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English Composition I

OUTLINE
Title: Water: next war trigger
Topic Sentence: “Water scarcity will unleash war amongst many countries in a near future”
Supporting idea 1: Importance of water, water scarcity
 Supporting Detail 1: water in everyday life
 Supporting Detail 2: water amounts available on earth

Supporting idea 2: Few water, conflicts


 Supporting Detail 1: Indian population and water usage
 Supporting Detail 2: Pakistani economy, origin of the conflict

Conclusion: state of the conflict, role of China, prepare for the future

Water: next war trigger


by David H.

“Water scarcity will unleash war amongst many countries in a near future. Firstly, water is

the most valuable resource on earth, necessary for most daily activities: from taking a shower after

work, watering crops that provide us with food, to generating power. Moreover, it is one of the rarest

resources considering that 97% of it is salty, while only 1% can be used directly; the rest is polluted,

so it is precious but also disputed. Now, the best example of how water scarcity can lead to conflicts

is the one of India and Pakistan. On the one hand, India counts on numerous rivers, most of them are

polluted, a big concern for a country with 1,3 billion inhabitants. Pakistan, on the other hand, has

less rivers —less people, too (nearly 200 millions)—, but relies almost exclusively on its agriculture

economy, for which water is a must. The recent dispute started since India built dams for the

construction of 3 hydroelectric plants, diverting water before entering Pakistani territory. The

situation is so tense, that it has escalated to international courts, like the Hague, with, unfortunately,

no solution at sight this far. Finally, that both countries possess nuclear weapons makes one fear the

worst. Luckily for the Pakistani, they have an important ally in China; otherwise they would be easily

outnumbered by Indians by 6:1 in an eventual war. As a conclusion, we humans must rethink and

change the way we deal with water as to prevent future wars from happening.”

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