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ABSTRACT

A COMPERATION BETWEEN INDONESIAN ABSTRACT WRITTERS AND


FOREIGN ABSTRACTS WRITTERS

DOSEN PENGAMPU : Dr.Misrita , S.S , M.Hum.

CREATED BY :

YEPEN K.R .SILITONGA

193010404019

FORESTRY DEPARTMENT

FACULTY OF AGRICULTURE

UNIVERSITY OF PALANGKARAYA

2019
abstract writer in the country (Indonesia) from the library.
abstract foreign writer (from the internet)
1. discuss abstracts of domestic (Indonesian) writers from the library

INDONESIAN ABSTRACT

DISCUSSION

The Title FOREST AND LAND FIRES DAMAGE RATE MAPPING IN


KALAWA VILLAGE FOREST IN 2015
The abstract title of this Indonesian writer discusses the formulation of the problem that is
happening

First Sentence

This research is to determine the burned area and map the distribution ofpost; firedamege rates in
kalawa village forest in 2015 in therms of fire serverity and vegetation density.

The first sentence discusses the purpose of the contents of the journal being studied.

This research ( s ) is to determine the burned area and map the distribution ofpost; firedamege
rates in kalawa village forest in 2015 (P) in therms of fire serverity and vegetation density.(o)

*Active sentence

* Using tense : future perfect tense

Second Sentence

This research used landsat 8OLI Imagenery of periods before and after the fire.

the second sentence discusses the formulation of the the method to be used for the formulation of
the problem in this case

This research ( s ) used (P) landsat 8OLI Imagenery of periods before and after the fire (O)

* Active Sentence

* Using Tense : simple present and simple past.


Third Sentence

Determination of the fire periods was performed with the assistance of hotspot data .

the third sentence discusses the method and purpose of the research to be conducted

Determination of the fire periods(S) was performed with the assistance (P) of hotspot
data(O)

*Active Sentence

* Using Tense : past continuos tense

Fourth Sentence

Image analisys to map the demage rate was using fire index (NBR) and vegetation index (
NDVI ) which then overlayed for making a demage rate map .

the fourth sentence discusses analyzing or in other words as a method in solving problems

Image analisys to map (s) the demage rate was using fire index (NBR) and vegetation index (
NDVI ) which then overlayed for making (P) a demage rate map (O)

* Active Sentence

*Using Sentence : past continuos tense

Fifth Sentence

Based on the study by the researcher , the moderate damage level is the most dominant with an
area of 269.91 ha ,major damege rate with an area of 200.16 ha , and minor damege rate with and
area of 142.72 ha .

The sentence discusses discussing the results of research which have deduced factors from the

problem..

*Active sentence

*Using Sentence : present perfect tense


Sixth Sentence

Total area detected as burned area is 612.81 ha .

the sixth sentence discusses the conclusions from the results of the study

Total area (S)detected (P)as burned area is 612.81 ha .(O)

*Active sentence

*Using sentence : present perfect tense

Seventh Sentence

Damege distributions is dominenated by damege on the wastern part of kalawa village forest
,which is 92,98% of the area detected as burned area .

the seventh sentence or the last sentence in Indonesian abstract discusses damege distribution is
dominated by damage to the wasted part of the kalawa village forest, which constitutes 92.98%
of the area detected as burnt area. this is the final conclusion

*Active Sentence

*Using Sentence : present perfect tense


. 2. Discuss abstract foreign writers from the internet

Abstract

Asia-Pacific is a forest conflict hotspot as too often forest governance and management excludes
the interests and values of local and indigenous people, who see their rights increasingly
diminished as the allocation of forestland to private sector entities and conservation areas
intensifies. The abundance of forest conflicts underlines the need to address them in a sustainable
manner-i.e. conflict transformation, where conflict is seen as an opportunity to seek lasting positive
changes at the relational level between key actors, but also at the structural, institutional and
societal levels. RECOFTC-The Center for People and Forests is working to reduce the incidence
and negative impacts of natural resource conflict and to tackle the root causes of conflict. Our
principal strategy is to strengthen the capacity of relevant institutions and key stakeholders at all
levels to transform conflict in positive ways. As part of this we have conducted and published
research to understand the role and potential of mediation to transform forest conflicts by
examining best practices in the Asia-Pacific region. As part of RECOFTC's capacity development
program we, together with partners, are using the findings of the research in our strategic
communication to raise awareness of mediation as a tool for transforming forest conflict, and in
our training programs through development of, for example, an advanced conflict mediation
manual. The program's success is greatly dependent on partnership between governmental and
non-governmental organizations, the private sector, and rural communities. In the above context
the aims of the paper are threefold: 1. Increase understanding of conflict transformation 2.
Highlight the value of mediation in conflict transformation 3. Build and strengthen the capacity of
a network of conflict transformation practitioners from governments, NGOs, private sector and
community organizations.

Discussion

Fisrst Sentence

Asia-Pacific is a forest conflict hotspot as too often forest governance and management excludes
the interests and values of local and indigenous people, who see their rights increasingly
diminished as the allocation of forestland to private sector entities and conservation areas
intensifies.

the first sentence discusses the background of the problem from the abstract of the foreign

writer, the factors of the problem formulation, and the triggers and what happened.

Using Sentence : present Tense

Active sentence

Second sentence

The abundance of forest conflicts underlines the need to address them in a sustainable manner-
i.e. conflict transformation, where conflict is seen as an opportunity to seek lasting positive
changes at the relational level between key actors, but also at the structural, institutional and
societal levels.

the second sentence discusses the formulation of the problem, in detail and the main causes of it

Using tense : present tense

Active sentence

Thrith sentence

RECOFTC-The Center for People and Forests is working to reduce the incidence and negative
impacts of natural resource conflict and to tackle the root causes of conflict.

this third sentence already addresses the problem of completion, explains the problem of
resolution

Using sentence : simple present tense

Active sentence
Fourth sentence

Our principal strategy is to strengthen the capacity of relevant institutions and key
stakeholders at all levels to transform conflict in positive ways. As part of this we
have conducted and published research to understand the role and potential of
mediation to transform forest conflicts by examining best practices in the Asia-Pacific
region. As part of RECOFTC's capacity development program we, together with
partners, are using the findings of the research in our strategic communication to raise
awareness of mediation as a tool for transforming forest conflict, and in our training
programs through development of, for example, an advanced conflict mediation
manual.

this fourth sentence discusses the solution of the problem.

Using sentence : simple present tense and simple past tense

Active sentence

Fifth sentence

The program's success is greatly dependent on partnership between governmental and non-
governmental organizations, the private sector, and rural communities

the sentence agreed to discuss the results of the research and prove the problem that has been

applied.

Using sentence : simple present tense

Active sentence

Sixth sentence

In the above context the aims of the paper are threefold: 1. Increase understanding of conflict
transformation 2. Highlight the value of mediation in conflict transformation 3. Build and
strengthen the capacity of a network of conflict transformation practitioners from governments,
NGOs, private sector and community organizations
the sixth sentence is the goal for the reader after learning the background, problem formulation
and problem solving

Using sentence : simple present tense

Active sentence

A comparison between the two Indonesian writers abstracts from the library and
foreign writers abstracts from the internet.

Indonesian abstract abstracts have one paragraph and there are a few concise and concise

sentences, while abstract foreign writers have more than 3 paragraph and with have long

sentences, Indonesian abstract abstracts have one author while abstract foreign writers have more

than two authors ,in terms of abstract contents, domestic and foreign writers have similarities

from the background, objectives, methods, problem formulation, problem solving. however,

abstract authors abroad have more than 3 paragraphs.


REFERENCE

https://www.researchgate.net/publication/281995575_Transforming_Forest_Conflicts_in_Asia-

Pacific_A_Capacity_Development_Approach

https://www.google.com/search?q=translate&oq=tra&aqs=chrome.1.69i57j69i59j0l3j69i65.6118j0j7&s

ourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

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