Dear Abigail,

I believe that your font color for your opening is grey and that should be the same as the
other writing. Also for the first citation you need to have you volume number italicized. You did
do a good job of making sure your citations had hanging indents. I didn’t go through and count,
but I would make sure you have two hundred words per annotation. I love the first annotation
and you should keep that one first. It is incredibly interesting, and would benefit by the
incorporation of some statistics to go with it. Remember that the total word count doesn’t include
the citation. I would recommend going through and reading your annotations out loud as there
are some grammar error in the last three annotations. I am not sure if a few of your citations are
written correctly or if there just wasn’t any info after the name of the journal/publisher. I would
double check and make sure they are all strong sources if there isn’t a lot of info to cite. Try to
not to repeat the first word of sentences, but outside of that you did a great job and were very
detail oriented.
Sincerely, Tyler