16010009

by Suman Dura

Submission date: 23-Jun-2017 05:17AM (UTC+0100)

Submission ID: 74103127
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

77
Over all an outstanding performance. An exceptionally
well written essay with literally none or a very few flaws
in the essay. A proper synthesis of concepts,
knowledge and empirical data provides evidence to the
reader that the learner is very well acquainted with the

/100
subject matter of organizational structure and its types.
The essay portrays an exceptional originality in analysis
and arguments. The essay is fluent and well written.

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belongingness

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GRADING FORM: 001 FINAL ESSAY

SUMAN 77
DURA

CRITERION 1 - 20%

Does the essay explicitly address the question?

 Outstanding performance. Has clearly supported his
or her opinion on whether hierarchical or flat-line 15
structure is better.

CRITERION 2 - 20 %

Evidence of subject knowledge and understanding

Also provides numerous evidences of a clear

understanding of the subject matter. 15
CRITERION 3 - 20 %

Evidence of academic reading

Strong original arguments is provided by the learner

to support why flat-line structure is better in today's 15
context than the traditional hierarchical ones.

CRITERION 4 - 20 %

Evidence of critical engagement with academic literature

Has provided a critical reasoning on why flat-line is

better than hierarchical structure. Has strongly put up 15
his or ideas regarding his arguments.

CRITERION 5 - 10 %

Essay structure and presentation

Well structured essay with a proper, introduction, a

 consistent and elaborate body and a conclusion that
summarizes the whole essay. 8
CRITERION 6 - 10 %

Quality of writing

Fluent, flawless and smooth writing. Proof reading

has been done before submission. 9