusion from 646; we believe that the appar-
turn (recto to verso), the slur on 1st–2nd in all ent segmentation was not intentional.

– 651 Trb:       ; we find the slur and
parts seems to refer only to the two notes b! f,
rather than to function as the continuation and
conclusion of the previous slur initiated at 645 accents for Ob to be the more plausible choice,
(this is also true for the instruments that dou- given their greater detail and compatibility
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646/4th Fg I A: isolated caret for the last eighth note, reproduce this divergence. We have no way of
unconfirmed for Fg III, Cor III, or Vc; we sup- knowing whether GV approved the correction
press. that was made in I-Mr: if he had inspected
647–652 Gr C A: staccati missing; we extend from the this passage attentively it seems he would
model at 645–646. have adjusted Ms to match S and C Coro (see
649/3rd– 650/2nd Fg I, Cor III A: one continuous slur, the description of I-Mr, p. 4). Furthermore, the
whereas Fg III has the two shorter slurs; at the correction is not entirely convincing because
analogous 650/3rd– 651/2nd, Fg I and III have GV set the original reading of these three parts
the shorter slurs (the second one is missing for with different phrasing and articulation (but
Cor III; see Note 651/1st–2nd). While we cannot see also Note 652 B soloist), which is both per-
exclude the possibility that the configuration at fectly plausible and perhaps more persuasive
650 – 651 was caused by an intervening change from a musical point of view. In the event that
of page (verso to recto) between the two bars, the correction was in fact a legitimate one au-
we modify Fg I and Cor III here to match this thorized by the composer and should therefore
prevailing model (for Vc, see Note 650). be adopted and extended to Ms, it would also
649/3rd, 650/3rd Fg I and III, Cor III, Vc A: the only necessitate adjusting the phrasing and articu-
articulation for the g! at 649 is an accent for lation to match the other vocal parts, given
Vc, while at 650 Fg I has a caret for the c!’ that they all move homorhythmically with the
and Vc an accent (both accents for Vc may be same text, otherwise the difference makes no
considered the equivalent of carets). Given sense. We see no musical justification for these
that T and B Coro also have carets at 650/3rd interventions and therefore prefer to restore
(see Note 645/3rd– 652 Voices: 649/3rd, 650/3rd), “judicandus homo reus” for S and C Coro.
we integrate and normalize the carets for this •652 A: cresc. symbol for S soloist and Ott; we
group of instruments (as established in Note extend to Fl, Cl, and Vni I (Vni II = Vni I at the
645/3rd– 652 Orch) according to the prevailing lower octave), all of whom realize this same
model. part, for vertical conformity. I-Mr (→ R I1875
650 Vc A: slurs missing; we supply in vertical con- → RI1913) has only the cresc. symbol for S solo-
formity with the other members of this instru- ist.
mental group as established in Note 645/3rd– 652 S Coro A: the slur extends beyond the , seem-
652 Orch (see also Note 649/3rd–650/2nd). ingly to 653/1st; we adjust (as established in
650/1st–2nd S soloist A: slur missing. Note 645/3rd–652 Voices) to match the slur for Ms.
650/3rd–4th Trb A: all four eighth notes are beamed    
652 B soloist A:        ; we modify (as es-
together; we separate the first of the group in
vertical conformity with Ob (as established in tablished in Note 645/3rd– 652 Voices) to match
Note 645/3rd–652 Orch). T and B Coro (see also Note 651/3rd– 653/1st).
650/3rd, 651/1st S soloist A: carets missing. 652/1st–2nd T Coro A: accents rather than carets; we
650/3rd–651/2nd Trbn A: staccati missing. modify (as established in Note 645/3rd–652
651/1st–2nd Cor III A: slur missing; we supply in vertical Voices) to match B Coro.
conformity with Fg I and III, as established in 653/3rd–4th S Coro A: slur missing; we supply in vertical
Note 645/3rd–652 Orch (see also Note 649/3rd– conformity with C Coro.
650/2nd). 653/4th Vni I (Vni II = Vni I at the lower octave) A:
651/3rd– 652/2nd Fg I and III, Vc A: Fg I has a slur be- “dol.”; while it could be short for “dolce”, the
neath the first beamed group of eighth notes concomitant “dolcissimo” for S soloist makes
at 651/3rd– 4th, but there are also pen strokes this reading the obvious solution.
above both beamed groups, partially obscured 654 – 655/2nd Ob, Cl, S and C Coro A: at 655, the first
by the dim. symbol; Fg III has a slur for each bar following a page turn (recto to verso), the
beamed group; Vc has a slur beginning only slurs on 1st–2nd for Ob and Cl (there are none
from the second note in the second beamed for S and C Coro) seem to refer only to the
group (652/1st–2nd). We opt for the clear and two notes f’ c’, rather than to function as the
complete model GV marked for Cor III–IV, continuation and conclusion of the previous
modifying Fg I and III to match and suggesting slur initiated at 654. We nevertheless believe
the same slur for vertical conformity for Vc. that GV wanted for the ending of the melody
•651/3rd– 653/1st S and C Coro A: another hand crossed the same phrasing here as for the two earlier
out “judicandus homo reus” for these parts enunciations at 625 – 627 and 633 – 635, and we
and wrote “Huic ergo parce Deus” above S modify and extend accordingly (an analogous
Coro, obviously forgetting to intervene in like situation occurs at 645/3rd– 647/2nd; see under
manner for Ms. All of the examined sources Note 645/3rd– 652 Voices).

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659 Vni II A: empty bar; we integrate the missing 677–679/1st Vc 2nd part A: slur missing; we supply in
material in vertical conformity with the unison vertical conformity with Cb.
C Coro. 679–680 Ms, B soloist A: slur missing for Ms, while B
660/3rd–4th Cl I A: slur missing; we supply in vertical soloist has two slur fragments that are not con-
conformity with Fl. gruent with the slurs for S soloist; nonetheless
661– 663/3rd Orch A: at 661– 662, the last two bars before GV’s intentions are confirmed by the concomi-
a page turn (recto to verso), GV marked gen- tant slurs for Cl and Fg, which parts double Ms
eral cresc. symbols above Vni and beneath Cb, and B respectively.
beneath Cor III–IV, above Fg I–II, beneath Fg 679/1st Ob, Cl A: p missing; we extend vertically from
III–IV, and beneath Vc; at 663 he neglected to Fg.
continue all but the one for Cb, which extends 681 Coro A: dim. symbol only above S, presumably
(over an earlier and presumably superseded intended for all of the choral parts. Also, there
“cresc. sempre” indication) to the f at 663/3rd. are no staccati for C, and they are present only
We similarly extend and otherwise supply the for the first two notes in S and T; we supply
cresc. symbols where appropriate, given that he where missing in vertical conformity with B.
carefully marked f for nearly every instrumen- 681 Orch A: incongruent articulation for the
tal part at 663/3rd. descending eighth-note figure: Cl have both
•662– 663 Fl II A: there is no music for Fl II at 662, but staccati and accents, Vni II only staccati, and
following a page turn (recto to verso) it joins Fl I Vle have no articulation at all; we adjust and
at the lower octave, with the first note tied pre- supply accents in vertical conformity with the
sumably to a nonexistent g!’’ from the previous complete models GV marked for Fg and Vc.
bar. We adopt the solution found in pUS-Cso, In addition, Cl and Fg are marked f, but there
integrating a unison entry with Ott at 662. is no apparent reason that they should exceed
I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) follows A (RI1913 has the mf GV carefully wrote for each choral part.
no tie at the beginning of 663). 681–682/1st Cl A: slur missing; we supply in vertical
662/4th Ott, Cor III–IV, Trb III, Vni I A: accents missing conformity with Fg I–II (from 681/3rd Fg III–IV
for Ott, Cor, and Trb, while Vni I have a caret; = Fg I–II).
we modify the caret and supply accents for the 682 Ott, Fl, Ob, Cl A: dim. symbols missing; we
other parts in vertical conformity with Fl I and supply in vertical conformity with Vni I and II.
Cl I. 682–683/1st Solo Voices A: S soloist has two slurs, both
663 Voices A: “cresc.” above S soloist and above the long one and a shorter slur beneath it for
S Coro, which we interpret as valid for the 682/3rd–4th; T soloist has only the shorter slur;
other vocal parts as well. Ms and B soloist have no slurs whatsoever.
663/4th Ob I A: isolated accent (apart Trbn III, whose Given that the shorter slur does not appear
part is however quite different); we suppress. in any previous enunciation of this melodic
664 Timp A: f (or possibly ff) between the two , phrase, we opt for the longer slur of S and
vertically aligned with the ff for Cb (see Note extend it to the other parts.
664/3rd) but unconfirmed for any other part; 682–683/1st S and C Coro A: perhaps distracted by the
we suppress. page turn (recto to verso) between 681 and 682,
664/1st–2nd Trb III A: isolated slur; we suppress. GV forgot to supply the text for these parts. We
664/3rd Cb A: ff, likely residual from an earlier provi- integrate what seems to be the only possible
sional version and unconfirmed for any other solution, given that (after the obvious “[requi]-
part; we suppress. em” at 682/1st) the four syllables of “do-na e-is”
664/3rd–4th Trb I A: isolated slur; we suppress. would be one too many for the three notes
664/4th Trbn I A: caret for the last note missing; we available. All of the examined sources agree.
supply in vertical conformity with Ob I, Cl II, 
683 Vni II A:      , in which the g is obvi-
Cor III, and Trb I. 
666–668/1st Ms A: slur only for the first two  at 666; we ously anerror. We eliminate the note and adjust
extend in vertical conformity with S soloist. the resulting rhythmic apportionment of the
668/3rd–670/1st Ms, T A: slurs missing; we supply in repeated b! to match the notation for Vni I and
vertical conformity with S. Vle; I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) simply replaced
670/3rd–672/1st S soloist, Ms A: each part has two slurs: the abbreviated g  with b! instead.
the first one at 670/3rd–4th, followed by an- 683/3rd–685/1st, 685/3rd–687/1st B soloist, B Coro A: nei-
other at 671/1st–672/1st; we modify to match ther slur is present for B soloist, while B Coro
the single slur for T soloist, which confirms the has the first slur but only the beginning of the
pattern established at 666–668/1st and 668/3rd– second at 685/3rd–4th, interrupted by a change
670/1st. of page (verso to recto) between 685 and 686.

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Given that both T soloist and T Coro have slurs [2] Trombe in Mi!
at 684–685/1st and 686–687/1st, we complete the [2] Trombe in Mi!
second slur for B Coro and supply both slurs 2 Fagotti
for B soloist without typographical distinction. 2 Fagotti
686–687/1st Cor A: slurs for both pairs missing; we sup- [3] Tromboni
ply to match the identical 684–685/1st. Oficleide
688–691 Ms A: mistakenly notated for alto rather than Timpani
soprano clef. [empty]
689–690 Vni II, Vc A: slurs missing; we supply to match [empty]
the identical 687–688. Soprano
693 Voices A: “calando” only above S soloist, in- Mezzo Soprano
tended for all of the vocal parts. Tenore
695 Vni A: ppp for Vni I, pp for Vni II. We find Basso
ppp the more plausible choice, given that GV Violoncelli
marked both parts pp at 697. I-Mr (→ R I1875 Bassi
→ RI1913) also has ppp for both parts here (but
see Note 697–699).
•697– 699 A: missing and divergent dynamics: T
– 697: p for Trb III–IV, Vle, and Vc; we adopt GV wrote “Offertorio” in the center top margin of p. 3, with
and uniformly extend the prevailing pp for all “Messa da morto” to the left of it and “n.° 3 / G. Verdi /
instruments while maintaining p (and f) as in 1874” to the right.
A for the voices. I-Mr gave ppp to all instru-
ments from Vni I (at the top of the system)
down to Gr C with the exception of Vle (pp), R M
while for the voices, Vc, and Cb it follows the 164–185 A: marked by GV as the reprise of 90–111 (with
dynamic indications in A. RI1875 has ppp for all the bars numbered from 1 to 22) for all but the
instruments but follows A for the voices. RI1913 voices, Vc, and Cb, which GV wrote out in full.
has ppp for all parts but S and C Coro, which
were consequently reduced from f to p. RI1964
returned to the reading of A, although curi- C N
ously substituting ppp for the strings; 2–3 Vc A: the slur extends slightly over the barline
– 698/1st: f only for Vni I and S soloist, presum- between 2 and 3; we adjust to match the model
ably a general indication which would be con- at 6.
cordant with the f for S and C Coro (without a 15 Vc A: p above the stave, ppp below; all second-
cresc.) at 697; we (like RI1913) extend to all parts ary sources report ppp.
but the aforesaid S and C Coro; 25 Vc A: there is a vertical mark above the second
– 699/1st: ppp for Vni I, pp for Fl, Ob, Timp (on note, possibly part of a caret left incomplete for
3rd), Vle, Vc, and Cb; we (like RI1875 → R I1913) lack of ink.
adopt and uniformly extend the prevailing pp. •28 –29 Ms A: GV set “[glo]-riae” as a dipthong beneath
the  at 29, but it is unlikely that he intended
a different disposition of the text from T, who
moves here in parallel thirds with Ms. I-Mr,
N. 3 Offertorio RI1875, and rRI1874 all follow A, while rRIms
S adjusts as in this edition. RI1913 further compli-
A, vol. II, pp. (1–2 rubric) 3 – 52 (52 empty) cates the situation, erroneously anticipating T’s
syllable “[glo]-ri-[ae]” to the  on 28/4th.
28/3rd T A: natural sign missing for the d’, added by
E GV in purple ink in I-Mr.
[I] 32–46 Vni I–II, Vle A: the usual slurs are missing;
Violini
[II] our model for their integration is present at 31
Viole (Vle), but the figures could also possibly be
[2] Flauti slurred in groups of two bars each (or two
Ottavino figures) rather than one. RI1913 supplies them as
[2] Oboè in this edition.
[2] Clarinetti in Si! 33–34 Cl I A: slur missing; we supply in vertical
[2] Corni in Mi!; at 129 in Fa; at 163 in Mi! conformity with the unison Ob I; we also sup-
[2] Corni in La!; at 129 in Do; at 163 in La! ply the missing caret at 33/4th by analogy with

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its prevailing presence elsewhere within this indications here, such that they consequently
melodic figure. continue f (see Ms at 49) against the p marked
35/3rd Ob I, Cl I A: GV marked a slur for Ob II, which for the instruments.
is not present in any of the secondary sources. 54/4th Fg I A: anomalous pp; we adjust for vertical
We accept it and extend it logically to both Ob conformity with the p marked for the other
I and Cl I, supported by the similar phrasing instruments (most notably Vc–Cb, who proceed
for Ob I–II at 39. in unison with Fg I).
35/4th Fg I, Vc A: accent rather than the prevailing 54/4th–58/1st Vc–Cb A: slur missing: we supply in verti-
caret found elsewhere within this melodic cal conformity with the unison Fg I, supported
figure. by RI1875.
37/4th Ob I, Cl I A: accent rather than a caret for Ob I, 56/5th T A: obligatory ! missing for the a.
and no articulation for Cl I. 58/2nd–60/1st Fg I A: one single slur; we adjust to match
38–39 Fg III A: GV neglected to continue the cresc. the vertical model marked for Vc, as well as
symbol from 38, the last bar on a verso, to 39 on the analogous slurs marked for both Fg I and
the next page; we correct the lapsus in con- Vc at 60/2nd–62/1st.
formity with the model at 34–35. I-Mr omit- 58/6th, 60/6th B A: obligatory ! missing for the B.
ted the crescendo altogether, transmitting this 59–60/1st Vni I A: slur missing; we supply in vertical
error to RI1875. conformity with Vle, Vc, and Cb, and to match
39 Cl I A: slur missing; we supply in vertical con- the analogous 61–62/1st.
formity with the unison Ob I. 61 Strings A: GV wrote “ancora più piano” for Vni
39–40 Fg I A: GV marked two slurs, one for each bar, I alone; considering it to be a general dynamic
rather than a single slur as at 35–36; believing indication already supplied for Fg and Vc at 60,
the difference to be unintentional, we adjust we extend it here to Vni II, Vle, and Cb.
39–40 to match, supported by the vertical pres- 61–62 Ms, T, B A: GV left 62 empty following a page
ence of a two-bar slur marked for the unison turn, perhaps because he had been concentrat-
Vc. I-Mr (→ R I1875) dutifully copied A (see also ing on the part for S, who enters here for the
Note 43–44). first time as protagonist of a passage that was
39/4th Vc A: caret missing; we supply in vertical con- itself the focus of considerable attention (see
formity with the unison Fg I. Note 63–67). Our integrations come from I-Mr,
41–42 Vc A: tie missing; we supply in vertical con- where they were added in a hand which is
formity with Vle. neither that of GV nor of the copyist; the other
41/4th Cl I A: caret missing; we supply in vertical secondary sources adopted them as well. At 61
conformity with the unison Ob I. GV wrote the syllable “obs-” for all three vocal
43 Ob II A: slur missing: we supply by analogy parts, presumably reflecting an erroneous divi-
with 39. sion of the word “ob-scurum”. I-Mr (→ R I1875)
43–44 Fg I, Vc A: GV marked two slurs, one for each follows A, while rRIms and all of the printed
bar, rather than a single slur as at 35–36 (Fg) sources correct GV’s oversight.
and 39–40 (Vc), which divergence was probably 62/1st Vni II, Vle A: c’ for Vni II and g for Vle, but
prompted by an intervening page turn between at 61 (on the previous page) GV had written g
43 and 44. I-Mr (→ R I1875) follows A, spawning for Vni II followed by a tie, thereby suggesting
inconsistencies in RI1913. another g at 62/1st, and d for Vle, which would
45–46 Cl I A: slur missing; we supply in vertical con- more logically descend stepwise to c. Our
formity with the unison Ob I. correction is supported by I-Mr, which first
49/4th Ms, Vni I A: caret; we substitute an accent reflected the reading of A but was then erased
in vertical conformity with the other similar and modified.
instrumental parts and with B. 63 2 Vni A: the slur begins just before the
51–52 Fg II, IV A: ties missing, but clearly implied. f’’’; I-Mr and RI1875 follow A, while rRIms
51/5th–6th Fg, Cor III–IV A: staccati missing; we supply in (→ rRI1874) and RI1913 adjust it to match the
vertical conformity with Vle, and Cb (Vc = Cb), repetition at 65.
but also with B. 63/4th–66 Vni I A: slurs missing, and from 64th/1st the
•54 A: GV originally wrote f for the entrances of T staccati are missing as well; we extend both
and Ms but he then erased both dynamics, evi- from the vertical model marked for Vni II.
dently because they had become incompatible •63 – 67 A, I-Mr: the reading of A was modified by
with the p he meticulously marked for nearly GV in I-Mr to become the version found as a
all of the instrumental parts (with the excep- footnote in the score of this edition (see the
tion of pp for Fg I; see Note 54/4th). None of facsimile edition of this page of I-Mr in Rosen,
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– he erased the dim. symbol for S at 65 – 66 and and 74, a slur stretches from the beginning of
extended the cresc. to the end of 66 in purple 74 into the margin beyond 75 (the last bar on
ink; the page); we adjust as a logical sequence of
– he crossed out the cresc./dim. symbols for the consecutive ties.
“Due Vni” at 63 – 64 and 65 – 66, replacing them 73–75 Vle A: slurs and staccati missing (73/4th–6th
with one long general cresc. symbol marked and 75/4th–6th = 73/1st–3rd and 75/1st–3rd; 74 =
above and below the Vni staves in pencil, along 73); we supply in vertical conformity with Vni I
with the instruction “cresc. sempre” at 65 – 66; and II.
– he may possibly have added the various ppp 76 – 80 A: a cresc. symbol marked above the 2 Vni
in pencil for all of the parts at the beginning begins just after the downbeat of 76, while
of 67. the one for Fg III–IV begins at 78; neverthe-
Unlike the passage in N. 2 (“Tuba mirum”, less those marked above the vocal parts begin
127–128), where the correction to I-Mr also precisely at 77, confirmed by Cl. I-Mr does
appears in A (see N. 2, Note 127–129), in this nothing to clarify the situation; in rRIms (and
case GV’s modification of I-Mr was not entered thus rRI1874) the crescendo begins for the voices
into A. This implies a definitive status to the at 77, and for the piano reduction at 78; RI1875
reading in I-Mr, which would consequently (→ R I1913) begins the crescendo at 76.
supersede the version in A. Nonetheless, it 76 – 81 Orch A: slurs are largely present in desultory
is not clear why the reading in I-Mr was not fashion for the beamed eighth notes, but GV
absorbed into the vocal score: rRIms (→ rRI1874) did mark them meticulously for Cl (76 –77/3rd)
follows A, whereas RI1875 and RI1913 follow and 2 Vni (77–78); given the apparent clarity of
I-Mr (RI1964 would return to the reading of A). his intentions, we integrate the missing slurs
Obviously the vocal tradition of the Messa da based upon these models. I-Mr attempted a
requiem was more heavily influenced by the partial integration, though misunderstanding a
vocal scores than the full scores; such a correc- slur for 2 Vni at 77 and consequently proposing
tion, therefore, if considered definitive by the slurs on 5th | 1st (rather than 4th | 6th), which
composer, should have been carried over im- were then transmitted to RI1875 (→ R I1913). rRIms
mediately into the reduction (at least for rRI1875 (and thus rRI1874) proposes the same type of
and successive editions). That this is not in fact phrasing in the piano reduction (right hand)
the case seems to suggest that GV’s interven- and extends it to 79–81 as well.
tion in I-Mr was conditioned by some specific 77/4th–6th, 78/4th–6th Vle A: slurs missing for the
circumstance whose origins we can no longer tremolo figures; we extend from the model of
trace, one that would not necessarily require 76/4th–6th.
an adjustment of all the deriative material and 78/1st–4th 2 Vni A: tie missing, an obvious oversight.
above all of A, which GV almost certainly had 79, 80 Fg I A: both slurs reach to the  (I-Mr follows
with him at the time. In addition, the version A; RI1875 [→ R I1913] also supplies the longer
in I-Mr is in many ways less convincing and slurs at 81 for Fg I and Fg III); we adjust in
expressive than that found in A (the messa di vertical conformity with T and the models
voce concluding in diminuendo on the e!’’ – and provided by Cl II and Ms at 76 and 77.
the new tonality by way of direct modulation 79–81 Fg II A: slur missing; we supply in vertical
– is much more effective than an abrupt ppp conformity with Cb.
immediately after a general crescendo). Given 81 Fg I, III A: slurs missing; we extend from Fg I
these considerations, we prefer to make both (79, 80; but see Note), and in conformity with
versions available in the score, with the read- the prevailing model.
ing of A and that of I-Mr as first and second •82 Vni I RI1875 (→ R I1913): marked “pizz.” from the
choices respectively. first dyad (I-Mr and pRI have no prescription,
67–68 S A: there is a slur in addition to the tie, rem- as in A). At the beginning of 82 GV had indeed
nant of an earlier cancelled version of these erased something but it could quite possibly
two bars. have been a superfluous “arco” indication. In
69–72 Vni I A: missing or imprecisely marked slurs: any case, the addition of “pizz.” is unfounded
in particular, the single six-note slurs found at here and would only compromise the subtle
69 and 71, no slur at 70, and one three-note slur hocket effect between Vni I arco and Vni II
for the first half of 72. We adjust to match the pizz. that GV had previously assayed in the
vertical model GV marked for Vni II. duetto finale of Rigoletto (“Lassù in cielo”,
72 Ob I, Cl I A: cresc. symbols missing; we supply 201–206), as perceptively observed by Rosen,
in vertical conformity with Fl. Critical Commentary, p. 85, Note 82– 85).
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84–85 Fl II A: tie missing, an obvious oversight. melody provides a complete model for the
85 Orch A: GV wrote “dim. sempre” only in phrasing; our proposal is based on a balanced
correspondence with Trb I–II, and “dim.” for comparison of all six examples (see the relative
assorted others that conclude similarly at single Notes for more detail).
86/1st. Clearly the instruction was intended to 97/2nd–102/1st, 102/2nd–107/1st, 107/2nd–111 Orch A:
apply to all of these parts, even though it has divergent phrasing for these three analogous
no practical interpretive impact. We accept passages, due largely to GV’s inevitable impre-
and extend it as a supplementary reminder to cision in marking long slurs where the ink ran
continue the diminuendo. thin too quickly, forcing him to use different
86/1st Fl II A: ; I-Mr, pUS-Cso, and RI1875 (→ R I1913) pen strokes or simply leave the slur incom-
concur with our modification, in vertical plete. As a result it is not possible to identify
conformity with the other instruments that one definitive model for all three passages.
conclude similarly at 86/1st. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913, which resolves only
87 A: “poco allarg.” appears only beneath Fl. the most obvious irregularities) reproduces the
89, 91, 93, 95 Winds A: staccati missing at 89 (Fg) and 93 same inconsistencies present in A. Insofar as a
(Ob, Cl, Fg, Cor III–IV), while the carets are piano reduction may prove helpful for resolv-
present for all parts; our model for the articula- ing orchestral issues, the following interesting
tion is found at 91 (Fg I–II [III–IV = I–II]) and solution is found in rRIms (→ rRI1874):
95 (Fl, Ob, Cl). – for the first passage (97/2nd–102/1st), an ini-
89 – 97 Woodwinds, Cor III–IV A: at 93 – 95/1st Ob II, tial slur (both hands) concludes at 100/1st and
Cl [II], and Cor III–IV have one long slur rather another begins on 2nd, based on GV’s mark-
than two; at 89 – 91/1st Fg [II] (Fg [IV] = Fg [II]) ings in A for Vni I;
has two slurs (as in this edition), followed by – for the second passage (102/2nd–107/1st), there
only one slur at 91 for the last three ; and at is a single long slur in the bass;
95 – 97/1st Fl, Ott, Ob, and Cl have two slurs – for the third passage (107/2nd–111/1st), one
(though this was possibly due to a change of slur concludes at 109/4th and another begins
page midway, from a verso to a recto). We adopt at 110/1st, unlike the reading of A. This same
the two-slur solution throughout, notwith- configuration appears at 171–185).
standing the concurrent single long slur for We prefer to interpret GV’s phrase markings in
the vocal parts; such differences between vocal A in terms of their musical function, proposing
and instrumental phrasing are fairly common slurs derived from clear and incontrovertible
in this repertory. I-Mr and RI1875 (→ R I1913) evidence, and comparing them with the corre-
follow A despite the incongruences; rRIms (and sponding passages at 171/2nd–176/1st, 176/2nd–
therefore rRI1874) opted for the single slur. 181/1st, and 181/2nd–185, where Vc and Cb are
89/2nd–97/1st B, T, Ms A: lacunose and inconsistent written out in full (see Note 164 –185):
phrasing: – at 97/2nd–102/1st, the slur for Vni I is bro-
– 89/2nd–4th, 91/2nd–93/1st B: slurs missing; ken by a page turn between 99 and 100 (99 is
– 93/2nd–95/1st T: slur only for the first three ; the last bar of a recto); the slur for Vni II stops
– 95/2nd–97/1st Ms: slur beginning only from there and does not continue. GV’s intention to
the  at 96. produce one single slur for the entire passage
Given GV’s obvious intentions, we normalize was realized for Vc (and confirmed at the cor-
the slurs for these repeated phrases moving responding 171/2nd–176/1st);
(after the initial statement) in parallel thirds. – at 102/2nd–107/1st, the slurs are again inter-
91/1st B A: GV distractedly wrote f (with a staccato) rupted, this time between a verso (103 is the
following a page turn, rather than resolving last bar on the page) and a recto, but here there
the seventh b! to the third a! (in I-Mr the error is no doubt that a single long slur was intend-
was signaled in pencil, while in RI1875 it re- ed, as can be seen for Fl [I] (notwithstanding
mained uncorrected; for all of the other sources the four different pen strokes), Ob, and Vc (see
the note is a!). also the corresponding 176/2nd–181/1st);
91/2nd–3rd T A: staccati missing; we supply from the – at 107/2nd–111, the slurs are marked in a
prevailing model. more lacunose manner, yet the model is quite
93/4th T A: staccato rather than the prevailing caret. clear: those for Fl, Ott, and Fg I and III, requir-
95/2nd–3rd Ms A: staccati missing; we supply from the ing four pen strokes each and interrupted after
prevailing model. the first one by a page turn (between 107 and
97/2nd–111, 171/2nd–185 S, T A: differences in phrasing 108), conclude at 111/1st (also applicable to Fg II
and articulation (for the accents, see Note 101, and IV). After the first two pen strokes for Ob,
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and Cb have a slur for the first three ; after we supply those for Ob I and Cl I in vertical
the page turn there is nothing more for Cb, thematic conformity with Ott and Fl, while for
while Vc’s slur continues to the beginning of the non-thematic parts our model are Fg, with
109, where GV marked the part in unison with accents on 2nd and 3rd (Cor have accents on
Cb (at the corresponding 181/2nd–185 there 3rd alone). I-Mr (→ R I1875
are no slurs whatsoever for either Vc or Cb). → RI1913) follows A for all but the accent on
We extend the slurs for Vc and Cb from their 2nd for Fg.
unison counterparts, Fg II and IV. 111/2nd–3rd, 185/2nd–3rd Voices: we suggest the accents
99/2nd–4th Vc A, I-Mr, RI1875: there is an additional slur for all voices based on the model GV marked
with no apparent musical justification; we sup- for S at 185 (see Note 101, 106, 111), in vertical
press, supported by RI1913. conformity with the instrumental parts (but
100 –101/1st S A: a slur for all five ; the secondary see also Note 111/2nd–3rd Orch). None of the
sources follow A, but we prefer the phrasing at sources we have consulted does likewise.
the corresponding 174 and 179, which seems a 112 A: isolated accent between the staves for Cor
better match for the text setting. III–IV and Trb I–II; we omit.
101 S, 106 T, 111 S A: only one accent is present, at 112–118 Timp A: GV provided no accidental for the
106/2nd; in the reprise of the passage (164 –185 G. Given the impossibility of calling for a
= 90 –111) there is one accent at 175/3rd (S) chromatic change of pitch during the continu-
and 180/3rd (T), while at 185/2nd–3rd (S) both ous roll, he apparently determined that Timp
accents are present. Given the orchestral should “enter” on a dissonance at 112 that
confirmation of this last example at 101 and would “exit” as a consonance with the change
106, we extend it to all similar passages. The of harmony at 115, thereby underscoring the
nineteenth-century sources generally reflect the “tension – release” dialectic of the cadential
reading of A. RI1875 follows A without change; passage. I-Mr and RI1875 follow A; pUS-Cso
I-Mr also follows A, but with the addition of has a ! at 112 and a  at 115, but both are later
an accent at 101/2nd, as at 106, and the omis- additions.
sion of the accent at 180/3rd. rRIms attempted 114–117 A: GV originally marked dim. symbols at
a partial rectification of the inconsistencies 114–115 above S, above B, and beneath Cb, pos-
and lacunae: like I-Mr, there is an accent at sibly during preparation of the skeleton score;
101/2nd, and in the reprise it again echoes he subsequently erased them, but an isolated
I-Mr, but at 175 the accent is moved to 2nd supplemental “dim.” lingers in A at 115 above
in conformity with 101 (there are no accents S. We suppress, along with “sempre” GV wrote
at 180, also like I-Mr). rRI1874 follows rRIms, before the “dim.” at 117 for S and Cb, evidently
adding only a single accent at 180/2nd. RI1913 referring back to the now-eliminated diminu-
preferred the consistent application of a single endi at 115. rRIms routinely copied both indica-
accent on 3rd in all six bars (therefore ignoring tions (→ rRI1874 extends the “dim.” at 115 to T
the one in A on 185/2nd). as well), while I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) omits
104 T A: one slur for the four , unlike the parallel only the “dim.” at 115.
99, 109, 173, 178, and 183. I-Mr (→ R I1875) has 118 Voices A: pp above S alone, but presumably
one full-bar slur at 109 as well, transmitting valid for the other voices as well.
the error to the subsequent printed editions. 118 Vni, Vle A: GV marked one dim. symbol
106/2nd Cl I-II A: accents missing; we supply in vertical between Vni I and Vni II; we assign it to Vni II
conformity with the other woodwinds, and by (there is no reason to believe it was intended
analogy with Vni II at 101. it for Vni I, given the absence of a diminuendo
108 B A: slurs missing; we supply to match the for any other instrument with a ) and extend
identical 182. it for vertical conformity to Vle.
109/2nd–111/2nd Vle A: staccati missing, an obvious •118 –119 Vni II, Vle I-Mr: at 118 the copyist inexplicably
oversight. wrote f in place of the ppp, and at 119 there is
110 Vni II A: staccati missing, an obvious oversight. a dim. symbol ending in ppp at the beginning
110/1st–2nd T A: Â ; we modify to match 184; all of the of 120. RI1875 did not absorb this misunder-
secondary sources follow A. standing but it was transmitted to RI1913, with
110/2nd–4th Cl I–II A, I-Mr: isolated accents; we sup- the addition of two curious dim. symbols for
press. Vni I (from RI1875) and Vle at 118. The proof
•110/4th S A: the accent is present also in I-Mr, RI1875, sheets for a Ricordi edition of 1955 (Archivio
and rRIms [→ rRI1874], but not RI1913; we extend Storico Ricordi) contain corrections in pencil
it to the identical 184 as well. that restore the reading of A but they were
111/2nd–3rd (185 = 111) Orch A: few accents were marked; entered imprecisely, such that both the 1955

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edition and RI1964 still have a senseless dim. presence altogether, while pUS-Cso assigned
symbol for Vle before the ppp. This issue is the part to Ott. On the other hand, rRIms
not an entirely irrelevant one: in many of the (→ rRI1874) rigorously respected GV’s instruc-
recordings that are currently available, in fact, tion, consequently realizing the reduction at
there is clearly an f at 118/3rd, which, while not written pitch (transposing it an octave higher
in itself an unpleasant effect (nor even lacking would have simplified the notational configu-
a certain appeal), is nonetheless entirely extra- ration). RI1964 assigned the part to Fl. Rosen
neous to the composer’s intentions. rRIms (and suppresses the instruction, postulating that
thus rRI1874) have pp rather than the ppp in A. “V[erdi]’s indication presumably means noth-
120/4th T A: there is faint evidence of a pen stroke sug- ing more than that Fl and Ott are playing
gesting a slur; we integrate it by analogy with as a group”,35 although if such were the case
the model at 130 (B). GV would perhaps have written “coi Flauti”
124 –125 T A: GV neglected to complete the slur from instead. Fl may well seem the preferable choice
123 following a page turn; we integrate the from an orchestrational point of view, thereby
missing portion by analogy with the model rendering the texture more complete and bal-
(transposed) at 134 –135 (B). anced (whereas Ott, while largely doubling Fl
126–127 A: “animando un poco” is present only above T. I, would disturb the thematic design at 132 and
127, 137, 149 A: the cresc.-dim. symbols in these bars 136 [see S and Ms] and occasionally be forced
were not consistently drawn. For the vocal to descend past its most effective register [see
parts the peak of the messa di voce roughly cor- 140, 145]). Even so, there is no additional evi-
responds to the  on 4th in all three bars (see dence in A allowing us to accept “col Flauto”
Notes 127/4th and 149/4th). In the instrumental without reservation: neither a previous “prende
parts it generally occurs on 3rd, but with sig- Fl” instruction, nor a “prende Ott” in the bars
nificant exceptions: 127/4th (Vc), and especially that follow. We therefore leave the informed
149/4th (Vni II, Vle), where GV’s adjustment of performer free to decide which of the two
the dim. symbol for T (see Note 149/4th) con- choices seems the more practical musical solu-
firms his intentions beyond any doubt. tion.
127/4th T A: the cresc. symbol reaches up to the  and 132/3rd–135 B A: there is a gap in the slur at 133/1st. At
the following dim. symbol extends beyond the the analogous 122–125 (T) it continues to the
barline into the right margin of the page (127 is end of 123, although its conclusion is missing
the last bar of a verso). It would appear that GV following a page turn (see Note 124–125). The
then modified the cresc. symbol with heavier concomitant slurs for Cl and Cor also suggest
pen strokes, interrupting it at the  instead. an unbroken solution.
We adjust to match the model he marked at 137 •139/4th–142/2nd T rRIms: the copyist probably inter-
(B) (see also Note 127, 137, 149). preted the faint slur for Ms at 140 as though it
128 Vc A: p; we modify to pp in vertical conformity were intended for T and extended it through
with Vni II and Vle. the entire phrase; neither I-Mr nor RI1875 reflect
131 [Ott] A: dynamic indication missing; we supply this reading, but it was transmitted to all of the
in vertical conformity with Fl. printed editions.
131–132, 135 –136, 139 –140, 142–143 [Ott], Fl A: at 132, fol- 140 S A: the conclusion of the slur is missing
lowing a page turn, GV did not continue the following a page turn, and the one for Ms is
slurs from 131 (where the one for Fl extends barely legible; as a result I-Mr (→ R I1875) ends
well into the right margin of the page); rather, the slurs at 139, while rRIms (→ rRI1874) extends
the two dyads for Fl at 132 and 136 are in- them to 140.
dependently slurred. Nonetheless we may 142–144/2nd Vni II A: no slur for the tremolo.
reasonably hypothesize that, by virtue of their 143 Cb (Vc = Cb) A: slur missing; we supply in
supporting role for S and Ms from 131 to 143, vertical conformity with Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg
[Ott] and Fl should reflect the same phrasing I–II), which reinforce the bass line.
here and elsewhere in this passage. Conse- •144 T rRIms: the slur extends to the end of the bar,
quently at 142–143, where S and Ms have no transmitted to all of the printed editions (it is
slurs, we refrain from suggesting them for [Ott] not present in I-Mr or RI1875).
and Fl. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) has only the 147 Ott, Fl, Ob A: ppp for Fl missing, as is “dolcis-
slurs at 132 and 136 (the phrasing for S and Ms simo” for Ott and Ob, both of which we supply
is lacunose as well); pUS-Cso follows I-Mr. for vertical conformity among these three parts.
•131–148 A: just before the downbeat at 131, GV wrote 148 Vni I A: in GV’s original notation the duration
“col Flauto” for the part notated on the fifth
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of the harmonic is indicated by the touched 154 Vni I A: slurs missing; we supply from the
pitch rather than the stopped pitch, unlike identical 152.
modern usage (see the footnote for 147 in the 154 Vc A: isolated cresc. symbol; we suppress.
score). At 148 he specified a duration of , 155 Cor III–IV A: isolated p in a general pp con-
which we modify to   in vertical conformity text; we suppress, supported by I-Mr (→ R I1875
with [Ott], Fl, and Ob as well as S, Ms, and B. → RI1913).
I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) added the  but with- 156–159 Ms A: text missing; our integration is support-
out halving the rhythmic value of the note. ed by rRIms and RI1875. I-Mr incorrectly set the
149/4th T A: GV modified the dim. symbol, probably syllable “[mor]-te” beneath the first  at 157.
from a longer one originally reaching nearly to 156/1st–2nd Vni II A: slur missing.
the end of 150, drawing a shorter, darker one 156/3rd–157/2nd S A: GV marked the slur with two pen
over it that ends here (and perhaps also adding strokes but their union into one continuous
at this time the pp at 150/1st); in its definitive phrase seems self-evident, as is supported by
form it corresponds to the models roughly the analogous phrase for Vni II. None of the
marked at 127 (T) and more clearly at 137 (B) sources correctly construed the composer’s
(see also Note 127, 137, 149). rRIms (→ rRI1874) intentions.
has the earlier, longer dim. symbol; I-Mr 157 Vc, Cb A: in both parts the slur begins on 2nd;
(→ R I1875 → R I1913) omitted all expressive indi- we adjust for vertical conformity with Fg.
cations; RI1964 did reintegrate them but rather 157/2nd T, B A: the staccati for B beneath the slur are
inconsistently, opting here for the shorter dim. not entirely certain, due to corrections GV
symbol. made while the ink was still fresh; nonethe-
150 Vni II, Vle, Vc A: differing dynamics for these less both I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) and rRIms
parts: p for Vni II and Vle, pp for Vc. I-Mr (→ rRI1874) agree with our interpretation.
(→ R I1875) follows A, while RI1913 modified Vc Analogously, we suggest the same articulation
to p. Given the “sempre pianissimo” GV wrote be extended to T as well.
beneath Cb at 151, we opt for pp (see also Note 159 Fl, Cor I–II A: a second, superfluous “Solo” for
151). these parts; we suppress.
151 Orch A: lacunae in the dynamics: pp for Cor 160 B A: “sottovoce” alone, which was omitted in
III–IV (151/1st) and Fl (151/3rd), and “sempre I-Mr and rRIms (→ rRI1874) but reinstated in
pianissimo” beneath Cb, which could be inter- RI1875; RI1913 has the complete instruction (“sot-
preted as a global indication. I-Mr = A; RI1875 tovoce parlando”).
(→ R I1913) has an additional pp for Ob and Cor 160–161 Voices A: “fac eis” rather than “fac eas” (see
I–II. Confirmation of the general pp is found at also Note 151–154). I-Mr repeats GV’s error;
152 for Ms and B. rRIms and RI1875 correct it.
151 Vni II A: the slur extends to the last note of the 162 T A: staccati and slur missing for the three ;
bar; we adjust to match 153. we supply in vertical conformity with S and
151–154 Voices A: GV systematically wrote “fac eis” Ms.
rather than the correct “fac eas” (see also Note •163 –171/1st Voices A: GV meticulously marked the f for
160–161). each vocal entrance in this reprise, almost as if
151/3rd–152/1st Fl A: missing accent for the  and tie the tone of the text were intended to vindicate
between the two ; we supply both in vertical the previous statement at 89ff; even the carets
conformity with the unison Cl. There is, how- at 163/4th (B), 165/4th (T), 167/4th (accents for T
ever, a slur between the  and  at 151, which and Ms), and 169/4th (S) are carefully notated.
we suppress as isolated without confirmation Consequently his systematic omission of stacca-
either in Cl here or at 153. ti and slurs (with the exception of the one slur
151/4th Vni II A: caret missing; we supply from the at 164 –165/1st [= 90 – 91/1st]) – notwithstand-
identical 153. ing a general tendency to supply articulation
152/2nd–4th Vle A: slur missing; we supply from the and phrasing for reprised passages in a more
identical 154. summary, lacunose, and approximate manner
152/3rd–4th T A: faint evidence of a probable partial slur – actually seems to suggest a different, more
above the f’ and e!’; we supply from the identi- suitable interpretation of this iteration. Indeed,
cal 154. certain notational nuances for the voice become
153/3rd Fl, Cl A: accent missing; we supply from the scarcely plausible in an f dynamic context: such
identical 151 (Cl) and by analogy with the caret as the slurred staccati, which are much more
marked for the unison Vni I. effective when sung more softly (a factor that
153/4th Vle A: caret missing; we supply from the iden- does not influence the instrumental parts; see
tical 151. Note 164 –185). Therefore, although not without

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some reservation, we preserve the reading of one shorter slur, over 172/1st–2nd (also at 98).
A, only extending the slur at 164 –165/1st (B) to In any case, were the fragments two hypotheti-
the analogous 166 –167/1st (T), 168 –169/1st (Ms), cal slurs, they would only apply to the incor-
and 170 –171/1st (S). I-Mr and RI1875 follow A rect setting of the text.
with an occasional omission; RI1913 adopted f 173/3rd–4th S A: staccati and a slur; we suppress to
along with the phrasing and articulation from match the corresponding 99.
89ff; rRIms accepted only the f at 163, other- 175/2nd S, 180/2nd T: for the suggested accents, see
wise straying (rather unusually) from A with Note 101.
a somewhat careless regard for phrasing and 184/4th S: for the suggested accent, see Note 110/4th.
articulation that generated inconsistencies in •185/3rd– 4th S RI1913: in this source (and all successive
rRI1874. editions) the two  were corrected to conform
164 –166 Vc A (→ I-Mr → R I1875 → R I1913): one sin- vertically with the   of Ott, Fl, Ob I, Cl I,
gle slur, rather than one for each pair of  as and Vni I. However, I-Mr (→ R I1875) and rRIms
at 90 – 92 (see also Note 164 –185 below); we (→ rRI1874) maintain the difference, evidently
consider GV’s notation of the Vc and Cb parts deliberately since (unlike A) the instruments
in this reprise of 90 –111 to serve as more of a were copied out in full for the reprise (185=111).
general guide, and therefore extend the model In A the part for S here and in the previous
of 90 – 92 here. bars was written with considerable attention
164 –185 A: using numbers from 1 to 22, GV marked to detail (and no sign of uncertainty or second
this passage as the reprise of 90 –111 with only thoughts; even more, right at the beginning of
the voices, Vc, and Cb written out in full. Here, 186 GV stopped to correct the dynamics for the
however, the f he wrote for each vocal entrance voices; see Note 186). Thus there is no reason to
(see Note 163 –171/1st) implies an adjustment believe that the two  for S were a mistake, but
of the orchestral dynamic as well, which was we cannot know whether GV’s failure to bring
p at 89 (Fg) and unspecified at 163. We there- the orchestral parts into conformity with S was
fore extend the f for the voices to the instru- an oversight. Because the divergence is entirely
ments. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) wrote out the plausible, we preserve it.
orchestral parts at 164 –185 but left the dynamic 186 A: all four voices were originally ff, then me-
imbalance unresolved. Both I-Mr and rRIms ticulously corrected to f. Despite the unequivo-
have mf at 176, by analogy with the mf in A at cal nature of GV’s change in A, I-Mr (→ R I1875
102; we suggest its anticipation to 171 (as at 97). → RI1913) and rRIms (→ rRI1874) curiously main-
At 181/2nd–185/1st the slurs for Vc and Cb tain ff. We accept the differentiation between
(from 182 Vc = Cb) are missing (as might be dynamic levels for the voices and the orchestra,
expected, since the notation of the bass parts bringing the f GV wrote between Trbn and Of
in a reprise serve primarily as a guide and and the fff for Cb into vertical conformity with
are therefore less detailed); at the correspond- the general orchestral ff, and supplying the
ing 107/2nd–111/1st there are partial slurs missing dynamic for Timp.
at 107–108, but in any case they may be ex- 186, 188 Vni, Vle A: inconsistent phrasing and articula-
trapolated from the unison Fg parts (see Note tion; the complete model is found at 187.
97/2nd–102/1st, 102/2nd–107/1st, 107/2nd–111). 191 Cl A: slur missing; we supply in vertical con-
We provide an exact reprise of 107/2nd–111/1st formity with Ott, Fl, and Ob.
for the instruments here, including Vc–Cb. 191, 193 S, Ms A: at 191 S and Ms both have an ad-
165/4th B, 169/4th Ms A: caret missing; we supply from ditional slur above the last two ; at 193 S has
the corresponding 91 and 95. one four-note slur while Ms has one above
167/4th Ms A: accent rather than caret. the last two , apparently to guarantee a cor-
168 B A: slur on 2nd–4th; we modify to match the rect enunciation of the text (that is, the dialefe
corresponsing 94. “[Abra-]hae et”). We accept this latter sug-
172 S A: GV erroneously set the two syllables of gestion, omitting the shorter slurs at 191 but
“olim” on 1st and 3rd while completely ne- replacing the longer slur for S at 193 with two
glecting to set “Abra-[hae]”, even though the shorter ones.
last syllable of the name duly appears on the 193 Fl, Cl A: slurs missing; we supply in vertical
downbeat of 173, following a page turn. What conformity with Ott and Ob, and by analogy
seem to be the outer fragments of an interrupt- with 191.
ed slur over the four  at 172 are probably the •194 Trbn, Of, Timp A: the dynamics that GV wrote
result of a single pen stroke. Indeed, I-Mr ex- between the staves for Trbn and Of (pp) and
tends the beginning of the slur back to 171/2nd; beneath Timp (ppp) may seem dispropor-
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established at 186; but it would be precipitate ing dynamic level. We therefore preserve the
to dismiss them as an egregious error if in fact reading of A without alteration, as do I-Mr and
he wanted the contribution of these instru- pUS-Cso. RI1875 continued the roll, concluding
ments to function in terms of background color it with the same rhythmic disposition as Fg,
and emerge only toward the end of the dim. Trbn, and Of; RI1913 followed RI1875 but ne-
for the other winds. Though perhaps a single glected to add the cuts to the stems of the two
p would have been sufficient, evidently the notes.
desired effect was particularly dear to him. We 206–207 Strings A: GV wrote the full dynamic indica-
therefore preserve his “excess” of notational tion “pp morendo” for Cb alone; Vni I have
prudence in the conviction that it may prove only “morendo”, but his intentions are indis-
useful for modern orchestras as well. Among putably clear. RI1875 = ppp for Vni I; RI1913 = ppp
the secondary sources, pUS-Cso also faithfully for all strings; RI1964 = pp.
follows A; I-Mr (→ R I1875) took the Timp ppp Staccati missing for Cb; we supply in vertical
as the model for Trbn and Of, which possibly conformity with the upper string.
influenced RI1913 to extend ppp to the remain- •208 S I-Mr, rRIms: both sources confused a line
ing winds; RI1964 anticipated the p from 195 GV added beneath “legato e dolcissimo” for a
instead. slur, transmitting this error to the printed edi-
194–195/1st Fl I, Fg II, Trbn II A: ties missing, an obvious tions.
oversight. •210 –211 A: the cresc.-dim. symbols only beneath B
198 A, I-Mr: no tempo indication; rRIms, RI1875, and alone, while the slurs are marked for Ms
all printed sources have “Come prima”. alone. I-Mr, rRIms, and rRI1875 dutifully fol-
200ff Vle A: “sulla 4a corda” is intended to mean “on low A; RI1875 (→ R I1913) extended the dynamic
the fourth string alone”, since only the b! and symbols to all of the voices, including S. rRIms
a! could be played on the third string. also misread the “f” of “fac” as the dynamic f,
200–205 Voices (Ms = S) A: divergent phrasing with transmitting the error to rRI1874 .
slurs sometimes broken into two pen strokes, •219 Strings RI1875 (→ R I1913): ppp for all string
one per bar; nevertheless there are clearly parts. We maintain GV’s pppp for Cb, which
marked two-bar slurs that indisputably con- ensures a dynamic balance with the muted
firm GV’s intentions, further corroborated by (“con sordini”) pp of the other strings, par-
Vni I (Vni II = Vni I), Vle, and Ob (Cl have a ticularly Vc moving homorhythmically at the
broken slur at 200–201). The notational ambi- upper octave.
guity in A generated similar incongruencies 219–221 Cb A: slur missing; we supply in vertical con-
in rRIms (→ rRI1874) and in I-Mr (→ R I1875 formity with Vc.
→ RI1913 with integrations). Of particular note 221–222 Vle A: tie missing, an obvious oversight (al-
in the printed sources is the curious decision to ready corrected in I-Mr).
create one-bar slurs for 200–203 followed by a
single slur for 204–205.
200/4th Ms, T A: carets missing.
204 Winds A: Cl have pp above the stave and N. 4 Sanctus
ppp below, the latter in agreement with the S
strings and voices. This same pp/ppp disparity A, vol. II, pp. (53 – 54 rubric) 55 – 84 (84 empty)
is also found among the lower winds, which
is difficult to justify for parts that are mov-
ing in unison or octaves. It is true that only E
Of can obtain a ppp in that register, while for [I]
Violini
Fg II and IV a ppp on B  1 would be extremely [II]
arduous. Yet Trbn I–III also have pp despite [Viole]
the fact that they could easily play ppp (even 2. Flauti
by reducing their sounding number to I or I–II Ottavino
on the B). I-Mr (→ R I1875) opted for a verti- 1.
2. Oboe
cally uniform ppp; RI1913 did likewise, adding 2.
however an unnecessary dim. symbol. 1.
2 Clarinetti / in Si!
•204 –205 Timp A: these empty bars immediately follow 2.
a page turn. While it is possible that GV simply [2] in Fa
Corni
forgot to continue the roll from the previous [2] in Do
page, it is also highly plausible that its inter- [I–II]
4. Trombe / in Do
ruption was intentional, given the diminish- [III–IV]

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[I–II] function as vocal support. Presumably GV
4. Fagotti
[III–IV] orchestrated this episode rather hurriedly, and
[3] Tromboni the secondary sources are of no assistance
Oficleide in resolving the various incongruences. We
Timpani will therefore begin with a discussion of the
[Soprani] individual obbligato wind parts as a means of
[Contralti] establishing uniform models precisely where
1: Coro
[Tenori] these ambiguities are most evident. Subse-
[Bassi] quently we will address the free string parts,
[Soprani] which largely “migrate” in association with
[Contralti] one or another of the winds.
2.do Coro
[Tenori] – Subject of the fugato: For the most part the
[Bassi] main body of the subject is marked with a
Violoncelli generic slur, with the incipit sometimes in-
Bassi cluded, sometimes not (or partially). While the
corresponding vocal parts provide no clues,
GV did indicate a single slur beginning from
T 17 for Fg I and Cor I, and from the  on 21/2nd
On p. 55 GV wrote “Sanctus” in the top center margin, and for Cor [III] and Vni I. These two statements
“n.° 4 / G. Verdi / 1874” to the right of it. (particularly Fg I and Vni I) offer a reasonably
complete and convincingly musical model,
that can be extended to include the decidedly
C N problematic fourth bar of the subject as well: in
7–8/1st Fl I A: tie missing, an obvious oversight. the majority of statements this bar has a single
8 Voices A: punctuation missing. Each successive slur for all four , apparently influenced by
entrance of “Sanctus…” begins with a capital the obbligato strings (Vni I [12], Vni II [16], Vle
letter, thereby implying a period here (present [20], Vc [24]) but not the concurrent 2 + 2 slurs in
only in RI1913), though it perhaps seems ill the vocal parts. Even though 2 + 2 slurs for the
suited to the suspended nature of the ca- instruments only appear three out of six times,
dence. and always in conjunction with the single
9 –33 Voices A: lacunae and discrepancies in the slur, we find them to be the more cogent and
phrasing and articulation of this fugal episode; detailed solution, further supported by their
our model is a composite derived from the vertical conformity with the vocal parts. For
various enunciations of the subject and two the fifth and last bar of the subject, we uni-
countersubjects. Given GV’s decidedly incon- formly supply the slur from the example GV
sistent and frequently indiscriminate mixture marked at 17 for Cl I, and by analogy with the
of accents and carets (significantly, both rRIms only vocal example, for S Coro I at 13.
[→ rRI1874] and RI1913 chose to apply accents – Countersubject I: GV marked a fairly clear
throughout), we normalize the articulation model for the phrasing at 10 –17 for Ob II, and
for similarly functioning melodic segments, its essential features remain the same there-
adjusting case by case as necessary (see Note after (if anything there are lacunae, some of
12, 16, 20, 24, 28, 32). In the individual critical them significant, such as for Fg II at 18 –25).
notes we will report only the most significant Only the first two bars are a source of some
divergences from our model for phrasing and puzzlement: there is a slur beneath the notes
articulation. of 10, but also a slur over 10 –11. Subsequent
9 –33/1st Orch A: lacunae, divergences, and incongru- instrumental iterations do little to dispel the
ences in the phrasing and articulation (for the confusion: Fg IV has the longer slur at 22–23,
articulation see Note 12, 16, 20, 24, 28, 32 and but at 26 –27 Ob II has only the one shorter slur
Note 21/2nd–22). While the passage that moves for 26, while at 30 –31 Cl II has a slur for each
progressively through Vni I (10 –14), Vni II bar. We have opted for two single-bar slurs in
(14 –18), Vle (18 –22), and Vc (22–26) – the only conformity with S Coro II at 10 –11 and B Coro
instrumental contribution to this fugal episode II at 22–23 (S Coro I at 26 –27, and C Coro I at
that was not directly derived from the vocal 30 –31, with different text [“Pleni sunt”], tend
lines – was carefully notated, leaving no room to support this decision: at 26 –27 there are two
for doubt regarding the composer’s intentions, pen strokes, though perhaps indicating a con-
there is otherwise a general imprecision in the tinuous slur; at 30 –31 there is only the shorter
phrasing for the instruments, which largely slur for 30).

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– Countersubject II: Here again the first exposi- namic levels GV marked in the vocal parts for
tion of this material, for Ob I at 14 –21, is the the subject (mf) and the first countersubject (p,
most complete and consistent model. While the further supported by the aforementioned p he
length of the first slur for the countersubject is wrote at 10 for Ob II).
not clear, GV did carry its conclusion to 21/1st At 26 (Ott and Ob I) and at 30 (Fl and Cl I),
for Cl I, and it ends precisely at 33/1st for Trb where the embellished variant of the first
I. In any case, there is nearly always a slur countersubject moves from the strings to the
in some position over the first three bars of winds, we similarly maintain the original pp
the second countersubject wherever it occurs. (both the register and choice of instruments
Because the accents for the fourth and fifth guarantee that even at that dynamic level it
syncopated bars are amply and clearly marked, will be sufficiently perceptible within the gen-
leaving no room for doubt, we have tacitly eral symphonic-choral context).
supplied them in all enunciations (they are In the following critical notes we will report
completely missing only for Cl I at 21–22 and only the most significant divergences from our
Fg III at 29 –30). Finally, regarding the antipe- model.
nultimate and penultimate bars consisting of 1) 9, 10 S Coro I, S Coro II A: the dynamics GV marked
four , the first of which is tied to the last note at the beginning of the fugato for S Coro I
of the previous bar; and 2) four , the second (mf) and S Coro II (p) do not appear again for
and fourth with carets: only once in four state- subsequent entrances of the subject and first
ments does 1) appear with a slur for the four countersubject. Nevertheless his intentions are
notes (Cl I, 23), which we consequently ignore; clear.
while for 2) we adopt the prevailing single slur 9 –13/1st Ob I A: GV used two pen strokes for the slur:
rather than the 2 + 2 slurs marked only for Vni the first begins at 9/3rd and reaches to the end
II at 24 (against a single slur for Cl I) and Fg III of 10, while the second begins at 11/1st and
at 32 (against a single slur for Vc). ends at 13/1st; we adjust to match the model
– Strings: As noted above, the passage mov- established in Note 9 –33/1st (see the section
ing progressively through Vni I (10 –14), Vni II “Subject of the fugato”).
(14 –18), Vle (18 –22), and Vc (22–26) was very •11 Vni I, 27 Ob I, 31 Fl A: slur for the first two eighth
carefully notated and therefore presents no notes; rRIms (→ rRI1874) omits in all three in-
problems. Otherwise the strings variously as- stances. I-Mr preserves it at 11 and 31 (but not
semble segments of the fugato into a continu- at 27, where Ob I = Ott), RI1875 only at 11. RI1913
ous linear configuration (which also influences has the slur at 11 without the first two staccati
to some degree the choice of dynamics: see be- and extends this solution to the analogous 15
low). Phrasing and articulation for the strings (Vni II), 19 (Vle), and 23 (Vc), but not 27 (Ott,
therefore follow, where logically applicable, the Ob I) or 31 (Fl). Instead RI1964 extends it to 27
models provided by the concurrent wind parts. and 31 as well, transmitting this version to the
– Dynamics: GV sparsely supplied three differ- relative extracted parts. While perhaps worthy
ent dynamics: mf for the subject (only once, at of consideration as a logical alternative read-
9 for S Coro I) and p for the first countersubject ing, it remains extraneous to this edition.
(at 10 for S Coro II and Ob II), plus pp for the 12 S Coro II A: an additional slur over the entire
secondary string figuration (Vle at 18 and Vc at bar, which we suppress.
22). Since the strings function in terms of inter- 12, 16, 20, 24, 28, 32 A: inconsistently marked accents and
connective support – even the repeated pro- carets on 2nd and 4th (see Note 9–33 Voices),
gression through Vni I (10 –14), Vni II (14 –18), differing from our models for the subject (car-
Vle (18 –22), and Vc (22–26) is fundamentally ets), first countersubject (accents), and second
an embellished variant of the first part of countersubject (carets) as follows:
the first countersubject – it makes sense that – 12: accents for S Coro I (subject) and Ob I
they should remain more in the background, (subject) (perhaps originally carets); carets for
as a kind of contrapuntal “safety net”. In the Vni I (first countersubject);
absence of additional evidence, we adopt pp as – 16: accent on 2nd for Cl I (subject) and caret
the base dynamic for the strings, leaving the on 4th for Cl II (first countersubject); carets for
interpreter free to bring out particular seg- Vni II (variant first countersubject);
ments of the ongoing interchange as desired – 20: caret on 4th for T Coro II (first counter-
(especially where the strings have a complete subject) (Vle [variant first countersubject] per-
statement of the subject: Vni I at 21–25, Vni II at haps originally had carets corrected to accents),
25 –29, and Vle at 29 –33). otherwise in conformity with our models,
For the winds, we propose the same two dy- clearly confirmed by Fg I ([subject] carets) and

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Fg II ([first countersubject] accents), both of 22–23 Fg IV A: one single slur; we adjust in conform-
which were notated on the same stave); ity with the model established in Note 9–33/1st
– 24: various lacunae but otherwise in con- (see “Countersubject I”).
formity with our models; 23 Cl I A: isolated slur for the four ; we suppress
– 28: carets for S Coro I (first countersubject); in conformity with the model established in
accents for Vni II (subject) and Vle (second Note 9–33/1st (see “Countersubject II”).
countersubject); 23/4th T Coro I A: b . GV originally wrote a (sound-
– 32: accents for Trb III (subject), Fg III (second ing) B or an E in all corresponding passages
countersubject), and Vle (subject). of the fugato (15/4th, 19/4th, 23/4th, 27/4th, and
13ff Voices MI1874: the exclamation mark after “Sa- 31/4th), subsequently correcting each of the rel-
baoth”, which GV added from time to time in ative vocal and instrumental parts but this one
A, is not present. to a G or C (including the g for Fg I here). The
13 –16 Cl I A: the longer slur begins from 14, follow- oversight was transmitted to I-Mr (→ R I1875
ing a page turn; RI1875 maintain this reading, → RI1913 → RI1964) and rRIms (→ rRI1874).
while I-Mr and RI1913 initiates the slur at 13. •23/4th Vc A: isolated caret; we suppress. In addition,
At 16 there is one slur for the four , which we the slur begins on the downbeat of 24 follow-
modify in conformity with the model estab- ing a page turn; we modify in conformity with
lished in Note 9 –33/1st (see “Subject of the Vni II at 15/4th–16 and the analogous Vni I
fugato”). at 11/4th–12 and Vle at 19/4th–20. RI1913 chose
14 Vni II A: only “staccate”; we modify to match instead to limit these slurs to the four  of 12,
the “leggere and staccate” GV wrote for Vni I 16, 20, and 24; RI1964 follows the reading of A.
at 10. 24 C Coro I A: a single slur for the four  and no
17/1st Ob I A: the slur does not end here but rather carets, reflected in the examined secondary
extends to 18/1st; I-Mr and RI1913 concludes it sources as well; we adjust in conformity with
at 17/2nd. We adjust in conformity with the the analogous S Coro I at 20, T Coro I at 28,
model established in Note 9 –33/1st (see “Coun- and B Coro I at 32.
tersubject II”). 24 Vni II A: two slurs, one for each pair of ; we
17/2nd–18 Vni I A: accents missing; we supply in vertical adjust in conformity with the model estab-
conformity with the unison Ob I (see also Note lished in Note 9–33/1st (see “Countersubject
21/2nd–22). II”).
18 Vle A: “leggere e staccate” is not present; we 24/1st T Coro I A: “et” missing, an obvious oversight.
supply by analogy with GV’s instruction for 24/2nd Fg I, 28/2nd Fg III, Vni I A: accent missing; we
Vni I at 10. supply in conformity with the analogous Ob I
19–20 Cor I A: the slur at 19 extends into 20, while at 16 and Cl I at 20.
the slurs and articulation in 20 are missing; we 25/2nd–26 Vle A: accents missing; we supply in vertical
adjust in vertical conformity with Fg I (see also conformity with the unison Fg I (see also Note
Note 9–33/1st, “Subject of the fugato”). 21/2nd–22).
19/3rd–4th T Coro I A: isolated slur for the two , al- 26–29/1st Fg III A: slur missing; we supply in vertical
ready suppressed in I-Mr and rRIms. conformity with Vni I.
21–25 Cor [III] A: the part has single stems but no 27–28 Trb I A: slur for these bars only; we adjust in
“solo” indication; in pUS-Cso Cor IV does not accordance with the model established in Note
play. 9 –33/1st (see “Subject of the fugato”).
21–24 Fg III, Cor [III] A: divergent and incongruent 28/2nd Fg III, Vni I A: accent missing; we supply by
slurs between the two equivalent parts; we analogy with the similar 20 (Cl I).
modify in conformity with the model estab- 29–31 Trb III A: slur missing; we supply in vertical
lished in Note 9–33/1st (see “Subject of the conformity with Vle, as per the model estab-
fugato”). lished in Note 9–33/1st (see “Subject of the
21/2nd–22 Cl I, Vni II, 29/2nd–30 Fg III, Vc A: accents fugato”).
missing; we supply by analogy with Fg I 31–32/1st Ob II A: slur missing; we supply in accordance
at 25/2nd–26, which in turn follows Ob I at with the model established in Note 9–33/1st
17/2nd–18 (where however the accent on 18/4th (see “Countersubject I”).
is missing). 32 Fg III A: two slurs, one for each pair of ; we
21/3rd–4th Vni I A: isolated staccati for the two ; we adjust in accordance with the model estab-
suppress, as do all of the examined secondary lished in Note 9–33/1st (see “Countersubject
sources. II”).
22 Vc A: only “staccate”; we modify to match the 32/3rd Fg IV A: accent missing; we supply in vertical
“leggere and staccate” GV wrote for Vni I at 10. conformity with Cor III–IV.

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32/4th–33 Orch A: missing and divergent dynamics: at mate manner, generically indicating the legato
32/4th, f for Fg I–II and Vni I; at 33/1st, ff for execution of a phrase. If its actual limits were
Cb and Vni I (written next the f of 32/4th); at to be rigidly respected, one would have to
33/3rd, f for Cor I–II and Of, ff for Timp; and at begin the slur after the first note of 41 ( ) and
33/4th, f for Trb I. RI1913 chose to differentiate conclude it between the two syllables of “ve-
by applying ff to the strings and f to the winds nit” (43); RI1875 (→ R I1913) only partially rectifies
and Timp. We opt for a uniform ff, in balanced this problem by prolonging the slur to 43/3rd.
rapport with the ff for the voices. We prefer to support the natural enunciation of
33/3rd–40 Fg, Cor A: accents missing, with the exception the text by means of one all-inclusive slur up
of Fg III–IV at 33/3rd–4th and 37/3rd–4th; we to the tonic accent on “no-[mine]”, in vertical
supply all others in vertical conformity with conformity with the slur for Ob I.
Trbn and Of. 41–55 Voices, Winds A: few slurs are present, perhaps
33/4th S Coro II A: ff missing, but GV’s intentions are because GV intended the ones he marked at
clear. 41– 44 for S Coro II and Ob I as models for all
34/1st S Coro II A: accent missing; we supply in con- similar passages of this imitative episode (I-Mr
formity with the previous (T Coro II at 33) and and rRIms [→ rRI1874] ignore the suggestion
subsequent analogous statements (e.g., C Coro but RI1875 [→ R I1913] applies them throughout).
II at 35 and T Coro I at 37). Nevertheless the two examples at 41– 44 are
34/3rd–35/1st, 35/3rd–36/1st Ott (Fl II = Ott), Ob II, Cl not entirely in agreement with one another.
II A: slurs missing, but the phrasing for this We propose a coherent model (see Note 41– 44),
polyphonic passage is clear and complete in extending it to C Coro II and Cl II at 45 – 48 and
the concurrent exchange between Vni I and II. using it as a template for all similar phrases
35 Ott (Fl II = Ott), Ob, Cl A: accents missing on while preserving and interpreting the few
2nd (Ott, Ob II, Cl II) and 4th (Ob I, Cl I); we original examples GV marked in A (for exam-
supply in vertical conformity with Vni II on ple, S Coro I at 44 and 45 – 47).
2nd and Vni I (Fl I = Vni I) on 4th. 45–46 S Coro II A: tie missing, an obvious oversight.
35/4th–36/1st Ob I, Cl I A: tie missing; we supply in ver- 45–48 C Coro II A: slur missing; we supply to match
tical conformity with Vni I (Fl I = Vni I). our previous solution for S Coro II (see Note
36, 40 Trb II–IV A: accents missing; we supply in 41–44).
vertical conformity with Trbn and Of. 45 – 48 Cl II A: the slur only includes the three ;
37/1st Fl I–II A: only c’’’; but given that Fl II = Ott we modify to match Ob I at 41– 44 (see Note
from 34/3rd, we suggest resolving the b!’’ from 41–55).
36/4th in like manner, therefore to a’’ instead. 45/1st Cl II, 46/1st Fg I A: accents; we suppress, for rea-
I-Mr follows A, while pUS-Cso and RI1875 sons explained in Note 50 – 54 below.
make the same correction. 46 Fg I A: the slur only begins from the follow-
37/1st Of A: isolated accent; we suppress. ing bar; we modify by analogy with the model
37/3rd– 4th T and B Coro I A: accents missing; we supply established in Note 41–55.
to match T and B Coro II at 33. 47–53 Vni I, Vle A: scattered staccati appear in
37/3rd–39 Orch A: missing slurs and accents; we supply passages marked “pizz.” (which was perhaps
to match 33/3rd–35. added later); we suppress them as incompat-
38–39 Ott, Fl, Ob, Cl, Vni I A: accents missing (also ible. I-Mr (→ R I1875) follows A, but they are
absent in the examined secondary sources); we already absent in RI1913.
supply to match 34–35. 49 – 51/3rd S Coro I A: the slur is marked generically, from
38/4th C Coro I A: ff missing, but GV’s intentions are 49/4th to 51/1st; we modify by analogy with the
clear. model established in Note 41–55.
39/1st C Coro I A: accent missing; we supply to match 49/1st Vni II A: staccati rather than a slur.
C Coro II at 35. 50 – 54 A: a scattered handful of accents seems to be
41 Ob I A: the slur begins only after the  (as it the evidence of a certain indecision, which is
does for S Coro II: see Note 41– 44). clarified immediately after when the head of
41– 44 S Coro II A: the subject is accented in concomitance with
 the new forte dynamic. Only two accents
           
appear in the vocal parts, at 50/1st (C Coro I)
                  
and 53/4th (C Coro II), both of which are not
I-Mr and rRI (→ rRI ) follow A (see also
ms 1874
present in rRIms (→ rRI1874). For the instru-
Note 41–55). This is another of various exam- ments they appear a bit more frequently: at
ples (both vocal and instrumental) where GV 50/1st, 3rd, 4th (Ob II), at 52/1st (Ob I), and at
seems to have traced the slur in an approxi- 54/1st (Fg [III]). I-Mr has only the one at 54/1st

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(and no vocal accents), RI1875 omits the ones at on 3rd and 4th: for Vni I (Ott, Fl, Vni II = Vni I)
50/1st (Ob II), 53/4th (C Coro II), and 54/1st (Fg there is an accent only on 4th in both bars; Ob
[III]). RI1913 omits them altogether, and RI1964 I (Ob II = Ob I) and Cl I (Cl II = Cl I) have both
strangely reports only those at 50/3rd– 4th (Ob accents at 64 but none at 60. I-Mr follows A
II). Though not without some reservation, our but omits the accents at 64 for Ob I. RI1913 have
preference is to suppress these accents, with only the accents on 4th (for Ott, Fl, Ob, Cl, Vni
the understanding that they can be reinstated I–II) at 60 and 64, omitting those on 3rd.
and properly extended by the performer if so 60, 64 Vle A: 60/1st–2nd is abbreviated as  with a cut
desired. through the stem but only three staccati, and at
57–58 A: divergent dynamics. Clearly GV intended the corresponding point in 64 there are no stac-
to differentiate between the dynamic for Ott, cati at all; we supply all four repeated eighth
Fl, Ob, Cl, and Vni (f) and that for the instru- notes with staccati in both bars. Curiously,
ments carrying the bass line (ff). On the other RI1875 (→ R I1913) has staccati
hand, it seems strange that he would have at 64 but not at 60.
given an f to almost all of the parts, whether 61/3rd–4th Cor I–II A: accents missing; we supply in ver-
vocal or instrumental, that have the thematic tical conformity with the unison Trb III–IV.
incipit (only Cor I–II at 57 and Cor III–IV at 63 Cor III–IV A: accent also on the first , but un-
58 have ff). We see no reason to maintain this confirmed either at 59 or by the similar Trb I–II
distinction, modifying the latter to ff as well. here; we suppress.
RI1913 does likewise. 64 Cb (Vc = Cb) A: staccati for the four ; we
•57–58, 61– 63 Timp pUS-Cso: accents (their absence in replace with accents as at 60 (RI1913 had already
59 seems to have been a lapsus). Apparently made this same correction).
the copyist was misled by the fact that in A (as 64/3rd–4th Vle A: accents missing; we supply to match
in I-Mr and probably also in the master copy their presence at 60.
of parts from wich was copied pUS-Cso) the 65/1st Ott, Fl II, Ob II, Cl II A: accent missing; we
accents for Of are quite close to the notes for supply in vertical conformity with the unison
Timp on the stave immediately beneath. RI1913 Trb III–IV.
interpreted them in the same manner. 65/1st Fl I A:  also reflected in the secondary sources
57/1st–2nd Vni II A: slur missing; we supply in vertical (though transposed an octave higher in
conformity with Vni I. pUS-Cso); we modify to  in vertical conform-
57/3rd–4th Trb III–IV A: accents missing; we supply in ity with Ob I and Cl I.
vertical conformity with the unison Cor I–II, 66 Ob II, Cl II, Trb III–IV A: both accents missing;
and by analogy with 61. we supply in vertical conformity with Ott (Fl II
57/3rd–4th Fg I–II A: accents missing; we supply in verti- = Ott).
cal conformity with the unison Fg III–IV, Trbn, 66 Fg I and III, Trbn I A: accents missing; we sup-
and Of. ply in vertical conformity with the unison Trb
•58, 62 Cor III–IV, Trb I–II; 59, 63 Fg I, Trbn I A: accents I–II.
missing for these bars corresponding to the 67–68 Ob II, Trb III A: tie missing; we supply in verti-
incipit “benedi-[ctus]”. While the instruments cal conformity with Ott (Fl II = Ott) and Cl II.
need not necessarily follow the same articula- 69 –73 Fg A: GV mistakenly wrote three parts on the
tion as the voices (for example, RI1913 has no stave for Fg I–II, while on the one for Fg III–IV
accents in these parts), there are analogous he wrote “unis[ono]” followed by the stand-
accents on 3rd and 4th in A at 57 (Cor I–II) ard oblique slash used to indicate derivative
and 61 (Trb III–IV) (RI1964 also supplies them content. Our solution is supported by pUS-Cso
on every 3rd and 4th here). The accent on 1st and RI1875 (→ R I1913).
(present for C Coro II at 57) is consistent with 70 –71 Vni I A: at 69/3rd– 4th GV wrote  with a cut
the accents present for those instruments that through the stem and four staccati above it, but
carry the bass line. he marked no articulation for the similarly ab-
58–60, 62–64 Fg, Trbn, Of A: assorted missing accents for breviated  with a cut beneath them at 70 –71;
the parts carrying the bass line in these two unlike any of the secondary sources, we sug-
equivalent passages (for those accents rela- gest the addition of staccati at 70 –71.
tive to the thematic elements, see the previous 72/1st Vle A: the stem of the  has no cut, presumably
Note); GV’s intentions can nonetheless be easily an oversight; we supply, supported by RI1875
inferred through direct comparison of the two and RI1913.
passages, allowing us to supply the missing 72/2nd–74 Winds A: various missing or partial slurs; in
accents. particular, the precise model for Fg, Cor, Trb
•60, 64 Ob I, Cl I, Vni I A: accents occasionally missing III–IV, Trbn, and Of (whose phrasing is very

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lacunose) is provided by Cb, where the slur RI1913 and RI1964) have two slurs for the second
extends from 72/2nd (slicing through three passage, reflecting the page break between 88
consecutive accents for the  on 2nd–4th, and 89 in A.
evidently cancelling them in the process) to the 82–83 T Coro II A: GV, apparently in a moment of
d! at 73. We therefore adopt this slur without distraction, marked the tie but then wiped it
typographical distinction as clearly representa- away.
tive of GV’s general intentions. 82–83 Cor I, 83–84 Cor II A: ties missing; we supply
73 Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II), Cb (Vc = Cb) A: both, with reference to the example of T Coro I
dim. symbol for Fg I–II, accent for Cb (RI1875 for Cor I.
follows A); we replace the dim. symbol for Fg 85 Fg I–II A: superfluous p; we suppress.
I–II with an accent in vertical conformity with 87– 93, 103 –109 S Coro I A: the slur for the first of these
Cb (Vc = Cb) and extend to Trbn and Of, sup- two equivalent melodic passages begins only
ported by RI1964. RI1913 ignores both symbols in from 89, the first bar of a recto (a gap between
A. 88 and 89 in the slur for Cl I was caused by
73/3rd– 4th Vle A: at 73 the notation for Vle is analogous this same change of page; see Note 79 – 85,
to that for Vni I at 69, but without the staccati 87– 93). Analogously, at 103 –109 (see also the
at 3rd–4th; no source adds them. relative Note below) the slur for S Coro I
74 C Coro I, C Coro II A: following a page turn begins from 104, this time the first bar on a
GV mistakenly wrote “[benedi]-ctus” (“-tus” verso. When compared to the previous example
for C Coro II), rather than “[Domi]-ni”; the at 79ff, where the slur begins from the first bar
correct syllable is already present in I-Mr and of the passage, it seems clear that GV intended
rRIms. these slurs to begin from the first bar as well.
74/1st Cb (Vc = Cb) A: d!’ following a page turn None of the examined secondary sources sup-
(72/2nd–73 were originally written an octave plies a coherent solution.
higher); I-Mr and RI1875 follows A, but in RI1913 88–91 Cor I–II A: ties missing; we supply by analogy
GV’s oversight was already corrected. with the similar (though not equivalent) 80–84,
•75 Trbn, Of RI1875: empty bar; in RI1913 Ã rather as well as T Coro II here.
than  Â , corrected in RI1964. 89/1st–2nd Vni I A: staccati missing.
75 Of A: isolated accent; we suppress. 91–92 Cor [III] A: accents rather than carets; we
76 B Coro II RI1913: pp; we preserve the p in A modify by analogy with 83–84 (Cor [III] dou-
(idem I-Mr) as reflecting GV’s plausible inten- bles T Coro I at both 83–84 and 91–92, and the
tion that the part for B Coro II part be more carets are also vertically supported by Cl I and
distinctly heard than the other voices. S Coro I).
76 Cor [IV], 77 Ob I A: p missing; we supply in agree- 93–95 S and B Coro II, Ob, Fg A: the slurs begin from
ment with the p for Cor I and Fl I at 75. 94, the first bar following a page turn (recto to
76 Vni II, Vle A: p missing. verso); we begin them at 93 by analogy with
76–79 Cb (Vc = Cb) A: slur missing; we supply in other similar phrases (such as 97–99).
vertical conformity with Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg 96–97 Cor IV A: tie missing; we supply in vertical
I–II). conformity with Cor II, where it is faint but
79 B Coro I A: p (written in the left margin beside unequivocal (even so, all of the examined sec-
this first measure on the page); we modify in ondary sources ignore it but pUS-Cso, which
vertical conformity with the pp for the other however did not extend it to Cor IV).
parts of Coro I. 96/4th Vc A: accent missing; we supply to match its
79 Cl A: GV wrote “es[pressivo]” only above Cl I. presence at 100. RI1913 has neither accent, while
79 – 85, 87– 93 Cl I, II A: differently marked slurs between RI1964 has both.
Cl I and II in these two passages. For Cl I GV 100–101/1st Vc A: the slur extends to the first eighth note
used two pen strokes in each passage, clearly of 101, which has no staccato; we adjust the
meant to be one continuous slur (at 87– 93 the slur to match 96 and supply the missing stac-
interruption occurs over a change of page cato at 101/1st.
between 88 and 89, from a verso to a recto). 103 Coro I A: “espressivo” appears for only S and C.
For Cl II he marked only the first part of each 103 Ott A: the bar was originally empty with the f’’
slur, which however exactly corresponds to added later in pencil, perhaps in another hand.
the length of the first pen stroke for Cl I. We I-Mr misinterpreted the situation by supplying
therefore complete the slurs for Cl II in verti- a à here and even at 104; pUS-Cso and RI1875
cal conformity with Cl I. None of the exam- (→ R I1913) integrated correctly.
ined secondary sources suggests a convincing 103–104 Fg II–IV, Cor III A: ties missing; we supply in
solution: in particular, all of them (including vertical conformity with Cor I–II.

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103 –109 Winds A: lacunose and divergent indications 123 Vle, Vc–Cb A: f missing; we supply in verti-
for the slurs, which GV began only from 104 cal conformity with Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg
following a page turn (recto to verso), or other- I–II), who are notated in full at 1st–2nd, then
wise completely omitted with the exception instructed to proceed “coi Bassi”.
of Ob I, whose slur actually begins at 103 but 123/3rd–126 Cl, Cor, Vni A: GV marked few accents for
disappears thereafter (it should be remembered these instruments (only the first three for Vni I
that 103 was originally an empty bar for Ott; and one for Cor III–IV at 124/1st), probably
see the relative Note). Since his intentions seem meant in this case as shorthand reminders for
sufficiently clear, we uniformly extend and their general distribution by analogy with suf-
otherwise supply all relevant slurs beginning ficiently marked previous passages; we there-
from 103. fore integrate where missing, confirmed by the
Analogous problems arise at 109, the first bar single complete model GV marked for Ob I in
of a recto, where GV neglected to conclude this passage.
those few slurs he had marked on the previ- 127 Voices A: there is some discrepancy in the
ous page (for Ob II and Cl I; the slur for Ott dynamic markings, further complicated by the
concludes properly at 108). Here too, however, fact that GV’s f and ff are not always distin-
there is little doubt that GV intended the guishable from one another. We adopt ff in
slur to reach to the last note of the phrase, as vertical conformity with its nearly unanimous
demonstrated by similar examples at 93 for Cl I presence for Orch (the only exceptions are fff
and S Coro I. for Vni I [Vni II = Vni I at the lower octave] and
104–109 B Coro II A: the text is missing, complicated by f for Fg I–II [Fg III–IV = Fg I–II]).
the presence of a tie between 104 and 105. I-Mr 127 Ott, Cor I–II, Of A: also “staccate”, which we
simply follows A. We adopt the solution found suppress as superfluous.
in rRIms, supported by the examined secondary •127–131 Voices A: at 127–128, the last two bars of a recto,
sources. GV began slurs for all voices but C Coro I and
107–109 T Coro I A: the slur stops abruptly at 107/1st; T Coro II (both however with ties); most of
we extend its conclusion to coincide with the them disappear after the page turn (S and T
end of the phrase at 109. Coro I have the slur at 129–131), notwithstand-
113 Fg, Cor A: pp missing; we supply by analogy ing the unequivocal implication in the way
with Ob I and Cl I at 111. they are drawn that they should continue to
113 Vle, 115 Cb A: “arco” missing but indispensable. the end of the phrase. The printed secondary
113/1st Vni II A: a’; we suggest f’ for proper harmonic sources chose instead to remediate with two
support and by analogy with Vle at 115/1st. All separate sets of slurs, one for 127–128 (ties only
of the examined secondary sources but I-Mr for C Coro I and T Coro II) and the other for
do likewise. 129–131.
•115 –116 A: missing and divergent dynamics. Despite a •127/1st Timp I-Mr: the note (c) is not present, perhaps
prevalence of f, GV distinctly marked ff above because the copyist interpreted its smeared
Vni I (a particularly “authoritative” position condition in A as a cancellation; RI1875 and
at the top of the system), between Ob I and II, pUS-Cso preserve it, but not RI1913. If GV had
and for S Coro I (presumably valid for all of intended to eliminate the note he would prob-
Coro I). We therefore suggest ff for all thematic ably have erased the rests as well, supplying a
elements (with the exception of Cor, where GV Ã for the bar.
meticulously marked an f for both pairs of in- 131/1st Vle A: isolated staccato; we suppress.
struments) and f for the bass line. I-Mr ignored 131/2nd–133 Orch A: many missing accents, particularly
GV’s f for Ott, Fl, and Vni II; RI1875 ignored f for the syncopated figure in 133, but GV’s
for Cor and Cb (Vc = Cb). RI1913 has f for Ott, intentions are unmistakably clear.
Fl, Ob, and Cl against ff for Vni (otherwise in 131/2nd–135 Ott A: from 127/3rd Ott is instructed to
agreement with this edition). proceed “col 1° V[iolino]”, but here it makes
115/1st Vle A: ; we modify to   in vertical conformi- little sense that GV would have intended the
ty with Fg I and Cor I and by analogy with 113/ part to fall in the low register (as confirmed by
1st, supported by rRIms (→ rRI1874) and RI1913. the f’’’ he wrote for Ott at 136/1st). I-Mr follows
116 –119 T Coro I A: missing accents; we supply in con- A; RI1875 (→ R I1913) corrects the reading, but
formity with S Coro I. already pUS-Cso had made the proper adjust-
119/3rd–122 A: accents only for S Coro II (all ), for Fg ment.
and Cor (119/3rd–120), and for Vle and Vc–Cb 134–135 B Coro I A: tie missing, an obvious oversight.
(121–122); notwithstanding the various lacunae, •134–135 Vc, Cb A: GV originally wrote ties for these
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marked large accents at 135 instead. I-Mr er- C N
roneously recuperated the ties along with the 1 A: “Soli” above S soloist and below Ms.
accents. RI1875 has only the accents; RI1913 has •1ff Voices A: divergent slurs, both vertically and
neither. We consider the accents to be both horizontally, for the six enunciations of the
intentional and convincing, and extend them to theme, four of them complete (A-B-A’-C) and
the other bass parts (Fg, Of). two partial (A’-C), for which it is not possible
135 A: GV marked only four large fermatas, for S to identify models that would justify such
Coro I, Cl I, Cor I, and Vni I. rRIms(→ rRI1874) breadth of variation. I-Mr generally reflects
and RI1875 misread the one over S Coro I as a the same incongruencies found in A; rRIms and
slur for 134–136/1st and extended it to T Coro I all of the printed sources normalized the slurs
as well (→ R I1913 has slurs at 135 for the instru- vertically but not horizontally. As is often the
mental parts with two notes, without fermatas; case in A, however, these irregularities seem
RI1964 converted them all to standard fermatas likely to have been influenced by either or both
over the ). I-Mr ignored the large fermata for of the following factors: 1) page breaks (the
S Coro I and interpreted the other three for Cl readings in all of the examined sources betray
I, Cor I, and Vni I as slurs. The correct reading interruptions that reflect this factor to some
is found in pUS-Cso. degree); 2) GV’s habit of marking longer slurs
135–136/1st Fg III A: GV wrote a tie; all the examined with multiple pen strokes, complicated by a
secondary sources omit it. general tendency toward imprecision. While
•136 Ott, Fl A: accents missing; we supply in verti- our solution may be viewed as a debatable
cal conformity with Vni I. I-Mr ignored them, compromise, possibly at the expense of GV’s
while RI1913 extended them vertically to all more nuanced intentions, we find the greater
parts. continuity, consistency, and regularity of the
instrumental slurs at 14 –26 to be a reasonably
convincing model: in a piece like this one,
N. 5 Agnus Dei where the thematic repetitions unfold in a tex-
S ture of harmonic and orchestral variation, the
A, vol. II, pp. (85 – 86 rubric) 87–106 (105 –106 empty) instrumental parts were more likely to have
been written after the vocal parts and therefore
enjoyed a more secure and systematic hand.
E Nonetheless we must qualify this editorial
[I] policy with two further considerations:
Violini
[II] a) For S soloist and Ms, the slurs for the first
Viole three phrases (A-B-A’) are largely compatible
2. Flauti with the ones marked for the instruments. In
Ottavino [but actually Fl III for the entire number] fact, after all instances of page-break interrup-
[2] Oboè tions are excluded, there is only one explicit
[2] Clarinetti in Do divergence, at 46 – 49, where the 4 bars of the
[2] in / Fa first phrase (A) are marked 2 + 2 for both S
Corni
[2] in / Do soloist and Ms (in all other cases at least one
2. of these two solo voices has the same slurs we
Fagotti
2. have adopted in this edition). On the other
[empty] hand, there is a greater prevalence of shorter
Soprano slurs for the Coro (particularly at 14 –23, where
Mezzo Soprano one-bar and two-bar slurs alternate and
[Soprani] overlap without any evident logic), more obvi-
[Contralti] ously divergent with respect to the (thematic)
Coro
[Tenori] instrumental slurs. It cannot automatically be
[Bassi] excluded that these shorter slurs for the Coro
Violoncelli were intended to provide them with more
Bassi opportunity to breathe than would have been
At 46 GV notated Fl I, II, and III on staves 4–6 necessary for the solo voices. However, the
strength of this hypothesis is diminished by
the presence of single slurs for S and C Coro
T at 59 – 62/2nd (they stop prematurely at the end
On p. 87 GV wrote “Agnus Dei” in the top center margin of 61 only because of a change of page [verso to
and “n.° 5 / G. Verdi / 1874” to the right of it. recto] between 61 and 62).

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b) The fourth phrase (C) presents some addi- bars, reflecting a page break in A between 27
tional difficulty, apart the conclusive “cadenza and 28 (change from verso to recto). In rRIms
piana” which is always phrased the same way there is a slur for the two notes of 27 but also
(with the exception of missing slurs for S and one single slur for the four bars, suggesting a
C Coro at 45). None of the six enunciations of revision. RI1875 and RI1913 have a single slur.
this phrase (beginning on 3rd at 11, 24, 37, 43, 29/4th, 36/4th Vle A: caret missing at 29/4th, and both
56, and 62) is complete and/or consistent. We caret and acciaccatura are missing at 36/4th.
adopt the models GV marked for S soloist and The presence of an acciaccatura at 29 would
Ms at 11/3rd–12 (complete but not entirely con- seem to suggest that GV intended to treat
sistent: see the relative Note) and at 56/3rd–57 the Vle part in the same manner as the other
(consistent but not complete: see Note 56/3rd– instruments that elsewhere double the voices
57/2nd), which largely conform with the com- (although in this case Vle do so at the sixth/
plete and consistent slurs for the instrumental third). It should not be overlooked, however,
parts at 24/3rd–25. Specific divergences which that at 30 Vle continue in parallel motion with
proved to be problematic are discussed in the the voices, while at 37 they do not. I-Mr and
following Notes. RI1875 follow A; RI1913 supplied a caret at 29,
1–4 S soloist A: GV almost seems to have intended but not the caret and acciaccatura at 36. rRIms
separate slurs for each of the four words in (→ rRI1874) has both, in both bars.
this phrase (although I-Mr interpreted his 34–37/2nd S soloist A: the four bars are slurred 2 + 2 (see
three pen strokes at 2–4 as one slur), unlike the Note 1ff).
single four-bar slur for Ms. If his desire was in- •37 Cl I A: slur missing; we supply by analogy
deed to mark a slur for each word, however, it with Fl. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) limited the
is not confirmed in the two phrases that follow slur for both Fl and Cl to the three eighth
(see also Note 1ff). rRIms (→ rRI1874) and RI1875 notes.
(→ R I1913) opted for a single four-bar slur. 37/1st Vc A, I-Mr, rRIms (→ rRI1874): obligatory ! miss-
11/3rd–12 Ms A: one single slur, unconfirmed in succes- ing for the b.
sive passages (see Note 1ff, b). 37/3rd–38 S soloist, Ms A: the first slurs for both parts
14 Coro, Cb A: pp for C and T Coro, no dynamic stop at the end of 37, which is the last bar
for B Coro and Cb; we opt for a uniform ppp before a change of page (verso to recto); we
in vertical conformity with S Coro and all of supply their conclusions at 38 by analogy with
the other instruments (the suggested ppp for the prevalent phrasing elsewhere for the solo
Solo Cb is meant to be indicative in terms of voices (see Note 1ff, b). At 38/3rd GV marked
balance and may be adjusted accordingly). the equivalent of a bracket over the triplet “3”
14–26 Coro A: divergent slurs (see Note 1ff). for S soloist, which is the reading found in
18–23 Vni I (Vni II = Vni I; Cl = Vni I from 19) A: two rRIms → rRI1874; RI1913 interpreted it as a slur
simultaneous sets of divergent slurs for the six and extended it to the following note ( ). We
bars: as 3 + 3 (two slurs above the part) and as modify and extend to Ms according to the
2 + 2 + 2 (three slurs beneath the part); Fg I–II model established for this phrase in Note 1ff, b.
(Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) clearly confirm GV’s inten- •39 Ms A: slur missing. I-Mr follows A; rRIms omit-
tions. ted the slur for S soloist and added a curious
24/3rd–25 Coro A: divergent and missing slurs: for S Coro accent for both parts on 1st, which reading
one slur from 24/3rd to the end of the triplet was transmitted to all of the examined printed
at 25/3rd; no slur for C Coro; for T Coro a slur sources.
at 24/3rd–4th and one for each pair of eighth 39 Cl I A: slur missing.
notes at 25/1st and 2nd; for B Coro a slur only 40–41 Ob II A: tie missing, an oversight that was
at 24/3rd–4th. No slurs are present at 25/3rd– already corrected in I-Mr and pUS-Cso.
4th. We adjust to match the models GV marked 40 – 42 B Coro A: GV forgot to write the syllable
for S soloist and Ms at 11/3rd–12 and 56/3rd–57 “do[-na]” beneath the first c at 40.; then, over
(see Note 1ff, b). Slurs for the subsequent choral the page turn (recto to verso) between 41 and
iterations of this phrase at 43 and 62 are almost 42, he apparently forgot to add the tie, an
entirely absent. oversight that also affected all of the analogous
•26 C and T Coro A: pp, which however makes no instrumental parts but Vc (Cor II and IV, Fg II
sense after the pp at 25; we modify to ppp in and IV, Vle, Cb). Although rRIms and all of
vertical conformity with S and B Coro. rRIms the examined printed sources agree with our
(→ rRI1874) = pp for all voices; RI1875 (→ R I1913) solution, I-Mr (→ R I1875) chose instead to set
has no dynamic. “[do]-na” for the  at 41 (despite the tie from
27–30 S soloist, Ms rRI1874: erroneously slurred as 1 + 3 40) and “do-[na]” for the first  at 42; ties were

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later added in purple pencil for Fg II and IV 54/1st Fl II A: the second eighth note is c’’, which
and for Cb between 41 and 42. produces an unfortunate unison with the
•41 Fg III A: accent for the b! missing; we supply similarly descending Fl III. All of the examined
in vertical conformity with Cl II, and suggest sources follow A with the exception of rRIms
extending one to Cor III as well. I-Mr and (→ rRI1874), which corrected it to g’’ as in this
pUS-Cso chose instead to omit the accent for edition, possibly simply by copying the identi-
Cl II (as did RI1913). cal 47.
43/3rd–44/2nd A: no slurs are present for the descend- 56/1st–2nd Fl II A: slur missing.
ing eighth-note figure (for the voices see Note 56/3rd–57/2nd Ms A: slur missing (see Note 1ff, b).
43/3rd–45); it would appear that GV only 58 Fl II and III A: all three slurs missing.
concerned himself with supplying slurs for 59 Orch RI1913: pp for all instruments. I-Mr has
the newer string parts (Vni II, Vc, and Cb), pp for Vni and Vle, no dynamics otherwise;
presuming the thematic elements would be rRIms (→ rRI1874) has pp for the right hand (=
phrased as in previous examples. We therefore Vni) and p for the left hand. We preserve the
adopt the model of 24/3rd–25/2nd, and extend differentiated dynamics between Vni and the
the slurs for the newer string parts to the cor- remainder of the orchestra as a plausible inter-
responding winds. pretation of GV’s intentions.
43/3rd– 45 S and C Coro A: slur only for S Coro at 59 – 63 Orch A: despite the absence or partial presence
44/3rd– 4th; we supply by analogy with 11/3rd– of many slurs and assorted ties, complicated
13 and 56/3rd–57 (S soloist, Ms). See Note 1ff, b. by a change of page between 61 and 62 (verso
44/1st Cor II A: the written e’ (= a), which is not pre- to recto), those few GV did indicate are suffi-
sent in any other part, changes the dominant cient to reconstruct his intentions. With regard
seventh chord into a dubious, but not impossi- to the thematic elements, there are slurs for
ble, ninth chord. We accept it with reservation, the three Fl parts at 59 – 61 (Ob I = Fl II and III
suggesting the eventual substitution of written from 60; Cl I = Ob I) but none at 62/3rd– 63/2nd,
d’ (=g) if so desired. I-Mr, pUS-Cso, RI1875, and probably a deliberate omission corresponding
RI1913 follow A; in pUS-Cso the e’ (= a) was to the concomitant staccato-legato for Vni. Ties
later corrected to a written c’ (= f). Although are missing between 60 and 61 for Ob II (Cl II
of no particular significance, the vocal scores = Ob II), Cor I, and Vle (a’); we supply in verti-
omitted this note. cal conformity with Fg I and Cor IV (GV had
45 Cl I, Cor II A: slurs missing. also marked one for T Coro but then erased
46 Fl A: “dolcissimo” above Fl I, p above Fl II, it, probably while setting the text). There is a
and pp beneath Fl III, but the similar nature clearly marked slur for Cor I at 59 – 60 (sound-
of their ornamental lines does not seem to ing g’–g’–a’), which we extend vertically to Ob
justify this dynamic differentiation. I-Mr and II, Cl II, Fg I, Cor IV, and Vle; and one for Cb
RI1875 follow A (with the addition of p beneath at 61– 63 (for Fg III–IV only at 61), which we
Fl II); the other examined sources normalized extend to all other homorhythmic parts. I-Mr
all three parts to p. We find pp to be the more → RI1875 → RI1913 more or less precisely follow
probable choice, since GV marked p for them A, with no attempt at integration.
at 59. While we also suggest extending “dolcis- 62 Fl A: GV supplied the breath mark between
simo” to Fl II and III, we nonetheless allow for 2nd and 3rd only for Fl I (as he had for S and
the possibility that GV intended it specifically C Coro); we preserve as an all but inevitable
for Fl I as the part that guides the other two solution, given the length of the phrase, and
(RI1913 opted for this solution). extend to Fl II and III. It is not present in I-Mr
46 Fl II A: slur missing, but already integrated in (→ R I1875 → R I1913) and pUS-Cso.
I-Mr and pUS-Cso. 63/3rd Orch A: the differentiated dynamics, p and pp,
53 Fl I A: two slurs for the eighth notes (4 + 4) seem to refer respectively to those parts that
rather than one; we modify to match 46. conclude on this beat and those that continue
53–56/2nd S soloist, Ms I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913), rRI1874: playing in support of the voices (Fl, Ob I, and
53 is slurred independently from the remainder Cl I, although Fl I has p). We adopt this solu-
of the phrase, thanks to a mistaken reading tion, which also explains why GV marked pp
of A where the break between 53 and 54 was for those instruments that enter at 64/2nd.
caused by a change of page (verso to recto). In 64/2nd–3rd Ob II, Cl II, Vni II A: slurs missing.
rRIms both parts have a slur for 53 but also 67 Vni II A: slur missing.
one that covers the entire phrase, suggesting a 71 Orch A: divergent dynamics, p and pp; we opt
subsequent revision (which was not however for pp in conformity with the voices, whose
transmitted to rRI1874). dynamics GV very precisely marked 63/3rd.

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71–73/1st Fg, Cor A: slurs missing (also the ties for Cor order to give Vni I a slightly greater presence
III–IV). within their combined tremolo. We therefore
73 Vni A: “lunga” appears only above Vni I. suggest ppp for Vni I but leave the question of
balance between Vni I and II to the discretion
of the conductor. All of the examined sources
N. 6 [Lux æterna] have pp for both parts.
S 3 Ms A: the first  has what could be interpreted
A, vol. II, pp. (107–108 rubric) 109 –132 as a small caret; it is absent in all of the exam-
ined sources.
•4 – 6 Ms A: the cresc.-dim. symbols are not present;
E we supply them from rRIbozze (see the descrip-
Violini / primi36 tion of this source, p. 4), where their integra-
Violini / secondi tion by the proofreader was undoubtedly an
Viole authorized intervention. The fact that they are
[2] Flauti present in rRIms could mean that they may
Ottavino have been added by comparison (editorial vali-
[2] Oboè dation) with this source (see the description of
[2] Clarinetti in Si! rRIms, pp. 5 – 6), which was probably based on a
[2] in Fa hypothetical complete continuity draft predat-
Corni
[2] in Si! ing A. rRI1874 (→ R I1913) follow rRIms.
[…] 11, 12 Vle, Vc A: pp missing; we extend from 7 (Vni).
Trombe [but with no music in this number] •11–14 Ms A: after marking a cresc. symbol from 11
[…] to 13/3rd, GV originally followed it with a dim.
[I–II] symbol at 14, the first bar following a page
Fagotti
[III–IV] turn (recto to verso). He then rectified this latter
[3] Tromboni symbol by marking cresc.-dim. symbols over it
Oficleide in heavier pen strokes. We interpret the initial
Timpani cresc. at 14 to be the continuation of the one at
[empty] At 43 “Cassa sola scordata” 11–13, as GV had clearly marked for the strings.
[empty] I-Mr (→ R I1875) has only a cresc. symbol at
[empty] 11–12 and nothing at 13–14. rRIms (→ rRI1874)
Mezzo Soprano and RI1913 also interrupted the first cresc. at the
Tenore end of 12, but then adopted cresc.-dim. sym-
Basso bols at 14; RI1964 extended the first cresc. to the
Violoncelli end of 13.
Bassi 16 Fg, Trbn, Of A: no dynamic for Fg I–II, ppp for
Fg III–IV, and pp between the staves for Trbn
and Of; we (like RI1913) uniformly supply pp, as
T at 22.
On p. 109 provided no title, writing only “n.° 6 / G. Verdi” 16–17, 22–23 pf rRIbozze:
in the upper right margin. 
   
 
      

R M
originally

 











70–72 GV marked these bars as the repetition of In the left margin of the second page, beside
67–69, numbering them from 1 to 3 and writing the piano reduction of 15, GV wrote: “mi
out only the voices, Vc, and Cb. piacerebbe di più il Timpano ò Timpani all’8va
sopra ed i Tromboni all’8va sotto… Così…”
(I would like Timp an octave higher and Trbn
C N
an octave lower… Thus…):       
   
•1 Vni A: it cannot be excluded that the dynamics
GV marked for these parts (pp for Vni I, ppp (A facsimile of this page was published in The
for Vni II) are intentionally differentiated in Mary Flagler Cary Music Collection, New York,
1970, plate V).
19 T A: p; we modify to pp in vertical conformity
36 At the beginning of the piece GV wrote “ Violini divisi a o
a o / I secondi come i primi” above Vni I, and “divisi a o a o” with Ms and the established orchestral dynam-
above Vni II. ic.

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19, 20 T A: slur missing at 19, and at 20 it extends the slur to be the far more sensible musical
only to 3rd. interpretation.
25 T A: mf and dim. symbol missing. •51 Fl, Ob, Cl, Ms, Vni I I-Mr: no mf is present for
26 T A: slur only for the triplet; we modify in these parts. RI1913 has only an f for Ms. RI1964
vertical conformity with Ms. restored the reading of A for all but Vni I,
27– 40 A: the few slurs GV marked for T and B are which remained without a dynamic.
generally little more than indicative, while the 52–53 T A: cresc. and dim. symbols missing.
ones for Ms are always reasonably clear and 52/4th Cor II A: isolated accent, unconfirmed for any
precise. We therefore adopt the model of Ms of the parts that move in analogous fashion;
and extend the slurs from this part to T and we (like all of the examined sources) suppress.
B where they proceed homorhythmically and 60 Vni A: p missing; we extend vertically from
with identical text. Vle.
28–29 A: dim. symbol and “dim.” only above Ms, 62 Vni, Vle A: pp missing; we supply in vertical
intended as a general indication. conformity with Vc and Cb.
30 A: p only for Ms. 64 Vni II, Vle A: accents missing.
31/4th Ms A: obligatory ! missing. 65 Strings A: GV marked pp between the staves
38–41 A: cresc.-dim. symbols and “dim.” only above for Vni I and II; pp also appears in red pencil
Ms, intended as general indications. (possibly added by the composer) between
41–42 T rRIbozze: slur, transmitted to rRI1874 and to Vni II and Vle and again between Vc and Cb.
RI1913. This integration by the proofreader Given the clarity of his intentions, we extend
(there is no slur in A) was undoubtedly an au- pp to all of the strings. I-Mr has no dynamic;
thorized intervention. The fact that it is present RI1875 (→ R I1913) has p.
in rRIms could mean that it may have been 67 Cl I A: four slurs, one for each beamed group
added by comparison (editorial validation) of sixteenth notes; we modify in vertical
with this source (see the description of rRIms, conformity with Fl (and by analogy with 100,
pp. 5–6). where both Fl and Cl have two slurs). I-Mr
41/3rd A: there is a dot above the b!’ for Ms, some- (→ R I1875) omitted the slurs for Fl; RI1913 ex-
thing GV used upon occasion to call particu- tended the four slurs from Cl I to Fl.
lar attention to a note; since in this case it is 67– 69 (70 –72 = 67– 69) Vle A: it cannot be excluded that
concurrent with the accent for T, we suggest GV added the “pizz.” at 67 some time after he
extending the accent to Ms and to B as well. had already marked the staccati for this pas-
•43 Gr C A: no dynamic is present; we suggest sage, which would explain their presence as
“forte” in vertical association with Cb (which residual evidence of an earlier idea; this would
was originally marked p, beneath which GV also explain why he forgot to add “arco” at the
wrote and firmly underlined “forte”). RI1913 beginning of 73 (where it was entered in pencil
and pUS-Cso have pp, but there is no reason in another hand). However, given the pos-
that Gr C should adopt the general dynamic sibility that the staccati were meant to have a
rather than Cb’s “forte”, probably more of an specific expressive value, we preserve them (as
expressive than a dynamic indication meant to did all of the examined sources).
bring out this punctuated gesture against the 67–72 Orch A: GV marked 70 –72 as the repetition of
orchestral pp background. 67– 69; he wrote out the vocal parts, Vc and Cb.
44 T A: ppp and slur missing. At 67– 69 the only clearly defined cresc. sym-
•46 Ms, T rRIms: “dolce” for Ms and pp for T were bols are for Fg, B, and Vc, while the others all
both replaced with p. This variant was trans- begin and end at different points. We adopt the
mitted to rRI1874 and to RI1913; RI1964 restored models present for Vni I and II for the begin-
the reading of A. ning of the crescendo (with the exception of
48 T A: slur missing; we supply in vertical con- Ott and Ob, who enter later) but not for its con-
formity with Ms. clusion, given that the symbols for both parts
48–49 Cl A: slur missing; we supply in vertical con- (like Fl and Cor I–II) continue through the first
formity with Ob. half of 69 even though Fg, B, and Vc have dim.
50 Vni II A: isolated f in a general pp context (ex- symbols. Consequently we end the crescendo
plicitly marked here for Cb); we suppress. before the f at the beginning of 69. I-Mr, RI1875,
50–51 Vc A: slur missing; we supply in vertical con- and RI1913 either follow the reading of A or
formity with the unison Cb. contribute further to the confusion; the fact
•51 Ms A: the slur could also be read as a cresc. that none of these sources offers convincing
symbol, which is the reading found in rRIms solutions only underscores the problematic
(→ rRI1874) and RI1913, but we (like I-Mr) find nature of this passage.

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69 B A: the slur stops at 69/1st; we extend it to 3rd 86/3rd–90 A: cresc. and dim. symbols only above Ms and
as at the corresponding 72. beneath B.
69/3rd (72 = 69) Ott, Fl A: ; we modify to  in vertical 91–93 A: “p”, “dim. sempre”, and “morendo” only
conformity with the other similar parts. above Ms.
69/3rd (72 = 69) Cor IV A: accent missing; we supply in 94 Vni II, Vle A: pp missing; we supply in vertical
vertical conformity with Cor I–II. conformity with Vni I.
70 –72 B, Vc A: cresc. and dim. symbols missing; we •100 Orch A: “morendo” is present only above Vni
supply from the corresponding 67– 69. I; we interpret it as a general indication for
73 Vle A: “arco” was added in another hand (see those parts with whole notes. I-Mr (→ R I1875
also Note 67–69). → RI1913) ignored it; RI1964 restored it for
73–74 Ms, B A: although these parts proceed in imita- Vni I.
tion their slurs are divergent, probably due to •101 pf rRIms: slurs for each beamed group of six-
the page turn (recto to verso) between 73 and 74: teenth notes, transmitted to all of the printed
B has a slur for each bar, while Ms has a slur sources (Fl, Cl). There is no reason, however,
for 73/3rd–4th and another for 74/1st–75/1st. that we should hypothesize an oversight on
Even though the slurs for the instruments that GV’s part, given his extremely detailed nota-
double these voices sufficiently clarify GV’s tion in this passage.
intentions, the divergent vocal slurs in A pro- 102/4th Cor A: isolated p between the two staves,
duced incongruencies in rRIms and the printed unconfirmed in any other part. Among the
sources. examined sources, it was adopted only in rRIms
73–74 Vni A: various staccati missing; we integrate → rRI1874 (left hand) and pUS-Cso (for Cor
based on their presence for Vle and Vc. III–IV alone). Finding it unlikely that, after pp
73/2nd–4th Vle I-Mr: marked “coi Violini” rather than at 96 and “morendo” at 100, GV would have
“coi Violoncelli”, as GV instructed in A. The wanted a higher dynamic level for the conclu-
error, in elaborated form, was transmitted to sion of the piece, we prefer to leave the choice
RI1875 (→ R I1913); RI1964 restored the correct of an appropriate “piano” dynamic to the
reading of A. discretion of the interpreter.
75–76 Strings A: “staccate” only for Vni I and II. •102/4th, 103 Orch A: at 102/4th the repeated eighth notes
76–77 Voices A: cresc. symbol only for Ms. are marked staccato for all of the winds but
79, 81 A: divergent and missing dynamics: Ms, T, and Cor III–IV; we extend to Cor III–IV and the
Fg have pp; B has p; also, ppp appears between strings. At 103 the staccati and slur are present
the staves for Vc and Cb in red pencil, possibly only for Cl and Vni I; we (like RI1964) find the
added by GV but apparently inappropriately staccati GV marked at 102 to be sufficient in-
so, given that at 81 he marked pp for Vni I and dication that they should continue for all parts
p for Vle. We (like RI1913) uniformly supply pp. in this bar, and extend the slurs throughout as
79–83 Cl II A: no slur is present; unlike the examined well. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) ignored all of the
sources, we presume that the slur for Cl I was staccati in A and provided slurs only for Vni
intended for Cl II as well. and Vle at 103 (omitted in RI1913).
79–83 Fg II and III–IV, Vc A: slurs missing (apart a
partial slur for Vc at 82); we supply in vertical
conformity with Cor II and Cb.
80 T A: slur missing (there is a faint pen stroke N. 7 Libera me, Domine
between and above the two ). S
81/4th Vle A: caret; we modify to an accent as in the A, vol. II, pp. (133 –134 rubric) 135 –218 (217–218 empty)
similar vertical parts. This edition considers MpR, the version of the Libera me,
81/4th Cor A: accent missing; we supply in vertical Domine for the Messa per Rossini to be conceptually differ-
conformity with Fg II and III–IV, Vc, and Cb. ent from N. 7 for the Messa da requiem. We have therefore
82/3rd–83 Vle A: tie missing; we supply in vertical con- chosen to use it as a source only when, given substantially
formity with the unison Cor II. equivalent passages, it proves helpful in those exceedingly
•84 B A: pp (no dynamic is present for Ms at 85 rare instances where A lacks internal models for resolving
or T at 86). However, given that we modified issues of lacunae or ambiguity. MpR will be often cited in
the p GV marked at 79 for B to pp in verti- the Critical Notes (all bar numbers refer to their location in
cal conformity with Ms and T (it is unlikely A) as a contributive element to discussions regarding the
that he would have wanted B to have a higher various solutions adopted by the secondary sources, or as
dynamic; see Note 79, 81), this pp at 84 is now a means of reconstructing the genesis of an error (“intru-
superfluous; we suppress. RI1913 has pp for B at sions” from MpR).
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E indication (p). The part that doubles S soloist
[I] in MpR, Cor I–II, has mf, but it is substantially
Violini
[II] different from Cor III–IV in A; in addition, there
Viole is no dim. symbol, and S soloist, who sings g’
Due Flauti rather than rising to g’’, has neither the cresc.
Ottavino symbol at 3 nor the f at 4. We suggest mf for
[2] Oboè exclusively musical reasons, given that Cor III–
[2] Clarinetti / in Si! IV should have a dynamic level that is less than
[2] Corni / in Mi! f (in order to support S soloist without covering
[2] Corni / in Do her sound) and more than p (which must be
[2] Trombe / in Do reached only at 5 after the diminuendo).
[2] Trombe / in Do 4 Vni I (Vni II = Vni I), Vle A: only “staccate”.
Due Fagotti 4 Cb (Vc = Cb) A: ppp; we prefer pp in vertical
Due Fagotti conformity with the other strings.
[3] Tromboni; from 207 “Tromboni 1o / 2do ” 4–5 Trbn II A: tie missing.
Oficleide; from 207 “3o Trombone / Oficleide” 7– 9 Coro A: GV very carefully marked a model for
Timpani S Coro of the slurs and staccati he wanted for
Cassa sola (at 45–105 Grancassa; see Note 55) this a cappella passage. Even so, a correction he
[empty] made to 7 is somewhat problematic to inter-
[empty] pret, due to the difficulty in reconstructing
[empty] the succession of interventions involved. In all
Soprano Solo probability GV, copying from MpR, originally
[empty] wrote  corresponding to the syllables
[Soprani] “[æ]-ter-na in”, perhaps intending a synaloepha
[Contralti] for “-na in” as it is in MpR (1). After having
erased and replaced  with  as in this
Coro
[Tenori]
[Bassi] edition (2), it seems he added breath marks
[Violoncelli] for all of the parts between the two syllables
[Contrabbassi] “[æter]-na” and “in [die]” (3), but then uniform-
ly erased them (4) (see also Note 416). It is not
clear when he marked the second slur: given
T that the beginning of it between “[æter]-na”
On p. 135 GV wrote “Libera me, Domine” in the top center and “in” is damaged (but still clearly legible),
margin, and “n.o 7 / G. Verdi” in the top right corner. he probably added it after stage (2), perhaps
then erasing the initial segment along with the
breath marks; or it is possible that he erased
R M the beginning of the slur before adding the
45–105 Orch A: GV’s instruction for this section reads breath marks. However that may be, the short-
“Come da principio del Dies irae per 61 bat- ened slur depends upon the presence of the
tute”, thereby indicating that 45–105 (N. 7 Li- added breath, in which case the elimination
bera me, Domine) = 1–61 (N. 2 Dies irae); only of the breath mark implies recuperating the
Coro, Vc, and Cb are written out. original length of the slur, as we have done.
This solution is both philologically plausible
(it most closely represents the markings in A)
C N and musically convincing, because it “isolates”
2 Ob, Vc A: marked ff, but with no apparent mu- the syllable of the first principal metric accent,
sical justification in a predominantly f dynamic “[æ]-ter[-na]” (the second one is “[tre]-men[-da]”)
context; RI1913 also modified these parts to f, by excluding it from the slurred staccato. I-Mr
while RI1964 = tutti ff. (→ R I1875 and RI1913) ignored both the stac-
•4 Orch RI1913: the subtle dynamic differentiation cati and the slurs (RI1964 restores the staccati,
among Trbn, Timp, and Gr C in A was arbitrar- but one long slur for all of the  at 7); rRIms
ily homogenized to become a uniform pp. (→ rRI1874) has the staccati and slurs, but it
4 Cor I–II A: originally mf (probably an errone- concludes the first slur on “[mor]-te”, begins
ous transcription from MpR) with pp written the second one on “æ[-terna]”.
over it, presumably GV’s definitive correction. 9 Coro A: pppp only above S Coro; “ancora più
4 Cor III–IV Sources: among the examined piano” was written vertically through all four
sources, only pUS-Cso supplies a dynamic staves.

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11 Vc, Cb A: both entrance dynamics are missing; particularly easy dynamic for a soprano to
we supply pp for Cb in vertical conformity achieve in that register, we believe f for the c’’
with Fg III–IV and Timp, and p for Vc from Vni is adequate for the context. rRIms (→ rRI1874)
and Vle. has ff; I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) has no indica-
11 Timp I-Mr: erroneously marked ppp, transmit- tion; RI1964 has f.
ted in turn to RI1875 (→ R I1913). •22, 25 Vni I RI1913, rRI1874 (pf., r.h.): both sources,
13/3rd–14/1st S soloist MpR: while there are no dynamic having chosen to supply slurs mechanically
indications in A, at the corresponding passage between the last sixteenth note of one beamed
MpR has a cresc. symbol ending with fff at group and the first of the next group (see Note
14/1st, which could be quite effective here as 20 –27, 33 –35), integrated “missing” ones be-
well, allowing S soloist to anticipate the logical tween 22/1st and 2nd and between 25/3rd and
conclusion of the orchestral cresc. at 14. We 4th, perhaps supported by analogy with the
nevertheless find ff to be sufficient for S solo- model between 34/1st and 2nd. We find instead
ist at 14/1st. rRIms (→ rRI1874) follows A; RI1875 a compelling musical reason to preserve the
(→ R I1913) has only a cresc. symbol at 14 in difference: whereas at 34 the slur underscores
vertical conformity with the orchestra. the concurrent unison motion with S solo-
14/1st Vle, Vc, Cb A: accent missing on the downbeat ist (g’–c’’), at 22 and 25 this rapport between
for Vle and Vc, and Cb has a staccato. I-Mr Vni I and S soloist does not exist (by way of
has no accents for any of the strings; RI1875 confirmation, in MpR it does not exist even at
(→ R I1913) has only the accents for Vni I and II. 34, and in fact no slur is present in that cor-
14/3rd Cb A: isolated accent on the first eighth note as responding bar).
well. 23/4th–24/1st, 34/4th–35/1st Vni I A: slurs missing; we
15 Fg A: “staccate e p” only above the stave for Fg supply by analogy with the short slurs at 20 –27
I–II. and 33 –35 (see the relative Note), where they
•17–18 Fg I-Mr: 17 is the last bar of a recto, after which similarly underscore shared melodic motion
the copyist neglected to continue both the and phrasing with other instrumental or vocal
cresc. symbol for Fg I and the dim. symbol parts.
for Fg III–IV at 18. The accent for Fg I at 17 25/2nd–3rd Vni I A: slur missing between the two
is also missing. RI1875 similarly truncated the beamed groups of sixteenth notes; we supply
diminuendo for Fg III–IV at the end of 17, but to match 24 and by analogy with 20, 21,
the accent for Fg I is present, along with the and 33.
addition of a separate cresc. symbol at 18/1st– 25/4th–27 Strings A: GV had originally marked shorter
2nd (→ R I1913). With respect to RI1913, RI1964 dim. symbols reaching roughly to the end of
added the accent for Fg I at 17. Curiously, rRIms 26, then extended the one above Vni I (with the
(→ rRI1874) has this same reading, notwith- addition of “dim. dim.”) and the one for Vc,
standing the fact that it generally follows A both of them to the end of 27. His intentions
more closely than I-Mr. are clear.
18/4th Fg III A: obligatory ! for the e is missing. 28/3rd–31/1st (30 = 29) Vni II, Vle A: slurs missing for the
•20 –27, 33 –35 Vni I Sources: in A the slurs between the beamed triplets, but GV marked them clearly at
last note of a beamed group of sixteenth notes 28/1st (Vni II) and 2nd (Vle), obviously intend-
and the first of the next group are not always ed as models for this passage.
present. The examined printed sources, includ- 31/2nd Vni II A: staccati missing; we supply in vertical
ing the more recent editions, treated their conformity with Vle.
absence as an oversight and integrated them 32 Vni, Vle A: partial and missing slurs: the first
uniformly throughout. We believe, however, slur for Vni I begins only from the second six-
that GV marked them with a deliberate musical teenth note, but those for Vni II and Vle begin
design, intending to avoid what would other- on the downbeat; Vni II and Vle have no slur
wise become a mechanical rhythmic effect (as for 3rd–4th.
he was copying from MpR, where there are 32/1st Vc A: slur for all four beamed sixteenth notes;
very few lacunae for these short slurs, he may on 2nd the slur appears to include only the last
have wanted to clarify this particular aspect). three notes. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) ignored
This edition therefore adds them only when both slurs and added a staccato for the first
they are supported by clear and unequivocal note of each group; rRIms (→ rRI1874) has stac-
models (see Note 23/4th–24/1st, 34/4th–35/1st, cati for all eight sixteenth notes, plus a slur for
Note 25/2nd–3rd, and Note 22, 25). each beamed group.
22 S soloist A: possibly ff , although the symbol 33 –34 Fl A: the slur extends to the  at 34. Copying
could also be read as f. Given that ff is not a from MpR, GV decided to suppress the bar

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that would have followed 33 (corresponding for the integration of the accents at 48 and
to 21), but he marked the slur from the sup- 57–58, see N. 2, Note 3–4, 13–14, 575–576.
pressed bar in MpR rather than replicating the – 57 Cb: staccati beneath the seven beamed
slur at 20 (limited to the three ). We believe eighth notes; while GV did mark them in N. 2
this was an oversight and follow the pattern at 575, they are not present at the correspond-
established in 20 and 21, where both slurs do ing 13. We therefore suppress.
not reach beyond the bar line. – 65 (66 = 65), 69, 70 Vc: slurs and staccati miss-
•34/2nd Vni II, Vle, Vc RI1913: pp was added before ing, also the accent at 70/4th; we supply from
the dim. symbol, theoretically possible only 21, 22, 25, and 26 in N. 2.
because the p after the dim. at 35/4th (Vc) was – 65/2nd (66 = 65), 69/2nd, 70/2nd–4th Cb:
ignored. Neither A nor MpR has an opening accents missing; we supply from 21, 22, 25, and
dynamic for the dim. Indeed, GV (like many 26 in N. 2.
other nineteenth-century composers) would – 73, 75 Vc, Cb: dynamics missing; we supply
frequently mark only the end dynamic for a from 29 and 31 in N. 2.
diminuendo, with the understanding that the – 76, 78, 80 Cb (Vc = Cb): accents on 2nd miss-
opening conform proportionately, obviously at ing; see N. 2, Note 32, 36.
a higher level. We respect this practice, leaving – 80/3rd Cb (Vc = Cb): slur missing; we supply
the level of the opening dynamic (greater than from 36 in N. 2.
p) to the discretion of the performer. – 90/1st (91, 92, 93 = 90) Cb: accent missing; we
35 Vc A: p on 3rd; we move to 4th by analogy supply from 46 in N. 2.
with 27. – 98, 102 Vc, Cb: dynamics missing; we supply
38 Orch A: p only for Fg and Vle; we extend it to from 54 and 58 in N. 2.
the other instruments for vertical conformity. 47–105 Coro A: a substantial portion of the text for
38/1st Vni I A: the accent is nested within the begin- Coro in this reprise of 3 – 61 from N. 2 is dif-
ning of the dim. symbol, such that GV may ferent. The phrasing and articulation at 47–105
have intended to invalidate it with the larger (N. 7) are generally more lacunose than at
sign. I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) has the diminu- 3 – 61 (N. 2), but rarely do they contradict one
endo but not the accent; RI1964 reinstated the another. This makes it possible to use 3 – 61 as
accent, but without extending it to Ob and Cl. the model for 47–105, and occasionally to use
41 Vni II, Vc, Cb A: Vni II = pp; we prefer the ppp 47–105 to integrate and support the phrasing
GV marked for Vle. Also, “morendo” is miss- and articulation in 3 – 61. Only occasionally are
ing for Vc and Cb. the divergences determined by the different
42 Fl [I] A: “col canto”, which we provide it as a text and syllabic scansion; these are obviously
general agogic indication. maintained without intervention in this edi-
42 Fg [I] A: pp; we modify to ppp in vertical con- tion. With regard to the dynamics, we adopt
formity with Cl. those established in 3 – 61: the usual differences
45 –105 Orch A: GV’s instruction for this section reads and lacunae at 47–105 are easily resolved in
“Come da principio del Dies irae per 61 bat- terms of a proper dynamic rapport with the
tute”, thereby indicating that 45 –105 (N. 7 Lib- orchestra.
era me, Domine) = 1– 61 (N. 2 Dies irae); only 47 Coro A: f, only for T Coro.
Coro (with a largely different text), Vc, and Cb 47–48 T, B Coro A: accents missing; we supply from
are written out. There are differences in Vc the corresponding 3–4 in N. 2.
and Cb with respect to the complete notation 55 Gr C A: the reprise at 45 –105 of 1– 61 from N.
of these parts at 1– 61 in N. 2, which may be at- 2 necessarily includes calling for the reintro-
tributed to their principal function as a general duction of this instrument by name, logically
guide for the conductor, for the reproduction of “Gran cassa” as GV specified on the first page
the score, and for the extraction of performance of N. 2. At the beginning of N. 7, however, he
materials. Consequently, this edition presents wrote “Cassa sola”, and in MpR he was still
the instrumental component of 45 –105 as the more precise: “Cassa sola senza Batteria”. There
exact replica of 1– 61 from N. 2, referring the is no reason to presume that the term “Gran
reader to the relative Critical Notes for all mat- Cassa” includes cymbals, nor that his use of
ters pertaining to the orchestral parts, and re- “Cassa” (4, 175, 298, 396) or “Cassa sola” (1,
porting here specific salient differences in the 112) requires anything other than Gr C without
Vc and Cb parts for the purpose of establishing cymbals. We therefore preserve these terms as
a single unitary text. They may be summarized GV wrote them.
as follows: 57–58 B Coro A: accents missing.
– 47–48, 57–58 Cb: only one accent, at 47/3rd; 57, 59 Coro A: entry dynamics missing.

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59 T Coro A: GV originally wrote “[il]-la” on 4th single stationary note. MpR offers a somewhat
but then erased it. The correction is a signifi- equivocal reading: dim. symbol for Fg III–IV at
cant one: see N. 2, Note 15 –17, 577–579, 587–589. 107, cresc. at 108 and 110.
65 –72 Coro A: various accents missing (see the cor- 111 S soloist A: f, unlikely against the ff for Coro;
responding passage at 21–28 in N. 2), particu- we suggest ff as in MpR. rRIms (→ rRI1874)
larly all those for C and B Coro. In addition, omitted the f for S soloist and brought Coro
at 68/4th there is an accent only for S Coro, into vertical conformity with the orchestral f;
and none are present at 72/4th. GV’s intentions RI1875 (→ R I1913) has f for all voices.
nonetheless seem sufficiently clear (supported 111 Timp, Cb A: ff for Cb on 1st and Timp on 2nd,
by the orchestral context) for all but possibly written perhaps during the skeleton-score stage
Coro B at 65/4th, 66/4th, 69/4th, and 70/4th, of composition.
where the absence of accents may be ascribed 111/4th Cor III–IV A: isolated accent.
to the different text. We suggest them but leave 113 Fg, Trbn A: the ppp seems to be a deliberate
the option of their omission to the interpreter. precautionary dynamic reduction, given so
74 T Coro A: at the corresponding 30 in N. 2 there exposed their entry on F; indeed, in MpR GV
is an accent on 1st for T Coro I but no slur; wrote ppp for both pairs of Fg (at 113 and 115)
allowing that these divergences may be related as well. RI1913 has pp.
to the different texts involved, we preserve the •115 S Coro A: pppp; we opt for pp as in C and T
slur here and suggest the accent. Coro. While it might seem tempting to accept
75–86 C, T Coro A: text missing (for T Coro up to 83). and extend S Coro’s pppp here, the evident
84–86 S, C, T Coro A: accents missing; we supply diminuendo effect through the bars that follow
from the corresponding 40–42 in N. 2. makes pp the more logical choice (pp at 115
•85 – 86 Timp RI1875: the copyist inadvertently skipped → ppp at 119 [see the relative Note] → “ancora
these two bars following a page turn (it was più piano” at 121, 123). At 115 MpR has ppp
correctly copied in I-Mr). The error was trans- for all three parts; RI1875 (→ R I1913) idem; rRIms
mitted to RI1913; RI1964 restored the missing (→ rRI1874) follows A; I-Mr extended instead
notation. the pppp for S Coro to C and T.
88, 89 A: both agogic indications are from the corre- 117/3rd–118 Vc A: slur, incongruous with the tremolo; all
sponding 44 and 45 in N. 2. of the examined sources suppressed it as well.
90–97 Coro A: lacunose phrasing; in particular, slurs 117/3rd–124 B Coro, Fg III–IV, Trbn A: partial and miss-
missing for S and T at 90–91 (S Coro has a ing slurs. The first one (117/3rd–121) disappears
shorter slur, at 91) and for T Coro at 96–97. At at 119 following a page turn (recto to verso);
92–93 there are two shorter slurs, one per bar the second one (121/3rd–124) is entirely miss-
(see also N. 2, Note 46–53). ing for B Coro, while those for Fg and Trbn
90–97 C Coro, 91–105 T Coro A: text missing. are suspended without actually reaching the F
90/1st (91, 92, 93 = 90) Cb A: accent missing; we supply at 124. Proof that GV intended the F to be the
from the corresponding 46 in N. 2. conclusion of both phrases (from a previous
98–102 Coro A: dynamic indications missing or incom- G!) is provided by the slur for Cor I at 119 –120
plete; we supply from the corresponding 54–58 (missing at 123 –124); analogous slurs for Fg I–II
in N.2. at 119 –120 and 123 –124 further corroborate this
99 S Coro A: p; we modify to pp as at the corre- hypothesis. I-Mr follows A for the first slur but
sponding 55 in N. 2. adjusts the second one (for Fg and Trbn only;
104–105 C, B Coro A: slurs missing; we supply from the there is no slur for B Coro) as in this edition.
corresponding 60–61 in N. 2. •119 S Coro A: pp; we opt for ppp as in C and T
107, 109 Cor, Trb A: at 107 the dim. symbols (for Cor Coro, in keeping with the diminuendo effect
I–II and Trb III–IV only) seem more like ac- postulated in Note 115 above. None of the
cents; at 109 the sole exemplar (for Cor I–II) is examined sources has a coherent solution:
undoubtedly a dim., but it begins from the first in particular, I-Mr = pppp at 115, pp at 119;
sixteenth note. RI1913 preferred this solution RI1875 (→ R I1913) = ppp at 115, pp at 119; rRIms
and extended it to 107 as well. (→ rRI1874) = pppp S Coro, pp C and T Coro at
108–109 Timp A: cresc.-dim. symbol missing, but its 115, ppp at 119.
presence at 106–107 and the evident vertical •120–121 B Coro A: perhaps distracted by his decision
conformity with Cb are sufficient proof of GV’s to change the notes (an earlier erased version
intentions. RI1913 extended both symbols to Fg is still legible underneath the definitive one),
III–IV at 106–109, though without logical justi- GV forgot to set “[i-]rae” at 120. Faced with
fication: whereas Timp and Cb have a roll and this oversight, the copyist of I-Mr (→ R I1875)
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at 121. RI1913 adjusted this reading by elimi- two slurs (which were likely intended to apply
nating the tie between the two F rather than to the other parts as well). The only slur in
moving the syllable to 120 (the same solution is MpR, for S Coro, begins at 160/3rd and reaches
found in rRIms [→ rRI1874]). past the second  in 163 (the last bar of a verso),
123–124/1st Cor I A: slur missing; we supply by analogy a circumstance suggesting the musically plau-
with 119–120. sible (and desirable) idea that it should extend
124, 126 Ob, Cor A: the caret for Cor at 124/3rd coin- to 164/1st so that the last syllable of “perpetua”
cides with the beginning of the dim. symbol, is not separated unnaturally from the rest of
which may have been intended to obscure it the phrase. While it seems that the intent in
(note the caret but no dim. symbol for Ob). I-Mr was to follow A, the copyist did antici-
At 126 the two dim. symbols (particularly the pate the beginning of the slur for S Coro to
one for Ob) could also be read as accents, in 160/3rd, while also understandably confusing
which case they would be functionally analo- the upper line of the cresc. symbol for S soloist
gous to the carets at 128 and 129. I-Mr ignored with a slur. RI1875 followed I-Mr and extended
the carets for Ob and Cor at 124 and read the the slurs to C and T Coro. rRIms (→ rRI1874) and
dim. symbols at 124 (Cor) and 126 (Ob and RI1913 ignored all slurs but the shorter one for
Cor) as accents, although the one at 124 was C Coro at 163/3rd– 4th.
subsequently cancelled in purple pencil; RI1875 •164/2nd– 4th Voices A: staccati only for S soloist and
follows I-Mr, but with a dim. symbol rather slurs missing for all; we supply from MpR.
than the accent at 124. RI1913 omitted the accent I-Mr provided all four  in S soloist with stac-
/ dim. symbol at 124 and replaced the carets at cati but no slur; rRIms (→ rRI1874) and RI1875
128 and 129 with accents; RI1964 uniformly sup- (→ R I1913) extended them to Coro as well.
plied both instruments with accents in all four 165 –166 C, T, B Coro A: slurs missing; we supply them
bars. We prefer to respect GV’s apparent inten- in vertical conformity with S Coro, where GV
tions as closely as possible, thereby rendering probably marked it as a model for the other
124 and 126 in like manner. choral parts (in MpR T Coro has a slur as
127/4th–128 A: “morendo” only beneath Cb; p above well). I-Mr (→ R I1875) suppressed the slur for S
Fg I–II, which we suppress as contextually Coro, but rRIms (→ rRI1874) and RI1913 extended
anomalous (I-Mr = p for Fg and “morendo” for it as in this edition.
Vc and Cb; RI1875 = p “morendo”; RI1913 = ppp 171, 416 Tempo A: at 171, “senza tempo” above Vni
“morendo”). We also eliminate a superfluous I and above S soloist, “senza misura” above
“dim.” beneath Trbn, already present two bars Vle and on the stave for B Coro; at 416, “senza
earlier and implied here in the prescription tempo” between Vni I and II, above S soloist,
“morendo”. and under Cb, “senza misura” on the staves for
131 Cor I A: pp; we modify to ppp (the more logi- Cor. As at 1 and 7, we adopt the more correct
cal dynamic for this context) in vertical con- of the two expressions, “senza misura”.
formity with Ob. 172 Vle A: dynamic missing; we supply f as previ-
141 T Coro A: pp. ously established for Vni at 171.
144 S soloist, S Coro A: superfluous “cresc.”; we 173 Vle A: the ! was inserted in pencil following
suppress. GV’s request in a letter to Ricordi on 2 June
148 S Coro A: superfluous “cresc.”; we suppress. 1874 that it be added as a correction to the first
148 T Coro A: slur and cresc. symbol missing. printing of the vocal score. Among the exam-
•148/4th–149/1st S soloist Sources: none of the examined ined sources, only rRI1874 and I-Mr do not have
sources has the slur corresponding to the in- the !.
struction “portate”. 175 –176 A: missing and divergent dynamics at 175,
153/2nd–4th C and B Coro A: slurs missing; we supply where the only clearly marked ff appear
in vertical conformity with T Coro. beneath Vle (probably also intended for Vni I
158–159 S soloist A: at 159 GV neglected to complete and II) and for Cor III–IV
the slur from 158 (the end of a recto), where it (Fg I–II also may have ff, but against an f for
extends over the bar line into the right margin Fg III–IV). At 176, the lone “sempre f” above
of the page. Cor I–II is extremely pertinent, given its com-
•160 –164/1st A: slurs only for S and B Coro; for S Coro patibility with the dynamic indications for S
the slur begins at 161/3rd, but in MpR it begins soloist. Consequently, between Cor I–II and
at 160/3rd. Evidently when GV copied this a Cor III–IV we are able to obtain the model |
cappella passage from MpR he was more con- ff / dim. symbol | sempre f |, which we extend
cerned with the task of transposition (a semi- without typographical distinction to the other
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stationary G at the unison or octave. The case sions” from MpR directly related to a different
for the other instruments is different. At 175 part for Trb I–II that GV did not carry over into
GV wrote f between the staves for Timp and A. In fact, in MpR Trb I–II always reinforce the
Gr C (both with a roll) and f for Cb (with a conclusion of the subject or response with ac-
tremolo); we therefore accept f for these instru- cents on the  and :

     
ments and extend it to Vc. Finally, for Vni we
extend the initial ff from Vle and the winds
but then suggest that it immediately drop to f
at the onset of the tremolo, in vertical conform- – 184/3rd C Coro: the accent, lightly marked
ity with Vc and Cb (and the percussion). RI1913 or possibly obscured by GV, is absent in all
(like RI1875) has ff for tutti at 175 followed by three subsequent corresponding bars (191,
the dim. symbol for the winds, and “sempre f” S Coro; 198, B Coro; 205, T Coro). Given the
at 176 as a general indication at the top of the extreme care with which GV marked the ar-
system. ticulation for this first statement of the subject
175–176 Cor III–IV A: ties missing. (179 –186/1st; see Note 179 –207/1st above), we
179 C Coro, 186 S Coro A: f missing; we supply in con- should theoretically accept the accent as valid
formity with the f GV marked for T Coro at and extend it to the other three corresponding
200. bars (as in MpR); however, it is more than like-
179 –207/1st Coro A: GV carefully supplied the slurs and ly that when he copied this passage for C Coro
articulation for the subject of this fugal exposi- he had not yet decided to eliminate the relative
tion (C Coro, 179 –186/1st), but the following Trb I–II part from MpR at 184/3rd –186/1st. We
response (S Coro, 186 –193/1st), subject (B Coro, therefore have chosen to suppress this accent,
193 –200/1st), and response (T Coro, 200 –207/1st) supported by RI1875 (→ R I1913). rRIms (→ rRI1874)
are marked with ever less detail and consist- follows A.
ency. For the most part the examined sources – 206 T Coro: this accent, like the one above,
reflect the same incongruences found in A, is absent in all three corresponding bars (185,
though RI1913 did make an occasional maladroit C Coro; 192, S Coro; 199, B Coro). In this case,
attempt at uniformity (see for example 187 in however, we may reasonably ascribe its anoma-
this Note). We have therefore chosen to extend lous presence to a momentary distraction on
GV’s model for the initial appearance of the GV’s part while copying the fugue from MpR
subject to the successive three enunciations (re- (where in fact the accent is uniformly marked
sponse, subject, response) with one exception in all four statements). Indeed, his carefully
(see Note 184/3rd, 206). Principal lacunae and prepared model at 179 –186/1st for C Coro
divergences with respect to this model (C Coro, strongly suggests that its omission at 185 was
179–186/1st) may be summarized as follows: deliberate. This “intrusion” is not the only evi-
– •187 S Coro: staccati and a slur for the four  dence of an unintentional transfer from MpR
as in MpR (see also Note 84/3rd; 206:206); rRIms into A: for example, at 187 GV marked staccati
(→ rRI1874) and RI1875 (→ R I1913) follow A, and and a slur for the four  in S Coro, and at 196 B
RI1913 extended this articulation to the follow- Coro have two staccati followed by an accent,
ing two statements as well (B Coro at 194; T both reflecting their respective readings in
Coro at 201); we modify to match the model at MpR (see also Note 225 –227). In light of these
180. considerations, we have chosen to suppress the
– •188 S Coro: slur missing (printed sources = accent at 206. All examined sources follow A.
A); we supply from the model at 181. 185 Orch A: missing and divergent dynamics (f
– •188, 190 S Coro: accents missing (printed and ff, the latter more prevalent).
sources = A); we supply from the models at 181 185 –186, 192–193, 199 –200, 206 –207 Orch A: very few
and 183. accents are present (MpR is more generously
– 194–197 B Coro: accents missing; at 196 there supplied, such that GV’s intentions are suf-
are two staccati followed by an accent as in ficiently clear); nor are there but occasional
MpR (see also Note 184/3rd, 206), uncorroborat- slurs for the ornamental figures (MpR is even
ed by either the model (at 182) or the other two more lacunose, sporting only one at 193 for
statements (at 189 and 203); at 195 slur missing. Vni I). However exiguous, this evidence is
We supply from the model at 180–183. still enough to render 185 –186, 192–193, and
– 200–205 T Coro: all accents missing but those 199 –200 in a uniform manner. The last passage,
at 200/3rd and 4th; slur missing at 202. We sup- at 206 –207, is somewhat different: while at 206
ply from the model at 179–184. the two accents for Cor confirm their vertical
184/3rd C Coro, 206 T Coro A: accents, probably “intru- extension here as well, at 207 the chord on 1st

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has no accents whatsoever, coincident with B 207/3rd Vni II A: the accent over the  is protracted
Coro’s unaccented introduction of a new fugal enough to seem a dim. symbol instead. We opt
exposition with the subject inverted. Given for an accent by analogy with Cor III–IV at
that the complete omission of an accent on the 208/3rd, given that both parts support a vocal
downbeat of this bar appears intentional when entrance on ff (C and T Coro respectively).
compared to MpR, where there are accents for 209/3rd–212 Ott, Fl, Cl I A: some accents are missing; we
B Coro, Of, and Cb, we have chosen to pre- supply in vertical conformity with Ob I, the
serve the reading of A at 207. only complete model (see also Note 210).
186, 200 Trbn A: double stems; their interpretation “a 3” 209/3rd–212 Trb A: no accents are present; we supply in
is confirmed in pUS-Cso. vertical conformity with the other concurrent
186/2nd–207/1st Coro A: the first enunciation of the parts (see also the following Note).
countersubject in this new fugal exposition, for 210 Vni I A: staccati for the four ; I-Mr (→ R I1875)
C Coro at 186/2nd–200, is replete with clearly follows A; RI1913 extends them to Ott and Fl as
marked slurs and articulation and may serve well. We replace with accents by analogy with
as a template for the more lacunose iterations Cb at 208 (Vc = Cb), and in vertical conformity
in S Coro and B Coro (largely left untouched with Ob I.
in the examined sources) with one exception 210/1st–2nd Vle A: staccati; we replace with accents in
(see Note 195 –196). Ambiguities and differences vertical conformity with the unison Fg I and
with respect to this model may be summarized Trbn I.
as follows: 211/1st Ob I A: accent, unconfirmed in any other uni-
– •193/2nd–3rd S Coro: GV marked this same son part; we suppress.
slur twice, such that the result could be 211/4th, 212/4th Vni I A: accents missing; we supply in
confused for a short cresc. symbol as in rRIms vertical conformity with the other unison parts
(→ rRI1874 and RI1913). (see also Note 209/3rd–212).
– 193/4th S Coro: accent missing; we supply 212/2nd–4th Fg I, Trbn I, Vle A: accents missing; we sup-
from the model at 186. ply in vertical conformity with Cor I–II.
– 198 S Coro: slur missing; we supply from the 213, 215, 217 Ott, Ob, Vle A: accents on 3rd missing; we
model at 191. supply in vertical conformity with T Coro.
– 199/3rd S Coro: accent missing; we supply RI1913 adds them only at 213.
from the model at 192. 213, 215, 217 Fl A: slurs on 2nd–4th missing (staccati also
– 202/2nd B Coro: accent rather than caret; we missing at 215); we supply in vertical conform-
adjust to match the model at 188. ity with Cl II.
– 205 B Coro: slur missing; we supply from the 213/1st Fg III–IV A: this first bar following a page turn
model at 191. is marked to begin immediately in unison with
192 Orch A: f between Ob and Cl and between Cor Fg I–II, rather than continue doubling Trbn III
III–IV and Trb I–II; ff between Vc and Cb. We and Of (as Fg III–IV had done from 207 to 212).
prefer ff as at 185 (see the relative Note). Were GV’s instruction to be obeyed, it would
193 Trbn A: unspecified part distribution for the clearly necessitate an awkward and highly
dyad; we supply from pUS-Cso. improbable leap in both parts on the downbeat.
195 –196 S Coro: this edition (supported by all of the We suggest maintaining Fg III–IV = Trbn III
examined sources) preserves GV’s divergent and Of for the first half of the bar, with the
phrasing and articulation for these two bars shift to unison with Fg I–II beginning thereaf-
with respect to the model of C Coro at 188 –189 ter. RI1913 does likewise.
(see Note 186/2nd–207/1st): given his neces- 214 S Coro A: the accent over the  is protracted
sary adjustment of this more exposed melodic enough to seem a dim. symbol (at 216/3rd it is
profile, resulting in the leap of a minor third only slightly shorter). Because this repertoire
to a consonant e!’’ at 195/2nd (compared to the made no conceptual distinction between an ac-
chromatic ascent at 188/2nd to a!’) with no cor- cent and a dim. symbol, we have opted for the
responding caret, the segment assumes a more former in vertical conformity with the other
lyrical character than at 188 –189 (and B Coro accents in this bar.
at 202–203). MpR has one slur for the four  at 214, 216 Cl I A: accents on 3rd missing; we supply in
195, and two shorter slurs at 196 in conformity vertical conformity with Fg I (Fg III = Fg I).
with 189. 215, 217 Vni I A: accents on 3rd missing; we supply in
199 Vle A: GV mistakenly wrote the same chord vertical conformity with Cl I (and Fg I [Fg III =
as at 192; our correction (which matches MpR) Fg I] only at 215).
comes from the analogous 185. 217/2nd–4th Vni II A: slur missing.
•206 Orch RI1913: f, for no logical reason. 217/3rd Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) A: accent missing.

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219/3rd–220/1st Ob I A: staccati missing for the three ; p. Further, the inverted subject pushes T Coro
we supply by analogy with Cl I at 222–223. into a significantly higher register, prompting

                them to sing in an expansive, legato manner
225 –227 Fg I A:
    GV (rather than to lighten and articulate the nor-
apparently forgot that he had marked different mal subject’s descent into the lower register).
articulation for the analogous Cl I at 222–224; At 230 the slur and the accent on 2nd for Fg I
we consider this divergence an “intrusion” are extremely appropriate because they repro-
from MpR and consequently modify Fg I in duce precisely this effect.
conformity with Cl I. All of the examined sources follow A. We
227/1st B Coro A: f and accent missing; we supply both prefer to eliminate the accents for Fg I at
from MpR. The dynamic may also be contextu- 229/3rd– 4th as a momentary “intrusion” from
ally inferred from the f for Fg III–IV, and there MpR (see also Notes 225 –227 and 227/1st–2nd).
is an accent for B Coro at the analogous 231/1st. 231/3rd–4th Fg III–IV A: staccati as well as accents.
227/1st–2nd Ob I A: GV originally interrupted the slur 233 A: missing and inconsistent dynamics, with
at the bar line between 226 and 227, then a prevalence of ff over f. Given the particular
extended it and added what could be read as significance of the ff for S Coro, we adopt and
a staccato on 1st. Quite possibly he became extend this indication.
confused as he copied from MpR, where there 233, 235, 237 Ob II, Cl II, Vni II A: staccati on 1st and 2nd
are staccati for the two  both for S Coro and only at 235 for Vni II; we consider this a plausi-
for Ob (whose slur seems to include the  on ble model (confirmed from Cb [Vc = Cb] at 235
2nd as well). We consider his interventions and 237) and extend it accordingly.
subsequent to the original slur to be “intru- 233, 235, 237 Timp A: at 233 and 235 the  have two cuts
sions” from MpR. I-Mr (→ R I1913) concluded through the stem, but at 237 there are three
the slur at 226/4th and marked two staccati at cuts (pUS-Cso follows A). While it would be
227/1st–2nd; RI1875 has the same slur as I-Mr possible to play the rolls as measured six-
but no staccati. teenths at an approximate M.M.  = 116, we
229 –230 T Coro, Fg I A: GV copied the phrasing and find it more plausible that GV wanted un-
articulation for Fg I from MpR, which reads: measured rolls as he indicated at 237. RI1875
            However, he omitted (→ R I1913) uniformly marked two cuts for all
three 
the accent at 229/1st and added one at 230/2nd. 233–238 Orch A: assorted missing accents and staccati,
Though it may not seem so, the accents at which we have supplied without typographical
229/3rd– 4th are not contextually pertinent, distinction on the basis of the ones GV clearly
especially relative to the unison, unaccented and congruently marked, which are sufficient
T Coro (in MpR T Coro and Fg I both have to reconstruct an exhaustive model. Only those
accents on 1st, 3rd, and 4th). On the other cases which allow for more than one solution
hand, the different, “unadorned” nature of this are reported in the following Notes.
subject entry for T Coro, compared to all of the 234, 236, 238 Ott (236–238 = Fl), Fl A: at 234 and 236
others in this passage, can be justified on both there are no acciaccaturas for the trills, which
a structural and an expressive level: we suggest by analogy with 238 (where we
1) on a structural level, as an inverted subject also suggest the !); the examined sources all
with a different text from the previous en- follow A.
tries, beginning with “Libera me, Domine”; in 234, 236, 238 Trbn III, Of A: staccati on 2nd–4th miss-
particular, the scansion shifts from one note ing; we supply in vertical conformity with the
per syllable to a melismatic segment at 229/3rd– unison Vc and Cb.
230/2nd on the syllable“cœ[-li]”. The other two 234/2nd–239/1st Orch A: various missing and incom-
subject entries on “quando cœli”, for B Coro at pletely marked slurs, most of the latter caused
227 and 231, have the same syllable “cœ[-li]” by a page turn between 236 and 237; the model
reduced to two  on 3rd and 4th, but in any for those slurs that cross the bar line to 1st (Fg,
case with neither accents nor staccati; Cor III–IV, Trb I–II, Trbn I–II, Vle) is clearly
2) on an expressive level, at 229 T Coro do established at 234–235, and partially confirmed
not possess the peremptory character that B at 236–237 (it is also confirmed in MpR).
Coro have at 227 and 231 – indeed, quite the 235, 237 Fg II (Fg IV = Fg II) A: staccati on 1st and 2nd
contrary: while B Coro sing presumably f (as missing; we supply in vertical conformity with
in MpR) from 227 doubled by an accented Fg the unison Vc and Cb.
III–IV playing f in octaves, T Coro continue 235/1st Trb III–IV A: isolated staccato, unconfirmed
to sing p doubled by a “Solo” Fg also playing either by the unison Cor I–II here or at the

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analogous 237/1st and 239/1st for Trb III–IV and doubt persists may be summarized as follows:
Cor I–II; we suppress. – 248, 250 Vni II: accent for the  on 3rd only at
235/3rd C and B Coro A: accents missing; we supply 250; in MpR instead there is no accent for the 
from MpR. on 2nd in that bar. We derive a composite mod-
237/3rd C Coro A: accent missing; we supply in vertical el by conflating the readings of A and MpR,
conformity with B Coro. one which is clear and can be extended to the
237/4th S Coro A: accent missing; we supply by anal- other instruments with this same rhythmic-
ogy with 233/4th and 235/4th. melodic configuration.
239/3rd–240 Fl I A: accents and staccati missing; we sup- – 249/1st Fg II and IV, Trbn–Of, Cb (Vc = Cb):
ply in vertical conformity with Cl I and Vni I. accents missing; we supply by analogy with
239/4th S Coro A: accent missing; we supply in verti- 251, and supported by the accent for Cb (Vc =
cal conformity with Cl I and Vni I (see also the Cb) in MpR.
previous Note). – 249, 251 Ott, Fl I, Ob II, Cl II, Trb I and III,
240/1st Fg II and III–IV A: accents missing; we supply Vni I: accents on 2nd–4th only for Vni I. While
in vertical conformity with the unison Cb (Vc = those winds with the same thematic incipit as
Cb). Vni I should plausibly be supplied with identi-
242 Ob A: empty bar; we supply the missing cal articulation (just as the lower winds mirror
material (doubling C Coro, as at 243 –246) from the model of Vc and Cb), it is necessary to note
MpR. All examined sources mechanically fol- the presence in A of two discordant slurs, one
low A. for Ob II at 249 and the other for Cl I at 251,
243–244/1st Cl I A: slur missing; we supply in vertical both for the same three (unaccented)  on 2nd–
conformity with Fl I. 4th.
244/3rd–245 S Coro A: the accent at 245, which is also – 249, 251: among those instruments with the
present in all the examined sources, could repeated eighth notes on 2nd–4th, staccati are
well be another example of an “intrusion” present only for Vni II in both bars, for Cor I–II
from MpR for the same reasons postulated in at 249, and for Trb I (Trb III = Trb I) at 251.
Note 184/3rd, 206. Having decided not to carry – 252/2nd–4th Vle: staccati for the three ; we
over into A a part for Trb I–II at 244/3rd–245 replace with accents in vertical conformity
that would have reinforced S Coro as it does with the other strings.
in MpR, he also omitted the accent for S Coro At 252–254/1st, where GV marked accents only
at 244/3rd but not the one at 245. While the for Fg, Trbn, Of, and strings (with the excep-
surviving accent may simply be an unintended tion of Vni II at 254/1st and Vle at 252–253/2nd),
transfer from MpR, it is nonetheless musically the homorhythmic nature of the passage makes
plausible and in this case the particular me- it possible to supply accents to all of the other
lodic gesture has no imitative counterpart. We parts where they are missing (again as in
therefore leave its adoption to the discretion of RI1913).
the performer. 248/1st Fg, Trbn, Of A: accent missing; we supply in
245/3rd–246/1st Orch A: few accents are present (in equal vertical conformity with Cb (Vc = Cb).
number at 245/3rd and 246/1st), and there are 248/3rd Vni II A: accent missing; we supply by analogy
no slurs for the ornamental figures (MpR is with 250.
equally lacunose); we supply the missing ac- 250/3rd–4th Cl I A: staccati; mindful of the fact that GV
cents only to those instruments playing ff. often hurriedly marked staccati where there
246/3rd– 4th B Coro, 248/1st, 3rd, 4th C Coro, 250/3rd– 4th should be accents, we supply accents in vertical
S Coro A: accents missing (at 250/3rd– 4th GV conformity with Ob I.
marked staccati, which are not incompatible 251/1st Trb I (Trb III = Trb I) A: accent, unconfirmed by
with accents; see Edition criteria “Interchangea- the unison Ob II or Cl II; we suppress.
bility of carets, accents, staccati”, pp. 10–11); we   
255 –256 Fl I, Ob I A:         Although
supply in square brackets from MpR (where
the articulation for the instrumental parts dou- a slur for both instruments is clearly marked at
bling the voices is identical to A). 255 –256/1st, it seems to be the premature antic-
248 Vni I A: anomalous ff. ipation of an expressive effect that only begins
248 –254/1st Orch A: very sparsely marked accents and later in the proper context, at 258, with C Cor
staccati; we add square brackets only where doubled by Trb I. One might reasonably pre-
no model for their integration is present. Our sume that the articulation in this brief “stretto”
proposals are based on GV’s markings for the of overlapping thematic incipits should instead
string section (this solution was also followed be the same. Therefore, and with all due cau-
in RI1913). Those cases where some margin of tion, we suggest an accent for Fl I and Ob I at

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255/1st by analogy with Fg I–II and Cor III at cept for the last phrase) restricted it to the four
256/1st, and staccati at 255/3rd–256 by analogy notes for “libera”.
with Trb I at 254/3rd–255. All of the examined 264–266 Cor A: the slur begins at 264/3rd, and the tie
sources follow A. at 265–266 is missing, the latter probably due
256 Vni I, 257 Vni II A: staccati missing for the two ; we to a change of page (verso to recto) between the
supply by analogy with Vle at 258 and Vc at 259. two bars. We adjust by analogy with 268–270,
256/3rd–257 Fg I–II A: accents at 256/3rd–4th, and no confirmed by MpR.
articulation at 257; we adjust in vertical con- 265–266 Fg I A: tie missing; we supply by analogy with
formity with the unison Cor III (see also Note 269–270.
257/1st). 266–267, 270–271 Fg I A: slurs missing; we supply by
257/1st Cor III A: staccato missing; we supply by anal- analogy with 274–275, and with the same fig-
ogy with Trb I at 255/1st. ure in this passage for Cor I and Vle.
257/3rd–4th Fg III–IV A: staccati missing; we supply in 268–269 C Coro A: slur missing; we suggest by analogy
vertical conformity with the unison Cor I. with T Coro at 270–271 (whose text is identical).
258 Vc A: p missing; we supply in conformity with None of the examined sources does likewise.
the previous three string entries. 268–269 Vle A: slur missing; we supply by analogy
258–259 Fg: the slur for Fg I–II is absent, as are the ac- with 264–265 and in vertical conformity with
cent and tie at 258/4th for Fg III–IV; we supply the unison Cor I.
in vertical conformity with the unison Cor. 270–271 B Coro A: tie missing, probably due to a page
259–260 Cl I A: the slur extends from 259/2nd beyond turn (recto to verso) between the two bars.
the  at 260/3rd; we adjust for vertical con- 270–271 Vni I (Vni II = Vni I at the lower octave) A: the
formity with Fl I and Ob I (as well as S Coro). beginning of the slur at 270 is missing, prob-
RI1913 preferred instead to conclude the slur at ably due to a page turn (recto to verso) between
260/3rd and extend it to Fl I and Ob I. the two bars: that GV would neglect to mark
260 C Coro A: the slur begins only from the eighth the beginning of a slur in such circumstances
note; we adjust by analogy with 258. is a phenomenon commonly encountered in
260–261 B Coro A: GV distractedly set the syllable “[i]- A. The two previous analogous phrases dispel
gnem” twice: beneath the g! at 260 and again any doubt regarding his intentions (see also
beneath the B! at 261/3rd. I-Mr = A, while rRIms Note 270–273).
(→ rRI1874 and all subsequent printed sources) 270 –273 S soloist A:
suppressed the extra syllable at 260. RI1875 also         
suppressed it at 260 but moved the proper       
     
conclusion at 261 to the first  instead. The abbreviated nature of this slur compared
260/1st–2nd S Coro A: the staccati for the two  are quite to the two previous phrases on “Libera me”
faint and might easily be dismissed as impuri- may be easily understood. First, as postu-
ties in the paper, were it not for their presence lated above (see Note 270–271, Vni I), the page
in MpR. Curiously, all of the examined sources turn between 270 and 271 would explain the
considered them valid articulation marks. absence of the beginning of the slur at 270;
While doubtful, we accept them as well. as part of a sequence, however, there is no
261–262 Trb I A: the slur is barely visible, such that reason to suspect that the phrasing of this
I-Mr and RI1875 overlooked it; nonetheless it is text, “Domine, de morte” (and particularly its
present in RI1913 and confirmed by MpR. instrumental doubling), should begin any dif-
262 S Coro A: “me” is missing, an obvious over- ferently. With regard to the conclusion of the
sight. slur, it is unlikely that GV wanted to separate
262 B Coro A: pp; while a different dynamic level the last syllable “[mor]-te” unnaturally from
with respect to the rest of the Coro is plausible, the rest of the phrase (confirmed by the slur
given that Fg II–IV, who double B Coro, also he marked for Vni I [Vni II = Vni I at the lower
have pp, we prefer ppp as in MpR. octave]); in the two previous phrases this
262 Vle A: pp; we adjust to ppp for vertical con- was not a problem because the text ends on a
formity with the other strings (as in RI1913) monosyllable (“Libera me”; see Note 262–269).
in this bar, but maintain the “pp dolce” GV rRI1874 follows A, while in rRIms the slur begins
prescribed at 263 as fitting for the context. at 270; I-Mr (→ R I1875) has no slur at all; RI1913,
•262–269 S soloist, 264 –274 S Coro Sources: despite the continuing the same pattern of two-bar slurs
clearly marked model in A for the repeated established for the previous phrases, limited
phrase “libera me”, with the slur always reach- the slur to 270 –271.
ing to “me” (rigorously reflected in I-Mr), most 272–273 Cor I, Vle A: slurs missing; we supply by anal-
other secondary sources (including RI1913, ex- ogy with 264–265 and 268–269.

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273–274 Fg II and IV A: slurs missing, we supply by for Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II), the slur at
analogy with 265–266 and 269–270. 283 begins on 1st rather than 2nd (see Note
276/2nd Orch, Coro A: p only for Vni I, which I-Mr 276/2nd–284/1st).
extended to Vni II and Vle. The dynamic seems 282/1st S soloist A: staccato missing, probably forgot-
to be an opportune choice: if ignored, the pp / ten by GV following a page turn; we supply
ppp orchestral dynamic established in the pre- by analogy with 278 and 280. rRIms, I-Mr, and
vious bars (pp for Fg, Cor, and Vle; the other RI1875 agree; rRI1874 and RI1913 follow A.
strings ppp) would be too great a contrast with 282/2nd–283 Orch A: missing cresc. symbols and others
the f for S soloist at 277. We therefore adopt p of varying length, but those GV marked for
here for the orchestra and suggest it for Coro Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) and Vc make his in-
as well. tentions clear beyond any doubt (confirmed in
276/2nd–284 C Coro A: text missing. MpR). We also suggest their extension to Coro,
276/2nd–284/1st Woodwinds A: from 276/2nd to 281 the unlike any of the examined sources.
slurs are precisely marked, such that GV’s 284, 286, 288 Brass A: missing but clearly intented ac-
intentions are manifestly clear (divergences cents, which we integrate (as did RI1913) with-
and lacunae, which are reported in the relative out typographical distinction.
Notes, are all but negligible). At 282–284/1st 284 –289 Woodwinds, Strings A: missing slurs and
they lose much of their former precision (see articulation. With regard to the phrasing, the
Note 282–283), but it is musically plausible that overall clarity of GV’s intentions allows us to
GV intended the reasonably distinct examples integrate missing slurs without typographi-
he marked for Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) at cal distinction. Of greater concern is the scant
282/2nd–284/1st presence of articulation signs, particularly
accents (see Note 284, 286, 288 for the brass
     to be the model for the same con-
accents). Even so, what few GV marked tend
tracted motivic unit in the other woodwinds. to agree with the more generous sampling in
MpR is still more lacunose and consequently MpR, so that there is no reason to think that
of little assistance, but at 283/2nd–284/1st the he wanted anything different. Those cases that
slur for Fg I–II is very clear. This model was are more problematic may be summarized as
also adopted by RI1913. follows:
277 S soloist rRIms: f missing, which omission was – 284/2nd–289 Fl, Cl I: very few staccati and
transmitted to rRI1874 and RI1913 (RI1964 reinstat- slurs; we (like RI1913) supply in vertical con-
ed f); I-Mr and RI1875 correctly have f as in A. formity with Vle, who lack only the slur at 288.
277/2nd–278/1st, 279/2nd–280/1st Ob II A: slurs missing; – 284, 286, 288 Ott, Ob I, Vni I: no accents on
we supply in vertical conformity with Fl I. 3rd for Ott and Ob I, and only one, at 284,
279/2nd–281/1st Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) A: one con- for Vni I (confirmed in MpR); we (like RI1913)
tinuous slur; we replace with two shorter ones supply in vertical conformity with the general
by analogy with the previous examples. presence of homorhythmic accents for the brass
280–281 Ob I A: two shorter slurs; we replace them instruments (see Note 284, 286, 288 Brass).
with one, by analogy with the previous two – 284 –288 Ob II, Cl II, Fg, Vni II, Cb (Vc = Cb
examples. from 285): extremely few accents on 3rd in
281/2nd–282/1st Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II) A: slur these bars. For the various  at 284, 286, and
missing; we supply by analogy with 282/2nd– 288, we supply in vertical conformity with the
283/1st. brass instruments. The only accents in A for
282–283 Coro A: S Coro has two slurs, one per complete the concomitant  are at 286 for Fg I–II (Fg III–
bar (that is, beginning on the downbeat of IV = Fg I–II), and Cb (Vc = Cb); and at 288 for
each). We find the shifted phrasing pattern for B Coro. MpR has three more: at 286 for Vni II,
the unison Ob I (but see Note 276/2nd–284/1st) and at 288 for Vni II and Ob II. Given this evi-
to be more plausible and adjust S Coro accord- dence of intended participation in the general
ingly, and suggest its vertical extension to the accent established by the brass instruments, we
other three Coro parts (C Coro = unison Ob supply accents for the  where missing.
II; T and B Coro = unison Fg) as well. RI1913 On the other hand, there is legitimate room for
(following the lead of RI1875) adjusted S Coro in doubt regarding the accents for the  on 3rd
like manner, but without extending the slurs to at 285 and 287. GV marked only one example
C, T, and B Coro. in A, for Fg I (Fg III = Fg I) at 287. Supporting
282–283 Ott, Fl, Ob, Fg A: hastily marked or missing evidence from MpR cannot be brought to bear
slurs: for Ott, one single slur for the seven ; in this case because it is present in Cb (Vc = Cb),
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is different at 285 and 287 in A: while MpR 300: no accents on 1st; Cb on 3rd;
has two  with an accent for the second  in 302: no accents on 1st; Vni I, Vc, and Cb on 3rd.
both bars, in A GV originally copied the two In MpR there are accents for Cb (Vc = Cb)
 but later erased them and replaced each pair on 1st and 3rd in all three bars, while for the
with  instead. It is therefore possible that the other strings they appear exclusively (if not
sole accent for Fg I at 287/3rd was only a slip consistently) on 3rd. Since those for Cb on 1st
of the pen, perhaps with the Cb accent in that in MpR are likely residual from the skeleton
position from MpR in mind. We accept it with score phase of composition, we suppress the
reservation, extending it vertically to Ob II, Cl two accents in A at 298/1st as an intrusive (and
II, and Vni II at 287, and similarly suggesting outdated) influence from MpR. In I-Mr and
it to every a’  at 285/3rd. RI1913 has no accents RI1875 the accents become progressively fewer
for Ob II, Cl II, Fg I and III, Vc, and Cb other at 300 and 302; RI1913 adopted and extended
than the general one at 284. RI1964 reinstated the accents at 298/1st and 3rd, but then ignored
the accent for Vc and Cb at 286/3rd from A, but them entirely at 300 and at 302.
not the one for Fg I at 287/3rd. 301, 303 Cor III–IV A: slurs missing; we supply by anal-
286 C and B Coro, 288 C Coro A: accents missing on ogy with 299 and in vertical conformity with
3rd; we supply in conformity, and by analogy, the woodwinds.
with the accent for B Coro at 288 (see also Note 304 –307 Winds A: missing and partial slurs, evidently
284 –289: 284 –288). exacerbated by a page turn (recto to verso)
•287/1st Vni I A: g' missing, notwithstanding the tie GV between 305 and 306. At 304 –305 GV marked
had marked for it from the previous bar. None open-ended slurs for Ob, Cor I–II, Fg I–II (Fg
of the examined sources add g'. III–IV = Fg I–II), and Trbn I–II (those for Fg and
288 Timp A:  with only two cuts through the Trbn begin only from the second  at 304); after
stem; we modify to match 284 and 286. the page turn, at 306 –307 he marked them for
290, 294 Orch A: missing and occasionally divergent Fl, Ott, and Trbn I–II. We find this sufficient
articulation. At 290, despite the lacunae, it is evidence of GV’s intentions and supply a single
possible to find a model for each rhythmic- continuous slur uniformly for all of the wind
melodic figure that can be extended for vertical parts.
conformity; the only exceptions are the staccati •304–307 Gr C RI1913: three cuts over the four , but
on 1st and 2nd for Vni II and Vle, which may there are clearly only two in A. I-Mr and
theoretically be extended to Ott and Ob I as pUS-Cso also have three cuts.
well. At 294 there is even less articulation to be 308 A: varying dynamic indications: GV marked p
had, but what little GV marked is in agreement for Vc, pp for Cb, and ppp for Vni and Vle (Vle
with 290 (the texture of which is analogous to also have a p beneath the ppp), apparently a
294), allowing us to fill the remaining gaps in a reflection of some uncertainty that could well
similarly concordant manner. bring into question his differentiation between
290/1st–2nd S Coro A: staccati missing; we supply in ppp for S soloist and pp for Coro. However,
vertical conformity with the unison S soloist. while it seems appropriate to establish verti-
Already rRIms (→ rRI1874 and RI1913) had cor- cal conformity among the strings, we prefer
rected the oversight. to maintain the dynamic distinction between
•291/4th–292/1st Ott, Ob I, Vni II MpR: ties, all of which S soloist and Coro: after S soloist’s prominent
are not present in A. RI1913 added them by participation in the previous passage (other-
analogy with previous melodic figures (such as wise GV would have written it for Coro alone),
Ott, Ob I, and Vni I at 288/3rd–289/1st). it seems he intended to have her voice “merge”
296/3rd, 297, 298/3rd, 299 B Coro, Brass A: at 296/3rd with the others, concluding this section as
and 297, accents only for B Coro and Cor I–II; one of the group. The examined sources opted
at 298/3rd and 299, accents for all brass instru- for dynamic uniformity: I-Mr = tutti p; rRIms,
ments, and an accent only at 299 for B Coro. rRI1874, RI1875, and RI1913 = tutti ppp.
297/2nd Voices A: f only for S soloist and S Coro, the 312–327 Coro A: GV marked two extremely clear exam-
latter of which we interpret as a general indica- ples of phrasing and articulation for the subject
tion applicable to C and T Coro as well (but and response in this stretto section, both of
not to B Coro, who move independently of the which serve as templates where such indica-
other voices here). tions are otherwise missing: for the subject,
298, 300, 302 Strings A: GV marked accents on 1st and at 312–318 (B Coro); and for the response, at
3rd as follows: 315 –321 (S Coro). The latter of these lacks only
298: Vni I and Cb on 1st; Vni I, Vni II, and Vc two small details, an accent at 315/1st and a
on 3rd; staccato at 316/1st, but they are easily gleaned

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from the first two (entirely similar) bars of the 313–326 Woodwinds A: GV marked complete models
subject. No divergent elements arise in the for the articulation of the two-bar accompani-
other vocal entrances, allowing us simply to mental figure at 313/2nd–314/2nd for Fl and Cl,
integrate missing slurs and articulation in con- and at 316/2nd–317/2nd for Ott and Ob; in all
formity with their respective models (for the other iterations there are no staccati for the 
dim. symbols, see Note 315, 317, 323, 325). The other than at 326/1st for Ott (Ob = Ott). MpR is
lacunae may be summarized as follows: more scrupulously supplied with these missing
– 313–319 T Coro: no articulation; staccati (where GV often marked them for only
– 314–318 C Coro: no articulation at 314, no one of two unison parts). Between the afore-
slurs at 316/1st–2nd and 317/2nd–4th, and no mentioned models in A and their extended
accent at 318/4th; confirmation in MpR, there is no reason to
– 315/1st, 316/1st S Coro: no accent and no stac- doubt his intentions.
cato respectively; 314 Vc, 316 Vni II, 322 Vle, 324 Vni I A: there are diver-
– 320–324 T Coro: no staccati at 320/3rd–4th, no gent readings on 1st–3rd for the phrasing/
slur at 323/2nd–4th, and no accent at 324/4th; articulation in these four corresponding bars
– 321–326 B Coro: no staccati at 321/3rd–322/1st of the stretto: staccati at 314 (Vc); no articula-
and at 323/1st, no slur at 325/3rd–4th, and no tion and no slur at 316 (Vni II); partial slur at
accent at 326/1st; 322 (Vle); full slur at 324 (Vni I). We adopt the
– 322–323 S Coro: no articulation; last of these as our model and adjust the others
– 323/3rd–325/1st C Coro: no staccati. accordingly.
312–327 Strings A: unlike the choral parts, which they 315 T Coro, 317 S Coro, 323 B Coro, 325 C Coro A: only
double, the strings have no complete and one dim. symbol is clearly marked on 2nd– 4th
coherent model of phrasing and articulation for in these four corresponding bars of the stretto,
the subject and response (the examined sources at 323 (B Coro); there is a large accent at 317
largely reproduce the same incongruencies in (S Coro), which could also be interpreted as a
A); even so, because the problem is mostly one dim. symbol, and nothing at 315 (T Coro) and
of lacunae rather than divergences, of which 325 (C Coro). In each case the unison string
there are relatively few, it is possible to derive part has a distinctly marked dim. symbol,
a complete model by means of comparison and and MpR confirms dim. symbols for both the
reciprocal integration. Those cases where some voices and the strings. We find this sufficient
degree of doubt remains are discussed in the evidence to adopt 323 as our model and adjust
following Notes; see in particular Note 314, the other bars accordingly.
316, 322, 324 and Note 316, 318, 324, 326. The 316 Vle, 318 Vni I, 324 Vc, 326 Vni II A:
lacunae and divergences may be summarized  
At 316, Vle =    
as follows:
– 312–316 Vc: accent rather than caret at 312/1st; 
At 326, Vni II =    

slur for all four  and staccato on 1st as well at
313; no slur at 316/1st–3rd; Evidently, at 316 (Vle) and 326 (Vni II) GV
– 313/3rd–4th Vle: no staccati; distractedly copied the same phrasing and
– 316/1st–3rd Vni II: no slur; articulation he had marked in MpR for all four
– 320/2nd Vni II: no staccati for the eighth notes bars corresponding to 316, 318, 324, and 326.
(see the relative Note); That model, with three staccati and a slur on
– 323/2nd–4th, 324/1st–3rd Vle: no slurs; 2nd– 4th, was more appropriate for the first,
– 325 Vni II: slur; given that there are other original text setting in MpR:
divergent slurs and articulation in this conclu-     
sion of the stretto, we preserve the slur for  

            
Vni II;
– 326/2nd–4th Vni I: slur and staccati; given Instead the example he marked at 318 (Vni I)
that there are other divergent slurs and and again at 324 (Vc), with the four  slurred
articulation in this conclusion of the stretto, we as 2 + 2 and staccati for the latter two, is better
preserve phrasing and articulation for Vni I. adapted to the text setting in A (which in turn
•312/3rd B Coro A: the staccato could be confused with reflects modifications he had meanwhile made
a small accent, as occurred in I-Mr and RI1875; to MpR). We therefore adopt the phrasing and
indeed, rRIms (→ rRI1874 → R I1913) chose to articulation of 318 and 324 for 316 and 326 as
place an accent on 4th as well, applying this well (but with the accent at 326/4th).
same articulation to the three successive en- 320/2nd Vni II A: staccati missing for the eighth notes;
tries. we supply by analogy with 318/2nd (Vc) and

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326/2nd (Vle). I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) ignored and the dim. stops substantially before the end
them. of the phrase. We find it musically plausible
•323–324 T Coro A: GV erroneously set “in die illa” in that GV intended to limit the messa di voce
these two bars: to the duration of the g’’, and we suggest its
integration for the g’’ at 334 –335 as well. I-Mr
       
(→ R I1875 → R I1913) extended both symbols
         
to cover the entire phrase; rRIms (→ rRI1874)
All of the examined sources follow A. ignored them altogether.
328 Fg I A: p missing; we supply in accordance 334 S Coro A: anomalous slur for the four notes
with the p for Fl I at 329 and by analogy with (all the examined sources follow A), unsup-
Cl I at 330, thereby returning, like them, to ported by any previous thematic entry; we
the earlier dynamic before the interceding f suppress. In all probability GV had mistakenly
marked at 326 for all three parts. anticipated the expressive interpretation of the
328 Fg I, 330 Cl I, 332 Fg III, 334 Ob I A: the accent for incipit that begins at 336 –337 (for an analogous
the first note of the subject is present only situation, see Note 255 –256).
for Cl I at 330, but in the previous imitative 334 –335 S soloist: for the suggested messa di voce, see
episode (312ff) the relative string parts were Note 329 –332.
always supplied with carets (accent for Vc at 336–337 C Coro, Trb I A: both slurs begin roughly from
312); in general this same consideration applies 336/3rd, but a complete (and far more plausible)
to nearly all of the thematic incipits that appear model can be had from Cl I and the analogous
over the course of N. 7. phrases that follow. Evidently GV wanted to
328 –336 Coro A: none of the four subject entries in this realize a sort of reminiscence effect relative to
brief canonic passage has a complete set of 258ff, where the two-bar thematic incipit is also
slurs and articulation. Nonetheless, since there marked legato and “dolcissimo”.
are only lacunae and no divergences, a model 336 –341 C Coro MpR, A: the perceptibility of each
can be obtained through reciprocal integration subject entry in this passage was of particular
and by comparison with the woodwind parts concern to GV, who added the following anno-
which, while occasionally different, are more tation to the bottom of the page in MpR: “Qui
completely furnished than the voices moving si aggiungeranno altri 2 Contralti onde sia più
in unison with them (but see also Note 328, sensibile il Soggetto” [“Here 2 Contraltos shall
330, 332, 334). The lacunae may be summarized be added so that the Subject becomes more
as follows: evident”]. He originally copied this instruction
– 330/1st–3rd T Coro: no staccati; into A as well but then erased it after modi-
– 331/1st–3rd C Coro: no staccati; fying the earlier footnote he had written for
– 332 B Coro: no accent on 1st or staccati on 328ff: “Questo squarcio sempre sotto voce e ver-
3rd–4th; rà eseguito da poche voci / nel coro basteranno
– 334–336 S Coro: no articulation (slur for the 2 4. Soprani – 2 4. Con[tralti] 2 4. Ten[ori] 2 4.
four notes at 334; see the relative Note). Bassi” [“This passage always sottovoce, and to
Integration of the staccati for S Coro at be executed by only a few voices / in the Coro
336/2nd– 4th remains an arguable choice, given 2 4. Sopranos – 2 4. Con[traltos] 2 4. Ten[ors] 2
the different text (“et terra” rather than “mov- 4. Basses will suffice”]. Having thus increased
endi”) and the fact that the theme is truncated the number of voices for each part from 2 to 4
precisely where an accent would otherwise fall at 328ff, he presumably thought it superfluous
(as at the corresponding 330 [T Coro], 332 [C to supplement C Coro still further (for a total
Coro], and 334 [B Coro]); we supply by analogy of 6 voices) at 336. Nevertheless certain musical
with the articulation GV marked for the same considerations suggest that such an expedient
fragment of text for B Coro at 335/4th–336/2nd, might well prove effective, notwithstanding
and with the vertical support of the unison his perhaps arguably motivated decision to the
Ob I. contrary. In fact, while the entry for C Coro at
328/1st Fl II A: after a page turn GV forgot to add the 336 occurs in a register where it can be clearly
g'', possibly with an eye to MpR (where Fl II distinguished – and without the risk of being
is not present in the bars corresponding to overwhelmed by Trb I – the line then descends
326–328). progressively, and less favorably, to reach g
329 –332 S soloist A: the exact lengths of the cresc. and at 341. It is plausible that an additional boost
dim. symbols are difficult to determine be- to their breadth of sound would also benefit
cause they partially merge with the concomi- the aggregate “a4” choral balance. Therefore,
tant slur, but clearly the cresc. begins after 329 should the appropriate resources be available

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and the need arise, we suggest adding two indications at 366–367 (pppp, “Tutti”, and “com-
more voices at 336 to sustain and strengthen inciando sotto voce”) and at 369 assigned “sot-
the part for C Coro. Because none of the sourc- tovoce” to S, C, and T Coro as well; this error
es derived from A enjoyed any direct contact was subsequently transmitted to the printed
with MpR, the original prescription from MpR sources.
is absent in the traditional transmission history 370/1st–3rd B Coro A: tie (absent in MpR). Among the
of this music. examined sources, only I-Mr and RI1875 adopt-
336–343 Trb I A: GV forgot (as in MpR) to supply the ed it, the latter compounding this error with
necessary flats, as though they were already another: in order to make sense of the tie, the
present in the key signature. copyist set the syllable “[i-]gnem” beneath the 
337–342 T Coro, Fg I A: as often happened, GV only and moved “i-” back to the left of the bar line.
began the slurs for these parts following a page 371–373 Cb (Fg I–II, Vc = Cb) A: anomalous caret on 1st
turn (recto to verso), in this case between 337 at 371 (already I-Mr and RI1875 had replaced it
and 338, marking the one for T Coro with two with an accent), and no accents at 372 and 373;
pen strokes between 338 and 340 (I-Mr has we supply by analogy with 367–369 (in I-Mr
only a short slur for T Coro at 338 –339; RI1913 and RI1875 372 and 373 = 371 → R I1913, where
and rRIms → rRI1874 ignored that one as well). they are correctly integrated).
Since there seems to be no reason to inter- 375, 377, 379 Fg, Cb (Vc = Cb) A: staccati on 3rd and
rupt either the textual or melodic unity of the 4th are present only for Fg I–II at 375 and 377
phrase, we complete the slur for Fg I and apply (from 376 Fg III–IV = Fg I–II); we supply where
the same musical logic to the one for T Coro. missing in conformity with these models.
348 T and B Coro A: pp, probably a partial in- 380 –381 Trbn III–Of A: it is not clear whether GV
trusion from MpR. Already I-Mr and rRIms intended these two bars to be played by one
modifed them to ppp in conformity with S and or both instruments. We assign them to Of, as
C Coro. in pUS-Cso; I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) gave the
348–349 B Coro, Fg II, III–IV, Cor III A: as often hap- notes double stems.
pened elsewhere, GV forgot to mark ties for 380/3rd Of, Cb (Vc = Cb) A: accent missing; we supply
these parts (all some octave of G) over the page in vertical conformity with Fg I–II (Fg III–IV =
turn (recto to verso) between 348 and 349, but Fg I–II).
his intentions are clear. •381/3rd–4th Cb (Vc = Cb) A: staccati rather than the
349 Ob I A: accent missing; we supply in verti- prevailing accents. I-Mr has no articulation
cal conformity with Cl I. All of the examined for Cb, but also none for Trbn III–Of (see Note
sources have no accent for either part. 380–381) and Cor III–IV, which lacunae were
350 Vni II A: standard slur missing for the alternat- transmitted to RI1875 (→ R I1913).
ing sixteenth notes. 382 A Orch: differing and occasionally missing
354–358 Ob I A: 354 and 355 are separated by a change dynamics: fff above Vni I and beneath Cb,
of page (verso to recto), prompting GV to mark otherwise ff (Coro = ff, and “tutta forza” above
an anomalous slur from 355 to 358. We adjust S Coro). We consider fff to be residual from the
in vertical agreement with the unison S Coro. skeleton score and opt for ff, which allows for
356 Ob I A: dim. symbol missing. further expansion to a maximum fff at 396 (see
360–361 Vni I A: slur missing; we supply in vertical also Note 396).
conformity with the unison Cl I. 382–387 A: GV marked only a handful of accents in this
363–364 Fg III A: slur missing; we supply in vertical homorhythmic sequence (although comparison
conformity with the unison Vc. with the far more generously supplied passage
366 –367 B Coro A: at 366, the last bar of a verso, GV in MpR makes his intentions sufficiently clear).
wrote pppp for the entrance of B Coro, but in Their presence in A is particularly exiguous
the left margin of the following recto he wrote on the downbeats of 383 (for Cor I–II, Timp, S
“Tutti” (previously B Coro had been reduced to Coro, and Cb [Vc = Cb]), 385 (Ott alone), and
four voices) and ppp, with “cominciando sotto 387 (S Coro alone). Nevertheless GV marked
voce” added above the part (“cominciando ppp” complete examples at 382–383 (the first of the
appears above Vni I and beneath Cb); we opt three statements) for Cor I–II, Timp, S Coro,
for ppp in conformity with the instruments, and Cb, which we have used as templates
and assign all three indications to their logical for both vertical and horizontal extension
position at 366. (at 384–385 and 386–387). RI1913 adopted this
•369 T Coro A: p; we modify to pp in vertical same solution, which is also mirrored in rRIms
conformity with S soloist and C Coro. rRIms (→ rRI1874).
misinterpreted the focus of the three separate •388/1st Cor III–IV A: isolated accent; we suppress. I-Mr

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(→ R I1875) preserved it, with additional accents level, with at least a pair of fff for the winds
for Cor I–II and Trb III–IV; RI1913 extended it to (roughly positioned in the area of Fg III–IV and
all parts but Coro and Timp. Cor I–II) and another fff for Vni I. In MpR the
388/3rd–389/3rd Fg I–II A: isolated slur; we suppress (as corresponding bar is uniformly marked ff, with
did RI1913). the possible exception one fff for Trb (but no
390 Orch A: only a few accents are present: one differentiation between Timp and Gr C). In A,
between the staves for Cor, another between on the other hand, Trb are expressly marked
the staves for Fg, and two for Cb (Vc = Cb). It fff at 392, an unlikely choice were the dynamic
is not clear whether the one between the Fg level then to diminish only a few bars later.
staves was intended for Fg II or for Fg III–IV. In We therefore supply fff for the entire orchestra
any case, accents for Fg III–IV and Trbn III–Of at 396. The examined sources adopted various
are plausible because both bass parts function solutions, none of which coherently addresses
in conjunction with Vc and Cb. the overall dynamic disposition of the passage
390/1st–391/1st S Coro A: slur, perhaps lingering from from 382 to 396 (see also Note 382):
an earlier version; all of the examined sources I-Mr = ff for Fg I–II, Vni, and Vle – f for Fl and
agree in its suppression. Cl (at 382 ff for Fl, Trbn, Of and strings – f for
392–395 C Coro A: accents missing; we supply in verti- all other parts; at 390 p [sic] for Trb I–II – at
cal conformity with S Coro. rRIms (→ rRI1874) 392/2nd ff for Trb I–II [Trb III–IV = Trb I–II]);
follows A; I-Mr has no accents for either S RI1875 = f (f also at 382; at 390 f for Trb I–II; at
Coro or C Coro; RI1875 (→ R I1913) ignored the 392 ff for Trb I–IV);
accent for S Coro at 392 but extended the re- RI1913 = ff (at 382 ff tutta forza; at 388 f for Trb
maining three to C Coro. III–IV; at 390 f for Trb I–II; at 392 ff for Trb I–II
392/3rd–393/1st Fg II A: tie missing; we supply in vertical and III–IV);
conformity with Ott, Fl, Cl II, and Cor III–IV. rRIms (→ rRI1874) = fff (at 382 ff tutta forza).
392/3rd–393/3rd T Coro A: the slur stops at 393/1st; while 397 Timp A: two cuts [  j ]; we modify to three as in
it may be residual from an earlier version (and the adjoining bars.
was in fact ignored by all of the examined •406 S Coro A: ppp; we modify to pp in vertical con-
sources), we nonetheless find it plausible that formity with C and T Coro. rRIms (→ rRI1874)
T Coro should have the same phrasing as the has ppp for S Coro but no dynamic for C and T
unison Cor I–II (see also Note 392/3rd–393/3rd Coro; I-Mr (→ R I1875 → R I1913) gave ppp to all
Fg I, Trbn I). three parts.
392/3rd–393/3rd Fg I, Trbn I A: GV marked these slurs •409 Vc, Cb I-Mr, RI1913: ppp for both parts (RI1875 =
beneath Fg II and Trbn II, but they obviously pp), notwithstanding GV’s clearly marked pp
apply to Fg I and Trbn I, in vertical conformity for Vc and ppp for Cb in A. We believe this to
with Cor I. be an intentional differentiation: given that Cb
393/4th Trb I–II (Trb III–IV = Trb I–II) A: staccati miss- has a rather penetrating sound in that register,
ing for the last two eighth notes. GV probably wanted to balance it properly
394 Fg III–IV, Trbn III–Of A: accent missing; we with Vc.
supply in vertical conformity with the unison 414 Orch A: ppp for Vni I, pp for Vni II, Vle, and
Cb (Vc = Cb). Fg I; we supply ppp for all instruments, which
395/1st Fg I, Fg III–IV, Trbn I–II, Trbn III–Of A: accents is closer to the pppp GV marked for S Coro at
missing; we supply the accent for the  of Trbn 412 and conforms with Cb’s ppp from 409 (see
II in vertical conformity with Fg II, Cor, and the relative Note above).
Trb I and III; those for the other parts (all of 416 Tempo A: see Note 171, 416.
which move homorhythmically in unison or 416 S soloist A: originally a breath mark after
parallel sixths) are supplied in vertical con- “æterna”, later erased (see also Note 7– 9).
formity with Cb (Vc = Cb). 418, 420 Voci A: pp and pppp only for S soloist.
396 Orch A: GV marked various gradations of •419 Orch A: ppp for Ob, Gr C, Vle, and Vc; other-
forte ranging from f to fff in the left margin of wise pp. We prefer pp for greater equilibrium
the page (396 is the first bar following a page with Coro, but maintain ppp for Gr C (as in
turn), but with no apparent rhyme or reason in RI1875). RI1913 = tutti ppp.
their distribution. Both the texture and pivotal
position of this climax seem to countervail any
attempt at significant dynamic differentiation:
it makes little sense, for example, that Timp
should play ff and Gr C f precisely where the
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Appendix B Coro from S Coro, though acknowledging
“Liber scriptus” first version (1874) some doubt regarding the one at 166a/3rd–167a
(see the relative Note). Specific cases of more
S problematic resolution are cited in the follow-
A, vol. I, pp. 68a– 80a37 ing Notes.
The first version of the “Liber scriptus” (1874) begins from 162a–182a/1st Strings A: unlike the vocal parts, where
the third bar of p. 68a (162a) and ends with the penultimate the slurs and articulation GV marked for S
bar of p. 80a (215a) (see also the critical commentary for N. Coro can be applied to C, T, and B Coro (see
2). The later, definitive version of the “Liber scriptus” (1875) Note 162a–182a/1st Coro), the instruments that
was inserted between p. 68a and p. 69a. double them have no such exhaustive and un-
Among the examined sources, only I-Mr, pUS-Cso, and equivocal model (I-Mr and pUS-Cso more or
rRI1874 contain the first version. Since for the most part they less faithfully reproduce the same incongruen-
acritically follow A, they are rarely useful for the edition cies). We therefore derive a model through re-
of this piece, nor do they help to reconstruct the genesis ciprocal comparison of the instrumental parts,
of eventual errors because the first version had no further in addition to comparison of each one with the
transmission history once it was replaced with the defini- concomitant vocal part, silently integrating and
tive 1875 version in the performing tradition. rectifying and discussing individual passages
in the following Notes.
With regard to the cresc. symbols, they are
C carefully and completely marked up to 173a,
162a, 166a, 170a, 174a Strings A: GV only marked one after which there are only two for Vc (176a–
p, at 162a for Vni I, which we consider valid 177a, 180a–181a) and one for Vni I (180a–181a).
for this entire section and extend to all other We integrate where missing based on previous
subject entries. appearances, and suggest them for Vni I at
162a–182a/1st Coro A: in this fugal exposition (“Liber 166a–167a, Vni II at 170a–171a, Vle at 174a–175a,
scriptus proferetur… unde mundus judicetur”) and Vc at 178a–179a on the model of S Coro at
the vocal parts have fairly homogeneous slurs 166a–167a (see Note 166a/3rd–167a).
and articulation, with some lacunae but no 162a/3rd–163a/1st S Coro A: the slur for this thematic
incongruencies (I-Mr and rRI1874 generally fol- incipit does not appear in the subsequent
low A). The subject (S), response (R), and first entrances for C Coro (166a–167a/1st), T Coro
countersubject (Cs1) all have clear and coherent (170a–171a/1st), or B Coro (174a–175a/1st); it
models that can be extended where otherwise does occur again, only once, for T Coro at
missing; particularly the exhaustively marked 182a/3rd–183a/1st, but with a different text
initial entry of S for S Coro at 162a–166a/2nd (“Judex ergo…”). Since it is difficult to imag-
(but see also Note 162a/3rd–163a/1st), which we ine that GV would have been anything less
can apply to all appearances of S and R. The than precise in establishing the slurs and
fact that all three appearances of Cs1 (S Coro articulation he wanted for the beginning of the
at 166a/3rd–170a/1st, C Coro at 170/3rd–174/1st, exposition of the fugue, we accept and extend
T Coro at 174/3rd–178/1st, B Coro at 178/3rd– this initial slur for S Coro to the other three
182/1st) have substantially the same slurs and entrances, considering the slurs and articula-
articulation seems to confirm GV’s intention tion GV marked for S Coro to be paradigmatic
that there should be no variation among them. (see Note 162a–182a/1st Coro). However, given
While there are more lacunae with regard the possibility that this slur may be directly
to Cs2 (S Coro at 170a/3rd–174a/1st, C Coro at relevant only to the pronunciation of the
174a/3rd–178a/1st, T Coro at 178a/3rd–182a/1st) particular text involved, we do not extend it to
and Cs3 (S Coro at 174a/2nd–178a/1st, C Coro at those thematic entries where the text is differ-
178a/2nd–182a/1st), S Coro is marked in detail ent (see also Note 182a/3rd–183a/1st). 

up to 178a/1st, again serving as a model for the 162a/3rd–163a/1st Vni I, 166/3rd–167/1st Vni II A:    

other voices whose slurs and articulation are but the articulation in the corresponding pas-
more lacunose but not divergent. sages for Vle(170a–171a) and Vc (174a–175a) is
The same is true for the cresc. symbols: of the

four GV marked for S Coro, only the first one     While the articulation for Vni I and II
appears in successive enunciations of S and would be entirely plausible, even because at
R; we extend the remaining three to C, T, and 163 and in all corresponding passages the
instrumental slurs and articulation diverge
37 The page numbering refers to the status of A prior to the inser- from the concomitant voices, the thematic
tion of the “Liber scriptus” second version. incipits for Vni I at 178a/3rd–179a/1st and Vle

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at 182a/3rd–183a/1st reflect the same articula- present for Vni II (172a–173a) and Vc (180a–
tion GV marked for S, C, and T Coro (there is

181a), but Vle (176a–177a) has


   

no articulation for B Coro). We therefore infer
that GV must have refined his idea of the slurs We supply and adjust the articulation for
and articulation he wanted for the strings as he these parts, replacing the caret for the  where
went along. present with an accent, in conformity with the
162a/3rd–4th S Coro A: “con espres[sione]”; we interpret concomitant vocal parts, as established in Note
this indication as valid for the successive vocal 162a–182a/1st Strings (but see also Note 169a).
entrances of S and R as well, although it can- 169a S Coro A: caret; we replace with an accent, as
not be excluded that GV intended it to refer GV did himself at 173a for C Coro and 177a for
only to this first enunciation of the subject. T Coro (marking accents directly over carets
166a C Coro A: staccati for the two ; we replace in each case); at 181a he directly supplied an
with carets in conformity with the other three accent for B Coro.
choral incipits of the subject (GV often marked 170a/3rd–4th C Coro, 174 /3rd–4th T Coro, 178/3rd–4th B
staccati as “shorthand” for carets or accents: Coro A: “legate” missing; we supply from
see Edition criteria, “Interchangeability of car- the model supplied by S Coro at 166a/3rd–4th,
ets, accents, staccato”, pp. 10–11. in accordance with the criterion established in
166a–167a/1st C Coro, 170a–171a/1st T Coro, 174a–175a/1st Note 162a–182a/1st Coro.
B Coro A: slur missing; we supply in con- 170a/3rd–171a C Coro, Vni II: for the suggested cresc.
formity with the model supplied by S Coro at symbol, see Note 166a/3rd–167a.
162a–163a/1st, in accordance with the criterion 170a/3rd–172a/1st S Coro A: two different phrasings are
established in Note 162a–182a/1st Coro. present, the first of which probably belongs
166a/3rd–167a S Coro A: the cresc. symbol is present here to an earlier cancelled version: A) a slur from
but for no other corresponding passage, either 170a/3rd to 172a/1st, erased right after the bar
vocal or instrumental, in the fugal exposition line at 171a (between the a’ and c’’); B) two
of 162a–182a. Nevertheless there is no reason to slurs, the first for 170a/3rd–4th, the second for
doubt its deliberate nature, given the absence 171a/1st–172a/1st. I-Mr and rRI1874 opted for
of any suggestion of cancellation. It is also ex- solution A (though interrupting the slur on the
tremely convincing from a musical standpoint, last eighth note of 171a). We adopt solution B,
as a means of intensifying the expressivity of extending it also to C and T, respectively at
the only chromatic element of this fugal expo- 174a/3rd–176a/1st and 178a/3rd–180a/1st.
sition. I-Mr and rRI1874 adopted it but without 171a/1st Vle, 175a/1st Vc A: no articulation is present,
extending it to the other voices. We therefore, while Vni I at 163a/1st and Vni II at 167a/1st
although with some reservation, extend it to have carets. We adopt the model supplied by
the corresponding vocal entries and the instru- the vocal parts, as well as the numerous other
ments that double these parts, which results in instrumental enunciations of the thematic
“waves” of crescendi through the four enuncia- incipit (see also Note 162a/3rd–163a/1st Vni I,
tions of the subject. 166a/3rd–167a/1st Vni II).
166a/3rd–167a Vni I, 170a/3rd–171a Vni II, 174a/3rd–175a 172a–173a C Coro A: cresc. symbol only at 173; we adjust
Vle, 178a/3rd–179a Vc A: missing and diver- based on the model of S Coro at 168a–169a,
gent slurs. For Vni I, the slur extends from according to the criterion established in Note
166a/3rd to the first  of 168; for Vni II the slur 162a–182a/1st Coro.
is missing; for Vle and Vc, the slur covers only 172a/2nd–4th Vni I A: staccati missing; we supply in con-
the two  at 174a/3rd–4th and 178a/3rd–4th formity with the corresponding Vni II at 176a
respectively (the latter due to a page turn, recto and Vle at 180, in accordance with the criterion
to verso). We supply and adjust in conformity established in Note 162a–182a/1st Strings.
with the concomitant slurs for the voices (but 173a T Coro A: slur missing; we supply in conform-
see also Note 174a/3rd–175a, 178a/3rd–179a). ity with the corresponding S Coro at 165 and B
168a C Coro A: slur missing; we supply based on Coro at 177.
the model of S Coro at 164 (as established in 174a–175a/1st B Coro A: no articulation is present;
Note 162a–182a/1st Coro), and by analogy with we supply in conformity with the previous
T Coro at 172 and B Coro at 176. entrances of S (S Coro at 162a–163a/1st and T
168a Vni II A: slur missing; we supply based on the Coro at 170a–171a/1st) and R (C Coro at 166a–
models of Vni I at 164 and Vle at 172, in ac- 167a/1st; but see Note 166a).
cordance with the criterion established in Note 174a/3rd–175a T Coro, Vle: for the suggested cresc. sym-
162a–182a/1st Strings. bol, see Note 166a/3rd–167a.
168a–169a Vni I A:     
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gent slurs, caused respectively by a page turn notes (evidently GV mistakenly carried over
(recto to verso) and a change of page (verso to the staccati from the concomitant Vni I part;
recto). We adjust in conformity with the cor- see Note 179a–181a). We adjust in conformity
responding S Coro at 166a/3rd–167a and C Coro with the corresponding Vni II at 174a/3rd–175a,
at 170a/3rd–171a, where GV’s intentions are in accordance with the criterion established in
clearly marked. Note 162a–182a/1st Strings.
175a Vc A: the slur and the accent on 1st are missing 179a–181a Vni I A: at 179a the slur is missing and there
and GV marked staccati also for the first two are additional staccati for the first two eighth
eighth notes, possibly an inadvertent anticipa- notes (as for Vc at 175a). We adjust in conform-
tion of the articulation for the thematic incipit ity with the previous enunciations of the theme
in the next section, which is characterized by by Vni I, Vni II, and Vle, as well as the succes-
greater orchestral density and dynamic con- sive entrance of Vle at 183a, which confirms
trasts. We adjust to match the previous enun- GV’s intention that the strings maintain the
ciations of the theme. same phrasing when the text becomes “Judex
175a–176a C Coro, 179a–180a T Coro A: lacunose phras- ergo…” (at least up to the change of dynamic
ing and articulation: at 184a/3rd). At 180a–181a there is a single slur
– 175a–176a: both slurs and the staccati are for the eight ; we modify based on the model
missing; obtained in accordance with the criterion estab-
– 179a–180a: the first slur begins from the first lished in Note 162a–182a/1st Strings.
eighth note in 179a; staccati in 179a and second 179a–182a Vni II A: the accent, carets, and slurs are miss-
slur in 180a are missing. We adjust in conform- ing; we supply in conformity with the corre-
ity with the model of S Coro at 171a–172a, in sponding Vni I at 175a–178a/1st, in accordance
accordance with the criterion established in with the criterion established in Note 162a–
Note 162a–182a/1st Coro. 182a/1st Strings.
176a–177a T Coro A: cresc. symbol missing; we suggest in 180a–181a B Coro A: cresc. symbol missing; we supply
conformity with the model of S Coro at 168a– based on the model of S Coro at 168a–169a, in
169a, in accordance with the criterion estab- accordance with the criterion established in
lished in Note 162a–182a/1st Coro. Note 162a–182a/1st Coro.
176a–177a Vc A: slurs and staccati missing; we supply 180a/2nd–4th C Coro A: accents missing; we supply
in conformity with the previous enunciations based on the model of S Coro at 176a, in ac-
of the theme, in accordance with the criterion cordance with the criterion established in Note
established in Note 162a–182a/1st Strings. 162a–182a/1st Coro.
176a–177a C Coro, 180a–181a T Coro A: cresc. symbols 180a/2nd–4th Vle A: slur missing; we supply in conform-
missing; we supply based on the model of S ity with the corresponding Vni II at 176a, in ac-
Coro at 172a–173a, in accordance with the crite- cordance with the criterion established in Note
rion established in Note 162a–182a/1st Coro. 162a–182a/1st Strings.
177a Vni II, 181a Vle A: slurs missing; we supply in con- 182a/3rd–183a/1st T Coro A: incomplete slur at
formity with Vni I at 173a, in accordance with 182/3rd– 4th, which is interrupted by a change
the criterion established in Note 162a–182a/1st of page (verso to recto) and does not continue
Strings. to 183a; while a slur is present for S Coro at
177a–178a/1st S Coro A: slur missing; we suggest in 162a–163/1st, we do not adopt it here in accord-
conformity with the corresponding C Coro at ance with the motivation explained in Note
181a–182a. 162a/3rd–163a/1st.
178a Vni II A: dim. symbol missing; we supply in 184a T Coro, Vle A: neither the slurs nor staccati are
conformity with the corresponding Vni I at present, but presumably GV wanted the same
174a, in accordance with the criterion estab- phrasing and articulation as in the previous
lished in Note 162a–182a/1st Strings. corresponding passages; nevertheless, given the
178a–180a C Coro A: the dim. symbol at 178a, slur at change of dynamic and orchestral texture in
179a/2nd–180a/1st, and accents at 180a/2nd–4th this bar, we suggest their integration with all
are missing; we supply based on the model due consideration for this difference.
of S Coro at 174a–176a, in accordance with 184a–186a A: there is some divergence in the position of
the criterion established in Note 162a–182a/1st the dynamic indications. For S Coro a second
Coro. superfluous f is present at 185a/1st, which we
178a/3rd–179a B Coro, Vc: for the suggested cresc. sym- suppress. Vni II and Cb both have f at 185/1st
bols, see Note 166a/3rd–167a. as well, but in this case with no prior f at
178a/3rd–179a Vle A: slur missing; at 179a, accent on 1st 184a. While there is no doubt that the f for Cb
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184/3rd (in vertical conformity with Vc), the larly the third bar; this applies to both direct
proper position of the f for Vni II cannot be and inverted presentations of the theme.
established with equal certainty: it could be an- 2) Phrasing
ticipated to 184/2nd in vertical conformity with a) Our criteria for the integration and normali-
Ob I, but in that case the f GV wrote for Vni II zation of the combined staccati and slur in the
at 186/3rd, where it marks the entrance of R in second bar of the theme are explained in Note
inversion (in octave double stops for additional 185a–212a;
emphasis), would lose its significance. We b) the length of the second slur (in the third
therefore suppress the f for Vni II at 185/1st in bar) is determined case by case according to
the conviction that GV intended the dynamic the disposition of the text beneath (see Note
to signal the entrance of the theme, whether in 202a).
direct or inverse motion. In keeping with this 3) General
logic, we extend the f for Vni II at 186a/3rd to As a general principle, when the theme appears
Vle, and suggest it for Cor, C Coro, and T Coro simultaneously in direct and inverse motion,
as well. Meanwhile, presumably the dynamic we automatically extend the slurs and articula-
level reached after the crescendo at 180a–181a tion for vertical conformity unless otherwise
will be at least mf, which we suggest for Cor I– prevented by differences in the disposition of
II at 185a and Cor III–IV at 184a. However, we the text (see Note 185a–212a).
prefer to preserve the f GV marked at 184a for 184a/3rd–213a Orch A: unlike the vocal parts (see Note
Ob I, whose actual weight of sound will inevi- 184a/3rd–213a), the instrumental parts have no
tably be less than that of the other instruments single enunciation of the theme that can serve
announcing the theme in that bar in direct (Fg as a complete and coherent model for slurs and
I–II and III–IV, Vc, Cb) and inverse (Fl I at the articulation (I-Mr and pUS-Cso largely reflect
upper octave, Cl I, Vni I) motion. the same incongruencies). We can, however,
184a/3rd–4th S and B Coro A: accents; we replace with construct a model through reciprocal compari-
carets, as per the other appearances of the son of those statements where the melodic con-
theme. For S Coro there is also a slur for the tour is the same (allowing for intervallic adjust-
two , which has no exact counterpart in any ment where necessary), applying the following
other thematic incipit: the only two other general criteria for editorial intervention:
entries with a slur (S Coro at 162a and T Coro a) given the contrapuntal nature of this pas-
at 182a) have it extending to the downbeat of sage, we proceed in terms of function rather
the next measure (but see also Note 182a/3rd– than adopt the usual extension of expressive
183a/1st). We suppress this slur in accord- indications by instrumental family: unison
ance with the motivation explained in Note parts may reciprocally share slurs and articu-
162a/3rd–163a/1st. lation even if they do not belong to the same
184a/3rd–213a Coro A: the phrasing and articulation family (the presence of a symbol in one part
for the theme and successive variants in this is sufficient for its extension to the other uni-
stretto section, as represented by B and S Coro son parts);
at 184a/3rd–186a (direct and inverted respec- b) the model of articulation for the theme is
tively), are frequently lacunose and divergent determined through reciprocal comparison of
(I-Mr and rRI1874 largely reflect the same incon- the parts, with silent integration only where
gruencies). We have established the following the melodic contour is the same (allowing for
general criteria for editorial intervention: intervallic adjustment where necessary); this
1) Articulation applies to both direct and inverted presenta-
a) GV marked accents for the two  of S and B tions of the theme;
Coro at 184a/3rd– 4th, but they are carets in all c) wherever the head of the theme (whether
successive entries (with the exception of S Coro S or R; direct or inverted) is reasonably close
at 212a; see the relative Note); we therefore to the original form, we silently integrate the
adopt carets throughout; articulation where it is missing, but evaluate
b) wherever the head of the theme (whether the differences between carets, accents, and
S or R; direct or inverted) is reasonably close staccati and only normalize case by case where
to the model, we integrate and normalize the appropriate (see Note 188a/3rd–192a);
articulation according to the prevalent pattern; d) in the second bar of the theme, the first 
c) the accent for B Coro at 186a/1st is silently often lacks a staccato, similar to the vocal parts
extended only when the thematic contour is (but see Note 185a–212a); nevertheless, as GV
the same (allowing for intervallic adjustment worked through the notation of this section he
where necessary) as at 184a/3rd–186a, particu- gradually came to add the staccato, such that

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it is present more often than not. We therefore vocal and instrumental parts, where the latter
respect this divergence with the voices. Also, prevalently have a staccato for the first  (see
in accordance with the criterion established Note 184a/3rd–213a Orch, d). Specific passages
in section a), when it is present in one part are discussed in the following Notes.
we extend it reciprocally to the other unison b) Slurs: analogous inconsistencies occur in
instrumental parts, suggesting its integration the length of the slur in the second bar of
with square brackets only when entirely miss- the theme: sometimes it covers all five eighth
ing (see 185a). notes, others only the last four. At first the
Specific cases of more doubtful solution are longer slur would seem to be unrelated to the
discussed in the following Notes. presence or not of a staccato for the first :
185a B Coro A: the slur begins from the first eighth for example, at 185a (S and B Coro) there is a
note; we modify in conformity with previous longer slur and no staccato, whereas at 187a (C
corresponding appearances of the theme, in ac- and T Coro) GV marked both the longer slur
cordance with the criterion established in Note and a staccato. After the beginning of the first
185a–212a, b. stretto at 188a, however, the situation appears
185a–212a Coro A: incongruencies of phrasing and articu- to become more regular: while the first entry
lation: (S Coro) has the longer slur at 189a, the follow-
a) Staccati: within the rhythmic unit ing three entries have the shorter slur (all four
        – an integral part of the with no staccato for the first ). It is extremely
theme, whether in direct or inverted motion likely that the slur for the syllabic model (with
– the first  does not always carry a stac- no staccato for the first ) should be limited
cato. GV’s intentions would appear to become only to the notes with staccati in the configura-
more evident, however, toward the end of the tion (see also the four thematic entries in the
section. It seems reasonable, if arguable, to exposition of the fugue at 162a–182a, as well
deduce that the staccato for this note should be as S Coro at 179a and T Coro at 183a). Equally
applied according to the text beneath. There is probable is GV’s intention that the slur should
no doubt that when the text for the theme is cover all five notes when a staccato is present
“Judex ergo…” GV did not want a staccato for for the first  (in fact the only exception occurs
the first  (it is consistently absent in all seven at 201a for C Coro, where he marked a staccato
enunciations of “Judex ergo” between 179a and for the first  but a shorter slur for the follow-
192a). Where the text is different but a syllable ing four notes). It should also be remembered
is similarly present for the first , the logical that notational practices were notoriously
conclusion would be to adopt this same pattern imprecise in this period, so much so that the
(with no staccato), as it does in fact occur at actual length of these kinds of slurs might be
199a (S and T Coro), 203a (S and T Coro), and scarcely significant. We therefore adopt the
212a (C Coro), corresponding to “[nil inul]- five-note slur for five staccati (the melismatic
tum”. Nevertheless GV did mark a staccato for model) and the four-note slur for four staccati
this very same model of syllabic disposition of (the syllabic model).
text at 187a (C and T Coro), 195a (B Coro), and Specific passages are discussed in the follow-
211a (T Coro), while at 201a (C and B Coro), ing Notes.
where the text is identical, one part has the 185a/1st S Coro A: accent missing; we supply in ac-
staccato (C Coro) but the other does not (B cordance with the criteria established in Note
Coro). Therefore, from a statistical perspective 184/3rd–213a Coro 1, b.
the two options are equivalent. Even so, GV 185a/1st–2nd Ob, Cor I, Vni II A: articulation missing; we
seems to have reserved the staccato for the supply based on the model of Cor I at 203a.
first  where a melisma is involved, to ensure 185a/2nd S Coro: for the suggested staccato, see Note
a correct articulation of the note when it has 185a–212a, a.
no separate syllable (see the three entrances of 185a/2nd Orch: for the suggested staccato in those in-
the stretto at 207a–211a) – although it should be strumental parts with a sequence of five eighth
observed that there is no staccato for the first notes, see Note 184a/3rd–213a Orch, d.
 at 193a (S Coro), 194a (C Coro), 196a (T Coro), 186a/2nd T Coro A: g; we replace with the more harmon-
and 197a (S Coro). With all due caution, we opt ically convincing b, in vertical conformity with
for a staccato only in the presence of a melis- Cor III–IV and Vle. I-Mr and rRI1874 follow A.
ma, otherwise omitting it when the context 186a/3rd–4th C Coro A: carets missing; we supply in
is syllabic. Because we hypothesize that the accordance with the criteria established in Note
reason for this distinction is based on the text 184a/3rd–213a Coro, 1, a.
setting, we maintain divergences between the 187a–188a B Coro, Fg I–II (Fg III–IV = Fg I–II), Cb (Vc=Cb)

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A: divergent slurs and articulation: for Cb the probably for lack of ink; we extend it to the
slur at 187a extends to 188a/1st, where there is end of the bar and supply for vertical conform-
no accent, and there are staccati for both eighth ity to Fl at the octave above, where it is miss-
notes at 188/2nd. We prefer the more convinc- ing. The second slur for these two instruments
ing reading of Fg I–II, which proposes the at 190a is present for Cl but missing for Fl,
same combined slur and staccati for the four  while the third slur at 191a–192a/1st is present
at 187a that are present in the complete theme for Fl but missing for Cl; here again, we sup-
(see 165a etc.), and we suggest this solution for ply reciprocally for vertical conformity. The
B Coro as well. thematic incipits for Ob I at 190a–191a and Fg
187a–188a Cor III–IV A: GV neglected to continue the III at 191a–192a have no slur; we supply based
double stems in these bars following a page on the model of Fg I at 189a–190a.
turn (recto to verso). 188a/3rd–193a Winds A: GV evidently gauged the ppp he
187a/2nd C and T Coro A: staccato for the first ; we carefully marked for Fl and Cl at 188a so that
suppress in accordance with the criteria es- their c’’–c’’’ octave does not overwhelm the
tablished in Note 185a–212a, a (as observed in concurrent p for S Coro (I-Mr replaced the ppp
Note 185a–212a, b, it is significant that the slur for Fl with p and eliminated the dynamic for
in this bar covers all five eighth notes). Cl). We therefore find this precautionary meas-
188a/1st C and T Coro A: accents missing; we supply ure to be unnecessary for the successive “Solo”
in accordance with the criterion established in woodwind entries, which occur in mid-register
Note 184/3rd–213a Coro, 1, c. and therefore do not present the same risk for
188a/3rd–192a Woodwinds A: each of the woodwind the concomitant p vocal entries. We also sug-
parts in this passage presents partial and di- gest p for Cor III at 193a, compatible with the
vergent phrasing and articulation. We integrate other non-thematic parts (T and B Coro, Fg).
and normalize these expressive indications for 188a/4th C Coro A: accent missing; we supply for verti-
the first two bars of the theme, in accordance cal conformity with T Coro and in accordance
with the criteria established in Note 184a/3rd– with the criterion established in Note 184a/3rd–
213a Orch, c and d. With regard to the articula- 213a Coro, 3.
tion for the head of the theme, we adopt 189a S Coro A: the slur begins from the first ; we


adjust to match the previous analogous the-
the model      , for which there is no
matic slurs, in accordance with the criterion
complete example in this passage:
established in Note 185a–212a, b.


188a/3rd–189a/1st Fl:      ; Cl: no articula- 189a–190a/1st T Coro, 190a–191a/1st C Coro A: both carets
tion; and the accent are missing; we supply based
respectively on the models of S Coro at 188a–
189a/3rd–190a/1st Fg I:      ;
189a/1st and B Coro at 191a–192/1st, and in ac-

190a/3rd–191a/1st Ob:     ; cordance with the criterion established in Note
184a/3rd–213a Coro, 1, b.

191a/3rd–192a/1st Fg III:    190a C Coro, 191a B Coro A: entry dynamic indication
We have had multiple occasions to observe missing; we extend p from S Coro at 188a and
how GV would often use staccati, accents, and T Coro at 189a.
carets interchangeably, in a kind of “short- 191a/3rd–4th B Coro A: anomalous slur, unconfirmed in
hand” manner (see “Edition criteria”, pp. 10–11). the other thematic incipits; we suppress (see
Nevertheless the two carets for Fl at 188a seem also Note 182a/3rd–183a/1st).
to be a deliberate choice: with the exclusion of 192a/3rd–4th Fl A: carets; we replace with accents in
188a–191a, GV predominantly – if with oc- vertical conformity with Cl (see also Note
casional lacunae – marked carets when the 188a/3rd–192a).
passage in question falls into some category of 193a/2nd S Coro: for the suggested staccato, see Note
“piano”, and accents when “forte”; consequent- 185a–212a, a.
ly we find these carets, while under-represented 193a/4th S Coro, Fl, Cl I, Vni I A, I-Mr: neither source
in this particular passage, to be pertinent for has an accidental for the (sounding) e’’/e’’’; we
the context, and we extend them to the other suggest a  with the support of rRI1874 and
three thematic incipits in 189a–191a. pUS-Cso.
The slurs in this passage are also conspicu- 194a C Coro: for the suggested staccato and slur, see
ously lacunose for these instruments. Only Fg Note 185a–212a.
I presents a complete model for the thematic 194a/3rd B Coro A: GV marked the f at 195a/1st follow-
incipit, at 189a–190a. For Cl the first slur from ing a page turn (recto to verso); we anticipate to
188a/3rd stops at the first  in 189a, though coincide with the new thematic entry.

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195a/2nd B Coro A: staccato for the first ; we suppress between the f and a. At 200a the slur for S Coro
in accordance with the criteria established in (T Coro has no slur) includes all the notes for
Note 185a–212a, a; for the suggested slur, see the syllable “[rema]-ne-[bit]” (1st– 4th), while at
Note 185a–212a, b. 188a, in keeping with this same principle, the
196a T Coro: for the suggested staccato and slur, see slurs for C and T Coro includes those notes for
Note 185a–212a, a. the syllables “[appa]-re-[bit]” and “[rema]-ne-
196a/1st–2nd Cor A: anomalous slur, unconfirmed in the [bit]” (1st–3rd). Consequently we may logically
unison Fg I or Vle; we suppress. deduce that in this case the slur should assume
197a/2nd S Coro: for the suggested staccato, see Note the same function, uniting all of the notes sung
185a–212a, a. to the same syllable regardless of its material
198a/1st C Coro A: accent missing; we supply in ac- length, and therefore modify the slurs in this
cordance with the criteria established in Note bar to match S Coro at 200a.
184a/3rd–213a Coro, 1 a. 202a–204a/1st T Coro A: both carets and both accents
199a S Coro A: the slur begins from the first ; we missing; we supply in accordance with the
modify in accordance with the criteria estab- criteria established in Note 184a/3rd–213a Coro,
lished in Note 185a–212a, b. 1b.
199a–205a Orch A: substantial lacunae in the articulation 202a/1st C and B Coro A: accents missing; we supply
for this passage (I-Mr and pUS-Cso largely re- in accordance with the criterion established in
flect the same incongruencies); given its focus Note 184/3rd–213a Coro, 1c.
on thematic elements that have already been 203a/1st S Coro A: accent missing; we supply in ac-
repeated numerous times, however, we are cordance with the criterion established in Note
able to integrate the missing articulation for all 184a/3rd–213a Coro, 1b.
thematic parts in accordance with the criteria 204a C and T Coro A: f; we (like I-Mr e rRI1874)
established in Note 184a/3rd–213a Orch. In ad- modify to ff in vertical conformity with S and
dition, the prevalently homorhythmic character B Coro, confirmed by ff present for the strings.
here allows us to extend this same articulation 204a–205a Coro A: missing – but not divergent – slurs,
to rhythmically identical but melodically differ- staccati, and accents. While GV’s intentions in
ent parts. With regard to the dissimilar rhyth- this homorhythmic (if not perfectly homosyl-
mic element at 199a (Fl II, Cor I, Trb), 201a (Cl labic) passage are clear regarding the slurs
II, Cor II and IV), and 203a (Fl II, Cor I, Trb), a and staccati, such that we are able to integrate
complete model for the (otherwise extremely them silently, he marked only one accent, for S
lacunose) articulation is present for Cor II at Coro at 204a/1st, therefore demanding greater
201a and for Cor I a 203a. At 204a–205a the caution. We supply the accent for T Coro at
only complete model is Vni I, but it is sufficient 204a/1st in accordance with the criterion estab-
as a template for integration where necessary lished in Note 184a/3rd–213a Coro, 1c, and sug-
to all other instrumental parts in these two gest all of the others by virtue of the orchestral
bars. context (but see Note 199a–205a).
199a/1st S Coro A: accent missing; we supply in ac- 206a Orch A: GV marked only one symbol on 1st,
cordance with the criteria established in Note above Vni I, that could be interpreted as either
184a/3rd–213a Coro, 3. a large accent (as construed in I-Mr) or a
200a T Coro A: accent and slur missing; we supply short diminuendo. We prefer the latter, which
in vertical conformity with S Coro (inverted functions as a transition to the new dynamic
theme), in accordance with the criteria estab- level, and suggest its vertical extension to all
lished in Note 184a/3rd–213a Coro, 1c and 3. instruments with  in this bar. On 2nd there
201a Fg I A: isolated accent, unconfirmed for the are staccati only for Trb I and III and Vni II
unison Cor III or Vle, nor for Fg II and III–IV (also possibly for Cor III–IV), while the accents
or Cb (Vc = Cb) at the corresponding 203a; we on 3rd and 4th are present for Vni II and Vle
suppress. alone. Given the complete model GV marked
201a/1st C Coro A: accent missing; we supply in ac- for Vni II, we extend this same articulation
cordance with the criterion established in Note vertically to the other homorhythmic parts.
184a/3rd–213a Coro, 3. 207a–212a Orch A: lacunose and divergent articulation for
201a/2nd C Coro A: staccato for the first ; we suppress the thematic instrumental parts; we integrate
in accordance with the criteria established in and normalize in accordance with the criteria
Note 185a–212a, a. established in Note 184a/3rd–213a Orch.
202a C and B Coro A: both slurs are imprecisely 208a, 210a S Coro A: at 208a the slur begins from the
marked: the one for C Coro covers 1st–2nd, first note of the bar, and at 210a it would ap-
while for B Coro it begins after the c and stops pear to be the same from its form and posi-

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tion, although only the latter half is clear. 211a/2nd T Coro A: staccato for the first , and the slur
Nevertheless, given that the slur for T Coro at begins from this note as well; we suppress the
209a follows the melismatic model GV marked staccato and modify the slur in accordance
elsewhere for this melodic segment, we modify with the syllabic model for this melodic seg-
these two slurs in accordance with the criteria ment, in accordance with criteria established in
established in Note 185a–212a, b. Note 185a–212a, a.
208a/4th T Coro A: accent; we replace with a caret in 211a/3rd–4th Ob, Vni II A: accents above Ob and staccati
conformity with the other entries in this con- below; we replace with carets and extend for
cluding section (S Coro at 207 and 209; T Coro vertical uniformity to the unison Vni II (where
at 210; C Coro at 211). no articulation is present), in accordance with
209a Vni II A: no slur or articulation; we suggest the criterion established in Note 184a/3rd–213a
both in vertical conformity with the unison Ob Orch, a.
(but see also Note 209a/4th). 212a/1st–2nd S Coro A: accents; despite the rhythmic
209a/1st T Coro, 212a/1st C Coro A: both accents miss- displacement of this thematic entry, its motivic
ing; we supply in accordance with the criterion identity is clear and confirmed by the articula-
established in Note 184a/3rd–213a Coro, 1b. tion for the unison Vni I; we replace with car-
209a/4th Ob A: staccato for the first eighth note (no ets, in accordance with the criteria established
articulation is present in this bar for the unison in Note 184a/3rd–213a Coro, 1b.
Vni II), with no apparent musical sense; we 212a/3rd–4th Fg I A: staccati missing; we supply in verti-
suppress. I-Mr follows A; pUS-Cso added a cal conformity with the unison Vle.
staccato for the second eighth note as well. 213a/2nd Fl, Cl A: accent for Fl, no articulation for Cl; we
210a–213a Fg II, III–IV A: slur missing; we supply in suggest the more musically plausible staccato
vertical conformity with Cb (Vc = Cb), in ac- GV marked for the unison Vni I.
cordance with the criterion established in Note 213a/3rd–4th Fl, Vni II A: carets; we replace with accents
184a/3rd–213a Orch, a. in vertical conformity with Ob, Cl, and Vni I.
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