A2 History Essay Feedback Sheet

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Level 1: (0-6)
2 Your answer is descriptive and only loosely linked to the question or focused on a single part of
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4 the question. If there is an argument it is not well supported and probably generalised. Weak
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written and communication skills.
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8 Level 2: (7-15)
9 You have shown some understanding of the question. Much of your answer will be descriptive
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11 with a few links to the question or there will be argument with inadequate support. You show
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13 limited understanding of historical interpretations. Your English may be weak and poorly
14 structured.
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17 Level 3: (16-25)
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19 You have understood the question and have provided some argument, backed up with relevant
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evidence, but your answer lacks depth or balance. You have shown some understanding of
22 different historical interpretations. Your answer is clearly expressed and reasonably well-
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24 structured.
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Level 4: (26-37)
29 Your answer includes a range of arguments and supporting detail, demonstrating a very good
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31 understanding of the demands of the question. You show awareness of different historical
32 interpretations and debate. You have produced a sustained, balanced argument supported with
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34 carefully selected evidence and you have reached a judgement. Your answer is well-organised
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36 and you display good skills of written communication.
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38 Level 5: (38-45)
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40 Your answer includes a wide-range of carefully selected arguments and supporting detail
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42 interwoven to demonstrate a sophisticated overview of the question. You display conceptual
43 depth, sustained and independent judgement and a good understanding of different historical
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45 interpretations and debate. Your answer is well-structured and fluent.
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