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Persuasive Messages
Learning Objectives
Discuss situations when persuasion may be necessary
Discuss and incorporate ethics into persuasive messages
Determine persuasive appeals based on analysis of the product and audience and on the
message objective
Identify unique characteristics of non-routine requests and sales messages that promote
favorable responses
Analyze persuasive messages to verify that they reflect the six Cs of effective messages and
acceptable message formats
Apply the CBO approach and the persuasive strategy AIDA to prepare effective persuasive
messages
Most nonroutine persuasive messages and sales messages are prepared in the indirect pattern of
organization following a specific persuasive strategy. The AIDA strategy (attention, interest, desire,
action) is a specific approach to gain the receiver’s attention, presenting information to encourage
interest, adding details about receiver benefits to heighten the receiver’s desire to respond favorably, and
urging the receiver to take action on the request.
Sometimes the word persuasion is perceived negatively and is associated with dishonest practices, such
as misleading people into donating money to bogus causes or buying products or services they are
unable to afford. Ethical persuasion means that you give receivers the information they need to make
informed decisions about the value of your request or your product. Therefore, you must avoid words and
analogies that are misleading, that are likely to cause misunderstandings, and that distort the truth.
guides you to complete a message. Emphasizing the four activities in each step will help you prepare an
effective, persuasive message.
1. Plan a Message
Identify the Objective
Your main objective is to write a persuasive message that convinces receivers that they will benefit
from responding favorably to your request (to persuade the receiver to take positive action).
As you write a persuasive message determine whether the audience will more likely react positively
to information presented emotionally or rationally.
Emotional Appeal
The emotional appeal is related to ego, status, and self-satisfaction. Emotional appeals arouse
feelings such as sympathy, anger, love, and pride. They aim at the senses, and descriptions are
vivid. Emotional appeals are especially successful for seeking a receiver’s support when intangible
(indirect) benefits such as a sense of fair play or a feeling of satisfaction achieved from fulfilling a
moral responsibility are implied. Balancing an emotional appeal with logic helps to assure receivers
that a favorable response is the right choice as shown in Table 5-1.
Rational Appeal
The rational appeal is related to logic and intellect, and descriptions are more matter-of-fact.
Statistics, durability, size, speed, and financial information are examples of direct or tangible reasons
for a receiver to respond favorably. Warranties, guarantees, rebates, trial offers, and free samples
are elements of a rational appeal. See Table 5-2.
Combination Appeal
A combination appeal incorporates both logic and feeling. Donation requests often rely on emotional
appeals supported by enough logic to justify an emotionally driven decision. A nonroutine claim
message, for example, usually presents a rational appeal with an objective, chronological sequence
of events that led to the claim. The same message may point out that “playing fair” or maintaining
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customer goodwill (emotional appeal) is beneficial to the receiver. In a sales message, a combination
appeal helps receivers achieve a balance between needs and wants. See Table 5-3.
Table 5-3: Combination Appeals
Appeal Discussion
Your excellent merchandise selection at Tickled A sentence from an adjustment request provides
Pink attracts customers. However, your a contrast—a compliment, which appeals to the
inattentive staff prompts customers to spend receiver’s pride (emotional), and a complaint,
their money elsewhere. which points out a loss of sales (rational).
You may choose a gift when you reinstate your To encourage membership renewal, a nonprofit
membership—a gift that thanks you for your message offers a gift (rational) to thank you for
devotion and commitment. “doing the right thing,” which is illustrated by the
words devotion and commitment (emotional).
Brantley & Miller, 2008
2. Compose a Draft
Choose Words
Apply the CBO approach by expanding the completed AIDA outline information into a message draft.
Choose descriptive, concrete words to build images. Vivid language, analogies, metaphors, stories,
and evidence help to clarify your ideas and to relate the content of your message to something
familiar to the receiver. Positive descriptive words (see examples in Table 5-4) create interest and
desire in what you have to say.
Negative descriptive words may be used to emphasize the seriousness of the situation and to hasten
action. See Table 5-5.
Construct Sentences
Construct sentences following the six C’s of effective messages: courtesy, clarity, conciseness,
concreteness, correctness, and completeness.
Assemble Paragraphs
Assemble paragraphs that have clear topic sentences and pertinent supporting sentences. Use short
paragraphs appropriately sequenced to keep the receiver’s attention.
Paragraph 2: During the planning stage, you analyzed your audience to determine relevant
audience characteristics. Now you introduce those key ideas to generate receiver interest. Provide
an explanation that convinces receivers of the value of your request before you make the actual
request. The length and detail of the explanation depends on how much information receivers need
to know to make informed, favorable decisions.
Paragraph 3: Stimulate desire by adding the details. Include supporting information. Descriptive
details give receivers that extra push to respond favorably. Connect the benefits offered to the
receiver’s needs and wants and address receiver concerns. Some receiver benefits are direct and
tangible: for example, refunds or gifts. Other benefits are implied and relate to achieving personal
satisfaction or enhancing one’s reputation. Whether direct or indirect, benefits must be clearly
recognizable. Consider possible concerns; then offer positive information to address those concerns
before the receiver has an opportunity to raise them. Table 5-7 shows interest and desire
statements.
Paragraph 4: The closing of a persuasive message courteously, but confidently, asks the receiver to
take action. To encourage a prompt, favorable response restate key receiver benefits; offer
incentives, such as gifts, discounts, or trail periods; provide an easy way to respond (phone number,
e-mail address, fax number, response card, enclosed envelope) and a dated response time. See
Table 5-8 for effective closing statements.
3. Complete a Message
Proofread
Confirm that the message reflects the six C’s and that the content is accurate and says what you
intend. Refer to the Format Guide to ensure format accuracy. Use appropriate references to verify
content accuracy.
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Edit
Make the changes you have indicated on your draft.
Revise
Continue to revise for format and content accuracy until you produce an acceptable final message.
Persuasive Applications
Persuasive messages may be prepared for an audience of one or an audience of many. Donation
requests and sales messages are often form letters because they are mailed to hundreds or thousands of
people. However, even mass mailings can be individualized when the message is receiver-oriented and
elements are personalized, such as including the receiver’s name and address within the message.
Nonroutine requests ask people to do something out of the ordinary, so the messages are organized in
the indirect pattern and incorporate the persuasive strategy AIDA. Requests for support ask someone to
act on an important situation, such as voting for specific legislation; or they ask someone to donate time,
money, or knowledge to an important cause. Your intent is to convince the receiver that your request is
worthy of support. Examples of request for support are provided in Illustration 5-1 (Request for Support of
an Activity or a Cause); Illustration 5-2 (Request to Donate Knowledge and Time; and Illustration 5-3
(Request to Donate Money).
Request for Support of an Activity or a Cause, Donate Knowledge, Time, or Money Messages
When writing a request for support message, apply the indirect pattern and incorporate the persuasive
strategy AIDA.
1. Attention - Gain favorable attention by drawing the receiver into the conversation of the message
with a topic-relevant opening (encourages further reading or listening)
2. Interest - Introduce information to create and maintain receiver interest using an emotional,
logical, or combination appeal
3. Desire - Offer details focusing on receiver benefits to stimulate the desire to respond favorably
4. Action - Motivate receiver action by providing an easy, dated response and/or some other
incentive
When resolving a situation requires considerable expense or inconvenience, the receiver may need to be
convinced that cooperation is beneficial. Asking for an adjustment and asking for past-due payment are
nonroutine requests that typically require persuasion. Organize in the indirect pattern and apply the
persuasive strategy AIDA to encourage cooperation. An objective presentation of details adds strength to
the message and encourages a receiver to respond favorably. Examples of request for cooperation are
provided in Illustration 5-4 (Request for an Adjustment) and Illustration 5-5 (Request to Resolve a Claim).
An adjustment request seeks resolution to an unusual situation, which may require extra effort from the
receiver; such as a request for a refund beyond a refund date. A claim or complaint message expresses
dissatisfaction with a product or service; such as a claim or complaint revolving around repeated product
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repairs, delays, return policies, poor service, and similar situations. Assume your receiver will cooperate
when you present adequate information to justify your request. Direct your written or spoken message to
someone who has decision-making authority.
When writing a request for cooperation to resolve an issue message, apply the indirect pattern and
incorporate the persuasive strategy AIDA.
1. Attention - Gain favorable attention by drawing the receiver into the conversation of the message
with a topic-relevant opening (encourages further reading or listening)
2. Interest - Calmly and precisely provide details in chronological order describing inconveniences
you suffered or unpleasant situations that occurred showing the situation can be solved with
receiver’s help
3. Desire - Offer details focusing on receiver benefits to stimulate the desire to respond favorably
Provide information and documents that support your case including model numbers,
dates, and other helpful information
Include pertinent copies of warranties, receipts, and similar documentation
4. Appeal to the receiver by introducing information to create and maintain receiver interest using an
emotional, logical, or combination appeal
Appeal to the receiver’s sense of fairness, ethical or legal responsibility, and value of
maintaining goodwill
When appropriate, state or imply consequences should the receiver respond unfavorably
5. Action - Motivate receiver action by providing an easy, dated response
Make a reasonable request for compensation of legitimate expenses and inconveniences
A collection policy must reflect state regulations and the criteria established by the Fair Debt Collection
Practices Act of 1978. The initial invoice that accompanies goods or services should clearly state what is
owed, when payment is expected, and where to mail the check. When a debt is unpaid by the due date,
systematic follow-up is necessary to reinforce the importance of satisfying the outstanding obligation.
Collection messages should follow federal and state collection regulations, be sent at regular intervals,
and use the appropriate organizational pattern and message strategy for each collection stage.
A formal company policy should be established to dictate the length of the entire collection process by
outlining timing and expected action within each of the three stages of collection. The three stages are
initial, middle, and final.
An initial-stage collection message is a routine reminder written in the direct pattern. You may assume
that the receiver has forgotten or has a temporary shortage of funds. A reminder should be sent
immediately after the payment deadline has passed. The appropriate message form could be an
individualized form letter, a brief message or sticker on a customer bill, or a preprinted collection card.
The following sticker or stamp example (also shown in Illustration 5-6) could be placed on a customer bill
as an initial-stage collection message.
Carey
Vision Looked everywhere…
Center …but your check is
missing!
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The middle-stage collection message is a persuasive message. You still assume that the receiver wants
to pay, but you also assume that something has happened to prevent a timely payment. A personalized
middle-stage letter enables you to express a sincere concern for the receiver’s credit rating and ability to
continue making purchases. The message also presents payment options. Illustration 5-7 provides an
example middle-stage collection message.
When writing a request for cooperation to pay a bill (middle-stage collection) message, apply the
indirect pattern and incorporate the persuasive strategy AIDA.
1. Attention - Gain favorable attention by a positive, neutral statement that encourages further
reading or listening
2. Interest – Explain objectively without accusation
Provide details leading up to the collection process using the passive voice
3. Desire - Offer details focusing on receiver benefits to stimulate the desire to respond favorably
Include the amount due, the number of days past due, and other important details
Personalize the message
4. Appeal to the receiver by introducing information to create and maintain receiver interest using an
emotional, logical, or combination appeal
Appeal to the receiver’s sense of fairness (you owe for the product or service) and value
of maintaining goodwill (you can maintain your good credit rating)
5. Action - Motivate receiver action by providing an easy, dated response for payment
Offer payment options
Provide contact information
A final-stage collection message is an ultimatum and is prepared in the direct pattern of organization. At
this stage, the direct pattern is appropriate because you have made several requests for payment and the
receiver is yet to respond. Final-stage collection messages often are form messages that contain
receiver-specific information written in a businesslike tone and are assertive. In addition to including the
amount owed and the number of days past due, the message relays the negative consequences of
nonpayment, such as collection agency intervention or small claims action. Illustration 5-8 is an example
of a final-stage collection message.
When writing a request for cooperation to pay a bill (final-stage collection) message, apply the direct
pattern.
1. Begin with the course of action—the main idea
Provide the date when action will begin
2. Provide adequate details
Restate the details of the money owed and the collection attempts thus far
Be explicit about the consequences of nonpayment
3. End with an assertive request for payment
Allow one more opportunity to avoid drastic action when payment is made immediately
Sales Messages
Purchase a Product or Service
The main objective of sales messages is to persuade receivers that a product or service is worth
purchasing. Therefore, you will want to focus on the features that will have the greatest appeal to the
particular audience you have identified. A target audience is a group of potential customers chosen
because characteristics such as age, occupation, cultural background, and lifestyle best relate to your
product or service. The more information you know about the intended audience, the greater your
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chances of sales success. Once you have decided on your audience, determine the salable features of
the product or service that clearly demonstrate receiver benefits and distinguish the product or service
from others on the market. Sales messages may be in the form of a letter, e-mail, billboard, flyer,
television and radio advertisement, or text message. When someone inquires about a product or service,
the response to that inquiry is a solicited sales message. An unsolicited sales message is initiated by a
business to promote the purchase of a product or service. Sales messages incorporate the AIDA strategy
(attention, interest, desire, action). Illustration 5-9 provides an example of a sales message letter and
Illustration 5-10 shows an e-mail sales message.
Sales messages may, by design, violate the rules of standard business messages. Print sales messages
may exceed one page and may include a variety of print mechanics. The use of different font styles,
color, bold, italics, and bulleted lists, as well as sentence fragments may be used.
How the receiver (buyer) will use the product or service often determines which appeal to use in preparing
the explanation. For example, a rational appeal emphasizing durability and user satisfaction may be the
best approach when selling fitness equipment to a health club. On the other hand, an emotional appeal
emphasizing personal appearance may be the best approach when selling similar equipment to the
general public. Explanations strive to create mental images, connect product value to receiver benefit,
and anticipate and address potential concerns. Tangible benefits help reduce receiver resistance.
Testimonials from real people show a history of satisfied customers and may be used to influence
receivers. To overcome price as an obstacle, de-emphasize the price in any of these ways:
Include the price in a separate enclosed card or brochure
Position the price in the middle of a paragraph
Break the price into manageable increments, such as three payments of $59.95
The purpose of the closing is to motivate the receiver to act favorably and quickly. Tell the receiver what
to do, offer an enticing incentive, set a time limit, and make action easy. Sometimes a postscript (P.S.)
that follows the signature block is an effective close because the receiver’s eye is drawn to that final line.
Table 5-9 offers examples of attention-getting opening statements, interest and desire explanations, and
action closings statements.
E-mail sales messages should be prepared for current customers or prospects who have given you
permission (opt-in) to e-mail sales messages. Use a subject line that is short, to-the-point, and hints at
content. Use headings and asterisks to aid in readability. Offer something special to online users.
Provide a link or toll-free number for fast, easy action and a contact name to further personalize the
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message. Give the receiver an option to be removed from the mailing list (opt-out) at the end of the
message. You should respond to customers within 24 hours.
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VOTE NO ON REZONING
1. Attention – attention- The City Council's wise decisions have preserved Trinidad’s authenticity
getting statement and healthy small town environment, moving forward but at a productively
(compliment) deliberate pace.
2. Interest – use an Next week you will vote on an important rezoning issue; specifically,
appropriate appeal; key Starburst Entertainment’s proposal to build a 30,000-seat amphitheater and
points showing the a 10,000-car parking lot at Highway 350 and I-25. The promoters plan to
situation is of schedule outdoor concerts from May through September; and they expect
consequence to be to draw concert goers from as far away as Denver, Amarillo, and Santa Fe.
solved with receiver’s The amphitheater would provide considerable revenue in taxes.
help (direct or indirect)
Yes, the taxes would help the city budget; but the impact of such an
3. Desire – lead to amphitheater on a small town must be considered. You may already know
request by providing that Starburst Entertainment built an amphitheater in Redmond,
details including receiver Washington, 4 years ago. Redmond's civic leaders have struggled since to
benefits (emotional or reduce concert noise level, after-concert property damage, and traffic
rational) accidents. Heavy-metal music can be heard in homes miles away. Cars,
trucks, SUVs, and RVs park on nearby residents' property; and throngs of
people walk through yards into the early morning, tossing garbage,
including glass containers. Traffic accidents have risen 25%, and additional
police power is required for every concert. Mayor Lisa Henderson (425-
555-0147) can explain the multiple issues that have evolved from the
Redmond's amphitheater complex.
4. Action – state desired Please vote on April 9 to stop the rezoning and initiate a comprehensive
action and provide a impact study before making such a critical decision. A "no" vote will show
date for receiver to that the Council is committed to keeping Trinidad a wonderful place to live
respond and do business.
Sincerely
Theresa Smithson
Theresa Smithson
Trinidad Resident
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Illustration 5-2: Request for Support Message-Donate Knowledge and Time–(Block letter format
with open punctuation)
December 2, 2012
1. Attention – attention- Your employment column, “The Employment Corner," in the San Francisco
getting statement Chronicle is a must read. Your column is assigned as a weekly reading for
(compliment) management students. Your style and your employment advice are
appreciated.
2. Interest – build Your column is popular because your advice is on target; and your articles
interest using an incorporate courtesy, clarity, conciseness, concreteness, correctness, and
appropriate appeal to completeness.
encourage receiver’s
favorable response Those same communication principles are stressed in the booklet To Be or
Not to Be—Employed, which is being prepared for graduating students.
This practical booklet, published by Valley University Press, will contain
3. Desire – lead to candid and relevant tips on developing a successful job search strategy.
request providing details Will you share your observations? Both your style and your knowledge
including receiver make you an ideal contributor. To Be or Not to Be—Employed will include a
benefits series of 250- to 300-word vignettes. Each vignette relates an experience
that demonstrates the power of speaking or writing effectively. Addressing
any aspect of interviewing—preparing for, following through, or participating
in—will help graduates understand that effective communication is more
than a classroom discussion topic.
4. Action – state desired The booklet is slated for distribution May 1, so your response is needed by
action with dated January 3, 2013. Should you agree to be a contributor, your vignette must
response time and be received by March 1 to keep this project on schedule. You may call
provide an easy way for 831.555.8002 or email oquinnt@ksb.vus.edu for additional details. Please
receiver to respond say yes.
Cordially
Shirlee Braun
Illustration 5-3: Request for Support Message- Donate Money–(Block letter format with open
punctuation)
Moving Forward
Arthritis Training Team
P. O. Box 892
Chandler, AZ 85224
665-444-3067
3. Desire – lead to You can help find that cure, and you can help the Juvenile Arthritis
request including Foundation (JAF) continue to offer programs and services by sponsoring the
receiver benefits to 10-Mile JAF Marathon on June 8. Together, you and the marathon runners
encourage receiver's can help Lindsey and children like her move forward to accomplish their
favorable response goals.
4. Action – state desired Help make arthritis a disease of the past. Please sponsor a runner by
action, date to respond sending your tax-deductible contribution in the enclosed envelope or call
by, and provide an easy 555.0122 by June 5 with your pledge.
way for receiver to
respond (enclosed Sincerely
envelope)
Shawna Talavara
Shawna Talavara
Program Coordinator
Enclosure
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1. Attention – begin with Colorado State's accelerated programs and evening and weekend classes
courteous, attention- make returning to school much easier for the working adult.
getting statement
Classes have been completed each semester for the last three years, while
2. Interest – provide maintaining a 3.5 GPA; indicating a dedicated student. Current enrollment
details chronologically, includes Economics II and Anatomy and Physiology. Both courses are
clearly, calmly - showing requirements for a business communication degree.
the situation can be
solved with receiver’s However, a relative (mother) was recently diagnosed with cancer and must
help begin aggressive chemotherapy. She will need help daily through this life-
threatening crisis. Plans are to continue working full-time, parenting two
3. Desire – lead to school-age children, reducing everyone’s anxieties, and returning to school
request; include in January.
pertinent information to
support your case Although the final date for a full tuition refund was September 1, please
make an exception based on these unusual circumstances. Many are part of
4. Appeal to receiver's the "sandwich generation," with responsibilities for both children and parents.
sense of fairness (ethical A refund minus an administrative fee (perhaps 10%) would help to recognize
or legal responsibility) that Colorado State is willing to resolve legitimate special circumstances.
Carolanne Hempstead
Carolanne Hempstead
Student
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Illustration 5-5: Request for Cooperation Message-Request to Resolve a Claim–Block letter format
with open punctuation)
Linette Ashley
Fullerton House, Studio Condo No. 45
Casper, WA 58339
May 14, 2013
1. Attention – begin with Fullerton House is in a great location. The studio condo (#45) and the
courteous, attention- general condition of the building are pleasing.
getting statement
However, the service provided to residents by Katka Management, the
2. Interest – provide association’s management company, is a concern.
details chronologically,
clearly, calmly - showing After several cars parked in the condo garage were burglarized on March 18,
the situation can be the theft of the garage remote control was reported to the police. Marlene,
solved with receiver’s the Katka assistant property manager, was called for a replacement. She
help assured a replacement remote would be delivered. After a week without a
replacement remote, on March 28, a second call was made. Marlene
3. Desire – lead to indicated a $75 replacement fee would be charged and an additional ten
request; include days would be needed for the check to clear. During the original call, a
pertinent information to replacement fee was unmentioned. To hasten the process, a check was
support your case personally delivered. Two weeks later, a remote was received—one that
was dysfunctional! The non-working remote was returned to Marlene. Six
weeks later, still a garage remote is needed; but Katka has $75!
4. Appeal to receiver's Marlene was increasingly rude on the telephone, and she avoided
sense of fairness (ethical responding to e-mails. More importantly, safety is compromised when the
or legal responsibility) garage gate must be manually opened in a dark alley.
5. Action – state desired Please contact Katka and insist a garage remote immediately be replaced
action (reasonable without charge. The condo board may also want to review Katka’s contract
request) providing an carefully before the contract renewal deadline. Tenant service should be a
action date main priority. Your prompt action, so that the remote is within hand by May
19, is appreciated. Should you need additional information, please call
312.555.0171 or e-mail at ashleyliln@eagle.net.
Sincerely
Linette Ashley
Linette Ashley
Resident
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Carey
Vision Looked everywhere…
Center …but your check is
missing!
Illustration 5-7: Middle-Stage Collection Message–(Block letter format with mixed punctuation)
Notice the address information is placed at the bottom margin on this message (either top or bottom
margin is acceptable)
1. Attention – positive You have paid your eye service bills on time and in full, usually at the
neutral statement conclusion of your appointment, for 15 years.
2. Interest – explain Because of your excellent payment history, you saved 15% in physician’s
objectively without fees when you selected Dr. Carey to perform your laser eye surgery at
accusation (use passive Lexington Country Hospital. Also, you were billed for services instead of
voice) paying in full the day of the surgery.
3. Desire – point out Your insurance company, Green Cruz, promptly paid 80% of the bill for the
benefits of complying laser surgery. Ms. Stricker, you are responsible for the remaining $1,200,
(personalize the which is 45-days past due. Please see the enclosed copy of your bill.
message)
What can be done to help you bring your account up to date? As a
4. Appeal to receivers consistent patient with a 15-year history, you will want to remain on the
sense of fairness and preferred customer list for 10% discounts on major procedures.
value of maintaining
goodwill The best option is to send your check for $1,200 in the enclosed envelope by
5. Action – state desired April 30. Should you need to make payment arrangements, please contact
action - provide contact 405-555-EYES by April 28.
information and date to
respond by (offer Sincerely,
payment options)
Sam Melby
Sam Melby
Business Manager
Enclosures
Illustration 5-8: Final-Stage Collection Message–(Block letter format with mixed punctuation)
2. Desire – restate details After repeated attempts to collect your unpaid balance without a response
leading to final collection from you, your account is being submitted to a professional agency.
and provide specific
negative consequences You may avoid the unpleasantness of formal collection proceedings,
3. Action – end with which will damage your ability to purchase on credit. Pay $1,200 to the
assertive request for center by the end of the business day on June 5. After June 5, you must
payment with opportunity to work directly with Concord Creditors.
pay immediately
Sincerely,
Sam Melby
Sam Melby
Business Manager
Illustration 5-9: Sales Message–(Block form letter format with open punctuation)
(Date)
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getting statement always in top shape with Roto-Clean. Roto-Clean, a specially designed rotation
cleaning system for busy households, works like this:
2. Interest – identify Visit 1: The whole house is given a general cleanup with an in-depth bathroom
product selling points and kitchen cleaning. Visit 2: Everything will be cleaned again but with in-depth
(product focused) living room, family room, and bedroom cleaning. Each time, your whole house
gets a general cleanup with special attention to designated areas.
3. Desire – identify You will find a pleasant, efficient, and willing staff that will "go that extra mile" to
receiver benefits satisfy clients. You can be worry free-everyone is carefully trained, bonded, and
(receiver focused) insured.
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receiver to act favorably contract! Take advantage of this limited offer by calling 215-555-01933 today or
(set a time limit, make by visiting the web site at www.cleansweep.com.
action easy)
Sincerely
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Sylvia Sanders
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References
As adapted from:
Brantley, Clarice & Miller, Michele. (2008). Effective Communication for Colleges. Thomson South-
Western Publishers.