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One of the biggest reasons why I chose that major is that ... / The reason why I
decide on ….. is that……
I strongly believe that the sector of … will be promising/ highly demanded/ a sunrise
industry. (nói về ngành học có triển vọng cao)
I’m really into this major/ I’m always believe that I was born for this major …..
Hello, It’s me. Today, I will tell you about a familiar(/fəˈmɪlyər/) topic. It is the subject of
study(/ˈstʌdi/). I was born and grew up in HD city. I started kindergarten at the age of 2
months. Is it still too small? After completing kindergarten, I was a student at the local
elementary and middle school. From 2012 to 2015 I studied at the district high school.
All levels are in the math team. Ending the years studying in my homeland. In mid-2015,
I passed the Hanoi University of Technology. My major is industrial automation.
Currently, I have completed higher education. The time in college is (was) meaningful to
me. In here I have friends, brothers and her who I met in my graduation ceremony. I
want to have a nice ending with her (hmmmmmmmmm who is her, người ngoài nghe vào
sẽ không hiểu). As a child, I dream (dreamt/dreamed) to become a computer engineer but
when I grow up I want to do something for the home industry. That's reason why I have
chosen industrial automation as my major at my university. I love my major. That was a
great job (nêu lí do vì sao love?). When you live and work with passion, life will be
happy. I will not regret with my choice. If I was chosen (were to choose) again I would
still choose it. (Sử dụng câu điều kiện loại 2 – không có thật ở hiện tại). My field is a
promising field(/fild/). However, it is also a field with increasing competition. Hanoi
University of Science and Technology is the school I dreamed of since I was a kid. My
favorite subject is math, I received many awards from math. Despite many difficulties but
I think I am on the road according to my plan. Our education system is getting better and
better, I hope it changes (would change) positively.
• Diễn đạt chau chuốt và liên kết hơn chút nữa nha.
Edited version:
Hello, It’s me. Today, I will tell you about a familiar topic. It is the subject of study. I
was born and grew up in HD city. I started kindergarten at the age of 2 months. Is it still
too small? After completing kindergarten, I was a student at the local elementary and
middle school. From 2012 to 2015 I studied at the district high school. All levels are in
the math team. Ending the years studying in my homeland. In mid-2015, I passed the
Hanoi University of Technology. My major is industrial automation. Currently, I have
completed higher education. The time in college was meaningful to me. In here I have
friends, brothers and her who I met in my graduation ceremony. I want to have a nice
ending with her. As a child, I dreamt to become a computer engineer but when I grow up
I want to do something for the home industry. That's reason why I have chosen industrial
automation as my major at my university. I love my major. That was a great. When you
live and work with your passion, you will be happy. I will not regret with my choice. If I
were to choose again I would still choose it. My field is a promising field. However, it is
also a field with increasing competition. Hanoi University of Science and Technology is
the school I dreamed of since I was a kid. My favorite subject is math, I received many
awards from math. Despite many difficulties but I think I am on the road according to my
plan. Our education system is getting better and better, I hope it would change positively.