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NAME: Lisbeth Catuto Beltran DATE: 04/06/2020__

Writing Process Worksheet

(Accompanies Unit 6, page 72)

ASSIGNMENT: Write a paragraph on the following topic: Do you think

people are eating healthier or less healthy food than they
used to? Give examples to support your opinion.

1. PREWRITING
Work with a partner. Discuss the lifestyle changes. Do you think people’s lifestyles
have changed for the better or worse? Explain why. Write your opinions in the chart.

Lifestyles before Lifestyles now Better or worse? Why?

People didn’t use to People eat fast food a Worse. There are more people
eat a lot of fast food. lot. who are obese.

Worse un natural foods are

Especially the rural People prefer to eat not healthy
people were processed foods
healthier
Because they ate
Better before people got sick
fruit, vegetables and
because they ate inedible
natural products. things
Now everything that is
edible is studied
In the country
people also ate
things with out
previous studies

2. WRITING
On a separate piece of paper, write a first draft of the paragraph.
Thanks you science today we can know what is edible and what is not this is and
advantage because before people ate everything without knowing is thas was
healthy, but ever so , people ate natural products.
Nowadays people eat synthetic foods that although they readable, these are not
heathy

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3. PEER FEEDBACK
Meet with your partner again. Read each other’s paragraphs. After reading the
paragraph, complete the Peer Feedback Checklist. Then give your partner your
feedback.

PEER FEEDBACK CHECKLIST

YesNo
Are the paragraphs interesting? 
If no, suggest ways to make them interesting.
_
_
c. _ _
2. Are the paragraphs clear?  
If no, point out the parts that are not clear and suggest ways to make them
clearer.
a. _
b. _
c.
3. Did your partner use the tense with used to correctly? If no,  
underline the sentences that use used to incorrectly.

4. Are there any misspelled words or incorrect punctuation?  

If yes, circle the misspelled words and the incorrect punctuation.

4. REWRITING
Tell your partner to revise his or her paragraph based on your feedback. Revise your
paragraph based on your partner’s feedback.