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    The student provides a concise 3 sentence summary of the poem "Beach" by William Hart-Smith: The poem describes the speaker's memories of time spent at the beach as a child, evoking feelings of nostalgia and past innocence through vivid sensory details and imagery. Personal recollections are shared through first person point of view to draw the reader in and elicit empathy. Repetition of phrases and variation in sentence structure create impact and highlight contrasts between the past experiences at the beach and the present reflection.

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    The student provides a concise 3 sentence summary of the poem "Beach" by William Hart-Smith: The poem describes the speaker's memories of time spent at the beach as a child, evoking feelings of nostalgia and past innocence through vivid sensory details and imagery. Personal recollections are shared through first person point of view to draw the reader in and elicit empathy. Repetition of phrases and variation in sentence structure create impact and highlight contrasts between the past experiences at the beach and the present reflection.

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    Yr 9 English

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    The student provides a concise 3 sentence summary of the poem "Beach" by William Hart-Smith: The poem describes the speaker's memories of time spent at the beach as a child, evoking feelings of nostalgia and past innocence through vivid sensory details and imagery. Personal recollections are shared through first person point of view to draw the reader in and elicit empathy. Repetition of phrases and variation in sentence structure create impact and highlight contrasts between the past experiences at the beach and the present reflection.

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    Year 9 English Student Sample

    Beach by William Hart-Smith

    Student Response

    First person POV is a good choice to evoke empathy. Very personal. Good emotive word choice.

    one word

    Perfect use
    Great

    metaphor! of semicolon.

    Great usage of white space.

    off

    Incomplete sentence,

    I
    changes to present tense.

    Think about

    rewording.

    H
    F
    Tense.

    n
    Great use of repetition and contrasting sentence length for impact!

    0
    Good imagery.

    Comma before quotation marks.

    sp?

    c b
    Good.

    I
    Good impact.

    Tense.

    Good work

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