ADVANCE ENGLISH WRITING

ASSIGNMENT-1

Submitted to: Faiza Ijaz

By: Hera Naeem
Roll. No. L1F17BBAM0040
Marks Obtained/Total ______/45
 PREWRITNG STRATEGIES

INTRODUCTION (2+0.5=2.5)
Prewriting is the very first step where one organize their ideas for the final draft. Movies,
also known as a motion picture were first introduced in a series of still images that when
represented on a screen would create an illusion to the human eye. Later, it has been enhanced
and is a “one of the best source of entertainment” as day by day technology is enhancing.
Modern movies use high quality of cinematography and trained actors as well as editors, which
are appealing by the audience watching the screen.
IMPORTANCE OF PREWRITING STRATEGIES (2*0.5=2.5)
Prewriting Strategies does wonders of its own as it helps to create a better output of the final
literary draft presented by an individual. It is a better way of planning as it help to organize
thought that rush up and down in our minds, searching for a place to settle down. It enables to
express each thought that we have regarding the certain discussion and then finally chose the
most appealing and suitable choice which give a positive benefit to our writing.
STRATEGIES & THEIR APPLICABILITY (5*6=30)
a. Brainstorming
1. Cinematography 6. Broadens the imagination
2. Everlasting entertainment 7. Communication of Idea
3. Emotional rollercoaster 8. Representation of cultures
4. Dramatic impersonators 9. Visually appealing
5. Outside the box 10. Expensive production
b. Questioning and Answering

 Questions
WHO? 1. Who first introduced movies?
2. Who can to play you?
WHAT? 1. What is better: a movie or a book?
2. What movies are popular?
WHERE? 1. Where: a café or a cinema?
2. Where can a movies directed?
WHEN? 1. When cinematography began?
2. When animations began?
WHY? 1. Why watch a movie
2. Why is it entertainment?
HOW? 1. How could movies earn money
2. How can the audience help?
  Answers
WHO? 1. Lumière brothers'
2. Jennifer Aniston
WHAT? 1. A movie
2. Romantic and Fantasy
WHERE? 1. Cinema
2. A lively place
WHEN? 1. In the 1880’s
2. In 1950’s
WHY? 1. Less time consuming
2. Pleasing to the eye
HOW? 1. Actors are paid
2. By giving their remarks

c. Listing

List 1 List 2
Actors Actors; Dramatic impersonators
Visual enhancement represent characters
Soundtrack A recognizable characters promotes the movie

Location In an animation, a impersonators is required

Investments Bring the story alive and real
d. Clustering/Mapping

Plays the role of

Actors the character
Dramatic
Impersonators
MOVIES Promtes the
Movie

Appealing
to the
Visual Smart use of audience
Enchancement optic illusion
Better
Location Cinematography

Investments
Setting of
Actors fee the story
Place to
All other shoot
resources

e. Prewriting
Moviees are source through which travels seems to look easy and appealing as for instance the
animated Pixar production named ‘UP’ was fascinated by the yound generation as well as the
people in there lates 20’s. It helps us to experience any place, ad for them teleportation could be
easy or somewhat complicated as “Big hero6” showed. Disney’s “Socers Appriantce” showed
that magic could help us travel with just with the power of a magical ring and believe. “identity”
Showed us that being stuck to a place while travelling could lead to actually deadly
consequences. “ Nerve showed us that going to a the city for a ton girl while playng game could
be utterly fascinating . In each film tracvelling holfs its certain importance; it describes the entire
movie.
 f. Editing
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g. Final Draft-Paragraph Writing (10)

Travelling is costly but experiencing it is way cheaper. The best source to experience
travelling would be watching a film. Indeed, movies can help us see the world, for instance the
audience of Fast and Furious 7 experienced the magnificent Dubai. Identity showed as the
negative impacts of staying in a random motel. The Fault in Our Stars gave us the tour of the
Anne Frank house. UP showed its audience how travelling with your house to your dream place
with the help of balloons would be, immensely dangerous yet memorable. Big hero 6 gave us the
lesson that teleportation is not something to mess up with. And Gravity told us the beauty and
dangers of being in outer space. With the help of movies one can experience wondrous places and
might experience those through their imaginative box.

Paragraphing & Quality of Sentence Word Total

Cohesion Ideas Structure/Spelling Count

1-3 1-3 0.5-3 0.5-1 10