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The Anthropocene
Lyric: An Affective
Geography of Poetry,
Person, Place
Tom Bristow
University of Melbourne, Australia
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Contents
Acknowledgements ix
Introduction 1
Affective geography: poetry, person, place 2
Locating poetry in the Anthropocene 3
Ecopoetics and geocriticism 4
Place perception 5
More-than-human worlds 6
Anthropocene emotion 7
A different literary geography:
earth scripts 8
Literature and space 9
After Marxist geography 11
An Anthropocene paradigm of
place-based personhood 12
Anthropocene counterpoint 15
A renewed poetics of place 18
1 Jam Tree Gully 19
Affective geography: a preface 21
Attributes and affects: minority
geographies 23
The world of the jam tree 23
Decolonised pastoral 24
Location as focal point 26
Thresholds of knowing 29
‘My plastic emotions’ or not ideas about
things 32
Affective arrays 33
Negative dialectics and a sacred kingfisher 34
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Conclusion 107
Poems of our climate 108
A word on history 109
A note on belonging 110
A sketch of selfhood 111
Reflections on Anthropocene personhood 113
Territory (as situatedness) 115
Estrangement (as settledness) 119
Identification (as discreteness) 120
Where next for the lyric imagination? 122
Glossary 124
Bibliography 130
Index 138
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Acknowledgements
The author acknowledges the following publications in
which some arguments of The Anthropocene Lyric first
appeared, sometimes in a slightly different form: Aus-
tralasian Journal of Ecocriticism and Cultural Ecology; Green
Letters: Studies in Ecocriticism; Scottish Literary Review;
Symbiosis: A Journal of Transatlantic Literary and Cultural
Relations; and Transnational Literature.
The Anthropocene Lyric is the result of four months’
work. It was drafted during a writing retreat at Kioloa
Coastal Campus of the Australian National University
(2013); the copy was revised during a research fellowship
at the Humanities Research Centre, Australian National
University (2014), and while I was a visiting lecturer in the
Department of English, University of British Columbia
(2014). I would like to thank the Australian National
University, the Australian Research Council Centre of
Excellence for the History of Emotions, the Edith and
Joy London Foundation, and the University of British
Columbia.
This book would not have been possible without the
assistance and encouragement of Sophie Ainscough,
Xanthe Ashburner, Tully Barnett, Robyn Bartel, Ruth Blair,
David Borthwick, John Burnside, Sally Bushell, Richard
Cavell, David Cooper, Charles Dawson, Thom van Dooren,
Benjamin Doyle, Sumathi Ellappan, Rachel Fensham,
Henning Fjørtoft, Louisa Gairn, Debjani Ganguly, Greg
Garrard, Paul Gibbard, Alan Gillis, Stephen Guy-Bray,
Stephen Harris, Barbara Holloway, Greg Horsley, Graham
Huggan, Tony Hughes-d’Aeth, Vidhya Jayaprakash, John
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Abstract: Reconsidering the subject of poetry in the context
of the Anthropocene discloses the contemporary lyric as an
emotional mode of subject formation and place-making.
The first section reveals how a new collocation of person
and place invite us to consider a fresh formation in lyric
poetry that assembles ‘place perception’, ‘more-than-human
worlds’, and ‘Anthropocene emotion’ to rethink the age
of the human in terms other than autonomy and self-
determination. The second section then revisits the poetics
of place within an enlarged sense of literary geography
to offer the first ecocritical paradigm of Anthropocene
personhood.
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Words and phrases in bold can be found in the glossary.
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Perilinguistic means ‘around language’, and refers to poetry’s capacity to evoke moods and
sensory states.
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Place perception
This small book has a simple underlying argument: the discipline of
geography can learn from the way poetry implicitly articulates the sig-
nificance of the experience of place to human emotions. This is how the
lyric gives expression to the power of receiving and interpreting a sense
of place through the creations of others. Geographers seek to understand
the complexities behind the distribution of species, places and regions,
human–land relations, and the complexities accounted for by the earth
sciences (spheres and systems). I directly address that discipline-specific
focal point.
The analysis of poetry in this context is thus oriented towards onto-
logical concerns of our lifeworlds, but also with how poetry inhabits a
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More-than-human worlds
Ecopoetics, mobilised from this point onwards, is a synonym for
contemporary poetry that exhibits a profound sense of selfhood as
Worldliness. My approach will be to acknowledge the importance
of the more-than-human world in the light of the Anthropocene: a
context that is problematically defined by human centrality, power and
import, which brings into relief other possible worlds through their very
absence. The hubris of human existence and how we have conceived our
agency has plummeted our future selves into mere shadows of what we
can be. Sarah Whatmore coined the term ‘more-than-human’ as a focal
alternative to the prevailing human/non-human perspective in bio (life)
and geo (earth); it celebrates the ‘livingness’ of the world, in which life is
technologically molten (Whatmore, 2006). It is in this space that we are
required to rethink our personhood within a larger domain of life.
Lyricism is expansive in Jam Tree Gully, Gift Songs, and Sleepwalk
on the Severn, and evokes a readier emotional response to place than
the rhythms of music alone, appealing to intellectual intricacies and
spiritual suggestions. Lyricism here is neither map nor guidebook to
selfhood, nor does it delineate mind-body unity within landscapes that
collapse a foreground-background distinction. The conquering gaze has
been set aside. The poems under view invoke a fresh Standpoint that is
keen to commute a quotidian sense of place into one that is alert to the
environmental minutiae and contingencies of particular locales; and
yet these micro-knowledges are harnessed by an observational Stance
that is washed through with either historical or ecological context, and
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Anthropocene emotion
These three poets harness the capacity of the lyric as an embodied view
of life conceived afresh to redress human–nature relations within a series
of emotional contours, intellectual dispositions and broad environmen-
tal contexts. ‘Human–nature relations’ is thus considered a false critical
compound: ‘more than human worldliness’ replaces this episteme as we
move towards a progressive lyricism of the Anthropocene. Place-making
by humans within the more-than-human world in our historical moment
is necessarily rewritten in terms of a looming darkness, of ‘imminent and
unhappy endings’ where we are becoming ‘spectators of our own demise’
(Rose, 2013). Such making, however, can be coloured with human empa-
thy for our earth others, which is imaginatively checked by suspended
consciousness, sensitivity to presence, affective historical acuity and the
expansion of the soul.
Our three collections tend to a particular aesthetic medium in which
we function as humans with the greatest sympathy and felicity, where we
reflect on the fallacies of security and property, and locate modes of feel-
ing in which reflexive moments upon our critical faculties denote points
of distrust, frustration and non-relation. Here we find ourselves drawing
back from transcendent vision to realise new politics ‘in a way that holds
on to the materiality of the everyday world’ (Salleh, 2005, p. 9). And this
world, we find, is increasingly of our making.
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into our cultural imaginary, which informs our disposition to the place.
There is a lot to consider here. Let’s begin.
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dominant unit of (human) survival from the individual and the domestic
to the social and the environmental; it points towards humans as spe-
cies alongside other species but it must resist cultural homogenisation
through sensitivity to difference and local nuance (biological and cul-
tural), which the focus at the level of species (as with the Anthropocene)
might neglect. The new ecological impulse promotes four areas of study
understood in the humanities as potentially dissident sites of philosophi-
cal and ethical resistance to dominant cultural modes of thinking.
Once clearly articulated and illustrated by various fields in the
humanities – particularly literature, history and philosophy – these
four areas of study can be taken to the question of geography to reframe
anthropocentrism in the Anthropocene. They are as follows:
(i) situatedness – how the human is situated within its habitat:
considering evolutionary processes of adaptation, how environments
restrict and afford particular life forms and life ways, how a (less
biologically informed) sense of the production of space articulates
the ways humans creatively move through more-than-human spaces,
and how we make places out of our individualised, community-
based, globalised and more-than-human relations (and imaginaries);
(ii) settledness – how ‘home’ is defined and constructed: a question
that ranges from how we feel at home in ourselves and at home
in physical spaces that are interconnected to planetary systems –
drawing from the amount of time and quality of experiences that
we have dwelt within and encountered the more-than-human in
these spaces or remained solitary; how we make emotional and
territorial signposts in our personal memories and in cultural
memory; how heritage industries both portend constructed
identity narratives with various nuances that operate both by
stealth and by imposition, and register biodiversity, ecosystem
services, regional qualities of environments (and how this industry
is complicit with the governance of these qualities); the degrees to
which such identities and registers either fail or succeed to increase
emotional literacy and ecological wisdom for local and global
projects in the context of the Anthropocene;
(iii) discreteness – where (or whether) borders or divisions exists
between mind and body, body and world, human and other, space
and place: here, conceptual, biological and cultural formations
are reviewed and deconstructed in an archaeology of human
sense making (based on a compressed sense of situatedness
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Guattari, F. (2008). The Three Ecologies (new ed.), London: Continuum.
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Ursula Heise argues that the provision of ecological security needs to become a core
component of responsible global citizenship, and thus challenges the localism of much
ecocriticism concerning home places. See Heise, U. K. (2008). Sense of Place and Sense of
Planet: The Environmental Imagination of the Global, Oxford: Oxford University Press.
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Anthropocene counterpoint
Alice Oswald, John Kinsella and John Burnside inquire into the various
ways we make connections with places, and how place informs our modes
of connection to, respect for, and movement through space. These poets
are concerned with interiorised subjectivity and its potential relation-
ship with an external world. They are interested in the conception of this
problem for it can permit a false dichotomy between nature and culture;
it can establish a two-fold dualism between mind and world, human and
other that underlines a binary opposition between thinking and feeling
while also endorsing a Cartesian split between affect (conceived as raw
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Abstract: I argue that emphases on personal, felt
experiences in John Kinsella’s Jam Tree Gully enact the
simultaneous writing of habitat and pained husbandry in
the WA landscape; it is a strategy that delimits the ethical
grounds from which we can think of our limited pacts
with others. This entails observing Kinsella’s relationship
between ideas and things, referents in the landscape scene
of domesticity and community, before gesturing towards
a renewed sense of empathy and pragmatism for the
Anthropocene.
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At the time of writing, Jam Tree Gully 2 and 3 were separate volumes emerging as Firebreaks;
Jam Tree Gully 4, a parallel piece to the trilogy (rather than an ending) was in the process
of composition. Poems cited in this chapter are from volume 1 unless otherwise stated.
References to unpublished material are made with thanks to John Kinsella.
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I want to be sensitive to the gully’s cultural history and its particular
capacities to afford a home to the Ryan and Kinsella family, which brings
to light daily pragmatic challenges of settling their block of land under
increasing ecological pressure. The location speaks explicitly of destroyed
landscapes, the loss of sacred sites, toxic pastoral and climate change.
The first section of this chapter argues that the emphasis on personal, felt
experience in Jam Tree Gully enacts the making of habitat underscored
with the song of environmental destruction coupled with a pained hus-
bandry in the WA landscape. Subjects speak of their joy and terror as
they contribute to the tales about the space, its buildings, the flora and
fauna; they harness the sweeping views that drop into the gully and the
breezes that carry mellifluent birdcalls and the estrangement of fire. In
the next section that is attentive to global (international) and local (WA)
relations, Kinsella’s mode of engagement with landscape is discussed in
terms of ecology and emotion which combine into a vitalised geometry
that fleshes out the experience of place.
I move on to argue that an emphasis on the properties and relations
of things in discrete points in space (animals, birds, people, objects in
the environment) betokens an affective geography that clarifies degrees
of involvement with others in place. I use this as a platform to look at
Kinsella’s relationship between ideas and things, referents in the land-
scape scene of domestic husbandry constituting a climate-sensitive
autoethnography that stabilises an atmospheric sense of subjective place
(Bristow, 2013).
The chapter closes with a renewed sense of empathy and pragmatism
for the Anthropocene. I suggest that there is something more entrancing
than local detail in Kinsella’s Anthropocene expression of a more-than-
human world; location and craftwork register as one and the same,
2
See Kinsella, J. (2013c). ‘Property Is Theft’ Doesn’t Belong to Proudhon, in J. Kinsella, &
G. Collier (Eds.), Spatial Relations: Essays, Reviews, Commentaries, and Choreography (Vol. 2,
pp. 383–385), Amsterdam: Rodopi.
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delimiting ethical grounds from which we can evaluate our limited pacts
with others.3
Jam trees, Acacia acuminata, are named for their smell, reminiscent
of berries when burning. The non-human other, a genus of shrubs,
defines the sensory location for Jam Tree Gully. They, not human his-
tory, are its central characteristic. And yet the descriptive name taken
from a property of something only evident under certain conditions
(the emission of the smell of raspberries under heat) metonym-
ically invokes climate change and, by extension, human practice.
Furthermore, this topnym is a potential symbol of things to come: the
ever-present threat of fire in the dry landscape, which is an absolute
pressure within the wheatbelt. In Jam Tree Gully, Kinsella’s focus on
nature suggests human presence.
3
This combination is duly detailed across a number of Kinsella’s volumes in Mengham, R.,
& Phillips, G. (Eds.), (2000). Fairly Obsessive: Essays on the Works of John Kinsella, Perth:
Centre for Studies in Australian Literature.
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The symbolic world within the jam tree is a world that has heralded
devastation since the first European pastoralists projected their fallible
sense of space onto the location. The conditions that lie in the wake of
colonialism and contemporary bush clearing (for farming, leisure and
real estate) subtend the short-sighted and disconnected situational eth-
ics of the dwellers in the domain. The tempo of Kinsella’s lyrical ‘I’ is
deeply committed to moral fibre; his poetics is acutely aligned to the
phenomenon of firestorms, owing to the microclimates of ill-conceived
husbandry over time. The politics of custodianship in this light entails
‘being part of a mantra of witness and empowerment’ (Kinsella, 2010,
p. 3). The collection directly answers the problem of those ‘glimpses
of the incidental and discounted dimensions of imperialism’, as Tom
Griffiths calls them, that we come across in our research into the history
of land use in Australia (Griffiths, 1997). How might these glimpses take
us back to the nature of economies, the arena of habitat, competition;
do we need a sense of the countryside as ‘environment’ and the sense
of nature as ‘ecology’ as provided by ecocriticism, here?4 And if so,
can these refinements in literacy help us speak of bonds, connection,
disconnection and loss; do they infer or embody emotion, place? These
compelling questions colour the anarchical ethos of Kinsella’s project
that elects broad surveying of the domain over narrow accountability.
Decolonised pastoral
The situated microknowledge that is Jam Tree Gully is linked to the ques-
tion of the task of preserving what little life exists in the site without
repeating the impact of colonial history through a practical husbandry.
Kinsella’s interpretation of pastoral remarks upon the translation of
spatial dynamics from its European forebears (control, order, cultural
determinism) to the Australian context (destruction, dispossession,
exclusion). The displacement and relocation of class conflict in the white
imaginary – the settlement of WA – is further troubled by the presence
of indigenous peoples in place of occupation and settlement. In this light,
a new world pastoral of the bottom–up, decolonised by a minority mode
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See Gifford, T. (2013). Pastoral, Anti-Pastoral, and Post-Pastoral, in L. Westling (Ed.), The
Cambridge Companion to Literature and the Environment (pp. 17–30), Cambridge: Cambridge
University Press.
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For all the emphasis on place, Jam Tree Gully is an exegesis of personhood.
And yet events in the text are responses to spatial stimuli; they foreground
referents and ecological contexts that herald a literary-material tropism.
Kinsella’s referents are always-already active agents. In this poem, the
non-native plant is equal to the human subject at least in terms of survey-
ing the scene – but do they see eye-to-eye, one is expected to ask? Human
hubris, thus derailed from overseer to displaced personhood sketched
out horizontally not vertically, invokes a sense of freedom that comes
from the unpacking of security (to be fixed in place) and embracing the
various moments that reside in these spaces. This complex ground turns
human subjects into objects for contemplation and reflection.
One of these turnings in the mind, the phenomenological moment
entertaining and ruminating over the object in view, only comprehends
images rather than securing the meaning of an image on the way to
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It is unfortunate that there is not room in this study to outline Kinsella’s International
Regionalism. For more information see Kinsella, J. (1998). International Regionalism and
Poetryetc. Retrieved 23 May 2014 from http://www.johnkinsella.org/essays/international.
html; Kinsella, J. (2007). Disclosed Poetics: Beyond Landscape and Lyricism, Manchester:
Manchester University Press.
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The biosphere
keeps the particles of the dead
close to prayers, indifference, non-
belief. Atmosphere prevents
them being lost, escaping, diluting
in the vacuum, the slow gravitational
urge to find another planetary home. (‘Reading’ (1) 20–26)
The poem reads the potential for fire that is caused by the clearance of the
bush for the leisure of noise-polluting scramble bikers and the potential
danger that can be sparked into life by their combustion engines running
over the desperately dry terrain. It speaks in abstraction of the currents
of human presence and the implication of our technologies. It is a deeply
contemplative version of the contamination metaphor that conjures up
the ghosts of displaced (and later enslaved) aboriginal communities,
which in turn speaks of degrees of cultural alienation for aboriginals and
for the Kinsella family (American, Australian, Irish heritage).
Alienation is replayed much later in the collection within a reflective
moment on the sub-symbolic character of affect: ‘An immense sadness/
flooded over me and ‘the local’ meant something/outside geography,
outside words’ (‘The Qualities of Sadness’ 36–38). The pastoral space
as ‘other’ constructed by the ultimate metonym for power, the city, is
always-already under threat by the very force that required its imagin-
ing; here, this utopian space is clearly dropped as an alternative space
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to the polluted, war-ridden urban space, for it cannot exist alone: a new
planet is required in these dark times. In this context, the disconnec-
tion or lack of ‘common ground’ (39) between the voice of the poem – a
clear ethical outsider to common practice in the area – and an alcoholic
farmer clarifies that sharing a valley with neighbours does not neces-
sarily lead to neighbourliness. This sadness (manifest in the emotional
contours of first person lyricism) signifies an extension from colonialism
to planetary breakdown.
In this poem, fire is indistinguishable from its bio-cultural context –
climate change. To conserve trees is to encourage cloud formations, and
to negate further despoliation of the already overly dry environment.
Fire wardens dismiss this ecological attitude and reject any calls for
conservation. A ‘real emptiness’ (5) reflects the inheritance of colonial
land clearance, ‘open space joins open space/and you can see it all spread
productively from space’ (9–10):
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training depot’ (p. 135). Such expansive localism is not international but
historical. Punctuation provided by toponym dramatises the collection’s
conjoining of the microcosmic world of the Kinsella settlement in the
land of the Bullardong Nyungar people in Western Australia to colonial-
ism and its aftermath.
For Kinsella, an acute emphasis on the exceptionalism of a region,
in the political and cultural sense, can be negated by a democratic
expansiveness – or internationalist parallel – within a voice generated by
geographical specificity that is geared towards clarifying the ecological
crisis. This thrust from ‘the bush’ or Australian ‘country’ refuses to voice
a riposte to the identity politics of toxic late capitalism. He writes: ‘Our
nation is just a personification of the Australian bureaucracy and its
inextricable drive towards a universal cliché of exclusiveness’ (Kinsella,
2007, pp. 114–115). Kinsella’s lyricism delves beneath any corporate gloss;
it aims to get at the heart of being a subject in each particular Australian
location, with WA as one case in point.
Thresholds of knowing
enough parables of cause and effect,
grand impacts. (‘Beans and Jam Tree Gully’)
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Jam Tree Gully indicates that spatial relations are continually open to
renegotiation and carry the burden of their history. They strike so
easily against the innate contingency of how the world happens and is
recorded: ‘I watched two blue/butterflies tango around each other in
as precise/a way as I am capable of detecting: within/my threshold it
looked like pure choreography’ (‘Jam Tree Gully Sonnets with Incidental
Rhymes’ 2: 4–7).
Kinsella is interested in setting things up for our contemplation as
much as he is interested in our intellectual and emotional connections to
the ways that things occur in spaces that are conditioned over time. This
is where he is closest to Burnside – a move first rehearsed in the prologue
that slowly enters the terrain, finding a home and then turning to observe
animals. Metaphorically, sense-oriented disposition is equal to political
comportment, emotional variation, lyrical point of view in the collec-
tion. A landscape-scale visual sweep of the horizon will ordinarily snag
on an ecological problem, or socio-political site of interest that triggers
affect and despatches the lyric to zoom in on an acute space or object:
a sheep bone is discovered ‘In following the waterway across the hill, /
York gum saplings holding out against/the erosive sidewash induced by
downpours’ (‘Sheep Leg’ 1–3); ‘from highest point of hillside/from high-
est branch of tallest York gum; /gunfire pocks distantly’ (‘Evening’ 6–8).
Framing events in space anchored by vantage point can suggest distance
and intimacy simultaneously in Jam Tree Gully; however, the frame most
often propels lyricism forward via the concrete specificity of things,
whether turned painterly on the hop and of the moment, or poetically
in reflection.
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Paterson, D. (2004, 9 November). The Dark Art of Poetry: T.S. Eliot Lecture, Retrieved 23
May 2014 from Don Paterson – Official Website: http://www.donpaterson.com/arspoetica.
htm.
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Affective arrays
‘Single-lined Photos’, ‘A Jam Tree Gully Sheaf ’, ‘A Set of Images Makes
the Day’, ‘Four Scenes’ and ‘On the Great Red Storm’ are exercises in
imagism, montage, time-lapse empiricism and impressionism. In Jam
Tree Gully each image is individuated and located within an assemblage
that shows each in relationship with the others. Such assemblages allow
objects in view to appear as ‘things’, or ‘entities not entirely reducible
to the contexts in which (human) subjects set them, never entirely
exhausted by their semiotics’ (Bennett, 2010, p. 351). Furthermore,
these arrays enact the phenomenon, psychological magnification,
‘connecting one affect-laden scene with another affect-laden scene’,
which suggests that his poetics works at the level of recollecting and
remembering our sense of self and the question of Being, rather
than being wholly captivated within an ethical situation or a sensory
environment.7
It is worth reminding ourselves of Kinsella’s interest in the transla-
tion of the spatial dynamics of the pastoral from Europe to WA, here,
which suggests restriction and enframing as part of the politics of
representation. He writes: ‘The page is a field of vision for me, a place
of occupation. It is the territorialised environment. I am interested
in it only insofar as it implies something outside, something beyond
the frame’ (Kinsella, 2007, p. 50). The arrays and sets of images all
work towards an emblematic phrase of the collection: ‘repulsion
and attraction/woven high-tensile’ (‘Orb Weaver Spider’ 7–8). This
is something far deeper than cartographic representation of space.
While the poem ‘Arrangements’ marks out a sense of place as a func-
tioning site or self-perpetuating corpora wherein it is not possible
to extract single factors for all are part of a system of larger relations
or chains of interaction, the five poems signaled out (above) presup-
pose a depth to the field of action that is a foothold for observation
rather than responsibility. This speaks to multinaturalism rather than
multiculturalism.
Once this representational mode is in view, the Kinsella reader can
evaluate the poetic merit. Here we receive significant disclosure of our
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See Tomkins, S. S. (1995). Exploring Affect: The Selected Writings of Silvan S. Tomkins (Virginia
Demos ed.), Cambridge: Cambridge University Press; Smith, M. (2009). Remembering
What Is Left in Our Encounters with Other Animals, in M. Smith, J. Davidson, L. Cameron,
& L. Bondi (Eds.), Emotion, Place and Culture, Farnham: Ashgate.
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For Kinsella, the poem can be a ‘panopticon’ that brings into view objec-
tive correlatives; sets and situations are ‘movements from liminal zone
to liminal zone, rather than from object to object’; the move is internal,
imaginative and emotional ‘from the de-signified within the image, to
the de-signified within the image’ (Kinsella, 2007, p. 69). Things are
within space, and it is the focus on space (zone) that moves the thinker.
Movement of the eye across the page marries with movement of person
through landscape; movement of lyric from region to global political
context. Moreover, the poem’s eye – its reflective stance born of such
spatial arrangements and points of observation – becomes the subject of
the poem and invokes internal movement: emotion (or emotionlessness)
over insight (or knowledge).
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anticipated; it does not swoop to the trough). Both ideas ethically signal
distance and difference between the two agents (as discussed earlier).
The bird observes its ‘other’ and the surface of the water drawn from
the depths of the aquifer; it remains, in place, still – physically in the
environment and temporally sustained in our mind. The bird signifies a
position in relation to other possible positions.
The topographical sketch is often hard-edged, angular and dry in
Jam Tree Gully. Water does not appear to signify life. Encounters with
animals seem to utter themselves onto the page as observations of
material events and properties indifferent to the cultural frame. The ‘I’
is erased temporarily and what remains is stillness, flatline zero activ-
ity. Much like Oswald’s ellipses and silences, this poetic space is laid
out for generative processes, where the mind can roll on from what has
been presented to it thus far. It is for the imagination to conceive of
ways to measure degrees of felicity between the world and us, between
word and thing. It is for us to embrace the sanctity of the mismatch,
the gaps and differences between things. Knowing ourselves through
places might be necessary in the present climate; it is the most ancient
and human attribute. However, clearly at this moment of low activity
and silence ‘what remains for Kinsella is the possibility of communion
with place as it is figured in the poem itself ’ (Reed, 2010) (cf. Manes,
1996). It cannot be put any better than that. In this poem, the pos-
sibility is there but it is not played out. We are left in a space vacant of
contact in one sense, rich in relations in another. All that happens is a
strict reflexive reckoning of the moment in which the poem imprints
itself on the reader’s imagination; the image of the bird melds into our
memory. Like the image of the owl in Oswald’s account of the ‘mother’
during Sleepwalk’s final phase of the moon, a symbol of prehistoric life
adapted to the human scene (an understated anguished cry from the
Anthropocene), the kingfisher is all we have to keep our patience intact
and to consider our meekness.
Jam Tree Gully removes the eye of the poem from the domain of liberty
and places it directly into the discourse of environmental consciousness.
This transference from liberty to an acute vision enacts the pastoral as
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Discordant harmonies
Discord, the result of the breakdown of empathy, sustains emotional
distance between neighbours in the region, setting up an interest-
ing proposition in a forthcoming extension to the volume in view:
‘Objective relations pulse across the anticipatory valley’ (‘Refrain 1 (D &
G Infractions)’ 10, from Jam Tree Gully 3). Things are often yet to come
in Jam Tree Gully; fire, for example, is kept at a visual distance but its
threat is ever present and of great concern to the human figure tending
the block. This prosaic, detached formulation of spatialised anxiety and
fear that conflates people and place (the anticipatory valley) is satirical in
tone. It comes after an intriguing insight into birdlife:
Birds sing warnings all the time, having mapped it generationally.
An important passing-down. They make their own selections,
adapt as they see fit. Rhythmic cosmologies parry refrains
as if it can all be separated off: and the one bird
not appearing in the same feathers everywhere seems to affirm
this; (5–10)
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Environmental empathy
Heat-buckling asphalt and climatic conditions turning hill grass orange
signify pressures leading to exclamations of environmental affect: ‘that
[world] has remodelled my plastic emotions’ (9). Emotion is a deep or
strong feeling that is derived from circumstance, or mood, or relation-
ships with others; Jam Tree Gully is the total sum of the lyric’s accounting
of relations, mood and circumstance. Throughout history, emotion ‘has
been seen as a form of behaviour, or as an aspect of bodily physiology’
central to ‘role identities’ in public spaces ‘through their common affec-
tive representation and quality’ (May & Powell, 2008, p. 244). A focus
on the spaces through which emotion is enacted clarifies ‘the spatial
mediation and articulation of emotions’, that is, intersubjectivity and
relationality, social process embedded in our everyday lives. Emotions
are the relational consequences of human-to-human and more-than-
human interactions; their location and embedding relates to other
positionings in the social order and in the environment (Anderson &
Smith, 2001).8 The human impact on location and its impact on humans
circumscribes these identities and social positions from the deep sense
of otherness that is witnessed in the observations of non-human life. The
binary inherent in the terms otherness and the non-human cannot be
collapsed completely but can be bridged to a limited extent by empathy.
There are two parts to empathy: the ability to understand the other,
and the ability to share the feelings of the other. We bring ourselves to
emotions, but how do we do this when the other is in fact part of us, that
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See also Smith et al. (2009). especially Richard C. Powell: Spaces of Play: Recording
Emotional Practices in High Arctic Environmental Sciences, pp. 115–132.
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A salutary conclusion
Unsentimental melancholy in Jam Tree Gully portends that the only tryst
between humans and non-humans is the one existential commonality:
death. Tony Hughes-D’Aeth has captured this most convincingly: ‘Kinsella’s
poetry moves along the asymptote between living and dying ... The effect
is to render unsolvable but also indismissible the conundrum of whether
we are the epiphenomenon of life trying to die or death trying to live’
(Hughes-D’Aeth, 2012, p. 25). It is a conundrum that we are entitled to
consider in our own time; the Anthropocene mobilises a sense of urgency
to this challenge. Kinsella will not provide advice here.
Historically, emotions have been viewed as a terrain alien to ration-
alisation and yet also integral to everyday life for they are tools of ‘com-
munication, commitment and cooperation with others’ (May & Powell,
2008, p. 245). Kinsella’s sense of cooperation is informed by his reading
of multiple agents in place, and the overlapping of agents has clarified
margins, minority positions and difficult spaces for ethics. As with
Burnside, in Kinsella we are carried to a place of intellectual nourish-
ment by looking towards the end of things while measuring our role in
these endings. The knowledge of our limited capacity for empathy and
art’s limited capacity of emancipation is useful for such hard times as the
Anthropocene. If offering nothing else, art is actively measuring our role
in the ending of things. Trees fall; Species fail. Words record and imagine
fallings and failings.
To refer back to the model of Anthropocene personhood for a closing
anecdote, in July 2013, during composition of Jam Tree Gully 3, Kinsella
posted the poem ‘Graphology Heuristics 87: The Breakdown of Empathy
– Non Sequiturs’ on the Internet (Kinsella, 2013a). While directly con-
fronting the ignorance and lack of irony in the use of the phrase ‘boat
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Abstract: Burnside’s engagement with a modernist
aesthetics of order in his poetics of place leads into a
thesis on world-making that animates and renews our
feeling for the earth. I focus on the way that mutability is
essential, in Gift Songs, for a humanist intelligibility of
our habitus, before turning to Burnside’s poetic translation
of the varieties of religious experience. Lyricism here
transcends speciesist personhood to invite a cool and fresh
consideration of the planet’s nuances over time.
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the risk of placing him inside an already complex dialogue to draw out
a sense of creatureliness. This interjection implicitly argues for both the
relevance of post-Romantic criticism and its poetics of concern, and to
show how there are continuities between Anthropocene poetics and pre-
Anthropocene thinking.
In summary, Burnside’s phenomenologically modulated lexis of
mutability – a post-secular translation of what ‘is’ for ‘how’ things are –
entails feeling for how animals, plants, humans are coming to be. This is
an emphasis not on the properties of the world – as with Kinsella – but
the world in its emergence, its making. To shape this exploration I visit
Burnside’s intentionally crafted sense of the world’s presence in four dis-
tinct ways. The first section of this chapter reads Gift Songs alongside two
poetic forebears, T. S. Eliot and Wallace Stevens; here, the pull towards
life’s vicissitudes and the interjection of a renewed sense of time is viewed
as essential for a planetary imaginary and humanist intelligibility of our
shared habitus. The second section turns to a sense of place to consider
how we can revisit ideas of construction and estrangement (of/from the
world) by language as part of the problem brought to mind when we
have two potentially opposed forms of earthscripts: one dealing with our
creation of the world; the other, the world’s arising. The latter of these
is looked at in two sections both titled ‘varieties of religious experience’
wherein Burnside’s multiple Anthropocene perspectives invite us to
contemplate the habitus as shared destiny. The first of these considers
an enlightened spiritual comportment, the second considers life viewed
through the perception of creatureliness.
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See Dualism.
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Contextualising Burnside
Gift Songs begins with a series of responses to St Augustine of Hippo,
through which the poetry incubates a theory of the perception of life. The
first poem, ‘De corporis resurrectione’, looks at the arrival of snowdrops
while contemplating how we understand ‘the gradual dead ... finding a
visible form’ (8; 10). Sensible forms determine corporeal creatures; in
Augustine’s understanding of the resurrection, however, sense percep-
tion is inescapably limited. Burnside draws on this limitation to convey
the intangible and to listen to our capacity for noticing the enduring
qualities and processes of the Earth’s systems. This is where the role of
Parousia and nature lie in his project:
how the earth calls out for every death,
contriving apples, mole-runs, tiny birds
alive inside the gold japonica
and waiting for the moment to arrive
when song begins; the black
transformed to green. (37–42)
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Spatial spontaneity
The lights in the fishing boats at anchor there,
As the night descended, tilting in the air,
Mastered the night and portioned out the sea,
Fixing emblazoned zones and fiery poles,
Arranging, deepening, enchanting night
(Wallace Stevens, ‘The Idea of Order at Key West’)
The four quartets in Gift Songs traverse Scotland, Norway, France; they
represent a decentred territoriality. More generally, too, Burnside’s work
repeatedly forges rhizomatic connections between east coast lowland
Scotland and America. The Light Trap is embalmed in Stevensian con-
templation; Gift Songs moves on into new territory and yet its focus on
port towns, fusing Fife and Florida, brings Stevens to mind once more.
‘The Idea of Order at Key West’ (Stevens, 1936) enacts a sense of order-
ing. The lines play out the mental arranging of a spilled array of abstract
definite articles: ‘the fishing boats’, ‘the night’, ‘the air’ and ‘the sea’. The
scene of things at large in space is one that is composed, mastered; it
is fixing, homemaking, yet imprecise. Such ironic reflexivity on human
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For more on this contextual aspect, see Bristow, T. (2011). Materialism as Cultural Ecology
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Writing guides us, transports us and arrests us; however, it can lull us
unto a false sense of security, too. As Jay Bernard has observed, ‘Burnside
strives to depict the meaning of words, rather than their physical refer-
ence’; conveying our constant state of puzzlement when attempting to
‘define the indefinite’ (Bernard, 2007). Eliot conceived of the role of poetry
as the transformation of phenomena and relationships into a world of
symbols to which we give meaning and attach value: ‘We had the expe-
rience but missed the meaning, /An approach to the meaning restores
the experience/In a different form’ (Eliot, ‘The Dry Salvages’ 2: 45–47
(Four Quartets, 1943)). Burnside takes this approach as the subject of his
poetry; in its lack of meaning, or final arrival at meaning, the emphasis
on process has emotional consequences. Living in an undescribed world
is difficult; we like to know how things feel. Without description our
problems and suffering vanish, are purged of commonality, and we feel
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cut off from the world; we lack affective reference to things; we are alone
when things are not properly named. This loneliness, I want to argue, is
a form of freedom in Burnside. This freedom comes from contemplating
how we might fit into the world – at the core of which is the desire to
relate and care, and in Gift Songs how we might simply exist:
Give me a little less
with every dawn:
colour, a breath of wind,
the perfection of shadows,
till what I find, I find
because it’s there,
gold in the seams of my hands
and the night light falling. (‘For a Free Church’ 3: 1–8)
This prayer is some distance from the ironical ordering of the night by
things in the environment that Burnside’s reformulations of Stevens
delineate.
In Gift Songs, the geography of belonging is made more vibrant by
enduring the provisional and by celebrating the gap between the named
and unnamed. Here we become attuned to the ongoing alternation
between life and death amongst environments and species. In these
moments we connect to what Heidegger means by ‘ereignis’: the ‘always-
already operative empowering of the essential togetherness of disclosive
human comportment and of the entities qua accessible’: that is, human
openness to the unfolding world in all its precise and rich elements
and qualities (Sheehan, 1993, p. 82). Stevens appears to be aware of this
during the moment that he is ordering the world for his lines of poetry.
Engagement with and distance from this poetic act is a way of securing
ourselves, fixing things to our grammar and logic.
For Burnside, this is the first step to an ecology of mind, a state of
being that enfolds us within a larger canvas of the way of things. And this
is where Burnside’s four quartets most directly draw from Eliot. Their
sense of becoming is modulated by the quest for a language appropriate
to the world’s brevity and depth, and yet––more akin to Stevens – they
appear happy in any failure during this quest. Attempting to fuse human
to world via word itself is important. It is a path we choose; a request for
a common reference point (like God). For Eliot, the path speaks of access
to the real. For Stevens, without relying on the validity of the empiri-
cal reality it is a communion in itself ‘in which being there together is
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For fuller accounts of Heideggerian poetics, see Guignon, C. (2001). Being as Appearing:
Retrieving the Greek Experience of Phusis, in G. Fried, & R. Polt (Eds.), A Companion
to Heidegger’s Introduction to Metaphysics, New Haven: Yale University Press; Rorty, R.
(1993). Wittgenstein, Heidegger, and the Reification of Language, in C. B. Guignon (Ed.),
The Cambridge Companion to Heidegger (2nd ed., pp. 337–357), Cambridge: Cambridge
University Press; Mathews, F. (2009). Introduction: Invitation to Ontopoetics, Philosophy
Activism Nature, 6, 1–7.
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Urban history
The first of the four quartets in Gift Songs opens with a walking figure
that is considering these very post-Romantic concerns and coordinates
for the site of lyric:
I’m walking through the windless innertown,
– breeze-blocks, mongrels, smashed glass, chantiers –
walking towards the sky, and the smell of the tide
and reading the names from a map, rue Lumiere,
impasse de Toutes Aides,
impasse de l’Ocean.
Somewhere a bell is ringing,
though whether it comes from the church
or out to sea
I cannot tell;
when evening falls, the water bleeds away
towards a rose horizon where the boats
go out to fishing grounds and other
port-towns much like this (‘St Nazaire’ 1: 13–26)
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The following is at stake: the extent to which humans generate space, and
how our spaces configure us. The poem instances the capacity of urban
lighting to illuminate but nonetheless to shroud the space; it points
forwards to the closing line of ‘An Essay Concerning Light’: ‘hiding the
source itself, in its drowned familiar’ (Burnside, 2009). As with Stevens’s
mastering lights (discussed earlier), there is something more to ‘all there
is’ in this poem; there is the question of how to conceive of and then
make our entrance into what ‘is’; whether these two acts are separate at
all is another question.
The legend refers to a bright blue public art installation alive at night,
partly secured to generate tourist interest in an urban estuary area with
its docklands and former submarine base. While natural light ordinarily
transforms earth and sea to provide a source of narrative material for any
visitor, the poem speaks of the place as redefined by the body and the
binding force of scripture as instanced by the signage – literally lyricism
inscribed in the material read as one passes through the space. The poem
has become entangled in a literary space where the imagination is engaged
in the course of traverse. We are reminded that the Anthropocene begs
the question whether we can escape our human constructions.
The generative sense of world-making exemplified by the sign’s rela-
tion to the pedestrian is interwoven with the need to register the body
and the felt world of the walker in the poem. We are given a sense of
the wind, and the cold, indicating temporal, climatic conditions that are
conditioned by factors far beyond this scene; they have the potential to
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Burnside deletes the quotation marks that are present on ‘Nuit De Docks’ conceptualised
by the urban renewal artist, Yann Kersalé. The work significantly transformed the space at
night.
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trigger emotions. Earlier in the collection this tactile texture to the poem
came from the haptic world: ‘that cold and salty pact/the body makes with
things unlike itself ’ (‘Ama et fac quod vis’). In these moments, Burnside’s
lyricism of the corporeal ‘I’ locates an interactive space albeit framed by
an imaginative condition which gestures towards the commonplace of
this experience: its unholiness.5 However, there is something metaphysi-
cal in the way that the poem outlines how place and self are constructed
through exchanges across such impersonal public monuments that
have meaning to us individually and to systems of language that gesture
towards something other than themselves.
‘Making light of the air’ is a pun on thinking of space (and our oxygen)
as insignificant, while also remarking on the act of making, of think-
ing on poetry and of urban planning reclaiming space. Furthermore, it
reminds us of the birds of ‘Ny-Hellesund’ which are ‘becoming the air’
and exist ‘for nothing’ (see below) – that is to say, to exist for nothing,
the value of the birds is not immediately, or even at length, evident
(which is not to say that they are without value). While he is working out
a sense of freedom within the spaces of partly coerced comprehension
and the spaces that invite contemplation of the world yet to be, Burnside
appropriates text from the art installation. Already examples of narra-
tive reification, these lines ironise a collective narrative promoting the
experiential modes of connection once placed in the poem. This sense
of connection as literary and real is established through the emphasis
on walking and how walking generates a recomposed scene to all resi-
dents and all tourists; this has curious effects. To keep with the signage
is to stay within the constructed world; to keep with the elements is to
remain within the unfolding world, which in Burnside’s four quartets is
linked to eternity. Both worlds operate within a single accumulation of
sense impressions and bodily knowledge wherein it seems that a suc-
cessful response to one code will result in a failed response to the other.
Epistemological reflection is neither exploited nor mobilised for lyri-
cism. Thus, this moment qualifies what I have alluded to as indifference
to what is presented before the self. How might Anthropocene ethics
arise out of this scene?
5
For Henri Lefebvre, cities are situations: ‘a present and immediate reality, a practico-material
and architectural fact’ to be made distinct from ‘the urban, a social reality made up of rela-
tions which are to be conceived of, constructed or reconstructed by thought’; Lefebvre, H.
(1996). Writings on Cities, (E. Kofman, & E. Lebas, Eds.) Oxford: Basil Blackwell.
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See Mathews, F. (1991). The Ecological Self, London: Routledge; Mathews, F. (2009).
Introduction: Invitation to Ontopoetics, Philosophy Activism Nature, 6, 1–7.; Bateson, G.
(1972). Steps to an Ecology of Mind: Collected Essays in Anthropology, Psychiatry, Evolution and
Epistemology, Ayelsbury: Intertext; Shepard, P. (1978). Thinking Animals: Animals and the
Development of Human Consciousness, Athens, GA: University of Georgia Press.
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It is easy for history to slip into heritage; easy for our former quaysides,
historical agricultural communities and contemporary light industries
to fall to the waste of global capital and the empty gesture of memorial
for the sake of memorial. It is a little more difficult to realise a critique of
these processes as the unmasking of self-estrangement.
The lyric poem, for Burnside, ‘is the point of intersection between
space and a specific moment or moments’; in effect, the lyric can ‘act as
a detailed map, not only of topological (and meteorological), features,
but also of any response to those features’ (Burnside, 1996). There is a
world freighted in Burnside’s ‘nothing’. The intellectual preoccupation
of subject–object relations (vis-à-vis receiving and constructing worlds)
and the theme of decomposition speak to ideas of order in both Eliot
and Stevens. For Burnside they enable the concerns for locale ‘to set
up a kind of metaphysical space, which is essentially empty, a region of
potential in which anything can happen’ (‘Poetry and a Sense of Place’ 2).
Placing the potential of the world back into shared spaces is one form of
unmasking (mentioned earlier). In ‘Ny-Hellesund’ lineation enables us
to imagine both the conference of warblers and the warblers themselves
slipping into air; in the same manner as song slipping into world, the
image is of a present continuum of fading cadences.
The ‘windless inner town’ only slightly contrasts with the public square
outside the Catholic church of Saint-Nazaire with which the poem opens.
There, the wind disturbs leaves, they ‘swirl around’ (‘Saint-Nazaire’ 7)
and yet this is not a broad expanse of free play: it is one of ‘wynds’ (1);
‘narrow streets and ‘nooks’ (5). Iain Galbraith has noted that Burnside’s
poetry considers how humans ‘have frequently lost their way, forfeited
any “natural” dwelling place in the world’; and that poetry ‘can help us
find a way out of the narrow, calamitous place to which ecological neglect
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Gift Songs has three primary concerns: how we figure ourselves within
the landscape scene; how our learning and our vision bring us towards
a sense of Earth’s continuance without us; and what we learn from
observing animals. It is too crude to map these in terms of ‘geography’,
‘spirit’ and creatureliness’, for there is too often a deep sense of place
and loss that runs through these coordinates. We have considered
the first of these ideas in depth; it is time to speak of the other two.
A combination of the eternal and the creaturely is most clearly reg-
istered during a soulful moment of recollection of Scottish folksong
in the Breton landscape: ‘that animal sense I share, in the nerve and
the bone/of something urgent’, which in itself has only become clear
through the pull to ‘the fog/and becoming home’ (‘Le Croisic’ 3: 20–21,
17–18). Elsewhere, Burnside has it as ‘our bodies skilled and warming
to a loss/as total and incomplete/as a blackbird’s singing’ (The Light
Trap, ‘Blackbird’ 2: 28–30). While The Light Trap never captures things
outside of processes (the circle of life and death that is the circle of
poetic light in which all things fall), Gift Songs alludes to a sense of
returning home to ourselves, as human species, through this pull
and very urgency, this warming. Such loss and warming has distinct
Anthropocene undertones.
Stoical neighbourliness
Burnside’s Selected Poems drew a line under the first wave that resisted
an enclosure of the imagination, yet settled into unsentimental, indi-
vidualistic, almost solipsistic verse. This first wave drew broadly from
northern hemisphere mythology yet failed to enfold human subjectiv-
ity into the lifeworld in the manner that the expansive and heightened
imagination of the wider community realises in the dwelling trilogy.
There, Burnside sustains folk-oriented lyricism, yet looks more broadly
to other animals, discrete ecologies and historical crises in the golden
hues of The Light Trap. Gift Songs is his first subsequent collection. James
McGonigal clarifies a new aspect in the dwelling trilogy: ‘To Burnside’s
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‘Recuscant Grace’ as mentioned earlier.
8
The second ‘response’ to St Augustine of Hippo speaks of St Paul’s God as ‘no respecter of
persons’ (‘Ama et fac quod vis’ 2).
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Ecopoetic liturgy
In the responses to Augustine, lyricism is no longer challenged with
illuminating the unity of ecological interactions; it is concerned with
simplicity of feeling:
we go for months with phantoms in our heads
till, filling a bath, or fetching the laundry in,
we see ourselves again, at home, illumined,
folding a sheet, or pouring a glass of milk,
bright in the here and now, and unencumbered. (‘Varieties of Religious
Experience’ 11: 18–22)
The closing lines to this section sit under the title ‘Lares’, Roman guard-
ians of the hearth; the final word signifies freedom. ‘Illumined’ and
‘bright’ work alongside the ‘bath’, ‘laundry’ and ‘milk’; Burnside’s quo-
tidian threaded with gold ignited an ecological mind in The Light Trap,
but this poem speaks of a lack of burden and a freedom that was not
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Independently of Carl Lange, James discovered that ‘perception triggers visceral changes
that are then appraised cognitively and labeled as emotions’; Nathanson, D. L. (1996).
Introduction, in D. L. Nathanson (Ed.), Knowing Feeling: Affect, Script and Psychotherapy,
New York: W.W. Norton.
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Heidegger, M. (1962). On the Way to Language, (P. D. Hertz, Trans.) London: Harper Row.
Scholars in critical animal studies disregard Heidegger’s work on animals for its sense of a
rigid hierarchy between the species.
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Burnside lines up five subjects: an arctic fox, rock pipits, the northern
sea duck (eider), a working dog (‘collie’) and Central American coyotes;
each is settled into their own space lying adjacent to the others in the
series ‘Five Animals’; all are threaded with the three imaginative impulses
identified earlier.
and the Arctic fox
came silently out of the distance,
half-way to summer already, the silvery fur
threaded with auburn
and brown, the face
indifferent, although it caught my eye
and watched, for a minute
– scenting me,
sounding me out – (1: ‘Arctic Fox’ 6–14)
When they sing from the harbour wall, amongst
the soured lines and ten-fathom creels,
it sounds like an apprenticeship for something more
auspicious
– fulmar, say,
for whom this salt-sweet air is neither
fate, nor home; (2: ‘Rock Pipits’ 1–7)
my house the unsettled reflection
of what I have made
from off-cuts and leftover shingle
to house the birds. (3: ‘Eider House’ 5–8)
the intricate sweetness of oil,
the declensions of rain,
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Poems two and three speak of the Lowlands of Scotland, but framed by
the wildlife of Norway and Meixco’s northwest (the latter registered in a
dream); this array instances another decentred habitus speaking to our
observational selves when connecting to the terrain of others, as visitors
(i.e., not property owners). Herein lies Burnside’s own triangulation of
his materials: Stevensian reflexivity, ‘my house the unsettled reflection/of
what I have made’; Eliotian depersonalisation, ‘the nothing of the self ’;
and Rilkean sensitivity and openness, ‘like an apprenticeship for some-
thing more/auspicious’; all captured by an otherness: ‘the voices calling
from the present tense ... the here and now’.
The opening poem is honest about being unaccustomed to ‘the rule of
the tundra’ (‘Arctic Fox’ 20) and yet this lack of geographically specific
habitual behaviour enables the ‘logic of the wilderness’ (21) to come
forth to the poem’s eye. Vision is imagined here as the space of empti-
ness that is filled with the chance that something might happen, such as
this encounter.
The second poem works towards realisation by revisiting Burnside’s
preoccupation with ‘betweenness’ as a state of mind and being. The rarely
seen, inconspicuous, Eurasian rock pipit is less favourable (conducive to
success in these conditions) than the arctic and British Isles seabird, but
both are dropped from view (and sound) for the melodious song of the
mistle thrush: ‘beneath a wind-glazed kirk, the mistle thrush/recalls itself ’
(‘Rock Pipits’ 9–10). The subterranean world is given representation; so
too the repetition of things. Neither of these are clearly in view as things
in and of themselves. The bird (heard from a range of up to two kilome-
tres), shifts the poem into the auditory imagination and thus enriches the
phenomenological palette, pushing the mind to do some work, asking:
‘why would they dream of rebirth, who are/intent on nothing’ (12–13).
The failed analogy, or parallel, between human and non-human senses
of finality, and its escape, is redressed in the next two poems: first by the
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human’s movement that animalises the waking state – ‘[I] come and go/
in a dream of feathers’ (‘Eider House’ 1–2); and then through the echo
of this wavering, by a dog, ‘havering back and forth/while the pheasants
scatter’ (‘Collie’ 11–12). Each species has its own labour to perform and
follows its instincts in its own way in each of these poems. This consist-
ency might be what Burnside is trying to foreground as a way of drawing
these discrete species together and yet leaving them in their own space.
This arrangement, a technique similar to Kinsella’s, reflects back onto
the human as a controlling observer and pattern seeker. It also speaks of
non-species-based consanguinity.
The Eider are read in the skyway while the poem attempts to tune in to
other things. Huge distances and the sensitivity of blind men as objects
of attunement invites the poem to account for a ‘warmth’, a presence in
the world that the poet creates an exaggerated space for: ‘ – a rumour of
flight, /a gift from the legible world –’ (‘Eider’ 25–26). This quest details
the impulse to look for and read signs in the world; it also indicates sen-
sitivity to presences beyond our immediate ken. I have looked at these in
terms of connections to Eliot and Stevens; the portent of those presences
clearly lies deeply within the imagination’s intuitive world from which it
works, as performed by the poem. This space musters up the rock pipit
as a species that is doubled or twinned elsewhere, present in another ver-
sion of themselves wandering in the mountains like a human figure that
is written out in the strangest of ways: ‘almost smoke/between the river
and a sky of bone’ (‘Rock Pipits’ 18–19). Such mythical ornamentation of
the intangible world that lies in proximity to familiar elements is very
much the Burnsidean imaginative space that is refined in Gift Songs.11
Much like the chance meeting with the fox, the observation of the
world of the collie (‘Collie’ 20–26) is dependent on a stalled tractor in
the road slowing things down. Here the poem’s opening, gripped by
the stasis of the Kinaldy road, is shot through with the changing forms
of Fife’s weathered landscape in the present moment that is opened up
to contain the findings – or catch – of the eastern coastal region of the
North Atlantic: ‘Sunshine at Spalefields crossing; /small rain at Beley
bridge; /gilthead hanging from the silvered dark/in the tanks of the
fisheries lab’ (1–4). Weather, material conditions and poetic vision: all
these are brought to bear upon the compulsion to speak of place as a
11
See Brown, A. (2011). Finding the Lit Space: Reality, Imagination, and the Commonplace,
in the Poetry of John Burnside, Agenda, 45 (4), 101–111.
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A sanguine conclusion
There is no end, but addition: the trailing
Consequences of further days and hours,
While emotion takes to itself the emotionless
Years of living among the breakage
Of what was believed in as the most reliable
And therefore the fittest for renunciation –
(T. S. Eliot, ‘The Dry Salvages’ 2: 7–12)
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Unlike the ecopoem of The Light Trap, and the violence of Burnside’s
earlier poetry, there is not a desire in any of the four quartets to com-
municate a deep connection with biological life; there is simply nothing
other than a materialist orientation into what exists before the spatially
enlightened subject. The ego-free poem promotes a suspension of this
world in consciousness while simultaneously pointing towards the eras-
ure of the human subject as much as this is impossible at the moment of
intellectual suspension (dependant as this is upon a mind). In Burnside,
this gesture is aimed at leaving the world at play in its own terms while
registering the body in place; to place mind into view in terms of the
terrain it must negotiate without transgressing its limits or enfolding it
into the psychoanalysis of the subject.
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Abstract: Perception of placehood is subject to the
changeability of the moon in A Sleepwalk on the Severn;
my critical analysis of human encounters as ecopoetic
extensions to sensory exploration finds them inescapably
tinged by moonlit flux. Oswald’s Anthropocene lyric
navigates a perilinguistic channel that interconnects
human and non-human affect. I argue that her mapping
of the movement of emotions across people, planet and
place is a mode of signifying the ways that subjectivity and
environment call into being our enworldedness.
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Alice Oswald entered the British poetry scene with a captivating and
original collection, The Thing in the Gap-Stone Stile (1996). Over nearly
20 years, a number of critics have noted Oswald’s originality – located
nevertheless in a sense of British tradition – and her contribution to
ecopoetics. Oswald is alert to the politics of the Anthropocene, keen to
place the human subject as a listening self; her pursuit of an environ-
mental aesthetic seems intuitive, her poetics bodily. While clearly the
spellbinding work of an eminent craft practitioner, her body of work
seems modest set beside the other two poets in this study; altogether less
driven.
Oswald’s home in Devon, the geography of the southwest of England,
encourages a deep engagement with place, folk history and oral cul-
ture; she fashions these materials into poetry. An attention to voice
and dialect, of people, flora, fauna, water, wind and moon offers a
sophisticated and sensitive terrain for the critic seeking to understand
the contracts by which the landscape’s moods and the poet’s subjects
are signatories. Oswald’s listening self attunes not to the speaking of
humans but to the elusive affective dimensions of water. A preliminary
analysis understands Oswald’s poetics of immersion as a site in which
to register the ways humans are made aware of and touched by nature,
and the ways and character of nature itself: its purposiveness, pains
and pleasures.
A Sleepwalk on the Severn (2009) is Oswald’s second book-length
poem centred on a river and its more-than-human community. The
first, Dart (2002), is a sound map, or sonic census of the community
that works along the river: water purifiers, stonewallers, fisherman and
so on. The poem gives voice to a variety of actors without privilege; are
all speaking subjects that mark particular sounds relevant to their con-
nection to the river in their specific place, and relevant to the rhythms
and sounds of the river where they work. Language and location com-
bine to provide an accumulative voice that is the river’s own. Similar
in approach, Sleepwalk is structured around five phases of the moon
and nine characters walking a stretch of the River Severn’s estuary.
The interaction of these elements is articulated by voices of the moon
and the wind, in addition to a poet-figure observing all interactions
and developments in the locale. The text looks and feels like a play; it
is dramatic, emotionally literate, scene-centred and character driven.
The lyric’s emphasis on the influence of the moon on the water and
its temporary inhabitants speaks directly to human experience while
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curiously giving voice to the feelings of the moon and the wind. Much
like Dart, this poem sings of an evolving subjectivity, particularly that
of the moon, and how this might be witnessed in the emergent qualities
of place. The changing environment affects the human subjects; a focus
on the emotions helps to map change. Here, Anthropocene personhood
is threaded by pained moonhood, shorthand for the planetary forces
impacting upon the social and natural worlds. Thus a sense of a deplet-
ing environment is jettisoned for an inquiry both into how we develop
literacy for planetary affect (from the perspective of a discrete location/
region), and into the correspondences between emotional terrains and
the ways that language and story respond to represent people who are
embedded within the environment. It is at once a bioregional biography
and a geography of affect.
* * *
This chapter shows how ecopoetry derives from the inhabitation of alive
and breathing places and how its reference to placehood posits the poem
itself as a horizon of experience in which life entails. In the first two
sections, as a measure of place attachment and Anthropocene person-
hood, the lyric poem is understood as a channel for transporting private
emotion and privatised emotions that relate to our planetary condition.
Subsequently, place-consciousness understands the depths of being in an
environment as something coterminous with an encompassing energy
field, animating and plastic, partly constituting and constituted by the
accumulated, spatial formation of the text.
An emphasis on transformative worlds and affective relations with
space in the third and fourth sections stresses the influence of moon
upon subjects who are ‘forming environmentally’ as a mode of signify-
ing the ways that subjectivity and environment, equally, can be rendered
manifest in world and in poem. Despite the River Severn acting as the
primary index to cultural formations during distinct phases of the moon,
the notion of settlement is highly contingent and provisional owing to
fluid-somatic registers – or characters – under pressure from two semi-
otic presences: an immense biological engine (the moon/earth dynamic)
and a biological-neural network (the collective nervous system of the
characters and environment in the poem) which are countersunk into
the glow of reawakened individualism. This glow registers self-in-world
over time; this self, by extension, calls into being the more-than-human
world.
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The Severn estuary is among the world’s natural wonders: wind, moon
and water combine to create an unusually wide tidal range and the spec-
tacular phenomenon of the Severn bore, a wave that surges upriver at
high tide from Sharpness to Gloucester, a transit approximately 18 miles
on the river. This detail is hidden in the poetry; Oswald draws out this
environment’s unique phenomenological impact on its flora, fauna and
human inhabitants.
Oswald’s poems are sound maps. However, while Dart convenes a
sonic census undertaken during a walk from the source of the river
to the sea mouth (a distance covering more than 30 miles), Sleepwalk
details repeated visits to the same location on foot, the Severn estuary
under different phases of the moon.1 Emotional accounts of experience
can be located where poetic voice signals itself as either an exemplifica-
tion of the world’s creativity, or in tension with planetary, regional or
ecological processes of identity formation. My intention is to bring these
ideas into focus as I look at the ecopoetic canvas and living atmosphere
that these voices both construct and play out upon. I look at the poem’s
prologue to capture a few ideas at play in this exciting and rewarding
long poem.
The anonymous voice of the prologue suggests that to be ‘moodswung’
is only to be ‘settled’ in an ‘uncountry’.
Flat stone sometimes lit sometimes not
One among many moodswung creatures
That have settled in this beautiful
Uncountry of an Estuary (3: 1–4)
1
‘Sonic census’ rather than ‘soundscape’, acknowledging Tim Ingold’s forthright critique of
the concept ‘soundscape’ and its reliance on a metaphor from landscape studies for describ-
ing auditory space Ingold, T. (2007). Against Soundscape, in A. Carlyle (Ed.), Autumn
Leaves: Sound and Environment in Artistic Practice (pp. 10–13), Paris: Double Entendre. The
concept sustains a geography of sound, the mapping of voices in space. I raise this issue
when addressing Burnside’s sense (in ‘Rock Pipits’, above) of the capacity of the auditory
imagination to affectively enrich the immediate perceptual environment.
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2
Place names in the poem, notably ‘Waveridge Sand’, near Purton (5) and ‘Newnham-
on-Severn’ (19) locate the Dream Secretary travelling in a southeasterly direction before
returning to where the poem begins. Mention of Passage Lane ferry terminal (19) informs
us that the poem crosses the river, quite possibly at a location where the river is narrow and
yet cartographically as wide as the river mouth – at the last turn of river before widening to
the estuary, thus passing through ‘The Noose’.
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For Maurice Merleau-Ponty, the embedding of self into the world is the
necessary condition for consciousness of and contact with the lifeworld:
‘the presence of the world is precisely the presence of its flesh to my
flesh, that I “am of the world” and that I am not it’ (1968, p. 127). This
phenomenological perspective saves the ‘I’ from appropriating the world
while also resisting a conflation with the world, to lose identity. I shall
think of this as forming environmentally.
Sleepwalk’s textual spaces generate modes of consciousness and sub-
jectivity via a spatialised meshwork, or the allusion to pastoral sites of
dialogue, shared green spaces of encounter. These scenes are explicitly
structured and organised by form in the first half of the poem, which
foregrounds the meeting of disparate subjects and processes within a
locale. This peculiar duality can be understood as the combination of
the ‘textuality of space and spatiality of text’ (Thacker, 2005–2006, pp.
62–65). Sleepwalk is distinct for its spatialised ecopoetic registers oper-
ating across three columns (left margin, poem proper, right margin),
which lend themselves to the idea that subjectivity can be read off the
page as an element of a communal and environmental psychology. Thus,
attention to the layout of voice and space is important here.
In the first half of the poem, each page has three columns: the central
column holds the lyric poem proper and promotes geographic determi-
nants of human experience in the terrain; the left column indicates voice
or identity (proto-registers of an emergent self); the right column moni-
tors the phase of the moon.3 Sleepwalk encourages its readers to examine
the dynamics between form and content in this array of representational
forms that highlights the use of space in the text and the ways that space
3
A comparative example of meta-structural poetics that underline a phenomenology of
transformation can be found in Hillman, B. (2001). Cascadia, Middletown, CT: Wesleyan
University Press. Oswald uses marginalia quite differently in ‘Five Fables of a Length of
Flesh’ in Woods etc (2005).
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profoundly impacts upon form. I argue that Oswald has disclosed her
structure as a means to present this textual situation, which has been hand-
ily defined as ‘an almost sculptural attempt to fix and deliver language onto
the surfaces and inter-connectivity of the situational’ (Whatley, 2009).
At any moment in the text, voice can be read as a cluster or knot of
speaking and feeling agents, sometimes person (speaking) and world
(the mood of the moon, the wind, etc.). The columns, conceived thus,
herald subjectivity while acting as a fluid semantic structuring device,
pinpointing subject positions and environmental moment. Turning to
the first example of this on page five is instructive here (Bristow, 2015a).
The right column indicates ‘New Moon’; half way down the page, the
left column denotes ‘Birdwatcher’ followed by ‘Fisherman’; the central
lyrical space opens with three italicised paragraphs (the notebook entry
of the Dream Secretary), followed by two entries for the Birdwatcher (his
voice, the notebook), then four entries for the Fisherman (two represent-
ing his voice, which is split by the recording of events and underlined by
an exclamation: ‘Shhh!’ (5: 22) – both are actions of the Dream Secretary).
An increasing involvement and presence of the poet-figure to the point
of interruption is most obvious in this opening page. One is brought into
a moment where spatial disturbance and lyrical influence are simultane-
ously presented to mind and ear. Moreover, scene and interaction are
thrust into the shared perceptual foreground of the moment of the mid-
dle column. Within a few lines we read an encounter in a place that is
‘almost dark’ (2), cut through by the Birdwatcher’s ‘wobbling light’ from
a bicycle. Not only does the soundscape contain bird calls from humans,
a confessional disclosure by the Fisherman and exasperated questions
from both male figures, it gravitates towards the interruption of the
Dream Secretary. The scene is alive with a parliament of the more-than-
human, a cacophony where the secretary ironically screams for quiet.
This is one of the many complex points of contact in the poem.
Oswald’s transparent foregrounding of the architectonics of the poem’s
ecopoetic fabric ‘does not imply giving meaning to form, but forming
environmentally’ (Manning, 2009, p. 73). I see these formations as one
version of history. The minor key of the moon and wind’s emotional
state bequeaths a fading, insecure and fragile state of becoming, which
draws from ‘the dark medium of mime, or silence’, which has been
likened to a strain of theatre by the poet Sean Borodale. Oswald’s con-
temporary, and key influence upon the psychogeographic elements in
the text, he considers this hybrid form as a ‘field ... which takes on a live
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correspondence with the world and draws rawly on its conscious and
unconscious elements’ (Borodale, 2009). The page at first appears as a
unified environment deconstructed into a theatre of operations; however,
closer attention to the emotional qualities instructs us to read a field of
forces passing through entities that are dramatically open to change (as
affective subjects) in this formally assembled space.
Our relationship to place is offered an initial point of clarification
by the naming of people in the estuary community by vocation rather
than pronoun; we meet ‘vicar’, ‘fisherman’ and others to help us work
a way through the watery domain in the dark. Responses to the river-
scape’s orientation of manual labour are less strong in Sleepwalk than in
Dart; however, both poems speak through the river and its characters
at work in the community. Sleepwalk moves from an early indication
of the operational environment (signalled by the left margin denoting
subject registers defined by vocation, rank, labour or trade) in the first
half of the poem, towards the perceptual environment in the latter
half. Characterisation and mood before the second new moon (‘Moon
reborn’) is narrow compared with the subjects who dwell in the open
space of individual registers; this structural grammar onlaps Dart’s
poetic census of life-in-place.4 Furthermore, in Sleepwalk the perceptual
emphasis in the second movement of the poem, largely signalled by the
effects of the moon/earth dynamic, extends beyond census to generate a
transgression of accountability and mapping.
Environmental affect
I have to force myself to look out from the flower’s point of view at these
great walloping humans coming down the path, and try, just try, and feel it
from their point of view because it’s a different world to them, a fascinating
hard one (Oswald, cited in Bunting, 2012)
4
There are 28 character types in Dart (walker, chambermaid, naturalist, eel watcher, fisher-
man, bailiff, dead tinners, forester, waternymph, canoeists, town boys, tin-extractor, miller,
swimmer, water abstractor, dreamer, dairy worker, sewage worker, stonewaller, boatbuilder,
salmon netsman, poacher, oyster gatherers, ferryman, naval cadet, rememberer, former
pilots, seal watcher); in Sleepwalk 10 characters populate the text (birdwatcher, fisherman,
articled clerk, sailor, vicar, parish clerk, mother, epileptic, dream secretary, moon wind).
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The prologue will lead to another event in the poem proper: the moon-
enlightened entrance into epic darkness. For now, the poem inhabits a
space of its own making, the phenomenological frame of a sleepwalker.
The sleepwalker attunes to the moon’s dynamics and transience; she
whisperingly sounds the wind among the wetland reeds. The poem is
an account of these verbal contracts; it is in direct dialogue with swans,
weeds, crabs and ‘mudswarms’ (14). Mudswarms is useful: think of the
poem as a conversation with multiple arrays of agency caught in nets of
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witnessing, notably the witnessing that has the relaxed gaze, wider self
and the dream state of a sleepwalker. Jane Bennett has written of dis-
tributed agency as a ‘swarm of vitality at play’ (Bennett, 2010, pp. 31–32).
The compound ‘solar-powered’ is not ironic; it draws attention to how
each discrete life form is never one thing on its own, is dependant upon
planetary forces.
In Dart, Oswald examined the extent to which the lyrical first-person
pronoun can register a truly situated ecological mind by closing the
anthropocentric and, to use Derrida’s neologism, phallogocentric gaze,
instead resting silently, ‘contracted to an eye quiet world’ (6). Conversely,
Sleepwalk continually presents an array of environmental personhood
within a context (and scene) of change, rather than Dart’s confluent
subjectivity. Owing to a deliberate structure in the first half of the poem,
Sleepwalk assists our training to witness subtle differences over time (dur-
ing the moon’s phases), which complements the historical pay-off – the
ability to track change – from the focus on emotions. Sleepwalk is thus
content to raise its voice within a site of temporality and pluralism. The
poem addresses its community – those things gathered in the space of
the poem – while drawing from a synthesised lexis of epic biblical tones
and pragmatic environmentalism.
Dart spoke directly to us: ‘I am only as wide/as a word’s aperture/but
listen! if you listen/I will move you a few known sounds/in a constant
irregular pattern’ (21). Sleepwalk draws out a historical calculus from par-
ticular social needs and relationships to register instability: ‘This endless
wavering in whose engine/I too am living’ (4: 2–3). Both poems promote
– or embody – an enactive world of ongoing processes of constitution
by many things distributed through space. Thus co-creation in Oswald
trumps the hubris of the narrowly defined Anthropocene. This lexical
and conceptual elasticity is paralleled in Sleepwalk’s lines leaping through
rhythms to culminate with ‘shining wings’ (see the quote). Rather than
taking further imaginative flight here, this moment refers back to the
first direct addressee of the poem on the fifth line (swans ‘pitching’
their wings), thus enacting a gracefully reflexive moment, a gesture to
circularity and entanglement, a sweep that foregrounds an arc of insight
and reflection. For the text to refer back to itself here is to refer back to
the Severn estuary and the meandering river settling into a space. While
quite obvious, almost simple, the poetic consciousness of the line takes
on a particular quality here, for the move instances a loop that conflates
angel and swan: a mythical dimension that is in debt to a structural
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5
Sleepwalk draws from local history, colonial history and Graeco-Roman mythology; the
etymology of Dart invokes the old Devonian name for ‘oak’ and consequently there is a
more pronounced score of English folk mythology present in the text.
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environment) come into being in Sleepwalk like this action of the cork
in Dart; however, enduring indicators of pain and struggle qualify the
sinister atmosphere for they invoke birthing while primarily embody-
ing emotional states. All this speaks to identity formation from within a
corporeal imaginary.
Syntax in Dart takes the emotional world into the ecological: the cries
of the seagulls as they lift on the wing (‘pain’) are slipped into an account
of all things struggling for form, via simile:
Like in a waterfall one small twig caught
catches a stick, a straw, a sack, a mesh
of leaves, a fragile wickerwork of floodbrash,
I saw all things catch and reticulate
into this dreaming of the Dart
that sinks like a feather falls, not quite
in full possession of its weight (25–31)
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Spatialised struggle
A precise toponym and locale for most of the poem, Waveridge Sand is a
signifier of changeability and loyalty at crossed purposes: sand and water
in constant dialogue and competitive presencing, which acutely deline-
ates the estuary’s more-than-human world. And yet a commonplace,
physical continuum of struggle, the topos is a bricolage of signifiers that
collide and accumulate to indicate the difficulty of each human char-
acter’s situation, particularly if they desire rest or stillness as a moment
to gather the self if their neurosis cannot process anything but stable
identity (Bristow, 2015a).
This negative somnambulism refracted in the anxiety of moon and in
silences and darkness promotes a phenomenological shift from person
to planet in the cultural geography of the poet-figure throughout the
whole of Sleepwalk:
There are stars, slowly coming closer with their torches. Notice something
more than mere evening. Notice the white skirt of the Full Moon just
under a cloud’s edge. Beginning to wobble, jostling the reeds. She’s asleep
I think. (16)
Uncertainty suggests that the speaker remains open about the state of
that which she observes. Herein lies an open self, happy to write out an
account of what is emerging; the ecopoetic mode, to bring oneself to the
occasion, speaks of a useful receptivity in a landscape clearly subject to
drastic change. While the stars and moon move and impact on the envi-
ronment, they also hold close to human technology; however, these lines
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Like the canopy of woods, whose heads are ‘murdered’ through their
commingling in the wind, this voice locates ‘moon-beings’, or ‘sound-
beings’ like ‘half-deer’ – a world where selfhood or ego is decapitated,
as it were. The irreducible fraction resulting from the action that divides
any number by its double – the half – suggests not only a liminal self,
but also an incomplete and creaturely self. For Kym Martindale, this is
the friction within the whole of the estuary: ‘the shifting mud banks and
tides’ with the ‘shape-shifting phenomenon, the moon’ (2013, p. 160).
Personhood lives under the sign of potential, the ‘not yet’, resisting the
danger of closure and wholeness, pointing to excess.
The poem ‘River’ (Oswald, 2005) clarifies that a person who is not
a fully autonomous and defined self is thus less capable or desirous of
owning things in either an instrumental or reductive way. Such an ‘I’
invokes ‘the earth’s eye/looking through the earth’s bones/[which] carries
the moon carries the sun but keeps nothing’ (12–14). To keep nothing
is to remain free from the constraints of property, undefined by one’s
labours to date. While capable of reading the phenomenological state of
others, the ‘I’ oscillates between states of visibility and invisibility, pro-
grammed as it is by the phases of the moon, which constitutes ‘moon-
hood’ (Sleepwalk 18: 19). In one sense, selves are ‘half ’ of what they might
be ordinarily, and yet they are expanded into persons led by planetary
forces juggling between pattern and process. For now, I consider this
model of personhood as an indicator of variability – instanced as it is by
‘endless wavering’ (4: 3).
Place-consciousness
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children and return to as adults: the railway tracks behind the house, the
landscapes of adolescence; or the space of our involvement on a weekly
basis: the football ground, the church. Space, then, becomes a place of
our private and sustained reckoning, processes that delineate nothing
socially normative other than a sense of multiplicity. That is to say, our
sense of place is related to our sense of affective being, which is consti-
tuted by the many selves expressed by a person during the course of one
life. These selves pass by us while we are in transit.
Conversely, the lyrical self is rarely divided like this; however, it offers
a singleness of eye from which we witness the calamitous division of the
world and the emergence of protean selves. Moreover, subjective experi-
ence of a particular location as a ‘place’ will not only be further affected
by degrees of place-based personhood – ‘how rooted or peripheral [our]
previous life has been’ – but also by ‘what kinds of surrounding [we are]
conditioned to feel as familiar or strange, and so forth’ (ibid., 73). While
Dart coursed through a palimpsest of serial place histories invoked by
multiple experiences of place, Sleepwalk constructs these experiences as
a struggle and bond between subjectivity and space. This construction
leans upon the poem’s structure and the animating force of the sleepwalk-
ers; the combination of these elements demonstrates how ‘place’ itself
changes; it is ‘eventmental ... something in process’ (Casey, 1997, cited in
Buell, 2005).
With respect to identity arising from place-consciousness, Sleepwalk
is wracked with disquiet, anxiety and discomfort, subjects ‘struggling’ in
space (5: 4; 11: 5; 30: 2). The struggle indicates how the subject feels within
ongoing identity formations; these subject positions are offered succinct
intellectual release from the quandary of how to emote in language once
the environment at large is realised as a location of personhood (after
‘new moon’). This might detail how ongoing processes are less damaging
to a sense of self (consider Oswald’s figuration of ‘moonhood’ quoted).
This situatedness validates how exercising a responsive lyrical voice
might not entail a narrow sense of security with ourselves. Lyricism
can be read as offering such qualified relief from neoliberal identity
formation and the privatising of environmental morality. It details the
larger relation between moon and earth; the dynamics within the hydro-
logical cycle and the ‘huge repeating mechanism’ (3: 4) in which human
scale (and perception) is dwarfed by the lunar cycle and its impact on
things in space, alongside the space itself. The poet-figure – or Dream
Secretary – placed in the central column of the poem with a notebook in
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Withness
Sleepwalk is a dynamic text, underpinned by voices that are born from a
non-duality of musical cognition (reader) and cue (poem); herein lies a
sense of new identity within diluted versions of pre-stabilised subjectiv-
ity. In Sleepwalk this parallel site of subject formation and lyrical aperture
gestures to the emergence (of things) within a qualified loss of narrowly
defined personhood. It promotes fluidity of reference over static framing,
an idea particularly pronounced in the second half of the poem (‘new
moon’) that signifies changes in personhood.
John Shotter adduces the concept of ‘flowforms’ to argue for a world of
becoming, one that is perceived within the process of life. Here, potential
for growth in relation to the living organisms that surround it enables a
focus on intermingling to give rise to a disposition that sees ‘with’ things:
[It is] a form of reflective interaction that involves our coming into living
contact with the living (or moving) being of an other or otherness if it is a
meeting with another person, then we come into contact with their utter-
ances, their bodily expressions, their words, their ‘works’. (Shotter, 2005)
For example, in the first few pages of Dart we are taken ‘onto’ a salmon
discovery: finding its ‘current’ within Iceland, the Faroes and to the Dart
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Footholds
An earlier consideration of pain and struggle looked at the different
degrees of possibility for loosening from one’s circumstance. The
seagulls can break free from their pedestrian earthbound existence; the
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Oswald (2000, pp. 36–37) has written of water as ‘a movement continually bringing itself
to light’ and the poetic challenge of ‘naming a river every three seconds according to what
lies at hand’, which brought her to this point: ‘my poems are nothing more than a series of
extended names spoken together; a kind of complex onomatopeia, or “naming through
listening.”’
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moon cannot slip free in space; it can only dissolve into the shadows
of space. And yet the moon’s presence dominates. It is the captivating
power that is a function of subjective and intersubjective connotations
and memories, which are shot through with affect that has accumu-
lated over time around individuals’ ideas of work, identity and place.
These ideas are subject to each person’s bodily location in the estuary,
how they fit into the place, how they are positioned in the scene, how
they are affected by the moon. For Bennett (2010, p. 350), the body’s
experience shapes the eye’s experience. Drawing from Merleau-Ponty,
she points out that scenes of physical encounter entail ‘[the] disclosure
of an imminent or incipient significance in the living body [which]
extends to the whole sensible world’; moreover, the experience of the
body configures the ‘gaze’ of the subject, to the extent that it will dis-
cover in all other objects ‘the miracle of expression’ (Merleau-Ponty,
1945, p. 230; 225). In Oswald, this seems not to be the case with the
moon and the wind, which strictly lack bodies; but this is true for the
characters in the estuary space.
Jam Tree Gully and Gift Songs pay significant attention to the figure of
the walker. Largely, in Dart and Sleepwalk, being alert to and embedded
within the more-than-human world begins with a focus on the foot:
a metonym for the lower extremity of the leg on which we walk and
through which we are connected to earth; a metaphor for the imprint of
human action in space – and of course a poet’s term of art.
This is ordinary surface stuff with a shoe sticking
out of the mud with a leg in it. Or is that a heron
standing out of bounds on the reservoir Wall.
Which’ll soon be twenty-foot underwater. (Sleepwalk 6: 27–7: 1–3)
The Fisherman has his foot stuck in the wet mud; the passing moon wit-
nesses this brief moment of stasis, of entanglement (withness). Simple.
Dart opens with a walker ‘clomping’ along, informing us that what he
loves ‘is one foot in front of another’ (2: 5, 12). Straightforward. In Woods
etc. ‘footfall’ means to be ‘steady’ and is a remark upon the subject’s atten-
tion that is turned towards ‘feet’ that ‘kept time with the sun’s imaginary/
changing position’ (1: 9–10); some pages later, the ‘feather-footed winds’
are seen going in ‘gym shoes’ (‘Excursion to the Planet Mercury’ 37, 29).
Humorous. In Sleepwalk, when the moon is partly asleep, the Dream
Secretary notes how the moon ‘extricates her foot and begins to rise’ as
the sea comes in, and the chorus remarks that ‘it’s lovely to stroll out/On
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The explicit presentation of fragmentation and reified conceptions of both human sub-
jectivity and natural forces in this chapter relates to the distinctive problems identified by
German critical philosophy and its attempt to establish a rational system based on ‘things
in themselves’, which developed the idea ‘that thought could only grasp what it itself had
created’. Jones, G. S. (1977). The Marxism of the Early Lukács, in Western Marxism: A
Critical Reader (pp. 11–60), London: Verso. To move beyond this paradigm of the mastery
of the world conceived as ‘self-created’ is the premise of deconstructive ecopoetics; to
replay the ideal subject–object relation foreshadowed in Kant, Fichte, Schiller and
Schelling is to animate the mind that ‘found itself trapped in an irresoluble antinomy: the
ever-fixed gulf between the phenomenal world of necessity and the noumenal world of
freedom’ (ibid., 15).
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Belonging
World black and white. Walk up the lane.
Last thing each night. Look up for the moon.
No sign but rain. Almost back home.
One more last quick. Glance up for the moon. (Sleepwalk 40: 5–8)
Transformative poetics
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fabric that is generated as the river runs through each clustered space
on its way to realising an endpoint: at once a rushing mass of collated
river voices exhausting itself into a larger entity, the sea. The book-length
space that is rare in the contemporary lyric affords the poem its emo-
tional depth over the duration of the reader’s engagement, and a more
precise measure of the impact of the current of the river and phases of
the moon on people in discrete locations. Ultimately, we are witness to
change as presented by the poem’s slow unfolding history of people in
space – either being moved through space as in the case of Dart, or being
moved by the space as with Sleepwalk. The increased emotional coloura-
tion of space takes Sleepwalk beyond the linguistic mediations and the
cartographic soundscapes that obsess Dart; and the number of people
working, living, moving through the river in Sleepwalk is a mere frac-
tion – almost one-third – of the populace in Dart. Thus, Sleepwalk more
explicitly denotes the changeability of intimately known humans in the
unfixed environment, preferring to elevate the movement of affect to an
equal position of the movement of subjects in space.
Living bodies
Oswald has distanced herself from a Romantic sense of continuity
between humans and nature: ‘if the phrase must be used then a nature
poet is someone concerned with things being outside each other: how
should extrinsic forms, man and earth for example, come into contact?’
(Pinard, 2009, p. 26). Oswald’s vocation as gardener portends a labour-
oriented listener in the environment, for the gardener invokes the body
in motion and rootedness simultaneously.
Environmental literature foregrounds points of connection, witness-
ing, observation, attunement to energy fields and the more-than-human
world; it is not a practising environmental psychology and yet it can
be framed in alliance with environmental consciousness and pro-envi-
ronmental behaviour.8 There is a legacy of misanthropy evident in such
claims for ‘better people through better literature’. For David Borthwick,
8
Ideas of connection and contact can rest upon a fading dualism of body and mind, decon-
structed by ecocriticism and problematised in terms of a hierarchical relationship between
the internal and the external. For a fascinating counterpoint to the first wave of ecocriti-
cism see Slovic, S. (1996). Nature Writing and Environmental Psychology: The Interiority
of Outdoor Experience, in C. G. Fromm (Ed.), The Ecocriticism Reader: Landmarks in
Literary Ecology (pp. 351–370), Athens, GA: Georgia University Press.
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Walking
Sleepwalk is the net result of many night excursions to the estuary by a
‘secretary’ who meets other humans who speak to the effects of moon-
light and to how it gives shape to their subjectivity.
Walking is a spatial discourse that leads us to ‘the description of things
as presented to our experience’ (Thrift, 1996, p. 34). Literary geography –
which clarifies how fiction is set along a scale of localisations, ranging
from the realistically rendered, highly recognisable to the completely
imaginary – suggests that a poetics of walking is significant in its ‘engaged
agency’, alert to ‘what shows up as it presents itself in our experience’
(ibid.).9 This sense of a world ‘showing’ itself to humans is increasingly
scrutinised by critics aware of the inherent anthropocentrism of this
model and of the untenable idea of nature as an externality required for
this very subject–object relation that privileges perception over pres-
ence. The discourse of the Anthropocene further politicises ideas here.10
9
Sharp, W. (1904). Literary Geography, London: Pall Mall. For the significance of Sharp see
Piatti, B., & Hurni, L. (2011). Editorial, The Cartographic Journal, 48 (4), 218–223; 218.
10
The beautiful and terrifying inescapability of human–nature relations; reconceived as the
deletion of nature owing to its lack of independence that places humans in the spotlight;
and the overriding sense of no longer requiring ‘nature’ in light of our understanding
of the damage that has been done, the dark ecology of the relations of organisms in
the environment. Respectively, these ideas are central to three landmark texts of the
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An affective habitus
Affect is the biological registration of feeling; Elspeth Probyn writes
that the habitus ‘as a description of lived realities is that which generates
practices, frames for positioning oneself in the world, and indeed ways
of inhabiting the world’ (2004, p. 229). The affective habitus is thus an
emotional situation of individual and collective subjectivity and embodi-
ment. An emphasis on the latter works against the idea of emotion as
directly cognitive; there are times, as Probyn has articulated, ‘when
the feeling shakes up the habitus; when the body outruns the cognitive
capture of the habitus’ (ibid., p. 232). It appears that we cannot combine
our sense of the world and the world itself. Donna Haraway amplifies
the point:
Our problem is to have simultaneously an account of radical historical con-
tingency for all knowledge claims and knowing subjects, a critical practice
for recognizing our own ‘semiotic technologies’ for making meanings, and
a no-nonsense commitment to faithful accounts of a ‘real’ world, one that
environmental and ecological humanities: see Carson, R. (1962). Silent Spring, Boston,
MA: Houghton Mifflin; McKibben, B. (1989). The End of Nature, New York: Anchor;
Morton, T. (2007). Ecology without Nature, Cambridge, MA: Harvard University Press.
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realm where something in the self and something in “things” can meet
in a “system of approximations”’ (1977, p. 279).11 A contemporary theo-
retical account might draw this system into a conceptual parallel with
Bennett’s vibrant matter; the former is constructed to suggest difference
and inequality while the latter aims to speak of a commonality within
all things. The ‘system’ in Dart is animated by the movement of the river
through space, from river source to sea; in Sleepwalk the Guattarian ‘chain’
(gaps that paradoxically connect things) is this very system orchestrated
through a spatial text – delimited by a structure creatively mapping voice,
phase of moon and the approximation of these in accumulative space. In
this difficult theoretical light, both poems can be read as allegorical, in
that they extensively perform the metaphor of the relationship between
material culture and the structure of the imagination.
Subluminary habitus
Poetic voice in Sleepwalk is impressionable and unfixed, subject to spe-
cific situations in which the text and space highlight how the world con-
tinues to form. Equally, as amplified by Oswald’s use of layout, textual
events are defined by the ways in which subject and place are imbricated,
each with the other.12 More specifically, I am arguing that a geographic
imaginary inflected by planetary systems is deployed to locate envi-
ronmental affect accumulating and undulating within these situations;
security, identity and emotion register across stones, moon, wind, river
and humans all in definable locations.
Textual structures evoke environmental affordances in Sleepwalk.
Furthermore, walking in space, coloured by Sleepwalk’s enactive som-
nambulance and the contingency of social encounters, complements the
view that ‘the whole of something will never reveal itself in an analytical
moment; no diagram will be able to display it fully, once and for all’
(Copjec (1994, p. 8), cited in Thrift (1996, p. 34)). Readers are exposed to
clarity but each moment of precision either bleeds into or impacts upon
another moment that comes into view and demands more time for our
11
The phrases are Ralph Waldo Emerson’s; see Bristow, T. (2006). Contracted to an Eye-
Quiet World: Poetics of Place in Alice Oswald and William Carlos Williams, Symbiosis: A
Journal of Anglo American Literary Relations, 10 (2), 167–185; the British tradition is clarified
by Haughton, H. (2013, 24 May). Water Worlds: Poets’ Rivers from Thomas Warton to
Alice Oswald, Times Literary Supplement, 13–15.
12
See Thacker, A. (2005–2006). The Idea of a Critical Literary Geography, New Formations,
57, 56–73; Ogborn, M. (2005–2006). Mapping Words, New Formations, 57, 145–149.
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Situated voices
A poem that maps a river from source to sea by composing an amalgam
of river dwellers’ voices begins with a critique of both human presence
and cartography. The riposte to an item carried by the first figure we
encounter – the walker and his map – suggests that representational
ownership (appropriation of space) for one’s own means (either to
understand or navigate the space) is only partly legitimate for pragmatic
reasons. The walker speaks to the map: ‘I keep you folded in my map
pocket and I’ve marked in red/where the peat passes are and the good
sheep tracks’ (Dart 1: 26–27). Only a few lines later, as the walker reflects
on his love for walking – rather than walking as a means to an end – he
enters into an auditory imagination and the poem changes mode.
The shift in mode is an emotional trigger enabling him to ‘find’ the
source of the river trickling out of a bank, ‘a foal of a river’. Such allusion
to genesis invites slow consideration:
one step-width water
of linked stones
trills in the stones
glides in the trills
eels in the glides
in each eel a fingerwidth of sea (2: 28–33)
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from the analogy of the human body (a finger). Linear progress and a
widening out into circularity is paralleled in the traversing of space by
a walker during nightfall carrying a water purifier in his backpack ‘so I
can drink from streams’ (3: 2). While the poem maps out movement and
the upscaling slipstreams of water for creatures to move through space,
this moment is simultaneously a circular and musical reckoning of
geography. The goal-oriented observational eye is drinking up the sonic
dimensions of place while keeping a mind on the human body moving
through space to a new location; a question to raise here concerns the
amount of technology and knowledge we might bring with us to the
encounter as a means to fully experience it in its newness to us.
Turning now to Sleepwalk’s ending, we find that the Dream Secretary
passage consists of two octets and a cinquain: three pulses that begin
with psychological immediacy, stepping back to register the subject in
third person, and then referencing the moment in the most abstract
terms in the poem, respectively. For economy, I compress these here:
Last thing each night, go out for the moon.
Pull on old coat, shut garden gate.
Shoulder of a woman. There, that’s her.
Very old poor soul, maybe all but gone.
Sometimes the moon is more an upstairs window,
Curtains not quite drawn but lit within and lived within. (40: 1–2; 11–12; 25–26)
The use of verbs in the indicative mood takes the poem away from its
status as a record, offering a complex writing out of the poem as it is
happening. They enact the ontology of things that Sleepwalk began in
its prologue, as ‘something very hard to define’ (1: 21) and yet captured
in the magnificent simile of solar-powered angels (mentioned earlier).
The sense of the writer’s routine, witnessed in the secretary’s presence at
the beginning of each nightwalk to the estuary during each phase of the
moon, revisits the energy of situated voices and yet this is more orderly
and calm than the painful struggle of the moon. Moreover, the use of
‘sometimes’ six times in the closing stanza is telling. To some degree, we
assume, the poem has come to terms with changeability.
The moon: an ‘upstairs window’? The solitary orbiting satellite trans-
forms into a transparent gateway between an interior professional space
of writing and the outside world as we are taken on an imaginative jour-
ney to the interior space of an ‘other’ from the situation of an encounter
on the ground (albeit the ground as fluid estuary). The curtains’ ordinary
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A provisional conclusion
The ‘spasm of midnight’ (10) that follows will be instanced by the spiral-
ling out of lines into an unpunctuated and fragmented couplet (13, 14).
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The naked array of things that constitutes this poem’s last movement
grows out of compression at the centre of the poem that ironically ties the
lexis of architecture and town planning to the marginal pastoral spaces of
England. There is a bursting forth from constellations in Oswald’s poetry,
as much as there is a meshwork of accumulation at times. Here, the title
nominates the noun for the space of husbandry and the semantic space
in which data resides; the poem expands and contracts between these
two scales of dwelling (living and thinking) that are an invitation to act
within and interpret the environment. It is in consequence to these two
pragmatic pressures that the poem acts like a lung; breathing in where
lineation affords rest between each moment that resists the logic of
argument. The poem is yet another Oswaldian example of how writing
involves us in places, bodily.
* * *
This chapter has shown how ecopoetry derives from the inhabitation
of these breathing places, and that its reference to placehood posits the
poem itself as a horizon of experience via proxy. As a measure of place
attachment, ecopoetics unpacks the conditions of possibility for any
geographic location to house the enworlded solitary ‘I’. Oswald’s poetry
attends to the moment of the poem where the world resides in its own
naming and navigation, which cradles each object as an energy field,
animating and plastic, partly constituting and constituted by the accu-
mulated, spatial formation. As such, no subject, no object, no dualism
inhere.
I read Sleepwalk as an incomplete dialogic interaction between human
and estuary as a total sum of separate, dispersed and unfixed agencies;
however, spatially arranged subjects operate within an animated triptych
(vertical layout) wherein static or containing models of foreground and
background are eliminated in the arrangement. The poetic site, there-
fore, registers the Severn catchment area as a fluid topos of collapsed
and emergent subjectivity. There are concrete presences and undulating
forces within this landscape that bring to mind the diorama and the
stage. With respect to human interest, such becoming is symbolically
contained within the sense of being ‘not I’ (Sleepwalk 24: 8), which is
to say, being with others and changing with others. Finally, the poem
instances human responses to an environment that simultaneously com-
plicates that very demarcation.
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Conclusion
Abstract: First of all I review ideas of history, belonging
and selfhood to clarify the challenge of the Anthropocene
as finding creative and instructive ways of attuning human
sensitivities to more-than-human contexts. I then align
findings on territory, estrangement and identification to the
senses of situatedness, settledness and discreteness from the
Anthropocene paradigm of personhood. Finally, I conclude
that it is apposite to trace emotions in our historical
moment warped by environmental pressures, before asking
where next for the lyrical imagination.
Marx asserted that ‘to be radical is to grasp things at the root. But for
man the root is man himself ’ (1975, p. 251). Poems of our contemporary
geopolitical climate have begun to negotiate the anthropocentrism inher-
ent within an understanding that to think ‘radically’ is to grasp human
action. Within the environmental humanities, scholars are rethinking
the human within a more-than-human context; it is a useful angle on
human hubris and technological advantage. Heidegger says:
As soon as what is unconcealed no longer concerns man even as object, but
does so, rather, exclusively as standing-reserve ... then he comes to the very
brink of a precipitous fall; that is, he comes to the point where he himself
will have to be taken as standing-reserve. Meanwhile man, precisely as the
one so threatened[,] exalts himself to the posture of lord of the earth. In this
way the impression comes to prevail that everything man encounters exists
only insofar as it is his construct. This illusion gives rise in turn to one final
delusion: it seems as though man everywhere and always encounters only
himself. (1977, pp. 26–27)
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A word on history
Like when god throws a star
And everyone looks up
To see that whip of sparks
And then its gone
(Alice Oswald, Memorial)
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A note on belonging
A greeting, enfilade, vestibule
of activity: that door. The din of birds
a disruption to the passage
of warplanes overhead, training
to make a mark, a strike against threats
always being determined.
(‘Building (Extension)’ (Kinsella, 2012))
This study has asked three slim publications to speak of an epoch, the
Anthropocene. And yet these collections of poetry are indicative of a
new phase of nature writing, poetry and criticism that speaks from the
more-than-human world. This phase collides with ecological thought to
clarify the challenges for new humanisms in our historical moment. It
is in this very space of dialogue between worlds and thoughts where a
protagonist is revealed. The protagonist is historical. Again, Paul de Man
writes, ‘history awakens in us a true sense of our temporality, by allow-
ing for the interplay between achievement and dissolution, self-assertion
and self-loss’ (1987, p. 13). This historical perspective – as registered
by Kinsella, Burnside and Oswald – neither frames an autobiographi-
cal self nor emotions floating free in space. Rather, they immerse our
subjectivity in an inclusive world that registers primordial and rational
feelings simultaneously. These affective states give rise to consciousness
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A sketch of selfhood
On the road to the Brensholmen ferry:
snow gentians, mineral blue
and perfect, like a child’s idea of north;
(‘A Duck Island Flora’ (Burnside, 2002))
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Conclusion
Kinsella, Burnside and Oswald each, in their own ways, indicate a fresh
orientation of contemporary thought towards the idea that any previ-
ously conceived metaphysical backdrop is deeply present in our everyday
experience. Whether this entails a shift from knowledge to imagination
for our twenty-first-century epistemologies remains to be seen.
For now, the Anthropocene paradigm has framed my approach to
these texts; the poetry has warped the paradigm. Surveying the find-
ings across these chapters suggests that the study has broken free from
definitional questions and strict models of consciousness. The net result
attempts to piece together place-related concepts for it has spoken indi-
rectly of belonging, of the relations between people, planet and place,
and yet it has worked beyond the ‘jigsaw puzzle’ view on putting together
elements of place attachment, that is, ‘place identity, rootedness, sense
of place, place dependence [and] place satisfaction’.1 There is more to it
than this array of ideas, which taken on their own would come short of
understanding our feelings for place. I have elected to orient my analysis
to a cultural crisis where society has distanced itself, as Elspeth Probyn
writes, ‘from the innate, the biological, the instinctual and the affective’
1 Cf. Lewicka, M. (2011). Place Attachment: How Far Have We Come in the Last 40 Years?
Journal of Environmental Psychology, 31, 207–230.
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(2004, p. 235). I have tried, too, to imagine how poetry might help here
while neither being drawn into a misanthropic thesis of connectivity
nor indulging in self-serving aesthetic trickery of an environmentally
nuanced presence–absence conundrum. Poetry offers a thirdspace of
imaginative possibility.
There is not one picture. Additional factors associated with place
include colonial history, biodiversity loss, spatial relations and political
relations. In poetry, emotional communities arise and fragment from
these relations; perhaps literature can clarify contingencies here, which
might ordinarily be overlooked? The somnambulant consciousness in
Sleepwalk is a signature of personhood that does not register informa-
tion in the way that we do when awake; it promotes a phenomenological
mode that appears to lack any simple principle of organisation; it pro-
motes a phenomenological mode drawing from the unconscious and
open to modification.2 Consciousness here is neither institutionalised
nor wholly private.
This phenomenon is not unique to the three collections. Burnside’s pro-
visional worlds acknowledge others in the landscape: past presences, flora
and fauna and histories of settlement, husbandry and industry. Kinsella’s
poetics of encounters heightens points of relations between agents and
landscape to politicise approximation as a question of ethical situations
that might begin with specificity of material places and the things that
reside within. Oswald’s song, however, is less anxious and more assured
in its knowledge of who is at the centre, margin and periphery within
each scene of writing and experience. It resides somewhere between the
micro-scale of Kinsella’s WA residence and Burnside’s abstracted North
European wanderings. Although animals are less present in Sleepwalk
than in the other volumes, the songs of the moon and the wind remind
us that other beings have their own lifeworlds, their own emotions and
phenomenology. They challenge what matters, what appears, what effects
they have upon the world, and their significance for human concerns
and the concerns of their earth others. Kinsella and Burnside radically
dehumanise the image of nature, impacted as it is by human action, and
Oswald more directly abandons the anthropocentric perspective that all
three poets challenge.
2 See the sense of knowing more than our own minds as articulated by Bachelard, G. (1990).
On Science, Poetry, and ‘the Honey of Being’, in D. Wood (Ed.), Philosophers’ Poets (pp.
153–176), London: Routledge.
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This poem is about clearing the land and building a home, and how
these actions are antagonistic and reciprocal. To Kinsella’s lyrical con-
sciousness this double-edged action is paralleled in the work of writing;
together, they signify removing former presences and markers of place
and putting down one’s roots. The Cairns, in the final line of this poem,
3 The literature on emotional connections to places – or ‘place attachment as affect’ has been
summarised by Scannell, L., & Gifford, R. (2010). Defining Place Attachment: A Tripartite
Organizing Framework, Journal of Environmental Psychology, 30, 1–10.
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are read as ‘pyramids of the outback’ and ironically denote the imposed
spatial imaginary and linguistic hegemony of European settlers on the
Australian landscape.
The poem unpacks the doubleness of the Cairns – the northern
Queensland city of the same name and a place stereotyped as one replete
with youths behaving in this manner. The ethically ungrounded youths,
caught in an act of nature, portend an innocence or naïveté in being
confident in one’s place. This comportment is counterposed to the sensi-
tive ecological voice of attunement to future growth in a different mode
of freedom beyond our reckoning ‘wild oats ... at impossible angles’. And
this opposition triggers the reflective stance into a guilt-ridden inter-
nalism that questions survival based on encounters in the landscape.
Thus, implicitly, Kinsella’s reflexivity confirms one sense of what such
an encounter means for lyricism in this historical moment. Pictures,
phrases, anecdotes are assembled as ‘investments’ from this territory;
now the exploiter of his situation, the ‘I’ turns this experience of ethi-
cal reflection into livelihood feeding the ‘rowdy cities’ his poetry of the
bush; and then, beyond an audience, there is the translation of world into
money, converting ‘broken/fingers’ into the source of home economics.
This is a heady progression of cynical tenor that subtly reanimates an
awareness of the ‘ruins’ that lie in the wake of cultural practice. It is for
the reader to decide whether this is pushed forth too heavy-handedly
in the double-frame of the final line and its end stop: the ‘empire build-
ing’ of the pastoral mode, which fits with the rugged city of the tropical
north.
The lyrical project appears to be a one that can register this histori-
cal problem of physical and intellectual territorialism that runs into the
present. Rather than delineate a holistic sense of continuum wherein
human and nature are in harmony, Kinsella encourages the line not
to feign a humanist injury from this fact of barbarism, but during an
ethical realism of our worldliness the poetic line holds firm to steady
any nervousness or frailty that might arise in an attempt to secure this
record as means to escape it. John Burnside’s concern is for the ways that
consciousness of this affective space (as a phenomenon within the lyric’s
arresting of world) comes to mind, and how once raised this brings to
relief the possibility for wider relations to place.
There are times when I think
of the knowledge we had as children:
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the I to ask questions of itself. These questions are neither temporal nor
moral questions, but humanist concerns for identity and identification
(to be with things). The reader should be clear that these questions,
while of great relevance to all ethically reflective subjects, are burdened
with political freight in our historical moment. The tradition of lyric
poetry (and its relationship to Romanticised moods and feelings) is fur-
ther weighted down by Anthropocene gravity: humans identifying with
nature without causing harm.
I love
to stand among the last trees listening down
to the releasing branches where I’ve been –
the rain, thinking I’ve gone, crackles the air
and calls by name the leaves that aren’t yet there (10–14)
The second sentence confirms the ‘I’ for the first time. It is shortly fol-
lowed by lines that open with the preposition ‘to’ rushing forth a dou-
ble sense of selfhood from a congealed state to one determined by an
emphasis on movement and extension. This moment is metaphorically
significant as it speaks of ‘the last trees’ just as the human ‘I’ enters the
poem; furthermore, these lines can be read for their sense of terminus, of
last things, or as enjambed lines (11, 13). Such doubleness is compelling.
This is earth and sky framing selfhood while the poem is silently denot-
ing a complex sense of contact and contiguity, which is to say human
and non-human are similarly placed in a site of exchange and intimacy.
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Jam Tree Gully realises the importance of each referent in its domain;
Sleepwalk embodies multiple modes of environmental perception; Gift
Songs demands a cultural ecological view of co-evolutionary husbandry.
All three collections are backlit by the human propensity to alter land-
scapes; they write of the capacity of landscape to alter human perception
and for it to connect minds and emotions. To be simply as we are, and
to think of how we can be, requires the witness of but one thing: the
dynamic meaning-making process of human-environment relations.
These relations cannot be converted into statistics or ideograms; they are
held within the capacity of literature to undo or deconstruct a sense of
place through its ability to transfix and transverse. In the final analysis,
lyric poetry works in this space to imagine affective subjectivities.
Place, people, emotion – these are accumulated in the Anthropocene
lyric as crafted by Burnside, Kinsella and Oswald to affirm that geogra-
phy is a rich hermeneutic milieu. Our task in literary studies is not to
reduce this complexity to an environmental psychology, but to refine our
interpretation of the relationships between humans and places. Then we
may develop modes and genres that give rise to new affective subjec-
tivities within the Anthropocene. Let us acknowledge the relevance of
geography and location to cultural studies in the interface of landscape,
bioregion, Anthropocene and formal experimentation that is already the
new domain of ecocriticism. This acknowledgement in turn can help us
to reach out from the humanities towards consilient epistemes in the
social and natural sciences.
The next step, perhaps, is to write towards an Anthropocene
phenomenography.
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Affect and Emotion (Heidegger; Tomkins): For Heidegger,
emotion and mood are an irreducible pre-theoretical
background to life. With less stress placed on causality and
more on possibility, this background is relative to the way
in which humans and animals are situated within either
the world’s disclosure (material, biological formations) or
the manner in which it is rendered intelligible (conceptual,
artistic, etc.). More recent theory considers affects as pri-
mary physiological expressions (a face turning red in anger
or shame) and emotions as fully integrated experiences of
feelings within the context of a subject’s private life history
and social meaning structure (sadness felt through the
loss of a loved one; joy experienced at meeting someone
new). Affect is biological, innate with the species; emotion
is biographical. See anthropocene and anthropocene
emotion.
Anthropocene (Crutzen and Stoermer): The Anthropocene
is a proposed unit of geological time marking a break with
the Holocene period. The term refers to anthropogenic
environmental change, the tangible impact on Earth’s eco-
systems by human activities. Since the eighteenth century,
humans have been the dominant influence on climate and
environment: they have contributed to a 30% increase in
atmospheric carbon dioxide; exhausted 40% of the planet’s
oil reserves; and have transformed 50% of land surfaces.
Anthropocene emotion: Anthropocene emotions take
on various modalities: direct arousal from environmental
conditions that impact on livelihood (embarrassment and
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Index
accumulate, accumulation, 60, de Man, P., 110
79, 88–9, 95–7, 106, 123 decolonised, 9, 21, 24–6, 32
affect, 2, 15, 21, 23, 26, 32, 33, dialogic, 8, 49, 97, 106
40, 42, 46, 61, 78–9, 84, discreteness, 13, 105, 120
90, 92, 93, 95, 98, 100–1, dualism, 2, 11, 15, 38, 48, 50, 70,
110–13, 115, 123 98, 106
amalgam, 46, 58, 96, 103
anthropocene emotion, 2, 5, 7, ecopoetics, 4, 6, 9–12, 15, 78,
34, 57 96, 106–10, 120
anthropocentrism, 13, 30, 46, Eliot, T.S., 34, 48–9, 54–6, 63,
96, 99, 108 66, 69, 72–3, 75
array, 16, 17, 26, 33, 53, 61, 72, embodied, embodiment, 7, 62,
82, 85–6, 90, 106, 113 74, 100, 120
assemblage, 33, 87 Emerson, R.W., 66–9, 102
Augustine, 51, 57, 66, 67, 68 emotional literacy, 13
emotions, 4, 5, 8, 22, 23, 30, 32,
bodily, 40, 48, 60, 69, 78, 93, 38–9, 40, 44, 50, 60, 68–9,
95, 96, 97, 103, 106, 110 75, 77, 79, 85–6, 107–8,
body, 4, 7, 8, 14, 15, 17, 29, 59, 110–11, 113, 114, 121, 123
64, 75, 76, 78, 87, 95, 96, emptiness, 28, 51, 52, 67, 72, 81
98, 99, 100, 104, 105 enworlded, enworldment, 46,
bonds, 24, 88 61, 106, 110
evolving subjectivity, 79
climate, 7, 21, 22, 30, 37, 108, 121 excess, 6, 91
geopolitical, 108
climate change, 3, 20, 22, 23, freedom, 3, 25, 31, 38, 55, 58, 60,
28, 42, 43, 44 67–9, 96, 101, 112–13, 116
Coleridge, S. T., 66, 68 Frost, R., 101
composure, 61
corporeal, 9, 51, 60, 88, 93, 94, guilt, 34, 116
101, 122
creatureliness, 49, 65 habitus, 8, 14, 47, 49, 72,
100–3
damage, 26, 29, 30, 35, 43, 45, Heidegger, M., 55–6, 69–70,
99 74–5, 108
history, 7, 11, 13, 23–4, 28, 32, 38, 40, 45, phenomenology, 5, 18, 48, 70, 82, 114
49, 50, 52, 57, 62–4, 69–70, 74, 75, place-consciousness, 79, 91, 92
78, 83, 87, 98, 101, 105, 108–10, 114 place, poetics of, 2, 18, 53
home, 3, 12, 13, 14, 15, 20, 21, 22, 27, 30, placehood, 14, 79, 106
31, 32, 45, 48, 50, 51, 65, 67, 70, 71, place-making, 7, 52
78, 97, 111, 115, 116, 128 prayer, 27, 51, 55, 59
presencing, 15, 16, 17, 42, 61, 74, 89, 96
international regionalism, 26
intersubjectivity, 40 radical pastoral, 37–8, 43
intertextuality, 50 Rilke, R. M., 48, 66, 68, 70, 71, 72
irony, 42, 44, 67, 81 romantic, romanticism, 15, 41, 49, 50,
52, 57, 66, 69, 70, 98, 109, 112, 119,
James, W., 66–7, 68–9 122
joy, 3, 22, 29, 38, 45, 50
settledness, 13, 119
labour, 11, 43, 73, 82, 84, 89, 98 shame, 66
landscape 6, 10, 12, 18, 20, 21, 22, 23–6, silence, 17, 35, 37, 52, 83, 89, 96
30, 32, 34, 37, 39, 41–2, 43, 45, 50, situatedness, 7, 13, 92, 105, 115
51, 61, 62, 64–5, 73, 75, 78, 80, 89, soul, 7, 52, 66, 69, 74, 104
92, 96, 97, 105, 106, 109, 111, 114, spatialised emotion, 41
115–16, 118, 119–20, 120–1, 123 stance, 6, 7, 34, 112, 116
loss, 3, 12, 22, 24, 27, 29–31, 34, 35, 39, standpoint, 6, 18, 42, 96
50, 52, 56, 64, 65, 69–70, 93, 110, Stevens, W., 48, 49, 53, 54, 55, 56, 57, 59,
114, 120 61, 63, 66, 69, 72, 73
still to come, 51
Marx, K., 62, 108 stillness, 37, 51, 61, 67, 68, 85, 89
materialism, 11, 62, 64 structure, 82, 86, 92, 93, 102, 109
Merleau-Ponty, M., 76, 82, 95 struggle, 27, 30, 88, 89, 92, 94, 96, 97,
moodswung, 80 104, 112, 119
more-than-human, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 12, subjectivity, 3, 15, 17, 18, 25, 40, 42, 58,
13, 15, 16, 17, 18, 35, 38, 39, 41, 46, 62, 65, 79, 82, 83, 86, 92, 93, 96, 97,
61, 68, 71, 74, 78, 85, 89, 95, 97, 98, 99, 100, 101, 105–9, 110, 118, 122
108, 110, 113, 119, 120, 122 surprise, 3, 50
myth, 45, 52, 56, 101, 111, 112, 119 survival, 13, 14, 30, 36, 116
openness, 32, 38, 44, 45, 55, 61, 64, 72 Thoreau, H. D., 36, 37, 43, 44
organism, 8, 14, 93, 99
walking 10, 30, 57, 58, 60, 75, 78, 99,
pain, 3, 28, 29, 30, 66, 67, 87–9, 94 99–100, 102, 103
pastoral, 20–2, 24, 25, 27, 32, 33, 35, 37, witness, 4, 7, 17, 20, 24, 26, 31, 36, 51,
38, 78, 80, 87–9, 116 64, 86, 92, 97, 98, 100, 110, 121,
pathetic fallacy, 15, 30, 41 123
pattern, 10, 40, 64, 73, 86, 88, 91, 96, Wordsworth, W., 66
109, 117, 121 worldliness, 6, 7, 17, 96, 116, 119
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