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I’m not Japanese. I’ve studied the language for years and am pretty good at
Kanji, can follow Manga just fine for the most part, watch Anime in the raw, and
can read a newspaper article in Japanese as long as I’ve got a couple of
dictionaries with me, but I’m not a native speaker. I’ve been to Japan recently
and know I can get through at the conversational/business level. But the real
question here is: why tackle translating a novel? I’m returning a favor.
I discovered Kimagure Orange Road thanks to the translation of the Manga that
you can find elsewhere on this site. I discovered it myself completely by
accident. I bought the Manga. I fell in love with the language and began learning
it. I found on-line translations for the first two novels. But not the third. My
contribution to KOR culture therefore was going to be a translation of the third
novel.
But it was harder than I expected. For one thing Kyousuke is back to his
stuttering ways. There are two stories, and the second one takes place before the
first. Matsumoto-Sensei and Tereda-Sensei decided to be dramatic and colorful
with their language. There are idioms in the second story that don’t translate into
English well. The first story is very serious, but the second one straight out of
anime. There were Kanji not in my dictionaries. And I’m not fluent. The POV
jumps all over the place and there are many changes in narrative style, which
added to my troubles in getting this right. And DAMN all of Kyousuke’s “wake
de ari” endings!
Demo, Ganbarunakutcha! I plugged ahead anyway, and this is the result. I think
I’ve done reasonably well. I’ve probably made a few mistakes, and I certainly
wouldn’t want my version used as the definitive translation, but I believe I’ve
gotten the point of both stories across well because I've done something many
translations do not - gone into the emotional thoughts of the characters.
The first story, Madoka’s Private Memory, clears up a few nagging questions that
have always dogged the series. How did Madoka become Kimagure in the first
place? Why did Kyousuke’s comment about smoking set her off so much in the
first episode? Why wasn’t she in a gang?
And how is Hikaru doing after the fantastic events of the second novel?
The second story, An Angel’s Dangerous Smile, was tougher and easier. There’s
a lot more slang and idioms that don’t translate well into English, but by this
point I had the flow down and did as best I could. There are idioms about sex that
don’t really translate at all, and I’ve left them as they would be said in Japanese.
You should be able to catch on to them when they happen. Occasionally I put a
quick comment in, but for the most part I’ve left it alone.
This one’s much funnier, and I’m sure you will be able to picture it as if
animated the way the original series was. There’s a lot of reading between the
lines you’ll need to do, but if you’re familiar enough with the series to have come
this far you shouldn’t have too much trouble.
Anyway, enjoy. If I’ve made a mistake that’s glaring, let me know and I’ll take
another look at it. The novel is by Matsumoto Izumi (of course) and Tereda
Kenji. Illustrations by Takayuki Goto, which I have also included at a slightly
lesser quality than appears in the novel itself. At the end of the novel is a
postscript by Matsumoto-san and Tereda-san, plus a couple of final comments by
yours truly that will be worth your time, I promise.
Ja ne!
-Chris Reed
Contents:
Prologue (below)
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Epilogue
Prologue
Act I
Act II
Act III
Act IV
Madoka’s Secret Memory
Prologue
Those eyes are always mysterious and precocious – whether or not they
seem totally childish.
Although I had confided in her with this most important secret, I was
uneasy. Would this drive her away?
But somehow it seems to me that I’m the only one who can protect her.
But for all that, I couldn’t reach out to her shoulder – I was actually
beginning to feel impatient. But that was only for an instant.
Soon Madoka’s usual cool look returned. Looking me straight in the face
she said, “Hey… That’s why. Kasuga-kun always seemed full of secrets.”
Well, I did use the power to come and go between Madoka and Hikaru-
chan… Ah, uh, anyway…
Be that as it may, Madoka laughed and said, “Thank you Kasuga-kun, for
baring your secret to me.” And then, “You should have a reward," she said, and
she kissed me on the lips.
The sweet vinegar smell of her black hair wrapped up my whole body.
That was our first real kiss.
Telling her about the Kasuga clan’s secret, now more than ever Madoka
kept her mouth shut. Somehow, I think that Madoka will forever keep my
deepest secret.
Hikaru-chan’s kidnapping was settled for the time being, and after we
came home from New York… I… I became aware that Madoka had a secret of
her own…
Madoka took one step out of the market and felt a cool breeze at the base
of her neck, and fastened the collar of her raincoat. The market faced Aoyama
Doori and was a fairly high-class place. At the entrance shopping carts were lined
up, mixed with people leaving the store. In addition, people who weren’t carrying
umbrellas were collecting under the eaves to get out of the sudden rain. The
crowd was stitched together in such a way that Madoka decided just to wait for
her older sister in a corner under the eaves.
Her sister had said she would get the car from the parking lot in back and
bring it around, and had entrusted Madoka with the cart full of the things they
had bought.
Her sister had said that they really couldn’t get the white at the local liquor
store so she had been drawn to the rich flavor of the red for her cooking.
Although it was a spring rain, it fell with the force of a summer rain. All
the cars on Aoyama Doori seemed to be chased away by the downpour,
vanishing to the left or the right. Madoka thought it an interesting spectacle.
The red and yellow cars looked like fairies in the midst of the bright fog
the rain seemed to be. Madoka tried to put a melody to this scene, and began to
hum. Yet the sound of the rain and something near her drove it away. It was a
person under the eaves shaking out a drenched coat.
It was a young man in a white raincoat. In his hand was a business
envelope labeled “YAMAZUMI”. The name made Madoka hold her breath. The
way “YAMAZUMI” was written, in a bold brush-stroke design, drew her eyes to
it.
The man noticed Madoka’s glance and spoke up. “Excuse me. This is the
way to Aoyama It-chome, isn’t it?” he asked. His voice was quiet and composed.
Madoka heard it quite clearly.
Usually when a man said something like this, there was usually an
underlying motive. But Madoka felt from this man’s voice that he would never
do something with such malice.
Madoka raised her eyes from the envelope, took a fresh look at his face,
and was probably going to answer his question. However at that instant her face
went blank. All the sounds around her were drowned out. The steady flow of raid
behind the man’s back on Aoyama Doori became vaguely like a shiny curtain,
and the man’s well-put smile looked even better.
To show even further that he had no other ulterior motive, he began asking
other people. “Excuse me, but this is the way to Aoyama It-chome, isn’t it?”
As he spent his courteous words, Madoka had a feeling of being a bit out
of place. It was obvious that the voice was familiar. Not just the voice though.
The way the eyes were set, the expression of the long nose, the look of his
short hair – suddenly, she began to remember the visage of a person from 7 year
ago. Mishima Shuujirou.
But Madoka was certain she had seen him die in an accident, before her
very eyes.
Part 1 (Madoka's Secret Memory)
“Ghost?”
The two of them were in a corner of the college cafeteria. At the next table
a previously arranged reading circle group looked up at Kyousuke with
questioning faces.
“Bad?” Madoka shot back. “That’s going overboard, don’t you think?”
Kyousuke saw Madoka let out a puff of air and felt a bit cross. Madoka
seemed a bit irritated.
“Hey, hey….”
“Damn it, don’t confuse the Kasuga family power with ghosts. But why
do you all of a sudden bring up ghosts? Surely you’re not saying it’s someone
you met…” As he said it, Kyousuke looked at Madoka’s face once more and for
some reason she gave a shrug of her shoulders, which could be takes as a “Yes”
or “No” or just smoothing things over.
That Madoka would try to keep up her own appearances was a surprise.
Why would I…. Why couldn’t she tell Kyousuke about that person?
From the time she had heard the voice of the man that might be Shuujirou,
Madoka next became aware of herself upon hearing the blaring of the horn of her
sister’s car. Her sister’s dark gray Audi was already right in front of her on the
street. Madoka realized she had been frozen there for a while as her sister was
beckoning her over from the driver’s side window.
Her sister seemed to be urging her on, and many other car horns were now
blaring away, so she ran in the direction of the red zone (the actual translation is
“red slope”. A no parking zone, perhaps?). Seeing she was saved from the hustle
and bustle under the eaves, she took the cart and ran for the cover of her sister’s
car.
“Hey you!” the man shouted at Madoka’s back. Once again his voice
didn’t seem dishonest. Even if he was only trying to ask for directions… yes, that
was certainly all it was. However, for a man not to have an ulterior motive for
Madoka was an eerie feeling. Because of this she began to think more and more
that this man must be Mishima Shuujirou.
Madoka took the contents of the cart and roughly put them in the Audi’s
trunk, then slid into the backseat. After that Madoka didn’t see the man. No…
COULDN’T see him.
The rain started falling even harder. Likely as not, even if Madoka had
turned to look back, she surely wouldn’t have had a clear look at his appearance.
Still, thanks to the rain not allowing her to see him or to go back and ask,
Madoka didn’t have the self-confidence to be sure.
“Madoka.”
“Hmm?”
“Nothing?”
“What?”
“You just didn’t seem to be yourself. This Kimagure Angel, when she
blanked out, didn’t seem like your usual self.”
“Not so!”
“Yes, so!” Kyousuke said a bit seriously. Then they both shrugged their
shoulders and laughed. “I don’t know why Madoka would be concerned about
ghosts, but next time you should ask Ojiisan.”
“However…. Ghosts huh… Madoka, did you meet the ghost of someone
you know?”
If she tried to tell him it would sound foolish. Nevertheless, those words
pierced her heart. Madoka shrugged her shoulders twice, and said in a small
voice “It’s nothing…” and nothing more.
Pretending not to know she had said anything to Kyousuke didn’t make
her feel good, but she had a reason she couldn’t talk about that man with
Kyousuke.
Mishima Shuujirou, for Madoka, was the first man she had ever allowed
to see her nude body.
Kasuga Kyousuke, 22 years old. He was still in her heart even though it
had been shaken up.
I haven’t yet told my loud younger sisters all that happened in New York.
“Hey hey, you know what she said? Too all her friends? If in the future I
become a big star what will everyone think? Kurumi-chan might be a pro
baseball player or own some rice fields or something…”
“Come on, she wants to see Madoka-san and the cute guy she liked if she
can.”
It’s unheard of to use the Power in this way. Sometimes I just want to
wring Kurumi’s neck.
“Gyaaa!”
Thanks to Kurumi’s power, the air was filled with the pitiful screams of
me and Jingaro. I grabbed the wildly flailing cat. “Kurumi! Manami!”
“Paaa….”
While still holding onto Jingaro, I fell back to my bed. I looked at the
reverse side of the sepia photograph and for the first time in a long time saw
Hikaru-chan’s writing.
I often saw it during high school, strange little girl-type words, and in
truth they made me break out in a cold sweat. But Hikaru-chan’s words clearly
felt like an adult’s.
This past summer, when we met in Tokyo… That body… how mature
she’s become (what am I saying!) All of that I began to remember.
About two months ago when we left Hikaru-chan in New York somehow
it wasn’t with the feeling that we had become close friends again.
Hikaru-chan’s letter was well written, about recent bright times, looking
like from a girlfriend.
“Thank you for your recent help in America,” she began formally. “At the
end of January I returned to Otaru. I left my apartment in New York pretty much
the way it is. I hadn’t seen my parents and how they live in a while, and it’s been
fun, but having them worry about me is leaving me numb, so I’m writing.
“Don’t answer,” she said… In other words, don’t send a reply. She’s
fine… well, because she’s fine now her intent is to set me free.
But that’s a strange thing for me to say. As usual, the whole situation
between me, Madoka and Hikaru-chan is unresolved in Hikaru-chan’s heart. But
I may be reading between the lines.
Until the audition for the musical “The Legend of Atlantis” it had been a
good time for Hikaru-chan. But then she had been caught up in the complications
of its promotion, and her life had become in danger. When Madoka found out,
she flew to America to rescue her.
Hikaru-chan had been kidnapped, and once it became known that it was
on the orders of a famous actress named Anita Brussel, it raised quite a fuss in
the Americas. After that, “The Legend of Atlantis” which had had Japanese
sponsors, upon hearing the extraordinary fate of Anita east-west cultural relations
had suffered some friction.
Hikaru-chan found out when she was in the hospital in New York. Her
parents had rushed there from Japan. Upon hearing the news about the
cancellation of the musical, she clamped her lips shut and fell silent. Her parents
left the room and I thought I should too, so Hikaru-chan clung to Madoka’s chest
and cried her eyes out. Her parents and I could hear her cries from the corridor
for quite some time. At that time, Hikaru-chan’s mother spoke as if this were all
my fault.
Madoka and I left New York a few days later, before Hikaru-chan’s
parents.
When she saw us off at the airport, Hikaru-chan’s bright smile was back.
Whatever it was, after that moment, she seemed to me to be one or two steps
closer to being an adult. To me she felt radiant.
Hikaru-chan lightly shook her head and shrugged. “My dad’s about to
confront me about it. He wants to go home by tomorrow.”
“The police said that if she gets treatment, then they can start to
investigate,” Madoka said simply. Hikaru-chan hadn’t seen that Shiyuri’s
situation wasn’t very good.
“As always, a bit slow. That kid double-crossed you. It would certainly be
okay to hate her.”
“What?”
Madoka began to pout, then let out a long exhale. Hikaru-chan did to, and
let out a boisterous “Ha ha ha” laugh, like old friends again. However…
“However…?”
“Yes. However… This is New York. There’s a reason it’s a place of huge
successes and bottomless ravines. This is where I first met Shiyuri, after all. The
idea was to realize or not realize the end of the dream together. Therefore… I…”
“Hikaru-chan?” I started.
“No way. Hikaru’s not that kind. I absolutely can’t forgive Shiyuri. Won’t
forgive.” That’s what Hikaru-chan said, and her face was having trouble keeping
that smile.
“But you know, for her sake, I think I want Shiyuri to keep living here.”
Madoka and I didn’t have a good response for that and we just exchanged
glances, but Hikaru-chan still had that same smile.
“Maybe there’s a special kindness that floats in the air here in New York.”
“Kindness?”
“Yes… everyone lives with the inevitableness of death – and that can’t be
changed. At least here this brings out kindness… so I believe.”
Madoka looked Hikaru-chan square in the face. Right then her eyes were
like a gentle goddess. But soon she deliberately returned to her sharp glance, just
like old times, and spoke with her old authority. “Hey… so that’ what you’ve
come to say, Hikaru.”
Hikaru-chan’s voice began to sound as if she had come undone, and then
she couldn’t stand it any longer and held on to Madoka with all her might.
The two of them stood like that until we heard the final boarding
announcement, in a tight embrace.
Hikaru-chan… as I thought she would, at least for now has come home.
I grabbed hold of the cordless phone next to the stand and called Madoka.
Probably today she would be working on a composition at home. Although she
said she didn’t like writing pop tunes, a very popular artist had asked, and she
certainly couldn’t turn that one down.
Madoka is never one to sponge off her parents. While saying that due to
her talent and hard work she had sold a few songs, it still bothered her.
The phone rang 4 times, than the answering machine picked up.
Did she go to town for a diversion? She had said that this new
composition was due quickly, so I suppose she’ll soon be home.
I said “Suppose so” and got myself up, picked up Hikaru-chan’s picture
postcard and headed out. Anyway, I don’t have anything more important to do. I
thought I’d show it to Madoka to keep her encouraged. Besides, Madoka will be
under the impression that I went to class.
…However…I….
That this would cause me such a shock… if I can speak plainly, I have
never dreamed.
I snuck into Madoka’s house, but she hadn’t come home yet. But
apparently she was in the middle of working – the Macintosh she used when she
composed was still on. The monitor was showing her favorite 3-D screen saver.
It was an animated, egg-shaped rocket that flew strangely.
But nearby, this pretty girl I love – she had out a bunch of old pictures and
albums.
Who is this?
As I picked up the photograph, I touched the mouse with my forefinger.
The egg-shaped rocked quickly disappeared, and Madoka’s usual screen
returned. When the screen came back, I took a deep breath.
Mishima Shuujirou. Why was that name written countless times on the
screen? Madoka had never mentioned that name. Madoka had spaced out at the
monitor, probably pressing one key that repeated the entire name over and over –
it hit me like a body blow. Rather like a violent shock wave.
What the…?
This is Ayukawa Madoka? I knew that long ago Madoka had been a
rebellious one. When I met her and her protégé Hikaru-chan in junior high they
seemed to say “we’re tough!” But because of this demon-like or thug-like
attitude (lately, that’s not a phrase I’ve wanted to hear) so-called skirt-chaser
wouldn’t chase them, and they seemed to stay out of that world.
The man had a hand on her shoulder, but she seemed self-conscious or not
all together there…
Unnnnh…..
Unnnnh…
But all I could do was stare at Madoka’s photograph… For a very long
time… ‘till the end of time.
After a while I noticed that the Mac’s screen saver had returned. But now,
in my state of despair, the things it did and the comical electronic voice just made
me annoyed.
Part 2 (Madoka's Secret Memory)
From there the market that Madoka and her sister had come to several days
before on that rainy day was before her. From there Madoka learned that
Yamazumi Construction Company was participating in the construction of an
apartment complex, and had just headed towards that residential street.
After that day Madoka had been unable to get Mishima Shuujirou out of
her mind. After talking to Kyousuke about ghosts she couldn’t get it out of her
head.
Speaking of Shuujirou, somehow she had put all of that behind her since
his death, but the fact he might still be alive she couldn’t understand. Madoka
was the type to stare reality right in the face. Unlike Kyousuke and Hikaru, living
in a fantasy world or pursuing unrealistic dreams were not her style. Probably
since she’s been separated from her parents from a young age, getting to the
bottom of things was nothing else if not a way to protect herself and get the feel
for things.
Therefore, choosing her timing carefully, she asked workers and people
coming in and out of their offices if Mishima Shuujirou worked there, but
because of privacy concerns (one would suppose) she was unable to obtain the
information. But with various give and take she was able to obtain some precious
information.
She was sure that the man who looked like Shuujirou had inquired of
Madoka the direction to Aoyama It-chome. Naturally somebody around the
office or nearby might be around, so there was no reason someone wouldn’t
know. Soon Madoka called the new office, having obtained the information from
the other Yamazumi Construction.
This office was in the direction of Hokuri-ku. After Madoka had called,
they sent her correspondence. Once Madoka was certain that this construction
company was presently involved in the construction of the Tokyo apartment
building, her heart began to pound. She took a deep breath and after many times
of calling and not having any breath she finally managed to ask the question.”
The local kindness, from her viewpoint, redoubled her shock. Suddenly
she felt light-headed. But the middle-aged receptionist seemed more excited and
asked “Where do you know Shuu-chan from?
Beep! Beep!
Using up some of the day, Madoka got friendly with this brisk woman and
then followed her directions through an alley, then was standing before the
apartment building construction site.
Madoka turned the knob in the door in the fencing. Then, nervously facing
a past she had expected to leave behind, pushed open the door.
However… The Kasuga Clan has long thought that divining the future of
girls was easy. Truth is, it’s just the desire to hold the girl’s hand and prattle and
hold on to them.
“Senpai!
Kasuga-
Senpai!”
At the other
end of the line
Hikaru-chan
had raised her
voice.
“Anyway,
Mishima
Shuujirou
was someone who
helped
Madoka-san
and I when we
were still
delinquents.”
“Uh, yeah,
no… I know it was
from junior high
school. I saw
a picture…”
“Eh? What
did you say?”
Hikaru-chan was cackling brightly. I always have felt a bit relieved to hear
it.
But! If… I asked about the name that was written all over the Mac
monitor, saying to Madoka “Hey! What are you doing? Who is this man?” or
something like that, but I couldn’t act like a gangster or some sort of Yakuza.
How about… “Madoka… For our hearts, can’t we just forgive? Come
rushing to my heart!” like that, but I can’t be as graceful as some trendy drama
male.
On that occasion I had received that postcard… she had said it was okay
not to answer.
But under the circumstances… About this one thing I might be able to ask
Hikaru-chan about Madoka and this man named Mishima Shuujirou – and I
thought that could give results.
Why? Because that summer of our last year of high school… after Hikaru-
chan and I broke up, I had never called her since. That’s why I called her during
the lunch rush at ABCB, even though it was noisy. I said, “I just remembered
something I have to do…”
I was trying to come up with a casual way to begin the topic (besides, I
didn’t want Kurumi and company to think I wasn’t there to eat with Jii-chan!)
“But Sempai? Why are you asking about Mishima Shuujirou now?”
“Um, well… it’s nothing… no, Madoka was saying that she wondered if
Hikaru-chan was okay.”
“Yes…”
“The she was talking about old times. She wondered if Hikaru-chan might
remember a person named Mishima…”
“Hmm? Well…”
“I don’t think so! I can’t forget him. Shuujirou-san was a great, great,
great benefactor to me and Madoka-san.”
“Benefactor?”
“Ah, er, um, nothing! Kya kya kya! (Hikaru screams) Senpai, are you
jealous?”
“It’s all right. It’s nothing to worry about. Madoka-san and I were kids.
Besides, Shuujirou-san isn’t around anymore.”
“Huh?”
“Shuujirou-san died.”
“No way…!”
“Humph. But what’s Madoka-san thinking? She didn’t tell Senpai that
Shuujirou-san had died, did she.”
“Huh?”
After 6pm at ABCB, Master’s friends would gather and the place would
become a Live House. In the afternoon it was a normal café. But occasionally in
the afternoon, when they could meet, when they had spare time form work
Master’s friends would drop by and they would use the instruments already set
up to play 2 or 3 songs.
The person who had started playing the keyboard was a man who worked
for a nearby taxi company we all knew as Paku-san. Seems he had finished his
lunch and was full.
Madoka had met Mishima Shuujirou… no, his ghost, somewhere, I was
certain.
And to now have Hikaru-chan seem to say that Madoka has some reason
to not… not tell me.
“Sorry, Hikaru-chan, I really can’t hear you. I’ll call you back. Thanks.”
Because Paku-san’s keyboard now played the sound of an ocean and was
quieter, I could hear Hikaru-chan. “Take care of Madoka-san,” she was saying.
“It must take a lot of courage to call Hikaru-chan. Did that idiot Paku
bother you?”
“It’s okay. Here. I’ll take that. I don’t have class today, so I’ll work off the
cost of the phone call to Hokkaido.”
“Hey hey! Don’t be so formal with me. Don’t worry about it. Act like that
around me and I’ll leave this town.”
“Huh?”
Master gave me a friendly wink. I’ve known him since junior high. I
immediately softened my expression and could see through his state.
“Uh, well…”
I laughed and took the Hamburger Rice Master had put on the counter and
took it to a nearby customer.
“First of all you should take Master at his word when he gives advice.”
“Ojii-chan?”
For a long time now the Kasuga clan has thought of eavesdropping as an
interest. Ojii-chan’s power is very strong, so doing something like listening in on
Hikaru-chan and my conversation would be simple.
“If that ghost has something is cares about in the real world, it’s an
Akuryou that can’t rest in peace… It might have been holding on to another
person.”
“Akuryou?”
“Hmm. Yes. An Akuryou is a spirit that wanders this world many years
after it’s death under bad circumstances.”
“Oh no…”
“While Madoka-chan is trying to get answers from him, the Akuryou will
certainly carry away her soul.”
Ojii-chan and I immediately called over Kurumi and Manami, then split
up to search for Madoka.
Madoka turned around upon feeling a tap at her shoulder. A tall man in a
company uniform stood there. Embroidered on his chest was the word
“YAMAZUMI”. He must work at the same company as Mishima Shuujirou.
It seemed that Madoka hadn’t reacted for a long time, so apparently this
young man had tapped her shoulder. Madoka had a good feeling about this
simple young man.
The lunch break had just ended, and the sound of people operating
machinery could be heard. If she would wait in the temporary office, the man
named Mishima Shuujirou had left for a lunchtime appointment. Madoka turned
down the offer and waited for Mishima in a corner. Although lunchtime was
over, Mishima had not yet returned.
“You can’t wait here.” A luminous smile seemed to float on the man’s
face. “If it’s all right, there’s a hotel across the way. Over there.” In the direction
the man pointed was a hotel called Shitei Hotel (no bad puns, please).
“On the top floor is a café. If it’s all right with you, please wait there.
When Shuu-chan comes back…”
“Oh, sorry…”
“Huh?”
“Ah… once a woman visited Shuu-chan and waited here. I got scolded.”
The tall man bowed politely.
Now Madoka was even more convinced that this Shuujirou was the right
one. The man she knew was still the same one the young ones had admired and
had come to rely on.
But the fact that Shuujirou was still alive; no explanation made any sense.
If she remembered right, he had died right before her eyes.
The young man appeared before Madoka’s face. His sudden, silent
appearance left Madoka flustered.
Madoka made an effort to smile and walked towards the hotel. She was
starting to regret not confiding in Kyousuke.
When Hikaru-chan came through the entrance, she saw me and suddenly
screamed.
Me, Ojii-chan and my twin sisters quickly left ABCB. Kurumi went to
search Madoka’s and my college; Manami to check Madoka’s friends; Ojii-chan
to various shops Madoka frequented… I went to the studio and production places
Madoka had told me she used for work, using the Kasuga family Power to warp
(teleport) to each one respectively. Even though I’m always reminding Kurumi
and Manami “Don’t use the Power.”
“Yes. How he died. I suppose you can ascertain that. In case he wasn’t
able to go to the next life, understand? Warmly consign him to oblivion.”
“Idiot! Kyousuke, I told you a soul that can’t go to the next world will
become an Akuryou. Do you think it’s okay for Madoka-chan to be joined to the
world of the dead?”
“Bu… but what point in time should I return to?” As soon as I said it it
occurred to me. Of course! Hikaru-chan!
“Hey! Hey! Senpai. How did you get here from ABCB so quickly?”
The “Kyada! Kyada!” had settled down for the moment, typical Hikaru-
chan (sorry I said that) and asked a realistic question.
“Telephone line?”
“Ah, no no. A lie! A lie! Ha… ha hah… it would be great to have that
kind of power… Not.” (just kidding).
“I don’t believe this! You were lying when you said you were at ABCB.
Where? Where? What café were you calling from? There are some nice café’s
around here, aren’t there?”
“Well anyway, welcome to Otaru. Welcome Senpai. Hey, you didn’t come
with Madoka-san?”
“Hmm? Ah, no. That’s right. Not together. Hikaru-chan and I should
search for her, you think?”
In the very next instant Hikaru-chan’s eyes became points, upon hearing
this. (But not a sound!)
Anyway, now that I was here, explaining this and that couldn’t be helped.
I was able to make Hikaru-chan faint. I held her in my arms and flung
ourselves into a gap in time.
All sorts of bright colorful lights flew at me. Each bright light was an
“event” in time left behind.
As I flowed back in time it was as if “we probably won’t be forgotten, will
we?” was being inquired – information flowed into my eyes. Hikaru-chan, still in
my arms, didn’t notice.
She and I had a lot of “events” in our past. Should I take Hikaru-chan or
choose Madoka, everything had finally been set to right. I had chosen Madoka…
and the fun days the three of us had spent we could never visit again… After that
we had each become adults.
That time… thru Hikaru-chan’s tearful and questioning eyes she saw me. I
can never forget those eyes.
“Hi… Hikaru-chan…”
“Senpai, I’m at a loss. Something like this… this I’m ready for. But being
held like this by Senpai… I’m at a loss.”
Hikaru-chan screamed and clung onto me. We were flying through the
flow of time. If Hikaru-chan’s body were to become separated from me, she
would be flung into whatever era we were passing through when she let go.
“Sor.. Sorry.” I held Hikaru-chan again. She had seemed elastic but was
startled rigid. At the same time she clamped her mouth shut, although I couldn’t
see it.
As time flowed, a “hyu… hyu…” sound hung around my ears. It was only
the silence of the two of us. After a short while, Hikaru-chan began to mutter to
herself.
“Hikaru-chan…?”
“That… that’s…”
“Mean…”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan!”
Hikaru-chan let out a small snort at my chest. It tickled. To tell the truth,
around my waist… well… the delicate part of the lower half of my body enjoyed
the sensation (what am I saying!).
But… Hikaru-chan fell silent… but soon was herself again. “Wha…
what… what…” she said again, “What… why… me and Madoka-san… and also
Senpai…”
“Hikaru-chan…”
At long last Hikaru-chan lifted her face and showed me a surprised smile.
No, well… not really a smile. She held back tears as much as she could.
Although she was showing a smile naturally I noticed it.
“Kasuga Senpai?”
“Hmm?”
Hikaru-chan’s face had already cleared up. I had purposely exposed the
secret of the Power. She had already perceived there must be a meaning for it.
Just then, the sound of time floating seemed to rip apart, and a violent
exhaust note screamed at us.
“Huh?”
“Us from back then… Not just where we’re about to go… going where we
can’t go…”
“Hikaru-chan…”
I headed towards that orange light for as long as my strength would last.
In the midst of that light were countless wriggling things I could see.
…what?
It was a wharf or dock at night, crowded with young people. I soon
understood that this was a motorcycle gang. Moreover, it seemed to be two large
groups facing off against each other. Large numbers of the boys riding the bikes
seemed to be brandishing silver pipes and even now seemed to be sweeping
down on each other.
Behind each group was a souped-up gaudy sports car. In the surrounding
area were many girls under the gang’s protection. Undoubtedly in the middle of
all this were the figures of junior high students Madoka and Hikaru-chan.
“Madoka the Pick” (so named for throwing a guitar pick at her opponents)
… the “lost bad girl” Madoka. Hikaru-chan was the only one who understood
how that girl felt…
“Kyada! Kyada kyada kyada… Senpai… what are you grinning at?”
“Eh? Um… when I look at you two now, you’re still cute somehow… just
kidding.”
Hikaru-chan let out a cackle. At that time the two of them supported each
other alone… But it was certainly a heart-warming feeling to look them over…
but for this Hikaru-chan there might not be time to spare. Well at least these two
young girls weren’t yet smoking with a practiced hand.
At least… then… this defiant Madoka… there was nothing she could say
to me better than the 22 year-old Madoka.
“Right!”
I painted the orange light of time and holding Hikaru-chan close stepped
into the middle of it.
From the top floor of the hotel, the afternoon sun shining over Aoyama
neighborhood could be seen at a glance.
Although it wasn’t yet summer, a calm atmosphere enveloped the area. As
the neighborhood had some old dwellings, but with one good-sized road it
suddenly occurred to Madoka that this place would bustle with activity and she
could imagine settling down here.
Although the building was still under construction, she wondered what
this town would melt into once the apartment building was complete.
Madoka suddenly came back to herself and held her second Salem
cigarette in her fingers. As she lit the match a memory of certain words came to
her.
Her companion from a very young age had always been her protégé,
Hikaru.
Without belonging to any group, glaring and not fawning over any clique,
little by little had left her mark on the boys. Because of this, at that time, when
someone tried to some boring fight, she fought.
Madoka had been obsessed with fastidiousness for some time. Because of
this, anyone who spoke with false intentions she simply couldn’t let pass by.
While protecting Hikaru she trained in using her classical ballet as a weapon, and
without exception drove them all away.
However, while their enemies increased, on the other hand they had one
pretty friend… Ryouko, who had just turned 22, for Madoka and Hikaru showed
want a fine adult could be.
Ryouko was the owner of a coffee shop that Madoka, Hikaru and other
delinquents hung out at. Her customers were almost never boys. No bad language
was allowed and if any of them started a fight they would find themselves shut
out and un-served. Madoka thought she was probably pretty smart, so she never
questioned it.
However, the look in Ryouko’s eyes always seemed to be the same as her
own.
At that time, as Madoka was becoming more and more of a leader she was
invited to join “Yokosuka Ladies”. But the “Ladies” leader had a personality that
was all too easy to read. But, thanks to her situation at home at the time, at her
own discretion she fell in and accepted the invitation.
At the time, Madoka’s heart wavered, and it was Shuujirou that said “That
clique’s laughter doesn’t suit you.”
Madoka held the flame from her lighter before her Salem. She took a deep
draw from the cigarette and had a small laugh at the memory… she twitched and
laughed darkly.
Another puff?
Twitch, laugh.
Just like Shuujirou had said way back then. – Why Madoka? Your face
twitches.
Madoka filled her lungs with tobacco smoke and then puffed it into the
air. The smoke was bathed in sunshine, beginning to swim as if a living thing,
and soon struck against the transparent window glass – vanishing all too soon.
“Mascot?”
I shot Hikaru-chan’s face a quick glance as I shot the question back at her.
The fight between the motorcycle gangs had come to a head. We were
looking down from the roof of a warehouse. Hikaru-chan looked down at her
own past nostalgically, saying “my old friends…”, almost like a cheerleader for
the J-league she was cheering them on.
(note from the translator: This is the largest digression from the printed
text I make. He actually says “like a familiar jockstrap” but that was imagery we
could all do without, don’t you think?)
“That’s right, Mascot. Yada… Kasuga Senpai, aren’t you familiar with it?
Mascots are like the symbol of the motorcycle gang. She’ll be the one in the car.
A very pretty woman.”
“Eh…”
“On top of that, she won’t have a boyfriend. For example, the head of that
group decided that no on can date the Mascot by himself.”
Because of this, for the opposition force this would seem to be a suitable
target. In other words, if you’re going to fight another group, if you succeeded in
attacking your opponent’s symbol, their girl mascot, it would be a major wound
to the opposition.
“Did it?”
“A… aa…”
“So? Within the group it became a real problem. IT was against the rules.
On top of that, the head was one of the smartest people in the neighborhood, and
he had won the confidence of his comrades. Ah, hey, it’s the person Kasuga
Senpai was asking about.”
“Huh? …You mean Mishima… Mishima Shuujirou?”
“Bingo!”
“Slow! That’s right! When Madoka-san and I heard about it, we were
complete shocked. What was he doing? Shuujirou-san had always been
affectionate to us. Particularly for his older sister, we felt he helped everyone
more than his own parents.”
“Sister?”
No matter how strong to the core Madoka was, at the time she was still in
junior high. Because her home life was so lonely, it’s easy to imagine that her
mental stability could easily come undone. Moreover, looking from Madoka’s
lifestyle, understanding that her parents were overseas, she had good reason to be
burdened with the solitude of living alone. “Fine! Fine! I’m all right,” she would
way.
“He’s not?”
“That’s what I said. Shuujirou-san did things with the mascot, right?”
“Ah, hmm.”
“Ah, aa…”
“So, the opposition believes they can make mince-meat (actual word
used!) of them, so they’ve come to attack.”
It looked like the size of Madoka’s group and the opposition’s were about
the same, but by comparison, the opposite side seemed to have an energetic
offensive posture, while they in turn looked as if they were going to fall to
pieces.
“Huh?”
The opposition group, once the spark signal had been given, as one
attacked Madoka’s group. With iron pipes they attacked the opposing side’s
bikes without mercy, and for the resisting drivers they were presented with full-
face head-butts from their helmets.
“Yeah but, Madoka-san had said… her eyes were full of tears, so she said
she couldn’t move. Not until she spoke with Shuujirou-san. He had betrayed him
comrades… so, in this way the comrades had been defeated.”
“Wha…?”
“Madoka-san. It had been such a shock. She had completely relied upon
Shuujirou-san. So it was a complete shock.”
If she had, that would be like Madoka. She’s never the first to start
something with another person. From the first she never associated with many
people, and almost never entered a deep relationship. But once you were allowed
in her heart, she would never betray you.
Because of Madoka’s love of keeping things tidy and wrapped up, I knew
she wouldn’t run away, and the girls from the other gang couldn’t fail to notice
her. I grabbed the railing of the rooftop, ready to fly down and rescue Madoka
and Hikaru-chan. But…
“Huh?”
Come to think of it, this was also Hikaru-chan’s past. Coming straight to
the point, I do have the 20 year-old Hikaru-chan next to me…
“Like I said, it’s all right, Senpai. Madoka-san and I were famous for our
ability to get away fast.”
“Hmm?”
“Madoka did?”
“Yes. Like she was brand new… But Madoka-san never said what
happened.”
“Man…”
“…Hikaru-chan…”
I trembled a bit, but it seemed that Hikaru-chan was again excited by the
prospect.
I took Hikaru-chan’s hand, pulled her close, and pulled her with me into
time.
I held Hikaru-chan close, then we fell into 3 days later to suddenly hear a
high-pitched voice. It was the junior high school Hikaru-chan’s voice.
Right before our eyes the Madoka of that time went past in a huff. In order
to stop this Madoka, Hikaru-chan had just come out of the café.
“Hey. I felt I had just gone into Ryouko’s shop, at almost the same time
Madoka-san left.”
This was the first time I had ever seen Madoka so flushed in the face.
“Huh?”
Sure enough, the Hikaru-chan who intended to follow Madoka was held
back inside by a woman who came out of the shop.
The junior high Hikaru-chan stood her ground before Ryouko-san. “What
happened? Madoka-san… something’s happened to Madoka-san!”
“Huh?”
“But… it might have been more of a shock than Madoka could handle.”
“Hikaru…”
“Yes.”
“Understood.”
“Senpai?”
Hikaru-chan was getting used to the time slips. Soon after entering the
time stream, she pressed her cheek against my chest.
“Strange, somehow…”
“Huh?”
“Isn’t it strange?”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan…”
“We… even though we’ve split up… even though… the two of us are
chasing after Madoka-san.”
“That’s…”
“He he… It’s okay. Senpai, you don’t have to answer. You don’t have a
reason to answer. Hey… didn’t Ryouko-san say something?”
“Huh?”
Hikaru-chan looked slowly up at me. She looked so much the adult now,
her eyes made me think.
“Kya!”
Just then something surprised Hikaru-chan and she let out a small yelp.
“What’s up Hikaru-chan?”
“Shu… Shuujirou-san!”
Just as we had seen the junior high Madoka, we were thrust back to the
warehouse. Then this huge 750cc bike slid alongside, and then we could see a
bloodstained young man cowering before it.
“Yes.”
Madoka saw the bloodstained Shuujirou and sped up, and a cry-like voice
rang out “Shuujirou-san!”
“Shit. Heard about it from Nee-chan? Come to laugh? That Yayoi is such
a pest. Leads me around by the nose…”
Just as before, as we descended down the time channel, half-in and half-
out of the present, Hikaru-chan still seemed surprised by it all.
“Senpai. That was the mascot. The one Shuujirou slept with.”
“A… oh!”
Mishima Shuujirou, bit by bit, told the whole sequence of events to the
young Madoka he had left behind. Yayoi, it seems, was the girl of the opposition
group.
From the first she had crawled into Shuujirou’s gang with evil intent, it
seems, with the mission of being a spy. Of course Shuujirou’s group didn’t know
this, and this pretty girl was made the mascot. She became an effective pressure
point.
“He… turns out I’m just a man too. A laugh, isn’t it! The man called
Yokohama’s Shuujirou, his pure heart played like tag.”
Shuujirou pulled a box of Short Hopes from the pocket of his bloodstained
shirt, and pulled one out. Madoka presented a lighter and set the flame, but he
loudly slapped it away.
Madoka was looking straight at Shuujirou. At that time she saw the wound
in his heart, and seemed to be feeling the same pain.
At first, the fact that he had had the mascot had caused uneasiness
amongst Shuujirou’s comrades. Then, 3 days earlier the opposition had taken
advantage of this weakness and attacked. Up to this point, it hadn’t been
discovered that Yayoi the mascot was the opposition’s spy. But after the police’s
half-hearted attempt to break up the fight, bit-by-bit the opposition’s final
methods became apparent.
In short, when it was finally said “the girl your head slept with is really
our bitch”, an exhausted Mishima Shuujirou had become a laughing-stock.
“Shuujirou-san…” Madoka, who had been silent until now, had finally
had more than she could bear. “I… What can I do?”
Fukuro?
“Oh… oh…”
“What?”
“Such a laugh. You’ve just begun menstruating, so pretty soon the boys
will be wanting to play tag with your pure heart too… It will exhaust you.
Quickly ruin that pretty face.”
Shuujirou took a deep draw on his cigarette. The smoke diffused in the
darkness of the warehouse, and he looked towards Madoka, then peeled his eyes
away.
No, not just a man. Hikaru-chan and me as well were amazed at what
Madoka did next.
“Ma… Madoka-san!”
Madoka took off her sailor uniform. I think she had a chemise under
that… anyway, under that you could obviously make out her bra and panties.
Madoka set her chin and said in a clear tone, “Shuujirou-san, it wasn’t just tag…”
“What?”
“Shuujirou-san, you fell in love with Yayoi-san. You still love her. So…”
“So what? So I should be crying? Is this the best you can cheer me up?
Madoka?” Shuujirou seemed to be getting irritated.
“Shu… Shuujirou-san…”
Madoka’s… her still a bit childish form, bit-by-bit her shoulders began to
shake. And not just that… her still not fully developed chest no longer seemed
full of bravado and quaked and heaved.
Madoka… Madoka…
I had muttered this countless times in the middle of my heart… but, for
this, what can the person I am now say to you?
Madoka and Shuujirou faced each other and stared silently. This silence
went on for one, maybe two minutes I think… but for me it seemed to last an
eternity.
“Brat! Do you even understand what I’ve said?” Shuujirou spit out the
words and my own uneasiness was set free.
“That’s why!”
“Madoka, this is why! It’s just like you said. Shuujirou of Yokohama is in
tatters. Crying just like a little kid. So I put on airs by smoking a cigarette. Like
you said. Are you happy? You’re exactly right, so are you happy?”
The tears she had been desperately fighting back until now came flowing,
leaving Madoka heaving.
“Huh?”
“Really, open the legs only for someone you’ve truly fallen for.” As he
said this Shuujirou let out a puff, and if illuminating the room.
Shuujirou made fun of her a bit, saying, “Why Madoka. Your face is
twitching.”
“Huh?”
As if Madoka had finally noticed that she was half-naked, and hurriedly
put her sailor uniform back on. This flurried situation hadn’t been amusing. I was
relieved… and after giving a slightly unhappy sigh Hikaru-chan gave me a small
poke in the side.
“Hi… Hikaru-chan!”
Hikaru-chan giggled.
“Whatever. Someday some dumb guy who holds you will see that.”
Kasuga Kyousuke (hey hey) you don’t have a reason to be here anymore.
Here, from an adult’s perspective, the two of them smiled and consoled each
other with “there there”.
But maybe, this was the last time Madoka ever saw his… Mishima
Shuujirou’s smile.
Part 4 (Madoka's Secret Memory)
After pushing Madoka off, Mishima Shuujirou had something else to do. Madoka
had just lit his cigarette, and then one of Shuujirou’s gang came rushing in,
covered in blood. The many young men who had sought out Shuujirou once they
knew the despair he had bee reduced to had announced they were going to attack
the opposition group. Besides, they wanted another shot at them after having
fallen apart so badly at the last fight.
“Idiots!” More and more they think they can put pressure on us!”
Shuujirou said this quickly while hopping onto his 750cc bike. Before Madoka
could ask anything more, there were off.
“Huh?”
“Police?”
After junior high Madoka flew out of the warehouse, I grabbed onto
Hikaru-chan and once again dropped us into the time stream.
Just as Hikaru-chan had said, somewhere near the Yokohama Port, bike
exhaust notes, sirens, and from a speaker somewhere the trailing voice of the
police, all adding up to a huge amount of noise.
Both groups of gangs from 3 days ago were back, but who was lively was
very different. All the ones fighting alongside Shuujirou seemed the active group.
The opposing group now struck at Shuujirou and the others with all their might.
But the local boys didn’t have any reason to not le the police see too
much. A patrol car pushed it’s way through, right into the midst of the 2 groups.
Hikaru-chan and I were looking out over the dispute from the roof of a
building near the Marina tower. However, from places facing the port like
Yamashita Park and Chinatown, a real mob was forming. Will all of this I
certainly couldn’t find the two young girls.
“Hmm… If memory serves right the taxi brought us as far as the outskirts
of Chinatown. Ah1 Over there!”
“…Hikaru-chan?”
“Huh?”
“Tha… that’s…”
Even with my power, I didn’t think there was a way to do it… On top of
that, Ojii-chan had said that I would have to deal with Shuujirou’s Akuryou…
“Senpai! Well? You can same Shuujirou-san, can’t you? Save him for
me?”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan…”
I can’t!
Just then “Gaga-----n!” A terrible sound rang out. At the same time a
shriek that was somehow admirable could be heard.
But, just then the Hikaru-chan next to me scolded and yelled at me.
“Kasuga-senpai! Hurry!”
Amidst all the spectacle of confusion of the people this had floated to the
top. It had somehow come to the periphery of the city streetlights.
“Shuujirou-san!”
Shuujirou’s 750cc bike flew over the hood of a blocking patrol car, and
from the air attacked his opposite’s bike.
“No… no way…”
The front wheel of Shuujirou’s bike hit an opposing boy’s helmet full in
the face, sending it flying. At the same time, Shuujirou lost his balance and
practically fell headfirst back onto the asphalt.
“No…….! Senpai you idiot!” As if she had gone mad, Hikaru-chan hit my
arm with her fist.
“Hi… Hikaru-chan!”
But just then I… as all this was happening I inferred a sign of something.
A sign of something?
No, not just something. Undoubtedly it was the sign of the Kasuga family
– now, the feel that the Power was used.
What? Wait a minute! This seems an awful lot like a spectacle I’ve seen
long before.
Shuujirou’s bike had already slammed into the asphalt. The police had
already surrounded all the boys who had laid down. But the opposing group were
shook by his heroic death, and one by one they all got back up, and were
struggling with the police.
Heroic… death?
No. Truth was, this man named Shuujirou just by chance had encountered
the Power; he had narrowly escaped and his life had been saved.
From the direction of Chinatown, coming right into the middle of the
rabble, was the Kasuga Kyousuke of seven years ago… Me.
“Hikaru-chan…”
Hikaru-chan had her face buried in my chest and was crying her eyes out.
I softly picked up her face, while Shuujirou toppled and the nearest group in the
crowd began to point.
“Wh… what?”
“If I remember right, that day we were getting ready to move to the next
town, and me and the rest of my family had gone to see the town… but before
going home we had gone to Yokohama’s Chinatown for dinner.”
“No… no way!”
Shuujirou was lost in the surrounding policemen and the crowd, and
clearly different from all the boys was a cheerfully talking group of four.
“Huh?”
“No!! What are you doing onii-chan, using the power…” Manami was
saying. And there was Kurumi saying, “that’s right, that’s right. We had to leave
the last town because out power had been discovered you know…”
Hikaru-chan, tears still in those pretty eyes, bit by bit began to laugh. Then
we heard, “It can’t be helped. Did you just want to sit silently by and watch that
person die?”
“Yes.”
“Aa… that’s what it looks like. Of course, I didn’t know about Madoka or
Hikaru-chan yet…”
From Hikaru-chan’s big eyes tears fell like drops and fallen seeds. She
shook her head hard… then said in a hoarse voice, “Senpai… I can’t stand
this…”
“Huh?”
“Hikaru-chan?”
“Hikaru-chan?”
Aha… a ha ha ha…
I… that is… well… there was nothing I could do… This storm of thank
you kisses from Hikaru-chan I gladly accepted.
But shortly Hikaru-chan was going “Ahhhh! I kissed him! Kissed him!”
and her usual bright laugh returned… and then as if she suddenly remembered
something hey eyes went as big as plated.
“Wait a moment… what was Shuujirou-san doing? Why did he make us
all think he had died?”
Prologue
Mr. Fuji is of course a great place for sightseeing, and on weekends and
the like hordes of people crowd up the place – but people really don’t make the
trek to the Primeval Forest.
But on the other hand, the enormous roots of these trees seem to coil
themselves out of the ground, so much co that you can’t really tell which roots go
to which trees as you come into the forest. On top of that, you lose your bearings
the further you step into it.
Because of this, the place is a well-known place for suicides, the lady at
the souvenir shop on the road leading up to it was telling me – she looked at me
with some doubt and for some reason I was agreeing with her…
But while she did look at me with doubt (why I don’t know) you would
think as if I was going to crowd up the forest, but the truth is the problem was my
lousy friend the Manga Artist. Hatta Kazuya’s request… Man! To go to a place
to take nude photos.
Hatta’s story was that there was a nudist village in this Primeval Forest.
Ah, well, truth is, it was the story in the Manga he drew.
But, why, if this angling for a story isn’t true, why was I brazenly doing
this? You might ask.
Upon finding out about Hatta’s request for me to go photo shooting in the
Primeval Forest, those were the words that came from Madoka’s mouth. That
was yesterday.
Truth is the next day, today, I had promised a date with Madoka.
“My fault, I’m so busy. That idiot Hatta doesn’t have the time to collect
the data, so he says. When I went to America I borrowed money from him, didn’t
I? I haven’t yet paid him back, so I couldn’t refuse…”
Sting!
“Ah, um, er, well, things like the scenery – he’d want to use that,
certainly? A ha ha… I really don’t know though.”
“Eh…..”
“Wha… What?”
“You’re a pro…”
This laugh of “It can’t be helped” came over Madoka’s face, and she
entwined both her hands around my neck. I held her close about the waist and
kissed her a bit hard. I took in a deep breath of the sweet smell of her long black
hair.
Just then the thought suddenly hit me of “you’d better come back” and
that made me feel a bit uneasy.
“Yatto!”
I held onto my camera bag and jumped onto a root the size of an electric
pole. I looked back at the path that until now I had been able to walk.
At the foot of Mt. Fuji had been a sign marked “Fugakufuuketsu”, and I
had walked under this only entrance to the Primeval Forest. But already I
couldn’t see it.
I could faintly hear the song of some far away small bird – of course
you’d think I would hear the nearby people or the sound of cars on the nearby
highway, but I couldn’t hear them at all. And before I knew it fog had rolled in.
Even though there was a lot of time left in the afternoon, while I looked around
the field the visibility got worse.
“Ah!”
It was too big to call a pond… too small for a lake… let’s call it a lake.
The surface of the lake reflected a brilliant sunlight.
And a bit closer to me, a lone female was bathing in the cold water. On
top of that, her tummy… er, ah… she was stark naked!
Her hair was short. Her milk-white skin seemed transparent (pervert!)
shining from the silver water, her not-quite-fully developed body when she
moved, came together as sexy. Age… 13 or 14 or so (man, this 22 year-old is
acting too much the old man…)
She was having fun, laughing and playing in the water. But… with a whiff
she noticed my presence and swung around to face me… The both she and I at
the same time said “eh?” as our eyes went wide.
Well, not exactly THIS girl. No doubt about it, this girl I just met was…
Hiyama Hikaru… In other words the 13 year-old Hikaru-chan!
“Hi… Hikaru-chan?”
“Huh?”
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“Uwa….”
The Kasuga family blood is in her too, and she can change her appearance
into just about anyone. Actually, she doesn’t change, but what she wants to show
changes, so that someone else will think she’s someone else. In other words, this
is her power.
“Akane! You’re a grown woman now – what are you doing – such a
stupid thing?”
“Heh heh heh – Kyousuke, this past winter you met Hikaru-chan in New
York, didn’t you? Surely you were unfaithful, weren’t you? So I got to thinking.
Service! Service!”
“Hey hey…”
“Just having a little fun, okay?” Akane pressed her C cup chest against me
with pride.
“Dummy! Cut it out! I don’t want ‘service’ from you…. Demon.” (note: it
actually says “horn” but the meaning is implied).
“Well, I have a favor to ask, so... service!”
I see. Akane and her little brother Kazuya always get me into trouble this
way. They both have a fondness for getting me into trouble.
I resigned myself to it and got out of bed and opened the curtains. The
good warm feeling of spring flew into the room.
“Ka… Kazuya?”
I hadn’t seen much of that 6th grader this year, but he was still too young
to stay out all night.
“Where?”
When I heard where he had gone, I sat bolt upright. Like a wizard or
something of the mountains, my jaw was out of place… Ah, well, I mean it was
quite a shock.
“He’s a big fan of that Pervert Manga that Hatta-san does. It looks like he
went to the world of ‘I’ll forgive you’ and now he can’t come back,” she said.
But that kid is overflowing with curiosity and he dreamed himself into a
perverted Manga, he might find a way to go to that world, strange as it sounds.
(Well, in general he’s strange, but still!)
Ah… can’t be helped. After having some breakfast Akane and I visited
Hatta’s place of work.
“Oh, we have problems too,” Hatta’s manager Komatsu (I’m sure he
decided on this job himself) said. He invited us into the apartment where Hatta’s
office was, and in a rare show of docility went on.
“Hatta is…?”
Kappaneko?
Even if it is said, if you haven’t read Hatta’s Manga you wouldn’t know
the term.
“I’ll Forgive You” features 3 sailor-suited Angels (all of them pretty girls
– it’s full of extreme sex and Hentai stuff) who fight the “Devil Adeluf” of the
underworld’s gang – the story is about their continuing confrontations.
Ah, and sometimes a former sailor Angel called Madoura will appear if a
riddle has been posed, who will save them from danger and then something new
will develop (like a window opening or something like that).
In the Manga there’s this cat shaped sprite that shows up from time to
time. Its characteristics are cat shaped ears, a plate on top of its head (perhaps in
an imitations of Matsumoto’s Manga. Such a nice guy).
This character doesn’t do anything important in terms of the plot. Why use
it then? It’s a writer’s convenience to set up parts of the story.
I went into the room Hatta had toppled into, and in the midst of the mess
(he slept here?) Hatta was rocking back and forth and groaning. Kazuya had used
the Kasuga family power and entered the world Hatta had created, and now
couldn’t come back. Just like Akane said, I began to feel that he might be stuck
there.
“Oooh… Kasuga. Kappaneko… Kappaneko said ‘You’ve muddled
through, but your Manga’s very existence is idiotic’…he threatened.”
“Ka… Ka… Kasuga… That’s what I mean. Once this Manga becomes a
hit the money really comes rolling in. There’s been talk of an Anime, a game…”
“Hey hey, Komatsu. It’s difficult enough with you coming in. Turn around
and march back out.”
Once I made sure Komatsu was out of the room, I got the story from
Hatta.
Somehow it appeared that Hatta had gotten from Kappaneko the story
about the Nudist Village in the Primeval Forest at Narusawa in Yamanashi
Prefecture. But then he suddenly suffered a mysterious migraine, and the idea
wouldn’t release him until he looked into it.
Hatta said that Kappaneko was always comparing what he wrote to the
passage of time, and now this personality was appearing in dreams.
“I read it, Hatta-san,” Akane started to say. “We’re talking about a special
complete-in-one issue story, aren’t we? It’s an interesting setup about the
Kappaneko family.”
“Perverted I suppose”
“Ka…Kasuga…”
“And?”
“Sometimes they take an interest and appear to villagers… they also have
a human viewpoint. For example if they find a great bread shop they encircle it
and bring it back to the countryside.”
“I see.” I really didn’t, but it caught my interest a bit.
“The Kappaneko that come back when they see something that catches
their eye, for example a pretty girl, Shuba! From their plates on their bodies it
will come flying out.”
“That’s dumb…”
“Hey Kasuga, you haven’t read my Manga so don’t say things like that. It
has a good reputation with the fans. Right, right, Akane-chan?”
“Seems like. Anyway, the girls who come to the countryside when the
Kappaneko takes this ‘picture’ that instant is all they see.”
“That instant?”
“Uh hun. In other words Kasuga, as an example, suppose the girl was just
eating Ramen.”
“Okay.”
“The girl the Kappaneko had brought to his country would go ‘Huh? What
was I doing… eating Ramen?’ they’ll think only that. The past and future, their
relationships with other people, they’ll forget it all.”
“Complicated.”
(Really… I wonder.)
From here though, the important thing is to figure out the ambiguous
whereabouts of this Kappaneko and Kazuya.
“Huh?”
“To sum up, in the special one-story book, when the Kappaneko takes a
picture of the person that came from the human world, they are carried back to
the human world.
“Ah…”
“Right. Anyway, this place? It’s always the same Perverted Cameraman
and the other person. He’s always taking pictures of the nudists. Then, by chance
at the same moment the other person comes to…”
“And once that happens the person is returned to the human world;
dropped in as it were.”
It seemed that in talking with Hatta Akane had forgotten all about Kazuya
(and just what was Hatta doing, so close to death just a moment before?) Man, if
this is what Adult Manga is like, will Japan’s future be all right?
I didn’t believe Hatta’s story. But anyway, if Kazuya had gotten himself
tangled in this world, a thorough comparison seemed to be in order.
Besides, there was no real reason to show Hatta and Komatsu the Kasuga
family power. This was the reason I was willing to pretend I believed what he
said.
“Oh, Kasuga, will you go? You have a debt to your friend, you know.
Money borrowed to go to America, not yet repaid, no interest…”
“Aw, shit!”
“It’s just… maybe… like an S.F. Comic, if reality and the world I created
have gotten mixed up… ha hah… maybe you might have to go to the Nudist
Village.”
I left those two noisy people behind and left the room.
I know it took a while to explain how I got here but… Hikaru-chan nude!
Hmm. Suddenly she appeared from the lake in the Primeval Forest,
without even the slightest bit of embarrassment, and came towards me.
“Yes?”
But still, the Hikaru-chan before me was still the lovesick girl not fully
grown… Somehow I began to notice the smell of a peculiar sweetened vinegar…
my laugh became ambiguous and I thought it drifted off…
“Elder?”
“Eh? You don’t know, darling? The Elder of the Kappaneko clan.”
“Kappaneko!”
I see!
I had already entered the world of Hatta’s Manga just as Kazuya had and
things were already a bit mad.
The Kappaneko had gone to the human world and thought of bringing
Hikaru-chan here.
On top of that, they did it before I first met her. She didn’t know that I’m
Kasuga Kyousuke.
“Uh huh. The Elder said ‘Hikaru. Go bathe in the Virgin Lake. There you
will meet your life mate’.”
“Yes!”
Just the, before I even knew it, Hikaru-chan’s face was right before me.
But she spoke in a voice that was barely a whisper.
“Hi, Hikaru-chan!”
In spite of myself I took a half-step down. But at that same instant I rose
up into the air.
Uh, well, it wasn’t my own power that made me rise up. While this was
happening a net had lifted me up into the tree.
“Ah! Darling!”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan!”
“Kyada! Kyada kyada! Darling! You like getting into a net and flying in
the air this way?”
“Elder!”
From the family came a small monk that came up to Hikaru-chan’s knee,
carrying a bow and spear and the like, as if he were a brave soldier.
But the Elder gave a kind laugh to Hikaru-chan, almost as if she were a
granddaughter… on top of that, spoke in some kind of English.”
“Ah, so. I understand, Hikaru. It can’t be helped. But you can’t kiss yet.
When we return to our country you can have the honor of marrying him. Besides
which, Hikaru, your virginity is very important… over…”
“Ha ha ha. Hikaru, it may be sad but that’s how it is. Be patient a little
while longer.” (spoken by the small one).
“Hikaru-chan…”
“Okay everyone, let’s take this one back to our Holy ground!”
Now things got pretty miserable. As I was still in the Kappaneko’s net,
caught up like a bear by a hunter, they carried me to their country.
Then there were these shouts of “Pi…” that came from everyone. From
the midst of the Kappaneko carrying me came a “he he he…” from the small one
I had seen before.
From all those faces came a memory. NO, not really a memory. It looked
exactly like my own face from childhood.
“Ka… Kazuya!” I shouted in spite of myself. Then (no doubt this little
Kappaneko was Cousin Kazuya) he shushed me. I dropped my voice and asked
“What the hell are you doing?”
“Wh… what?”
“Thanks to me you can get ‘Etchi’ with someone other than Madoka-
neechan, eh Kyousuke-niichan? With Hikaru-neechan!”
“Idiot!”
Kazuya let out a laugh. But soon the heads of the Kappaneko nudged
together. It seemed that Kazuya had become an underling of their clan… and
maybe more.
But this way… even admitting somehow we were in the middle of Hatta’s
world, Hi… Hikaru-chan… here… why is she here? Come to think of it, why a
13 year-old Hikaru-chan?
While I was thinking about all of that I began to see what seemed to be the
clan’s home.
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The clan’s home was in the midst of still more towering trees, and up the
thick trunks of those trees there were small rooms. From room to room were
these round, thick bridges you could use to go back and forth, and there were
many places you could hold rituals and ceremonies.
In other words, the clan’s entire life was up in the trees; sort of in a
fantastic or dream-like village.
“He he, of course you’ve seen this, Kyousuke-niichan. It comes from Star
Wars.”
The Kappaneko were on the other side of me (still in the net) so Kazuya
spoke in a small voice.
“Star Wars?” As soon as I said it I saw what he meant. It was entirely like
the Ewok forest.
“Damn… but come on, Kazuya! Going into the world of a Manga!”
Bonk. My body came free of the net and I whacked Kazuya on the head.
“The Elder says, absolutely, you never hit anyone from the clan on the
plate.”
Come to think of it, the Kappaneko were deliberately avoiding the plate
on the top of the head. Well, this plate is how things get burned into the human
world, just like a camera negative, so perhaps it’s not so strange. (Hey, Kasuga
Kyousuke, you’re gradually starting to think like Hatta!)
Here and there beams of sunlight shone through burned holes, and what’s
more, the meeting hall in the trunk of this great tree looked like some kind of
huge battle had scooped a huge chunk away.
“Sailor Tenshi? But aren’t those girls, aren’t they the good guys in the
Manga?”
“That’s right. But now, the Devil Adeluf got his hands on them. I haven’t
seen them yet myself.”
“Hey hey…”
“According to the Elder’s story, Adeluf has carried off every girl that can
be called girl of this world.”
“W… Girls?”
“Um, yes. Only Hikaru-neechan from this country was left behind. That’s
why the Elder wants Hikaru-neechan and Kyousuke-niichan to hurry up and get
married.”
“But… No way…”
Well, I had no idea if this was the story that Hatta’s Manga followed or
not. The gist of it is, the Devil Adeluf has taken all of the virgin girls of this
world (probably girls flashed into this world from the human world by the
Kappaneko) for his own pleasure (what kind of pleasure I wonder) and Hikaru-
chan was the only virgin… ah… well… girl left so of course she was a target.
“Zat’s a right. Just as he said, Kasuga-kun.” The Elder said this from the
place on the meeting platform he had moved to, and was waiting eagerly.
“Oy, oy, ‘Zat’s a right” he said. Have you nothing to say to me? Kazuya.
Can the Elder look into people’s hearts like you do?”
“Eh? A, yes. But, well, I got into this world, didn’t I? Things like this
aren’t so strange. So maybe…”
The Sailor Tenshi of Justice had turned bad, the Devil Adeluf for some
reason needed a virgin – it was all Kazuya’s fault. Hatta’s story, in accordance
with Kazuya’s wish had cast an irresponsible impression into it all, making big
changes in the story.
“Oy, Kazuya. What did you do when you entered the Manga?”
“I tried to become the Devil Adeluf. He’s cool.”
“That’s just it! First, I thought I’d bump heads with Adeluf and change
places with him.”
Kazuya and I had both accidentally and on purpose done this many times.
By bumping heads with another, you enter the other’s body while the other in
turn enters yours.
“Why?”
“Idiot. I know.”
I knocked Kazuya lightly on the head one more time, and while I didn’t
mind him starting to whine I walked towards the Elder.
“Elder. I’ve more or less heard the story from Kazuya. I’m afraid I have to
turn you down.”
“Hmm. Then, upon leaving this dream Hatta-Sensei has created. This
country’s dangers will never cease.”
While listening to the Elder’s words I pulled out my camera to start to take
a picture of this broken-down forest. Now, if I took a picture of the bad things
happening to this place peace would return… then I thought of something that
really bothered me.
“In this world, whenever a virgin disappears the spirit of the souls of the
dead that have crossed over get weaker,” the Elder said.
“That’s right darling. Originally the Kappaneko clan called upon the gods
who protect the forest. Usually in the clan’s forest the souls of the dead get
together in the forest… even if attacked from the outside a perfect barrier exists.
…But now…”
“Hmm. But now the virgin power of Hikaru is the only power supporting
our land.”
“That’s bad… Bu… but, Elder. A, Um, Something I need to ask. If
Hikaru-chan and I… in other words… do it… what I mean is, if Hikaru-chan is
no longer a virgin, Na ha ha ha…” (This is no laughing matter!)
“Hmm.”
“Then… this virgin power, you wouldn’t have it anymore, would you?”
Chi chi chi… Each one of these wasn’t the sound of some singing little
bird. The Elder made this affectation, waving his finger left and right and
pointing at me.”
“What we mean is that once Hikaru is bonded to you this way… Itza
means… it’s the end.”
“The stronger the bond of love between a human man and woman, the
more power…”
…However.
The world of this irresponsible Mange had been tossed into such disarray.
But if nothing was done, they… the Kappaneko clan, this world’s Hikaru-
chan, even the real world’s Kazuya didn’t know what would happen.
“Ex… extinct?”
“No… no way.”
“Yes Elder!”
“Huh?”
“Darling, I’ll be back. Please wait for me. I’m going to go become a
beautiful bride for you.”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan.”
Hikaru-chan was drawn away by many Kappaneko females (?) and left the
meeting area.
The Kappaneko clan quickly milled about to get the wedding clothes
ready, and some of them played these large drum-like things to perform music
while others put together some sort of scaffold on the platform.
“Hey, hey hey, Kazuya. What are they putting together?”
“Huh?”
“B… bed?”
“Strongly?”
“Hey hey, anyway, why if you kiss her does that have to be so strong?”
Kazuya gave me this stupid look, and soon the work of our Kappaneko
friends was done.
They… maybe they had studied the rough seas of life and had come to
understand it a bit.
I drew near the confusion in the clearing below. Kazuya and the
Kappaneko gave out an emergency call and Kazuya dashed up to me.
…Beautiful girls?
A, well, in spite of myself I did say beautiful girls, and generally speaking
you could say so. But when I saw them that wasn’t what I was thinking.
Why? Well, for me these three sailor girl’s very existence was all too
familiar.
“A… Akane! Manami! Kurumi! What the hell are you doing here?”
That’s right that’s right. First in red, pink and then yellow, these very un-
pure (Hatta’s taste!) sailor suit-wearing girls were, my Cousin Akane, and my
two younger twin sisters.
“Whoa! Akane-neechan and the others are the Sailor Tenshi…! Cool!”
“You idiot! This is nothing to be happy about. This and the rest of the
mess this world is in is your fault!”
But it was strange. Akane and the others who had appeared before Kazuya
and I had no idea who we were (ooooh… what the hell was going on?)
Shun shun shun! If I remembered right, the Tenshi in the red sailor suit
was the leader. That one faced her enemies and waved her baton like a weapon…
now she struck a pose from the level she stood upon.
“The virgin girl you have hidden, kept in secret from the Devin Adeluf-
sama…”
And so on and so on. The same kind of speech the bad guys always give.
Hey, hey!
Then with a flourish her miniskirt waved, exposing a lot of thigh, then she
struck a decisive pose.
Pashuu! The Sailor Tenshi, in perfect precision, flew into the air (wings
flapped from the collars of their uniforms!)
“Uwaaa!”
Just as Hatta-sensei would have liked, the Sailor Tenshi’s flashy attack in
an instant broke he peace of the Kappaneko village.
Once the Elder spoke, everyone raised their weapons in unison. However,
the opponents of the protagonists in an adult Manga just aren’t up to the task.
Akane and the others… no… even before the Sailor Tenshi’s attack the
Kappaneko were scrambling and falling over each other.
“Ah… Darling!”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan!”
“H… hey, Kazuya! I told you not to look into other people’s hearts!”
“Ke… ke… what do you mean, Kyousuke-neechan. You’re the one being
a pervert in this emergency.”
“Kyada kyada! Kazuya-kun, you shouldn’t tease the older girls you
know,” she said, looking shy, but then, “I’m blushing? Darling?” she asked
without any embarrassment, as if there was no one else around.
“Wa… wait a moment Hikaru-chan. This isn’t the time or place for this.
This is…”
“Wh… what?”
“Huh?”
Pink… sigh? That son of a bitch Hatta. When I get back to the real world
our friendship is over!
“Hi… Hikaru-chan!”
In the Kasuga family household, we have a rule to never show The Power
in front of other people.
But… but these weren’t ordinary people. These were bad Angels.
Furthermore, even if we were in a Manga, these were my sisters and cousin. I
could see nothing bad about it here.
“Ei!”
“Kyada! Kyada!…..”
Once again I teleported. So one moment she was falling, and the next
instant I was holding her to my chest.
“Hikaru-chan!”
“So cool so cool so cool! You whistled, and you flew in the air! That
means that maybe just maybe, my child can use magic too?”
“Huh?”
“Oh, yada… surely before I die I’ll have a cute child, darling?”
“Kya…!”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan!”
…But, bam! Something struck my entire body, and I was knocked cold.
Hikaru-chan was gone. Instead, a new girl stood there, making me want to
shout “no way!”
If I looked back at the changed Sailor Tenshi, all three had undergone a
complete change; their faces now tense. And the didn’t seem to care a bit about
me.
Probably the light that had struck Hikaru-chan and I had been caused by
the Sailor Tenshi. But now, they turned their attention away from me and gave a
fierce look to the new girl, their present opponent.
Somewhere a navy blue sailor suit. Dark, long black hair. Those
penetrating eyes that show straight at the Sailor Tenshi.
I slowly stood up and knew this sailor-suited girl was familiar. This girl,
probably from this world, I called out to.
Then Madoka, the girl who some years later I would sleep with… a…
er… whose fate I would be so tied to, gave me a hard stare upon hearing me
speak.
“Don’t use that name so familiar. Even if I did give you the straw hat!”
This slightly different Tenshi called Madoura, unlike Akane and the
others, knew me. On top of that this Madoura from Hatta’s Manga didn’t really
seem the same as the real Madoka.
In other words, this one came from the Manga or Kazuya’s imagination.
The traditional Kappaneko had come to reality… that time… sometime after we
had met on those stairs, and according to the real Kappaneko ways had taken her
picture.
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“Madoura-sama! Please come to your senses! Do you really intend to get in our
way?” Sailor Red Akane called out to Madoka.
“The one’s who haven’t come to their senses are all of you! You’re
becoming the screw-ups of the Magic Army!”
“Don’t… don’t be stupid. The Tenshi were originally the loyal servants of
the Devin Adeluf-sama. Don’t be so stubborn and hurry up, you must turn over
the new virgin to the Devil-sama.”
Next to her, Manami, Sailor Pink, and Kurumi, Sailor Yellow, both said
“Uh huh!” I didn’t know what had happened to them…
“Eei!”
Akane, with great feeling and preparation, spun her baton. Then,
“Whatever you can do, you won’t get in our way.”
Madoura… er, Madoka, as she said this, Shu shu shu! A number of picks
appeared between her fingers (picks, as in guitar picks) and she shot them
towards Sailor Red. Come to think of it, the Madoka of that time was called
“Madoka the Pick”!
Just like all those years ago (hey, pervert detective)… anyway, the Sailor
Tenshi attacked.
Although I watched all this dumbfounded, I soon said “It doesn’t need to
be like this!” or some such, and began following the girls with my camera. There
was no doubt that the personalities of the Sailor Tenshi had been changed. If the
Elder had spoken the truth, I had to take a picture of this bad part of this world.
…Still, if I could show a photo to Kurumi and the others they might return
to their conceivable selves.
While she said this I picked up a few picks and went to her. I said, “You
saved me, neh?… a ha ha…” Laughing with no real meaning to it.
The 15 year-old Madoka was a bit dazzling. While I did kind of miss this
sailor-suit wearing girl… but since that time the Ayukawa Madoka before me
and I had grown close… of course, there’s no reason she would know about the
kisses… or the sex we’d had.
I, somehow only I knew her secret (well, her truth)… it might be some
great crime but I was so glad to see her that I allowed myself to be wrapped up in
that feeling.
“A, ah… Ayukawa…” I called her in the name I used before calling her
Madoka. “Oh, hey do… you know my name?”
Maybe… maybe this was the girl who had only just met me at the top of
the 100/99 stairs. I might not have told her my name yet.
“A ha… A ha ha ha…”
That’s it. That’s right. In this way this Kimagure Angel’s expression
would change.
“I’m Kasuga Kyousuke.”
“Kasuga… Kyousuke?”
“Why?”
“Destiny?”
If you think about it, this was awfully brave of me. There’s no reason for
the Madoka of that time to believe my story.
“Um, anyway. Why do they call you the Stray Tenshi Madoura?”
Ayukawa shrugged her shoulders like anyone else would. “Who knows.
Ever since I can remember. Yes. Ever since… those kids have thought I’m
another Angel…”
“And before you realized it, they thought you were bad.”
“Ah, Hmm.” Madoka murmured in spite of herself, biting her lip as if a bit
embarrassed.
…But…
“What?”
I had snuck a peek at her, and she quickly lifted her head my way.
“Huh?”
Now I knew why the Sailor Tenshi had gone crazy. It was Kazuya’s fault.
But form all that, I still thought it strange that Madoka had been so seriously
worried about them.
“Liar.”
“No… no lie! But why? Why are you the only one who hasn’t gone
crazy?”
“Therefore, ‘Stray Tenshi’. From the start I was neither bad nor good.
Because I’m still a bit kimagure, I’m the only one who can same my former half-
sister Sailor Tenshi.”
“What!?”
But just then, with a sudden jerk Madoka’s face came closer. She looked
at my face mysteriously, but closely.
“Eh?”
“O… older?”
Good god, she couldn’t possible remember it this way. But… somehow,
no doubt about it, this Madoka could see me in the 22-year old Ojisan I now am.
“A, Ayukawa…”
15-year old Madoka looked me straight in the eye. I looked at this Madoka
over and over. This time, Ayukawa Madoka… so gently… if she fully opened
her heart… anyway, to listen to the story with all her heart. In no way could she
turn against me… those glittering eyes searched me so deeply.
I gulped and swallowed a bit of saliva, and I began to tell her what made
up this world.
First of all, this guy Hatta you know (will know?) willfully created this
world where the Kappaneko bring girls here. Then, the empowered Kazuya came
along and everything went nuts.
Madoka, after my tale was done, let out a small sigh then fell silent.
She didn’t believe it immediately. But her brow drifted into a bit of a
frown, and she seemed to put my story into context.
From somewhere the wind blew. The wind blew her hair in front of her
lips, and Ayukawa Madoka entangled her hair in her fingers.
This unconcerned manner… was so cute. I regretted just a bit that ‘this’
me couldn’t hold her tight.
After a little while, Madoka’s normal look returned. Even a slight smile.
She laughed. “So you have come to save this crazy world?”
“Neh…”
“Wh… what?”
“Eh?”
“A, Ayukawa…!”
…However, this time… I mean the time I had just met Ayukawa, despite
the fact that I had decided…
A, er, well it’s not really Hikaru-chan’s fault. Reflexively Madoka and I
drew apart.
“Hi… Hikaru?”
Anyway, upon first meeting in this world both gave a surprised shout to
each other and hugged.
…This was getting complicated.
…Hikaru-chan with great pride began explaining the story. It had been
going so well with Madoka… and now I felt I should start running.
And then, “So after all that, Darling and I are going to sleep together…!”
I think Madoka said, “I’m not very comfortable with you getting married
at 13…”
“But, darling knows how to do it well, he said. Trust me! I think…” she
finally said (he he he).
Madoka, maybe… gave a little twitch upon hearing this. (Maybe. Like
hell. Absolutely!)
“I see. Good for you, Hikaru. Decided to sleep with a good man.”
I wanted to hastily pull her back. But she gave me a sharp stare like
crystal, and said, “Eh… become close, will we?”
“A, Ayukawa!”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan!”
“Looks that way. Seems that Kasuga-kun can see the future. He said he
can absolutely see the future.”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan…”
Madoka glared again (!) then laughed (!) and said, “Hikaru, what would
be a good wedding gift; think about it, okay!”
…Kasuga Kyousuke, 22 years old. The fact that the person I am now is
going through the same type of situation I had in my High School days… I never
dreams this would happen.
Happy, sad… no real emotion at all, and yet I’ve fallen into this
complicated emotional state…
However… upon returning to the Kappaneko village, once again, just like
when Hikaru-chan first put on the wedding dress, something that made me very
nervous happened.
An Angel's Dangerous Smile
It was Kazuya and a Kappaneko friend who told me that Stray Tenshi Madoura
had been taken away.
The two of them, even though restoring the area was important (they
looked like they were tying up tons of thick logs) they had gone to the lake where
I had first run into Hikaru-chan. There they had seen the Sailor Tenshi’s
Masenshi (translator’s note: this means Evil Army, but I like the term so I’m
going to use it) take away Madoura… I mean Ayukawa Madoka.
“Damn! Which way, Kazuya? Ayukawa… which way did they take
Ayukawa Madoka?”
“It’s okay, don’t worry Kyousuke-niichan. When we’re talking about ‘I’ll
forgive you’ you don’t have to get upset. If I’m not mistaken, the Devil Adeluf’s
hideout is an island right in the midst of this lake.
“Island?”
I could see considerably further than when I met Hikaru-chan. There was
an island in the midst of this lake? As I thought this Kazuya read my thoughts
and said. “He he. It is our irresponsible Hatta’s Manga, after all. Somewhere in
the middle of the serialization, the size of the lake got changed.”
“Shit!”
If I took my trusty Cannon Camera and used the telephoto lens, I should
be able to see through the fog. That was all I could think of as I used the finder
and focused.
From the view of the camera lens the fog cleared, and a fortress-like island
floated up.
“There!”
“You can see the devil’s hideout! Let me see, let me see!”
“Shit…”
Using all the Power I could I did a close-up of the fortress and then I could
hear some kind of commotion.
“Heh heh… Stray Tenshi Madoura, once you meet Devil Adeluf-sama,
you’ll return to normal.”
That was… Akane? Ah, no, the voice of Sailor Tenshi Akane. Sure
enough, there through my finder appeared Madoka, in the hands of the Sailor
Tenshi, being dragged to the Devil’s hideout.
“Ayukawa!”
Before my eyes was incredible light and heat. Then in a twinkling I could
see the Masenshi pressing in on Madoka.
I’m sorry (well, not really), but then I gave an abundant display of the
Kasuga family Power. Maybe Hatta would have thought it appropriate. All kinds
of shapes of Masenshi had their souls devoured.
Then I freed Madoka and she yelled “You still don’t remember!” while
standing to face the Sailor Tenshi.
I ran up to Madoka, who was just about to attack Manami Sailor Pink and
yelled “Madoka!” and grabbed her from behind.
“Don’t take it the wrong way – we’ve got to get out of here now!”
“Huh?”
“Hold on tight!”
Madoka’s eyes got even bigger. But this wasn’t the time for explanations.
“Ei!”
“Where… where are we?” This was the first time Madoka had gone
through jumping to another plane, and it surprised her.
When you enter the time stream, you float and read the magnetic patters
while you move. But for a normal person like Madoka, it would just be brilliantly
colored lights… In other words, floating through all these lights, the sensation of
something powerful flying behind one would be a bit (okay, a lot) unsettling, no
doubt.
“A, Ayukawa…”
I spite of myself I… curiously enough, called her by that name. While she
couldn’t believe what she was seeing, she looked back at me.
Ah… those adult-like eyes of Madoka that I would someday fall in love
with.
“Hey.”
“Hmm?”
“Yeah…”
“Yes.”
“Yes.”
“Yes.”
“Huh?”
“I… I couldn’t tell you. At that time… but I’ve spoken of the Kasuga
family power to Ayukawa… I’ve told Madoka.”
“That time?”
That… that my life and Ayukawa Madoka’s will be so wrapped into each
other.
That we’ll be deeply in love…
“Ayukawa… we’re back at the edge of the lake.” Avoiding her single-
minded inquiry, I brought us out, standing where I had been with Kazuya earlier.
It appeared that Kazuya had gone back to the village. My trusty Canon
was placed on a rock, waiting to take me home.
“You take a picture of the bad things of this world?” Madoka said, holding
the Canon.
“Hey…” Madoka gave a small meaningful sigh… but soon her voice
dropped. “But… after that Kasuga-kun… then what?”
“Huh?”
“Ah, uh huh…”
“A, Ayukawa…”
The Kasuga-kun I met… the Kasuga-kun I gave the red straw hat to…
where do you suppose he is?”
I… somehow… now I noticed that she was feeling awkward about it.
The Madoka before me, 15-year old Madoka… the Kappaneko came to
the human world and brought her back here. In the real world the actual Madoka
was still there… in other words the one I would become close to was still living
there…
This Ayukawa Madoka… this Madoka who lived in the Kappaneko
wonderland… maybe, this one who gave Kasuga Kyousuke the red straw hat
could never see him again.
That careless remark of mine “Your fate and mine are bound together”…
this girl could only line in this world. She might have to forget about the Kasuga
Kyousuke she gave the red straw hat to.
“Huh?”
“This other world. A different world… well then, the Ayukawa Madoka
who becomes close to Kasuga-kun… that me, is so much the same, but is another
person.”
“A, Ayukawa…”
The 15-year old Madoka seemed scared. Before being left alone, she had
come to understand things on her own. It would help ease the paid she would feel
afterwards.
She’s probably been able to do this since she was a child, when her
parents went abroad and left her alone… from before she met me she’s been able
to brace herself this way I think… but for this younger Ayukawa Madoka it
seemed like a cruel thing.
But… then.
Her sorrow… she fell into my arms… with such energy and force… my
breath was labored and my nerves paralyzed.
“Ma… Madoka…”
After that long kiss, my pulse was so strong you could hear it. I felt full of
guilt. Even supposing that Madoka started it, I had no idea now if kissing her
would make the wound deeper or not.
“I win!”
“Huh?”
“A, Ayukawa…”
Then, this young girl Madoka laughed and tossed me the camera; the flash
went off and the shutter clicked.
…But then… I…
That time, her smile… that spirited front of hers was nowhere to be seen.
Again Hikaru-chan and Kazuya ran up. Then the worst things of all began.
The Devil Adeluf, once informed of my power, was personally leading his
army towards the Kappaneko village.
“Oh… oh no!”
“What?”
Hikaru moaned. “Kyada kyada. Hikaru went to such pains, took time…
wanted romance… so boldly… Da… ha ha ha! I wanted to go slow! Right?
Darling?”
“Hi… Hikaru-chan…”
I looked sideways to Madoka. But she a cut me sharp look and started
taking pictures.
As the Elder had said, when Hikaru-chan and I came together… when
Hikaru-chan’s virgin power and my Power combined… what kind of power
would result I couldn’t fathom.
That kind of power should be able to suppress the Devil Adeluf’s army.
But… well.
“A… anyway, back to the village!” I said with a bit of fresh resolve. Then,
Madoka, who hadn’t taken part in the conversation, with her kimagure
personality looked me square in the face but addressed Hikaru-chan.
“Okay. Now Hikaru. You have sex with Kasuga-kun, and Madoka-san
will be the cameraman,” she said so stubbornly, while looking only at me.
In the village, the scars of the battle with the Sailor Tenshi had been left
behind, and the midst of the meeting hall had been restored.
On top of that, the ceremonial bed… the scaffold-like bed where Hikaru-
chan and I were supposed to do our thing had been grandly raised, really looked
strong enough and was magnificent (It was in such bad taste before!)
Around the bed were drawn silk curtains, and felt as if for some sort of
holy ceremony. But as the curtains were partially sheer, people in the meeting
hall… er… the Kappaneko would be able to see every holy (?) event that took
place inside.
“Ah, er, Elder… This is where, the, wedding ceremony will be?”
The Elder led me, and when I arrived along with Hikaru-chan and Madoka
before that curtain I was feeling out of sorts.
Hikaru-chan had never felt so happy and frolicked around. Off to the side,
Madoka was stone silent and gave me a cold stare.
“Okay young humans. Let’s begin… To protect our Holy Trees, let the
wedding ceremony commence. A disturbing wind is starting to blow.”
No doubt about it, some kind of disquieting wind had begun in the green-
scent forest.
“Bu… but, Elder, by doing this a power that can protect the land will be
born?”
“What are you saying Kyousuke-kun. Look at our land’s protective trees.”
“Huh?”
“Just by having the virgin girl and a healthy boy stand before the bed we
worked so hard to build the leaves shine brightly and the trunks are more sturdy,
aren’t they!”
I didn’t tell him that it didn’t really seem that way to me. But there was no
doubt that the trees that had suffered from the Sailor Tenshi’s attack in the
meeting hall did seem full of life.
“Kasuga-kun…”
“Yes?”
“After, it’s that. Once it’s done, it’s over. Every possible tree in our land
will gain power… Even if the Devil Adeluf attacks we will be able to beat it
back.”
The elder reached out to my stupid face, and put the thumb from one hand
into a closed circle made with the fingers of his other hand.
Ah, well… anyway, I got the significance of the Elder’s words. So, once I
took Hikaru-chan’s virginity (note: implies penetration)… In other word’s, once
it’s done, no doubt the power would be born.
Upon the Elder’s words Hikaru-chan and I turned towards the holy bed.
“Ke ke! Kyousuke-niichan… good luck good luck!” Kazuya flashed a
peace sign while helping to raise the silk curtains.
Kazuya gave a small crying moan, which I didn’t mind, and Hikaru-chan
went on, passing through the curtains.
But at that moment that I stared at Madoka she took a picture of my face
with my trusty Canon.
So just then I had no idea what was on her face. While taking the picture
of my face, in a crisp voice Ayukawa Madoka said, “Hikaru. Camera angle is
perfect.”
I passed through the curtain and entered, and Hikaru-chan stood by the
side of the bed, as if unsure what to do next. She was fumbling with the
ornamentations of her pure white wedding dress.
The curtains fell, and inside fell a strange quiet. Once we were alone
Hikaru-chan seemed un-worried and her old smile showed.
“Um… darling?”
“Huh?”
“A… yes…”
I turned and could make out Madoka through the curtain. As before, she
was taking pictures of my face.
“Hi… Hikaru-chan…”
She seemed to be more like the Hikaru-chan who had been playing at the
lake… a bit sensual, like a woman… anyway, that time… like many other
times… it was more than enough to… get a rise out of my sexual instincts.
“A… aaa…”
This world isn’t the one I live in… for one thing, this was only in the
middle Hatta’s Manga… but the 15-year old Madoka and 13 year-old Hikaru-
chan had really been brought here by the Kappaneko… anyway.
Even supposing all this, I had no doubt that the life and death of this world
was held by people.
Even before Ayukawa Madoka, this thing I was to do… become tied to
Hikaru-chan… I had to do it to protect this world.
I took off the shirt, and Hikaru-chan lay on her back in the bed.
I pulled my (under)shirt over my shoulders, while in the bed she took off
her underwear and quietly dropped them beneath the bed.
“Hi… Hikaru-chan…”
“…What’s wrong?”
Hikaru-chan’s eyes were still closed, but a small smile came to her lips
and she shook her head slightly.
“No… but, unexpectedly, this seems wrong…”
“What is?”
“I’m shaking, and this has happened only once before I think.”
“Once?”
“Yes. I was with a friend having fun on my way home, and we got lost on
a dark road. A stray dog was following us. We…”
“Uh huh.”
“Madoka-san saved us from certain death by driving the dog away… she
saved us.”
“A, aa…”
A, Ayukawa…!
The, Hikaru-chan’s eyes popped open. She had regained her composure.
With her mind made up, she looked at me. Then, as before she said slowly and
softly, “It’s… all right… I am.”
“Hikaru-chan!”
While feeling Madoka’s stare through the curtain I came closer to kiss
Hikaru-chan on the forehead.
But… just then… Go… Gong! A ringing like sound came from outside
and the bed shook violently.
“Huh?”
At the lead were Akane, Kurumi and Manami Sailor Tenshi, followed by
the many types of soldiers. The Devil Adeluf seemed to blanket them, overseeing
everything while getting bigger and rapidly closer. Then in a voice like the anime
voice actor Shiozawa Kaneto-san (Hatta’s probably a fan) in a nihilistic and
overly obsequious manner said, “Ku ku ku… Fools! Against the wishes of Devil
Adeluf-sama, it seems you wanted to borrow the power of a human match of a
man and woman to give birth to a new power… All right. Adeluf will just drop
all of you into the depths of hell myself!”
“Kyahoo! Kyousuke-niichan! Look, look, it’s him it’s him! Devil Adeluf!
Ain’t it cool?”
“Idiot! Even if you are family I’m going to crack your skull!”
“A, Ayukawa…!”
Setting aside Hikaru-chan and I having sex (setting aside indeed!) we had
to escape from the danger.
However… however!
“Hi… Hikaru-chan!”
Madoka made the camera ready. Well, she put the camera on automatic
and kashan! Kashan! Kashan!
Just then, Zugaaaaaaaaan! The entire meeting area shook violently. The
Devil Adeluf had just arrived.
“Ah!”
Thanks to the vibration, Madoka fell onto the bed with me and Hikaru-
chan.
“A, Ayukawa…!”
In the confusion, I fell towards Madoka. Just then the flash on the camera
Madoka was carrying went off.
“Uwaaa!”
“Kasuga-kun!”
“Darling!”
Madoka and Hikaru-chan said. But my eyes still burned from the flash,
and the Kappaneko, the demon army, and everything else seemed to vanish, and
sound fled as well.
In this state I fell once again back into the void.
“Kyousuke-niichan… Kyousuke-niichan…”
“Huh? Flash!”
Just like the Kappaneko Elder had said. In one snap all the insane bad
things had been put back in their correct places through the camera.
“Hmm.”
I was going to give Kazuya a nudge on his head… but instead only
smacked him on the behind. Then I walked straight towards Fugakufuuketsu.
During that walk I was tempted many times to go back… but I didn’t.
Then maybe, without this “Ojisan”, once Madoka and I met at the 100
steps… they would go back to being close friends.
P.S.
Once I got back home I went and sealed myself into the bathroom I use as a
darkroom and developed the pictures I took in the Kappaneko land.
In the developing fluid on the film paper the images of the Devil Adeluf,
the Kappaneko version of Kazuya, the Sailor Tenshi versions of my sisters were
beginning to appear.
I didn’t have time to hide the pictures, and Madoka suddenly took a peek
into the developing fluid.
“Eh?”
…Surprisingly, sure enough, on the film paper nothing showed… no, not
nothing showed… but without my noticing it the images had vanished.
“Is that okay? I mean this was on Hatta-kun’s request, after all.”
“It’s okay, it’s okay. He owes me more for this than he knows.”
“Huh?”
I gave a bit of a laugh and pulled the paper from the developing fluid.
“Eh?”
“E? A, er, um… funny, isn’t it…? Just kidding.” I laughed a bit
deceivingly, without ease.
“A, Ayukawa…”
“But only of course… if it’s your treat.” Ayukawa Madoka, upon saying
that, showed an exceptional smile……………
END
Hello, Matsumoto Izumi here. Before I’d even been aware of it I’d written 3
Kimargure Orange Road novels.
This time, I had help from Tereda Kenji with illustrations by Takayuki
Goto, whom I thank for their work and putting up with it all, for which I
apologize. We had a schedule to keep.
Come to think of it, as the first novel was turned into an Anime movie, the
Anime stretched on for about 8 years. I was invited to a private screening. It is a
great movie, and if you haven’t seen Kimagure Orange Road yet by all means do
so. I strongly advise it. Tereda-san’s plot is very precise, Goto-san’s character
designs are cool, and Touyama-san (the Director) skillfully infused the play with
adult drama. Fututani-san, Tazu-san and Gan-san once again did great voice
work, the piano compositions of (sorry, can’t read this one) were wonderful, and
I think it’s the best Kimagure Orange Road anime ever done. And there’s no
doubt that the novel for “New Kimagure Orange Road” is fun too.
You may be aware that now I produce the digital CD ROM comic “Comic
On”. Digital comics are ones you view on your computer. Our pace of publishing
one CD ROM every 3 months keeps me very busy. Tozai EMI has been
publishing them since last February, and we’re now on volume 4. Of course it’s
not just new work by me, but also work by young Manga artists like (he names 5
names here, and I don’t get the Kanji for any of them – Name Kanji can be very
tough). It’s in full color, with sound, with a portion animated as well. If you don’t
have access to a computer, you won’t be able to use the interactive features
woven into exciting Manga. Starting May 28th when volume 4 goes on sale, my
new S.F. Comic “EE” will begin serial publication. The first challenge in SF was
that I wanted this idea brewing in my head for six years to be presented digitally.
Every issue has a new music version of Kimagure Orange Road. Take a
look, please. You can find it worldwide at any P.C. store.
But you may think, “We can’t collect the work of Matsumoto Izumi
because lately it’s all digital? How sad.” Worry not. I’m thinking up a new
project, so please be patient a bit longer.
Last fall, when Toei unveiled “New Kimagure Orange Road, Summer’s
Beginning” Matsumoto-san and I were very happy (and now that the Laser Disc
is out…)
Of course, the origin was the first volume from Jump J Books, but I boldly
changed some of the things I wrote… I replace certain scenes, and you noticed
didn’t you?
To those not in the know, in the first volume Madoka and Hikaru don’t
meet. Whenever Kyousuke was with one or the other, Madoka and Hikaru never
see each other.
For the novel this didn’t seem unnatural. But for the making of the movie
it seemed to be a good idea for them to meet… so we thought up a scene.
Above all else, having them speak directly to each other, the deep ties
Madoka and Hikaru had, he feeling each had for the man called Kyousuke (tied
to each heart), we had a specific range of feelings to cover, as the girls had grown
up together
Poolside: A happy Madoka and Hikaru have once again met. Kyousuke
has been left alone.
Hikaru: E?
M: You’ve really grown up, haven’t you.
H: No… not yet. I, I’m not there yet… that’s why, even now… I
couldn’t contact Madoka-san. When I men Madoka-san… more…I wanted to be
further along.
M: …?
Next they drop Kyousuke in the pool and frolic together. So, that summer, in this
way these three still could have good times…..
These people, connected by pure hearts, have through this time through
great obstacles have grown into adults, and we are certain we’ve done this to the
best of our ability.
I suppose that you’ve been able to perceive each of the three’s individual
earnestness?
-Tereda Kenji`
It’s now early 2002 and some things have changed. “Comic On” folded
after issue number 5, which is why it isn't an active hyperlink. If you can find it
grab it, they’re impossible to find now. The website above is also gone.
I had planned for a Manga called "Speed Boat Race Girl" to be my next
project, but we’ll see how then next KOR novel is... he… he… he…