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Most of children in the world infected disease because they never have been
vaccinated. The health department in Clark Country, Washington stated that 47
children of 53 people infected by the measles. This phenomenon also happened in
New York City, the measles outbreak have sickened almost 200 people. Based on
those facts, it is important highlight vaccine as prevention, protection, and
stimulation.
As the prevention, vaccines are available for these 18 dangerous or deadly
diseases. Over the years, these vaccines have prevented countless cases of disease and Commented [UD1]: Supporting Idea, it can be used to support
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saved millions of lives. Vaccine is one of the action in preventing the infectious
disease such as measles, polio, mumps, chicken pox, whooping cough, diphtheria,
HPV, and etc. In preventing the dangerous disease, vaccine becomes as the best Commented [UD2]: Supporting detail
defense for human body because it contains of biological products and parts of
viruses or bacteria. Those advantages make the World Health of Organization (WHO)
stated vaccines recommended by age and travel destination, detailed vaccination and
disease information. Commented [UD3]: You can re-organize the paragraph.