Assalam and very good morning I bid to all of you.

So for today oral commentary im presenting to

you a short film entitle a moment too late. The film is based on what happened to our society . so
basically the short is written and directed by blssssss and the short film was publish 23 may blab la
bla. The short film was produced by picture capitol production and takes place in Toronto USA

STORYLINE

moving on to the next slide which is the storyline the story is about ………..bully can be divided into
two types which is verbal bullying and physical bullying. Verbal bullying is saying or writing mean
things such as body shaming, inappropriate sexual comment, mocking, teasing, and threatening to
cause harm. And bully could lead to depression and depression lead to commit suicide.

CHARACTER

next we move on to the characters is this short film. Firstly I just want to say that im not depress.
Somehow my nickname surprisingly the same as the main character so I don’t want you gais to have
a wrong idea about this maybe thinking im having depress as well

The main character is bella starred by Jacqueline Stienstra. She is a loner, timid, and suffered from
depression. Bella is being bullied verbally. Theres a scene where shes read the crumbled paper
where the paper is written with kill yourself and no bruise on her body.

The next character is her brother named aiden starred by Jacqueline Stienstra. He is caring,loving,
kind hearted. You can see all this when he asked his sister is there something wrong with here and
he notice how his sister looks down and sad. And he is quick witted kind of person. If a were the
brother I will just read the paper and act like nothing happen. And he is a cheerful, you can see that
he told stories to her mother and boys normally prefer to shut up. I wish I have a brother like this
who cares for his sister.

SETTING

For setting the scenes mostly take place at the house. So this is the house

this is where bella stay and live and you can see a few scene from the short film for example

the next one is the roadside. This is the road that she use to walk home. This also symbolise how
lonely her life is. You can see that she have no friends except for her family.

next is at the railway so this where bella mostly spend her time alone. I think she went there to clear
up her mind and sadness or maybe she already had the thought of getting hit by the train and when
the train come she just have to run towards the train and die. However for me being alone isn’t a
bad things because being alone is fun and relax, you can get out from people shit but I gotta admit
that being alone make us feel lonely so guys I advice all of you to enjoy your time alone and once
you started to feel lonely go talk with your friends and family.

And this is where the death take place.

MEMORABLE SCENE

So the memorable scene is when the brother ran to the railway to stop his sister from killing herself
but he was a moment too late and at that moment he knew that he lost his dearest sister forever.

and the guilty he felt will never

THEME

The struggle to fit in the society – bcs I think that people that are bullied

MORAL VALUE

Don’t keep thing to yourself – always seek for help bcs people will never know what you’ve been
through and keeping things alone will not solve your problems.

Aware of people surrounding- bcs depress people don’t cry for help

Know the symptoms